Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

[Nevil singh]

Update-296(The Dark Arc Is Coming)




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296

Humein Dekh k Dusty hansa bhenchod jaanwar kahin kaa.. Uske baare mein thoda bataadun woh Literally jaanwar hai Abeer bhi uske saamne bacha lage.. 6"11 ki height bhayaaanak maintained body, ye bade bade hath bhenchod, bhurri aankhein jo kissi ko ghurr lein toh banda wahin behonsh ho jaae...Uska kaam Hai Logon ko thokna buri tarah se woh bhi.. Wahaan Ranjit ji or Sunaina bhi they ek kone mein jo Bechaare again forced they kuch nahi kar shaktey they woh..


Humlog wahin k wahin rukk gaye piche jaa nahi shaktey they or aage badh nahi paae..

Dusty-Look who is here none other then The Merchant Of Death Himself.. What is up??

Adya-Chill Dusty he is shock let him breathe...

Dusty-Oh sorry... What happened AP Pehli baar kissi ne double cross kiya hai tumhe??

Adya-Aadat nahi hai usko in sabki baaki kissi mein himat nahi hoti naa isko double cross karne ki..

Dusty-AP what happened? ? Don't worry jyaada takleef nahi dunga tumhe don't worry..

Dusty-Chang Chang Chang.. How are you??

Chang- all good just Feeling a little weird right now..

Dusty-Oh Chang you will feel a lot more then that.. When I stand up you'll be the first one to die so enjoy your last few moments... Ami cutipie.. How are you??

Ami-Not good if I am standing in front of you..

Dusty-Tum itana darrti kyun ho mujhse I don't understand why??

Ami-Why?? You have tried to kill me multiple times..

Dusty-Lekin tum still jinda ho right??

Ami-Yeah kind of..

Dusty-Don't worry thodi derr baad nahi rahogi.. Abeer.. Abeer you know I like you I can't kill you if you want you can leave or join me..

Abeer-Naah I am good right here..

Dusty-OK no worries I respect the loyalty towards AP.. Lekin AP k sath jo loyal hota hai uska haal bahot bura hota hai you know Kevin ko he dekhlo durr kyun Jaana..

You know 2 things I hate Pehli Koi Mere pith piche jaake mujhe dhoka de you know my ego is massive meri ego bahot jyaada badi hai I don't care main kitana cool hun yaa kitana angry ek cheej kabhi nahi badalti woh hai meri ego or jab koi mujhe dhoka deta hai toh meri ego hurt hoti hai Dusari cheej jo mujhe passand nahi woh hai woh banda no mujhe dhoka deta hai I don't care woh kon hai kitana bada hai I literally don't give a fuck.. Or abhi woh dono cheejein mere saamne thi..

Wait.. Wait.. Wait... Ye mere words nahi hain... Wait.. 2.0???no no no no no...

Yes yes yes.. Let me come AP I don't want to waste my time and power on you.. I will come either way..

Main-No no no this is not happening..

Dusty-Oh this is happening AP yahin tumhaare saamne..

Main-I am not talking to you shut the fuck up..

Main chilaaya jisse sun uss room mein mojjud sab log kaanp gaye Dusty ne mujhe ghurra then agle he second woh samjh gaya.. This is bad..

Kya socha tha?? ? Drugs permanently roukk lenge mujhe?? Haan?? Sapne mein bhi nahi aajtak nahi roukk paae ab kaise rouklenge...


Agle second main apne ghutano par tha woh power kuch alag he thi woh force maine bahot time se 2.0 mein nahi dekha tha.. Mereko 1% bhi mouka nahi mill raha tha I don't know kya horaha tha lekin woh bahaar aaraha tha..mujhe laga woh injured tha drugs se, behonsh tha, aisa laga tha mujhe.. Lekin woh kuch or he taiyaari kar raha tha..

Abeer-AP??

Main-I I. I. I.. I... Can't...

Abeer-No No way... No... No..

Main - Abeerrrr Ami Runnn... Ranjit Sunaina go with them and hide don't come out...

Abeer-I am not going anywhere..

Main-gooo for fuck's shake woh aatey he sabse pehle tumlogon ko hurt karega and he is stronger then ever... Just go please go i can't stop him... Bahot durr chale jaao... Go...Go and Call Bovice for help.. Call Him.. Call Bovice he will help you guys.. Bovice... Bovice..

Main niche padda padda chilaaya..

Mujhe maalum tha woh Dusty ko baadmein pehle Ami Abeer Ranjit Sunaina or Adya ko dekhega kyunki pehle dhoka Inlog ne diya tha Adya kaa I don't care lekin in sab kaa Jaana jaruri tha..


Abeer-Ami Ranjit Sunaina lets go move...

Main-You can't hide from me Abeer I will find you guys and I will make you guys suffer i promise you that.. I promise doobara kabhi taang nahi adaaoge tumlog mere kaam mein..


Abeer-Leave him alone you peice of shit..

Ami-Go go go he is coming...

Abeer Ami Sunaina or Ranjit wahaan se turant nikale.. Ab nahi bhenchod meri sans takk rukk gayi thi usko roukkane k chakkar mein I can't I can't.. Holy fuck ye kuch or he tha.. I don't know un drugs ne isko kamjor kiya yaa powerful...

Chang-Boss you ok??

Agle he second main munh k ball girra apne ghutano se or jhatke se utha..

Main-Oh my god that was bad... Oh hell Yeah it feels good to be back..


Main ne kapdey saaf kiye apne or side mein cupboard ki taraf aaya usme ek golden dibi thi choti si jisme tha jester.. Main woh dibi leke Saamne table par aaya jahaan Dusty or Adya khadey mujhe ghurr rahe they Adya toh maano coma mein Jaane ko thi.. Kuch seconds lage mujhe samjhne mein ki ye yahaan kyun hain inka hissab bhi hoga lekin pehle mereko drugs caahiye they bahot saare drugs i am feeling like shit right now mere hath kaanp rahe they.. Maine woh dibi puri saamne kaanch ki table par khaali ki..

Main-Chang main tujhe 1 ghanta deta hun bring Me Ami, Abeer, Sunaina and Ranjit or you'll suffer..

Chang-But boss's I I I was ws...

Main-I don't care.. Make them suffer or you suffer yourself, the choice is all yours..

Chang-OK ok..

Ye bolke Chang turant nikala wahaan se usse maalum tha woh nahi leke aaega toh main uska kya haal karunga.. Maine saamne jester daala or jhatke se ek dose legaya oh my god meri naak mein se enter hua Jester or agle he pall meri puri body mein tha woh.. Oh i fucking love it i fucking love it..

Dusty-AP???


Ye sun maine usko ghurra....

Main-Dusty Dusty Dusty Dusty.. How are you??

Dusty--I am fine..

Main-Let me finish my jester uske baad Nahi rahega fine don't worry..

Dusty-W. S. W. What?? Maine kya kiya??

Main-You disrespected me Dusty.. You disrespected me.. And that is bad.. No one disrespects me and lives to talk about it.. Tujhe toh pata hai..

Dusty-No I didn't Main 1.0 se baat Kar raha tha I didn't disrespect you..

Main - OH Dusty I love it when you are scared..

Dusty-I am not scared.. If you want to fight me let's go right now I can fight you.. But you don't have any reason to fight me..

Main-Dusty Do you think I need any reasons to hurt someone?? Come on use your brains..

Dusty-Still You can't Fight me without any reason this is against the rules.. I don't care if you want to fight let's go main taiyaar hun laddne k liye but remember tumne suruwaat ki thi and you are breaking the rules I will do everything in self defense..

Main-Yahaan kya karne aaya tha tu??

Dusty-Mm.mmm. MMereko kaam tha koi terese I mean 1.0 se mereko bus baat karni thi usase.. Mera koi intention nahi tha usse hurt karne kaa..

Main-No tera motive toh alag he tha..

Dusty-You can't prove it Maine pehle bhi kaha tha i just want to talk..

Main - No you didn't..

Dusty-Listen AP tu nahi caahta ki Sara or main tere piche aaein issliye don't try to oversmart me.. I can call Sara right now woh rules samjhaa degi tujhe..

Main-Dusty I don't give a fuck about rules...

Dusty-But I do.. I care about rules..

Main- Bullshit you don't, tu abhi 1.0 kaa faayda uthane waala Tha..

Dusty-Nope...

Main-Dusty you know i hate liars.. Listen tu jaanta hai mujhe I can't kill you but I can hurt you or tu lawda kuch nahi kar paaega but still i have a job for you issliye tujhe chhod dunga main...

Dusty - Main koi job nahi karne waala tere liye..

Main-Woh main karwaalunga don't worry filhaal k liye I give you a chance leave right now chala jaa and be loyal to me tell Sara ek baar inse deal Karlun main then I'll see her soon..

Dusty-OK ok.. I'll tell her.. Adya let's go..

Main-Oh no no no no.. Adya is not going nowhere..

Dusty-What???


Main-Kya what?? She betrayed me in the past Abeer wagairaah k sath thi ye, toh ye for sure maregi.. I know the rules Dusty I will kill her If you want to save her then let's fight...

Dusty-You know AP I can't leave her..

Adya-Nnn. No No please no AP mera kuch nahhhi tha usme.. I was never part of that..

Main--Oh dear Adya Oh poor Adya teri fitrat hai dhoka dena you can't change that its about time you pay your price.. Kabtak bachegi.. Let the Devil clear your debts . Let the Devil Purify you.. Let the Devil show you your path to hell..

Adya-Nnn... Please please i will do anything for you please Overlord please I beg you..


Main-Oh look at you poor soul begging for your life.. Ok I have a job for you too..

Adya-Tell me I'll do it..

Main--I want you to kill a Girl Named Anaa... Anaa naam haina uss ladki kaa?? Haan usko maardey..


Adya-What??? Lekin woh girlfriend hai Tumhaari...

Main-Meri nahi hai.. Maine bola tha jab main waapis aaunga toh bahot kuch sehna padega tum sabko ye toh bus suruwaat hai I give you 24 hours, Anaa ko maardey and uske baad sochunga main tujhe maaf karne kaa... If you fail the task you know kya hoga tera..

Adya-No No main karungi maardungi main usko...

Main-Perfectoo...

Dusty - Tum Uski girlfriend ko maardoge?? Deal Todd rahe ho tum apni 2.0...

Main-Fuck a Deal Dusty I don't give a fuck about deals anymore.. Mera sabse bada enemy wahi hai usse andar se Todd dunga main itana tod dunga ki woh kuch nahi kar paaega uske baad I don't care uske liye kon kon marega fuck it main Abeer, Ami or Chang ko bhi maardunga apne hathon se agar woh doobara bich mein aae toh .. Fir kon roukkega mujhe soch.. Think Dusty just think.. I Will be an Unstoppable force I don't need anybody I can take care of everything alone.. . Ab Main aaya hun toh itana risk toh baaki sabko bhi lena padega Haina??? . Ahahahaha hahahah.. I am back and I am back for my revenge..

Dusty-You are a sick human being 2.0.. You are a fucking phsyco . Mujhe pata hai main ek ghatiya Insaan hun but you are above evil.. Evil can't describe you..

Main-Oh i know Dusty I know I am a new breed of Evil.. ..Now Get the fuck out of my face before I change my mind.. The Dark Arc is coming and you can't handle that no one can.. "If You Play With The Devil, You Will End Up In Hell Eventually "... Remember Dusty = " Etiam Vestr deus's are infirmi adversus diabolus "


End Of Part 2...

Bahut hi bada jhole khada kar diya 2.0 ne, ab toh bhabhi ji bachye nahi to kai apno ko number pakka bhai. Bahut sunder update dost.

 

[Xfan]

fuck bc rongate khade ho gaye rongate...
ye kya tha sala...
Aur isne to anna ko hi marne ka contract dia bc...
aur sanjay das ka kya hoga agar aglr part mai
2.0 ka kand hi to?
Eagerly waiting for next part...

His is above god

"Even ur's god r weak against the devil"

wtf

 

[Nevil singh]

Finally it ended nearly after 20 long ass months.. Oh this was hell of a journey once again, Thanks To Each and every single one of you guys for the support.. Jissne bhi reviews diye haaa jissne bhi silently padhi ye story thanks to all of you guys for the insane amount of love and support to me and this story you guys are the best.. I have no words to appreciate you guys but still Thanks Guys I love you all will see you guys with part 3 Soon.. Also don't forget to vote on the pole..

Bahut-Bahut shukriya dost sabko apni rachnatmak shelly se jode rakhne ka.
Aur aapki khani ke agle bhag ka siddat se injaar rahega. Shabba kher!

 

[aka3829]

To dusty se ladne ke liye 2.0 bahar aa hi gya. Lekin yaar why Abeer Ami Ranjeet and all. And the big name and shock was Anna why. Kya wo risto ko nahi manta. Kya jinki wajah se aaj wo yaha tak aaya he unhe bhi hurt karega. Abeer ami ne use har jagah protect kiya he, uska sath diya he.
Mere hisaab se agar inme se kisi ko bhi kuch hua then this 2.0 will be a villien for me. Aur Ravan chahe kitna hi bada kyu na ho usake liye koi Ram aata hi he avtaar leker.

 

[Nevil singh]

Kishi se juda hona itna aasan hota;
Toh, Jishm se ruh ko lene frishte nahi aate.

 

[Kabeer]

Fabulous update AP bro...
Congratulations for completing 2nd part of the story long time.....
Ab dekhna ye hai ki adya apni jaan bachane k liye anaa ko marti he ya k nhi or dusty ka kya hoga steel waiting 2.0 Kabeer,ami ka kya hal krta he
Waiting for next part of story 3.0 version

 

[Prince sarkash]

Sari story aik taraf aur yeh last update aik taraf

Keep going

 

[Jai_09]

Finally bhai aapki story ke part 2 ka end hua. Mai aapki story se isi May me lockdown ke dauran juda tha & believe me, it really helped me in lockdown. Mai aapki story ka 1 silent reader tha. Hamesha se apne reviews dena chahta tha par ye dar tha ki kahi aapki story aur aapka mood dono spoil na ho jaye. Par ab jab story khatam ho chuki hai to ab mai apna review de sakta hu.
To shuru se shuru karte hain. Ye part shuruwat se hi interesting tha kyoki kisi ko nahi pata tha ki AP 1.5 saal kaha tha aur usne in 1.5 saal me kya kiya. AP aur Abeer ki entry ke baad ye to pata chal gaya ki ye part zabardast hone wala hai. AP ki wahi purani life shuru huyi jiske hum sab fan hai. College life, chhote-mote matter, friends, daaru, ladkiyan aur bhi kai saare elements is story ki raunak bada rahe the. Sab kuch sahi chal raha tha. Aur cases bhi aa rahe the jinko AP easily solve kar le raha tha. Phir huyi Red John ki entry aur seriously bhai uski AP ke sath phone call se mujhe ye lagne laga tha ki AP ne jo Red John ka hawwa banaya hai vo sab sahi hi tha. Red John mujhe sach me legendary serial killer lagne laga tha. Mai to uske character ko even JOKER se compare karne laga tha. Uske baad Kaali ki entry bhi kaafi achi thi. Ye to lagne laga tha ki story 1 naya mod lene wali hai aur hua bhi kuch aisa. 2.0 ki entry hui aur action scenes aur bhi gazab hone lage. Par uske baad story underwhelming ho gayi kyonki story me koi bhi strong character nahi bacha. Jo villain aa raha tha vo 2.0 se pit raha tha. 1 strong villain ki yahi khasiyat hoti hai ki vo poore plot me 1 baar to hero ko buri tarah se pareshaan kare. Par yahan aisa kuch nahi tha. Ulta AP ko aapne aisa dikha diya ki usse har koi darta hai. Fir aapne story me thoda sa JOHN WICK universe wala hissa dala jaise ki hitmans, High Command, League wagera. Lekin vo bhi mere liye bekar raha. Bhai aapne JOHN WICK dekh ke bhi kuch nahi seekha . Us movie me itne saare hitmans ko John Wick maarta hai par 1 ki bhi usse gaand nahi fatti thi. Par maine ye bhi accept kar liya. Uske baad Red ne logon ko maarna shuru kiya aur 2.0 ne Red ke logon ko. Par meri samajh me 1 baat nahi aayi ki kabhi aapke dimaag me ye nahi aaya ki Red AP ke doston,family ya team ko target kyon nahi kar raha hai. AP uske bandon ko maarta ja raha hai aur Red uske 1 bhi saathi ko nahi maar raha. Ye konsa serial killer hai bhai. Itna aadarshvaadi serial killer to south indian movies me bhi nahi hota. Chalo ye bhi accept kar liya. Uske baad 1 baar shayad aapne mere mann ki baat sun li aur AP ke teammates ko kidnap bhi karwa diya lekin Red ka itna chutiya character dikhaya aapne ki khud saala aake bike de gaya. Arre ye konsa serial killer hai bhai. Bata bhi deta ki mai hi hun Red John. Chalo ye bhi accept kar liya. Uske baad Red John ka khaatma dikhaya aapne aur itni chutiya tareeke se maara use. Red John ka character dekh ke aisa lag raha tha ki vo legendary serial killer nahi balki koi noob criminal hai. Ab aapne Red John ka character kharab likha ya 2.0 ko bada dikhane me uska character ache se nahi likh paye,ye mujhe nahi pata. Uske baad huyi Adya ki entry aur Haksar ka bhi hawwa banana shuru kiya aapne. League ke thikaane par vo 3 vs 1 fight scene lit tha par fir se un teeno hitmans ka character underwhelming. Fir main samajh gaya ki jab tak 2.0 is story me rahega tab tak kisi ko aur ki nahi chalegi. Kehte huye bada bura lag raha hai par jaise Salman bhai ki movies me sirf Salman bhai hote hain waise hi aapki story me sirf AP hi tha. Fir jab 1.0 ki entry hui to story waapis patri par aane lagi. Hari ke end ke baad Dusty ka character introduce hua jo ki laga mujhe ki ye banda hai jo 2.0 ko bhi takkar de dega lekin aaj ke update ye bhi galat prove ho gaya. Vo physically takkar lene ko taiyar hai par mentally gaand to uski bhi fatt rahi hai. Par is baar achi baat ye hui ki jo 2.0 ka character aapne introduce kiya. Pehle wala 2.0 ka character hi mere palle nahi pada. Jab vo banda 1 sociopath dikhaya hai aapne to uska character aisa hona chahiye ki use kisi se sympathy na ho. Par jab Javed ki story suni usne to vo bhi emotional ho gaya. Ye kaisa sociopath hai bhai. Is baar uska character acha dikhaya gaya hai. Ab use kisi ki parwah nahi hai. Na friends ki aur na hi Anna ki.

Story ki vo cheezein jo mujhe pasand aayi:-

1.Action scenes bahot hi badiya the bhai,ekdum hollywood level shit.
2.Cricket ke scenes bhi ache the.
3.Jo 2.0 ke investigation waale part the vo bhi bahot ache the.
4.End me jo 2.0 ka character banaya hai vo bahot badiya laga.
5.Comic scenes bhi gazab the.

Story ki vo cheezein jo mujhe pasand nahi aayi:-

1.Sabse pehle to mujhe Red John ka character bilkul pasand nahi aaya. Kahan to maine use shuru me JOKER se compare kiya tha aur kahan last me Kasaab se bhi compare nahi kar pa raha hun. Agar 1 line me kahun to Red John se zyada acha to ab mujhe Baaghi 3 ka villain lagne laga hai matlab soch sakte ho aap ki kitna bura character likha hai aapne.

2.Story me jo AP ki team hai 15-20 members ki uska size bahot bada hai. I mean in 15 logon ki team me kewal 1 maatra AP hi hai jo sab kuch kar raha hai. Baaki members to support ke liye hain. Agar aisa hi hai to kis liye itne saare naam yaad karwaye. Matlab case bhi AP solve kar raha hai, villain ko bhi AP maar raha hai, chhote-mote criminals ko bhi AP pakad raha hai to ye 15-16 baaki bande kis kaam ke hain.Please bhai inke character me bhi thode shades dikhao. Nahi dikha sakte to team members ki ginti kam karo. Bahot dikkat hoti hai naam yaad rakhne me.

3.Story me koi strong character nahi hai. Matlab wahi baat hai ki sirf AP hi hai poori story me. Poori story me sabse acha aadmi kon-AP. Sabse bura aadmi kon-AP. To bhai baaki characters kya jhak maarenge.Please bhai request hai meri aapse ki 1 to aisa character dikhao jo 2.0 ko bhi takkar de sake. Jo uski aankhon me aankhe daal ke keh sake ki mai tujhse bhi better hun. The Dark Knight hame isiliye pasand hai kyonki usme Joker ka character strong tha in comparison to Batman. Na Red John ka characters aisa tha. Na Adya ka aur na hi Dusty ka. Please bhai,aise acha nahi lagta hai ki aap hollywwod level stuff likh rahe ho aur masala abhi bhi south indian cinema ka hi laga rahe ho.


End me itna hi kehna chahunga ki part-1 was way better than part-2.

 

[Shahrukh]

Anaa ko kuch nahi hona chahiye bhai or aage 2.0 ke baat 1.0 k life me chahiye as a wife

 

[Black water]

Speechless update bhai super Marvelous