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UPDATE# | DATE |
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Update 117  | November 28th 11:30 PM |
Update 118 | December 6th 11:30 PM |
Update 119  | December 12th 11:30 PM |
Update 120  | December 16th 11:30 PM |
Update 121 | December 20th 11:30 PM |
Aapse kisi ne pucha... Yaa aap writer ho story ke...
I LIKE FIRSTUPDATE 89 ~
(PROTECTOR)
“Ughhh!”
*Thump*
“Huh?”
Aarav ne uthne ki koshish ki, Lekin uske haath kisi cheez se takda gye, Aarav ne aankhe kholi to wo kisi andheri jagha band tha.
Aarav: Tinkerbell?
Aarav ne Tinkerbell ko bulaya, Lekin usko Tinkerbell ki presence feel bhi nahi ho rahi thi, Aarav haatho se aas-paas tatolne laga.
Aarav: Huh?
Aarav kisi box ke andar band tha, Aarav ne abhi te pata kiya he tha ke ek taraf se halki roshni andar ayi aur badhne lagi, Aarav ne us taraf daikha to usko ek kamra dikhayi dene laga.
Aarav uss kamre ko upar se daikh raha tha, Aarav ne dhayan se daikha to usko ye kamra kuch jaana pehchana laga, Lekin usko yaad nahi aa raha tha ke ye kanha hai.
“Vansh! Apne gande haath meri behan se hata le!”
Ek awaaz ne Aarav ke raungte khade ker ke rakh diye, Ek dar ke saath Aarav ne uss taraf daikha to uske dil ki dhadkane rukne ko ho gayi.
Kamre ke ek taraf Aarav ko apna chehara he dikhayi diya, Aarav bediyon me bandha huwa tha, Uske saamne Urvi ko pakad ker Vansh usko muskurate huwe daikh raha tha.
Aarav(Shivering): New Year?
Aarav ek baar dobara 2012 ke Last day ko daikh raha tha, Aarav ko udhar Archana bhi khadi dikhayi di.
“Ughhhh”
Aarav ne neeche daikha to Past ka Aarav ek baar dobara se khada ho raha tha, Usko khade hote daikh Aarav ko yaad aa gaya ke aage kya hone wala hai.
Aarav(Gasping): Aye, Aye! Ruk, Aage na badhna......Aye......Vansh se nazar hata aur U-Urvi ki taraf daikha....Aye, Pagal ho gaya hai kya?.....Aye....Aye.....Usko chhod aur Urviiiii ko bacha le.....Aage na badhna.
*Thump-Thump*
Aarav chillata raha, Lekin uski ek awaaz ka bhi kuch asar nahi ho raha tha, Aarav box ko haath maarne laga, Lekin box bohat mazboot tha.
“Aghhhhh”
[Ability (Berserk) Activated]
[Unique Ability (Will to Live) Activated]
[Current Progress (70%)]
[Endurance Increased +180]
[Intelligence Increased +180]
[Strength Increased +180]
[Stamina Increased +180]
[Agility Increased +180]
[Sense Increased +18]
[All stats return to normal after the Unique Ability (Will To Live) deactivated]
“Ughhhhh!”
*Crack*
Aarav ek baar dobara zor lagane laga, Ab ki baar box me crack aa gaya, Aarav ki nazar neeche he ruki huwi thi, Uska pura chehara pasine se bheeg gaya tha, Uski aankhon me bhey jhalak raha tha.
Archana uski gun tan chuki thi, Lekin past ke Aarav ko ye dikhayi nahi de raha tha.
Aarav(Gasping): Urvi ko bacha le! Ek baar to uski ta......Ughhh.....Taraf daikh le, Usko bachana ho ga!!
*Crack*
Aarav ne box tod diya aur tezi se Urvi ki badhne laga, Aarav ki aankhon se aansu chhalak pade aur wo bina ruke Urvi ki taraf badhta raha.
Aarav(Scream): Urrrvvvviiiii!
*Bang*
****
Sayani Mansion
France ~ 9:20 AM
“Aghhh! Urrrvvvviiiii!”
“Hey, Hey, Everything's alright, Calm down”
Aarav chillate huwe uth gaya, Aarav kisi ki baahon me tha, Usne upar daikha to usko Tsubame ka chehara dikhayi diya, Aarav ki aankhon me aansu the.
Tsubame ne bina kuch bhi puche uska sar bahon se chupa liya, Uske agosh me Aarav bhi shaant hone laga, Aarav bina kuch bhi aur soche uski bahon me sar ko chupaye mann halka karne laga.
“Master!”
Aarav: [Huh? Tinkerbell? Kya huwa tha?]
Tinkerbell: [Berserk ability ke kaaran ap ne apni body per dhayan nahi diya! Ap ke sab internal organs twist ho gye the aur brain per bhi pressure ban gaya tha, Abhi ke liye main ne sab kuch stable ker diya hai, Lekin ap abhi ke liye kuch der uthne ki koshish na karna.]
Aarav: Sensei, I'm alright now!
Aarav ki awaz sun ker Tsubame ne bahon ko khol diya, Aarav seedhe ho ker baith gaya, Tsubame baithi uske chehre ki taraf daikhne lagi, Uski aankhon me aansu aur honton muskan thi.
Aarav ko ab dobara daikhne ki usko khushi bhi thi aur uske liye kuch bhi na ker pane ka dard bhi tha, Aarav ne aas-paas daikha to wo ek kamre me tha aur andar sirf wo dono he the.
Aarav: Kitne der se behosh tha?
Tsubame: 6 Hours, Isabelle ne tumhe heal ker diya tha! Yahan tumhe rest karne dene ke liye kaha tha, Main dhayan rakhne ke liye ruk gayi thi, Sab baahir he baithe huwe hai...Unhe bhi bata deti hu ke tumhe hosh aa gay-
Tsubame uthne he lagi thi ke Aarav ne uski kalai ko pakad ker usko rok diya.
Aarav: Sensei...Thank You!
Ek pal ke liye Tsubame khadi usko daikhti he reh gayi, Unhe ek dusre ko daikhe huwe kayi saal beet gye the, Lekin abhi bhi Aarav me Tsubame ko wohi purana Aarav dikhayi de raha tha.
Tsubame ne Aarav ke sar per haath rakh uske baalo bigad diye, Uski harkat daikh ker Aarav bhi muskura diya, Tsubame usko train karte samay aksar aise he kiya karti thi.
Tsubame: Abhi tum se bohat baate karne ko dil chah raha hai! Lekin ab main selfish nahi ban sakti, Baahir baithe sabhi tum se saval puchne ka intezar ker rahe hai.
Tsubame kehte huwe uth gayi aur kamre se baahir nikal gayi, Aarav usko daikhta he reh gaya, Aarav clearly Tsubame se strong tha aur usne Tsubame se zyada jee bhi liya tha.
Lekin Tsubame abhi bhi uske liye uski guru he thi, Aarav uske saamne apni weak side bina kisi dar ke dikha sakta tha.
Aarav: [Tinkerbell, Status]
Tinkerbell: [Master]
*Click*
“Aarav”
Aarav abhi status ko daikh he raha tha ke Isabelle kamre ke andar aa gayi, Isabelle ke saath he Yoo-Jung, Daisuke aur Aakash bhi andar aa gye.
Isabelle Aarav ke paas baith gayi aur usne Aarav ka haath pakad liya aur uski body ko khud check karne lagi, Ab Aarav ke internal organs bhi heal ho gye the.
Lekin Isabelle khud sab kuch daikhna chah rahi thi, Aarav ne bhi usko kuch bhi nahi kaha aur uska kaam karne diya, Aarav ke har ghav ko Isabelle ne heal ker diya.
Aarav: Ab Khush ho!? Kuch bhi nahi huwa tha, Exhaust ho gaya tha aur kuch bhi nahi huwa tha.
Isabelle(Nod): Lekin tumhe dhayan rakhna chahiye hai na? Aakhir tum hamare paas kyu nahi aye? Aur ab tak kanha the tum?
Aakash ne Daisuke aur Isabelle ko details de di thi, Tsubame aur Yoo-Jung dono ko Aarav yaad tha to unhe Aakash ki batayi sab baate pehle se pata thi.
Lekin kisi ko bhi ye nahi pata tha ke Aarav kanha tha, Yoo-Jung aur Tsubame bhi ye sunna chahati thi, Aarav ne ek baar sab ki taraf daikha aur haath aage ker diya.
Sab uski taraf daikhne lage, Aarav ne unhe ishara kiya to sab he uske paas aa gye aur uske haath per haath rakh diya.
[Ability (Mnemosyne's Gaze) Activated]
[Sharing memories…]
Aarav ek saath he sabhi ko uski memories dikhane laga, Aarav ne unhe Infinite prison aur uska sab ki memories se gayab hone ka sab kuch dikha diya.
*Gasp*
Ek saath sab unke hosh me aa gye, Lekin ab unke cheharon ke bhaav badal chuke the, Daisuke ke chehre per gussa dikhayi de raha tha aur Aakash ke chehre per khud ke liye gussa tha.
Isabelle(Tearful): Aarav...!
Isabelle ne Aarav ka haath thaam liya uski aankhe aansuon se bhar gayi thi, Usne ek saath Aarav ke 113 saal ke dard ko daikha tha.
Tsubame aage ayi aur usne Aarav ke sar ko thapthapa diya.
Tsubame: Well Done...!
Tsubame ko uske liye bura to lag he raha tha, Lekin utna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi uske himmat na haarne per ek guru hone ke nate usko proud bhi feel ho raha tha.
Tinkerbell: [Ye ladki....Master! Ye ladki kya ap se bhi zyada emotionless hai?]
Tinkerbell ne udhar khadi Yoo-Jung ki taraf daikhte huwe kaha, Aarav ne uski baat sun ker Yoo-Jung ki taraf daikha to wo khadi kuch soch rahi thi.
Aarav: [Nah, She's a genius]
Yoo-Jung: Lekin... Vansh ke paas 3 CWD kahan se aye?
Aarav ki memories me sab Vansh ke kiye per gussa the, Lekin Yoo-Jung udhar bhi sab kuch observe ker rahi thi, Baakiyo ne bhi 3 CWD ke notification daikhe the, Lekin sab emotions me aa ker bhool gye the.
Ab Tinkerbell ko bhi samajh aa rahi thi ke Yoo-Jung kaisi Ladki hai.
Yoo-Jung: Quest se hum sabhi ko sirf 1-1 CWD mila tha! Ek agar Vansh ka tha bhi to uske paas 2 extra the... Hum me se kisi ne bhi usko nahi diye to kisi aur ne uski help ki hai.
Daisuke(Nod): Aur Vansh ke saath hospital me kuch aur player bhi the! Aakash per bhi player ne attack kiya tha, Elite Guild Vansh ko support ker rahi thi...Lekin Kyu?
Aarav: Actually, it wasn’t the elite guild who backed Vansh! It was a korean player Jinho who was supporting him.
Daisuke: Jinho? Lekin uski tum se kya he dushmani thi?
Aarav: Uske kaaran bohat zyada ho sakte the! Agar usko meri real identity ke baare me pata hota, Lekin Dad ne kabhi hamari identity expose hone he nahi di thi... Jinho ka target main nahi Yoo-Jung thi.
Tsubame: What?
Yoo-Jung(Scoff): Kyu ke usko dar tha ke main uski position le lu gi! Jinho korea ke top 3 player me ata hai, Agar main na hoti to wo top 2 me hota.
Aarav: Exactly, Lekin unhe ye andaza nahi tha ke tutorial tower ki sirf 3 he Quest ho gi! Uske baad Vansh ne unke saath ek nayi deal ki, Yoo-Jung ki Information ke badle usne Sayani family aur mujhe khatam karne ke liye madad maangi.
Yoo-Jung: Kaisi Information?
Aarav: Abilities aur unki sab weakness aur tumhari location! Usne ye sab information Jinho ko di aur Jinho ne... Fire clan ko!
Aarav ki baat sun ker sab he khamosh ho gye, Unhe pata tha ke fire clan ne Vansh ki Information se kya kiya tha, Yoo-Jung ko bhi andaza tha ke kisi ne uski information leak ki thi.
Yoo-Jung(Scoff): Huh, Jinho *Sigh* Lekin thanks to you mere paas ek hidden card tha! Agar tum ne mujhe Luna na banaya hota to mera survive karna bhi mushkil tha.
Aarav: I didn’t mean to pick you as my Luna! It was an accident...Main ne tumhe sirf hosh me laane ke liye bite kiya tha, and somehow that turned you into my Luna.
Isabelle: Wait... *Smile* Really?
Aarav(Nod): Yes... Hamari 2nd Quest per main ne Yoo-Jung ko hypnosis se nikalne ke liye bite kiya tha! Lekin tab accidentally usko Luna ke liye mark bhi ker diya, Agar Yoo-Jung ko mark na kiya hota to Veronica meri Luna hoti.
Daisuke aur Isabelle ne bhi tab hypnosis ko experience kiya tha, Unko andaza tha ke Aarav kaisi situation me tha.
Aarav: Lekin main thankful hu ke Yoo-Jung Luna bani thi! Yoo-Jung na hoti to shayad mujhe kabhi Derek ke baare me pata bhi nahi lagna tha...Thank You!
Yoo-Jung aur Tsubame dono ne sirf Derek ko bachaya he nahi tha, usko train bhi kiya tha aur Yoo-Jung ne uski Maa ka role bhi play kiya tha.
Yoo-Jung: Aarav, I didn't protect Derek just because he's your son! I did it because of your dad... I owe my life to him.
Aarav: Huh, My... Dad? Lekin kaise?
Yoo-Jung ki baat sun ker Aarav bhi hairaan ho gaya, Yoo-Jung ne bhi Aarav ki tarha he haath uske aage ker diya.
Yoo-Jung: See for yourself...!
Yoo-Jung Aarav ko uski memories daikhne de rahi thi, Usne mind ko khud he relax ker liya tha, Aarav ne bhi uske haath ko pakad liya.
[Ability (Mnemosyne's Gaze) Activated]
[Sharing memories…]
****
Fire Clan Village
South Korea
*Sigh*
“Kim Min-Soo... Kabhi tum se aisi umeed nahi thi, Aakhir tum aisi stupidity kaise ker sakte ho!?”
Kim Min-Soo uske ghutnon per baitha huwa tha, Uske saamne uski wife aur Fire clan ki Leader Kim Hye-Jin baithi huwi thi.
Kim Hye-Jin previous clan leader ki beti bhi thi, Fire clan baaki clans ki tarha talent per successor nahi chunti thi, Fire clan leader hamesha previous leader ki bloodline se he chunti thi.
Lekin Kim Hye-Jin khud utni strong nahi thi ke pure clan ko control ker sake, Ye daikh ker previous leader ne apni beti ki shaadi clan ke sab se bade talent Kim Min-Soo se ker di.
Kim Min-Soo khud bhi strong hona chahta tha, Uske liye usko support aur clan ki art chahiye thi, Kim Min-Soo shaadi ke liye maan gaya aur unki shaadi ho gayi.
Kim Min-Soo samay ke saath strong hota raha aur uske paas Kim Hye-Jin ki tarha he clan leader ki authority bhi thi, Lekin phir bhi Kim Min-Soo kabhi uske pehle pyaar ko bhula nahi saka.
Seung-Ja, Fire clan ki dusri sab se talented member thi aur ek true beauty bhi thi, Uske peeche har din clan ke ladke naak ragadte the, Lekin Seung-Ja uska dil Kim Min-Soo ke saamne haar baithi thi.
Kim Min-Soo ki shaadi ke baad Seung-Ja ka dil toot sa gaya tha, Kim Min-Soo aur Kim Hye-Jin ke bache bhi huwe, Lekin uske baad Kim Min-Soo Seung-Ja ko bhula nahi saka aur uske paas chala gaya.
Seung-Ja ab uske saath nahi hona chahati thi, Lekin Kim Min-Soo ke kiye vadon aur uske pyaar ke Izhar ne Seung-Ja ko weak ker diya, Usko Kim Min-Soo ke sivaye aur kuch bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha.
Kim Min-Soo har raat uske kamre me ane laga, Seung-Ja uski concubine ban'nne ko bhi taiyar thi, Lekin Kim Min-Soo ne usko kabhi mauka he nahi diya aur Seung-Ja sirf uski ek mistress ban ker reh gayi.
Lekin ek din Seung-Ja ko pata laga ke wo pregnant ho gayi hai, Kim Min-Soo ne usko abortion ke liye kaha, Lekin Seung-Ja uske liye maani he nahi aur usne 2 betiyon ko janam de diya.
Kim Min-Soo ne usko ye baat chupane ke liye keh di ke un bacchiyon ka baap kon tha, Seung-Ja bhi bachiyon ko le ker bhaag gayi, Lekin Kim Hye-Jin ko sab kuch pata lag he gaya aur usne Seung-Ja aur uski bachiyon ko pakad liya.
“Eonni, *Sniff* Kya ab ye hamay maar de gye?”
Kim Min-Soo ke dusri taraf he uski betiyon ko baithaya huwa tha, Seung-Ja ko torture ker ke rassiyon se bandh ker unke paas he giraya huwa tha.
“Yoo-ri Aisa kuch bhi nahi ho ga! Mom ne unke friend ko bulaya hai *Gulp* Ek baar Mom ke friend aa gye to sab kuch theek ho jaye ga”
Hye-Jin(Scoff): Aur kitne Aashiq hai iske? Kim Min-Soo, Ab tumhare paas 2 raaste hai! You can either die with that woman and her kids... or you can kill those three to prove you're loyal to me.
Seung-Ja(Groan): Min-Soo...!
Seung-Ja ne dard se karahate huwe usko pukara, Ek gehra saans lete huwe Min-Soo uth ker khara ho gaya, Hye-Jin khamoshi se baithi usko daikhti rahi.
Kim Min-Soo aage badh ker Seung-Ja ke paas aa gaya aur usne Seung-Ja ko pakad ker seedhe pillar ke saath laga ker baitha diya, Seung-Ja ke muh se khoon nikal raha tha aur uske chehre per ghav bane huwe the.
Seung-Ja: Min-Soo... *Cough* Hamary sirf kuch time chahiye hai! U-Uske ane tak hum ko survive karna ho ga... Huh, Bachiyon k-
Min-Soo: Seung-Ja, Ab main aur kuch bhi nahi ker sakta! Main ne tum se kaha tha ke bacho abort ker do, Lekin tumhari mamta bhi ujagar honi he thi..... Lekin main ab sab kuch barbad nahi hone sakta, Ye sab kuch bohat mushkil se achieve kiya hai.
Seung-Ja(Frowns): Min-Soo?
Min-Soo: I'm sorry... Seung-Ja! I love you.
*Fire Breath*
“Aghhh”
“Maa”
Kim Min-Soo ne Seung-Ja ko zinda he jala diya, Yoo-ri ye daikh ker aage huwi, Lekin Yoo-Jung ne usko pakad liya, Aansu uski aankhon me bhi the, Lekin usne mauka daikhte he Yoo-ri ka haath pakada aur kamre se baahir bhaag gayi.
Yoo-Jung ko bhaagte huwe bhi uski Maa ki dardnak cheekhe sunayi de rahi thi, Lekin Yoo-Jung ruki nahi aur Building se baahir aa gayi.
“Stop”
Lekin unhe baahir khade guards ne pakad liya, Yoo-Jung aur Yoo-ri dono ne he dar se kaanpna shuru ker diya, Unhe ab bilkul bhi umeed dikhayi nahi de rahi thi.
*Tuck*
*Tuck*
*Tuck*
Building ke andar se Kim Min-Soo aur Kim Hye-Jin bhi baahir aa gye, Kim Min-Soo ke haath me Seung-Ja ka necklace tha, Unki Maa ka ye pasandida necklace tha aur fire proof bhi tha.
Yoo-Jung(Tearful): Dad... Please.
Lekin Kim Min-Soo ne uski kisi baat ko bhi suna tak nahi aur aage badh Yoo-ri ka gala pakad liya, Yoo-ri ka dam ghutne laga aur uski saanse rukne lagi.
Yoo-Jung usko bachane ke liye chatpatane lagi, Lekin guards ab usko hilne bhi nahi de rahe the, Yoo-Jung Maa ke baad ab uski behan ko bhi khone wali thi aur wo kuch bhi nahi ker sakti thi.
Yoo-Jung: *Blink*
*Slash*
“Ughhhh”
Yoo-Jung ne palke he jhapkayi thi ke uske saamne ka pura drishya badal gaya, Uski jaise prarthana ko sun liya gaya ho, Uske saamne ek naya vyakti khada huwa tha aur uske haatho me Yoo-ri thi.
Kim Min-Soo uske kadmon me gira tha aur uska haath cut ker dusri taraf he gira huwa tha, Kim Hye-Jin aur baaki sab bhi usko udhar daikh ker hairan aur gussa the.
Vyakti(Glare): I’m Avinash Arya, leader of the Spirit Clan! Seung-Ja and both of her daughters are under my protection now.
Hye-Jin(Furious): Huh? Don’t you know who I am? I’m Kim Hye-Jin, Leader of the fire clan, You just entered my territory and took off my husband’s hand, You have no clue how this is going to end for you, do you?
Avinash: Where's your mother?
Avinash ne Kim Hye-Jin ko bilkul he ignore karte huwe Yoo-Jung ki taraf daikhte huwe pucha, Usko ye karte daikh Kim Hye-Jin ko aur bhi gussa ane laga
Yoo-Jung(tearful): Th-... They burned her alive...!
Hye-Jin(Shouted): Avinash Arya! Yahan ana tumhari sab se badi bhool thi.
*Fire Arrow*
Kim Hye-Jin ne Avinash ko kehte huwe ek fire arrow bana liya, Uski flames ki heat ko daikh ker he pata lag raha tha ke wo kitni high level Qi ka use ker rahi thi.
*Soul Binding*
Hye-Jin: Huh? *Cough Blood*
Avinash ne Kim Hye-Jin ki soul ko bind ker ke uske Qi core ko uske andar he blast ker diya, Kim Hye-Jin udhar he neeche gir gayi.
Udhar khade huwe kisi bhi insaan ko kuch bhi samajh nahi ayi, Unko Fire clan ke sab members ne gher liya tha, Lekin kisi ki bhi himmat nahi ho rahi thi ke Avinash ya kisi ko bhi haath bhi laga de.
Avinash ki body se release ho rahi Qi ko feel ker ke he sab ko unki maut dikhayi de rahi thi.
Avinash: Seung-Ja’s daughters are under my protection now! Stay the hell away from them.
Avinash ne Yoo-Jung ka bhi haath pakada aur Yoo-ri ko gaud me uthaye huwe aise he chal diya, Unke aage se sab member side per hote rahe aur Avinash un dono ko le ker chala gaya.
****
Sayani Mansion
France ~ 11:46 AM
“Ughhh”
Yoo-Jung ne haath hata liya, Uska shareer kaanp raha tha, Lekin usne kisi ko bhi ye daikhne nahi diya aur khud ko calm ker liya.
Tinkerbell(Furious): [Shit... ! Avinash ne Min-Soo ko kyu nahi maara? Usko to pure clan ko khatam ker dena chahiye tha, Usne ye kyu nahi kiya? Karne ko wo ker he sakta tha]
Aarav: [Nahi]
Tinkerbell: [Huh? Kyu?]
Aarav: [Dad ne unke core ko tab he unseal kiya tha! Unke paas utni energy nahi thi ke wo udhar sab ko hara sakte, Dad bhaag to sakte the aur Qi gather ker sakte the, Lekin unhe Yoo-Jung aur uski behan ko protect bhi karna tha]
Tinkerbell: [Aisa tha kya?]
Aarav: [Haan, Dad ne mauka daikhte he unki Leader ko maar diya tha! Lekin uske liye unhone bohat zyada Qi ka Use ker liya tha... Dad ne udhar se nikalne ke liye unki Qi ko release ker ke bluff kiya tha]
Yoo-Jung(Breath): Fuuu ~ Ye Kim Min-Soo ke saath baaki sab ko pata tha ke Avinash hamay protect nahi ker sakte the! Kyu ke unhen unke clan ko bhi protect karna tha, Lekin un sabhi ko ye bhi pata tha ke agar hamay kuch bhi huwa to Avinash badla lene zaroor aye gye.
Aarav(Disgusted): Aur dad ke baad unhe kisi ka bhi dar nahi raha! Huh, bastards.
Tsubame: Lekin ab Kim Min-Soo pehle ki tarha nahi hai! Kim Min-Soo bohat strong ho chuka hai, Fire Clan kab se ek war ke liye ready ho rahi hai, Ek baar to Avinash ne Wind clan ka saath de ker War ko rok diya tha... Lekin ab ki baar unhe rokna easy nahi ho ga.
Daisuke: Wind clan ka saath?
Tsubame(Nod): Haan... Hum lagbhag haar he gye the! Lekin Avinash ne wind clan ke saath alliance ki to Fire clan ko bhi rukna per gaya tha.
Aarav(Scoff): Huh... Family, Clan, Friends aur dusre Clans ko bhi! Dad, Ek saath sab ko protect ker rahe the, Aur main!? Khud ki choti behan ko bhi protect nahi ker saka.
Aarav jitna Avinash ko jaan raha tha utna he uske saamne khud ko chota mehsoos ker raha tha, Usko ab samajh aa rahi thi ke Avinash ne uski sab memories ko daikhne kyu nahi diya tha.
Unko daikh ker Aarav kaise react karta ye usko bhi nahi pata tha, Aarav koshish ker bhi un memories ko unlock nahi ker sakta tha.
*Knock-Knock*
Kamre ke darwaze per dastak huwi to Aakash ne darwaza khol diya, Baahir se Barbie andar aa gaya.
Barbie: Master! Dhanush aa gaya hai aur ap ka wait ker raha hai.
Barbie ki baat sun ker sab Aakash ki taraf daikhne lage, Aakash ne Barbie ko ishara kiya to Barbie baahir chala gaya, Aakash Aarav ki taraf daikhne laga.
Aakash: Aarav, Ye tumhara guest hai.
Aarav: Huh?
****
Unique Hospital
Surat ~ 5:17 PM
Priya: Kya ho gaya hai tujhe? Ye kaisi halat bana li hai tu ne? Agar pata hota ke tu aisi halat ker le gi to tujhe jaane he nahi deti.
Priya Ishika ke paas baithi huwi uske sar per haath fairate huwe usko daant bhi rahi thi, Ishika bed per baithi usko muskurate huwe daikh rahi thi.
Ishika: Maa, Kuch bhi nahi huwa! Sirf kuch medicine overdose ho gayi thi, Aage se dhayan rakhu gi.
Priya(Tearful): Lekin meri to jaan nikal gayi thi na!? Lekin tujhe kya he hai.
Ishika: Mata ji galti ho gayi! Ab se ap ki he baate maana karu gi... Ek baar to maafi mil sakti hai na?
Priya: Abhi kuch der aur Maa ki narazgi ko jhel tab mera dukh pata lage ga.
Priya ki baat sun ker Ishika hansne lagi aur usko manane lagi, Priya ke baad baaki sab ne bhi Ishika se uska haal pucha, Lekin un sab ke beech Tanu khamoosh baithi huwi Aayush ko ghur rahi thi.
Aayush uske saath eye contact na banane ki koshish ker raha tha, Lekin Tanu uske upar se nazar hata he nahi rahi thi, Aayush ki halat bigadne lagi thi.
Ek Red ranked ke monster ki ek sadharan ladki se phat rahi thi, Aayush ko utna dar kabhi nahi laga tha jitna usko ek Ladki se lag raha tha.
Kunal: My dear Oldies, Ab hamay Eshu ko rest bhi to karne dena chahiye hai na? Kisi ne khana bhi nahi khaya to Lunch ker lete hai aur uske baad Eshu ka discharge le ker nikalte hai, Kya kehte ho?
Pratap: Haan, Mujhe bhi khaane ke baad medicine khaani hai! Pata lage ke Dada poti dono ka discharge lena per jaye.
Pratap ki baat sun ker sabhi hansne lag gye, Kunal unko le ker baahi nikal gaya aur usne Nandini ko bhi saath le liya aur kamre se nikal gye, Ab udhar sirf Aayush, Ishika aur Tanu he bachi thi.
Aayush: Umm, Main bhi chal-
Tanu: Hilne ki koshish bhi na karna! Yanhi per injection laga laga ker puncture ker du gi.
Ishika: Tanu, Ye kaise baat ker rahi ho?
Tanu: Aise he baat karni chahiye hai! Di ye Aarav nahi hai, Ek impostor hai.
Aayush: Lek-
Tanu: Ek bhi bekar baat na karna! Sirf ye batao ke Aarav ke saath kya kiya hai tum ne?
Ishika: Tanu, Ye impostor nahi hai! Haan, Ye Aarav bhi nahi hai, Lekin ye enemy nahi hai.
Tanu: What? Ye kya keh rahi ho ap?
Ishika(Nod): Haan... Mujhe bhi bohat kuch puchna hai! Lekin ye sab kuch Aarav khud bataye ga to mujhe acha lage ga, Tab tak ke liye hamay bhi act karna ho ga.
Tanu: Lekin Di-
Ishika: Tanu, Trust me!
Tanu khadi sirf un dono ko daikhti he reh gayi, Aayush yahan per kuch bhi galat nahi kehna chahta tha to wo khamosh khada tha.
Tanu(Sigh): Huh, Fine! Lekin Aarav ko sab kuch batana ho ga aur ap ko bhi batana ho ga ke yahan chal kya raha hai.
Ishika(Smile): Sure, Ab tum ne bhi kuch nahi khaya ho ga! Sab ke saath khana kha lo.
Ishika ki baat sun ker Tanu bhi Aayush ke saath baahir chali gayi, Priya bhi uske liye kuch khaane ke liye le ayi aur Ishika ke paas ruk gayi.
Aayush aur Tanu baakiyo ke paas jaane he lage the ke Tanu beech me ruk gayi aur Aayush ki taraf daikhne lagi, Aayush ki ek baar dobara halat patli ho gayi.
Tanu: Sirf ek baat batao...! A-Aarav safe to hai na?
Aayush: Umm, Yes!
Tanu(Relief): Huh, Thank You!
****
Sayani Mansion
France ~ 12:23 PM
*Tick-tock*
Aarav aur baaki sab bhi meeting room me baithe huwe the, Lekin ab unke saamne kuch naye chehre bhi the, 2 Ladke aur ek ladki unke saamne baithi huwi thi.
Tinkerbell(checking): [Kavya, Rishabh aur Dhanush, Ye teeno he Spirit clan se rescue kiye gye 138 bacho me se hai! Avinash ne Dhanush ko sab bacho ka captain banaya huwa tha, Dhanush sab se mature aur ek talented student bhi tha]
Tinkerbell ne records ko daikhte huwe sab kuch Aarav ko bata diya, Aarav ne udhar baithe Dhanush ki taraf daikha to Dhanush already usko he daikh raha tha.
Lekin aisa lag nahi raha tha ke usko Aarav kuch khaas pasand hai, Kavya aur Rishabh uske kuch kehne ka intezar ker rahe the.
Aarav(Sigh): Huh, Aakash ne bataya ke ap sab mujhse milne aye hai! Kya main puch sakta hu ke kyu?
Dhanush: Avinash Sir ke baad Clan ko ek naya Leader chahiye hai! Ap ki bua Saanvi ek Leader ki beti thi, Lekin unhone hamay ap ka intezar karne ke liye kaha, Lekin... hum me se koi bhi ap ko Leader banane ke liye taiyar nahi hai.
Aarav: Aur aisa kyu?
Dhanush: Ap ek player hai to ap strong bhi ho! Lekin hum yahan Clan ke Leader ki baat ker rahe hai... I'm sorry, Lekin ap ke Spirit core ko unseal huwe bhi kuch samay he huwa hai, Aise me hum ap ko Leader kaise bana sakte hai, Saanvi Ji ek Leader ke liye qualify karti hai, Lekin hum ap ke baare me ye nahi keh sakte.
Aarav(Sigh): Aur ye decide karne wale tum kon hote ho? Dad ne tumhe ek captain to banaya tha, Lekin tum ne shayad khud ko he Leader maan liya hai.
Dhanush: I'm sorry Mr. Aarav Ary-...Aarav! Lekin ye sab members ne test ke baad aur saath baith ker he decide kiya hai, Saanvi Ji aur mera spirit core sab se zyada strong tha, Hamare beech ek dual huwa tha aur main jeet gaya tha, Lekin main bhi Saanvi Ji ko Leader banana chahata hu, Kyu ke wo bhi talented hai
Aarav(Sigh): Mr. goody two shoes! Dual... Fine, Let's do it.
Dhanush: I'm sorry, What?
Aarav: Dual, Ye he chahiye hai na!? Aakash yahan training room hai kya?
Aakash: *Nod*
Aarav: Great... Aur main sirf Spirit Qi use karu ga! Ye mera handicap ho ga.
Aarav ne kisi ek bhi nahi suni aur Aakash ke saath training room chala gaya, Kavya aur Rishabh Dhanush ki taraf daikhne lage, Dhanush ko bhi Aarav ka attitude kuch bhi khaas pasand nahi aya tha.
Barbie un sab ko bhi saath training room le gaya, Aarav khada training room ko daikh raha tha, Usko udhar training marks dikh rahe the, Barbie abhi udhar he uski new ability ko test ker ke gaya tha.
Aarav aur Dhanush beech me aa ker khade ho gye, Baaki sab bhi udhar he bani huwi ek balcony me khade ho gye, Aarav ke sab friend's bhi uski fight daikhne ke liye bohat excited the.
Aarav: [Tinkerbell, System lock ker do]
Tinkerbell: [System Locked]
Daisuke: Aarav, Kick his Ass!
Tsubame(Glare): Daisuke... !
Daisuke(Grin): Sorry... !
Aarav aur Dhanush taiyar ho gye, Dhanush stance le ker khada ho gaya, Lekin Aarav seedha he khada raha, Uski cockiness ko daikh ker Dhanush ko aur bhi gussa aa gaya.
Dhanush: *Soulquake*
Dhanush ke andar se ek weird type energy nikalne lagi, Aarav ka vision shake karne laga.
Tinkerbell: [Master]
Aarav ne Tinkerbell ki taraf daikha to ye usko bhi affect ker rahe thi, Ye technique kisi ki bhi soul ko shake ker dene ke liye thi, Ye opponent ki judgement per bhi asar karti thi.
Aarav: You're strong.....,
Ek taraf se Qi blade banaye huwe Dhanush Aarav ke paas aa gaya, Uski speed bhi tez thi, Dhanush ne Aarav ki chhati per attack kiya, Lekin uska attack hava me he ghoom gaya.
Dhanush(Startled): Huh?
“Lekin tum ne mujhe kuch zyada he underestimate ker diya”
[Unique Ability (Soul Binding) Activated]
Aarav ne Dhanush ke sar ko pakadte huwe neeche maar diya, Uski Soul ko bhi Aarav ne bind ker diya tha, Dhanush baitha sirf usko aankhe phaade daikh he sakta tha.
Aarav: I won...!
Dhanush ke paas ab kehne ke liye kuch bhi nahi bacha tha, Uska sar jhuk gaya, Kavya aur Rishabh uske paas to aye, Lekin unhe samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke wo Dhanush se kya kahe, Hamesha se Dhanush he unke liye bola tha.
Dhanush(Whisper): I'm sorr-
Aarav: Losing sucks! Ye main ne bhi aj he experience kiya hai, Main abhi bhi tumhe mujhe accept karne ke liye nahi kahu ga aur na he mujhe tumhara approval chahiye bhi hai.
Aarav Dhanush ke paas aa ker baith gaya.
Aarav: I’m Aarav Arya, son of Avinash Arya! And I’m going to be your next clan leader
Aarav usko keh ker bina uske kuch kehne ka intezar kiye udhar se chala gaya, Uske raaste me he Aakash uska intezar ker raha tha.
Aarav: Ye tum ne kiya tha na!? Unko ye batane ke liye ke main kon hu.
Aakash: *Smile*
Aarav(Sigh): Huh, Thank You! *Smile* Fufa ji.
Aakash: Wait, What? A-Aarav.
Aakash Aarav ko bulata raha, Lekin Aarav uski ek bhi sune bina chala gaya, Aarav training room se baahir aa gaya.
“Aarav”
Aarav abhi mansion jaane he wala tha ke usko peeche se ek awaaz sunayi di, Aarav ke aage badhte huwe kadam khud he ruk gye, Aarav ne peeche daikha to uske saamne Urvi khadi huwi thi.
Lekin Urvi akeli nahi thi, Uske saath ek aur bhi vyakti khada huwa tha, Urvi ne uska haath pakada huwa tha.
Aarav: Parth?
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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye update 6K+ Words ka tha aur main abhi theek nahi hu, Ye update bhi bohat khaas update tha to risk bhi nahi le sakta tha, Hamara target wohi hai 120 Likes ke liye, Umeed karta hu ke ap ko bhi update pasand aya ho ga, Milte hai agle update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
Jabardast update bhai
Nice bhot hi pyara update....,
Ek no update mast mazedaar awesome.
That's I use word "inspired".
Definitely it's not exactly like any of them...and your story has different plot also. It's just I feel that highly inspired by system and isekai animes and manhwa. Specifically the wordings of system and fights.
But an amazing original humanized storyline also made by you...keep it up.
Don't take my previous statement in other way....
Completed 40 updates in 3 days cause your are writing an amazing story....
Bhai last time 30 percent stats unsealed huwe thee usse pehle kitne unsealed thee yaad nahi pata hai to bata do please
Mind-blowing update bhai
Zabardast
Jab pack mai likha hai 84 days toh 83 par recharge kyun karna...
Salty~Otaku re-visiting old updates.... Laga nahi tha itna fun hoga... Abhi jo Aarav ke saamne cheezen aa rahi hai... Choti Choti hi sahi lekin hum uss par gour nahi kar rahe... Kaafi saari cheezen past se pata chal rahi hai... Jo future se connect hai... Literally kaafi unexpected cheezen hai sab kuch review mai chaap dunga... Iss baar bada paragraph aane waala hai toh ready raho.... Kaafi saare sawaal daalne waala hoon... Past se aane ke baad...
eagerly waiting for another fabulous update...
BHAI TARGET 120
LIKES
HAS COMPLETED
WHEN WE CAN EXPECT NEXT
SCHEDULE
Bhai schedule kha hai, ya is baar bina schedule ke update dene wale ho?
Sure.....
Let's Gooo...Ek writer se 20K ka update aur dusre se 30K
Salty~Otaku Toh iss review ko hum past se start karenge update no.1 se kuch point present se link karenge kuch aane waale future mai humko dekhne ko milega saath hi kuch sawaal aur kuch blunders jo writer sahab se hui hai... Itni badi story likhe likhe ho jaati hai.... Thoda bhut chalta hai... Toh chaliye shuru karte hain....
1:-Aarav urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha...
( Jo ki abhi Urvi Doctor ban chuki hain )
2:- Aarav ko past mai uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi...
( Lekin Avinash ne uski maa ko kaha tha ki aarav aur urvi ko woh uski maa ki hatya ka jimmedar samjhe... )
3:- Urvi ki best friend Kirti...
( Character start mai tha abhi missing hai... Baad mai kahi iska jikar tak nahi hua... )
4- Ek aadmi jo kankal ban chuka tha uske pass se aarav ko healing potion milta saath hi ek chitthi jisme stone manarch ko jaan se maar Dene ko kaha hai... Koi dushmani yaa dhokha diya gaya hoga..
( Aadmi ke baare mai abhi kuch pta nahi uski stone monarch se kya dushmani thi... Magar jaha tak lagta hai uski maut ke peeche stone monarch ka hath tha... Aarav ne stone monarch se dushmani bhi le li hai... Ab yeh aarav kyun kar raha hai... ?? Aage kya hoga abhi khulasa nahi hua... )
5- Normal users ke pass ek Unique ability hona bhi millions me ek hoti hai... Aarav ke pass 3 hai...
( Abhi aarav ke paas active 5 unique abilities hai jo unlock hai... Baki lock pata nahi... Magar hairaan kar dene ka waali baat hai kisi ke paas ek bhi nahi hoti aarav ke pass itni kaise... Soul binding uske pita se mili will to live uski jinda rehne ki chaah jo woh paida hote time lagbhag mar chuka tha... Aur memonise gaze shayad uski daadi se aur baaki... Baaki ?? )
6- Alpha se Aarav ko Devour mila saath hi uski special Unique ability. Limitless. Growth bhi Active ho gayi thi... Jo ki hidden thi...
( Limitless Growth kaam kaise karti hai abhi bhi confused hoon... Ek tarah se devour ke jaise hai magar usse jayada strong... Iska ek discription de Dena )
7- Aarti another character jisne Aarav ko maafi maangne ko kaha tha Neel se.... Jisse baad mai Aakash ne defend kiya... Magar Aadarsh ne Aarti aur Vansh se kuch baat ki jo pta nhi...
( Yeh Raaz bhi unhi ke saath chala gayaAarav ke baare mai batya hoga usne Aakash ki kaise help ki... Aadarsh aur Special Aarti itni jaldi Mar gaye??? Abhi body unki mili nahi kisi ko... Kya pata woh bhi chup kar baithe ho Vanshika ke jaise... )
8-Aakash theek hone ke bad jab ghar wapis gaya toh aarav se door hone ke chalte woh emotionless ho gaya tha... Magar jab Aarav ek bar fir wapis aaya toh Aakash ke emotions wapis aa gye... Saath hi aakash apni maa Ko kehta hai Aarav Aur Vanshika ki Jodi kaafi aachi lagti hai... Maa bhi uska ishara samjh kehta haan kaafi aachi lagti hai...
( Aakash Ke baare mai kya hi bolo abhi iska character ke baare mai kuch pata nahi magar. Aarav ke liye jo pyaar aur dedication hai... Ufff dono ka bond AakashAarav... )
9- ek baar fir aarav ki hidden ability Limitless Growth ke chalte usne Tasubme se Ki active karna sekh liya jisse. Woh hairaan reh gayi. Koi itni jaldi kaise kar sakta hai magar aarav ko abhi bhi apni ability ke baare me nahi pta...
( Again Limitless Growth ne Aarav ki help ki Uski Ki energy ko Active karne mai... Need description ! )
10- maa ka sapna tha urvi doctor banne intresting yeh baat aarav ne khud urvi ko boli usko hospital mai admit krte waqt...
( Point Clear hai Aarav kyun urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha... Inko kisi ne 3 idiot movie nahi dikhayi kya... BC doctor ki beti doctor... Abhi Urvi Varsha ke saath reh rahi hai uske Doctor hone se jayada shock nahi laga hoga... )
11- Aakash chahta tha Aarav modelling kare usne director Sammy ko majboor Kiya jiske chalte usko Aarav ko shooting ke liye manana pada...
( Ek baar fir se Aakash
12- Urvi ke baad Vanshika woh reason thi jiske liye aarav wapas Zinda aana chahta tha...
( Yeh thoda wrong Number tha Aakash ko dhoka diya aarav ne uska dil hi Tut Gaya hoga... Vanshika ke liye ek baar fir jeena chahta tha... Aur aakash ka kya)
13-Aarav ne issabella ko confess kiya ki uske dil me vanshika h...
( Aakash
14- Jaha sabka kehna tha spirit clan barbaad ho chuka hai... Wahi Daisuke ki maa Myuki ne use btaya ki spirit clan barbaad nahi hua... Bas unhone sabhi clan se khudko door kar liya hai.... WTF??
( Daisuke ki Maa Myuki ka koi na koi relation toh Hai Spirit clan se... Tasubme ne bhi kaha tha Wind clan sahi salamat uske peeche Spirit clan ka bhut bada haath hai )
15-Tasubme ke pita ne waqt aane par Aarav ko clan mai lane ke liye kaha tha... Qyuki woh dekhna chahte the jise Tasubme ne clan ki technique sikhayi hai woh uss kabil hai yaa nahi...
( Hmmm aarav Derek ke paas jarur jayega... Jo filhaal Japan mai Daisuke ke paas hi hai... Kya aarv ko koi test dena padega ?? )
16-wind clan ki pehli meeting mai 4th elder nahi chahti thi ki Daisuke leader bane... Next meeting mai 3rd elder uske jaise baat kar rahi I think yeh blunder hai...
( Yeh blunder hai chup sakta hai... Koi na hota hai...
17- Jinhoo Ne Yoo-Jung se badla lene ke Vash ko kuch diya... Jisse Vash kisi Bade player ko backstab kar sake... Uske liye unme sabse shaktishali Yoo-Jung thi... Magar jab uska saamna aarav se hua uski power dekh use wanha se bhagna padd gya...
( Jinhoo ne Vansh ko Spirit water ki drops di thi... Jisko usne aarav ko inject kar diya... But Inn sabke peeche Jinhoo tha yeh abhi aarav ko pta kyun nahi... ??? Aarav ne Vansh ki memory check kar chuka hai ab shayad uska agla Target Jinhoo ho sakta hai... )
18-according to vanshika Vash pehle theek tha... Aur Uski Ek servent thi Jiska naam Beatrice tha... Fir ek din Vanshika ne Vansh ko Beatrice ke sath dekh liya... Uske baad uske Dad ne Beatrice ko kuch paise dekar door kar diya... WTF??? Beatrice ???
( Ho sakta hai do alag alag character ho... Naam same ho... Jaise story mai do Priya thi... But kaafi shocking cheez thi abhi Beatrice ka pata hone ke baad past mai usne kya Kiya... Agar kuch aisaa hai toh Writer sahab explanation chahiye isper... Haan Beatrice 22 saal ki jarur thi jab woh dubara aarav se mili thi...Jo soch raha hoon waisa na ho bas... )
19- Ek aur blunder aarav hexagon se ladne se pehle speech deta hai usme apne pita ka naam abhinav Arya bolta hai Avinash* ki jagh... Aur baad me bhi Ezra Abhinav Abhinav karti. H.... Kaafi confusing h new readers k liye character ka naam hi change kar diya... Perticular update mai...
( Yeh blunder bada hai usko jaake edit kar do kaafi confusing tha dusra naam.. )
20-soo-hyun fire clan se hai jisne Avinash ki madat ki... Jinho starting se hi dalla tha. Yeh toh pata padd hi gya... ELA ek actress thi...
( Soo-hyun , Jinhoo aur ElA abhi inke baare mai kuch nahi pata present mai... )
21- Avinash ne marne se pehle soo-hyun ki power ko apni forbidden technique se seal kar diya...
( ELA ne bhi dhoka diya, Soo- Hyun ki power seal hai... Aare waale arc mai Fire clan se ladai Tay hai )
22- Na-ri joki 4th elder thi usme Yoo-Jung ki Maa ko baazaru kaha sath hi uski behen Yoo-ri par bhi humla kar diya... Toh shayad iss wajah se dono fire clan se alag thi...
( Fire clan iska Raaz toh poora Arc deserve karta hai kaafi saare galat kaamo mai involve hai... Soo-hyun possibly fire clan leader ho sakta hai... Aur aisa dekhe toh Yoo-Jung Soo-hyun ki beti... )
23-Aarav ko jab chain se pakad kar world se expelled kiya jaa raha tha toh usko Slime aur Alpha ki woh. Yaadein dikhti hai jo usne pehle kabhi dekhi nahi thi... Jo lock thi...
( Ab yeh Raaz abhi tak saamne nahi aaya slime aur Alpha ki kon si Yaadein aarav ne dekhi thi ?? )
24- earth par aate hi aarav ke 75% stats seal kar diye gye... Aur saath hi mother spirit se contract sign hone ke baad woh system ke purane incharge jinhone aarav ko infinity prison me bheja saath hi... Aarav ke stat seal kiya unse disconnect hoke ab mother spirit uski manager ban chuki hai...
( Ab koi dubara aarav ko control yaa dubara prision mai nahi bhej sakta... Qki Ab Aarav ka manager khud spirit hai... Jisse woh sabhi ke system se alag ho gyaa hai... Jinhone usko saza di thi )
25-Mia ko dekh kar Aarav ko kisi purani party member ki yaad aa jati h lekin kiski... ???
( Mia , Michael ki beti purani party ki member??? Kon ho sakti hai... Ab Mia Aarav ki guild join karne waali hai... Iss character ka bhi Raaz jald khul jayega.. )
26- Meera ne sabko sujhaav diya Aarav ko uska beta aanouce karne ke liye....
( And guess what shit gone real... But kaise... Pehli meeting mai Aarav ko beta bana kar introduce karna... Meera mist clan se thi... But shayad woh Aarav aur veer ke connection ke baare mai jaanti thi... Usko ghar mai rookne ke liye usne aisa kiya... Baad mai Kunal ne bhi usse kaha ki hue Aarav ko veer ke baare mai bata dena chahiye... Ab veer ki story dekhne ko milegi lagta hai... )
27-Aarav Veer ke bunker jo usne aarav liye banaya tha waha phunch gya... Wanha use pta chala Veer ne khud ka naam Batman rakha aur uske jaise hi Den Aarav ke liye taiyar ki thi... Saath Mai Aarav ke haath ek file aati hai... Corpse naam se... The Kid who supposed to be die... ??
( Aarav ne veer ko pehli baar Batman keh bulaya tha... But yeh Aakash aur Aarav ke beech kyun aa raha hai...love triangle... Again the same file jiska kitni baar jikar ho chuka h... Aarav ne Varsha ka past dekhne se pehle yeh file padh li hogi... Isliye woh jayada hairaan nahi hua jaise use sab pata tha... Isme Aarav ke janam waali baat hi hogi )
28- Aarav ne Micheal ko Tower ke bahar barrier banane ka promise Kiya woh bhi ek saal ke ander...
( Yeh kaam karne Aarav Dubara ek baar Mumbai jayega association tower... Aage aane waale update mai dekhne ko milega... )
29- Aarav ko skeleton ke pass se ek book bhi mili thi jisse rune enclave karke woh mana stone ko battle stone yaa kuch aur bana sakta tha... Jo kaam stone monarch karta tha...
( Stone monarch... Abhi iske baare mai jayada nahi pata but aarav ka dushman ban chuka hai toh Fire clan ke baad agla no. Isi ka hona hai... )
30- Ishika ki soul damage h usko cure krne k liye aarav ko uske sath kuchi kukarna padega... Magar bina kisi bond ke aarav karna ni chahta...
( Ishika abhi hospital mai hai... Aarav opposite sex ki soul ko purify kar sakta hai... But ishika kya iske liye taiyar hogi... Isliye aarav unke beech bond banne ka wait kar raha hai... )
31- Soul clan barbaad hote time Aarav ki bua ko ek beti Hui thi...
( Iske baare mai abhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai... Ek Random guess karun toh yeh Aakash ki wife Saanvi ho sakti hai... Woh bhi soul binding use kar sakti hai )
32- Aarav ke pass do core hai.. jiski wajah se woh 25 saal ke baad bhi soul purifier hone ke baad bhi survive kar saka hai... Qkuki uske dono core power equally divide kar rahe the...
( Note karne waala point nahi nahi toh Varsha ne toh sab baad ke liye chod diya tha... Jo hoga dekha jayega... Isliye Aarav 25 ke baad bhi survive kar gaya hai... )
33- wind clan ki ek branch Paris mai bani hai jiska leader George hai...
( Paris = France Jaha Varsha ke saath Saath Aarav aur Aakash ne bhi New syani mention bana chuka hai... George?? Aage pata chalega )
34- Clan meeting mai sab leader Spirit clan ko khatam kar dena chahte the magar Tasubme ne sab ko saaf keh diya ki jo bhi spirit clan ke against jayega usko Wind clan se saamna karna padega... Jisse sun sab sant ho gye... Wohi Fire Clan leader chup kar sab sun raha tha aur sabki haalat par hass bhi raha tha...
( Confirm hai yeh chup kar sunne waala aur koi nahi Soo-hyun hi hai... Uski power seal hai shyad isliye chup raha ho... Magar ab cheezen saaf hai story Fire clan mai jaane waali hai... Jaha aarav bhi lawful banker Micheal aur association ki bhi madat karega... )
35- Barbie Darkness Clan ka leader candidate tha... Jisse Aakash ne uske clan se Haanah ke saath bachaya...
( Iski story abhi saamne aayi nahi hai... Possibly Hannah aarav ko sab btayegi... )
36- Elite Group ne Aakash aur Veer par humla kiya tha... Jiske baad undono ne uske half masters ko maar diya saath hi aakash ne leader ko bhi maar diya...
( Elite Group abhi tak nahi pata chala iske peeche kon hai mastermind... Saath hi aakash ne leader ko maar diya... Aage dekhna hoga isko bhi )
37- Tarun ke liye Uske pita jo Duniya me sabse shaktishali ban sate the unhone apni power chod di...
( Shayad Yaha Mother spirit ki baat kaha Tarun ne... Jo Shubham ne Tarun ke ander seal kar di thi )
38- Tasubme ko 5 spirit clan ke users ke baare mai pata hai 6 th uske hisaab se aarav hai...
( Tasubme
39- Evil God heart ko fill krne ke baad aarav ke status 34% unlock ho gye the saath hi dono core ko aarav ek saath use kar sakta hai...
( Yeh stat unlock kaafi confusing hai... 34+ 30= 64 % stats abhi aarav ke unlock hone chahiye... )
40- System Bazar ke monarch aarav ko 70% discount par saaman offer kiya but what cost??
( Iska abhi pta nahi... But Aarav ne deniy nahi kiya dekhte hai aarav se kaise madad leta hai )
41- protector guild Leader ko Aarav Arya naam se sapne aa rahe hai usne yeh baat Daisuke se cmfm ki... ??
( Sapne kiss tarah ke... Kunle Andrew ka beta... Jisko aarav ne apni family ko protect karne ke liye kaha tha ab aap oh har kisi ko protect kar raha hai... Isko bhi jara Limelight mai daalo... )
42- Spirit Clan ke kuch members ne Wind clan ka saath diya tha... Unki wajah se wind clan sahi salamat hai... ??
( Yeh flashback shayad Tasubme Aarav ko batayegi... Wahi sab cheezen clear hongi... )
43- Barbie ne Kunal ko bataya ke veer ke Marne waalon ka badla uska nahi hai... ?? Uske peeche Elite group tha na... ??
( Elite Group aakhir hai kon yeh... Isse bhi aarav ko badla lena hai..
44- Barbie aur Doc ka conversation Barbie ka usko khna dena... Saath me woh saf jahir kar deti h uski shaadi ho chuki h aur seen mai bacchi ko bhi dikhaya gaya hai...
( Aur woh Doc aur koi Nahi Urvi hai... Shaadi bacchi ?? Ab varsha yaa suhani ki ho nahi sakti bachi Urvi... Aarav kaise react karega... Jab use iss baare mai pata chalega... )
45- Kisi Aurat ne Vansh ko madad ki thi Aarav aur uski family ka naam deathpool mai daalne ke liye....
( Elite Group se koi ho sakta hai... Jiska aarav pata laga hi lega... Yaa koi aur hai iske peeche ?? )
46- Eliss aur Barbie ka kuchi ku tha Hannah ne Aakash se madat maangi thi syad... Vansh ne Hannah ko help ke badle Barbie ko free karne ka promise Kiya tha...
( Eliss yeh shayad wohi hai na Aadarsh ki assistant... Yeh story bhi Hannah aarav se discuss karegi )
47- Mohan Arora toh kaafi Shareef nikla usne Varsha ko saaf sabdo mai keh diya results chahiye no matter what cost... Uske liye Baccho ko cheed faad do yaa khud baccha paida Karo... WOW*
( Don't tell me ki Elite Group iska ho sakta hai... Just sochne ke liye bol diya baaki Arora Family full Villian wives aa rahi hai.. )
48- France mai Bharat ka koi friend rehta tha jisko usne leader ki beti de diya...
( Iska mai pakka nahi keh sakta but mera shakkk kaafi had tak Saanvi par jaa raha hai... Uski story sunker bhi aisa hi laga... )
49- Singh family ne Ankush ki madat ki unki band factory mai Lab banane ke liye...
( Possibly yeh wohi factory hai jo Veer ne aarav ke liye banayi thi usme Kaafi saare equipment ke saath rooms the... Medical rooms bhi... )
50*- Aakash ke power se soul manarch aarav bhi chonk gaya... Saath hi uske hath par koi symbol bana diya....
( Hmmm yeh aage dekhna Banta hai Aakash kiss hadd tak powerfull ho chuka hai... aarav ke puchne par usne nahi btaya ki woh akela Domain ke ander kaise aa gaya... Monarch bhi use amder dekh chonk gaya tha... )
abhi tak ki story ko ek review mai cover nahi kar sakta tha but jo bhi points mere dimaag mai aaye woh likh diye hai... Samar_Singh mera ho gya aap apna dekh lo.. Salty~Otaku iska reply ke liye bhi 2 din diye tumko...
baaki Waiting for next update...
No worries I know update bhi likhna h aapko abhi...
Samjh gaya tha woh but achanak se Beatrice padkar hang ho gaya tha system...
Lag raha h uski story ke saath... Soul binding ability abhi koi aur user nhi aaya saamne...
But uske pack mai use karne ke liye toh Alpha ko jab haraya tab system ne uske liye suitable ability di thi...
Okies...Aage pta hi chal jayega... Puchta nahi agar card ka discription rehta toh but woh bhi hidden rakha hai abhi... But kaafi hadd tak samjh gaya...
Yuppp lag hi raha hai... Next story jaise chal rahi... Fire clan ki taraf jayegi...
Insaan ek laalach ka Paodha hai jisse Dooop ki trahaan hamesha kuch zeyaada ki bhookh rehti hai... Phir chaahe uske liye usko kitna hi khichna kyun na pad jaaye....
Boss bohot mushkil se likha hai yeh sab...baaki update to apne ko bhi maangta hai...
Pr ab uske waaste aapki Ass ko stake pr nhi rakh sakte naa... bohot qeemti hai woh..
Ha post karne k bad dekha tha...koi na jab time mile ..time se de dena ka.
Salty -Otaku BHAI ab stomach pain kaisa hai? I prey you will get a speedy recovery from the stomach pain! Take care!”
Is there any possibility of getting update TODAY?
Chlo Yah to confirm ho gaya Ki Raat 12:00 baje tak to De Doge
Bhai mai dua karta hun ..ab se update dene ke din koi bimari naa ho..
Hehehe.....time najdik hai
Koi suchana dena chahege wirter sahab????
Waiting
Lagta hai writer Sahab bhi aaj Soch kar Baithe Hain 10k k niche Dena hi nahin hai
Lage raho bhai....
Knock..knock
ME
Aapse kisi ne pucha... Yaa aap writer ho story ke...
Koi story likhi hai abhi tak... Aur reader ho toh kitne review diye h iss story par....
Yaa bass update ke liye comment pass Kane aate ho...
