Fantasy Ultimate Rich System

[Lord Obunaga]

Hello dosto mai last 2-3 saal se Xforum par story padh rha hu aur maine kai sari stories padhi hai aur mujhe woh sari stories acchi lagi hai jinme character development ho, jo proper story based ho. Mujhe woh bhi stories acchi lagti hai jinme beshumar incest ho ya kuch jinme adultery ho par wahi sari jinme main character ka dusre females ke sath relations ho.
Maine jitni bhi stories padhi hai woh sab bahot acchi thi ya hai but mujhe ab ek aisi story nahi mili jisme mai jo chize chahta tha ya jo chize mujhe excite karti hai woh ek hi story me mile.
Toh ab maine yeh decide kiya hai ki mai bhi ek story likhu jisme woh sab cheeze ho jo mujhe excite karti hai. Yeh story jo mai likhne jaa rha hu, ho sakta hai woh aapko familiar lage ho sakta hai waisi story ho bhi par maine jitni padhi hai unme mujhe aisi koi nhi mili. Ab dosto stories toh hazaro hai aur bhale hi mai regular stories padhta hu aur wahi jo mere interests se match kare toh unme toh mujhe ek bhi waisi nhi mili.
Mai yeh story start apne plot ke hisab se karunga aur is story ka ek baseline set hoga means isme kuch chize jo mujhe excite kare woh hongi hi but agar aapke koi suggestions ho toh unhe bhi mai refer zaroor karunga aur agar woh suggestions meri baseline se match karte hue toh unhe add kiya jaayega but agar nhi match kare toh unhe nahi kiya jaayega.
Kai sare writers already hai yha aur agr mujhse kuch galti ho jaye toh apna chota bhai samajh kar mujhe maaf kar dena, mai aap sabhi writers se influence hokar hi yeh story likhne jaa rha hu.
Mai aap sab ka dhanyawad karta hu ki aapne mujhe kai sari interesting stories se parichit karaya.

Toh chaliye story ka update jald hi dunga...

Apka dost
Lord Obunaga

 

[Lord Obunaga]

Yeh kahani me sare characters ka introduction kahani ke sath sath hota rhega.

Character pics aur gifs bhi aayenge but who sirf unke body structure ya particular position ya pose ko define karnege unke alawa unka kisi bhi character se koi relation nhi hoga.

Kuch pictures ko aap jante honge kuch nhi but unka koi relation nhi hoga aapko bs un pictures aur gifs ke pose aur figures pan dhyan lagakar unhe imagine karte hue relate kar ke padhni hai story aur enjoy karni hai.

Is Kahani ka main Hero hai

Veer Raval
Story start hoti hai Veer ke college se

Woh college me hostel me rehkar Management padh rha tha, college Mumbai me hai aur uska Parivar Ahmedabad me tha. Veer middle class family se belong karta hai.



Veer 1st year me hai aur ek ladki se pyaar karta hai aur dono relation me bhi hai.

Aaj veer subah taiyaar hokar ek bouquet kharid kar usse milne gaya.

Jab girls dorm ke niche gate par pohcha tab usne dekha ki uski GF kisi aur ladke ki baho me hai aur dono kiss kar rhe hai.

Veer yeh dekh kar aag babula ho gya aur usske pass jakar use khechte hue pucha

Veer : Yeh tum kya kar rhi ho Mitali

Jee ha uski GF ka naam Mitali hai

M : Tumhe isse kya mai kuch bhi karu, aur maine tumse kaha tha ki ya toh mujhe ek accha purse dilao ya bhul jao

V : Dekho Mitali aisamat karo maitumhare liye yeh sundar bouquet laya hu.

Mitali ne who bouquet usse lekar pass pade dustbin me daal diya aur jhunjhla kar kaha

M : Tum jaise low class admi se aur ummid bhi kya kar sakte hai, tum mujhe meri manpasand chees toh dila nhi sakte toh fir kyu ho mere sath.

Veer ko bohot dukh hua aur uska dil bhari ho gya aur usne socha ki maine jise itne saal pyar kiya who itna kaise badal gyi.

Jee ha veer aur Mitali ek dusre se school se pyaar karte hai who bhi 10th class se.

Veer 10th me bohot popular tha aur fir aaj aisa kya hua ki mitali usse chod rhi hai tohi ska jawab yeh hai ki jab veer 12th me tha tab uske pair me chot lag gyi thi aur who zyada movement nahi kar sakta tha aur uski life khana peena aur sona padhna bas aur post op therapy. Therapy lambi thi aur usme 6 mahine lag gye aur ab veer jo pehle lean physique thi dashing tha aaj mota ho gya hai aur chashma bhi aa gya hai usse.

 

[Achin_Saha18]

Yeh kahani me sare characters ka introduction kahani ke sath sath hota rhega.

Character pics aur gifs bhi aayenge but who sirf unke body structure ya particular position ya pose ko define karnege unke alawa unka kisi bhi character se koi relation nhi hoga.

Kuch pictures ko aap jante honge kuch nhi but unka koi relation nhi hoga aapko bs un pictures aur gifs ke pose aur figures pan dhyan lagakar unhe imagine karte hue relate kar ke padhni hai story aur enjoy karni hai.

Is Kahani ka main Hero hai

Veer Raval
Story start hoti hai Veer ke college se

Woh college me hostel me rehkar Management padh rha tha, college Mumbai me hai aur uska Parivar Ahmedabad me tha. Veer middle class family se belong karta hai.



Veer 1st year me hai aur ek ladki se pyaar karta hai aur dono relation me bhi hai.

Aaj veer subah taiyaar hokar ek bouquet kharid kar usse milne gaya.

Jab girls dorm ke niche gate par pohcha tab usne dekha ki uski GF kisi aur ladke ki baho me hai aur dono kiss kar rhe hai.

Veer yeh dekh kar aag babula ho gya aur usske pass jakar use khechte hue pucha

Veer : Yeh tum kya kar rhi ho Mitali

Jee ha uski GF ka naam Mitali hai

M : Tumhe isse kya mai kuch bhi karu, aur maine tumse kaha tha ki ya toh mujhe ek accha purse dilao ya bhul jao

V : Dekho Mitali aisamat karo maitumhare liye yeh sundar bouquet laya hu.

Mitali ne who bouquet usse lekar pass pade dustbin me daal diya aur jhunjhla kar kaha

M : Tum jaise low class admi se aur ummid bhi kya kar sakte hai, tum mujhe meri manpasand chees toh dila nhi sakte toh fir kyu ho mere sath.

Veer ko bohot dukh hua aur uska dil bhari ho gya aur usne socha ki maine jise itne saal pyar kiya who itna kaise badal gyi.

Jee ha veer aur Mitali ek dusre se school se pyaar karte hai who bhi 10th class se.

Veer 10th me bohot popular tha aur fir aaj aisa kya hua ki mitali usse chod rhi hai tohi ska jawab yeh hai ki jab veer 12th me tha tab uske pair me chot lag gyi thi aur who zyada movement nahi kar sakta tha aur uski life khana peena aur sona padhna bas aur post op therapy. Therapy lambi thi aur usme 6 mahine lag gye aur ab veer jo pehle lean physique thi dashing tha aaj mota ho gya hai aur chashma bhi aa gya hai usse.

Nice start
Keep going

 

[Haiwaan]

Yeh kahani me sare characters ka introduction kahani ke sath sath hota rhega.

Character pics aur gifs bhi aayenge but who sirf unke body structure ya particular position ya pose ko define karnege unke alawa unka kisi bhi character se koi relation nhi hoga.

Kuch pictures ko aap jante honge kuch nhi but unka koi relation nhi hoga aapko bs un pictures aur gifs ke pose aur figures pan dhyan lagakar unhe imagine karte hue relate kar ke padhni hai story aur enjoy karni hai.

Is Kahani ka main Hero hai

Veer Raval
Story start hoti hai Veer ke college se

Woh college me hostel me rehkar Management padh rha tha, college Mumbai me hai aur uska Parivar Ahmedabad me tha. Veer middle class family se belong karta hai.



Veer 1st year me hai aur ek ladki se pyaar karta hai aur dono relation me bhi hai.

Aaj veer subah taiyaar hokar ek bouquet kharid kar usse milne gaya.

Jab girls dorm ke niche gate par pohcha tab usne dekha ki uski GF kisi aur ladke ki baho me hai aur dono kiss kar rhe hai.

Veer yeh dekh kar aag babula ho gya aur usske pass jakar use khechte hue pucha

Veer : Yeh tum kya kar rhi ho Mitali

Jee ha uski GF ka naam Mitali hai

M : Tumhe isse kya mai kuch bhi karu, aur maine tumse kaha tha ki ya toh mujhe ek accha purse dilao ya bhul jao

V : Dekho Mitali aisamat karo maitumhare liye yeh sundar bouquet laya hu.

Mitali ne who bouquet usse lekar pass pade dustbin me daal diya aur jhunjhla kar kaha

M : Tum jaise low class admi se aur ummid bhi kya kar sakte hai, tum mujhe meri manpasand chees toh dila nhi sakte toh fir kyu ho mere sath.

Veer ko bohot dukh hua aur uska dil bhari ho gya aur usne socha ki maine jise itne saal pyar kiya who itna kaise badal gyi.

Jee ha veer aur Mitali ek dusre se school se pyaar karte hai who bhi 10th class se.

Veer 10th me bohot popular tha aur fir aaj aisa kya hua ki mitali usse chod rhi hai tohi ska jawab yeh hai ki jab veer 12th me tha tab uske pair me chot lag gyi thi aur who zyada movement nahi kar sakta tha aur uski life khana peena aur sona padhna bas aur post op therapy. Therapy lambi thi aur usme 6 mahine lag gye aur ab veer jo pehle lean physique thi dashing tha aaj mota ho gya hai aur chashma bhi aa gya hai usse.

Nice start bro

 

[bstyhw]

Aur thoda lamba update dete.. Ye to shuru hote hi khatam ho gaya

 

[Bad boy12]

Nice story bro and mera suggestion hai ki isme family drama bhi rakhna bro

 

[dc jutt]

Yeh kahani me sare characters ka introduction kahani ke sath sath hota rhega.

Character pics aur gifs bhi aayenge but who sirf unke body structure ya particular position ya pose ko define karnege unke alawa unka kisi bhi character se koi relation nhi hoga.

Kuch pictures ko aap jante honge kuch nhi but unka koi relation nhi hoga aapko bs un pictures aur gifs ke pose aur figures pan dhyan lagakar unhe imagine karte hue relate kar ke padhni hai story aur enjoy karni hai.

Is Kahani ka main Hero hai

Veer Raval
Story start hoti hai Veer ke college se

Woh college me hostel me rehkar Management padh rha tha, college Mumbai me hai aur uska Parivar Ahmedabad me tha. Veer middle class family se belong karta hai.



Veer 1st year me hai aur ek ladki se pyaar karta hai aur dono relation me bhi hai.

Aaj veer subah taiyaar hokar ek bouquet kharid kar usse milne gaya.

Jab girls dorm ke niche gate par pohcha tab usne dekha ki uski GF kisi aur ladke ki baho me hai aur dono kiss kar rhe hai.

Veer yeh dekh kar aag babula ho gya aur usske pass jakar use khechte hue pucha

Veer : Yeh tum kya kar rhi ho Mitali

Jee ha uski GF ka naam Mitali hai

M : Tumhe isse kya mai kuch bhi karu, aur maine tumse kaha tha ki ya toh mujhe ek accha purse dilao ya bhul jao

V : Dekho Mitali aisamat karo maitumhare liye yeh sundar bouquet laya hu.

Mitali ne who bouquet usse lekar pass pade dustbin me daal diya aur jhunjhla kar kaha

M : Tum jaise low class admi se aur ummid bhi kya kar sakte hai, tum mujhe meri manpasand chees toh dila nhi sakte toh fir kyu ho mere sath.

Veer ko bohot dukh hua aur uska dil bhari ho gya aur usne socha ki maine jise itne saal pyar kiya who itna kaise badal gyi.

Jee ha veer aur Mitali ek dusre se school se pyaar karte hai who bhi 10th class se.

Veer 10th me bohot popular tha aur fir aaj aisa kya hua ki mitali usse chod rhi hai tohi ska jawab yeh hai ki jab veer 12th me tha tab uske pair me chot lag gyi thi aur who zyada movement nahi kar sakta tha aur uski life khana peena aur sona padhna bas aur post op therapy. Therapy lambi thi aur usme 6 mahine lag gye aur ab veer jo pehle lean physique thi dashing tha aaj mota ho gya hai aur chashma bhi aa gya hai usse.

Nice start Bhai

 

[king1969]

Congratulations on your new story

 

[Savi Malhotra]

Nice start & fantastic update bro,
Keeo it up bro, .

 

[kingkhankar]

Congratulations