Romance >>> Too Young !! Too Old (Completed) <<<

[nain11ster]

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Update 88 (A & B) is posted on 537.. Must give your valuable feedback...

End Of The Chepter:-1 is posted on 542...

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[Naina]

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Your Story Will Start On 23 May 2021... Tabtak Ek Apne Dil Ki Chhoti Si Bhavna Jaroor Sajha Karte Jayen....

A Small Teaser
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Ek car unke pass aa'kar ruki. Car jaise hi ruki teeno hi 2 kadam pichhe huye. Ek dusre se najar milate, bilkul khamosh khade the.


Dur se street light ki dhimi raushni aa rahi thi. Uss jagah par halka andhrea tha aur bundabandi shuru thi. Khattt ki dhimi awaj aayi aur car ka darvaja khol kar ek ladki bahar aayi…. Car se jaise hi ek ladki ko utarte dekhe, 3 me se 2 ladkon ki aankhon me chamak saaf dekhi ja sakti thi....


Dono utsukta ke sath ek kadam aage aaye. Ek najar upar se niche uss ladki ko dekhe. Andheri raat me aati halki raushni me bhi uska chehra unhe kisi bulb ki tarah chamkta najar aa raha tha. Un dono ke chehre ki bhavna badli si najar aa rahi thi…..


"Aalambag road".. Ladki ne kuchh puchha aur pucchne ke baad dono ke ore khamoshi se dekhne lagi. Barshat ki iss kaali raat me wah ladki bilkul ghabrayi si nahi dikh rahi thi. Haan bus in dono ladkon ki khamoshi usse chidha rahi thi... Chidh'kar wo ek baar aur puchhi.… "Aalambag bus stand"..


Pichhe khada teesra ladka aage aaya.. hath ke ishare se... "Aage se left"


Ladki usse ek najar dekhi aur thanks kah'kar car ka darwaza jaise kholne lagi... "Suno itni raat ko kisi se pata puchhne se achha hai Google map dekh lo"…


Ladki car ka darwaza kholti hui ruki, pichhe palti... Jaise hi wo palti, jordar bijli kadki. Us ladka aur ladki ki najren ek pal ke liye uljhi aur...

Wo uski pahli jhalak aur wo ladka apne sine ke bayen hisse me hath rakh kar, achanak se badhi dhadkano ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Cahamkti bijli kab ki ek chhan ko chamak kar poorn andhera kar gayi lekin uss ladke ki aankhon me ab bhi chamak thi. Yun to wapas se andhera chha chuka tha, lekin uske palatne par jab bijli chamki aur uska chehra samne aaye... Lovely, cute, hot, teenager girl ki ultra HD wallpaper ladke ke dimag me download ho gayi, jo aankhon ke home screen par jaa kar save ho gayi thi.

Kuch toh aaj bhi hai Vyas aur Sia ke darmiyan...
Pyar na sahi...
Nafrat hi sahi....
Btw nain11ster saheb for new story....

 

[Krishkish27]

Good teaser

 

[Nevil singh]

Ish naye prem granth ki bahut bahut mubarkbaad dost

 

[Nevil singh]

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Your Story Will Start On 23 May 2021... Tabtak Ek Apne Dil Ki Chhoti Si Bhavna Jaroor Sajha Karte Jayen....

A Small Teaser
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Ek car unke pass aa'kar ruki. Car jaise hi ruki teeno hi 2 kadam pichhe huye. Ek dusre se najar milate, bilkul khamosh khade the.


Dur se street light ki dhimi raushni aa rahi thi. Uss jagah par halka andhrea tha aur bundabandi shuru thi. Khattt ki dhimi awaj aayi aur car ka darvaja khol kar ek ladki bahar aayi…. Car se jaise hi ek ladki ko utarte dekhe, 3 me se 2 ladkon ki aankhon me chamak saaf dekhi ja sakti thi....


Dono utsukta ke sath ek kadam aage aaye. Ek najar upar se niche uss ladki ko dekhe. Andheri raat me aati halki raushni me bhi uska chehra unhe kisi bulb ki tarah chamkta najar aa raha tha. Un dono ke chehre ki bhavna badli si najar aa rahi thi…..


"Aalambag road".. Ladki ne kuchh puchha aur pucchne ke baad dono ke ore khamoshi se dekhne lagi. Barshat ki iss kaali raat me wah ladki bilkul ghabrayi si nahi dikh rahi thi. Haan bus in dono ladkon ki khamoshi usse chidha rahi thi... Chidh'kar wo ek baar aur puchhi.… "Aalambag bus stand"..


Pichhe khada teesra ladka aage aaya.. hath ke ishare se... "Aage se left"


Ladki usse ek najar dekhi aur thanks kah'kar car ka darwaza jaise kholne lagi... "Suno itni raat ko kisi se pata puchhne se achha hai Google map dekh lo"…


Ladki car ka darwaza kholti hui ruki, pichhe palti... Jaise hi wo palti, jordar bijli kadki. Us ladka aur ladki ki najren ek pal ke liye uljhi aur...

Wo uski pahli jhalak aur wo ladka apne sine ke bayen hisse me hath rakh kar, achanak se badhi dhadkano ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Cahamkti bijli kab ki ek chhan ko chamak kar poorn andhera kar gayi lekin uss ladke ki aankhon me ab bhi chamak thi. Yun to wapas se andhera chha chuka tha, lekin uske palatne par jab bijli chamki aur uska chehra samne aaye... Lovely, cute, hot, teenager girl ki ultra HD wallpaper ladke ke dimag me download ho gayi, jo aankhon ke home screen par jaa kar save ho gayi thi.

Ek sunhre safer ki ruperekha katal kar gayi
Sou teer zamane ke ik teere najer tera,
Ab kya koi samjhega dil kishka nishaana hai

 

[Nevil singh]

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Rang dhal jaate hain Din badal jaate hain
Raatein so jati hain Raahein kho jati hain
Pyar khota nahi Pyar sota nahi
Pyar dhalta nahi Haan badalta nahi

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Hum hain is pal yahaan Jaane ho kal kahaan
Hum milein na milein Hum rahe na rahein
Rahegi sada yaha Pyaar ki ye daastaan
Sunenge sada jise Ye jameen aasmaan


Javed Akhtar
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Aafreen
Prem hi puja prem hi dharam prem hi majhab prem hi prem rahe jahan me

 

[Nevil singh]

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Ek aur kahani me sabhi mitron ka swagat hai.

Aap sab ka sath kafi lamba raha hai. Aap sab ka pyar bhi mujhe khub mila. Likhne ki jo ek aadat ki shurwat kabhi hui thi, fir wah thamne ka naam nahi liya.

Kisi kahani ke sath achhe to kisi kahani ke sath bure anubhavon ko samete ye krawan aage badhta raha. Ek baar aur ye karwaan badhane ja raha hun. Ummid karunga aap ka sath aur aap sab ka utsah bana rehe.

Kahani ke har patr aur ghatnayen sab man ki upaj hai. Isliye main kewal itna hi kahunga, dil se jude patr ko jiyen, aur jab screen band karne lage to uss patr aur ghatnaon ko wahin chhod den.

Ye ek saaf suthri samanya si romantic story hai, jise likhne me mujhe khud hi kafi samsya ho jati hai. Romance ke 100 word type karna mere liye kisi anya genera me 10000 word type karne jaisa lagta hai. Isliye der sawer ke liye agreem kshma chahunga.

Anth me itna hi. Aap ki smikshayen kisi khurak ki tarah hoti hai jo iss jagah se mujhe jode rakhti hai. Isliye dil ki pahli awaj jo nikle usse panno par utar kar jaroor post kar den, taki aap ke sath sath mera manoranjan bhi hote rahe.

Dhanywad​

Intjaar rahega bhai
Ish prem ki ganga me hum bhi dubki lagane ke liye panjikrit kar le
Corona kaal me kuchchh bhi ho sakta hai
Sarkaar sahib ke niyam kaanoon kahin sakht naa ho jaaye

 

[Nevil singh]

सुकून की बात मत कर ऐ गालिब,
बचपन वाला इतवार अब नहीं आता।
जीवन की भाग दौड मे क्यूँ वक्त के साथ रंगत खो जाती है ?

हँसती-खेलती जिन्दगी भी आम हो जाती है।
एक सवेरा था जब हँसकर उठते थे हम,
आज कई बार बिना मुस्कुराये ही शाम हो जाती है।

कितने दूर निकल गए रिश्तों को निभाते निभाते,
खुद को खो दिया हम ने अपनों को पाते पाते।
लोग केहते है हम मुस्कुराते बहुत है,
और हम थक गए दर्द छुपाते छुपाते।

खुश हूँ और सबको खुश रखता हूँ,
लापरवाह हूँ फिर भी सब की परवाह करता हूँ।
मालूम है कोई मोल नहीं है मेरा फिर भी
कुछ अनमोल लोगों से, रिश्ता रखता हूँ।

मुंशी प्रेमचंद​

Naino ki chaal hai,
makhmali haal hai
Neechi palkon se badle samaa

Naina sharamaye jo,
ya anake bar aaye jo
Tham ke ruk jaaye dono jahaan

Rab ki neemat hai teri nigaahein
Jisme basti hai uski duayein
Aise naino ki baaton
mein koi kyun na aaye

Niranjan Iyengar​

Gajab teri maaya hai bhai
Phir se baaba ne dhuni ramayi
Choumashe se pahle hi aashan lagaya
Sudh budh khone ko prem lutaya
Gajab teri maaya hai bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

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[Nevil singh]

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Na umr ki seema ho na janmo ka ho bandhan

 

[Nevil singh]

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