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[nain11ster]

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Update 88 (A & B) is posted on 537.. Must give your valuable feedback...

End Of The Chepter:-1 is posted on 542...

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[aalu]

Pata nahi kyun par ye kirdaar Sia mujhe pasand nahi isliye nain11ster saheb aap saachi ko as a heroine le lijiye

are madam kajal ko bula lo na... vyash.... som.. aasif.. riyaz... nirbhay... sethhi... aur siya.... sabka dhyan rakh legi.. bina bhed bhaw ke...

 

[nain11ster]

Behtareen shuruaat
to yeh teeno ladke medical students hai... Lagta hai Neet mein margin se reh gaye haI... Seat confirm karwane aaye hai apni Noor k paas... Lagta agent hai yeh private medical colleges ka... 1 crore rs dene pad rahe hai ek jane k... Phir to lagta teeno hi padhayi mein badhiya nhi hai... par aap kahi Inka admission lucknow k Era mein to nhi karwa rahe...
Choro apno ko kyaaa...
par hai teeno hi harami... Bass shastri thoda kam lagaa...
Bc noor ki gaand marli teeno ne raat ko halak pe chaku tika diya aur subh ussi ki beti ko taad rahe the... Phir upar se ussi se uski beti ka haath bhi mang rahe the...
To uss car wali ladki ka naam siya hai... Vilayat se aayi hai aur kafi amirr hai... Nirbhay chacha hai uska...
Shastri aur siya lagta hai yhi mukhya patra hai...
Baki update bilkul badhiya tha ek no....
bss aapne yeh neet wali dukhti ragg cher di...
brilliant opening
keep writing ...
keep posting...
stay safe...
stay fit....

Nahi student achhe hain... Pvt college fee b to diya hai 80 lakh.. baharhaal dukhti rag to hai par kya hi mar sakte hain ... Kabhi kuchh to badlav hoga aisi ummid laga sakte hain aur badlav ki kosis kar rahe logon ki madad kar sakte hain..

Khair thanks lot for your so cuteee words... Charecters ke gun dhire dhire samne aate rehenge aur issi ke sath kahani bhi aage badhti rahegi... Bus sath nibhate rahen ...

Thanks for your beatiful words

 

[nain11ster]

Amazing update.... Both of em

Thankoo soo much no body bro

 

[nain11ster]

Ghanghore kaali raat ke iss prahar me teen dost sadak ke kinare, kataar lagaye halka ho rahe the...... aah param aanand....

Teeno paint ki zip band kar ke jaise hi 2 kadam sadak ke ore badhe. Ek car unke pass aa'kar ruki. Car jaise hi ruki teeno hi 2 kadam pichhe huye. Ek dusre se najar milate, bilkul khamosh khade the.... maine bola tha na road pe mat mut... dekha aa gayee na... aajkal kee laundiya bari fast hain...

Barshat ki iss kaali raat me wah ladki bilkul ghabrayi si nahi dikh rahi thi.... launda uthane waali lagti hain jaldi se cheeenk de bhaag jayegi...

"Shastri beta tu to gaya. Waise sach kahun kamal ki ladki thi. Poore lucknow ke Nawabon ke ghar me dundh le fir bhi aisa kohinoor Hira nahi milegi. Main to soch liya hun, yahi tum dono ki bhabhi hogi"… Pahle aage aaye 2 me se pahla dilfek ladke ne bola.... lo yeh log alag hi competition shuru kar diye aur idhar 11 ster fan alag se meri maal ka halla machaye hue hain.... laundiya dekhi nahin kee shuru ho gaye larne kuchh class hain kee nahin...

Hall ka najara dekh kar Noor ke bacche kuchh jawabi pratikriya dete uss se pahle hi Asif aur Riaz samne se desi katta tan diya…. ai sabbash mirzapur part-3 kee kahani idhar se hi shuru hogi.... noor miyan andolan andolan kar rahe the... bhrastachar mitao... lekin idhar bhrastachari ko hi mitao shuru ho gaya hain...


Vyas:- Sun lo Noor… iss paise ke bare me hum char logon ko pata hai. Kisi panchve tak khabar pahunchi to jaise iss paise ke bare me 4 logon ko pata hai, thik waise hi tumhare gayab hone ki khabar sirf 3 logon ko pata hogi.. Chal ab jaldi kaam kar..... yeh sasure vidyarthi hee hain na... katta,, chaku le ke ghum rahe hain... yaahe aage jaa ke desh ke izzatdar neta banenge...

khali fokat mein riaz kee izzat utar dee... bechara chakshu chodan hi toh kar raha tha.... ab kya kare tharkee najro ka... fisal jaati hain waise bhi barish ka mausam hain...


Vyas:- Humare ladke ko ladki kabool hai. Tumhe ladka pasand ho to bolo.. "Bhag Bsdk"… Noor ke muh se pahli pratikriya nikli... bhai lagta hain launde ka suhaagrat idhar hi manwa ke bhejoge....

nirbhay chicha ko lakarbhagga lag gaya jab sia aunty ne bhaiya na bola... pehla launda dekha jo larki ne bhai na bola toh udaas hain.... sala idhar toh shakal dekhte hain hi bhiya bol deti hain kamini....

Hahahaha.... Aayega aayega mirjapur wala chicha bhi kahani me aayega... Baharhaal abhi to charecter intro chal raha hai... Dekhiye kaun kirdar kis rang ka hai taki aage ke kaarname.samjhne me aasan hoga...

I must appreciate... Kafi funny comment hai... Bole to bilkul mind blasting

 

[nain11ster]

romanchak starting ...3 dost raste se jaa rahe the aur mausam ka aisa varnan kiya ki kuch bada honewal hai aisa lag raha tha .. teeno kuch kaam se jaa rahe the tabhi ek car aati hai aur usme se ek ladki utarti hai jo pata puchhti hai ,,,ladko ko dekhkar bhi jo dari nahi usme kuch to baat hogi hi ..

vyas ke dost thode tharki type hai par teeno me khas dosti hai ..

noor ke ghar jana aur usko itne paise dena sirf medical seat ke liye .. gun aur chaku saath rakhna teeno ka par unke paas gaadi nahi hai ye kamal ki baat hai ..
itne paise laaye kaha se wo log ..

noor ke ghar jakar usse deal ki aur subah uske hi ladki ko taadne lage aur rishte ke liye baat bhi ki ..

aur wo car wali ladki briten se aayi hai jiska naam sia hai aur wo yaha nirbhay ke saath rehnewali hai ..

ab sia ka rishta kya hai nirbhay yaa som ke saath abhi pata nahi chal paaya .. aur nirbhay aur som ka kya rishta hai ..

aur ye sia to jaldi jagti hai puja bhi karti hai jo nirbhay ne socha bhi nahi hoga ... par ye sia ka khana itna ajeeb kyu hai ..

som ek fighter hai aisa lagta hai jo paiso ke liye fight karta hai ,,usko haarna yaa jeetne se koi matlab nahi ..

sethi apne bete ke liye ye fight organise kar raha hai par kya royal sethi fight karega som se ...

aur ye bhi pata nahi chala ki som ko kitne paise dega sethi ,,som 25 lakh maang raha tha par sethi ne mana kar diya tha ..

Aakalan sahi hai lekin bahut kuchh thoda jaldi ho gaya hai... Sabhi sawalon ke jawab updates se milte rahenge aur sari baten pata chalti rahegi... Baharhaal abhi to kahani ko chadhne dijiye... Fir sawal jawab bhi dekh lenge... Filhaal main update deta hun aur aap apne sawalon me ijafa Karen ... Sara jawab hum ek sath de. Denge

Thanks for your beautiful words

 

[nain11ster]

1) teen middle class ghar ke teen ladke jo ki khasam khas dost bane cricket khel ke jariye... ab ye teeno medical seats ke liye kisi noor mirza ko paisa deta hai taaki unhe bhi seats mil jaye.. Noor mirza koun hai?
2) do twists hai yahan pe... ek) ye log hai to middle class wale jo ab mbbs study continue karne wale hai, lekin lage ki swabhav se gunde bhi hai...
Do) inme se ek ne yaani Vyas ne sach mein dil de baitha us mendak jaisi aankhon wali ko, jiska naam Sia hai...
3) yahi se ek link mile dusre kirdaaro ki....
Sia, som, nirbhay, sethi etc

Sia bahar desh se bharat aayi hai... kis liye ye wohi jaane, maybe apne aashiq som se milne....
4) ab kahani ke dusre pehlu bhi samne aate jaa rahe hai naye kirdaaro ke sath.. ek to Sia ab yaha par pehle pahal Nirbhay naam ke shaksh ke ghar ruki, Nirbhay wo jiski dusmani som se hai phir bhi Sia ko apne ghar pe rehne diya.. ajib hai..
5) ajib to Sia bhi hai... waise hogi kyun nahi.. first of all uski aankhein jo mendak jaisi hai..
Khair.... Mujhe kya...
So ab kisi kaaran vash ab Sia cottage pe rehne wali hai...
6) ab entry liya story pe ek aur lead character som... baba ji jaisa look... jo apni mann marzi se jeeta, apne mann mutabik aata jaata gayab rahta, ya phir gayab bhi ho jata tha... yun ki sethi, Sograppam aur som ki baaton se lage ki som ek achha fighter hai.. par aaj haarne ke liye paiso ki bargaining ho rahi hai..
So finally shayad royal sethi som se fight karne wala hai..

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Kayi kirdaaro ke bich link hai to kayi kirdaar ek dusre se anjaan....
Sia kyun nirbhay ke ghar? Nirbhay kyun madad kar raha hai ushe?
wo teeno yani ki Vyas, Asif aur riaz... ye teeno itne paise laye kaha se?
Baba ji som ka kya chakkar hai mendak jaisi aankhon wali Sia se? kyunki Sia ab tak desh se bahar rah rahi thi to pehchaan kaise huyi ya Mulaaqaat ya pyar?

Khair....I think kahani romantic na hoke thriller zyada hai...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Noor mirja broker hi hoga na... aage nahi padh sakta ... Itne swalon ko dhyan me rakh kar to maine update bhi na likhe the... Aur na hi itne rishtedari nibhakar side charecter ko dala tha...

Khair aap link bhida dijiye dekhte hain aage bhi parinaam ... Filhaal ye charecter intro update tha isliye jyada gahrai me na ghuse... Smile please

Haan haan pata hai... ju pure sweet romantic, pure sweet romantic Story bolte bolte waha thrill fantasy suspense sab add kar dete hai... baad mein romance ke naam par ek do dialogue hi reh jaate hai

Let's see then..

wohi to..

. ye kirdaar romantic story ke kirdaar nahi balki kisi psychological thriller suspense mystery story ke kirdaar lage.. upor se wo som Nashedi, ganjeri bhi hai..

Bina romanch ke romance kaisa... Har romance apne aap me thrill hai madam .. baki dekhte hain...

kariye apni mann marzi

Yes I wlll..

Par Sia ki photo dekh lage ki uski aankhein mendak jaisi hai

Insano ko dekhti to na insano ka compraision samjh me aata... Aisi bhi kya dilchaspi paida ho gayi thi medhak se jo uske aankhon ko itna ghur dali ki ab insano ki aankh se tulna karne lagi

Pata nahi kyun par ye kirdaar Sia mujhe pasand nahi isliye nain11ster saheb aap saachi ko as a heroine le lijiye

Ji maine bade dhyan se 12 baar repeat sun li aapki baat let's see kya kar sakta hun main

 

[nain11ster]

Hero Vyas: Atarangi
Dost: Atarangi
Heroine: Bahut Atarangi
Heroine ka chacha: Bahut hi jyada Atarangi.
Koi bhi kiradar Sahi saaf seedha nahi hai.
Gajab maza aayega.

Hahaha ... Idhar goli nahi dene ka... Aur ek aur atrangi mohabbat ki roop Rekha taiyar hai...

 

[nain11ster]

AS EXPECTED
SHAANDAAR SHURUWAT SIR BUT JAISA NAINA JI NE KAHA YE ROMANCE STORY KAM AUR THRILLER JYADA LAG RAHA HAI
BAKI AAP BEHTAR SAMAJHTE HAI APNI STORY KO AUR VAISE BHI ABHI TO SHURUWAT HI HAI.

Thankoo sooo much queen Divya ji... Let's see what's in the feature... But it is a romantic tale.. abhi iss se jyada nahi kah sakta... Fhaal to 2 update hi huye hain... Dhire dhire kahani aage badhne den...

And thanks for your beatiful words

 

[nain11ster]

Suhane safer ki shuruwaat hi katil update ke sath laajwaab hai bhai
Shastri sahib toh pahli nazer me hi ghayal ho gaye sio ki kajrari aankho se
Ek chhut ka rog humare sabhye samaj ka donetion jish per rachiyta ne dhyaan dilaya deemak ki tarah desh ke telent ko khaa raha hai
Ab pata nahi kab Raja Ram Mohan Rai Sahib dobara avtaar le aur ish Partha ka samul nash ho
Sia ki entry toh Nirbhay ko bhi bheeru bana gai

Thankoo sooo much Nevil bhai... Som aur Vyas filhaal abhi pahli najar ka hi jadoo hai dekhiye kya hota hai... Baharhaal Haan kuchh to khatakta hai ye bharstachar ... Lekin koi nahi .. ek sakaratmak badlav ko hum sab bhi dkehenge koi kuch bhi shaswat nahi hai...

Thanks for your beautiful words Nevil bhai

Bahad umda lekhni se ek naayaab update gajab dhaa gai
Sia ne toh kamaal dikha diya apni sanatan dharm sanshkriti ki jhalak ka najara Nirbhay ko dikha kar
Som Som Som
Katal kar gaya bhai pahli hi jhalak me screen hi faad di
Sethi toh bechara jalwe se hi ghayal ho kar fighter hi badal diyo ish dummy fight me apne bete royal Sethi ke liye
Tohre Taal mile nadi ke jal me
Nadi mile Sagar me
Sager mile koun badariya koi jaane na
Som bhai chha gaye
Kyaa gajab ka chilam shot sograppam aur Sethi dono hi machal gaye ish lencer ke jalwe se

Hahahaha... Thankoo sooo much Nevil bhai.. ab kya kare bahut se bollywoodiyon aur kahinikar ke bahut kuchh sanskaar dijhaye hi nahi kabhi... Kurityan aur burai to har jagah me hai... Khair bahut jyada nahi... Dusron ke sabhyata ko dil se maana hai aur apne culture ko sabhi chhodte nahi

Baki abhi to kahani shuru ho rahi hai... Dhire dhire rang Jamna shuru ho jayega

 

[Naina]

Bina romanch ke romance kaisa... Har romance apne aap me thrill hai madam .. baki dekhte hain...

Insano ko dekhti to na insano ka compraision samjh me aata... Aisi bhi kya dilchaspi paida ho gayi thi medhak se jo uske aankhon ko itna ghur dali ki ab insano ki aankh se tulna karne lagi

Sia