Romance Three Girls of My Life

[harshit1890]

Yug Purush yehi karo tum bas bata do sab raaz ladkiyon ke story me likh likh ke koi haq nahi tumko this is fucking wrong

But It was sweet

likh bhi lo ab

Jo sidhe sidhe jawab de de vo gyani bhai nahi

 

[harshit1890]

बहुत ही शानदार कहानी है bhau..

8th सेमिस्टर की तरह इसमें भी कहीं अथर्व एक अलग डायमेंशन में तो नहीं जायेगा ना. जैसे अरमान को हुआ था, schizophrenia, dual mentality disorder or etc etc.. अभी तक कि कहानी तो एकदम फाडू..

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pawan bhai kaise ho

 

[Sasha!]

Jo sidhe sidhe jawab de de vo gyani bhai nahi

Ye sab Atmakam ka nateeja hai...

 

[harshit1890]

Ye sab Atmakam ka nateeja hai...

Thats signature mark

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 81

Gyani bhai.. that is your signature mark style writing... jab jab ... hum log soche ki kahani ka rukh ye hai to isi par kuch hoga lekin aap kahin se atte ho aur sabhi ke minds fucks kar dete ho kyun ki jo ana hota hai jo likhna hota hai vo likhte nahi... aur ek bomb fod dete ho.. upto the mark style hai bhai apka aur apne use bakhubi yahan banaye rakha. Ek hi jhatke mein apne sala side villian ko hero types bana diya.. jaffar.. ko jis andaz mein badla apne.. vo ek dum satik tha.... matlab kyun ki Atharva ka vo angrezi ka dialog jo usne jate jate diya uska koi jawab hi nahi tha aur blkl uska asar dimag par padta hai logon ke aur jaffar ko hit kar hi gaya vo.... Behtarin bhai.. sahi mein avval darje ki kahani likh rahe ho aap.. kisi ko umeed nahi thi ki us pal us jagah wahan aap jaffar ko lekar aoge... chalo laye to laye.. lekin uske baad kya gand fadd batein apne boli... jo ki mein pehle se hi kaha tha apko.. ki ye kaam jafar ka kiya hua nah ihai..... bolela tha apun Lekin bhai jo trademark tha vo the jafar ke dialog aur adhuri batein.. maa kasam.. do baar pada ki sala kya pata likha ho apne par mein nahi samajh paya lekin apne likha hi nahi.. Atmakami mein to bahut jagah aisa hua tha ki sala kai baar pada mene ki nahi aisa nahi hua hoga par sala likha hua kabhi badal sakta hai bhala.... Yahan bhi apne wahich kiya.. sanjna pyar karti hai ye to ab malum hua ki marne wali hai? shayad atharva ke pyar mein pagal ho gayi hai.. isliye pareshan hai bechari..

Par bhai kya khola hai idhar apne.. yani breakup wala scene ka raaz kholela apne.. sanjana hamesha se pyar karti aur uske jalane ke liye jafar pataya.. maa kasam.. muh par bol deti bhai ki pyar karti hun salle pagal admi.. itni kahani hi nahi hoti.. alternate world mein dono ki love story chal rahi hoti but khaer aisa koi aur likhta but u is u.. and u is gyani bhai.. to aap aisa kaise likh sakte ho.. apme vo kala nahi hai.. aur acha hai nahi bhi hai.. because this is just outstanding... aap har baar ki tarah is baar bhi bahut bade wala kaattoge aur main to soch kar hi baitha hun ... sala atmakami ka jakhm bhara nahi hai....vo kahani mein zindagi meinnahi bhul sakta... zindagi mein... Aur ye kahani bhi apni alag chaap chhodne wali hai mujhe bilkul yakeen hai... kyun ki jis tarah aap har mod par ek naya twist laa rhae ho use samjhte hue aisa lag raha hai kuch bahut bade wala planing kar rakha hai apne...

Gyani bhai.. one of the finest update... amazing bhai... amazing...

 

[Naina]

Gyani bhai silent killer hai.. vo pyar mohabbat aur laawda lasun karte hue sabko khapa dete hai.. par badnam sirf mein hi hota hun

Mujhe koi fark na pare koi kirdaar mar gaya hai ya jee raha hai... ushe bas Brutality chahiye story pe ... ki kaise Kirdaar ek dusre ka gala kaatke ek dusre ka kissa hi khatam kiye jaa raha hai story se
yahin na ho to koi bhi story thread pe jaake puch sakte hai

 

[DeepHeart💘]

Sgp bhai huge of urs mai kaafi time se read ker rha ho aapki stories bs bhai aapki shivan or atmakami ka end dil dukha gya but phir bhi i love u brother

 

[pawankamdev123]

pawan bhai kaise ho

Ek number bhai... aap kaise ho..??
abhi thoda thoda time mil raha hai kahani padhne ke aapki bhi padhni baaki hai.. uspar bhi reply karunga..

 

[mashish]

waiting for next

 

[Sasha!]

Yug Purush ghum na mita kya abhi bhi daru pi pi ke

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