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Dev the lover

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Update 31: Nayi Pehchaan, Naya Savera


Viper ne phone rakhte hi Priya aur Ananya ki taraf dekha, uski aankhon mein gehri zimmedari aur ek ankahi fikr thi. "Kal subah hum Dev ko hospital le jayenge. Plastic surgery ke liye sab arrangement ho chuka hai. Dr. Agarwal, jo is field mein best hain, woh surgery karenge. Tum dono ready rehna, aur kisi ko kuch bhi pata nahi chalna chahiye."

Ananya ki awaaz mein darr aur fikr ka ek anokha mishran tha, "Viper bhai, surgery ke baad Dev ka haal kaisa rahega? Kya woh pehle jaisa kabhi ho payega? Kya use koi complication toh nahi hogi?"

Viper ne Ananya ke sar pe haath rakhte hue muskurate hue kaha, "Ananya, main samajh sakta hun tumhari chinta. Surgery ke baad Dev ka chehra bilkul badal jayega. Uski pehchaan puri tarah badal jayegi. Kuch din tak discomfort hoga, par Dr. Agarwal ne humein assure kiya hai ki koi serious complication nahi hogi. Sabse zaroori baat ye hai ki uska health improve ho, woh physically aur mentally strong bane, aur woh khud ko surakshit mehsoos kare." Usne ek pal ke liye ruka, uski aankhon mein dur ki soch thi. "Yeh sirf chehre ki baat nahi hai, Ananya. Yeh uski puri zindagi ke naye adhyay ki shuruat hai. Use apne past se nikal kar ek normal zindagi jeene ka mauka milna chahiye."

Priya ne apne jazbaat ko sambhalte hue, apni aankhon mein chamak liye kaha, "Hum sab uske saath hain. Hum Dev ko nayi zindagi denge, ek aisi zindagi jahan use darr kar jeena na pade." Uske shabdon mein ek pakka irada aur atoot vishwas tha, jaise woh Dev ke liye duniya se ladne ko taiyar ho.

Dheere dheere raat dhali aur subah ho gayi

Abb dev ko kaafi had tak hosh aa gaya tha sayad raat me uski body ne healing jada tezz ki hogi

Suraj ugte hi teeno hospital pahunch gaye. Private ward mein, Dev bed par leta tha, uska chehra ghabrahat se bhara tha. Uski nazar kabhi Viper par, kabhi Priya aur Ananya par ghoom rahi thi, jaise woh unse koi jawab talash raha ho. Priya aur Ananya ne uske haath thaame, use shaant karne ki koshish ki. Priya ne dheere se uske baalon mein ungliyan feri, aur Ananya ne uska haath halka sa dabaya, jaise keh rahi ho, "Hum yahan hain." Tabhi Dr. Agarwal andar aaye. Unhone Dev ko surgery ke bare mein samjhaya aur use aashwast kiya ki sab theek hoga. Unki aankhon mein peshevarana shanti thi, jisne Dev ko kuch had tak sukoon diya.

Kuch der baad, Dev ko operation theatre le jaya gaya. Priya aur Ananya intazaar karte hue bechen the. Har guzarta pal unke liye sadiyon jaisa lag raha tha.

Unhone ek doosre ki taraf dekha, bina kuch kahe unki aankhon mein ek doosre ke liye himmat thi. Viper unke paas aaya aur unhe tasalli dene ki koshish ki. Usi waqt, uske phone ki ghanti baji...
"Chief, sab kuch plan ke mutabiq ho raha hai. Dev abhi operation theatre mein hai." Viper ne dheere se kaha. Uski aankhon mein thodi si tanav thi, par usne use chehre par aane nahi diya.

"Good. Koi khatra mol lena nahi hai, Viper. Uski safety hamari sabse badi priority hai. Surgery ke baad use secure rakhana jab tak woh kudh ko secure naa karne layak rahe. Hum koi bhi risk nahi le sakte, uski nayi zindagi ki shuruat bilkul surakshit honi chahiye." Chief ki awaaz sakht thi, usmein koi bhavna nahi thi, sirf kaam ki chinta

Samajh gaya, Chief." Viper ne jawab diya aur phone kaat diya. Woh Priya aur
Ananya ki taraf palta. "Sab theek hoga.

Usne unhe aashwast kiya, par andar hi andar woh bhi pareshan tha. Chief ki awaaz mein chhipi gussa aur agyanta uske dimaag mein ghoom rahi thi. Use pata tha Dev ki zindagi ab aur bhi mushkil hone wali thi, ek nayi pehchaan ke saath naye khatre bhi aane wale the.

Ghanto baad, surgery khatam hui. Dr. Agarwal bahar aaye. "Surgery successful rahi," unhone kaha. Unke chehre par thakaan ke bawajood santushti thi. "Dev abhi ICU mein hai. Kuch din observation mein rakhna hoga. Humne apni taraf se puri koshish ki hai, ab baki uski recovery par nirbhar karta hai."

Jab Dev ICU mein shift ho chuka tha, Viper ne Priya ko ek folder diya. "Yeh Dev ki nayi identity hai - Ved. School ke liye saare documents ismein hain. Use tumhara cousin brother bataya gaya hai. Koi shak nahi karega. Humne har chhoti se chhoti baat ka khayal rakha hai taaki uski nayi pehchaan par koi ungli na utha sake." Usne folder dete hue Priya ki aankhon mein dekha, uski aankhon mein ek gupt sandesh tha – zimmedari aur gopniyata ka.

Priya ne documents dekhe. Uska dil ek pal ke liye thama. "Ved..." woh dheere se boli. "Lekin hum usse Dev hi bulaenge. Ved sirf bahar walon ke liye hoga.”


Ananya ne sehmat hote hue sir hilaya. "Haan, woh hamare liye hamesha Dev hi rahega.” Usne Priya ka haath thama, dono ki aakhein mili aur unmein ek samajh thi – Dev unke liye kabhi nahi badlega.

Raat gehraati ja rahi thi. Priya aur Ananya Dev ke bedside baithe the, uska bandaged chehra dekh rahe the.

Donon chup thi, magar unki aankhon mein ek nayi umeed jagmaga rahi thi. Hospital ki shanti mein unke dil ki dhadkano ki awaaz saaf sunai de rahi thi.
"Dev, hum tumhare saath hain," Ananya ne fusa-fusaate hue kaha, jaise woh use sun sakta ho. Uske shabdon mein ek payaar karne waali jaisa dulaar aur chahat thi.

Ananaya ne uska haath thaam liya. "Sab theek ho jayega," uski awaaz bharraayi hui thi, "Tum bilkul theek ho jaoge.” Uski aankhon se aansu beh nikle – dard ke nahi, balki ek nayi shuruat ki umeed ke. Un aansuon mein Dev ke behtar bhavishya ki prarthana thi, ek aisi prarthana jo uski nayi zindagi ko roshan kar sake. Unhe pata tha Dev ki nayi zindagi aasan nahi hogi, par unka pyar aur saath uske liye sabse badi taqat banega.

Aakhir yeh sab hona bhi thaa—Code X pehli baar jaaga thaa. Jisko sambhal pana iss duniya mein kisi ke bas ki baat nahi thi. Yeh alag baat hai ki uska creator ab iss duniya mein nahi rehta. Yeh raaz kisi ko nahi pata. Sabko lagta hai ki yeh kisi scientific khoj ka hissa hai, par kya sach mein yeh baat itni saral hai? Yeh toh naa koi dev jaanta, naa hi woh jo uske saath hai—kal tak jo uski behan thi, uski jaan se pyaari, aur aaj uski lover ban chuki hai.
 
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RAAZ

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Welcome back eknnaye josh and Dev ki nayi Pehchaan ke sath. Ab yah Dev se VED ka safar kaisay hota hai yah dekhne layak hoga.
 

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Update 32

“Us Awaaz Ke Liye...”

Subah ki halki roshni khidki se chhankar room ke andar aa rahi thi.
Room mein ek ajeeb si shaanti thi... sirf monitor ki beep aur halki si thandi hawa ki awaaz.

Ananya aur Priya, dono Dev ke paas baithe-baithe kab so gayi, pata hi nahi chala.

Par jaise hi ek halki si hawa ka jhonka aaya, Ananya ki aankh khuli. Usne dheere se aankh malte hue dekha... Dev...?

Dev khidki ke samne khada tha. Seedha. Shaant. Uski aankhen bahar kahi door dekh rahi thi — jaise koi purani yaad wapas aa rahi ho.

Ananya turant uthti hai, hila ke Priya ko jagati hai —
"Priya... Priya uth... Dev!"

Dono jaldi se Dev ke paas jaate hain.

Ananya (pareshan hokar):
"Dev jaan... tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Tumhara operation hua hai, tumhe rest karna chahiye!"

Dev dheere se mudta hai... uski aankhon mein thakan bhi thi, par ek ajeeb sa sukoon bhi.
Woh bina kuch bole Ananya ke paas aata hai...
Aur uska sir apne seene se laga leta hai.

Dev (softly):
"Main bilkul theek hoon... chinta mat karo Anu..."

Ananya ki saansein uske seene ki dhadkano se takra rahi thi.
Usse aisa lag raha tha jaise yeh awaaz, yeh vibration...
Uski har ek toot chuki feeling ko jod rahi ho.
Jaise isi awaaz ke liye wo jeeti rahi ho itne dino se.

Priya thoda muskura ke peeche hat jaati hai.
Wo softly haste hue room ke bahar nikal jaati hai — aur Viper ko phone milane lagti hai.

Room mein sirf Dev aur Ananya reh jaate hain.

Dev (khidki ki taraf dekhte hue):
"Anu... mujhe ghar jaana hai. Yahan theek nahi lag raha..."

Ananya (thoda ghabra kar):
"Abhi kaise? Tumhari body abhi bhi weak hai Dev... Doctor ne bhi bola hai rest lena hai."

Dev uski aankhon mein dekhta hai.

Dev:
"Mujhe lagta hai main heal ho gaya hoon... Shayad meri powers ki wajah se. Main khud ko normal mehsoos kar raha hoon Anu. Tum please mujhe le chalo..."

Ananya (slowly):
"Theek hai... par Priya ke ghar?"

Dev thoda sochta hai... fir dheere se bolta hai:

Dev:
"Nahi... Priya ke ghar ke paas koi aur jagah dekhte hain. Main Viper se baat karta hoon."

Fir thoda ruk ke, uske expression change ho jaate hain. Serious, but soft.

Dev:
"Aur haan... ab se mujhe Ved hi bulana. Jahaan bhi jaaoge, jis bhi naam se yaad karoge... wo Ved hoga."

Ananya uski aankhon mein dekhti hai.
Ek second ke liye kuch bol nahi paati.
Phir bas halka sa sir hila deti hai.

Bahaar se roshni poori tarah se room mein aa chuki thi...

Aur Dev bus abb ek naam ban ke reh gaya thaa joh aaj ke din ke saath dhal gaya — ab sirf ek patient nahi, balki ek nayi identity ke saath — Ved, us roshni mein khada tha.

Thodi der baad, room ke darwaaze par halki si knock hui.

Knock Knock.

Ananya ne darwaaza dekha — Priya aur Viper dono saamne khade the, muskuraate hue.

Viper (andar aate hi):
"Arey Dev..."

Ved (haaste hue, beech mein tokta hai):
"Ved."

Viper (hans kar):
"Haan haan... Ved baba! Aur badi jaldi theek ho gaye ho... tujhe aise dekh kar badi khushi hui bhai!"

Ved (narmi se):
"Thanks bhai... mere liye itna sab karne ke liye."

Viper (muskurakar):
"Thank mujhe mat bol, Priya ko bol — usne toh literally jaan laga di teri care mein."

Priya (beech mein haste hue tokti hai):
"Kya yaar, aise kya keh rahe ho! Main koi parayi hoon kya? Mera cousin brother hai yeh, itna toh banta hi hai!"

Ved (halka hans ke):
"Haan woh toh main hoon hi... Viper, ek kaam karega bhai?"

Viper:
"Bolo, boss."

Ved:
"Priya ke ghar ke aas paas koi ghar dekh mile toh bata... main wahan rahunga. Aur Priya ke building mein nahi — separate hona chahiye. Aur ek kaam aur... anu ko aise dikhana ki wo ek rent par waha rehati hai, main wahan ka owner hoon."

Priya (thoda surprise hokar):
"Par mere ghar mein kya dikkat hai?"

Ved:
"Koi dikkat nahi behna, bas ek cover create karna padega. Anu aur mere liye thoda alag identity rakhna zaroori hai. Tumhare ghar ke saamne hi reh lunga — aur jo khilaogi, wahi kha lunga! Deal?"

Priya (khushi se hans ke):
"Ok done! Final!"

Viper (smirking):
"Okay boss, yeh kaam fix samjho."

Ved (eyebrows uthakar):
"Boss?"

Viper (laugh ke):
"Aur kya! Jis team ka main hissa hoon... uska leader ab tu hai!"

Ved (shoulders shrug karke):
"Government ka kaam wahi jaane ... apne ko sirf apna kaam karna hai. Waise ghar ke paise denge ya nahi woh log?"

Viper (thoda serious tone mein):
"Chahe tu maange ya na maange... ab toh woh log tujhe sab dene ko tayyar hain. Bas tu unka kaam karta rahe."

Ved (thoda soch mein padkar, aankhon mein thoda dard):
"Haan... bina kuch bole... karna hi padega."

Ananya (thoda naraz tone mein):
"Kya Viper bhai! Aate hi kaam ki baatein? Thoda toh rest lene do usse!"

Viper (haath jod kar drama mein):
"Sorry didi ji! Galti ho gayi! Ab se nahi hoga, kasam Ved ki!"

Sab hans padte hain. Thodi der baad Viper doctor se formalities clear karta hai, aur Ved ko officially discharge mil jaata hai.

Kuch ghanton baad — ek black SUV gate par rukti hai. Gadi se Priya, Ananya aur Ved utarte hain. Ved thoda weak tha, lekin chal raha tha — Viper aur Ananya ka sahara leke.

Ananya ne villa ka gate khola.
Ek sundar sa teen-manjila ghar — ekdum clean, thoda old style feel, par charm intact.

Ved amazement se ghar ko dekhta hai.

Ved:
"Yaar... itni jaldi kaise mil gaya yeh ghar?"

Priya (smartly smile karte hue):
"Arey yeh ghar toh khaali hi pada tha. Maine hi Viper bhai ko number diya. Owner ka dusra ghar city ke doosre kone mein hai, aur woh yeh bechna hi chahta tha. Lucky mil gaya!"

Ved ghar ke andar jaata hai. Har ek room ko dhyan se dekh raha tha — drawing room, stairs, balcony, aur chhoti si puja ki jagah. Sab kuch freshly cleaned tha, lekin usmein ek khaaliपन tha jo sirf uski presence se bharne wala tha.

Ved (andar aate hi, halki si smile ke saath):
"Finally... ab mera khud ka ghar. Jahan mujhe koi yeh nahi bolega ki kya karna hai, kya nahi... koi nahi rokega."

Ananya thoda piche khadi thi, uska chehra shaant tha.

Woh Ved ko nahi, Dev ko dekh rahi thi — us Dev ko, jo saalon tak apne "ghar" mein sirf reh raha tha... jeeta nahi tha.

Ananya (mann mein, uski taraf dekhte hue):
"Main jaanti hoon... tumne apne ghar mein sirf dard dekha tha Dev. Shayad ab Ved uss dard se nikal ke jeena seekhe..."

Edhar - School Canteen

College Canteen, late morning.

Canteen ke kone wale table par chaar ladke-ladkiyan baith kar mazaak, discussion aur khaane mein busy the.

1. Sameer (18) – Hamesha hoodie pehne rehta hai, chill nature, thoda witty.School ke owner kaa betaa hai...

2. Deepu (19) – Science nerd, chashma lagata hai, thoda awkward lekin dil ka saaf.

3. Mitali (19) – Smart, outspoken, poore group ki jaan.Yaha ke Acp ke beti hai...

4. Sachin (20) – Sabse senior, thoda rough-tough aur protective type.

Sameer (burger ka bite lete hue):
"Are yaar, suna tumne? Ek new admission aaya hai... direct mid-sem mein.

Deepu (eyebrows raise karke):
"Kya? Kis stream mein?"

Mitali (phone check karte hue):
"Shayad science mein.

Sachin (thoda interest lete hue):
"Naam?"

Sameer:
"Ved......Aur pata hai? Usne principal se pehle hi milke kuch special permission bhi li hai... yeh banda normal nahi lagta bro."

Mitali (half-smiling):
"Hmm... mysterious boys ka zamana hai... interesting!"

Sab hans padte hain. But koi nahi jaanta... jo “Ved” aa raha hai, woh unki zindagi badalne wala hai — har ek ka kisi na kisi form mein.
 
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