Thriller The Hypnotizer
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Thank youSuperb updates bro
Waiting for more updates to come
more updates on the way (◠‿・)—☆
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What do you mean sir administrator?Thread selected for admin sticky program
..is there a problem with my thread 
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Nope there's no problem at allWhat do you mean sir administrator?
I liked your story so i sticked it at the top
It's just your thread will be on top of all threads for a period of 10 days where more will people will get to know about your story
I randomly choose a story then i read it and if i like the story i stick it to the top
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Oh! Then thank you Sir for your supportNope there's no problem at all
I liked your story so i sticked it at the top
It's just your thread will be on top of all threads for a period of 10 days where more will people will get to know about your story
I randomly choose a story then i read it and if i like the story i stick it to the top
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ketan Chauhan
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Thank you sirKeep up the good writing
...its just that I kinda messed up the later updates...i mean for readers they primarily come for Sx Scenes ....so i just altered the story a little bit....and in haste my writing style lost in between the later updates..but I'll come back to my original style of the first updates...Asura - in short he fuckn removed me from the story ...¯\_( ͠° ͟ʖ °͠ )_/¯....but now that you have compliment ME(≧▽≦) not him I'll bring back the old style of this story (✯ᴗ✯)
Thank you
Namaste
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Update 14
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Yaha avi ki class chalu ho chuki thi vahi doosri taraf gaon ke ek sunsaan Kone me....
"Maaf kardo maaf kardo hume"
Ek aadmi or uski biwi zameen par let kar kisi se maafi ki bheek maang rhi the...
"Yogendra Dada agli baar esa nahi hoga ... Hume maaf kardo..aap mujhe kuchh bhi kardo meri biwi ko jaane do"
Yogendra - Khamosh!
Ek 6 feet 3 inch ka safed skin wala aadmi...lal rang ke coat pant pehne hua tha...ek dum fit body thi uski jispe Kai saare cut ke nisaan the...
Yogendra - jab me chhota tha tab log kehte the Ya to tu Police me jaayenga Ya to Gunda banega..ab me tujhe poochhta hu ..mere haath me gun hai ab dono me antar kya hai? Gunda hu ya Police ?..bwahahaha hahahahah...bolna !.kya fark hai ... hahahahah
Vo aadmi - dada maaf kardo ...
Yogendra - maaf kardu ?
Vo aadmi - haa dada ..mere Ghar par 2 chhote bachhe hai unka hamare siway koi nahi hai...
Yogendra - chal theek hai ...tu abhi jaa yaha se.. mene maaf Kiya tujhe...
Vo aadmi or uski biwi waha se jaane lgti hai..tabhi
Yogendra - O ra*nd ! Tu kaha jaa rhi hai ?
Yogendra ki baat sun kar dono pati patni sehm jaate hai ...unhe Darr lagne lgta hai...
Yogendra - mene tujhe jaane Diya Teri biwi ko nahi... hahahahah
Yogendra ek cigrate nikaalta hai or use jala ke cigarette ka kush lene lgta hai....
Asura - tobacco se bani saari cheeze shareer ke liye harmful hoti hai..ye sirf ek story hai...aap reality me dhumrapan ya koi Anya nashe na kare (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)
Yogendra - happy ending lgi thi kya ?chal ab nikal yaha se...
Vo aadmi - par meri biwi...
Yogendra - kal subah Ghar aa jayegi abhi ja yha se...
Vo aadmi Naa chahte huye bhi vaha se rote rote chala jaata hai..
Yogendra -aye aurat sun meri baat...agar tu roti hi rhi to Tera pati aaj aakhri sans lega or agar tune meri koi baat nahi mani to tere bachhe aakhri sans lenge ...khi khi khi pfft! Bwahahahahha hahahahahha..
Vo 27 ya 28 saal ki sanvle rang ki aurat rona band karti hai... Yogendra ab apne baaki kaam karne ke liye chala jaata hai...use us aurat me koi interest nahi hota hai...
Yogendra ke jaate hi vaha par uska Chhota Bhai Yogesh aa jaata hai ...yogesh 19 saal ka ek bigrel ladka tha ..poore din aawaragardi karna or yaha vaha ladkiyo ko chedna or kabhi kabar to apne Bhai ki naam ki dhami de kar unke saath *** bhi karta tha voh ...
Yogesh us aurat ko dekhta hai or uski laar tapakne lgti hai...vo uske paas jaata hai or use dekhta hai fir ek shetaani muskan ke sath use apni haweli par le jaata hai...
Vaha vo use kamre me bed par lita deta hai..Yogesh us aurat se uska naam poochhta hai...vo aurat apna naam nilima bta ti hai..
Fir yogesh nilima ko baalo se pakadta hai or use apne crotch par (L Wale area par ) uska muh ragadne lgta hai..
Kuchh der baad vo apna 5 inch ka kaala L nikaalta hai or nilima ke muh me de deta hai....
Nilima ko pta tha ki yogesh Yogendra Dada ka Chhota Bhai hai agar usne uski baat nahi maani to fir uske pariwar ko bohot kuchh jhelna pad sakta hai.. isliye woh chup chaap jesa Yogesh us se kehta hai wesa hi karti hai...
Ab nilima yogesh ko blowjob de rhi hoti hai ...1 minute baad jese hi yogesh ejaculate karne hi wala hota hai..wo nilima ka chehra pakadta hai or apna L uske gale Tak laa deta hai or fir ejaculate kar deta hai...
Fir yogesh school ke liye chala jaata hai...raaste me use Ritu dikhti hai avi ke saath jaate huye ...use yeh dekh kar bohot gussa aata hai..uska man to kar rha tha ki avi ko yahi patak patak ke maar daale par fir bhi usne kuchh socha or chup chaap un dono ko dekhna lga..or unke pichhe pichhe chupke se unka pichha karne lga...
Ab aate hai present time me...
Ritu or avi saath me beth kar class le rhe the...asal me Hindi ki class chal rhi thi...beech beech me akriti avi ko dekh kar smile kar rhi thi ..Ritu thodi heran thi ki ye mam uski or avi ki taraf ese kyu smile kar rhi hai..
Yogesh class ke baahr se ye sab dekhta rehta hai darasal vo 12th class ke B section me tha jabki ritu or avi A section me the...
Ab yogesh Kudhan ke mare mra hi jaa rha tha..use pta tha ki Ritu ke mummy papa uske yaha par hi kaam karte hai...yogesh kuchh sochta hai or fir haste huye apni class me chla jaata hai..
Ab school khatm ho gya tha or bittu avi or Ritu ko ek saath dekh kar jalan se apne mutthi bheench kar unhe dekh rha tha.. yogesh ye dekh leta hai or aag me ghee daalne ka Kaam karte huye kehta hai...
Yogesh - dekha bittu ye Ritu ne kese tere best friend ko tujh se alag kar diya..
Bittu pehle to Yogesh ko dekh kar chaunk jaata hai par fir uski haa me haa milaana shuru kar deta hai...
Yogesh - mere paas ek plan hai jisse Ritu ko avi se alag kiya jaa sakta hai or use is tareeke se sabak sikhayenge ki vo fir avi ki taraf dekhne ki bhi himmat na kare...
Darasal yogesh bittu ko bhadka rha tha ... uska maksad to avi or Ritu dono ki hi life tabaah karne ka tha...
Fir yogesh bittu ko uski haweli par le jaata hai ...
Ritu or avi apne apne ghar chale jaate hai...
Ritu jab ghar pohuch ti hai tab use Ghar par use maut ka sannata pasra dikhta hai...
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Asura - kya nilima or Ritu me koi connection hai ? Ritu ke maa papa Yogendra Dada ke yaha kaam karte the ...kahi nilima Ritu ki ...!?
Aaj ke liye kitna hai ...kahani padhne ke liye dhanyavad
Namaste
Update 14
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Yaha avi ki class chalu ho chuki thi vahi doosri taraf gaon ke ek sunsaan Kone me....
"Maaf kardo maaf kardo hume"
Ek aadmi or uski biwi zameen par let kar kisi se maafi ki bheek maang rhi the...
"Yogendra Dada agli baar esa nahi hoga ... Hume maaf kardo..aap mujhe kuchh bhi kardo meri biwi ko jaane do"
Yogendra - Khamosh!
Ek 6 feet 3 inch ka safed skin wala aadmi...lal rang ke coat pant pehne hua tha...ek dum fit body thi uski jispe Kai saare cut ke nisaan the...
Yogendra - jab me chhota tha tab log kehte the Ya to tu Police me jaayenga Ya to Gunda banega..ab me tujhe poochhta hu ..mere haath me gun hai ab dono me antar kya hai? Gunda hu ya Police ?..bwahahaha hahahahah...bolna !.kya fark hai ... hahahahah
Vo aadmi - dada maaf kardo ...
Yogendra - maaf kardu ?
Vo aadmi - haa dada ..mere Ghar par 2 chhote bachhe hai unka hamare siway koi nahi hai...
Yogendra - chal theek hai ...tu abhi jaa yaha se.. mene maaf Kiya tujhe...
Vo aadmi or uski biwi waha se jaane lgti hai..tabhi
Yogendra - O ra*nd ! Tu kaha jaa rhi hai ?
Yogendra ki baat sun kar dono pati patni sehm jaate hai ...unhe Darr lagne lgta hai...
Yogendra - mene tujhe jaane Diya Teri biwi ko nahi... hahahahah
Yogendra ek cigrate nikaalta hai or use jala ke cigarette ka kush lene lgta hai....
Asura - tobacco se bani saari cheeze shareer ke liye harmful hoti hai..ye sirf ek story hai...aap reality me dhumrapan ya koi Anya nashe na kare (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)
Yogendra - happy ending lgi thi kya ?chal ab nikal yaha se...
Vo aadmi - par meri biwi...
Yogendra - kal subah Ghar aa jayegi abhi ja yha se...
Vo aadmi Naa chahte huye bhi vaha se rote rote chala jaata hai..
Yogendra -aye aurat sun meri baat...agar tu roti hi rhi to Tera pati aaj aakhri sans lega or agar tune meri koi baat nahi mani to tere bachhe aakhri sans lenge ...khi khi khi pfft! Bwahahahahha hahahahahha..
Vo 27 ya 28 saal ki sanvle rang ki aurat rona band karti hai... Yogendra ab apne baaki kaam karne ke liye chala jaata hai...use us aurat me koi interest nahi hota hai...
Yogendra ke jaate hi vaha par uska Chhota Bhai Yogesh aa jaata hai ...yogesh 19 saal ka ek bigrel ladka tha ..poore din aawaragardi karna or yaha vaha ladkiyo ko chedna or kabhi kabar to apne Bhai ki naam ki dhami de kar unke saath *** bhi karta tha voh ...
Yogesh us aurat ko dekhta hai or uski laar tapakne lgti hai...vo uske paas jaata hai or use dekhta hai fir ek shetaani muskan ke sath use apni haweli par le jaata hai...
Vaha vo use kamre me bed par lita deta hai..Yogesh us aurat se uska naam poochhta hai...vo aurat apna naam nilima bta ti hai..
Fir yogesh nilima ko baalo se pakadta hai or use apne crotch par (L Wale area par ) uska muh ragadne lgta hai..
Kuchh der baad vo apna 5 inch ka kaala L nikaalta hai or nilima ke muh me de deta hai....
Nilima ko pta tha ki yogesh Yogendra Dada ka Chhota Bhai hai agar usne uski baat nahi maani to fir uske pariwar ko bohot kuchh jhelna pad sakta hai.. isliye woh chup chaap jesa Yogesh us se kehta hai wesa hi karti hai...
Ab nilima yogesh ko blowjob de rhi hoti hai ...1 minute baad jese hi yogesh ejaculate karne hi wala hota hai..wo nilima ka chehra pakadta hai or apna L uske gale Tak laa deta hai or fir ejaculate kar deta hai...
Fir yogesh school ke liye chala jaata hai...raaste me use Ritu dikhti hai avi ke saath jaate huye ...use yeh dekh kar bohot gussa aata hai..uska man to kar rha tha ki avi ko yahi patak patak ke maar daale par fir bhi usne kuchh socha or chup chaap un dono ko dekhna lga..or unke pichhe pichhe chupke se unka pichha karne lga...
Ab aate hai present time me...
Ritu or avi saath me beth kar class le rhe the...asal me Hindi ki class chal rhi thi...beech beech me akriti avi ko dekh kar smile kar rhi thi ..Ritu thodi heran thi ki ye mam uski or avi ki taraf ese kyu smile kar rhi hai..
Yogesh class ke baahr se ye sab dekhta rehta hai darasal vo 12th class ke B section me tha jabki ritu or avi A section me the...
Ab yogesh Kudhan ke mare mra hi jaa rha tha..use pta tha ki Ritu ke mummy papa uske yaha par hi kaam karte hai...yogesh kuchh sochta hai or fir haste huye apni class me chla jaata hai..
Ab school khatm ho gya tha or bittu avi or Ritu ko ek saath dekh kar jalan se apne mutthi bheench kar unhe dekh rha tha.. yogesh ye dekh leta hai or aag me ghee daalne ka Kaam karte huye kehta hai...
Yogesh - dekha bittu ye Ritu ne kese tere best friend ko tujh se alag kar diya..
Bittu pehle to Yogesh ko dekh kar chaunk jaata hai par fir uski haa me haa milaana shuru kar deta hai...
Yogesh - mere paas ek plan hai jisse Ritu ko avi se alag kiya jaa sakta hai or use is tareeke se sabak sikhayenge ki vo fir avi ki taraf dekhne ki bhi himmat na kare...
Darasal yogesh bittu ko bhadka rha tha ... uska maksad to avi or Ritu dono ki hi life tabaah karne ka tha...
Fir yogesh bittu ko uski haweli par le jaata hai ...
Ritu or avi apne apne ghar chale jaate hai...
Ritu jab ghar pohuch ti hai tab use Ghar par use maut ka sannata pasra dikhta hai...
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Asura - kya nilima or Ritu me koi connection hai ? Ritu ke maa papa Yogendra Dada ke yaha kaam karte the ...kahi nilima Ritu ki ...!?
Aaj ke liye kitna hai ...kahani padhne ke liye dhanyavad
Namaste
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