Thriller The Hypnotizer
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Vese me spoiler nahi dena chahta.. par Ritu is kahani ki bohot hi Important character hai...aage aage dekho hota hai kya (โ โโ แดโ โโ โฟโ )Nice update bhai shayad ab rituu ki baari haiab usko batana ki ragging kaise hoti hai
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Pyaare readers! Ye meri pehli story hai ...mene socha tha har hafte sirf 1 hi update du par fir mene socha agar esa Kiya to na aapko or Naa hi mujhe kuchh maza aayega....me soch rha hu kuchh or Stories likhni ki....vo isi story ki taraf different ideas par hongi....The Hypnotizer band nahi Hui hai ..me bas iske saath saath ek or story likhne ki soch rha hu...mere paas kuchh bohot hi achhe ideas hai...mene poll bnaya hai aap vote karna zaroor สโ โฟโ ส..ki apko kya sahi lgta hai..
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Agar zombie apocalypse me hypnotize yaa transformation scenes hai to usse hi continue karo bro ......Pyaare readers! Ye meri pehli story hai ...mene socha tha har hafte sirf 1 hi update du par fir mene socha agar esa Kiya to na aapko or Naa hi mujhe kuchh maza aayega....me soch rha hu kuchh or Stories likhni ki....vo isi story ki taraf different ideas par hongi....The Hypnotizer band nahi Hui hai ..me bas iske saath saath ek or story likhne ki soch rha hu...mere paas kuchh bohot hi achhe ideas hai...mene poll bnaya hai aap vote karna zaroor สโ โฟโ ส..ki apko kya sahi lgta hai..
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ketan Chauhan
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Transformation idea kuch unique and hatkar lgg rha hai
Ispar dedicated koi kahani nhi dekhi hai
But yehi agar horror story (mayavi gaon)
Ke form me ho to readers ko thoda relatable and connected feel hoga jo story ko thoda realistic touch dega
Whi zombies,demons, different worlds wala idea koi sense nhi banate hai
My prior vote goes to horror story
And then hacker wali story
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Transformation in the sense gender bender ? Matlab male se female ya female se male wale. ....ya fir hero jo ki zero se hero transform hota hai ?
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Hmm...vese agar socha jaaye to mayavi gaon me bhi zombies daale Jaa sakte hai (mujhe to bas zombies ki thrilling story chahiye thi(โ โโ แดโ โโ โฟโ ) )...story or bhi interesting ho jayegi (โ โงโ โฝโ โฆโ )...Peace RP ka transformation wala idea bhi suite karega isme(โ โฏโ แดโ โฏโ )
Achha are are ...zombie apocalypse hi la dete hai mayavi gaon me or maza aayega....
...aap sab readers ka koi bhi or suggestion ho to btaiye use bhi kahani me implement karni ki poori koshish rahegi....or aap chahe to aap dono ketan Chauhan or Peace RP ke bhi naam ke characters add ho jayenge 
Or bhi kisi ko story ka character bnna hai to bta dena me aapko bhi story me lene ki poori koshish karunga
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Achha are are ...zombie apocalypse hi la dete hai mayavi gaon me or maza aayega....
...aap sab readers ka koi bhi or suggestion ho to btaiye use bhi kahani me implement karni ki poori koshish rahegi....or aap chahe to aap dono ketan Chauhan or Peace RP ke bhi naam ke characters add ho jayenge Or bhi kisi ko story ka character bnna hai to bta dena me aapko bhi story me lene ki poori koshish karunga
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Transformation means zombie transformation level boll raha tha means zombie ka level upgrade hone ki baat kr raha tha 1 stage me vo ek normal zombie 2 nd stage me uska transformation like agar vo female hui to slave mode 3 rd me vo dusro ko apne jaise slave banane ki power ab ye transformation kaise hoga ye idea thoda soch na padega but aap apne se hi likho mai hi kuch jyada soch liyaHmm...vese agar socha jaaye to mayavi gaon me bhi zombies daale Jaa sakte hai (mujhe to bas zombies ki thrilling story chahiye thi(โ โโ แดโ โโ โฟโ ) )...story or bhi interesting ho jayegi (โ โงโ โฝโ โฆโ )...Peace RP ka transformation wala idea bhi suite karega isme(โ โฏโ แดโ โฏโ )
Achha are are ...zombie apocalypse hi la dete hai mayavi gaon me or maza aayega....
Or bhi kisi ko story ka character bnna hai to bta dena me aapko bhi story me lene ki poori koshish karunga
By the way aaj night me koi update hai ya nahi
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Achha samjh gya me...level wale zombies....achha isme type wale zombies bhi add ho sakte hai jese koi Power type zombie..koi speed type zombie...hmm achha transformation matlab yeh thaTransformation means zombie transformation level boll raha tha means zombie ka level upgrade hone ki baat kr raha tha 1 stage me vo ek normal zombie 2 nd stage me uska transformation like agar vo female hui to slave mode 3 rd me vo dusro ko apne jaise slave banane ki power ab ye transformation kaise hoga ye idea thoda soch na padega but aap apne se hi likho mai hi kuch jyada soch liya
By the way aaj night me koi update hai ya nahi
mene to gender change karne wala samjh liya tha ....ye bhi implement ho sakta hai story me ...thank you for your suggestion (โ โ โ โฟโ โโ )Sorry apko disappoint karne ke liye par aaj ke liye sirf do hi update likhe the ... principal office wala update likhne me bohot time lg gya tha isliye
...night me possible to nahi hai par me try karta hu...aap maan ke chalo ki nahi hi aayega ...shayd hi aaye kyuki update ka content or size bhi matter karta hai na ..me try karta hu
ketan Chauhan
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Idea shi me acha haiAchha samjh gya me...level wale zombies....achha isme type wale zombies bhi add ho sakte hai jese koi Power type zombie..koi speed type zombie...hmm achha transformation matlab yeh tha
M2f f2m bhi try karna bro