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Sci-FI The Hard Earned System
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Monday to Saturday bahut kam time milta hai bhai. But try karunga ki jayda se jayda update de sakuBro 3 update to rakho week ke
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Very nice story. All the characters are well etched out.
Kya mast likhte ho yaar.
I am looking forward to completion of this wonderful story ASAP.
Do not lengthen the story beyond 100 updates (My personal view).
All the best for your next story!
Kya mast likhte ho yaar.
I am looking forward to completion of this wonderful story ASAP.
Do not lengthen the story beyond 100 updates (My personal view).
All the best for your next story!
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Hii everyone. I hope everyone is in good state and good health.
I am not a regular writer aur kuch scene ek dam low description wale ho sakte hai aur kahi galat words ya mistakes v ho sakte hai. So plz manage everyone aur kuch samjh na aaye toh puch lena. Aur aap batana v kya sahi galat hai thik laga toh aage se dhyaan rakhunga.
Dusri baat updates sirf week me ek ayega, Saturday ya Sunday ko. But update 10k words se kam nahi hoga. Yadi mujhe kabhi time mila toh try karunga jayda se jayda update de saku.
Kabhi kabhi kisi chiz ka reply na diya toh maaf karna. doubt ho toh personally msg v kar sakte hai.
Last not the least but maine dekha hai bahut se writer ko bahut log bahut kuch galat bolte hai. Kyunki story complete nhi hoti hai. Toh padhne se pahle bata de raha hu ki yeh complete hogi ya nhi mujhe khud nhi pata. Joh aise log hai woh na padhe.
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Update -1.
Introduction. +
The system and first task.
Lead character -
Vihaan upadhayay ( story isi ke aaspas chalegi) - age -21.
Iska past bahut hi uljha hua aur thoda hatke hai toh woh baad me daalunga. Abhi iske baare me jaan lete hai.
Yeh london me rahta hai aur waha taxi chalata hai. Dikhne me average se jayda hi accha hai but sharir kamjor hai. But hamesha positive rahta hai. Jabse hosh aya khud ko akela paya hai. Aur isi karan har situation ko acche se handle karta hai sabse jayda iska dimag chalta hai. Sharir aur paisa nhi hai but phir v dimag hai bande ke pass.
Rahta hai London ke ekdam outer side me jaha sab PG saste milte hai. Aur thik thak kama leta hai.
Dekho bhai log sara conversation idhar English me hai but mai bich bich me thoda hindi use karu toh samjh jana waha English nhi aa rahi thi
Hindi English dono prayog kiya jayega readers so thoda mujhe jhel lena yadi thodi gandi English bich me aaye toh
[FONT=Lobster, cursive]Chalte hai abb story par....
Place - London
Late night - 2 am ( near night club)
Aap jaante hi honge ki London dunya ke kuch gine chune sahar me se ek hai. Yeh sahar aadhunikta ki charam sima ko liye hue hai. Yaha aap bade se bade buildings company sab kuch har trah ki suvidha dekh sakte hai. Har sahar ke do pahlu hote hai. elite joh paise wale hai aur garibi jaha khaane ke liye sochna padta hai. Joh in sab ke middle me hote hai unki zindagi jhand ho jaati hai . Yaha ka v yahi haal hai.
Aur Hamara mukhya patr v yaha kuch mahine pahle Bharat se aaya hai. Pichle zindgi ko ham baad me janege abhi filhal dekhte hai mukhya patr hai kaha.
(Near Nigt club )
" Madam aaram se aaram se gir mat jana" " aaram se baithiye" ladki ko pakdte hue taxi me baithata hai.
Ladki ( drunken mode) - bloody hell bastard, why are you touching me? Are you trying to take advantage of me?
Me - madam aisa nhi hai, aapko aisa feel hua ho toh sorry, bas aap girne wali thi isiliye pakda. I am so sorry. ( Sar jhukate hue)
Mann me" mc kaha fas gya "
Ladki - haa haa chalo iss address par. Ladki ek address batati hai. Artisian tower south west town. property 124 .
Mai - ( mann me) fuck sali kitni amir hai BC .
Bata du yaha sabse sasta flat v 5M pound ka hai inr me jod lo bc . Main place joh London street hai waha se 30 minute ke raste par hai. Bhagwan toh bas iske saath kuch karwa de sari zindagi aish se jugregi. Kaha mai taxi chala raha hu .
Ladki- kya soch rahe ho jana nhi hai kya.
Mai - haa haa madam ja.. jana jana hai na.
Mai taxi chalate hue use le jata hu aur waha pahuchne par uthata hu toh woh uthti nhi hai.
Ladki - ummmm mumma let me sleep
Mai use dekh ke muskura deta hu. Mere munh se nikalta hai " maa". Phir ek dil me tis si uthti hai. Thode time ke liye kahi aur kho jata hu. Phir khud ko sambhal ke wahi saath me property 124 ke side me taxi laga ke apna khana nikal ke apna khana khane lagta hu. Wahi sada hua sandwich kyunki sabse sasta yahi hai. Aur jayda energy milti hai kam paiso me.
Wahi taxi laga ke hath munh dho ke side me bahar tahalne lagta hu. Mujhe thand lag rahi thi pakka 4 ke aaspas time ho raha hoga. Time dekhta hu toh 4:10 ho rahe the . Socha thoda so leta hu but woh madam galat samjh le toh dikkat ho jayegi. But kuch soch ke bahar hi baith jata hu .
"Ding ! Hard earned system is bounding to the host"
1% .. 2% .. 3% ...... 50% ..... 99%... 100%.
congratulations to the host for obtaining the hard earned system.
Mai sochta hu sala kahi Sandwich me drug wrug toh nhi tha. Sals wahi lag raha hai. Mai do char baar aankhe mal ke dekhi. Kuch nhi dikha ahhh abb thik hai mai scoha sala mai aadhi raat me pagal ho gya.
Kuch time baad ** Hello host I am hard earned system***
Mai sala sahi me drug liya kya
Mai aankh mal ke saamne dekhta hu toh screen dikhta hai. Fuck sach me sala kuch jaydA hi accha illusion hua hai.
* Host this is not illusion* it's real.
You didn't take any drugs.
Fuck fuck sach me mai pagal hi ho jaunga bc
Aadhi raat me bhoot pisach.
जय हनुमान ज्ञान गुन सागर।
जय कपीस तिहुं लोक उजागर।।........
Mai gata jaa raha tha. Sach kahu toh abhi pathi padi thi.
* Host host host clam down calm down .... I am not any one of this creature*
Aisa nhi ho sakta
* Host calm down first listen me first try to give me some introduction and proff if it is not right you can unbind me* or * if I can talk to in your word you can say that if I am not right you will anyhow died* this is what in your mind right
Mai thoda darte hue* yes yes*
* Okk give me permission to scan this world plz* yes or no
Mai - yes
* System is updating according to this world * * system is updated*
* Congratulations host again you got the hard earned system* * can I introduce this system to you?**
Mai - hmm jaan jani hi hai toh thodi bakwas sunne me kya hai.
* Hard earned system*
Name - Vihann Upadhyay
Age- 20
Attribute
Combat - 3/10 ( ten is normal for human being)
Health - 5/10( ten is normal)
Wealth - 900 pound.
System - yuk
, I think you are lucky. Atleast you didn't got cancer..
Me -
System - Now we will see what the benifits can the host get from system.
1) Every minute host survive on earth host get 0.1 pound. Reason is atleast host can't die of food. And it upgrade according to the level.
2) Every time host complete any task he get a reward and rewards depends on how host get the evaluations regarding tasks after it finishes.
3) And also host can get rewards for random hidden mission completion.
That's all and one last thing host can get the first gift for sign-in up the system. It is a congratulations gift.
Is host want to open the gift. ??
Yes or no.
Mai - yes
Congratulations for the system to get his congratulations gift
1) get a house near pickford green conventry . Or
( 2 ) 300k pounds
Plz host choose one thing.
Mai - sala marne samay v majak. 300k pound ya ek ghar pickford green conventry ke pass sala idhar ek ghar 250k pound ka hai. Bc yeh free me de raha hai maaaiiiyyyyaaaaooooo..
Mai - 300k pound.
Congratulations to the host for the choosing 300k pound
Ding ding Ding ding....
Mera mobile baza maine nikal ke dekha toh shock rah gaya.
Bc sach me 300k pound aaye the.
Fuck fuck sachi me lol.... Hahahahahhahhahhahahha mai pagalo ki trah bahar me has raha tha.
Mujhe koi dekhta toh sach me pagal hi samjhta.[/FONT]
Hahahahahhahhahhahahha
[FONT=Lobster, cursive] Koi sach me mujhe samjh raha tha aur koi nhi taxi wali ladki meri jor ki hasi se woh uth gyi aur mujhe aise dekh dar gyi aur asspas dekhne baad use jana pachnana jagah laga woh chupchap utar ke dabe pav bhag gyi.
Ladki - haaah ladka ek dam pagla tha koi aise raat me hasta hai kya.. ( Sochte hue) Pakka bure irade honge uske haa sahi me isiliye usne mujhe nhi jagaya. Sahi kiya maine bhaag ke.
Idhar niche
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Ding - host get his first task. Congratulations to the host.
Task - save allena parker.
Address - artisian tower property lane 124 building 10 flat number 104 .
Time limit - 2 hr.
Penalty - your main part will get shortened by 3 inch
system -
Me -
Reward - depend on evaluation+ 1 bronze lottery ticket.
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BC sala system v has rahaa hai. Waise baat hai hasne wali sala kisi ka chota ho jaye apne aap . Mujhe v hasi aa gyi .
Maine Mobile check kiya aur online shopping karke v dekha. Yeh sach tha mere account me 300k pound aya bc.
Mai sala hawao me jannat me hur pari ke bich sab jagah se ghum ke aa gya bc ek minute me .[/FONT]
Abb batunga saalo ko hai kiska BAAP . Bahut der tak hasta raha.
[FONT=Lobster, cursive]System - pagla gya hai launda.
Mai - Lekin yadi yeh sach hai toh real me sala mera ***a chota ho jayega bc..
Mai - abb task kaise complete[/FONT] kiya jaye.
[FONT=Lobster, cursive]Hmm adresss right. Haa address toh yahi ka hai. Building 10 thi right aur flat number v diya hai 104 sahi hai. Good.
Mai - but ladki..
Mai ghum ke dekha toh koi nhi tha..
Waha kuch pounds rakhke the matlab woh ladki chali gyi chalo sahi ha.
Mai - andar jaate hai. Kahi kisi ne bhaga diya toh. Order leke jata hu. Nhi nhi... Usme v dikkat ho sakti hai itni levish area hai yadi personal operater hue toh. Nope..
Toh office wala banke right good idea.
File leke jata hu aur confidential bolke andar chala jaunga. BC itni raat ko file chalo arrange karte hai.
Online check kiya pass me market tha. Waha jaake stationery ka saman leke kuch faltu prints nikalwa ke building-10 taxi through aa gya. Aur fast fast andar jaane laga.
Guard - Hey boy what are doing, stop right there..
Mai - broo I have to go it's urgent, I have to take sign of my superior. She lives here. If I don't get I will loose my job. You can see me how I look like a mad dog. I am disturbing everyone in the middle of night.
Guard- ohh , don't say that I know you all office worker my wife also works in corporate buisness.
Guard - give me the file I will send the owner.
Mai - no bro it can't it's a confidential file. You know what it means.
Guard - boy that can't be possible then it's early morning everyone is sleeping. If anyone of disturb and if they complain. My job will be done.
Mai - broo it can't be problem. Wait I took 100 pound and stuff it in his pocket.
Guard - don't do that boy.
Mai - broo plz. I will take all blame on me. See you go there on other side and I will run upstair and If anything comes up and trouble you then I will take balme. Is it ok.
Guard thoda hesitation ke baad gya aur thode der baad mai upar aa gya. Sala yeh kya hai. Kahi woh laudi mar mara gyi toh mai gaya.
Mai sidha fourth floor par ruka. BC sala laxuory apartments hai lekin...
Mai khojte khojte ruka saamne 104 ke. 2 baar bell bajayi 4- baar but koi nhi khola toh darwaza bajaya.
Karrrr..... Karrrrr.... Ke awaja karke door khula sala BC raat nhi hoti toh horror film ke jaisa lagta. Waise abhi thoda andhera tha toh feel hua.
Andar gya aur maine allena allena pukara but koi nhi aya. Chaaro taraf room dekhne ke baad BC kya hi ho raha hai, aadhi raat ko BC dusre ke ghar me munh maar raha hu. Ek room se pani ki awaj ayi uske kholne par floor pani se bhiga tha mujhe kuch gadbad lagi mai sidha andar gya.
BC samne ka scene dekh ke mere naak se khoon hi nikal gya aisa samjho. BC laudi poori nangi niche me leti thi munh ke bal.
Maine use uthaya aur fatafat andar bedroom me laya aur jaise hi bed par rakh ke face dekha BC shock ho gya yeh ladki thi na taxi me laudi . Abhi udhar se nhi aati toh thik rahti.
Abb soch rahe hoge ki task mila toh accha hai na, but socho kuch ho jata toh nhi baba kisi ki kabar bana ke paise aur ladki nhi chahiye.. sab badhiya rahe apni yahi soch hai. Apan kisi ko taklif na de bhai bhagwan se yahi mangta hai.
System -
Usko utha ke pahle saaf kiya aur acche se mahlam patti kiya phir kapde pahna ke usko acche se blanket se dhak diya aur heater chala ke sofe par baith gya intazar karte karte karte kab so gya pata hi nhi chala . Subah kisi ki chikh se awaj khuli.
Mai socha ek sundar si ladki mujhe utha rahi thi. BC mar mura toh nhi gaya. Sala apsara, hur pari yaha mujhe utha rahi hai. Phir mujhe kal wali baat yaad aayi.
Me - apni soch par hasne laga.
Ladki - you bastard bloody hooligan what are you doing here. I know you are not up to good thing. I know that's why I ran away in the morning . You Wait, I called the police. They were here at anytime. Huhhh ( in angry mode)
Mai - BC....
Mai - yeh kya kiya tumne maine tumhe bachaya yaad karo. Aur mai kab tumhe kuch kiya.
Ladki - tumne mujhe bachaya aur woh kab hua.??
Mai - tum bathroom me thi aur gir gyi thi aur mai leke aa gya idhar yaad karo.
Ladki yaad karte hue aur jab saari baat yaad aati hai toh usse yaad ata hai woh jab bhaag ke aayi thi toh usse shower lena tha aur sona tha but woh nashe me thi halki toh gir gyi aur uthana chaha but behosh ho gyi last me use yaad aya woh nangi thi..
Ladki ( mann me)- mai gyi meri izzat lut gyi.. mera khajana isne dekh liya jise maine last 25 yrs se sambhal ke rakha tha.
Ladki - you hooligan ( gusse me), okk koi nhi but tum mere ghar me kaise ghuse aane do police ko mai tumhe pakadwati hu.
Mai - yadi mai nhi ata madam toh abhi tum bhagwan ke pass hoti.. upar se behosh toh bhaut sara khoon bah gya tha Sukar manao ki mai aa gya time par. Warna sidha narak me jaati.
Ladki - mai narak me kyu jaati.
Mai - jaan bacha ke tumne thank you v nhi kaha isiliye. But tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe jana tha kya.. upar ki aur ishara karke haste hue
Ladki ( Allena parker) - you hooligan you wait.. yadi aaj tum arrest nhi hue toh phir dekhna.
Mai ( sala bc pakda gya toh gya. Idea
) - maine apna phone uske aage hilate hue isme sab record hai. Jab se mai idhar aya tab se maine record kiya hai. Mujhe laga hi tha aisa kuch hoga isiliye. Aur tum kis halat me thi police wale phir court aur phir sab dekhenge. Mai gya toh mujhe khud ko bachana toh padega na madam mere 10-20 bacche hai road par ghumte hue usse kaun palega ( rone ka natak karte hue).
System - nautanki sala.
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Allena - you holligan... Youu youuu.. ( gusse me lal pili hote hue)
Ding dong ding dong......
Mai phone hilate hue aur kamini muskan di aur gusse me gate kholne chali gyi..
Gate kholte hi 2 police wale gate par the. Aur 2 guard piche. Usme se ek woh v tha subah wala jise paise diye the. .
Allena - hii officer It was misunderstanding.
Police - ohh , is he threating you by any means you called me, any problem miss. ( Mujhe sakh ki nazar se dekhte hue) .
Mai samjh gya BC gadbad hogi jayegi yadi yeh ladki aage kuch ki toh.
Mai aage aate hue - hii comrades , it was totally misunderstanding. Baat kuch aisi thi ki kal hamara aniversary tha first love ka toh maine apni miss ko koi gift nhi diya isiliye miss thodi gussa hai. Maine allena ko kas kar kamar par pakadte hue " kyu baby"
Woh sala subah wala bodyguard mujhe aankhe phaad ke dekh raha tha.
Allena - yes police officer sorry meri traf gussa se dekhte hue. Yeh bhaut hi bhullakad hai is umar me v .
Police officer - ohh , it's okk we know you all young people's hahaaha.
Just give me answer of few questions we will go then.
Kuch questions puchne ke baad woh nikal liye.
Aur gusse me allena ne gate jor se band kiya.
Allena - you holligan, who is your baby and how dare you toch here. Apni kamar ki traf ko ishara karte hue ( gusse me)
Bc uski kamar dekhe ke hi khoo gya chikni kamar, gol gol gahri nabhi woh s shape curve sala jab chuaa tha toh tab yaad kiya kitna mulayam tha. Yaad karte hi sarir me jhurjhuri daud gyi . Ahhaha tantana gya bc. Current bc current.
Allena - you holligan, tum baaz nhi aaoge. Phir waise hi tapori wal harkat karte hue.
Mai - sorry woh tumhara figure makkhan jaisa hai na toh kho gya.
Allena proud se bolte hue - toh
Mai - nazar nhi hati.
Allena - yeh sab chodo tum yaha kyu aaye.
Mai - yeh proposal leke aya tha company ko lekar. Socha tum invest karogi. ( Jhuth bolte hue)
Allena- woh mai dekh lunga but woh woh.. vedd.. vedio ( hesitation se)
Mai - yaha se bahar niklunga toh delete kar dunga kya pata phir police bula lo.
Aap soch rahe hoge ki kaise allena abb comfortable hai mere saath toh bata du ki usko jaan bachai hai. Toh yeh normal hai but jab woh uthi thi toh panic ho gyi mujhe dekh kar. Aur uska perception mere ko lekar sahi nhi tha yaad aya kya ?? Isiliye woh abb mentally poora toh nhi kahenge but kafi had tak thik hai.
Allena - but but kisi ne dekh liya toh..
Mai - koi nhi dekhega mere alawa, waise maine poora dekha hai ( kuch yaad aate hi) phir us chiz ko yaad karte hi current daura bc poore sharir me. Woh tumhara til v bahut accha hai.
Allena daur karke mera munh band kar deti hai aur shrmane lagti hai. BC haath se munh band ki hoth se nhi jayda hawa me nhi imagination laane ka.
Allena - plz nhi ( sharmane lagti hai).
Mai haath hatate hue- okk , now I will go.
Allena - and sorry everything I have done. Really sorry and thanks for the help.
Mai - okk bye, mera number file ke piche likha hai phone karna.
Allena shocked
Mai - are project pasand aaye toh phone karna.
Mai - byee.
Aur bhaag ke nikal gya. Aur mai bahar gya toh sala guard ghur ke dekh raha tha.
Uske baad me sidha taxi me hi ruka.
Aur saath me notification...
Ding*** congratulations to the host for completing the task** [/FONT]
Host wait system is trying to evaluate the task.
Ding congratulations to the host, evaluation is B+
Ding congratulations to the host for the rewards..
Rewards are...
- 1M pound.
- 2 attribute points ( by adding it into anything you will increase that attributes)
- 1 bronze lottery ticket.
If host want to get the lottery ticket to redeem, he can redeem...
Mai - yes go for it ( in excitement)
Ek gol gol ghumne wala kuch aya uspar dher sara chiz likha tha house, car company, attribute, combat.
Gol gol ghumte ghumte house par ruka.
Ding congratulations to the host for getting a house in "ARTISIAN tower property 124 building 10 flat 105. "
Fuck fuck
Mujhe hasi aa rahi thi.
Mai - can I ask to the system why he give me this house not some other place.
System - host you somewhat have affection toward the allena so system is only trying to give the best so the host can enjoy life to the most.
Mai - thank you system ummaah..
[FONT=Lobster, cursive]Thanks.... That's all for this update...
Give review and suggestions..
Have a good day and enjoy the first update..[/FONT]
Introduction. +
The system and first task.
Lead character -
Vihaan upadhayay ( story isi ke aaspas chalegi) - age -21.
Iska past bahut hi uljha hua aur thoda hatke hai toh woh baad me daalunga. Abhi iske baare me jaan lete hai.
Yeh london me rahta hai aur waha taxi chalata hai. Dikhne me average se jayda hi accha hai but sharir kamjor hai. But hamesha positive rahta hai. Jabse hosh aya khud ko akela paya hai. Aur isi karan har situation ko acche se handle karta hai sabse jayda iska dimag chalta hai. Sharir aur paisa nhi hai but phir v dimag hai bande ke pass.
Rahta hai London ke ekdam outer side me jaha sab PG saste milte hai. Aur thik thak kama leta hai.
Dekho bhai log sara conversation idhar English me hai but mai bich bich me thoda hindi use karu toh samjh jana waha English nhi aa rahi thi
Hindi English dono prayog kiya jayega readers so thoda mujhe jhel lena yadi thodi gandi English bich me aaye toh
[FONT=Lobster, cursive]Chalte hai abb story par....
Place - London
Late night - 2 am ( near night club)
Aap jaante hi honge ki London dunya ke kuch gine chune sahar me se ek hai. Yeh sahar aadhunikta ki charam sima ko liye hue hai. Yaha aap bade se bade buildings company sab kuch har trah ki suvidha dekh sakte hai. Har sahar ke do pahlu hote hai. elite joh paise wale hai aur garibi jaha khaane ke liye sochna padta hai. Joh in sab ke middle me hote hai unki zindagi jhand ho jaati hai
. Yaha ka v yahi haal hai. Aur Hamara mukhya patr v yaha kuch mahine pahle Bharat se aaya hai. Pichle zindgi ko ham baad me janege abhi filhal dekhte hai mukhya patr hai kaha.
(Near Nigt club )
" Madam aaram se aaram se gir mat jana" " aaram se baithiye" ladki ko pakdte hue taxi me baithata hai.
Ladki ( drunken mode) - bloody hell bastard, why are you touching me? Are you trying to take advantage of me?
Me - madam aisa nhi hai, aapko aisa feel hua ho toh sorry, bas aap girne wali thi isiliye pakda. I am so sorry. ( Sar jhukate hue)
Mann me" mc kaha fas gya "
Ladki - haa haa chalo iss address par. Ladki ek address batati hai. Artisian tower south west town. property 124 .
Mai - ( mann me) fuck sali kitni amir hai BC .
Bata du yaha sabse sasta flat v 5M pound ka hai inr me jod lo bc . Main place joh London street hai waha se 30 minute ke raste par hai. Bhagwan toh bas iske saath kuch karwa de sari zindagi aish se jugregi. Kaha mai taxi chala raha hu .
Ladki- kya soch rahe ho jana nhi hai kya.
Mai - haa haa madam ja.. jana jana hai na.
Mai taxi chalate hue use le jata hu aur waha pahuchne par uthata hu toh woh uthti nhi hai.
Ladki - ummmm mumma let me sleep
Mai use dekh ke muskura deta hu. Mere munh se nikalta hai " maa". Phir ek dil me tis si uthti hai. Thode time ke liye kahi aur kho jata hu. Phir khud ko sambhal ke wahi saath me property 124 ke side me taxi laga ke apna khana nikal ke apna khana khane lagta hu. Wahi sada hua sandwich kyunki sabse sasta yahi hai. Aur jayda energy milti hai kam paiso me.
Wahi taxi laga ke hath munh dho ke side me bahar tahalne lagta hu. Mujhe thand lag rahi thi pakka 4 ke aaspas time ho raha hoga. Time dekhta hu toh 4:10 ho rahe the . Socha thoda so leta hu but woh madam galat samjh le toh dikkat ho jayegi. But kuch soch ke bahar hi baith jata hu .
"Ding ! Hard earned system is bounding to the host"
1% .. 2% .. 3% ...... 50% ..... 99%... 100%.
congratulations to the host for obtaining the hard earned system.
Mai sochta hu sala kahi Sandwich me drug wrug toh nhi tha. Sals wahi lag raha hai. Mai do char baar aankhe mal ke dekhi. Kuch nhi dikha ahhh abb thik hai mai scoha sala mai aadhi raat me pagal ho gya.
Kuch time baad ** Hello host I am hard earned system***
Mai sala sahi me drug liya kya
Mai aankh mal ke saamne dekhta hu toh screen dikhta hai. Fuck sach me sala kuch jaydA hi accha illusion hua hai.
* Host this is not illusion* it's real.
You didn't take any drugs.
Fuck fuck sach me mai pagal hi ho jaunga bc
Aadhi raat me bhoot pisach.
जय हनुमान ज्ञान गुन सागर।
जय कपीस तिहुं लोक उजागर।।........
Mai gata jaa raha tha. Sach kahu toh abhi pathi padi thi.
* Host host host clam down calm down .... I am not any one of this creature*
Aisa nhi ho sakta
* Host calm down first listen me first try to give me some introduction and proff if it is not right you can unbind me* or * if I can talk to in your word you can say that if I am not right you will anyhow died* this is what in your mind right
Mai thoda darte hue* yes yes*
* Okk give me permission to scan this world plz* yes or no
Mai - yes
* System is updating according to this world * * system is updated*
* Congratulations host again you got the hard earned system* * can I introduce this system to you?**
Mai - hmm jaan jani hi hai toh thodi bakwas sunne me kya hai.
* Hard earned system*
Name - Vihann Upadhyay
Age- 20
Attribute
Combat - 3/10 ( ten is normal for human being)
Health - 5/10( ten is normal)
Wealth - 900 pound.
System - yuk
, I think you are lucky. Atleast you didn't got cancer..Me -
System - Now we will see what the benifits can the host get from system.
1) Every minute host survive on earth host get 0.1 pound. Reason is atleast host can't die of food. And it upgrade according to the level.
2) Every time host complete any task he get a reward and rewards depends on how host get the evaluations regarding tasks after it finishes.
3) And also host can get rewards for random hidden mission completion.
That's all and one last thing host can get the first gift for sign-in up the system. It is a congratulations gift.
Is host want to open the gift. ??
Yes or no.
Mai - yes
Congratulations for the system to get his congratulations gift
1) get a house near pickford green conventry . Or
( 2 ) 300k pounds
Plz host choose one thing.
Mai - sala marne samay v majak. 300k pound ya ek ghar pickford green conventry ke pass sala idhar ek ghar 250k pound ka hai. Bc yeh free me de raha hai maaaiiiyyyyaaaaooooo..
Mai - 300k pound.
Congratulations to the host for the choosing 300k pound
Ding ding Ding ding....
Mera mobile baza maine nikal ke dekha toh shock rah gaya.
Bc sach me 300k pound aaye the.
Fuck fuck sachi me lol.... Hahahahahhahhahhahahha mai pagalo ki trah bahar me has raha tha.
Mujhe koi dekhta toh sach me pagal hi samjhta.[/FONT]
Hahahahahhahhahhahahha
[FONT=Lobster, cursive] Koi sach me mujhe samjh raha tha aur koi nhi taxi wali ladki meri jor ki hasi se woh uth gyi aur mujhe aise dekh dar gyi aur asspas dekhne baad use jana pachnana jagah laga woh chupchap utar ke dabe pav bhag gyi.
Ladki - haaah ladka ek dam pagla tha koi aise raat me hasta hai kya.. ( Sochte hue) Pakka bure irade honge uske haa sahi me isiliye usne mujhe nhi jagaya. Sahi kiya maine bhaag ke.
Idhar niche
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Ding - host get his first task. Congratulations to the host.
Task - save allena parker.
Address - artisian tower property lane 124 building 10 flat number 104 .
Time limit - 2 hr.
Penalty - your main part will get shortened by 3 inch
system -
Me -
Reward - depend on evaluation+ 1 bronze lottery ticket.
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BC sala system v has rahaa hai. Waise baat hai hasne wali sala kisi ka chota ho jaye apne aap . Mujhe v hasi aa gyi
. Maine Mobile check kiya aur online shopping karke v dekha. Yeh sach tha mere account me 300k pound aya bc.
Mai sala hawao me jannat me hur pari ke bich sab jagah se ghum ke aa gya bc ek minute me .[/FONT]
Abb batunga saalo ko hai kiska BAAP
. Bahut der tak hasta raha. [FONT=Lobster, cursive]System - pagla gya hai launda.
Mai - Lekin yadi yeh sach hai toh real me sala mera ***a chota ho jayega bc..
Mai - abb task kaise complete[/FONT] kiya jaye.
[FONT=Lobster, cursive]Hmm adresss right. Haa address toh yahi ka hai. Building 10 thi right aur flat number v diya hai 104 sahi hai. Good.
Mai - but ladki..
Mai ghum ke dekha toh koi nhi tha..
Waha kuch pounds rakhke the matlab woh ladki chali gyi chalo sahi ha.
Mai - andar jaate hai. Kahi kisi ne bhaga diya toh. Order leke jata hu. Nhi nhi... Usme v dikkat ho sakti hai itni levish area hai yadi personal operater hue toh. Nope..
Toh office wala banke right good idea.
File leke jata hu aur confidential bolke andar chala jaunga. BC itni raat ko file chalo arrange karte hai.
Online check kiya pass me market tha. Waha jaake stationery ka saman leke kuch faltu prints nikalwa ke building-10 taxi through aa gya. Aur fast fast andar jaane laga.
Guard - Hey boy what are doing, stop right there..
Mai - broo I have to go it's urgent, I have to take sign of my superior. She lives here. If I don't get I will loose my job. You can see me how I look like a mad dog. I am disturbing everyone in the middle of night.
Guard- ohh , don't say that I know you all office worker my wife also works in corporate buisness.
Guard - give me the file I will send the owner.
Mai - no bro it can't it's a confidential file. You know what it means.
Guard - boy that can't be possible then it's early morning everyone is sleeping. If anyone of disturb and if they complain. My job will be done.
Mai - broo it can't be problem. Wait I took 100 pound and stuff it in his pocket.
Guard - don't do that boy.
Mai - broo plz. I will take all blame on me. See you go there on other side and I will run upstair and If anything comes up and trouble you then I will take balme. Is it ok.
Guard thoda hesitation ke baad gya aur thode der baad mai upar aa gya. Sala yeh kya hai. Kahi woh laudi mar mara gyi toh mai gaya.
Mai sidha fourth floor par ruka. BC sala laxuory apartments hai lekin...
Mai khojte khojte ruka saamne 104 ke. 2 baar bell bajayi 4- baar but koi nhi khola toh darwaza bajaya.
Karrrr..... Karrrrr.... Ke awaja karke door khula sala BC raat nhi hoti toh horror film ke jaisa lagta. Waise abhi thoda andhera tha toh feel hua.
Andar gya aur maine allena allena pukara but koi nhi aya. Chaaro taraf room dekhne ke baad BC kya hi ho raha hai, aadhi raat ko BC dusre ke ghar me munh maar raha hu. Ek room se pani ki awaj ayi uske kholne par floor pani se bhiga tha mujhe kuch gadbad lagi mai sidha andar gya.
BC samne ka scene dekh ke mere naak se khoon hi nikal gya aisa samjho. BC laudi poori nangi niche me leti thi munh ke bal.
Maine use uthaya aur fatafat andar bedroom me laya aur jaise hi bed par rakh ke face dekha BC shock ho gya yeh ladki thi na taxi me laudi . Abhi udhar se nhi aati toh thik rahti.
Abb soch rahe hoge ki task mila toh accha hai na, but socho kuch ho jata toh nhi baba kisi ki kabar bana ke paise aur ladki nhi chahiye.. sab badhiya rahe apni yahi soch hai. Apan kisi ko taklif na de bhai bhagwan se yahi mangta hai.
System -
Usko utha ke pahle saaf kiya aur acche se mahlam patti kiya phir kapde pahna ke usko acche se blanket se dhak diya aur heater chala ke sofe par baith gya intazar karte karte karte kab so gya pata hi nhi chala . Subah kisi ki chikh se awaj khuli.
Mai socha ek sundar si ladki mujhe utha rahi thi. BC mar mura toh nhi gaya. Sala apsara, hur pari yaha mujhe utha rahi hai. Phir mujhe kal wali baat yaad aayi.
Me - apni soch par hasne laga
. Ladki - you bastard bloody hooligan what are you doing here. I know you are not up to good thing. I know that's why I ran away in the morning . You Wait, I called the police. They were here at anytime. Huhhh ( in angry mode)
Mai - BC....
Mai - yeh kya kiya tumne maine tumhe bachaya yaad karo. Aur mai kab tumhe kuch kiya.
Ladki - tumne mujhe bachaya aur woh kab hua.??
Mai - tum bathroom me thi aur gir gyi thi aur mai leke aa gya idhar yaad karo.
Ladki yaad karte hue aur jab saari baat yaad aati hai toh usse yaad ata hai woh jab bhaag ke aayi thi toh usse shower lena tha aur sona tha but woh nashe me thi halki toh gir gyi aur uthana chaha but behosh ho gyi last me use yaad aya woh nangi thi..
Ladki ( mann me)- mai gyi meri izzat lut gyi.. mera khajana isne dekh liya jise maine last 25 yrs se sambhal ke rakha tha.
Ladki - you hooligan ( gusse me), okk koi nhi but tum mere ghar me kaise ghuse aane do police ko mai tumhe pakadwati hu.
Mai - yadi mai nhi ata madam toh abhi tum bhagwan ke pass hoti.. upar se behosh toh bhaut sara khoon bah gya tha Sukar manao ki mai aa gya time par. Warna sidha narak me jaati.
Ladki - mai narak me kyu jaati.
Mai - jaan bacha ke tumne thank you v nhi kaha isiliye. But tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe jana tha kya..
upar ki aur ishara karke haste hue Ladki ( Allena parker) - you hooligan you wait.. yadi aaj tum arrest nhi hue toh phir dekhna.
Mai ( sala bc pakda gya toh gya. Idea
) - maine apna phone uske aage hilate hue isme sab record hai. Jab se mai idhar aya tab se maine record kiya hai. Mujhe laga hi tha aisa kuch hoga isiliye. Aur tum kis halat me thi police wale phir court aur phir sab dekhenge. Mai gya toh mujhe khud ko bachana toh padega na madam mere 10-20 bacche hai road par ghumte hue usse kaun palega ( rone ka natak karte hue). System -
nautanki sala. .
Allena - you holligan... Youu youuu.. ( gusse me lal pili hote hue)
Ding dong ding dong......
Mai phone hilate hue aur kamini muskan di aur gusse me gate kholne chali gyi..
Gate kholte hi 2 police wale gate par the. Aur 2 guard piche. Usme se ek woh v tha subah wala jise paise diye the. .
Allena - hii officer It was misunderstanding.
Police - ohh , is he threating you by any means you called me, any problem miss. ( Mujhe sakh ki nazar se dekhte hue) .
Mai samjh gya BC gadbad hogi jayegi yadi yeh ladki aage kuch ki toh.
Mai aage aate hue - hii comrades , it was totally misunderstanding. Baat kuch aisi thi ki kal hamara aniversary tha first love ka toh maine apni miss ko koi gift nhi diya isiliye miss thodi gussa hai. Maine allena ko kas kar kamar par pakadte hue " kyu baby"
Woh sala subah wala bodyguard mujhe aankhe phaad ke dekh raha tha.
Allena - yes police officer sorry meri traf gussa se dekhte hue. Yeh bhaut hi bhullakad hai is umar me v .
Police officer - ohh , it's okk we know you all young people's hahaaha.
Just give me answer of few questions we will go then.
Kuch questions puchne ke baad woh nikal liye.
Aur gusse me allena ne gate jor se band kiya.
Allena - you holligan, who is your baby and how dare you toch here. Apni kamar ki traf ko ishara karte hue ( gusse me)
Bc uski kamar dekhe ke hi khoo gya chikni kamar, gol gol gahri nabhi woh s shape curve sala jab chuaa tha toh tab yaad kiya kitna mulayam tha. Yaad karte hi sarir me jhurjhuri daud gyi . Ahhaha tantana gya bc. Current bc current.
Allena - you holligan, tum baaz nhi aaoge. Phir waise hi tapori wal harkat karte hue.
Mai - sorry woh tumhara figure makkhan jaisa hai na toh kho gya.
Allena proud se bolte hue - toh
Mai - nazar nhi hati.
Allena - yeh sab chodo tum yaha kyu aaye.
Mai - yeh proposal leke aya tha company ko lekar. Socha tum invest karogi. ( Jhuth bolte hue)
Allena- woh mai dekh lunga but woh woh.. vedd.. vedio ( hesitation se)
Mai - yaha se bahar niklunga toh delete kar dunga kya pata phir police bula lo.
Aap soch rahe hoge ki kaise allena abb comfortable hai mere saath toh bata du ki usko jaan bachai hai. Toh yeh normal hai but jab woh uthi thi toh panic ho gyi mujhe dekh kar. Aur uska perception mere ko lekar sahi nhi tha yaad aya kya ?? Isiliye woh abb mentally poora toh nhi kahenge but kafi had tak thik hai.
Allena - but but kisi ne dekh liya toh..
Mai - koi nhi dekhega mere alawa, waise maine poora dekha hai ( kuch yaad aate hi) phir us chiz ko yaad karte hi current daura bc poore sharir me. Woh tumhara til v bahut accha hai.
Allena daur karke mera munh band kar deti hai aur shrmane lagti hai. BC haath se munh band ki hoth se nhi jayda hawa me nhi imagination laane ka.
Allena - plz nhi ( sharmane lagti hai).
Mai haath hatate hue- okk , now I will go.
Allena - and sorry everything I have done. Really sorry and thanks for the help.
Mai - okk bye, mera number file ke piche likha hai phone karna.
Allena shocked
Mai - are project pasand aaye toh phone karna.
Mai - byee.
Aur bhaag ke nikal gya. Aur mai bahar gya toh sala guard ghur ke dekh raha tha.
Uske baad me sidha taxi me hi ruka.
Aur saath me notification...
Ding*** congratulations to the host for completing the task** [/FONT]
Host wait system is trying to evaluate the task.
Ding congratulations to the host, evaluation is B+
Ding congratulations to the host for the rewards..
Rewards are...
- 1M pound.
- 2 attribute points ( by adding it into anything you will increase that attributes)
- 1 bronze lottery ticket.
If host want to get the lottery ticket to redeem, he can redeem...
Mai - yes go for it ( in excitement)
Ek gol gol ghumne wala kuch aya uspar dher sara chiz likha tha house, car company, attribute, combat.
Gol gol ghumte ghumte house par ruka.
Ding congratulations to the host for getting a house in "ARTISIAN tower property 124 building 10 flat 105. "
Fuck fuck
Mujhe hasi aa rahi thi.
Mai - can I ask to the system why he give me this house not some other place.
System - host you somewhat have affection toward the allena so system is only trying to give the best so the host can enjoy life to the most.
Mai - thank you system ummaah..
[FONT=Lobster, cursive]Thanks.... That's all for this update...
Give review and suggestions..
Have a good day and enjoy the first update..[/FONT]