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Rex1

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๐‚๐ก๐š๐ฉ๐ญ๐ž๐ซ๐ฌ ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’ ๐ญ๐จ ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ– ๐ก๐š๐ฏ๐ž ๐›๐ž๐ž๐ง ๐ฉ๐ฎ๐›๐ฅ๐ข๐ฌ๐ก๐ž๐. ๐๐ฅ๐ž๐š๐ฌ๐ž ๐ซ๐ž๐š๐, ๐ž๐ง๐ฃ๐จ๐ฒ, ๐š๐ง๐ ๐๐จ๐งโ€™๐ญ ๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ๐ ๐ž๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฅ๐ž๐š๐ฏ๐ž ๐š ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ž.
 
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Chapter 48


Thunder Abyss ki gehraayi mein khada wo Iron Golem kisi chalti-phirti pahadi jaisa lag raha tha. Uske pure sharir par neele crystals lage thay jo aasmaan se girti bijliyon ko sokh rahe thay. Jaise hi usne apna vishal hathoda zameen par patka, ek bhayanak shockwave nikli jisne registan ki dhool ki jagah crystal ki raakh hawa mein uda di.

"Aryan, sambhal kar!" Kavya ne chillaya, usne turant apna 'Ice Mirror' shield taiyaar kiya. "Is Golem ki aura Nascent Soul Stage 4 ke barabar hai, aur yahan ki environment ise lagatar repair kar rahi hai!"

Aryan ne apne Nascent Soul avatar ko apne kandhe par float karte hue dekha. Uska chota sa avatar bhi utna hi gusse mein lag raha tha jitna Aryan.

"Mei, kya tum sun sakti ho?" Aryan ne voice-link kiya.

"Haan Aryan! Main 1st Layer ke purane scrolls padh rahi hoon. Ye Iron Golem 'Heart of Thunder' se chalta hai. Tumhe uske seene ke beech mein maujood core ko nishana banana hoga!" Mei ki awaaz dimaag mein goonji.



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#### **Combat: The Hammer vs The Soul**

Iron Golem ne apna hathoda hawa mein uthaya. **"Thunder Judgment: CRUSH!"**

Ek 50-foot lamba bijli ka hathoda aasmaan se Aryan ki taraf gira. Aryan ne **Void Step** ka use kiya, lekin Golem ne pehle hi predict kar liya tha. Usne dusre hath se Aryan ka raasta block kiya.

*Ting!*
**[Combat Analysis: Golem is using 'Magnetic Field' to track your movement.]**
**[Strategy: Use 'Asura Gravity' to disrupt the magnetism.]**

Aryan ne apni mutthi bhinchi. **"Asura Art: GRAVITY REVERSAL!"**

Achanak, Golem ke charon taraf ki gravity upar ki taraf badhne lagi. Golem ka bhari sharir jo zameen se juda tha, wo achanak hawa mein uthne laga. Uska balance bigad gaya.

"Ab meri baari!" Aryan ne apne Soul Avatar ki taraf ishara kiya.

**"Soul Secret Art: ASURA PUNCTURE!"**

Nanha avatar bijli ki raftaar se aage badha. Usne apni Shadow Fang ko ek point par focus kiya aur Golem ke seene mein maujood neele crystal par attack kiya.
*CRACK!*
Crystal mein darar aa gayi, lekin Golem ne turant aasmaan se ek bhayanak bijli khenchi aur apne aap ko dubara heal kar liya.

"Hahaha! Yahan bijli mera khoon hai!" Golem ki bhari awaaz goonji. "Tum mujhe yahan kabhi nahi hara sakte!"

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#### **The Forbidden Move: Devouring the Abyss**

Aryan ne dekha ki jab tak aasmaan se bijliyan girti rahengi, ye Golem immortal rahega. Usne ek risky faisla liya.

"Vanya, Kavya, Zara! Mujhe cover do! Pitaji, Maa... piche hatiye!"

Aryan ne apni talwar Shadow Fang ko zameen mein gaad diya aur apne 6 wings ko puri tarah phaila diya. Usne apne Nascent Soul avatar ko apne seene ke andar wapis liya aur apna muh aasmaan ki taraf khola.

**"Asura Forbidden Art: THUNDER EATER!"**

*Ting!*
**[Warning: Host is trying to absorb raw 6th Layer Thunder.]**
**[Risk of Soul Collapse: 70%.]**
**[Calculating potential gain...]**

Aryan ne aasmaan se girti har ek bijli ko apne sharir ke andar khenchna shuru kiya. Uska sharir neela padne laga aur uski ragon se bijliyan bahar nikalne lagin. Ye nazaara dekh kar Golem bhi darr gaya. Wo kida jise wo masalna chahta tha, wo ab pure Abyss ki taqat ko nigal raha tha.

"AAAAHHHHHHH!" Aryan ki cheekh ne pure canyon ko hila diya.

Usne wo saari energy apni Shadow Fang mein transfer ki aur ek vaar kiya.
**"Asura Slash: ZERO THUNDER EXECUTION!"**

Ek aisi kaali aur neeli lehar nikli jisne Golem ko hi nahi, balki uske piche maujood crystal ke pahad ko bhi do hisson mein cheer diya. Golem ka 'Heart of Thunder' pal bhar mein raakh ho gaya.

*Ting!*
**[Boss Defeated!]**
**[Absorbing Golem Core...]**
**[Nascent Soul Stage 1 -> Stage 3 (Breakthrough)!]**

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#### **Entry into the Thunder Sect: Nayi Haseena ki Entry**

Golem ke tabaah hote hi ek bada darwaza pahad ke beech mein khul gaya. Wahan se hazaron disciples bahar nikle, lekin wo hamla karne nahi, balki hairaan hokar dekhne aaye thay ki kisne unke guard ko tabaah kiya.

Disciples ke beech se ek ladki bahar aayi. Usne ek tight purple combat suit pehna tha jisme bijli ke threads lage thay. Uska chehra bohot hi sharp tha aur uski aankhein bilkul neeli thin. Uske hath mein ek 'Thunder Whip' thi.

"Mera naam Riya hai, Thunder Sect ki First Senior Sister," usne Aryan ko upar se neeche tak dekha. Uski nazron mein darr se zyada Aryan ke liye kashish thi. "Tumne hamare Golem ko hara kar ye sabit kar diya ki tum 'The Chosen One' ho sakte ho jiska hum intezaar kar rahe thay."

Vanya turant Aryan ke bagal mein khadi ho gayi aur Aryan ka hath pakad liya. "Zada 'Chosen One' bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Hum yahan sirf rasta poochne aaye hain."

Riya ne Vanya ko dekha aur halka sa muskuraayi. "Yahan rasta nahi milta, yahan sirf taqat milti hai. Aryan, hamare Sect Leader ne tumhe andar bulaya hai. Wo tumhe 6th Layer ka sabse bada raaz batana chahte hain... aur shayad main tumhe kuch aur bhi dikhana chahungi."

Riya ne Aryan ko ek wink maari. jisse Kavya aur Zara ka gussa aur badh gaya.

"Ek aur musibat," Zara ne badbadaya. "Aryan, tum jahan jate ho, wahan ladkiyan makkhiyon ki tarah kyun chipak jati hain?"

Aryan ne has kar kaha, "Yehi toh Asura ka charm hai, Zara."

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#### **Night in the Sect: A Hot Spring Moment**

Thunder Sect ke andar Aryan ko ek alag guest house diya gaya. Wahan ek 'Lightning Hot Spring' tha jahan ka paani lagatar bijli se charge rehta tha, jo cultivation ke liye best tha.

Aryan hot spring mein akela baitha tha jab darwaza khula. Use laga shayad Vanya ya Kavya aayi hongi, par wahan Riya khadi thi. Usne apni purple robe dhili ki hui thi aur uske baal khule thay.

"Aryan," Riya ne paani mein kadam rakha aur Aryan ke bilkul paas baith gayi. "Hamare Sect Leader bohot khatarnak hain. Wo tumhari Nascent Soul ko nikaal kar apna 'Immortal Body' banana chahte hain. Main tumhari madad kar sakti hoon... par badle mein mujhe tumhare Asura blood ka ek chota sa hissa chahiye."

Riya ka chehra Aryan ke honthon ke bohot kareeb tha. Aryan ne Riya ki kamar pakdi aur use apni taraf khincha. "Sirf blood? Ya kuch aur bhi?"

Riya ki saansein tej ho gayin. "Jo tum chaho... Asura King."

Lekin tabhi, hot spring ke bahar se teen bhayanak aura mehsoos huin. Kavya, Vanya aur Zara darwaze par khadi thin.

"ARYAN! BAAHAR AAO!"

Aryan ne aasmaan ki taraf dekha. "Lagta hai Sect Leader se pehle mujhe in teeno se bachna hoga."
 

krish1152

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ek sath itne update thanks bro all update good
 
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