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Adultery[SYSTEM] An 18-Year-Old’s Adulterous Adult Life with Soldier Memories
Sahil ke haath laraz rahe the thakaan se nahi…
pressure se.
Aur tab
Ding
[SYSTEM — REWARD GRANTED]
Reason:
• Continuous Survival Under Extreme Threat
• Successful Elimination of Higher-Tier Hostiles
• Adaptation Beyond Initial Parameters
Gift Unlocked:
▶ Infinite Inventory (Elementary Class)
Description:
• Non-living items storage enabled
• No weight limit
• Instant access within perception range
Sahil ne aik pal ke liye aankhen band ki.
Phir dheere se kholi.
Sahil (khud se):
“…store kar sakta hoon.”
Us ne khoon se sane huwe claws par nazar daali aur bas socha.
Agla hi pal toota hua panja hawa se gaib ho gaya.
Sahil ki bhainwen halki si upar uthin.
Sahil (khud se):
“Baghair bojh… baghair rukawat.”
Us ne phir apne stats dekhe.
Numbers ab pehle jaise nahi lag rahe the.
Stable.
Grow karte huwe.
Nazr phir neeche gayi
laashon par.
Aur phir un k Rank pr.
Us ki aankhen thodi si sikud gayin.
Sahil (khud se):
“…is liye yeh itna mehnga pada.”
Us ke haath mein pakray F-rank wolf claws
ab bilkul be-jaan lag rahe the.
Un par baari baari
barik dararain ubhar aayi.
Cracks.
Ek aur jhatkay par
claws almost toot jayenge.
Sahil ne bina hichkichahat
unhein zameen par gira diya.
Metal jaisi awaaz aayi
Un F Rank wali claws se.
Us ne qareeb padi
E-rank wolf ki laash ke paas qadam rakha..
Un ke claws zyada motay the.
Zyada lambe.
Aur un par ab bhi taqat baqi thi.
Sahil ne ghutna tek kar
poori tawajjo se
ek claw nikaala.
Phir doosra.
Unhein haath mein pakar kar us ne aik martaba ghoomaya.
Weight perfect tha.
Balance behtar.
Sahil (khud se):
“Yeh… ab kaam karega.”
Aur usi waqt
Zameen par bhaari dabao mehsoos hua.
Ek qadam.
Phir doosra.
Sahil ne sir uthaya.
Woh wolf joh abhi upar tha
ab neeche aa chuka tha.
Qad zyada qareeb se aur bhi bara lag raha tha.
Seena phaila hua.
Aankhen seedhi Sahil par.
Is dafa dekhne ke liye nahi.
Is dafa…
khatam karne ke liye.
Aur tabhi
Ding
[SYSTEM WARNING]
Threat Analysis Complete
Opponent Power Level:
▶ Significantly Higher Than User
Relative Comparison:
▶ Strength : Enemy > User
▶ Speed : Enemy > User
▶ Endurance : Enemy > User
Overall Threat Rating:
▶ EXTREME
Combat Outcome Prediction:
▶ Defeat Highly Probable
System Recommendation:
▶ Avoid Direct Confrontation
▶ Retreat or Prepare Strategically
Notification khatam hui.
Us Higher-rank wolf ne sir halka sa jhukaya
jaise keh raha ho:
Choice tumhara hai.
Fight kar k mera nashta banna ya mujhse baghte huwe nashta banna hai
Sahil ne E-rank claws ko aur tight pakra.
Sahil ki body se Khoon tapak raha tha.
Saans bhaari thi.
Lekin aankhen…
ab bhi seedhi thi.
Sahil (khud se):
“Retreat bhi aik choice hoti hai…”
Us ne aik qadam peeche liya
sirf aik.
Phir ruk gaya.
Sahil (smile ke sath):
“…lekin aaj nahi.”
Verdantia ne phir apni saans roki.
Aur agle lamhe
ya to kahani badalne wali thi
ya khatam karne wali. .
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World: "VERDANTIA: THE GREEN ABYSS"
Subah ki halki roshni jungle ke patton ke beech se neeche gir rahi thi, jaise har patta apni zindagi se roshni choos raha ho.
Hawa mein halki nami thi,
patton ki sarsarahat aur kabhi-kabhi kisi insect ki halki gunjna.
Ye shor aur jungle ka scent ek ajeeb sa peace aur tension dono ka combo de raha tha.
Isi jungle main ek Caravan dhire-dhire rasta tay kar rahi thi,
lekin caravan ke andar har kisi ke andar ek undercurrent of alertness tha.
Caravan ke andar ek khubsurat lady
Zainab Rahim, Malik Rahim ki biwi, apni khubsurat beti Aaliya ke saath bethi thi.
Zainab ka chehra ghabrahat aur worry se bhara hua tha,
lekin wo apni beti ko protect karte hue calm rehne ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Aaliya ke chehre par dar aur curiosity dono mix tha pehli baar itne dangerous creatures ko itna qareeb se dekh rahi thi.
Zainab ne apni beti ko halki si hug di, “Hamesha meri side par rehna,”
uski awaaz mein thodi si quivering lekin firm intent tha.
Caravan ke bahar guards ki formation tight thi. 8 guards: 4 frontline D-rank spearmen,
3 E-rank archers back line
, aur 1 C-rank captain
jo sab ka coordination de raha tha.
Frontline spearmen apni spears aur shields tight pakde hue, muscles tense, har angle ka dhyan rakhe hue.
Archers slightly back line, arrows ready, crossbows loaded, lekin unke haath thode shaky.
Captain, jo khud C-rank aur experienced tha, unko hand signals aur short commands de raha tha:.
“Left flank cover!
Right flank protect civilians!
Arrow volley ready! Form tight, do not break line!”
Patton ke beech se pehla Razorback Mire Beast dikhai diya.
Yeh ek charge start kar gaya—its mass aur speed dono hi impressive the.
Dusra aur teesra beast follow karte hue side sweeps aur jumps ke combination mein entry kiye.
Guards turant reaction mein aaye.
Frontline D-rank spearmen ne formation tight rakha, archers ne pehli arrow volley release ki
kuch arrows spike se bounce kar gayi, kuch lightly hit.
Captain ki awaaz clarity ke saath: “Spears ready! Formation maintain! Archers focus, civilians behind wagons! Do not let them break line!”
Beast ka pehla frontal charge hua. Spears se clash, sparks aur thud ki sound jungle mein echo hui.
Bone spikes shields par scratch kar gaye, kuch D-rank guards recoil kar gaye.
Second beast side sweep attempt kiya
ek spearman ko throw kar diya,
baaki ne blocking try ki,
lekin balance shift ho gaya.
Third beast crouch aur high jump, archers panic, captain ne turant control restore kiya.
Jungle ka environment chaotic ho chuka tha: dust clouds, scattered leaves, aur mud splash, sab milkar visibility aur movement ko challenge bana rahe the.
Civilians ke wagon ke aas-paas chaos,
Zainab apni beti ko chipka ke rakhi,
unki breathing fast, lekin woh khud bhi defensive posture mein thi.
Thodi der ke liye caravan ki formation almost toot gayi thi, lekin captain ke continuous commands aur guard discipline se abhi bhi line maintain thi.
Archers ne reload kiya aur pehli beasts ko thoda slow kiya,
lekin packs ka pressure abhi bhi dangerous tha.
Jungle ke chaos ke beech se Sahil ka silhouette dikhai diya.
Wounded tha, par Self-Healing Surge aur temporary overdrive dono active the,
pehle fights ke nishan haathon par abhi bhi dikh rahe the.
Har step, har patta, har branch ko assess karte hue usne decide kiya ke ab direct engagement hi survival ka rasta hai. “Yahan sirf formation mein reh ke bachna mushkil hai… mujhe directly inka saamna karna hoga,” usne khud se socha, poori clarity ke saath.
Beast 1 frontal charge ke liye ready hua.
Sahil ne apni Agility 46.1 aur Combat Sense 62.9 se timing measure kiya aur left side dodge kiya. Jump ke saath mid-air diagonal slash, claws ne beast ke side ko cut kiya, halka blood hawa mein ud gaya.
Beast stumble hua, par immediately recover kar gaya.
Beast 2 ne side sweep ki, mass aur speed ka combination deadly tha.
Par Sahil ne Stamina 54.3 + Endurance 61.0 ka full use kiya,
sideways roll kiya aur forelimb par claws se scratch kiya, beast ke movement thodi slow ho gayi.
Beast 3 crouch aur jump strike ke liye ready hua. Sahil ne jump kiya,
mid-air diagonal claw strike ki,
beast stagger hua aur blood splatter jungle mein ud gaya.
Guards line maintain karne ki puri koshish kar rahe the.
Frontline spearmen shields tightly pakde hue, har step cautious, lekin disciplined.
Archers pehle beast ke movement ko slow karne mein focus kar rahe the.
Captain continuously hand signals aur clear short commands de raha tha, “Left flank hold! Spears brace!
Archers, arrow ready! Line mat todna!”
Tabhi achanak Beast 2 ki side swipe se Aran thoda exposed ho gaya.
Aur Ek spike ne uske haath par shallow scratch diya.
Aran cheekha aur quickly cover ke peeche shift hua,
thoda pain face par, lekin guards ne turant arun ko shield kiya.
Sahil ne side glance kiya, temporary boost active tha, adrenaline aur clarity ka combination: “Pehle monsters, phir Aran,” usne socha.
Sahil aur captain ne ek silent strategy decide ki: frontal attacks aur side sweeps ko intercept karna, precise D-rank claws strikes,
aur guards ka coordination maintain karna.
Har strike ka effect: beast stagger, blood splatter, dust aur patton ke saath visual chaos. Har dodge aur roll ka timing perfect tha. Sahil ke andar adrenaline, strength +15%, pain inhibition active, fear suppression active, combat focus max, har move calculated.
Zainab aur Aaliya door se sab dekh rahi thi. Zainab ne softly kaha, “yeh larka... Main toh ise kabhi nahi dekha... Mujhe lagta hai yeh banda… yeh hamare liye lad raha hai.shayad Hum abhi safe ho gaye hain.”
Aaliya ne chhoti si saans li, aankhon mein dar aur thodi confidence dono ke mix ke saath.
Beast 1 aur Beast 2 stagger ho chuke the,
Beast 3 ne last desperate leap kiya, spikes ko aur aggressively swing karte hue.
Par Sahil ne apni positioning aur combat sense ka pura use kiya,
step back le kar timing measure ki, phir D-rank claws se perfect diagonal strike kiya beast ke chest aur shoulder ke joint mein, strike ke impact se beast ground par gir gaya.
Blood hawa mein ud raha tha, aur beast ki final growl jungle ke silence mein ek echo ban gayi.
Captain ne turant apni spear ka cover maintain kiya, guards bhi alert, par beast ab complete neutralized tha.
Sahil ne gehri saans le kar, thodi der ground par gira beast dekha. “Bas… ye ho gaya,” usne apne aap se kaha, muscles abhi bhi tense, adrenaline slowly kam ho raha tha.
Beast ki body ke saath hi jungle mein thodi shanti wapas aayi.
Sahil ne blood-stained claws niche rakhe aur Beast 2 aur 3 ki dead bodies check ki, confirm kar liya ke koi aur movement nahi hai.
Turant system ne notification trigger kiya:
Ding
[KILL CONFIRMED]
Targets Eliminated:
• Beast ×2 — Rank: D
• Beast ×1 — Rank: C
Threat Level: High
Combat Classification: Extreme Engagement
• Appearance: +3 → 38
• Notes:
Physical aura noticeably intensified; presence now carries pressure.
Body language confident and controlled.
Movements sharper, stance stable.
Sexual performance fully stabilized with signs of increased vitality.
Effect:
• Detect hostile killing intent within short range
• Ambush success rate against you reduced
• Reaction time slightly improved when surrounded
Condition:
• Stronger effect when facing multiple enemies
• Scales with Combat Sense
Description:
After surviving coordinated beast assaults, your instincts now respond
before conscious thought.
Ding
[REWARD GRANTED]
Special Reward:
Razorback Core Resonance (Passive)
Effect:
• Endurance temporarily increases during prolonged fights
• Self-Healing efficiency boosted under continuous damage
• Resistance to pain and shock improved
Condition:
• Activates automatically in extended combat
• Effect strength scales with Endurance
Description:
The defeat of a C-Rank beast has left a lasting imprint on your system.
Your body remembers how to endure.
System rewards ke baad jungle par subah ki halki roshni phail chuki thi.
Dhoop pedon ke darmiyan se toot-ti hui zameen par gir rahi thi jahan khoon ab bhi geela tha, lekin raat ki darawni siyahi dheere dheere peeche hat rahi thi.
Hawa thandi thi, nami se bhari hui, aur har saans ke saath mitti,
hari pattiyon aur jungli jaanwaron ke khoon ki mili-juli boo mehsoos hoti thi.
Sahil ne apni aankhen band karke gehri saans li.
Uska jism ab bhi thaka hua tha, lekin woh thakaan pehle jaisi nahi thi.
magar us dard ke neeche ek naya rhythm chal raha tha.
Jaise jism ne accept kar liya ho ke yeh uski nayi normal state hai.
Self-healing ka asar dheere dheere chal raha tha; zakhmon ke kinare tight ho rahe the, khoon jam chuka tha.
Usne apne haath dekhe ungliyan thodi si kaanp rahi thin,
lekin grip pehle se zyada mazboot thi.
Muscle memory clear thi.
Har move,
har counter,
har strike…
sab yaad tha.
Sahil (dil mein):“Yeh sirf fight nahi thi… yeh upgrade tha.”
Uski nazar jungle par phiri.
Subah ke bawajood predator awareness ka ehsaas zinda tha
koi turant khatra nahi,
lekin jungle bilkul bhi be-fikr nahi tha.
Jaise Verdantia khud use dekh rahi ho… judge kar rahi ho.
Thoda aage Aran baitha hua tha, pathar ka sahara le kar.
Uski saans ab normal thi,
chehra peela magar stable aur dard k bhav chehre se saaf pata chal rahe the.
Woh Sahil ko dekh kar seedha baithne ki koshish karta hai,
phir ruk jata hai.
Aran (dard k bawajood smile ke sath):“Subah ho gayi… aur hum abhi bhi zinda hain.”
Sahil ne bhi smile de kar haa main jawab diya.
Uske liye yeh baat koi choti cheez nahi thi yeh fact hi kaafi tha.
Usne caravan ki taraf dekha.
Guards apne zakhm bandhne mein lage hue the.
Subah ki roshni mein sab kuch zyada real lag raha tha
raat ka horror ab ek yaad ban chuka tha.
Usi waqt Sahil ne mehsoos kiya… koi use dekh raha hai.
Jab usne us taraf dekha,
uski nazar Lady Zainab Raheem se takra gayi.
Woh kuch faaslay par khari thi.
Subah ki roshni uske chehre par halki si chamak la rahi thi, jis se woh aur bhi khubsurat lag rahi thi
Sahil ne jab use dekha toh dekhte hi raha
Bala ki khubsurat
aur uski aankhen…
Un aankhon mein koi sirf shukr ya hairani nahi thi
Balkay uski nazar us tarah thi
jab koi premika apne premi ko dekhti hai,
jab woh jaan le ke uske saamne khara shakhs sirf zinda nahi,
balkay laut kar aaya hai us k paas.
Us pal ke liye Sahil ka dil halkasa thama.
Ek ajeeb sa ehsaas
Garm, magar khatarnaak.
Sahil ne foran apni nazar na chahte huwe bhi hata li.
Sahil (dil mein):“Nahi… yeh sirf meri ghalat fehmi hogi.
Ya woh abhi tak attack k sadme main hogi shayad is liye.”
Usne apne aap ko seedha kiya,
dimagh ko thanda kiya,
aur situation par wapas focus le aaya.
Isi beech, thodi door Aaliya Aran ke paas pohanchi.
Jaise hi uski nazar Aran ke zakhmi kandhe aur bandhi hui patti(joh beast k hamle k baad aran ne khud hi bandi thi) par padi, uske chehre ka rang badal gaya.
Aaliya (ghabra kar):
“Yeh… yeh sab itna zyada khoon tum theek toh ho na?”
Woh foran ghutnon ke bal baith gayi, uske zakhm ko dekhne ki koshish karti huimagar haath kaanp rahe the.
Aran ne chehre pr halki si muskurahat laane ki koshish ki.
“Zinda hoon… bas thoda sa break lena padega, lagta hai.”
Aaliya ki aankhon mein aansu chamak uthe.
“Tumhe pata bhi hai agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh—”
Uski baat adhoori reh gayi. Usne bas Aran ka haath pakad lia, jaise chhodne se dar rahi ho.
Aaliya ka poora dhyaan us par tha
Us ki ankhon main dard, darr aur care… sab saaf nazar aa raha tha.
Waha kade guards joh marham laga rahe the zakhmo par aur yeh sab dekh rahe the par kuch bhi nahi keh rahe the
Sahil ne jab aran ki baatain suni use toh aesa laga jese woh is larki ko patane ki koshish kar raha hai
Phir usne socha yeh nahi ho sakta yeh toh abhi chota hai.
Phir sahil zainab ki taraf aage badha.
Zainab ne khud pehle qadam liya.
Zainab (narm muskurahat ke sath):“Lagta hai aaj subah jungle bhi aapka shukar guzar hai.”
Sahil ne jab jungle k shukar guzar wali baat suni toh use hassi aane lagi
Use yad aaya jab se woh yaha is jungle main aaya hai kitni baar usne moat ka samna kiya hai
Sahil ne apni hansi dabaate hue jawab diya:“Lagta hai is jungle ko aadat nahi hai logon ke zinda bach jaane ki.”
Is baat par Zainab bhi halka sa hans padi.
“haan Main ne kal raat bohot kuch dekha… aur sach kahoon toh mujhe yakeen nahi tha ke hum subah dekhenge.”
Sahil ne kandhe ucha kar kaha:“Yaqeen mujhe bhi kam tha.
Lekin kabhi kabhi zidd kaam aa jaati hai.”
Zainab ne use gaur se dekha.
“Aap kaun hain, Caravan ke guards itne trained thay… phir bhi woh aap jaise nahi lad sakay.”
Sahil ne pal bhar socha.
Sach kehna mumkin nahi tha.
Sahil (aasan lehje mein):
“Bas… zindagi ne thoda sakht bana diya hai. Kaam aisa raha jahan ya toh seekhte ho,
ya zinda nahi rehte
Wese is nacheez ko sahil kehte hai.”
Zainab ne bena awaz ke apne honton se sahil ka naam ek do baar liya jese practice kar rahi ho
Phir us ne sar hilaaya, jaise jawab use kaafi lag raha ho.
“lagta hai zindagi ne aapko bohot mushkil imtihaan se guzara hai.”
Sahil ne halka sa mazak kiya:“Is liye main ab sirf subah ki chai ke imtihaan dena chahta hoon.”
Sahil k is be toke mazak par Zainab phir hans padi
is dafa thodi zyada khul kar.
“Mujhe nahi laga tha k is subah ko bhi koi mazak kar sakta hai.”
Phir isi tarah un ki kuch baate huwi sahil ko toh aesa lag raha tha k shayad woh us par fida hai
Par sahil us se seedhe seedhe pooch toh nahi sakta ta
Thodi dair baad caravan ka captain Sahil ke paas aaya.
Captain: “Aaj agar tum yahan na hotay, toh hum mein se aadhe log zinda na hotay.”
Sahil ne haath hila kar baat taal di.
“Captain, main ne sirf woh kiya jo zaroori tha.”
Captain ne gehri nazar se dekha.
“Tumhara style… tumhari positioning… yeh sirf raw strength nahi thi. Agar kabhi mauka mile, toh main tumhare sath training aur experience share karna chahoonga.”
Sahil ki aankhon mein halki si chamak aayi.
“Yeh offer main mana nahi karoon ga.
Mujhe abhi bohot seekhna hai.”
Captain ne muskurate hue haath milaya.
Akhir mein Zainab ne Aaliya aur Aran ki taraf dekha, phir Sahil ki taraf rukh kiya.
Zainab (serious lekin narm lehje mein):
“Hamara village yahan se zyada door nahi. Wahan behtar ilaaj ho sakta hai. Aran ke zakhm ko abhi dekhna zaroori hai.”
Us k aese dekhne par
Sahil na toh bilkul bhi nahi kar sakta tha us ne Aran aur Aaliya ko dekha, phir jungle ki taraf ek nazar daali.
Sahil:“Chaliye. Village tak saath chalna hi behtar rahega.”
Zainab ke chehre par sukoon sa utar aaya.
Itne main sahil k sath kade Captain ne apni talwar ko zameen mein halka sa gaad kar awaaz buland ki:“zyadha Zakhmi log bandage karein.
Jo thode theek hain,
woh monsters ki bodies secure karein.
Beast remnants yahan chhor dena bewaqoofi hogi.”
Guards bina sawal ke harkat mein aa gaye.
Kuch log Razorback Mire Beast ke paas gaye.
Uska bhaari jism ab bhi garam tha,
jaise jungle ki mitti uski garmi ko apni saans se peene ki koshish kar rahi ho.
Do guards ne mil kar uske peeth par jamay hue hard plates ko kaatna shuru kiya.
Ek guard ne zor lagate hue kaha:“Iski peeth ka shell intact hai.
Village ke armourer is se shield ya chest plate bana sakta hai.”
Doosra guard uski gardan ke paas jhuk kar bola:
“Aur yeh glands… agar yeh waqai Mire Beast hai, toh is ka venom dry kar ke traps ya poison arrows ke liye use ho sakta hai.”
Thodi door, do aur guards dusre beast ke paas thay
us ke daant aur lambi curved claws nikaalne mein masroof.
Unke chehron par thakan thi,
lekin haath professional taur par kaam kar rahe thay.
“Yeh claws intact hain,” ek ne kaha.
“Trader achi qeemat dega. Agar nahi bhi, toh spear tips ban sakti hain.”
Zameen par rakhi hui laashon ke paas kuch aur guards hide aur thick skin ko seedha kaat rahe thay.
Unhon ne khoon aur mitti saaf kar ke unhein fold kiya, jaise yeh kaam roz ka ho.
Captain ne monsters ki taraf ishara kiya aur phir Sahil ki taraf dekha.
“Un Beast Remnants par tumhara poora haq hai. Tum ne hi unhein maara hai.”
Sahil ne foran sar hila diya.
“Nahi, captain. Rehne dein. Mujhe in se kuch nahi chahiye.”
Captain ne kuch kehne se pehle Sahil ke haath par nazar daali.
Woh ruk gaya.
Uski aankhen claws par jam gayin
Use pehchanne mein ek pal bhi nahi laga.
“Yeh wolves ke claws hain,”
us ne yaqeen se kaha. “Aur yeh D-rank ke lagte hain.”
Toh Sahil ne bhi use sachai bata di.
“Pehle F aur E-rank thay. Baad mein pack leader mila.”
Yeh sun kar paas kharay guards ek doosre ki taraf dekhne lage.
Kisi ne kuch nahi kaha, lekin hairani sab ke chehron par thi.
Zainab thodi door khadi yeh sab dekh rahi thi.
Chehre par koi wazeh reaction nahi,
magar dil ke andar khamosh lehr chal rahi thi.
Zainab(dil main): Hay… yeh kitna powerful hai.
Ek hi toh dil hai… kitni baar jeetega yeh?
Us ne khud ko seedha rakha, jaise kuch mehsoos hi na hua ho,
lekin dil apni jagah tez ho chuka tha.
Zainab(khud se): Isay sirf larte hue dekh kar hi…
insaan apna sab kuch bhool sakta hai.
Yeh sochte hi Zainab ne sahil se nazar hata li
magar dil ne pehli baar bina ijazat jeetna shuru kar diya tha.
Captain ne gehri saans li.
“Is ka matlab tum ne monsters sirf in claws, pathar aur lakri se sambhale.”
Sahil ne bas haan mein sar hila diya.
Captain ne faisla sunaya.
“Phir yeh tay raha. Village pohanch kar main tumhein apni taraf se ek weapon gift karunga. Is baar inkaar nahi hoga.”
Sahil ne halki muskurahat ke sath jawab diya:“Achha. Main mana nahi karunga.”
Udhar Aaliya Aran ke paas baithi thi.
Uski chot dekh kar woh ghabra gayi.
“Tum chup mat raho,” us ne foran kaha. “Zyada dard ho raha hai kya?”
Aran ne halki si muskurahat ke sath sir hilaaya.
“Nahi… bas thoda sa.”
Aaliya ne uski patti ko sambhal kar theek kiya.
Uske lehje mein fikr saaf thi aur Aran ko yeh achha lag raha tha,
chahe woh kuch keh na saka.
Kuch dair baad caravan dobara rawana ho gaya.
Guards aage, gaadiyan beech mein, aur sab ke qadam village ki taraf uth chuke thay.
Is tarah sahil aur aran un k sath un k village k liye rawana huwe
Ek aur mission complete aur is baar rewards ki ladi laga di system ne. Ab Village me kia scene banega dekhna hoga. Aur Sahil apni dunia me wapas kaisay jaata hai. I think yaha se pura train hoker jaayega.
Ek aur mission complete aur is baar rewards ki ladi laga di system ne. Ab Village me kia scene banega dekhna hoga. Aur Sahil apni dunia me wapas kaisay jaata hai. I think yaha se pura train hoker jaayega.
Sahil ne Rivermark ki galiyon se guzarte hue
The greenveil market ka rukh kiya.
Subah ka waqt tha.
Hawa mein thandi nami thi,
aur zameen par raat ki os abhi tak baqi thi.
Practice hall greenveil market k raaste main hi aata tha
joh gaon ke ek khulay hisse mein tha
lakri ke motay pillars,
khula saahan,
aur deewaron par purane battle-formations ke nishaan.
Sahil ne apni raah badli.
Bazaar ka rasta lene se pehle practice hall chala gaya.
Jaha kahin bachon ki awaazein, Aur practice hall se lakri ki talwaron ke takraane ki tez goonj.
Ssh—thak!
Thud—thak!
Sahil ne ruk kar andar dekha.
Aaliya aur Aran
baqi trainees ke sath practice kar rahe the.
Lines mein kharay log,
wooden swords,
aur ek senior guard unhein commands de raha tha.
Talwaron ki takrahat, pairon ki gard, aur focused chehray
sab kuch ek rhythm mein chal raha tha.
Sahil ne ek pillar ke saath tik kar
khamoshi se dekha.
Practice rukhi toh
Aaliya ki nazar Sahil par padhi.
Woh thoda chonki
phir foran seedhi khadi ho gayi.
Aran ne bhi dekha
aur turant uske paas aa gaya.
“bhai Aap yahan?”
usne hairani se poocha.
Sahil ne halka sa ishara kiya,
“The greenveil market ja raha tha.
Socha dekhta chaloon.”
“Aur tum dono yaha”
Aran:hum yaha practice kar rahe the.
“Practice?”
Sahil ne seedha poocha, awaaz calm thi.
“Tumhe practice ki kya zaroorat?”
Ek nazar aaliya pe dali aur phir aran se poocha.
Aran ne ek qadam aage badh kar kaha,
“Main aapke sath khara rehna chahta hoon.
Usne Sahil ki aankhon mein dekhte hue bola,
"Aapka support banna chahta hoon…"
Phir dheere se
"na ke bojh.”
Uski awaaz mein decided sincerity thi.
Sahil ne dono ko dekha.
Phir muskuraya
Usne Aran ke kandhe par
halka sa haath rakha.
“Aran tum mere liye bhoj nahi ho.”
Usne aran se kaha.
“main ne tum se wadha kiya tha,
Tumhari zindagi ko sahi karne ka.“
Phir usne aran ki ankhon main dekhte huwe kaha,
“ is liye Tum meri zimedari ho,
na k bhoj”
Sahil ne ek nazar
practice hall par daali,
phir kaha
“mujhe ab chalna chahiye”
Aur mud kar chal diya
greenveil market
ki taraf.
Kuch hi pal main Sahil greenveil market mein daakhil hua.
dukandaar apna samaan saja rahe the,
kahin se garam chai ki khushboo aa rahi thi,
kahin lohe par hathode ki awaaz.
Aur beech beech mein…
nazrein.
Log use dekh rahe the.
Seedha nahi
chori chori,
kandhe ke upar se,
aankhon ke kone se.
“yeh wahi hai na us raat wala”
Ek admi ne doosre se kaha.
“haan wahi hai jis ne dawa kiya tha.”
Doosre ne kaha.
“kis cheez ka dawa kiya tha?“
Ek aur admi ne kaha.
“kya tumhe nahi pata?
Is ne kaha tha keh eastside par monsters aaye the
aur is ne akele hi use mar diya.”
Pehle wale ne haste huwe kaha.
“phir kya huwa.”
Ek admi ne curiosity se kaha.
“Hona kya tha,
Captain khud gaye the kuch guards k sath pata karne k yeh sach bol raha hai ya nahi.”
“captain ne check karne k baad kaha ke
““Khoon toh tha, par laashein nahi mili.””
“Agar maare ho toh lashein q nahi the
Shayad kisi aur cheez ka hi khoon zameen par phenk kar hero banne ki koshish kar raha tha.”
Baatein dheemi awaaz mein thi,
lekin curiosity tez.
Kuch chehron par shaq tha,
kuch par khauf,
aur kuch par… bechaini.
Sahil ne yeh sab mehsoos kiya.
Dil ki dhadkanon ka pattern, awaazon ka pitch,
aur aankhon ki movement
Predator Awareness se sab record kar liya.
Lekin usne koi reaction nahi diya.
Na ruk kar safai,
na palat kar jawab. Bas apni raah chalta raha.
Uske qadam seedhe us dukaan ki taraf badhe
jahan Beast Remnants kharide jaate the
(haddi, core fragments, claws, scales
jo bhi monster se bacha ho.)
Sahil beasts-remnants wali dukaan ke saamne aa kar ruk gaya.
Dukaan purani thi, lakdi ka counter, aur peeche shelves par alag alag jars aur sacks.
“jee main apki kya madad kar sakta hoon.”
Dukandar ne bade saleeke se kaha.
Sahil ne apna haath aage badhaya
jaise hawa ko pakad raha ho.
Aur phir
Infinite Inventory.
Ek pal ke liye kuch bhi nahi hua.
Phir achanak
THUD.
Pehli monster ki laash zameen par aa giri.
Khoon ki halki si boo,
bhari jism ka zameen se takrana,
aur logon ki aankhon ka phail jaana.
Usne haath se dher ki taraf ishara kiya.
“Itne monsters ke remnants nikalne mein bhi bohot waqt lagega.
Aur market ke saare coins mila kar bhi… shayad poori qeemat…”
Sahil ne usey beech mein hi rok diya.
Uski awaaz shaant thi, bilkul seedhi.
“Koi baat nahi.”
Shopkeeper ki aankhen aur zyada khul gayi.
“Jitne paise is waqt shop mein hain,”
Sahil ne calmly kaha,
“utne hi de dena. Baqi baad mein dekh lenge.”
Market mein khade log ek doosre ki taraf dekhne lage.
Kisi ke chehre par hairani,
kisi par yaqeen na aane wali muskaan.
Shopkeeper ne kuch pal Sahil ko ghoor kar dekha
jaise samajhne ki koshish kar raha ho
ke kya yeh aadmi waqai real hai ya nahi.
Phir usne jaldi jaldi apni shop ke andar se
coins ke bags nikaalne shuru kiye.
Chhote, bade
jo bhi tha.
Usne saare bags dono haathon se Sahil ki taraf badha diye.
“Y-yeh… yeh sab hai jo is waqt mere paas hai.”
Usne coins dete waqt Sahil ke chehre ki taraf dekha bhi nahi
jaise nazar milana bhi jurat manta ho.
Sahil ne bina ginti kiye
coins ko utha kar
seedha apni infinite inventory mein daal diya.
Ek bhi sikka awaaz tak nahi kar paaya.
Shopkeeper ka chehra ab bilkul khaali ho chuka tha
na laalach,
na dukh,
sirf gehri si izzat.
Sahil ne bas halka sa sir hilaaya.
Aur bina peeche dekhe
market ke andar ki taraf chal pada.
Uske jaate hi
jaise market mein dabbi-dabbi awaazein phir se ubharne lagi.
“Usne… poora stock de diya aur gina tak nahi…”
“Yeh aadmi kis level ka hai…?”
“ab Samajh aaya. ”
ek aadmi ne dheemi awaaz mein kaha.
“Us raat sahil ne saare monsters maar kar
seedha apni inventory mein daal liye honge.”
Doosra turant bola,
“Is liye captain ko eastside par
sirf khoon mila…
lashen nahi.”
“jis se logon ko laga hoga yeh jhoot bol raha hai,”
teesra aadmi sar hila kar bola,
“par ab… ab toh aankhon ke saamne sab kuch aa gaya.”
“Kis kis ka khoon jam gaya tha jab
Woh bade wale monster ki lash nikli?”
kisi ne almost be-ikhtiyar kaha.
“Aur itni badi inventory…”
ek budha dukandar dheere se muskuraya,
“itni badi k baare main toh shayad hi main ne apni zindagi main kisi se suna hoga.”
“Kehte hain high rank Blacksmith mein bhi
sirf gin-chune Blacksmith ke paas inventory hoti hai.”
“Lagta hai hum us level se bhi upar ke Blacksmith ko
apni market mein khada dekh rahe the.”
"joh Blacksmith hone k sath sath ek warrior bhi hai."
Awaazon ka lehja badal chuka tha
ab shakk nahi,
sirf tasleem aur tareef thi.
Gaon Rivermark ke bahar khuli zameen par do mard aamne-saamne kharay thay.
Dono ke haathon mein talwaar thi.
Ek ka stance mazboot tha
pair zameen mein jamay hue,
body ka wazan bilkul balanced.
Doosra zyada seedha khara tha.
Talwaar pakri hui thi, lekin grip aur footwork raw tha
jaise jism tayar ho,
magar aadat abhi bani na ho.
Clang!
Talwaaren takraayi
tez aur bhaari.
Lambi qad-kaathi wala aadmi aik qadam peechay hata, phir foran counter kiya.
Uska swing saaf tha
naa extra movement,
naa zaya force.
Doosra mushkil se vaar rok paaya.
Clang! Clang!
Kayi martaba talwaar uske haath se phisalne ko hui.
Pasina beh raha tha.
Saans bhaari ho chuki thi.
Phir bhi woh peeche nahi hata.
Is dafa usne apni body par zor dala
woh strength jo usey pehle mil chuki thi.
Uske muscles tight huay,
reaction tez hui,
aur kuch lamhon ke liye lagne laga
ke woh pace match kar lega.
Ek heavy block.
Phir ek counter strike.
Magar technique
abhi bhi wahan nahi thi.
THUD!
Ek tez kick seedha chest par laga.
Talwaar haath se chhoot kar door ja giri.
Woh aadmi peechay gira
mitti udi.
Saamne wala talwaar neeche kar ke ruk gaya.
“Phir se haar gaye.”
Is awaaz mein ghamand nahi tha.
Sirf haqeeqat.
Zameen par baitha aadmi muskuraya
thakki hui, lekin khuli muskurahat.
Woh aur koi nahi, Sahil tha
jo apni stats ke sath sath apni rewards ko bhi use kar raha tha.
Magar phir bhi haar gaya.
“Lagta hai meri body mujhe bacha rahi hai,”
usne gehri saans ke beech main ahista se kaha,
“warna technique ke baghair main kab ka gir chuka hota.”
Yeh usne khud se kaha.
Saamne wala talwaar kandhe par rakh kar bola:
“Tum taqatwar ho,
par sirf taqat se har baar jeet nahi paoge.”
Woh koi aur nahi bal k Captain tha
Rivermark ka sab se taqatwar swordsman.
Sahil ne uth kar apni talwaar uthayi aur Captain ki taraf dekha.
“Tum C-Rank ho, hai na?”
Captain ne sir hilaaya.
“Kaafi arsey se.”
Sahil ne thora ruk kar poocha:
“Tum se bhi zyada taqatwar koi fighter hai is gaon mein?”
Captain ka jawab seedha tha.
“Nahi. Rivermark mein nahi.”
Phir usne khud ki taraf ishara kiya.
“Isi liye mujhe Captain banaya gaya hai.”
Usne zameen par talwaar ki nok tikayi.
“Yahan agar main gir jaaon…
toh poora gaon gir jaata hai.”
Sahil ki aankhein patli ho gayin.
“Phir bhi… tum log un beasts se haar gaye.”
“Tumhare paas log thay. Strategy thi.”
“Toh phir?”
Captain ki aankhon ka rang badal gaya.
Awaaz bhaari ho gayi.
“Kyunkay…”
Woh aik lamha ruka.
“Woh beasts sirf taqatwar nahi thay.”
“Unke paas leader tha.”
“Ek aisa jo apne rank se upar fight kar raha tha.”
“Hum ne usey underestimate kar diya.”
“Woh… unexpected monster tha.”
Captain ne gehri saans li.
Uski nazar jungle ki taraf chali gayi.
“Shayad jungle ki gehraiyon mein kuch ho raha hai.”
Sahil ke brows sikur gaye.
“Matlab?”
Captain ne talwaar ki nok se zameen par ek lakeer kheench di.
“Yeh jo low-rank beasts hain na,” usne kaha,
“yeh apni marzi se gaon ke itna qareeb nahi aate.”
“Low-rank monsters aam tor par safe zones ke bahar rehte hain.”
“Magar is dafa…
woh bhag kar idhar aa rahe thay.”
Sahil ne dheere se kaha:
“Bhag kar?”
“Haan.”
“Jaise koi unhein apni jagah chhorne par majboor kar raha ho.”
Uski awaaz aur bhaari ho gayi.
“Yeh mumkin hai ke jungle ke andar koi aisa monster ho
jo itna taqatwar ho
ke chhote ranks ke beasts
sirf zinda rehne ke liye idhar-udhar phail rahe hon.”
Sahil kuch lamhon tak khamosh raha.
Phir bola:
“Agar yeh sab low-rank monsters hain…”
Uski nazar jungle par jami rahi.
“Toh andar ka monster kis rank ka ho sakta hai?”
Captain ne Sahil ko dekha.
Is baar uski aankhon mein warning thi.
“Monster ranks seedhi hoti hain,” usne samjhaya.
“F-Rank sab se neeche hota hai.”
“Unki intelligence aam insaan jaisi hoti hai
dar, bhook aur survival ke siwa kuch nahi.”
“E aur D-Rank thode strong hote hain,
magar trained fighters ke liye manageable.”
“C-Rank,” usne apni taraf ishara kiya,
“yahan se asli danger shuru hota hai.”
“Yeh beasts strategy aur instincts dono rakhte hain.”
“B aur A-Rank
ek akela bhi gaon ya shehar tabah kar sakta hai.”
Sahil ne saans dheemi ki.
Captain ne aakhri jumla ruk kar kaha:
“Aur S-Rank…”
“Unke baare mein sirf kahaniyan hoti hain.”
Kuch dair khamoshi rahi.
Phir Captain ne lehja halka kiya.
“Lekin yaad rakho—yeh sab sirf theory hai.”
“Zaroori nahi ke andar koi S-Rank ho.”
“Ho sakta hai jungle ka balance bigar gaya ho.”
“Ya koi aur wajah ho…
jiska humein abhi pata nahi.”
Sahil ne dheere se sir hilaaya.
Phir usne aik aur sawal poocha:
“ kya is gaon ke bahar
tum se bhi zyada strong warriors hain?”
Captain ne sir hilaate hue kaha:
“Is gaon ke bahar
mujh se bhi zyada powerful fighters aur magicians maujood hain.”
“Isi liye Rivermark sirf apni had tak safe hai.”
Sahil hairaan ho gaya.
“Magicians…?”
Sahil ko aise hairaan dekh kar Captain bola:
“Tumhein magicians ke baare mein pata nahi?”
Sahil thora sa ruk gaya.
“…Magicians?”
Captain ki bhonhein halki si uth gayin.
“Haan.”
“Is duniya mein fighters ke sath magicians bhi hote hain.”
Sahil seedha khara ho gaya.
“Magic… real hoti hai?”
Sahil kuch keh na saka.
Uske liye yeh sab bilkul naya tha.
Usne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha
ke taqat sirf talwaar ya body tak mehdood nahi hoti.
Phir Sahil ne poocha:
“Rivermark mein koi magician kyun nahi hai?”
Captain ne seedha jawab diya.
“Yeh gaon fighters ka hai, mages ka nahi.”
“Magicians zyada tar gaon ke bahar rehte hain
forts, academies aur trade cities ke qareeb.”
“Unke bhi ranks hote hain F se le kar A tak.”
“Har magician ek hi type ki magic nahi karta.”
Usne ungliyon par ginaya:
“Elemental mages: aag, baraf, bijli.”
“Enhancers: jo body ya weapons ko boost karte hain.”
“Healers: rare hote hain, bohot qeemti.”
“Summoners: sab se risky,
kyunkay agar control chhoot jaaye toh…”
Usne baat adhoori chhor di.
“Is gaon ke bahar mujh se bhi zyada powerful fighters aur magicians maujood hain,”
Captain ne aakhri baat kahin.
“Isi liye Rivermark sirf apni had tak safe hai.”
Sahil ne apni training talwaar ko mazboot pakra.
Agar yeh sirf shuruaat hai…
toh aage kya hoga?
Sahil apne hi socho main koya tha
Toh Captain bina kuch kahe mud gaya.
Usne sirf haath ke ishare se Sahil ko apne peeche chalne ka signal diya.
Training grounds ke andar ka hissa nahi
woh usey side se ek aisi jagah le gaya
jo zyada istemal mein nahi thi.
Zameen par purani talwaar ke nishaan thay.
Boot prints, drag marks, aur jagah jagah
jam chuki mitti par phati hui lakeeren.
Lagta tha yahan practice nahi,
real sparring hoti rahi ho.
Dhool aur mitti hawa mein halki si uth rahi thi.
Zameen uneven thi
jaise kisi ne jaan bujh kar ise smooth nahi rehne diya ho.
Captain ruk gaya.
Uski nazar zameen ke paas rakhe
ek simple se weapon rack par padi.
Usne jhuk kar wahan se
ek talwaar uthayi.
Blade par kahin bhi chamak nahi thi.
Koi naqsh, koi glow, koi hero-type design nahi.
Sirf steel.
Seedhi, practical, aur heavy enough.
Captain ne talwaar ko ek dafa haath mein ghumaya
balance check kiya
phir Sahil ki taraf badha di.
“Jaise maine kaha tha,”
Captain ne seedhi awaaz mein kaha,
“yeh tohfa hai. Mana mat karna.”
Sahil ne talwaar ko dekha.
Steel simple tha.
Grip rough, jaise slip hone hi na de.
Weight bilkul center mein.
Na magic ka asar,
na kisi legend wali feel.
Sirf ek weapon.
“tumhe toh pata hai k main sword chalane k baare main itna nahi jaanta,”
Sahil ne seedha kaha.
Captain ke chehre par halki si muskurahat aayi.
Woh talwaar aur aage badha diya.
“Tabhi toh de raha hoon.”
Sahil ne haath badhaya.
Jaise hi ungliyon ne grip pakri
uske jism mein ek halki si jhanak si daur gayi.
Balance natural laga…
lekin har muscle alert ho gaya.
Jaise body keh rahi ho:
Galat movement ki gunjaish nahi.
Description:
• Balanced steel blade forged for combat training
• Suitable for strength-based and technique-based users
• Weapon durability above village standard
Status:
Bound to User (Temporary)
Note:
Weapon potential increases with user mastery.
Captain ne peeche se kaha,
“ab Sirf taqat par depend mat karna.”
“Weapon ko samajhna seekho.”
Uske alfaaz abhi hawa mein the ke usne tone badal di
zyada serious, zyada seedhi.
“Ab test ke liye ready ho jao.”
Sahil thora sa hichkichaya.
“Par… abhi toh humari proper training bhi nahi hui.”
Captain ne palat kar use dekha.
“Yahi training hai.”
Uski awaaz mein koi shak nahi tha.
“Wese bhi, main tumhein pehle bhi monsters se ladte hue dekh chuka hoon.”
“Tum survive karna jaante ho.”
“Baaki cheezain field mein seekhi jaati hain.”
Sahil kuch kehna chahta tha, magar Captain ne baat aage badha di.
“Chalo.”
Woh aage badha, aur Sahil uske peechhe chal diya.
Thodi der baad, Captain use village ki deewar ke bahar le aaya
ek aisi side jahan aam log nahi jaate.
Wahan zameen par purane nishaan thay: ghisne ke, panjon ke, aur kuch jagah par gehri lakeerain jaise kisi cheez ne bar-bar charge ki ho.
Captain ke saath teen guards thay. Sab ke haath mein weapons, lekin stance relaxed jaise yeh jagah unke liye nayi na ho.
Captain ne ruk kar aage ishara kiya.
“Yeh monsters yahan kuch din pehle aaye hain.”
“Abhi tak humne inhein poori tarah clear nahi kiya.”
Usne Sahil ki taraf dekha.
“Tumhari fight in ke saath hogi.”
Sahil ne deewar ke bahar khuli jagah ko dekha. Uska grip apni talwar par apne-aap tight ho gaya.
Captain ne awaaz dheemi ki, magar warning clear thi.
“Fikar mat karo.”
“Jab tumhein lage ke tum aur nahi lad paoge…”
Usne do ungliyon se hawa mein chhota sa ishara kiya.
“…bas signal dena.”
Phir usne peechhe kharay guards ki taraf ishara kiya.
“Main aur yeh log turant intervene kar lenge.”
Guards mein se ek ne halki si muskurahat ke sath sir hilaaya
jaise keh raha ho, akela nahi chhorenge.
Captain ne aakhri baat kahi:
“Magar jab tak tum kharay ho…”
“Yeh fight tumhari hai.”
Sahil ne gehri saans li.
Training ground nahi.
Dummy targets nahi.
Sirf woh, uski talwar
aur asli monsters.
Tabhi sahil k Left side ke broken fence se Razorhide Jackal nikla
low stance, spine jhuki hui, claws zameen ko cheerte hue jaise mitti uske neeche cheekh rahi ho.
Har qadam silent tha, lekin pressure real.
Right flank se Grimhorn Boaṛ ne heavy saans ke sath entry li.
Uska bhari jism zameen ko hila raha tha
har step ke sath dharti thodi si kaanpti,
jaise warning de rahi ho.
Aur un dono ke peeche…
shadows ke andar se Ashfang Lurker.
Uski aankhen halki green glow ke sath chamak rahi thin.
Munh ke kinare se poison saliva drip karta hua zameen par tapak raha tha
jahaan gira, mitti halki si sizzle ke sath kaali pad gayi.
Sahil ne talwar ko dono haathon mein pakra.
Uska dimaag bilkul clear tha.
No panic.
No rush.
Strength: 60.7
Is level par uska grip aam insaan se kaafi zyada strong tha.
Sword ka wazan uske liye issue nahi tha
blade steady thi, lekin technique… abhi bhi raw.
Razorhide Jackal ne pehli leap li.
Sahil ne block kiya.
Perfect nahi
angle thoda off tha.
Blade phisli.
Jackal ke claws zameen mein dhans gaye,
EENTCH—
pathar aur mitti hawa mein udi.
“Focus…”
Šahil ne khud se kaha.
Usi waqt Grimhorn Boar ne charge kiya.
Sahil ne Agility: 48.9 ka use kiya
full dodge nahi, sirf ek tight half-step.
Boar ka bhari momentum uske paas se nikal gaya.
Charge waste ho gaya,
lekin distance khatam ho chuki thi.
uracy.
Ashfang Lurker ne side se poison spit kiya.
Isi lamhe Combat Sense: 68.1 trigger hua.
Sochne ka waqt nahi mila
body ne command khud le li.
Sahil ne talwar ghoomai,
blade ki trajectory se poison ke path ko cut kiya.
Hiss
green droplets hawa mein hi split ho gaye.
Endurance: 65.4 ki wajah se recoil absorb ho gaya.
Arms shake nahi hui.
Grip loose nahi hua.
Lekin warning aa chuki thi.
Ding
[SYSTEM — WARNING]
User relying on raw stats.
Weapon proficiency: Insufficient
Sahil ne daant bheench li.
Sirf taqat kaam nahi karegi…
Usne weapon ko mehsoos kiya
weight, balance, edge alignment.
Gun nahi.
Knife nahi.
Sword ka apna logic tha.
Apna flow.
Aur phir
Ding
[SKILL UNLOCKED]
▶ Weapon Adaptation (Passive)
[SKILL UNLOCKED]
Name: Weapon Adaptation
Type: Passive
Rank: Unique
Effect:
• Instinctive adaptation to unfamiliar weapons
• No handling penalty on first use
• Weapon balance, grip, and momentum auto-adjusted
• Prior combat experience converted into weapon logic
Talwar ka wazan achanak fit ho gaya.
Jaise blade ne uska haath pehchaan liya ho.
Stance apne-aap adjust hua.
Grip angle correct hua.
Momentum smooth ho gaya.
Razorhide Jackal ne dobara leap li.
Is baar Sahil ne block nahi kiya.
Weapon Adaptation ke baad talwar ka flow uske jism ke sath sync ho chuka tha.
Jackal ka jump predict ho gaya.
Sahil ne Combat Sense: 68.1 ki madad se timing read ki
half-step side, blade ko thoda neeche rotate kiya.
Strength: 60.7 ki wajah se slash shallow nahi raha.
Steel ne seedha Jackal ki ribs cut ki.
Blood hawa mein utra,
Jackal ka jism zameen par gira
aik dafa phir hil bhi na saka.
Bohat khoobsurat update hai. Training aane wale time sahil ki bohat help karegi aur sath me ek hatyar usse mansoob ho gaya hai. Ek sath 3 monster ko maar ker sab ko chokanna kar diya hai magar Captain ko kuch shak to hua hoga ki ko abhi talwar bazi me har raha thaa woh ek dum se kaisay pro ki tarah use kar raha hai .
Seene ke andar jo tension thi, usay dheere dheere neeche daba kar, usne apna rukh us ghar ki taraf kar li
jahan Aran rest kar raha tha.
Darwaza aadha khula hua tha.
Sahil ne zyada socha nahi.
Seedha andar chala gaya.
Aur phir
woh aik pal ke liye ruk gaya.
Kamray ke andar Aran bistar par aadha baitha hua tha.
Chehra thaka hua, lekin aankhon mein zindagi thi.
Uske bilkul paas Aliya khari thi
itni qareeb ke dono ke darmiyan faasla na ke barabar tha.
Aliya ka aik haath Aran ke kandhay par tha.
Doosra uski shirt ke qareeb.
Aran kuch keh raha tha, dheemi awaaz mein.
Aisi awaaz jo sirf paas kharay shakhs ke liye hoti hai.
Aliya uski baat par halki si muskurayi…
aur phir
ek chhota sa kiss
Aran ke gaal ke qareeb.
“…ahem.”
Sahil ne jaan-boojh kar khansi ki,
taake apni maujoodgi ka ehsaas dila sake.
Dono jaise aik dum se hosh mein aa gaye.
Aliya ne hadbadahat mein apne haath foran wapas kheench liye.
Uski aankhon mein aik pal ke liye ghabrahat chamki.
Aran ke chehre par seedhi si shock likhi hui thi.
“S-Sahil… b-bhai?!”
Aliya ne turant seedha kharay hote hue kaha,
jaise apni hi baat se bhaag rahi ho:
“Main— mujhe— mujhe kuch kaam yaad aa gaya!”
Usne Sahil ki taraf dekhe baghair baat jaari rakhi:
“Aran ko aaraam ki zarurat hai.
Main… main baad mein dekhne aa jaungi.”
Aur phir,
jaldi jaldi ijazat le kar
kamray se bahar chali gayi.
Darwaza band ho gaya.
Kamray mein khamoshi chha gayi.
Aisi khamoshi
jismein sirf saanson ki awaaz sunayi deti hai.
Sahil ne Aran ki taraf dekha.
Phir uske chehre par aik ajeeb si,
aadhi shararat aur aadhi samajh wali muskurahat aa gayi.
“…acha,”
usne dheere se kaha,
“lagta hai main ghalat waqt par aa gaya.”
Aran ne pehle kuch nahi kaha.
Phir usne apna chehra side par ghuma liya.
“Woh… actually…”
Sahil ne usay haath utha kar roka.
“Chhor.”
Phir seedha sawal kiya,
“yeh kab se chal raha hai?”
Kuch pal ki khamoshi ke baad Aran ne gehri saans li
aur bolna shuru kiya.
“Kal… jab un par attack hua tha na…”
“jab main thoda zakhmi tha…”
Uski awaaz dheemi ho gayi.
“Aliya hi thi jo mere paas ruki—
ilaaj ke baad bhi.”
“aur Kal usne kaha ke usey dar lagta hai
ke main akela reh jaunga.”
Usne aik pal ka waqfa liya.
“Aaj…”
“Aaj bas baat karte karte…
flow mein ho gaya.”
Sahil ne usay upar se neeche dekha.
Phir bina ghoomay phiray keh diya:
“Dekhne mein toh tum itne khaas bhi nahi ho.”
“Thode se mote lagte ho, honestly.”
Aran ne aankhen sikur kar Sahil ko dekha.
“Wah bhai,”
“dost ho ya dushman?”
Sahil ne hansi daba kar kaha:
“Lekin haan…”
“tumhari yeh neeli aankhen—
yeh waqai khubsurat hain.”
Aran ke chehre par halki si muskurahat aa gayi.
“Aapki zubaan tez hai,”
“lekin aankhen theek jagah dekhti hain.”
Phir usne Sahil ko ghoorte hue kaha:
“Waise…
kal raat aap ne bhi toh
Elder Raheem ke gift ke sath raat guzari thi.”
Sahil ne turant haath utha diya.
“Arre— woh kuch aur gift tha.”
“Hmm?”
Aran ne muskurate hue kaha.
“Haan,”
“mujhe pata hai konsa gift tha.”
Uski muskurahat aur gehri ho gayi.
“Aur yeh bhi pata hai
ke kitni awaazein aa rahi thi.”
Sahil ka chehra thoda sa laal ho gaya.
“Tum abhi bache lagte ho,”
usne baat ghumate hue kaha,
“par harkatein kuch aur hi kehti hain.”
Aran hansa.
“Aap bhi kuch kam nahi ho.”
Kuch der dono hans-te rahe.
Halki si hansi,
jo dil ka bojh halka kar deti hai.
Phir Sahil ne poocha:
“Ab tumhare zakham kaise hain?”
“Abhi theek hain,”
Aran ne kaha.
“Aur aap?”
“Aap ko toh bohot chot aayi thi—
aap ke zakham kaise hain?”
“Saaray theek ho gaye,”
Sahil ne seedha jawab diya.
“System ki wajah se.”
Aran ne pal bhar ke liye neeche dekha.
“Main bhi aapki madad karna chahta hoon,”
usne dheere se kaha.
“Aap ke sath kandhe se kandha mila kar kharay hona chahta hoon.”
“Aap ke kaam aana chahta hoon.”
Phir thoda ruk kar, aur bhi dheemi awaaz mein:
“Agar aap ko kuch ho gaya toh…
main bhi—”
Usne baat adhoori chhor di.
“Aap jaante hain na,
us duniya mein main jee nahi paoonga.”
Sahil ka chehra serious ho gaya.
“Tumhein kuch nahi hoga,”
usne pakki awaaz mein kaha.
“Aisi baatein mat socho.”
“Sab theek ho jayega.”
“Main tumhein wapas le jaoonga.”
“Aur tumhari zindagi theek karoonga.”
Usne Aran ki aankhon mein seedha dekha.
“Yeh mera wada hai.”
“Sab kuch theek ho jayega.”
“Aur main apne waday tor-ta nahi hoon.”
Kamray mein aik pal ke liye sukoon sa utar aaya.
Phir Sahil ne uth kar kaha:
“Main chalta hoon.
Tum aaraam karo.”
Aran ne sir hilaaya.
“Phir milte hain.”
Sahil darwaze ki taraf badha.
"Aliya — Outside the Room"
Aliya darwaza band kar ke bahar aayi
toh usne aik gehri saans li.
Uska dil abhi bhi tez tez dhadak raha tha.
Usne dono haathon se apni dress ko seedha kiya,
jaise apne aap ko wapas control mein la rahi ho.
“Main itni bewakoof kyun ho jaati hoon…
Darwaza bhi band nahi kiya”
usne dheere se khud se kaha.
Kadam thode aage badhaye hi thay
ke uski nazar corridor ke doosre siray par gayi
Sahil.
Woh shayad abhi abhi bahar aaya tha.
Aliya aik pal ke liye ruk gayi.
Nazar uthane ki himmat nahi hui.
Aur nazar jhuka ke chalne ki bhi nahi.
Akhirkar, usne dheere se kaha:
“…Sahil.”
Sahil ruka.
Usne uski taraf dekha.
Aliya ne apna chehra seedha rakha,
lekin aankhon mein halki si ghabrahat thi.
“Main… main sirf dekhne aayi thi,”
usne kaha,
Sahil ne uski baat samajh li.
“Haan, mujhe pata hai”
Aliya ne halki si saans chhori.
Jaise koi bojh halka ho gaya ho.
Phir achanak use yaad aaya
ke Sahil ne kya dekha tha.
Uske gaal halkay se laal ho gaye.
“…aap ne jo dekha,”
usne dheere se kaha,
“woh—”
Sahil ne usay roka.
“Tumhein safai dene ki zarurat nahi,”
usne calmly kaha.
Aliya ne uski taraf dekha.
Sahil ki awaaz mein na mazaak tha,
na judgement.
Sirf samajh.
Aliya ki aankhen halki si bheeg gayin.
“Main… main bas nahi chahti ke woh phir akela mehsoos kare,”
usne dheere se kaha.
Sahil ne sir hilaaya.
“Woh akela nahi hai,”
usne kaha.
“abhi toh nahi.”
Aliya ne halki si muskurahat di
is dafa zyada relaxed.
“Shukriya,”
usne kaha.
Sahil ne bas aik chhota sa nod diya.
Aliya ne aik qadam peeche liya,
phir ruk kar kaha:
“ab… main chalti hoon.”
“theek hai,”
Sahil ne kaha.
Aliya ne aik aakhri baar darwaze ki taraf dekha
jahan Aran aaraam kar raha tha.
Phir dheere se chal padi.
Sahil usay jaate hue dekhta raha.
Uske chehre par koi khaas expression nahi tha
Phir woh bhi bazaar ki taraf chal diya kuch zaroori samaan lene
Bazaar jate hi Sahil ne subah jo monsters maare thay,
unke beast remnants gaon ke exchange point par bhej diye.
Unke badlay Sahil ne
kuch zaroori samaan khareeda
Phir woh bazaar ke andar aage badha.
Uski nazar achanak ek chhoti si dukaan par ruk gayi.
Glass ke andar
ek khubsurat necklace rakhi hui thi.
Silver chain,
beech mein aik halka sa blue crystal
simple, lekin nazar hatana mushkil.
Aisi cheez
jo zyada chamakti nahi,
magar pehn’ne wali par suit kare.
Sahil ne dukandar se poocha,
“Iski qeemat?”
Dukandar ne number bataya.
Sahil ne be-ikhtiyaar bhonhein utha li.
“…mehengi hai.”
Usne necklace ko aik aur baar dekha,
phir halki si muskurahat ke sath khud se socha:
“Abhi toh koi aisi larki bhi nahi
jiske liye loon.”
Woh peeche hat gaya.
Necklace wapas glass ke andar chali gayi.
Sahil ne bazaar chhor diya
aur apne ghar ki taraf chal pada.
Tabhi
Ding
[SYSTEM MISSION ALERT]
Mission Type: Area Purge
Location: Jungle Zone — East of Rivermark
Radius: 600 meters
Objective:
• Eliminate all hostile monsters within designated area
Conditions:
• Village safety priority
• Time-sensitive threat escalation possible
Sahil ke qadam ruk gaye.
Uski aankhen seedhi jungle ki taraf uth gayin.
“Timing kaafi perfect hai…”
usne dheere se kaha.
Woh turant rukh badal kar
Aran ke ghar ki taraf chal diya.
Aran ab bhi rest area mein tha,
lekin pehle se zyada stable lag raha tha.
Sahil ne andar jaate hi seedha kaha:
“Mujhe abhi system mission mila hai.”
Aran ne pal bhar ke liye ruk kar kaha:
“…mujhe bhi.”
Sahil ne uski taraf dekha.
“Tum aa paoge?”
Aran ne bina zyada soche sir hila diya.
“Haan.”
Phir thoda sa muskura kar bola:
“Tumhein zyada kuch nahi karna hoga.”
“Monsters se main deal kar loonga.”
Sahil ne uski aankhon mein dekha
wahan darr nahi tha,
sirf determination.
“Phir chalte hain,” Sahil ne kaha.
Dono ne gaon ke us side ka rukh kiya
jahan jungle shuru hota tha.
Mission already active tha.
......
Jungle Zone : East of Rivermark
Mission: Area Purge (Active)
Sahil aur Aran jungle ke andar kuch hi qadam chale thay
ke hawa ka pattern badal gaya.
Aran ko pehle sirf awaaz mehsoos hui
jaise zameen par bohot saare qadam ek saath pad rahe hon.
Agla pal…
jungle phat pada.
Har simt se monsters nikal aaye.
F-Rank scavengers,
E-Rank pack beasts,
aur unke beech beech mein D aur C-Rank jungle predators.
Tadaad…
sainkron mein.
Aran ka saans ruk gaya.
“Bhai…”
usne dheere se kaha,
“yeh toh—”
Sahil ne talwaar seedhi ki.
“Isi liye toh aaye hain.”
Sahil ne ek bhi qadam peeche nahi liya.
Mental Resolve (already 79+) ki wajah se
uske dimaag mein darr ka khayal hi paida nahi hua.
Usne seedha pehle group par charge kiya.
Talwaar uthi.
Neeche ki. Ding
[KILL CONFIRMED]
Doosri slash. Ding
[KILL CONFIRMED]
Teesri. Ding
[KILL CONFIRMED]
Aran ne aankhen phaila li.
“Itni tez…
mujhe uski poori movement bhi clear nazar nahi aa rahi…”
Sahil ki Agility (54+) ab itni smooth ho chuki thi
ke uska footwork jungle ki zameen par phisalta hua nahi,
flow karta hua lag raha tha.
Har strike ke saath: Ding
[STAT INCREASED]
• Strength +0.3
• Combat Sense +0.4 Ding
[KILL CONFIRMED]
Crowd Control
Monsters ne gherne ki koshish ki.
Yahin Predator Awareness fully kaam aayi.
Ambush hone se pehle hi
Sahil ka jism move kar jata.
Left.
Right.
Spin slash. Ding
[KILL CONFIRMED]
Ding
[STAT INCREASED]
• Endurance +0.5
• Stamina +0.4
Aran bas dekh raha tha.
“Yeh sirf lad nahi raha…”
“Yeh area control kar raha hai.”
C-Rank monsters ne entry li.
Heavy bodies.
Zyada force.
Lekin yahin Beast Slayer’s Physique shine hui.
Close-range mein Sahil ke vaar
bhaari,
decisive,
aur kam stamina cost ke saath aa rahe thay. Ding
[KILL CONFIRMED — C-RANK] Ding
[STAT INCREASED]
• Strength +0.8
• Endurance +0.7
• Self-Healing efficiency increased
Zakhm lagte…
aur heal hone lagte.
Razorback Core Resonance active.
Aran ne sword pakar rakhi thi
lekin usey uthana bhi bekaar lag raha tha.
“Main agar beech mein gaya…”
“toh sirf rukawat banoonga.”
Sahil ke gird laashon ka daira ban chuka tha.
“Yeh banda sirf strong nahi…”
“yeh waqai… waow.”
Aakhri group ne rush kiya.
Sahil ne saans li.
Grip tight ki.
Weapon Adaptation + Weapon Mastery ka full sync.
Har strike ke saath: Ding
[KILL CONFIRMED] Ding
[STAT INCREASED]
Numbers barhte gaye.
Lagataar.
Rukne ka naam nahi.
Kuch hi minute baad…
Jungle khamosh ho gaya. Ding
Effect:
• Each confirmed kill slightly boosts combat efficiency
• Temporary stat gain stacks during uninterrupted combat
• Effect resets after battle ends
Description:
Your body remembers the rhythm of slaughter.
Momentum now favors you. Ding
[REWARD GRANTED]
Name: Cleave Control (Passive)
Effect:
• Wide-area melee attacks consume less stamina
• Improved control against multiple enemies
• Reduced opening exposure during heavy swings
Description:
You no longer fight crowds.
You dominate them. Ding
[SYSTEM — STATUS CONFIRMED]
Current Active Passives:
• Weapon Adaptation
• Beast Slayer’s Physique
• Predator Awareness
• Razorback Core Resonance
• Survivor’s Instinct
• Bloodpath Momentum
• Cleave Control
Status:
• Hostile entities eliminated
• Area temporarily secured
• Beast remains unprocessed
• Infinite Inventory — Available
.....
Jungle ka har kona gehra aur surmaayi tha, lekin Sahil ke aane se ek ajeeb si gravitational weight jungle mein cha gayi.
Har leaf, har branch, har falling dust particle jaise uski presence ke reaction mein freeze ho gaya ho.
Aran ke liye, Sahil sirf ek insan nahi tha
wo apex predator ka living embodiment
tha.
Khoon se sanaya hua sharir,
muscles tight aur rippling,
har step mein aisi confidence aur threat ki vibration thi ke Aran ka dil ek pal ke liye dhadakna bhool gaya.
Aura:
Jaise invisible waves har taraf spread ho rahi ho,
weak or timid beings ke liye ek warning siren ban gayi.
Eyes:
Calm, focused, deadly jaise har nerve, har intention Aran ke mind mein directly penetrate kar raha ho.
Posture: Dominant, upright, har stance predict karne layak nahi,
sirf fear aur respect generate karne wali.
Movement:
Fluid, predator-level efficient jaise jungle khud uske liye rasta bana raha ho.
Aran feel kar raha tha ki har breath tight ho gayi, lungs struggle kar rahe the,
aur ek ajeeb si cold sweat uske body par.
Jungle ke background sounds
the chirping birds, distant rustling
sab jaise mute ho gaye,
aur sirf Sahil ke heartbeat ka echo Aran ke mind mein baje.
Aran almost motionless ho gaya,
sirf observe kar raha tha har flicker of muscle, har pulse, har blink ke saath danger ka signal mil raha tha.
Aur phir Sahil ek step aage bada… aur jungle ka floor jaise uske weight aur aura ke pressure mein compress ho gaya.
Har living creature,
Aran ke jaise, instinctively piche hat gaya
sirf ek glance ne unhe apni position reconsider karne par majboor kar diya.
Bohat hi khoobsurat Group fight wow maza aa gaya aur dam stats increase huay hai. Mazedar update hai shayad isi wajah se woh is fantasy world me thaa taki yaha se pura tayyar hoker waps apni duniya me jaaye aur har cheez ka badla le sakey.
Bohat hi khoobsurat Group fight wow maza aa gaya aur dam stats increase huay hai. Mazedar update hai shayad isi wajah se woh is fantasy world me thaa taki yaha se pura tayyar hoker waps apni duniya me jaaye aur har cheez ka badla le sakey.
Sahil ke kaan bajne lage.
Usne Gravebound Edge ko neeche jhuka kar apni saans ko control kiya.
Survivor’s Instinct ne ek hi baat kahi:
ab ya kabhi nahi.
Usne low monsters ko ignore kiya.
Seedha Devourer ki taraf bhaaga.
Spine ne phir strike ki.
Jis se Sahil phisla.
Blade zameen se takrai,
chingaari nikli.
Usne usi momentum se
talwaar ko upar uthaya.
Joint cut.
Spine aadhi kat gayi.
Devourer dahaar kar gir pada.
Low monsters ruk gaye Apne (temporary) leader ko is tarah girte dekh kar.
Aur Grave-Hunger Pulse jis ne abhi tak in low rank monsters ko sath ladne pe majboor kiya tha us k band hote hi woh bikar gaye.
Sahil ne mauqa liya.
Do aakhri waar.
Blade seedha core mein.
Khoon pichhe ki taraf phata.
Devourer ka jism jhatkay se seedha hua
phir bhaari awaaz ke sath gir gaya.
Trait Acquired: Grave Calm
Type: Passive — Post-Combat State ----------------------------
[DESCRIPTION]
Even after a long and blood-soaked battle, the user’s body and mind
return to a stable baseline. ----------------------------
[EFFECTS]
• Post-battle fatigue — Sharply reduced • Heart rate and breathing — Rapidly stabilized
• Aura leakage — Minimized
----------------------------[HIDDEN EFFECT]
• During recovery phase, Self-Healing efficiency — Increased ---------------------------- [NOTE] This trait is granted only to those whose hands do not tremble
even after the battle ends.
Ding
[SYSTEM REWARD UNLOCKED]
Skill Acquired: Grim Pursuit Type: Active — Chase / Suppression --------------------------- [DESCRIPTION] When a target attempts to flee or retreat, the user’s body automatically optimizes
movement efficiency toward that direction. Distance itself becomes irrelevant.
---------------------------- [EFFECTS] • Escape routes — Instinctively predicted • Stamina drain during sprint — Sharply reduced
• Speed loss on uneven terrain — Negated ----------------------------
[ACTIVATION CONDITION]
• Target must display retreat or evasion behavior ---------------------------- [NOTE] This skill is granted to hunters who never allow th eir prey
the chance to turn back.
Status:
• Area Cleared
• Threat Neutralized
• Route Secured
Sahil ke Aas paas sirf laashein, khoon
Aur khamoshi.
Sahil seedha khara tha. Us ke Gravebound Edge se khoon tapak kar
zameen par gir raha tha
Tip.
Tip.
Tip.
Jungle ki khamoshi ab poori tarah baith chuki thi.
Sahil ne gehri saans li.
Ladayi khatam ho chuki thi,
Jis se use apna jism aur tar-o-tazah lag raha tha. Jaise kisi ne andar ke gears ko naya oil de diya ho.
Usne apni ungliyan band ki
grip zyada stable thi.
Saans… zyada gehri, zyada control mein.
Dil ki dhadkan tez nahi thi, waapas line mein aa chuki thi.
Grave Calm.
Ab sirf lafz nahi lag raha tha
mehsoos ho raha tha.
Sahil ne hawa mein thehri hui notifications ki taraf dekha.
Stats.
Rewards.
Skills.
Us ne ek nazar notifications pe dali.
Phir Usne apni flask nikali.
Dhakkan khola.
Thanda pani apni hatheli mein dala
aur chehre par maara.
Khoon beh kar neeche gira
gala, jabra, gardan.
Mitti aur laal rang saaf hota gaya.
Jab usne aankhen utha kar dekha,
toh pani mein sirf ek thaka hua nahi—
balke seedha khara shakhs nazar aa raha tha.
Skin aur fresh lag rahi thi.
Sahil ne flask band ki.
Ghode ki taraf gaya.
Ek haath gardan par rakha.
“Chalte hain.”
Ghoda henaaya
aur bina hichkichahat ke Rivermark ki taraf chal pada.
Raaste mein monsters aaye.
Low-rank.
Kuch zyada bhooke,
kuch thode tez.
Jahan zarurat hui
Sahil roka aur unhe khatam kiya.
Do strong low-rank monsters
ek chhoti si jhadap mein gir gaye.
Seedhe.
Clean.
Bina noise ke.
Baaki?
Jaise hi Predatory Dominion ki halki si presence ubhri—
woh paas bhi nahi aaye.
Na roar.
Na charge.
Ab Sirf jungle ka rasta,
aur ghode ki raftaar.
Shaam dhalti gayi.
Aasmaan narangi se neela hua…
phir gehra.
Isi tarah ghode par dodte huwe use door village ki mashaalen nazar aayi.
Itna taka dene wale safr k baad woh finally Rivermark pohonch gaya tha.
Gate par guards kharay thay.
Jaise hi unki nazar Sahil par padi toh unho ne bina deri kiye gate khola.
Sahil unko dekh kar ander jane laga.
Ek guard: lady zainab ap ka intizar apne ghar par kar rahi hai.
Aran bhi un k hi ghar main hai.
Sahil ne ek baar phir unhe dekha.
Guards k chehre se lag raha tha k woh kuch poochna chahte hai par pooch nahi sakte.
Sahil ne unhe hami bharte huwe elder house ki taraf chala gaya.
Ander jate hi us ne zainab, aaliya aur aran ko courtyard main hi dekh liya.
Sahil k ander aate hi sab ki nazar us par chali gayi.
Aran sab se pehle aage aaya.
“Aap… wapas aa gaye!”
Aur yeh kehte huwe us k gale lag gaya.
Sahil ne bhi use gale lagaya.
Aaliya ne kuch kaha nahi.
Bas sirf us k chehre ko dekhti rahi.
Zainab.
Usne ek nazar Sahil ko dekha.
Sar se pair tak.
Khoon saaf tha,
lekin thakaan ke nishaan us k haseen chehre par…
andar chupay hue dekhayi de rahe the.
Uski ankhon main bohot saare sawal aur sahil ko wapis yaha dekh kar khushi sab dekh raha tha.
Lekin Usne koi sawaal nahi kiya.
Bas seedha kaha:
“abhi khana hamare ghar par kha lo.
Baat baad mein.”
Kisi ne behas nahi ki.
Kuch pal main table par khana lag chuka tha.
Ghar mein roshni naram thi.
Khane ki khushboo ghar main phel gayi.
Toh Sahil, Aran, Aaliya aur Zainab
Sab ek hi table par khane lage.
Thodi der main Khana khatam hua.
Toh Zainab ne Aran ko narmi se kaha,
“Tum thak gaye hoge.
Kal subah milte hain.
Sahil aaj raat yahi aram kar lega mujhe is se sawaal bhi pochne hai”
Aran ne bhi hami bhari.
Aur Chala gaya.
Aaliya ne bhi uthte hue
ek baar Sahil ki taraf dekha.
Nice update bhai accha laga pehlay action at field and then action at bed. Aur jis tarah se pesh kia hai maza aa gaya bohat acche se Khoobsurat alfaz me lapet kar sari baat ko present kar diya.
uske qadam ruk gaye.
Zehan mein
Zainab ka chehra ubhra
Ek andruni ehsaas
Sahil ne dheere se khud se kaha:
“Itna toh…
main uske liye kar hi sakta hoon.”
Usne bina zyada soche
dukandar ko ishara kiya.
“Yeh necklace.”
Dukandar ne khushi aur hairani ke beech
usey bahar nikala.
Sahil ne keemat chukayi
aur necklace ko sambhaal kar
Apne paas rakh diya,
Phir usne
thoda aur saman liya
khane-peene ka,
jo jaldi kharaab na ho.
Sukha gosht,
packed grains,
energy-giving herbs.
Lambi ladaai ke liye
kaam aane wali cheezein.
Jab sab ho gaya,
Sahil ne market se bahar ki taraf qadam badhaye.
Aasmaan ka rang
dheere dheere badalne laga tha.
Neela halka sa gehra ho raha tha,
aur sooraj ki aakhri roshni
gaav ke upar naram si chadar ki tarah bikhar rahi thi.
Sham utar chuki thi.
Is liye Sahil ne
Elder House ka rukh kiya.
Jaise hi woh gate ke paas pohoncha,
andar se aati hui roshni
aur khamosh sukoon ka ehsaas
uske kadmon ko thoda dheema kar gaya.
Din bhar ke shor,
market ki awaazein,
aur logon ki nazrein
sab jaise peeche reh gaya ho.
Yeh jagah
waqai saans lene ka mauqa deti thi.
Gate ke andar kadam rakhte hi
dono maids turant aage badh aayi.
Unke Chehron par wahi adab aur tameez thi,
lekin unki nazron mein
ek halki si bechain si chamak bhi thi
aisi jo nazar bhar ke dekhe bina
khud ko rok na paaye.
“Begum saheba bas aane hi wali hain,”
pehli maid ne narmi se kaha.
Doosri maid ki nazar
Sahil par ek lamhe ke liye thehar gayi
jaise aankhon se uska wazan tol rahi ho.
Phir dheere se boli,
“Agar aap chahein toh
hum abhi khana laga dein…
ya phir aap unka intezar karke
unke saath hi khana farma lein?”
Uski awaaz mein adab tha,
lekin nazar mein
woh baat jo chupayi nahi ja sakti thi.
Sahil ne ek nazar
ghar ke andar daudayi
shaant deewarein,
jalti hui lamps,
aur hawa mein basi hui
ghar ki si khushboo.
Phir usne apna cloak halka sa theek kiya
aur seedhi, shaant awaaz mein kaha,
“Main intezar kar loonga.”
Maidon ne sar jhuka kar haan mein sir hilaaya
aur kitchen ki taraf mud gayi.
Isi dauran
Sahil ki nazar hall ke ek kone par padi.
Wahan Aaliya baithi thi,
Aaliya ki nazar bhi Sahil par pad gayi.
Woh ek side table par baithi
kuch likh rahi thi
shayad notes, shayad practice ke baad ke khayalat.
Sahil bina kuch kahe
uske paas jaa kar baith gaya.
Dono ke beech halki si khamoshi thi,
Kuch hi pal guzre the ke
Zainab andar aayi.
Uske chalne mein
ek khaas waqar tha
na jaldi, na dheemi.
Jaise har qadam
soch samajh kar uthaya gaya ho.
Elder ki biwi hone ka jo asar hota hai,
woh uski har ada mein jhalak raha tha.
Usne ek nazar sab par daali,
phir narmi se kaha,
“Khane ka intezam kar do.
Main fresh ho kar aati hoon.”
Aur bina kisi ko mauqa diye
woh andar ki taraf chali gayi.
Uske jaate hi
maids ne khana lagana shuru kar diya.
Thodi der baad
jab Zainab wapas aayi,
toh woh pehle se bhi zyada sanwari hui lag rahi thi
simple, magar nazar ruk jaane wali.
Sab log mil kar
khane ki jagah par baith gaye.
Khate waqt
Sahil ne chup-chaap
Predator Awareness ko kaam mein liya.
Maids ki taraf se
dabbi hui hawas,
nazron ka baar baar rukna,
saans ki halki si tez raftaar
sab usse mehsoos ho raha tha.
Aur Zainab…
Uski bechaini alag thi.
Woh nazar milane se bach rahi thi,
kabhi khane ki taraf,
kabhi khaali jagah ki taraf dekh leti.
Sahil ko andaza ho gaya
ke woh kisi baat se pareshan hai
lekin kya baat hai,
yeh abhi saaf nahi tha.
Usne maids ki
bari nazron ko nazar-andaz kiya
aur khamoshi se khana khata raha.
Khane ke baad
Aaliya ne dheere se apni kursi peeche ki
aur uth khadi hui.
“Main apne kamre mein ja rahi hoon,”
usne seedhi si awaaz mein kaha.
Phir bina zyada rukay
andar ki taraf chali gayi.
Jaise hi Aaliya nazron se ojhal hui,
Zainab ne apna tawajjoh Sahil ki taraf ki.
Uske chehre par wahi waqar tha
na sakhti, na narmi ka izhaar.
Bilkul ek noble lady jaisa andaaz.
“Mujhe tum se
ek zaroori baat karni hai,”
usne ahista magar wazeh lehje mein kaha.
Phir halki si rukawat ke baad boli,
“Tum mere kamre mein aa kar
mujh se milo.”
Itna keh kar
woh mud gayi
aur bina peeche dekhe
apne kamre ki taraf chal di.
Uske qadam pur-aitmaad the,
Sahil kuch lamhon tak
apni jagah khara raha.
Phir bina koi sawaal kiye
uske peeche chal pada.
Aur kuch hi pal baad
woh bhi
Zainab ke kamre mein
daakhil ho gaya.
Bahar maids ne khane ki plates uthaayi aur kitchen ki taraf chal di.
Bartanon ki halki khanak ke saath unki sargoshiyan bhi chal rahi thin.
Maid 1 ne muskurate hue kaha,
“Ab tak toh andar khaas mehfil jam chuki hogi.”
Maid 2 ne aankhen gol kar ke hansi dabayi.
“Begum sahiba ne jis andaaz se bulaya tha… main hoti toh dil sambhalna mushkil ho jata.”
Usne baat ke darmiyan hont halka sa kaat liya, jaise khud ko hi chhed rahi ho.
Maid 1 ne usay ghur kar dekha.
“Haan, maine dekha tha tum kaise usey tak rahi thi.
Par janab ne toh tumhari taraf dekha tak nahi.”
Phir thodi si khurafati hansi ke saath boli,
“Us waqt tumhari shakal… kamaal thi.”
Maid 2 ne nakhrey se jawab diya,
“Zyada hans mat. Tujhe bhi toh koi tawajjoh nahi mili.”
Dono kaam karti rahi, phir Maid 1 ki awaaz thodi dheemi ho gayi.
“Waise… ek baat soch kar dimagh atak gaya hai.”
Maid 2:
“Kya?”
Maid 1:
“Yeh… jo itna haseen ho, itna composed… kahin aisa toh nahi ke… andar se bilkul thanda ho?”
Maid 2 ne foran tok diya.
“Pagal ho? Aisi baatein munh se nikalti achi lagti hain?”
Maid 1 ne kandhe ucha kar kaha,
“Main ne suna hai, kuch log sirf dikhne mein hi… mardana jazba kamzor hota hai.”
Maid 2:
“Afwaahon se sach nahi ban jata.
Aur tumhein kaise yaqeen aa gaya?
Kya tumne us ka dekha?”
Maid 1 ne shararti nazar se dekha.
“nahi… bas dil kehta hai.”
Maid 2 ne thandi saans li.
“Dil ke kehne se faislay nahi hote.
Koi daleel hai tumhare paas?”
Maid 1:
“Daleel nahi… par ek tareeqa ho sakta hai.”
Maid 2 ruk kar uski taraf jhuki.
“Kaisa tareeqa?”
Maid 1 ne bartan rakhte hue dheere se kaha,
“Pehle kaam niptao… phir dekhte hain ke janab waqai mein be-asar hain…
ya phir bas nazar andaaz karne ka hunar jaante hain.”
Maid 2 ne kuch pal socha, phir halki si muskurahat uske chehre par aa gayi.
Kamra saaf tha, lekin hawa mein ajeeb si bechaini tair rahi thi.
Zainab khidki ke paas khari thi. Pehle jaise poori tarah pur-waqar aur sakht nahi lag rahi thi.
Jab usne palat kar Sahil ko dekha, toh ek lamhe ke liye uski nazar jhuk gayi
wahi subah wali sharm ka halkasa sa asar abhi tak baqi tha.
Phir usne khud ko sambhala.
“mujhe tum se zaroori baat karni hai.”
usne elder ki biwi ke shayasta, noble lehje mein kaha,
Sahil chup chaap aage badh gaya.
Zainab ne gehri saans li,
jaise dil par bojh ho.
“Jesa main ne Tumhe subah bataya tha ke
Aaj gaon walon ke saath meeting hai,”
uski awaaz dheemi thi,
“wahan humein yeh pata chala hai ke jungle ki taraf se…
sirf wahi low rank monsters nahi hain jin ka saamna hum pehle kar chuke hain.”
Sahil ke chehre par tawajjo aur sakhti aa gayi.
“Scouts ka kehna hai,” Zainab ne baat aage badhayi,
“ke aur bhi high rank monsters jungle ke gehre hisson se nikal rahe hain.
Agar sab andazay ghalat na hue…
toh kuch hi dino mein woh yahan pohonch sakte hain.”
is dafa uska lehja Begum ka kam aur ek fikrmand aurat ka zyada tha.
Uske haath be-ikhtiyar ek doosre mein ulajh gaye.
“Elder Raheem bhi abhi tak city council se wapis nahi aaye.
Na unke saath gaye guards ka koi pata hai.”
Uski aankhon mein pehli dafa khuli bechaini nazar aayi.
“Is waqt agar monsters ne hamla kar diya,”
usne Sahil ki taraf dekha,
“toh hum apne logon ki hifazat kaise karenge?”
Kuch lamhon ke liye kamre mein khamoshi cha gayi.
Sahil ne predator awareness ko dabay hue mehsoos kiya
Zainab ke dil ki dhadkan tez thi,
uski bechaini bilkul asli.
Yeh sirf ek noble lady ki fikr nahi thi…
yeh ek zimmedaar rehnuma ki pareshani thi.
Sahil ne aage badh kar uski aankhon mein dekhte hue, bilkul itminaan se kaha,
“Zyada pareshaan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai…
kam se kam tab tak toh bilkul bhi nahi, jab tak main yahan hoon.”
Uski awaaz mein woh confidence tha
jo lafzon se zyada mehsoos hota hai.
“Main khud is gaon ke logon ki hifazat karoonga,”
usne aage kaha,
“isliye tumhein kisi baat ki fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi.”
Phir uski nazar Zainab ke chehre par tik gayi.
Woh bechaini…
woh chhupi hui ghabrahat…
Sahil ne halki si muskurahat ke saath kaha,
“Waise bhi…
tumhare is haseen chehre par yeh bechaini achi nahi lagti.”
Zainab kuch keh nahi paayi.
Bas uski palkein thodi si jhuk gayi.
Tab Sahil ne dheere se baat badli,
“Tumhara mood theek karne ke liye
mere paas ek cheez hai.”
Yeh sunte hi
Zainab ke gaal phir se surkh ho gaye.
Uske zehan mein subah ka pal ubhar aaya
woh sharm, woh nazrein churaana,
aur Sahil ka gift lane k liye bazaar jana.
Dil be-ikhtiyaar tez dhadakne laga.
Sahil ne aage badh kar
uske kandon ko halki si pakad mein liya.
Woh pakad zabardasti ki nahi thi
Balke ek haq jaisi thi.
Aur isi ehsaas ne
Zainab ke dil ko aur zyada pighla diya.
Sahil usey dheere dheere
khidki se hata kar
kamre ke aaine ke saamne le aaya
aur wahin khada kar diya.
Aaine mein
Zainab khud ko aur Sahil ko saath dekh pa rahi thi.
Usne apni nazrein neeche jhuka li.
Jaise bina kahe hi
yeh bata rahi ho
ke jo bhi Sahil chahe…
use manzoor hai.
Sahil ne kuch lamhon tak
use aaine mein dekha.
Zainab bilkul seedhi khadi thi,
aankhein juki huwi,
saansen halki si tez,
lekin bechain nahi…
jaise kisi cheez ka intezar ho.
Phir Sahil ne dheere se
uska dopatta utaarne laga.
Jaise hi kapra
uski gardan se phisla,
Zainab ne halki si saans li
aur apne kandhe thode dheele chhor diye.
Woh koi hichkichahat nahi thi.
Woh ikhlaas tha.
Sahil ne dopatta alag rakh kar
uski gardan se baal hata diye.
Us pal,
predator awareness ne
bina awaaz ke react kiya.
Zainab ki dil ki dhadkan tez thi
lekin usmein ghabrahat nahi thi.
Na hi woh be-tartiib thi.
Har dhadkan
Sahil ke qareeb aane ke saath
jaise ek hi lay mein bandh rahi ho.
Sahil ko yeh ihsaas huwa k
Yeh kuch gehra hai…
jo apni jagah
khud bana raha hai.
Shayad yeh ihsaas anchored companionship ka tha.
Sahil ko us ki gardan se aane wali halki si khushboo
uske hosh aur qareeb le aayi.
Phir Sahil ne
woh necklace uthaya
aur badi ehtiyaat se
Zainab ke gale mein pehna diya.
Thandi si silver chain
uski skin ko chhooti hui mehsoos hui.
Zainab dekhna chahti thi
ke yeh kya hai
magar phir bhi
aankhein band hi rakhi.
Jaise is pal ko
aur zyada mehsoos karna chahti ho.
Necklace pehnane ke baad
Sahil ne uski gardan par
ek halka sa, nazuk sa kiss kiya
bilkul jaise bina bole keh raha ho,
ab dekh lo.
Us ishare par
Zainab ne dheere dheere
apni aankhein kholi.
Aaine mein
uski nazar seedhi apne gale par gayi.
Silver chain ke beech
woh halka sa blue crystal…
simple tha,
lekin dil ko choo lene wala.
Uske chehre par
be-ikhtiyaar ek narmi bhari muskurahat aa gayi.
Phir uski nazar
aahista aahista
aayne mein Sahil ki aankhon se ja mili.
Un aankhon mein kuch tha
jo uski saanson ko tez kar raha tha.
Aur agle hi pal
Zainab ne achanak palat kar
Sahil ke honton ko
shiddat se chhoom liya.
Uska reaction bina soche samjhe tha
jaise saari bechaini
usi ek pal mein bahar aa gayi ho.
Sahil ne bhi usey peeche nahi hataya.
Usne us kiss ka poora jawab diya
use apne qareeb rakhte hue,
aur apni pakad mein us k ubhar par
thodi aur gehraai laate hue.
Kamre main Sirf dono ki saansein thi,
aur woh ehsaas
jo dono ko ek doosre se
aur zyada qareeb la raha tha.
Nice update bhai accha laga pehlay action at field and then action at bed. Aur jis tarah se pesh kia hai maza aa gaya bohat acche se Khoobsurat alfaz me lapet kar sari baat ko present kar diya.
Action ho ya emotional moments, koshish yehi rehti hai ke flow bana rahe
aur cheezein naturally present ho
Aapko presentation aur wording achi lagi, yeh sun kar aur motivation milti hai
Aage bhi isi tarah ke mixed scenes milenge,
Support ke liye thanks bhai
