Incest Suryavanshi ~ Ek Yuddh aur Prem ki Gatha (with image and GIFS)

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Update 1​

Samay tha anek shatabdi pehle ki, jab manav jaati ka hriday prakriti ki dhadkan se seedhe juda hua karta tha. Jab sansaar apni nayi-nayi saans le raha tha. Jab kuchh chuninda manushyon ke antar mein prakritik aur daivik shaktiyon ka prakaash jhalakta tha.
Yeh kahani hai ussi yug ki. Uss mahan yuddh ki, jiska varnan aaj itihaas ke pannon par nahi milta. Kehte hain ki Angrezo ne uss maha yuddh ko itihaas se mita diya, uski yaadon ko dhool mein mila diya.

Parantu kuchh kahaniyan hoti hain jo kagazon par nahi, yugon ke kan-kan mein jeevit rehti hain.

Yeh kahani hai uss prem ki, jo aaj bhi samay ke sannaate mein goonjta hai. Jiska astitva anjaana sahi, par amar hai.​

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Ek samriddh aur sundar rajya tha prakriti ki god mein basa hua. Hariyali se ghira, sugandhit phoolon ki khushboo se mehakta, aur door tak phelte neele aakash ke neeche shaan se khada. Mausam grishm ka tha. Tapti dhoop apne poore tej ke saath dharti ko chhoo rahi thi.

Rajya ke beechon-beech ek uncha, bhavy rajmahal sthit tha. Uske sunahre patthar dhoop ki kirnon mein aise chamak rahe the maano kisi kushal karmakar ne abhi-abhi use sone ki chadar odha di ho. Mahal ki deewarein sugandhit chandan aur keemti pattharon se alankrit thi. Unchi minaron par lage dhwaj halka-halka pavan mein lehra rahe the.



Hawa ka ek naram jhonka, maano apni hi chanchalta par muskurata hua, mahal ke pravesh dwar se andar aa ghusa. Woh sangmarmar ke farsh ko chhoota hua, lambe deewaron se takrata hua, antatah ek kaksh ke rang-birange pardon ko hila gaya.

Woh kaksh ati-alishan tha. Deewaron par moolyavan ratnon ki jhalak thi. Chhat se latakte deep-stambh halki roshni faila rahe the. Madhur sugandh ka halka sa vaas tha, jaise kewra aur kamal ki khushboo ek saath ghul gayi ho.

Kaksh ke beechon-beech ek vishal shayya bichhi thi, mulyavan vastron aur komal takiyon se saja hua. Us shayya par do prani baithe the, ek tha navjawan aur ek thi naari.

Navjawan ke sharir par keval ek safed dhoti thi. Uska upar ka sharir nanga tha, par vah nirlajjata ka nahi, veerta ka prateek lag raha tha. Uska ang-kant aisa tha jaise kisi shilpkar ne use shaurya ka roop dekar gadh diya ho. Parantu us veerta par aaj ghavon ka chhapa tha.

Uske baahon, kandhon aur vakshasthal par gahre ghaav the. Seene ke beechon-beech ek lambi, tirchi chot thi, jisse ab bhi rakt ki patli dhaar beh rahi thi. Uska sharir yuddh ka maidan prateet ho raha tha pratyek ghaav apni kahani suna raha tha.

Uske paas baithi woh naari, apne poorn vastron mein, maano shok ki moorti bani thi. Uski aankhon mein aansuon ka saagar tha. Un aansuon ne uske komal gaalon ko bhigo diya tha. Uske honton par shabd the, par swar jaise kahin kho gaya tha.



Woh apne kaampte haathon se chhuke navjawan ke ghaav ko dekh rahi thi, kabhi uske chehre ko, kabhi uske seene par behte rakt ko. Har ek boond maano us naari ke hriday ko cheer rahi thi.

Kaksh mein gehra sannaata tha. Sirf hawa ki halki si sarsarahat aur kahin door se sunayi deti ek veena ki mrit swar-lahari us shantata ko aur gambhir bana rahi thi.

Navjawan ki saansein bhaari ho chuki thi. Par uski aankhon mein ab bhi ek adbhut tej tha, ek aisa tej jo haar ko sweekar nahi karta. Usne dheere se apna haath badhakar us naari ke haath par rakh diya.

Us sparsh mein shabd nahi the, par pratigya thi. Dard nahi tha, par sneha tha. Aur shayad ek aisa rahasya bhi jo samay ke saath itihaas se mita diya gaya.

“Mere priye… aapko is prakaar vilap karte dekhna in ghavon se bhi adhik vedna de raha hai.”

Navjawan gambheer roop se ghayal tha, parantu uske mukh par ab bhi komal muskaan thi jaise woh apni peeda ko apne hriday ke antahsthal mein bandh kar sirf us naari ke aansuon ko rok lena chahta ho. Uska sharir yuddh ki kathorata ka pramaan de raha tha, lekin uski drishti mein ab bhi sneha ka ujala tha.

Yeh drishya dekh naari ke nayan aur bhi bhar aaye. Aansoon ki dhaar uske komal gaalon par motiyon si ladhakne lagi। Woh dheere se aage jhuki. Uske kaampte hue haath navjawan ke vakshasthal (seena) par bane us gehre, tirche ghav par thehar gaye. Usne bahut hi saavdhani se, maano kisi toote hue mridul patra ko chhoo rahi ho, us ghaav ke kinare par apni anguliyan pher di.

Uski anguliyan kaamp rahi thi.

“A… aapko dard ho raha hai, na?” usne ruk-ruk kar kaha. Uski aawaaz subakti hui veena ke taar si kampit thi.

Navjawan ne dheere se saans li, par usne apni vedna ko mukh par aane na diya.

“Na… yeh dard kuchh bhi nahi,” usne halka sa hanskar kaha, “main abhi bhi in do ghayal haathon se ek sher ko parajit kar sakta hoon, priye.”

Uske shabdon mein veerta thi, lekin uski saanson ki gahanata sachchai prakat kar rahi thi. Naari uski baaton se prabhavit zaroor hui, par woh uske sharir ki kasak ko mehsoos kar sakti thi. Har ek saans ke saath uska vaksh halka sa uthta, phir dheere se girta jaise peeda ki lehar use andar hi andar tod rahi ho.

Naari ki drishti kathor ho uthi, vedna se aur krodh se.

“Mujhe gyaan hai, aap apar veer hain,” usne dridh swar mein kaha. “Yadi usne kapat ka sahara na liya hota, to vijay-mala aapke hi gale mein hoti. Na aapko yeh ghaav milte, na yeh asahya dard…”

Uski aawaaz mein atal vishwas tha, apne priye ki shaurya par, uske satya par.

Navjawan ne bas muskurakar apne dono haath uthaaye. Usne naari ke komal gaalon ko apni raktim aur kathor anguliyon mein sambhaal liya. Uska sparsh sakht tha, par usmein apaar Sneha tha.

“Idhar dekhiye… meri or,” usne dheere par aadeshmayi komalta se kaha.

Naari ne apni bhigi palken uthayi. Uski aankhen laal ho chuki thi, par unmein prem ka samudra tha. Woh seedhe uski aankhon mein dekhne lagi jaise un do nayanon mein apna sampoorn sansaar basa ho.

“Yeh dard kuchh nahi, priye,” navjawan ne mridu swar mein kaha, “itne varsh aapse door rehne ki jo agni thi, uske saamne yeh sharirik vedna tuchh hai.”

Yeh shabd sunte hi naari ka hriday aur bhi pighal gaya. Aansoon ki dhaar phir se beh nikli. Usne dono haathon se navjawan ke haathon ko pakad liya, jo ab bhi uske gaalon ko sparsh kar rahe the.

“Main hoon aapke paas,” usne kampit par nishchaymayi swar mein kaha. “Aapke har dard ko main apne antar sama loongi… aap apne charan zara vishraant kar dijiye.”

Navjawan ek pal ke liye chakit hua.
“Hm?” uske adharon se halki si dhwani nikli.

Woh kuchh aur poochh pata, usse pehle hi naari ne dheere se apna mukh uske nikat laaye. Samay jaise ek kshan ke liye thamm gaya. Bahar se aati hawa ne pardon ko aur tez hila diya. Deep-stambh ki jyoti kamp uthi.

Aur agle hi pal us naari ke komal adhar navjawan ke adharon se mil chuke the.



Woh chumban keval sparsh nahi tha, woh ashwasan tha. Woh keval prem nahi tha, woh pratigya tha.

Naari ka ek haath ab bhi uske vaksh ke paas tha, jaise uske hriday ki dhadkan ko mehsoos kar rahi ho. Doosra haath uske kandhe par tik gaya, Navjawan ke haath, jo ab tak uske gaalon par the, dheere se uski peeth par thehar gaye. komal, surakshit, apnapan se bhare.

Us kshan mein na yuddh tha, na rajneeti, na kapat. Sirf do hriday the jo yugon ki doori aur vedna ke baad punah ek-doosre mein sama rahe the.

Kaksh ki deewarein maano saakshi bani khadi thi. Hawa ka jhonka ab shant tha. Deepak ki jyoti sthir ho chuki thi.

Aur us alingan mein, us chumban mein, dono ne maano ek-doosre ke dard ko vaastav mein baant liya tha.

Kuchh samay baad naari ne chumban thoda. Navjawan us naari ki aankhon mein dekhta hai, jismein abhi bhi aansu chamak rahe the. Shayad naari ne isi liye chumban diya tha, taki navjawan ke dard ko thoda sa halka kar sake. Woh dheere se boli.

"Aapke har dard ko main mita dungi... Aap... apne pairon ko thoda faila lijiye."

Navjawan haami bharte hue apne pairon ko faila deta hai. Naari uske aur paas aati hai aur uske seene par haath pherte hue dheere-dheere neeche ki or le jaati hai, bilkul uski dhoti ke upar tak.

Phir bina kuchh kahe, bina koi sharm ke, naari ne navjawan ki dhoti ke andar haath daal diya.



Navjawan yah sab dekh pa raha tha. Naari uski aankhon mein jhaankti hai aur dheere se uske ling ko apne haathon mein pakad leti hai.

"Chinta chhod dijiye, aapke har dard ko main khud apne haathon se mitaungi."

Naari yeh kehti hai aur dheere se navjawan ke ling ki chamdi ko neeche karti hai, phir upar. Woh dheere-dheere uske ling ko hilane lagti hai.

"Ahhh!" Naari ke komal haath apne ling par mehsoos hote hi navjawan ke muh se ek dheemi siskari nikal padti hai.

"Aap... yeh...!"

"Ssssh! Shant rahiye... mujhe karne dijiye. Shayad isse aapko thoda aaram mil jaye."

Naari yeh kehti hai aur navjawan ke ling ke chamdi ko upar neeche hilane lagti hai. Dheere-dheere navjawan ka ling shakt ho jata hai aur naari ke haathon mein tadapne lagta hai.



Dono ki aankhen abhi bhi ek-doosre se judi hui thi. Naari baar-baar uske ghaav ko dekhti hai, par apne antar ke dukh ko chhupate hue boli.

"Aapko yeh pasand hai na, jab mera haath aapke iss bade se ling par rehta hai?"

"Ahhhhh!"

Navjawan aahe bharte hue bas haan mein sir hila deta hai. Naari ab zor se ling ko hilane lagti hai aur saath hi uske haathon ki choodiyon ki awaaz failne lagti hai. Jab-jab woh ling ko hilati, choodiyon ki khanak pure kamre mein goonj uthti.

"Ahhh... priye!" Navjawan aahe bharte hue naari ki kamar ko pakad kar apne aur kheench leta hai. "Aapko abhi yeh karne ki zaroorat nahi!"

Woh kehte hain, par naari ling ko hilana band nahi karti, balki woh kehti hai

"Agar main nahi karungi toh aur kaun aapko sukh pahunchayega? Kya aapke hriday mein mere se adhik koi aur naari hai?"

Naari ne halki udaasi ke saath poochha. Navjawan jawab mein uske kamar ko pakad kar phir se uske honthon se mila deta hai.



Ab ka chumban komal nahi tha, balki gahan aur utsuk tha. Navjawan naari ke nichle aur upar ke honthon ko choos-choos kar chhodta hai.

"Aap se adhik mujhe kisi aur naari se prem nahi."

Navjawan kehte hain. Yeh sunte hi naari ke gaalon par halki laali chha jaati hai. Woh bas muskurati hai.

Navjawan ke sir ko apne dusre haath se pakad kar woh apne gale se laga leti hai, bilkul apne kandhe par, aur ling ko hilana abhi bhi jaari tha. Navjawan aaram ki khoj mein ab naari ke gale ko halke-halke choomne lagta hai, jisse

"Ahhhhh!" Naari ke muh se dabee hui siskari nikal jaati hai. Woh navjawan ko apne garam aur naram shareer mein aur kas kar jakad leti hai aur zor se uske ling ko hilane lagti hai. Kabhi-kabhi woh navjawan ke seene ke ghaav ko dekhti, par ab apni aankhon ko rok rakhti hai. Beshak yeh kamlila hi chal rahi thi dono ke beech, par ise sirf kam kehna bhi galat hoga. Yeh usse bhi gehra, usse bhi pavitra kuchh tha.

Ab pure kamre mein navjawan ke ling se uthti ek Kasturi (musky) sugandh fail jaati hai. Ek kaamuk sugandh naari ke naak tak pahunchti hai. Woh navjawan ke ling ko dekhti hai jo uske haathon mein tadap raha tha sukh mein. Uske ling ke laal mathe se kuchh boondein kam-ras ke nikal rahe the.

"Ahhhh! Aapko aaram mil toh raha hai na?"

Naari aahe bharte hue poochhti hai. Jawab mein navjawan naari ke gale mein apne daanton se halka sa kaat leta hai.

Naari ki aankhen band ho jaati hain iss kaamuk sugandh aur lagataar navjawan ke in harkaton se. Woh ab bahut zor se navjawan ke ling ko hilane lagti hai.

"Ahhhh... ssss! Dhire... dhire kaatiye!"

Par navjawan sunta nahi. Balki ab woh naari ke stanon ko dabane lagta hai, saari ke upar se hi.

"Ahhhhnn!" Naari ek aahe bharti hai. Uske naram stanon ko navjawan apne haathon se nichod raha tha aur woh naari khud navjawan ke ling ko zor-zor se hila rahi thi. Naari ke stanaagra (nipples) bhi sakht ho chuke the.

"Anant raaton tak main keval aapke ek sparsh ki abhilasha mein vyakul aur vyathit rahi thi… AaA... Ahhh! kripaya dheere-dheere badhaiye…! kitni hi raaten aisi beeti hain jab main aapki smritiyon ki agni mein ekant mein nishabd dahakti rahi hoon."

Naari apne man ki baat keh deti hai, par woh jaanti hai ki abhi yeh sahi samay nahi apni baaton ko rakhne ka. Abhi navjawan ko sukh pahunchana hai.

"Ahhhh...! Chhod dijiye apna virya mere haathon mein... ssss! Ahhh! Chhod dijiye apna virya...! Aapko thoda sukoon milega."

Woh khud ko sambhalte hue navjawan ke ling ko aur zor se hilati hai. Navjawan ka bada aur mota ling naari ke haathon mein upar-neeche ho raha tha. Aur kaafi samay baad aakhirkaar navjawan apna virya chhod deta hai.



Gada, sada virya navjawan ke ling se nikal kar naari ke haathon par girta hai.

"Ah... ahhh priye!" Navjawan ek rahat aur aaram bhari aahe bharta hai.

"Aaahhhnnn..." Naari bhi aahe bharti hai. Unka navjawan ko thoda rahat pahunchane ka lakshya ab poora ho gaya. Dono ek-doosre ki baahon mein apni saansein sudhaar rahe the, ki tabhi

**CLANG-G-G-G!**

Kuchh girne ki awaaz aati hai. Naari aur navjawan turant us disha ki or dekhte hain jahan se yeh awaaz aayi thi. Aur dekhte hi naari ghabra jaati hai.

"Ranimaa...! Rhh... Rajkumar! Aa-aap dono...???"



Awaaz thi rajmahal mein kaam karne wali dasiyon mein se ek stri ki. Woh navjawan, yaani rajkumar, ke liye ek katori mein aushadhi laayi thi. Par jab woh kamre ke paas aayi thi, tab use kuchh siskariyan aur dheemi baatein sunai di thi. Usne socha.

"yeh samay toh rajkumar ke ghaayal hai aur ranimaa unke paas hain!" Par usne khud se sawaal kiya, ki "par yeh siskariyan kyon aa rahi hai?"

Jaanne ke liye usne bina awaaz kiye parda thoda sa khol kar jhaank liya. Phir usne jo dekha, usse uski saansein atak gayin.

Usne dekha kaise ranimaa aur rajkumar ek-doosre ko choom rahe the, kaise rajkumar ranimaa ke stanon ko nichod rahe the, kaise ranimaa rajkumar ke ling ko hila rahi thi. Yeh sab dekh kar dasi chaunk gayi.

Jab rani ne dekha ki dasi hairaan hokar un dono ko dekh rahi hai, aur uska haath abhi bhi rajkumar ke ling par tha, jismein unka virya laga hua tha, toh rani turant rajkumar ke seene se uthi aur jaldi se rajkumar ke ling ko apni saari ke palle se chhupa leti hai, taaki dasi use aur na dekh sake.

"Ranimaa...! R-rajkumar...! Aap dono yeh... yeh... Hey Bhagwan...!" Dasi hairaani mein haklate hue kehti hai. Woh apni aankhon par vishwas nahi kar pa rahi thi, ki Abhi Abhi usne Jo Dekha vah Sach tha ya koi vaham Matra hai.

Rani thoda darr aur Krodh mein chillate hue kehti hai.

"Tum antarmahal mein bina poochhe kyon dakhal hui?"

Rani ki unchi awaaz sun kar dasi aur hairaan ho jaati hai. Jo rani kabhi kisi se gusse mein baat nahi karti, woh aise gussa kar rahi thi. Hogee bhi kyon na? Unki aur rajkumar ki woh ekant ke kshan ko jo is dasi ne dekh liya tha.

Rani ke poochhne par dasi ka dhyaan toot-ta hai. Woh sharam aur darr se sir jhuka kar kehti hai.

"M-mujhe kshama kijiye ranimaa... m-main rajkumar ke liye aushadhi laayi thi, vaidh ji ne bhejwaya tha... m-mujhe kshama kijiye, galti ho gayi!"

"Main khud rajkumar ko aushadhi laga dungi. TUM JAO YAHAN SE, aur kabhi bhi bina poochhe mare ya rajkumar ke kaksh mein mat aana!"

"Ji... ji ranimaa!"

Dasi kehti hai aur apni galti ki maanti hai. Rajmahal ke kisi bhi kaksh mein bina bole pravesh karna niyam aur maryada ka ullanghan tha. Woh sir jhuka kar mud ke peeche jaane lagti hai.

"RUKO!"

Par rani usse wapas bulaati hai. Iss baar unki awaaz mein Krodh ke saath ek chinta bhi thi.

Dasi ruk jaati hai, par woh saamne dekhne ka saahas nahi dikhati aur sir jhukaye hi rakhti hai.

"Jo bhi tumne yahan dekha, w-woh kisi ko mat kehna!" Rani kehti hain, unki awaaz mein dheemi darr thi.

"Ji ranimaa!"

"Mahal mein kisi ko bhi, aur na hi praja ko. Iss baare mein kuchh pata nahi hona chahiye!" Rani kehti hain. "Theek hai?
ab jao tum. Apne kaksh mein rahna. M-main tumse baad mein baat karungi!"

"Ji!" Yeh kehte hue dasi wahan se chali gayi, rani ki aagya maante hue.

Ab tak rajkumar chup the. Woh bhi kya kehte? Halanki hairaan woh bhi the. Dasi jaane ke baad ranimaa apni saari ke pallu se rajkumar ke ling ko pochhti hai aur apne haathon par lage Rajkumar ke virya ko bhi saaf karti hai.

Bina kahe woh uthti hai, neeche padi katori ko utha kar wapas rajkumar ke paas aati hai.

"Kya unhone sab dekh liya?" Rajkumar kehte hain.

Rani bas dheere se kehti hai "Shayad! Aap Chintan mat kijiye, main usse baad mein baat karungi. Abhi usse zyada mahatvapoorn kaarya mujhe karna hai. Aap let jaiye!"

Rani ne rajkumar ko dheere se bistar par litaya aur khud unke paas baith kar katori se aushadhi ka lep rajkumar ke seene ke ghaav wali jagah par lagane lagti hai, par rajkumar unhe rok dete hain.

"Main itna kamzor nahi ki aushadhi ki zaroorat pade. Main abhi bhi..."

Rajkumar gehri awaaz mein kehte hain. Uski aankhon mein ek tej tha, ek ghaayal sher ki tarah. Par woh aage kuchh keh paate, rani ne unhe rok kar kehti hai.

"Mujhe aapke purusharth par koi shanka nahi. Mujhe pata hai aap kitne takatvar hain. Par abhi yeh aushadhi aapke ghaav ke liye hai, rajkumar!"

"Rajkumar!" Rajkumar kehte hain. "Agar main vijeta hota toh shayad aap mujhe yuvraj kehti!" Rajkumar thoda udas mann se kehte hain.

Rani unke honthon par ungli rakh kar kehti hai, "Mere liye aap hi yuvraj the aur rahenge, mere priye!"

Woh muskaan ke saath kehti hai. Phir rajkumar ki aankhon mein dekh kar kehti hai.

"Aur kya mera prem khatm ho jayega agar aap yuvraj pad na jeet paye? Kya hamara rishta kisi pad ke adheen hai?"

"Nahi!... Par—" Rajkumar uski or dekh kar kehte hain.

"Bas kijiye ab. Chupchap let jaiye. Main yeh aushadhi ka lep laga deti hoon. Aap abhi aaram kijiye."

Rani ne adesh bhari awaaz mein kaha. Rajkumar bhi halki muskaan ke saath kehte hain.

"Itni sundar rani agar khud meri seva karna chahti hai toh main kyon rokun?"

Rani sharma kar rajkumar ke gaal par halke se pyar bhara thappad marti hai.

"Dhat!"

Phir rani dheere-dheere, apne naram haathon se rajkumar ke ghaav par aushadhi ka lep laga deti hai. Kuchh samay baad rajkumar thak kar so jaate hain, youdh ke baad woh ab thak chuke the. Yeh dekh rani unke sir par haath pher kar unke maathe ko choomti hai aur dheere se kehti hai.

"Aap aaram kijiye. Mujhe ek aur vishesh kaam hai."

Woh rajkumar ke un ghaavon ko dekhti hai, phir un ghatnaon ko yaad karti hai jis wajah se rajkumar ke shareer par yeh ghaav aaye the. Yaad aate hi rani ke chehre ka bhaav badal jata hai. Woh bistar se uthti hai, apne bikhere hue saree ko theek karti hai aur kamre se bahar nikal jaati hai, jaise unka lakshya bilkul spasht tha.

Rani apne antahpur ke kaksh se bahar nikli. Unke kadam aaj samanya dinon se kahin adhik drut the. Payalon ki madhur dhwani ke sthan par aaj unke kadmon ki kathor thap sunai de rahi thi. Unka mukh, jo sada komal aur shanti ka prateek tha, aaj krodh ki jwalant rekhaon se ankita tha. Aisa prateet ho raha tha Abhi Tak kaksh ke andar Jo Rani Thi ab yah woh rani nahi Balki swayam agni hi rajmahal ke prangan mein agrasar ho rahi ho.

Ve drut gati se rajmahal ke mahamandalit sabha-kaksh ki or badhi. Rajsabha ke dwar par pahunchte hi unhone ek pal ke liye bhi vishraam na kiya, ve seedhe antarik mandap mein pravesh kar gayin.

Rajsabha ka drishya bilkul vipreet tha.

Uchch stambhon se alankrit vishal sabha-mandap deepmalaon se prajwalit tha. Chaturdik harsaullas ka mahol tha, jaise sampoorn rajya mein vijayotsav manaya ja raha ho. Sabha ke sarvadhik uchch simhasan par swayam Maharaj virajmaan the. Unke mukh par garv ki gambhir chhaya thi.

"Waah! Yeh jaam yuvraaj ke naam!" kehte hue raaja ne ek suvarn-nirmit piyaala haath mein uthaaya.

Uske sameep virajmaan thi raaja ki pratham patni, Pratham maharani. Unke mukhmandal par bhi anand ki prachur chhata vyapt thi, kyunki aaj unke putra ne yuvraj pad prapt kiya tha. Harsh ki jyoti unki nayanon mein prakat ho rahi thi. Maharani ke nikat hi unka putra virajmaan tha, jisne aaj apne anuj ko parajit kar yuvraj pad adhigrahit kiya tha.

Sabha mandap mein anek jan upasthit the. kuch mantri, kuch rajkul ke mantri-salahkar, tatha kuch samriddh vyapari. Sabhi apni upasthiti darj kara rahe the. Kintu do vyakti anupasthit the, ek thi kanishth (chhoti) rani aur unka putra.

'Yuvraj ki jai!'

'Hamein to poorv se hi gyaan tha ki yuvraj pad ke adhikari ve hi honge!'

'Unse adhik yogya aur kaun ho sakta hai is gauravmay pad ke liye!'

'Aise veer aur pratapshali rajkumar ke samaksh to anya koi janma hi nahi le saka!'

Mantrigan evam sabhasadon dwara naveen yuvraj ki bhuri-bhuri prashansa ki ja rahi thi. Yah drishya dekh kar maharaj tatha unke sameep virajmaan maharani garv aur harsh se mand-mand muskurane lage, kyunki unka jyeshth putra aaj yuvraj pad par abhishekit hua tha.

Swayam yuvraj bhi apni stuti shravan kar apni mochon par taav dete hue atishay garv ka anubhav kar rahe the. Aisa pratiti ho raha tha manon sabha ke charon aur vijay aur ullas ki hi lahar vyapt ho.

Tathapi, usi sabha mein kuch aise vyakti bhi upasthit the, jinke hriday mein na to harsh tha aur na hi santosh. Ve majboori-vash wahaan upasthit the, manon deh se sabha mein virajmaan hon, parantu chitt se us sthaan se door.

'Poore rajya mein turant ghoshna kara di jaye. Aagami prabhat tak sampoorn rajya ko nava-vadhu ke samaan alankrit kiya jaye, tatha sabhi mitra rajyon mein bhi yah shubh sandesh prerit kar diya jaye. Kal yuvraj ka rajyabhishek sampann hoga. Utsav aisa manaya jaye ki keval is rajya hi nahi, varan sampoorn vishva ne bhi aisa mahotsav poorv mein na dekha ho!'

Aisa aadesh dete hue maharani ke swar mein apne putra ke prati garv aur anand spasht pratidhvanit ho raha tha.

Swayam yuvraj bhi atishay garv se apni mochon par taav dete hue sabha ki stuti aur sammaan ka anand le rahe the, kyunki yah samast aayojan unhi ke vijay aur gaurav ke nimitt tha. Sabha mandap mein vijay aur harshollas ki lahar vyapt thi.

Tabhi, achanak sabha ke madhya ek gambhir aur prabhavshali swar gunja.

"Vikramaditya!!"

Ek madhur kintu krodh se kampit swar achanak sampoorn sabha mandap mein pratidhvanit ho utha.

Sabhasadon ne jab us disha mein drishti uthakar dekha, to gyaat hua ki ve aur koi nahi, varan maharaj ki dwitiya patni, kanishth maharani thi. Aaj unka swaroop unke saamanya komal swabhav se bilkul bhinn pratiti ho raha tha. Aaj tak kisi ne unhe krodhit avastha mein nahi dekha tha.

Tathapi, sabha mein upasthit kuch vyakti bhali-bhaanti jaante the ki is mangal avsar par bhi kanishth maharani ke hriday mein krodh ki agni kyon prajwalit ho uthi hai.

Yah drishya dekh Vikramaditya tatkaal apne aasana se utth khade hue aur vinamra bhav se kanishth maharani ke sameep pahunche.

Vikramaditya : Chhoti maa, main to yah hi vichar kar raha tha ki aap abhi tak sabha mein upasthit kyon nahi hui. Kripaya drishti daaliye, aaj ka yah samast utsav meri vijay ke nimitt hi aayojit kiya gaya hai.

Yah kahte samay unke adharo par ek kapatmay, mand muskaan khel rahi thi.

Parantu chhoti rani ke mukhmandal par krodh ki rekhaen ab bhi spasht dikhai de rahi thi. Ve achanak uchch swar mein boli.

Choti rani : Kya maine tumhare saath kabhi sauteli mata ke samaan vyavahar kiya hai?

Vikramaditya (vinamra bhav se) : Nahi chhoti maa, aap aisa kathor vachan kyon keh rahi hain?

Maharani Pratham (Badi Rani) : Tum aise kathor vachan kyon keh rahi ho? Vikram jitna mujhe mata ka sammaan deta hai, utna hi tumhe bhi apni mata ka adar pradan karta hai.

Choti Maharani ne krodh se kampit swar mein pratyuttar diya, "Kya vastav mein aisa hi hai?" Unki drishti agni ke samaan prajwalit ho uthi. "Agar yah satya hota, to Vikram apne anuja ko kapat aur chal se parajit na karta."

Yah vachan shravan hote hi sampoorn sabha mandap ekdum nishabd ho gaya. Gahra sannata chha gaya, kyunki kanishth (chhoti) maharani ke vachan satya the. Vikramaditya ne vijay kapat ke sahare prapt ki thi. Sabha mein upasthit pratyek sabhasad is rahasya se parichit tha, keval maharaj hi is satya se anbhigya the.

Chhoti Maharani achanak ati gambhir aur uchch swar mein garjit hui

"BATAO, VIKRAMADITYA!"

Jo maharani sada komal aur shant swabhav ke liye jaani jaati thi, aaj unka yah krodhpoorn garjan sabha mandap ko kampit kar gaya. Unki pratidhvani se sabhasad chakit aur sthambhit reh gaye; swayam maharaj bhi gambhir chinta mein pad gaye.

Vikramaditya (kampit swar mein) : M-main!

Chhoti rani (krodh se kampit swar mein) : Ab maun kyon ho gaye, Vikramaditya? Sabha ke samaksh satya prakat kyon nahi karte? Batao, tumne kis karan kapat ka sahara lekar apne anuj ko parajit kiya? Kya yahi tumhara parakram hai? Kya yahi tumhari yatharth samarthya hai?

Yah shravan kar maharaj bhi krodh se uttejit ho apne simhasan se utth khade hue. Nishchay hi, choti maharani ke vachan unhe aprasann kar rahe the. Vishal rajsabha ke madhya unke jyeshth putra ka is prakar apmaan hona, vastutah maharaj ke gaurav par bhi prashn chinh tha.

Maharaj (gambhir evam kathor swar mein) : Yah tum kya aarop laga rahi ho? Kya tum yah kehna chahti ho ki Vikramaditya ne chal aur kapat se yuvraj pad prapt kiya hai?

Choti rani (dridh swar mein) : Yadi sandeh ho, to swayam apne jyeshth putra se prashn kijiye, rajan. Inse poochhiye ki kis karan issne yuddh se poorv mere putra ke ashva (horse) ko nasha dene wali vishesh jadi-booti khila di thi.

Maharani Pratham (krodhit hokar) : Tum mere putra par mithya aarop nahi laga sakti!

Choti rani (nishchaybhare swar mein) : Mithya main keh rahi hoon? Achha, to phir Shampal ko turant darbar mein upasthit kiya jaye. Kyon, Vikramaditya?

Yah naam shravan hote hi Vikramaditya ka mukh peela pad gaya. Ve bhay se sthir ho gaye aur unke adharo se ek shabd bhi na nikal saka, kyunki Shampal wahi sevak tha jisne Vikramaditya ke aadesh par ashva ke aahar mein nasha-pradayini jadi-booti mila di thi.

Maharaj (gambhir swar mein): Kya yah satya hai, Vikramaditya?

Vikramaditya (ghabrahat chhipate hue): N-nahi, Pitashri! Vastav mein choti maa ko sambhavatah yah suikar nahi hua ki main yuvraj pad par aaroodh ho raha hoon. Unka putra yuvraj nahi ban paye, isi karan ve mujh par mithya aarop laga rahi hain.

Choti rani (krodh se garjit hokar) : VIKRAM!

Maharani Pratham (tikshn swar mein): Tum maun raho! Apni seemaon ka smaran rakho. Mera putra yuvraj bana hai, yah tumse saha nahi gaya, isi karan tum anarthak aur asatya vachan bol rahi ho.

Choti rani : Achha! To ab main asatya keh rahi hoon?

Maharaj (kathor swar mein) : Parayapt hua yah vivad! Yah rajsabha hai. Pratyek vyakti apni maryada ka palan kare.

Choti rani (vedna aur rosh se) : Maryada ka smaran aap swayam kijiye, Rajan. Aap moh mein itne andh ho chuke hain ki satya aur asatya ka bhed bhi aapko drishtigat nahi ho raha.

Maharaj (dridh nishchay se) : Yadi aisa hai, to turant Shampal ko darbar mein upasthit kiya jaye. Aaj satya spasht ho hi jayega.

Itna kahkar maharaj ne karatali bajakar sevakon ko aadesh diya ki Shampal ko tatkaal rajmahal mein prastut kiya jaye.

Kuch samay pashchat ek sevak punah aaya, vinamrata se shir jhukakar bola.

"Maharaj! Maharani!.... Shampal apne grih par upasthit nahi hain. Unki patni ka kehna hai ki ve pichhle do dinon se grih se bahar gaye hue hain."

Yah shravan kar choti rani chakit reh gayin. Unke mukh se akasmik nikal pada, "Yah kaise sambhav ho sakta hai?"

Tabhi maharani pratham (badi Rani) apne aasana se utth khadi hui aur vijay-bhav se boli, "Ab to satya prakat ho gaya, Rajan. Kanishth maharani (choti rani) putra-sneha mein itni andh ho chuki hain ki rajsabha ke madhya nirantar asatya aarop laga rahi hain.

Yah sunkar choti rani ne nishabd hokar apna shir jhuka liya. Unka ekmatra pramaan, Shampal, grih par abhi upasthit na tha, aur vah bhi do dinon se? Yah sthiti unke liye ati-vichitra thi.

Isi avasar par Vikramaditya ne garv se apni mochon par taav dete hue kaha.

"Yuvraj wahi banta hai jo yatharth roop se samarth aur yogya ho, chhoti maa. Aapke putra mein vah samarthya na tha, isi karan ve yuvraj pad prapt na kar sake.

Vikramaditya ke in kathor vachanon ne manon choti maharani ke hriday ko bhed diya. Apne putra ki yogyata par prashn uthte hi unki aankhen krodh se laal ho uthi.

Chhoti rani (dridh swar mein) : Yadi aisa hi hai, to turant Vaidya ji ko darbar mein upasthit kiya jaye!

Maharaj (asahishnuta ke saath) : Ab paryapt hua! Tum aur kitna Neeche karogi?

Chhoti rani (tikshn aur avichlit swar mein) : Main utni adhogati par nahi aayi, Rajan, jitni aap aur aapki pratham patni aur unke putra patit ho chuke hain. Aap moh mein andh ho sakte hain, parantu main satya se anbhigya nahi hoon.

Itna kahkar unhone karatali bajayi aur aadesh diya, "Vaidya ji ko tatkaal darbar mein upasthit kiya jaye."

Alp samay pashchat ek vriddh purush, shwet vastra dharan kiye hue, darbar mein pravesh karte hain. Yah rajvaidya the. Sabha mein pravesh karte hi unhone maharaj tatha dono maharaniyon ko vinamrata se pranam kiya.

Vaidya : Aagya ho, Ranimaa. aapne mujhe smaran kiya?

Chhoti rani : Vaidya ji, kya aapne us ashva ki jaanch ki thi, jis par chhote rajkumar yuddh ke liye gaye the?"

Vaidya : Ji, Ranimaa.

Chhoti rani : Toh kripaya sabha ke samaksh spasht kijiye ki us jaanch mein aapko kya gyaat hua.

Yah sunkar Vaidya sankoch aur bhay se Vikramaditya tatha upasthit sabhasadon ki or drishti daalne lage. Sabha ki samast drishti ab un par kendrit thi.

Chhoti rani (santulit par dridh swar mein) : Vaidya ji, bhay tyag kar satya prakat kijiye.

Vaidya (kampit swar mein) : Ranimaa… Rajkumar jis ashva par yuddh ke liye prasthit hue the, uski sthiti sandigdh pratit hui. Maine usse ek aushadhi pradan kar uske udar ki shuddhi karvai, aur…

Chhoti rani : Aur kya, Vaidya ji? Nirbhay hokar sampoorn satya kahiye."

Vaidya : Uske udar mein nashe ka prabhav paaya gaya, Ranimaa. Aisi aushadhi ya jadi-booti di gayi thi, jisse ashva ki gati mand ho jaye aur vah asantulit evam vikshipt ho uthe. Aisa pratiti hota hai ki kisi ne jaanboojh kar use nashe-pradayini jadi-booti khila di thi.

Yah vachan sunte hi sampoorn sabha mandap mein gahra sannata chha gaya. Sthiti atyant gambhir ho uthi. Vikramaditya ke mukh par bhay ka swed prakat ho gaya; saath hi maharani pratham ka mukhmandal bhi peetavarna pad gaya.

Ye dekh chhoti rani ne gambhir vyangyapoorna hasya ke saath kaha.

"Hah! Hahaha! Ab to satya spasht ho gaya, Rajan. Kya ab doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho gaya?"

Maharaj (gambhir swar mein) : Kya aap jo keh rahe hain, vah poornatah satya hai, Vaidya Maharaj?

Vaidya (vinamra bhav se) : Ji Rajan. Yadi aap ichchha karein, to kisi anya vaidya se bhi iski punah jaanch karai ja sakti hai.

Jab Vikramaditya ne dekha ki paristhiti unke paksh se phisalti ja rahi hai, tab ve tatkaal sambhalte hue bole.

Vikramaditya : Parantu isse yah kaise siddh ho gaya, chhoti maa, ki maine yuddh mein kapat ka sahara liya?

Maharani Pratham turant unke paksh mein boli. "Vikram satya keh raha hai. Yadi maan bhi liya jaye ki ashva ke aahar mein kisi ne kuch milaya tha, to yah bhi sambhav hai ki kisi shatru ne yah dushtata ki ho."

Chhoti rani (vyangyapoorna hasya ke saath): Hah! Shatru? Unka shatru to parivar ke bhitar hi upasthit hai.

Maharani Pratham (chakit aur krodhit hokar) : T-tum kya sanket dena chahti ho?

Chhoti rani (dridh swar mein) : Main wahi keh rahi hun jo nishchit roop se satya hai.

Maharaj (kathor swar mein) : Parayapt hua yah vivad! Maharani pratham ka kathan uchit hai. Yah bhi sambhav hai ki kisi shatru ne yah kapat kiya ho. Isse yah pramaanit nahi hota ki Vikramaditya ne swayam koi anuchit karya kiya hai.

Chhoti rani (gambhir aur vedanapoorna swar mein) : Yadi yah bhi maan liya jaye, to kya mere putra ki peeth par lage ghaav bhi mithya hain?

Maharaj : Spasht roop se kaho, tum kya sanket karna chahti ho?

Chhoti rani : Yuddh ka niyam tha, peeth pichhe se vaar nahi kiya jayega. Toh phir kaise mere putra ki peeth par talwar ka gahra nishaan upasthit hai?

Yah shravan hote hi punah rajsabha mein gambhir sannata vyapt ho gaya. Kuch sabhasad sthambhit reh gaye, jabki anya ke beech mand-mand gupt charcha ka shor uthne laga.

Is drishya ko dekh Vikramaditya ke lalat par swed bindu ubhar aaye. Aisa pratiti hone laga manon pratyek prashn ke saath unka ek aur paksh durbal padta ja raha ho.

Maharaj (gambhir chinta ke saath) : Kya yah bhi satya hai, Vaidya Maharaj?

Vaidya (vinamra aur nishchit swar mein): Ji Rajan, Kanishth Maharani satya keh rahi hain. Rajkumar ki peeth par talwar ke gahre nishaan upasthit hain, jinse spasht hota hai ki unpar pashchat se aakraman kiya gaya tha. Keval ek hi nahi, varan anek talwaron ke prahar ke chinh unke sharir par vidyamaan hain.

Yah vachan shravan hote hi rajsabha mein punah gahra sannata vyapt ho gaya. Vatavaran gambhir aur vedanapoorna ho utha.

Ab chhoti rani ki aankhon se ashrudhaar pravahit hone lagi. Ve vedna se kampit swar mein boli.

"Aur kya pramaan apekshit hai aapko, Rajan? Mera putra veer ki bhanti yuddh bhoomi mein lada. Us par pashchat se vaar kiya gaya, tathapi vah dhairyapoorvak yuddh karta raha… parantu gambhir roop se ghayal ho gaya. Kya rajkul se koi unka kushal-prashn karne gaya? Na aap gaye, Rajan… aur na hi Maharani Pratham."

Maharani Pratham (sankochit swar mein) : M-main…!

Chhoti rani (dridh aur vedanapoorna swar mein) : Ab aadesh dijiye, Rajan. Aapka kya nyay hai?

Maharaj (gambhir dvandva mein): Main…!

Parantu maharaj apna vachan poorn kar pate, usse poorv hi ek mantri apne aasana se utth khada hua.

Mantri : Parantu isse yah kaise siddh hota hai ki yovraj Vikramaditya ne kapat ka sahara liya? Yadi maan bhi liya jaye ki ashva ke aahar mein kisi ne kuch milaya tha, aur yuddh ke samay kisi ne niyam-vipreet pashchat se prahar kiya, to kya keval is aadhar par yah nishchit kiya ja sakta hai ki yah sab Vikramaditya ke aadesh se hi hua?

Yah shravan kar Kanishth Maharani ne apne nakhon ko apni muththiyon mein kas liya. Mantri ka tark yuktiyukt tha. Unke paas yah pratyaksh pramaan na tha ki Vikramaditya ne swayam yah kapat rachit kiya tha, yadyapi ve antaratma se bhali-bhaanti jaanti thi ki yah sab usi ka karya hai.

Tab Vikramaditya ne kapatmay mand muskaan ke saath kaha. "Uttar dijiye, chhoti maa. Mantri ji ke prashn ka samuchit samadhan pradan kijiye."

Unki drishti mantri ki or uthi, aur mantri bhi manon sanketpoorna muskaan ke saath unki baat ka samarthan karta pratit hua, jaise yah sanket de raha ho ki ab baazi unke paksh mein hai.

Yah samast drishya Kanishth Maharani ki drishti se chhipa na raha. Ve nishchit thi Vikramaditya ne hi yah samast chal rachi thi. parantu pramaan ke abhav mein ve satya ko sabit karne mein asamarth ho rahi thi.

Parantu yah prashn keval satya ka hi nahi, unke putra ke gaurav aur swayam unki maryada ka bhi tha. Ve gambhir chintan mein doob gayin, aur man hi man kisi upaay ka manthan karne lagi.

Chhoti rani (dridh swar mein): Lekin…!

Vikramaditya : Huh?

Maharani Pratham : Kya?

Maharaj : ...?

Mantri (chakit hokar) : Kya arth hai aapka, Kanishth Maharani?

Itna kahkar Kanishth Maharani achanak apne aasana se utth khadi hui aur rajsabha ke madhya aakar dridhata se khadi ho gayin.

Chhoti rani (uchch evam dridh swar mein) : Anyay hua hai mere putra ke saath!

Maharaj (asahishnu bhav se) : Tum punah wahi…!

Chhoti rani : Kripaya mujhe apni baat poorn karne ki anumati di jaye.

Maharaj (gambhir swar mein) : Theek hai. Parantu smaran rahe... yah antim avsar hoga.

Kanishtha Maharani ne maharaj ke kathor swar ko manon anasuni karte hue apni baat aage badhai,

"Anyay toh hua hai mere putra ke saath! Chahe yah kapat Vikramaditya ne rachit kiya ho ya kisi anya ne, tathapi yah toh nishchit hai ki mere putra ke viruddh chal ki gayi. Uske ashva ke aahar mein nashe ki aushadhi milayi gayi, jisse vah yuddh ke samay uchit roop se ashva-sawar na kar sake. Us par pashchat se prahar kiya gaya, yuddh ke niyamon ka ullanghan kar, jaan-boojhkar use durbal banane ka prayatna kiya gaya."

Is baar sabha mein mand-mand charcha ki halchal utpann hone lagi. Aisa pratit ho raha tha manon vatavaran ka pravah badal raha ho.

Choti Maharani ne punah gambhir swar mein kaha, "Yadi uske saath yah kapat na hua hota, to yuvraj pad ka adhikari wahi hota."

Is vachan ke pashchat sabha mein gahra sannata chha gaya. Is maun mein ek gambhir bhav chhipa tha, yadi vastav mein chhote rajkumar ke saath anyay na hua hota, to kya bijay ka parinam bhinn hota?

"Boliye, Rajan! Boliye, Maharani Pratham! Boliye, mantrigan! Yadi mere putra ke saath yah kapat na hua hota, to kya yah sambhav nahi tha ki bijeta wahi hota, aur yuvraj pad par aaroodh bhi wahi hota?"

Yah shravan kar Vikramaditya ne krodh se apne dant kas liye aur tivr drishti se mantri ki or dekha, manon sanket de rahe hon ki kisi bhi prakar is tark ka pratikhyan kiya jaye.

Mantri (santulit swar mein) : Parantu maharani, tathapi yatharth yah hai ki yuvraj Vikramaditya hi ghoshit hue hain. Bijay toh unhone hi prapt ki hai.

Chhoti rani (dridh tark ke saath) : Kya yah yuddh samta aur nyay ke saath hua tha? Ek or mera putra tha jo chal aur kapat ka shikar bana, aur doosri or Vikramaditya ko nirvighn bijay prapt hui. Yadi yuddh nishpaksh aur niyamon ke anusar hua hota, to sambhav hai ki vijay mere putra ko hi prapt hoti, aur yuvraj pad ka adhikari bhi wahi hota.

Ab mantri ke paas pratyuttar ke liye koi uchit tark shesh na tha. Yadyapi yah pramaanit na ho saka ki kapat Vikramaditya ne swayam kiya tha, tathapi yah spasht ho chuka tha ki kanishtha rajkumar ke saath anyay avashya hua hai, taaki ve yuvraj pad se vanchit rahen.

Ab antim nirnay dena maharaj ke haath mein tha.

Maharaj ne gambhir drishti se sampoorn sabha par nazar daali. Samast sabhasad unke vachan ki prateeksha kar rahe the. Kuch kshan gambhir chintan ke pashchat ve dheere parantu kathor swar mein bole.

Maharaj : Toh tum kya ichchha rakhti ho?

Chhoti rani (dridh swar mein) : Main yah ichchha karti hoon ki yuddh punah aayojit kiya jaye. Tabhi yatharth roop se yogy yuvraj ka nirnay ho sakega. Aur is baar kathor nigrani rahegi, taaki kisi prakar ka kapat ya anyay na ho.

Yah shravan kar sabha mein sabhasad paraspar ek-doosre ki or drishti daalne lage. Maharaj bhi gambhir manthan mein doob gaye. Yadi punah yuvraj nirnay hetu yuddh aayojit kiya gaya, to praja ke man mein sandeh utpann ho sakta tha. Aur yadi yah samachar phail gaya ki kanishth (chhote) rajkumar ke saath anyay hua tha, to praja, jo Kanishth Rajkumar se atyadhik sneha karti thi, ashant bhi ho sakti thi.

Samast sabha ki drishti maharaj par kendrit thi. Kuch kshan chintan ke pashchat ve punah gambhir swar mein bole

Maharaj : Parantu rajkumar abhi ghayal avastha mein hain. Kya ve punah yuddh ke liye saksham ho payenge?"

Mantri : Maharaj satya keh rahe hain, Ranimaa. Kanishth rajkumar vartamaan mein durbal avastha mein hain. Tatha yah bhi smaran rahe ki Rajkumar Vikramaditya koi sadharan manushya nahi hai, veh asadharan bal aur prakritik shaktiyon se yukt hain.

Yah shravan kar Vikramaditya ne garv se apni mochon par taav diya aur kapatmay muskaan ke saath sabha ki or dekha.

Maharani Pratham : Yah to vinash ka nimantran hoga, yadi kanishth rajkumar punah yuddh bhoomi mein utaren.

Maharaj (punah chetavani ke swar mein) : Ek baar aur vichar kar lo. Yadi yuvraj nirnay hetu punah yuddh hua, to is baar pariksha aur bhi kathin hogi. Kya ve vastav mein punah yoddha ke roop mein utarne ke liye saksham hain?

Kanishth Maharani ke adharo par ek shant, vishwaspoorna muskaan ubhar aayi. Ve dheere parantu dridh swar mein boli...

"Smaran rahe, Rajan, yadi uske ek haath mein aapka 'sauryang' vansh ka rakt pravahit ho raha hai, toh uske doosre haath mein mera 'Suryavanshi' rakt bhi utna hi tej aur prajwalit hai."

Itna kahkar Kanishth Maharani bina vilamb kiye pashchat mud gayin aur dridh charanon se rajsabha se bahar nikal gayin, apne shabdon ki pratidhvani ko sabha mandap mein hi chhodte hue.

Rajsabha mein upasthit samast sabhasad nishabd bhav se unhe door jaate hue dekhte rahe. Kisi ke mukh se ek shabd tak na nikla.

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Itna hi Aaj ke liye. Kahani shuru ho chuki hai. Story ke setting and tone samajh chuke honge. Character introduction baad mein, Abhi pahle stroy padhne Suru kardo. Dekhte hain response Kaisa hota hai use per depend karega next update kab aayegi.
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[jaanvi sen]

Congratulations for new story

Congratulations for new story

That's great to have you back with another story Jaanviji.

I absolutely loved your last real-life-based Mom-Son romance. The way you portrayed the emotional conflicts and inner turmoil was beautiful — it genuinely felt like experiencing every moment alongside the characters. I am in love with your writing style.

This story feels even more challenging, especially as a harem narrative, but that only makes me more eager to read it. I truly hope you do justice to the plot here as well, because your narration of the Mother Son relationship is something special. You don’t just tell the story — you make readers feel every glance, every hesitation, and every ounce of tension between the characters.

I’m really looking forward to seeing how you bring this one to life.

For starting new story thread.....

Nice update madam

Congratulations for start of this story.

Congratulations, Dear Jaanvi ji for your new story !
Ummid hai ki ye story ek alag level ki hogi aur Aap ke pehli story jaise dil ko chhulenebali hogi (Romance aur rahasy bhara)
All the Best !

This reminds of my Control Systems Engineering classes where we were taught that feedback decides the output in addition to the input.
Abhi dekhna hey ki yeh differential (D) ya integral (I) ya PI control system hey.
All the best for this story.

Congratulations on bringing us another powerful story. I have high hopes that this will be even more impressive than the last one.

Congratulations on your new story

Good Start Congratulations
But Please Main Focus on Maa Beta

Congratulations jaanvi ji aap aay bahar i

Congratulations , new story ke liye

Congratulations for your new story. Hope it brings best out of you.

Update posted