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Which part is better in Strange World Series? (strange world series ka konsa part behtar hai?)


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Kirti.s

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Update : 35 (Game of Time)

Jese jese mai CDC lab ke karib pahuch raha tha mere dil ki dhadkan badhti jaa rahi thi, isliye nahi kyunki vaha par tabahi apne charam thi balki isliye kyunki yanha par maine apna sab kuch khoya bhi tha aur apna sab kuch paaya bhi tha
Yeh kambhakt zindagi bhi kesi ajeeb hai..jiss haath se lete hi usi haath se deti hai, aise kitne log hote honge jo maut ko chukar bhi vapaas aajate hai, apne khoye tak vapas mil jaate hai, aakhir me yeh waqt chahta kya hai

Yeh sochte hue mayank apne dosto ke saath aage badh raha tha, Particle accelerator aur Zorians ke dwara ki gayi tabahi ki vajah se yeh jagah kachre aur malbo ka ghar ban chuka tha, akshar yeh dekha gaya hai ki esi jagaho par insaan nahi rehte..lekin yanha toh insaan toh thik dur dur tak koi parinda bhi najar nahi aa raha tha
Pari ne mayank ka haath pakadte hue pucha “manthu, yaha toh kuch bhi nahi bacha hai”

Pari ki baat sunkar mayank apne vicharo mese baahar aata hai aur uski najar samne pade malbo par jaati hai, jise dekhkar voh ektak uss jagah ko dekhte rehta hai, pari ne mayank ki najro ka picha kiya aur uss jagah ko dekhte hue kehti hai “yahi par tune mujse vaada kiya tha ki tu muje kabhi nahi bhulega..mai hamesa teri first priority rahungi”

Pari ki awaaz sunkar mayank ki aankhe bhar aati hai, aur voh pari ke haatho par apni pakad majbut karta hai jese voh pari ko yeh ehsaas dila raha hai ki voh apni baat aaj bhi nahi bhula
Fir voh dono bina kuch bole vaha se chalte hue thode aage jaane lagte hai ki tabhi Akshita puchti hai “koi aisi jagah par kyu rehna chahega”

Mayank “agar jo maine socha hai aur yeh sach hai toh voh yahi hoga”

Pari “lekin manthan, yanha par toh koi bhi nahi dikh raha”


Mayank ne halki si muskurahat dete hue “yahi toh alag baat hai hum jese pagal scientist ki, pipe line jameen ke andar hai, aur voh yahi hai” usne haath se ek ishara karte hue kaha

Mayank ka ishara paate hi voh sabhi log najar uss taraf karte hai jaha unnse thodi hi doori par CDC lab ke piche vali imarat dikhayi dene lagti hai..mayank chalte hue uss dewaar me maujud ek gate ke pass gaya aur uss gate ko kholne ki koshish karne laga

Yeh dekh Sam, Manthan aur Pathik bhi uski madad karte hai aur badi muskil se voh uss gate ko khol paate hai, gate kholte hi unki najar CDC ki tuti hui lab ki dewar par jaati hai..ek lamba sa galiyaara unhe dikhayi deta hai jaha par dher saara kachra aur malba pada hua tha..galiyare ki deeware bhi kaafi had tak tut kar bikhar gayi thi

Siddhi-2 “kya yaha jaana surukshit hoga..??” usne samne ke najara dekhte hue pucha

Mayank “haa siddhi, yeh jo abhi hum dekh rahe hai yeh CDC lab ka upar ka hissa hai, kuch der pehle jaha mai ruk gaya tha vaha ke haalat isliye itne kharab the kyunki voh dhamaka vahi par hua tha..aur abhi jo hum dekh rahe hai yeh sab Zorians ki vajah se hai..lekin zameen ke niche jo pipeline banayi gayi hai voh itni majboot hai ki voh asani se todi nahi jaa sakti, kyunki tachyons se kya nikalata uska andaza hummese kisiko nahi tha..isiliye humne particle accelerator ke explosion ko dhyaan me rakhte hue uska design banaya tha..so it’s safe to go there”

Mayank uss galiyare me sabse aage chal raha tha, kuch der chalne ke baad yeh sab pipeline ke andar jaane vali sidiyo ke pass pahuch gaye the, mayank torch nikalkar on karte hue unn sidiyo se hote hue niche utar gaya..use dehkte hue baaki sab log bhi uske piche niche pipline me aajate hai

Mayank ne torch ko samne ki aur karte hue kaha “voh raha andar jaane ka rasta”

Gate ke pass me ek lever laga hua hai lekin itne din band rehne ki vajah se usme jang lag gaya tha, iss lever ko operate karne me Mayank ko kaafi time lag jaata hai, lekin voh bina haar maane uss lever ko operate kar deta hai aur uss darwaaze ko kholte hue sabhi log andar chale jaate hai
Andar jaate hi unn sabhi ke dil ki dhadkan thodi si badh jaati hai, kyunki andar ka maahool hi aisa tha, ek lamba sa galiyaara dono taraf faila hua tha..aur uss galiyare me andhkaar ke alawa aur kuch nahi tha, aur shor ka maano naamonishaan nahi tha, aur awaaz ke naam par sirf inke padte kadam ki ho rahi thi

Galiyaare me roshni ka ekmatr jariya ab sirf Mayank ke haath me rahi torch se nikal ki roshni ka..lekin voh bhi thoda dur jaate hi uss andhere me kahi ghum ho jaata..mayank baar baar apni torch se daaye baye dekh raha tha..aisa prateet ho raha tha maano voh iss andhere me bhi kuch dhund raha hai..aur use voh cheez bhi dikhayi de jaati hai

Mayank chalte hue thoda side me aaya aur usne kuch levers operate kiye aur dekhte hi dekhte uss pure galiyaare me roshni fail jaati hai, Akshita ne “yeh tune kese kiya..??” achanak se hui pipeline me lights ko dekhte hue usne mayank se sawal kiya

Mayank “mai yanha par kaam kar chukka hu..so muje iss pipeline ke baare me thoda bahut pata hai”

Akshita “toh ab kaaha jaana hai” usne lambi saans lete hue pucha

Mayank kuch sochte hue apne left side ishara karte hue uss aur jaane laga, “tu itna sure kese hai ki voh vahi par hoga..i mean yeh jagah bahut badi hai, voh kahi bhi ho sakta hai” pathik ne uske piche chalte hue sawal kiya

Mayank “tachyons ko jis kamre me rakha gaya tha, time-travel karne ke liye usse behtar jagah aur koi nahi ho sakti”

Kuch der ke baad voh sab ek band kamre ke samne aajate hai, lekin voh room lock tha, Sam use kholne ki koshish karta hai lekin voh use khol nahi paaya

“tuje kya lagta hai yeh darwaaza itni aasani se khulega..??” aarav ne sam ko mehnat karte dekh sawal kiya

“agar yeh itna aasaan hota toh ab tak kisi na kisi ko toh Doc Avishkar ke baare me maalum ho jaata” pathik ne aarav ka saath dete hue kaha

“iss darwaaze ki security CDC lab me rahi security se sabse best hai, ise tod paana impossible hai, kyunki isi darwaaze ke piche tachyons particles ko store kiya jaata tha..yeh itni asani se nahi khulega” mayank ne sam ko prayas karte dekh kaha

“damm it” sam apne haath ko uss darwaze par pachadte hue kehta hai “agar hum iss darwaaze ko tod nahi sakte toh yanha aane ka faiyda hi kya hua..??” usne halke gusse se kaha

Mayank “maine yeh kab kaha ki hum iss darwaaze ko todenge, ise todana aasan nahi hai..lekin hum ise khol jarur sakte hai”

Akshita “how..??”


Mayank kuch sochte hue uss kamre ke gate ke pass gaya, aur ek jagah par apna haath rakha, toh uss jagah deewar mese hi ek roshni ubhar kar baahar aayi jisne mayank ke pure haath ko scan kiya
Achanak se ek awaaz vanha par gunj uthti hai “DNA matched, please enter the password”

AI ki awaaz sunkar mayank ke chehre par ek pal ke khushi jhalak aayi thi, lekin use password ke baare me kuch pata nahi tha, voh apne mann me sochne laga “ab password kya hoga..?? think manthan think, kuch toh hona chahiye” vo apne dono haatho ko apne sar par rakhkar sochne laga

Mayank ke aisa karte dekh sabhi ko ehsaas ho jaata hai ki mayank password ke baare me nahi jaanta, Aarav “ab hum kya kare..?? agar password nahi mila toh hum kabhi andar nahi jaa payenge”

Aarav ki baat sunkar mayank ne uski aur dekha, fir ekak uski najar apni watch par gayi, aur usne turant hi Gideon ke bahar bulaya…uss watch mese ek hologram bahar aaya aur mayank ne use deewar se aarahi roshni ke samne rakha
Aisa karne par kuch waqt ke liye sabkuch shant raha lekin ekak uss deewar mese ek roshni bahaar aayi jisne mayank ki watch ko kuch pal ke liye scan liya aur “ID No. ML2005, Series Operator Gideon..Owner Manthan Shah” fir kuch der ke liye firse vaha sannata chaa gaya aur “Identity Confirmed..access granted” ki awaaz aate hi voh darwaaza apne aap khul jaata hai

Siddhi “yeh abhi abhi kya hua..??”

Mayank “pehle mera DNA check hua, aur password ke liye Gideon ka mere sath hona jaruri tha, bas use scan karte hi yeh apne aap unlock ho gaya”

Siddhi “iss tarah security hamare earth par nahi hai” uske baad yeh sabhi log uss kamre ke andar chale jaate hai

unke jaate hi ek awaaz unn sab ke kaano me gunti hai “jo koi bhi hai chale jao, I said get out”

Sam apni laser gun nikalte hue apne charo aur dekhne laga, room ke andar andhera hone ki vajah se kuch saaf dikhayi nahi de raha tha, halki halki roshni pipeline se toh aa rahi hai lekin voh bhi andar kamre me aakar ojhal ho jaati hai, tabhi room ke dayi side se unke samne ek aadmi haath me pistol liye aaya “I said get out from here”

“it’s me sir, it’s manthan” kehte hue mayank uske samne aa jata hai

Andhere ki vajah se shayad doc avishkar mayank ko thik se dekh nahi pa raha tha, isliye Mayank apni watch par kuch buttons dabate hue kehta hai “Gideon, is it working”

Gideon “yes sir”

Mayank “good, then turn on the lights” aur uske itna kehte hi uss room ki saari lights ON ho jaati hai

Manthan ko ese apne samne khada dekhkar doctor avi kuch pal ke liye chaunk jaata hai, use viswaas nahi ho raha tha ki koi markar bhi kese uske samne aa sakta hai, Gideon ki awaaz sunkar aur manthan ke samne hone ko voh juthla nahi paa raha tha, voh yeh jaan gaya tha ki yeh usi ka student manthan hai lekin uske dimaag me yeh sawaal aana lage ki yeh sach kese ho sakta hai

“no no no, yeh..yeh sach nahi ho sakta, mai pagal ho raha hu..haa pagal, nahi..nahi..nahi, tu manthan nahi hai..yeh mai I don’t know” voh apne aap se hi badbadate hue thoda side me gaya ki uski najar piche khade manthan aur Paridhi par padi

Avi kabhi manthan ko dekhta toh kabhi mayank ko dekhta, kyunki 1.5 saal me pehli baar aaj voh kisi insaan ko apni aankho se dekh raha tha, lekin dekha bhi toh kya..uske samne ek nahi balki do humshakal dikhayi de rahe the

Mayank chalte hue uske pass aaya “sir, shant ho jaiye yeh mai hi hu, aapka student, Manthan”

Lekin avi usko dekhkar darke maare do kadam piche chala jaata hai “nahi nahi nahi, yeh sach nahi ho sakta, mai jarur pagal ho raha hu, kk..kkaaunnn hai tu, manthan ki maut ko mene apni aankho se dekha tha, who the hell are you”

Mayank “nahi sir, mai kabhi mara nahi tha, mai hamesa se jinda hi tha..bas yanha nahi tha”

Avi “kya matlab hai tera..??” voh haklate hue puchta hai

Mayank “pehle toh aap shant ho jaiye” voh avi ko side me baitha te hue kehta hai

Avi “manthan ka koi judwa bhai nahi tha, fir tum dono kese” Voh aage nahi bol paata aur ektak mayank ko dekhne lagta hai

Mayank “hum dono judwa nahi hai, we are dopplegangers”

Avi “impossible, multiverse jesi koi bhi cheez reality me exist nahi karti”


Mayank “sab kuch ho jaane ke baad bhi, aapko sach me yeh lagta hai ki..” voh bolte hue ruk jaata hai

Ek pal ke liye avi chaunk jaata “agar tu sach me manthan hai, toh kuch aisa bata jo sirf hum dono hi jante hai”

Mayank haste hue kehta hai “tachyons hi time-travel karne ka rasta hai, aur Gideon ka master control aapne sirf muje diya tha, jiska ID no. hai ML2005”

Mayank ki baat sunkar avi ko vishwaas ho jaata hai ki samne baitha shaks usi ka student Manthan hai, voh ab khud ko rok nahi paata aur uske gale lagkar rone lagta hai “I am sorry manthan, I am really sorry”

Mayank bhi kuch der ke liye use rone deta hai aur fir use alag karte hue “sir, jo hua use hum badal nahi sakte..lekin jo ho raha hai use hum rok jarur sakte hai”

Avi “uss raat ko maine tuje apni aankho se marte hue dekha tha, voh dhamaka thik tere samne hua tha..fir tu..”
voh ruansi awaaz me sawaal karta hai

Mayank “nahi sir, voh dhamaka mere samne nahi..balki voh dhamaka mai khud tha, aur usi dhamake ki vajah se mai zinda bacha hu”

Avi “uss range ke dhamake se bachna impossible hai”

Mayank “sir, har baar aankho se dekhi hui ghatna sachchi nahi hoti, insaan ki aankhe akshar dhokha khaa jaati hai..maana ki uss range ke dhamake se bachna impossible tha..but somehow mai bach gaya aur ek alag hi dimension me pahuch gaya, voh jagah koi aur nahi balki EARTH-1 hai”


Avi “how..?? tune dimension travel kese kiya..??”

Uske baad mayank apni kahani shuru se lekar ant tak sabkuch bata deta hai “aur sir, mai yeh bhi jaanta hu ki uss hadse ke baad aap hi ne time-travel kiya hai, so please tell me exactly aapke time-travel me hua kya tha”

Avi “matlab ki yeh jo kuch bhi ho raha hai, yeh sab kuch meri hi vajah se ho raha hai, maine hi time-travel karke anjaane me hi sahi lekin maine hi time ko tod diya”
voh ekdum se niraash hote hue bola “ab muje samaj me aa raha hai ki mai apna ateet kyu nahi badal paaya..tere iss dimension travel aur time-wraith ki ladayi ko maine anjaane me rokne ki koshish kari, aur uska anjaam yeh hua ki aaj pura time hi tut gaya hai”

Mayank “sir, aapne anjaane me hi sahi..lekin aapne hume ek mauka diya hai hamari earth ko bachane ka, aaj nahi toh aajse 1100 saal future me, hamari earth ka tabaah hona nishchit hai..isi Zorians ke dwara khatam honi hai hamari Earth, lekin ab shayad hamare pass ek chance hai ki hum Zorians ko hara sakte hai”

Sam “aapne aisa kyu kaha ki aap apne atit ko change nahi kar paaye..??”

Avi apni kahani sunana chalu karta hai “disha ki maut ke baad mai tut sa gaya tha, uss dhamake me maine apna sab kuch kho diya..yanha tak ki mere pass ab jeene ki koi vajah nahi bachi thi..lekin fir muje manthan ki baat yaad aayi, tachyons ki madad se time-travel kiya jaa sakta hai, toh maine isi-related data collect kiya aur maine khud ki apni ek time-machine banayi, maine yeh sochkar time-travel kiya ki agar mai iss hone vale tabahi ko rok du toh disha ke saath saath mai manthan ko bhi bacha sakta hu..unn sabhi logo ko bacha sakta hu jinki maut meri iss experiment ke vajah se hui thi” voh gehri saans lete hue aage batata hai “yahi sochkar mai nikal gaya apne atit ko badalne ke liye” uske baad voh apni kahani suna deta hai ki kese usne time travel karke particle accelerator ke experiment ko rokna chaha
“maine apne atit me jaakar khud ko yeh samjaya ki hum yeh experiment nahi kar sakte, apne aap ko samjane me muje kaafi mehnat lagi..lekin ant me maine mere atit vaala Avi ko experiment ko naa karne ke liye maana hi liya aur uske baad yeh experiment kabhi hua hi nahi, uske baad mai apne aap ko samja kar vapas apne time me vapas aagaya..lekin”

“lekin past change nahi hua aur sabkuch bikhar gaya”
sam ne avi ki baat ko pura kiya

Manthan “yeh kese ho sakta hai..?? agar Doc Avi ne uss experiment ko rok diya tha toh unka past change kyu nahi hua..??”

Avi “parallel worlds..amazing” manthan ki aur dekhkar muskurata hai “uss din se lekar aajtak mai khud se bhi yahi sawaal kar raha hu..lekin mai mai kabhi samaj hi nahi paaya”

Mayank ne kataksh bhare swar “samaj nahi paaye yaa samajna nahi chahte the”
usne avi ki aur dekhte hue kaha

Avi sawaliya bhari najro se mayank ki aur dekhne laga “common sir, ab aap itne bhi bewkoof naa baniye, time-machine aur time-travel ke side-effects ke baare me aapne hi muje bataya tha..aap yeh ache se jaante hai ki time-travel karne par kya ho sakta hai” manthan ne avi ki aur dekhte hue kaha

Yeh sunkar avi apna sar juka deta hai, Pathik “koi hume bhi samjayega ki yeh sab ho kya raha hai”

To be continued…
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Finally avi se inki mulakat ho gyi. or avi ne apni kahani batani start ki usne toh kuch acha soch ke hi aisa kiya ye jante hue bhi ki iske kya side effects ho skte hai khair dekhte h ye manthan ke sawalo ka kya jawab dete h
 
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Update : 36 (Time Paradox)

Avi sawaliya bhari najro se mayank ki aur dekhne laga “common sir, ab aap itne bhi bewkoof naa baniye, time-machine aur time-travel ke side-effects ke baare me aapne hi muje bataya tha..aap yeh ache se jaante hai ki time-travel karne par kya ho sakta hai” manthan ne avi ki aur dekhte hue kaha

Yeh sunkar avi apna sar juka deta hai, Pathik “koi hume bhi samjayega ki yeh sab ho kya raha hai”

Ab aage…

Mayank “pathik..time travel karne ki bahut si side-effects hoti hai, aaj hamare pass..physics ke pass esi bahut si theories maujud hai jo time travel se hone vaale nuksaan ke baare me batati hai, haalaki time-travel karne par reality me exactly kya asar hoga uska andaaaza hum nahi laga sakte, hamari koi bhi theory khud ko proof nahi kar paa rahi hai..voh khud hi contradict theories hai, voh khud ko sahi ya galat saabit nahi kar sakti…abhi tak mai sure nahi tha ki hamara time kis vajah se tuta hai”

Pathik “abhi tak se tera kya matlab hai..??”

Avi “manthan jaan gaaya hai ki mere time-travel karne ke baad bhi mai apna future kyu change nahi kar paaya”


Mayank “bilkul sir” usne avi ki aur dekhte hue kaha

Manthan “lekin agar inhone past me jaakar apna atit badal diya tha, toh voh voh experiment kabhi hua hi nahi..matlab disha aur mayank kabhi mare nahi..toh doc ne time-machine kabhi banayi hi nahi”

Pathik “agar time machine banayi nahi toh doctor ne time-travel kabhi kiya hi nahi, time travel nahi hua toh voh experiment me dhamaka hua”


Manthan apne sar ke baal khujate hue kehta hai “yeh kya logic hua..yeh toh fir hamesa ek continuous loop me chalta hi rahega, hum yeh kabhi nahi jaan payenge ki aakhir me hua kya tha”

Mayank “are shant dosto, time-travel kehne me jitna chota hai..asal me yeh bhi utna hi complex hai, mai aap sabko time-travel ki kuch theories samjata hu”


Paradox..yeh shabd sunte hi hamare dimag me Time Paradoxes ka khayal aata hai, par kya paradox sirf time-travel tak hi simat hai..?? iska jawab hai naa..toh fir aakhir me paradox kya hota hai..??

Pathik “virodhabhas” ne mayank ki baat ko bich me kaat diya, toh saare log uski aur dekhne lagte hai “kya..?? muje itna hi pata hai..mai tere jesa padha likha nahi hu, ganwar hu mai” pathik thoda jepte hue kehta hai mayank ki aur dekhkar kaha

Manthan “haa bhai, yeh toh tune sahi kaha” usne pathik ki baat ka samarthan karte hue kaha “so please jara hindi me samjana..taaki hum sabhi ko samaj me aaye”

“hahaha, thik hai mere bhai..koshish karunga”
mayank ne haste hue jawab diya

“jesa ka pathik ne kaha Virodhabhas, paradox ka sahi matlab hota hai koi esi baat koi aisa sentence jo khud ke hi astitav par bhi sawaal uthata hai, paradox kuch bhi ho sakta hai..voh sentence sahi bhi ho sakta hai, galat bhi ho sakta..yaa fir dono hi ek saath sahi aur galat bhi ho sakta hai, like agar koi kehta hai haa..mai paagal hu, nahi..mai pagal hu” fir thoda rakkar kehta hai “par agar yeh kehne vala insaan sach me paagal nahi hai toh yeh dono hi sentence uske liye galat honge, par agar yeh koi mental condition vala insaan kehta hai toh uske liye sahi hota hai..par yeh kis had tak sahi hai yaa galat hai, hum nahi bata sakte..jab tak hum uss baat ko puri taraf se jaan nahi lete, jab tak hum inn dono hi sentence ko proov nahi kar lete tab tak yeh ek paradox hi hoga”

Khair, filhaal hamari ladayi time ke saath hai toh mai kuch aisi paradoxes ki baat karunga, jisme sabse pehla Paradox aata hai THE GRANDFATHER PARADOX
Jyada tar logo ko iss paradox ke baare me pata hota hai, iss me yeh kaha gaya hai ki kya hoga agar aap apne samay me piche jaakar apne hi grandfather ko unki shaadi se pehle maar dete hai toh kya hoga..?? Maan lijiye ki aapne time machine banakar past me uss waqt me chale jaate hai jab aapke dadaji young the, aur aapne kisi tarah se unhe maar diya

Ab agar aapke dadaji mar jaate hai toh unki shaadi kabhi aapki daadi se nahi hogi, aapke father kabhi janam nahi lenge, aapke papa ka janam hi nahi hua toh voh kabhi apki mummy se shaadi nahi kar payenge..aur naahi aap kabhi iss duniye me aayenge..duniya aur timeline me aapka koi astitva hi nahi rahega


Jab aapka koi astitva hi nahi raha toh future me aapne kabhi time-machine banayi hi nahi..toh fir aapne apne grandfather ko kese maara..?? time travel hua hi nahi toh aapke dada kabhi mare nahi..voh mare nahi toh aapke parents ki shaadi hoti hai aur aapka janam hota aur bade hokar aap time-travel karne jaate hai aur apne dada ji ko maar dete hai

Pathik “bhai, yeh toh maine bhi sunn rakha hai, aur abhi abhi mai aur mera dost manthan, hum aisi hi kuch baat kar rahe the..lekin iska doc avishkar ki kahani se kya matlab”

Pathik ki baat sunkar manthan thoda sa ruansa ho gaya tha, kyunki use apne earth vale pathik ki yaad aati hai, ise dekhkar mayank kehta hai “sach me, tuje manthan ke jesa hi dost chahiye tha”

Pathik “haa vahich toh, pata nahi mere nasib tu kese aagaya, saala hamesa mera dimaag kharab kar deta hai”

Iss baat par sab hasne lagte hai, Pathik “so iss baat se kya pata chalta hai”

Sam ne pathik ki baat ka uttar diya “doc avi ke kahani ke anusar hum yeh maan lete hai ki unhone time-travel karke particle accelerator ka experiment nahi hone diya, agar voh experiment nahi hua toh uss raat ko disha ki maut nahi hui, uss raat disha mari nahi toh avi ne kabhi time-machine banaya hi nahi, aur voh time-machine kyu banata..kyunki ab voh disha ke saath happily reh raha hai, so ab Avi apne atit me kabhi vaapas gaya hi nahi, agar voh vaapis nahi gaya toh particle accelerator ka experiment kisine roka nahi aur uss dhamake me disha mar gayi”

Paridhi “vahi toh mai bhi keh rahi hu..agar avi aur disha happily apne life jee rahe hai toh use time machine banane ki jarurat hi kyu padegi..??”

Mayank “pari..aisa tab hota jab avi aur disha aaj ek saath hote, lekin aisa nahi hua, jab avi sir apna past change karke vaapis aaye toh disha tab bhi mari hui thi..voh jinda hi nahi thi”

Siddhi “toh iska kya matlab ho sakta hai”


Mayank “grandfather paradox ke bhi kahi limitations hai, like voh ek closed loop me chalta hi rehta hai..par usko puri tarah se justify nahi kar sakte..kyunki voh always ek continuous loop me hi chalte rehta hai”

Manthan “iska matlab toh yeh hota hai ki hum apna past kabhi change kar hi nahi sakte”


Mayank “iska jawab hai haa bhi aur nahi bhi, kyunki past change karne par kya ho sakta hai uska anumaan laga paana impossible hai..but yes there are two effects of changing past”

First effect, well ise samjane ke liye mai ek example deta hu, yeh sab jaante hai ki mai aur pathik bahut hi ache dost hai, maan lo ki ek din pathik ki car accident me death ho jaati hai..aur mai iss haadse se puri tarah se tut jaata hu, lekin fir muje khayaal aata hai ki mere pass toh time machine hai, mere dimaag yeh idea aata hai ki mai past me jaakar apne dost ko uss haadse se bacha lu toh voh kabhi nahi marega

Toh mai time-machine ki madad se time-travel karke uss time me aagaya jab pathik ka car accident hone vala tha, mai pehle se hi jaanta tha ki pathik ka accident kese hone vaala hai, toh uss jagah jaldi se pahuchne ke liye mai kisi ki car leta hu aur use teji se daudate hue vaha se nikal gaya, kuch der me mai uss jagah pahuchne vaala tha ki achanak se meri car ke samne ek ladka aajata hai aur mai use uda deta hu…lekin jab maine iss haadse ko khud se karte hue dekha toh yaad aaya ki Pathik ki maut bhi aise hi kisi car accident se hui thi, toh mai car se utarkar uss ladke ke pass aaya toh pata chala ki voh ladka koi aur nahi balki khud Pathik tha..yaanki maine hi apne dost ko maara hai

Past me aane ke baad bhi mai iss accident ko nahi rok paaya, toh maine socha kyu na mai ek din pehle jaakar pathik ko iss accident ke baare me bata du, yahi sochkar main fir ek baar time travel karke samay me aur piche jaata hu aur pathik se milkar yeh batata hu ki uske saath aane wale waqt me kya hone vala hai, yanha tak ki mai use sahi time aur place bhi bata deta hu..taki mai apne dost ko uss haadse se bacha saku..yaani ki pathik ko toh pehle se hi pata tha ki uske saath kya hone vaala hai..lekin kisi unknown reason ki vajah se use usshi raste se kahi jaana padta hai, mai chahe apne dost ko bachane ki kitni bhi koshish ae kar lu..lekin har baar voh meri hi car se maara jaata hai


Manthan “yaani ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye hum apne past ko change nahi kar sakte”


Siddhi “aur voh dusra effect kya hai..?? kya voh bhi isi tarah se hai..??”

Mayank naa mein apna sar hilate hue kehta hai “haa bhi aur nahi bhi”

Dusra effect yeh kehta hai ki hum apna past change kar sakte hai..hum apne grandfather ko maar bhi sakte hai..voh bhi bina apne vajood ko mitaye, mai pathik ko bhi marne se bacha sakta hu..lekin jab mai apna kaam khatam karke vapas apne waqt me aaunga tab meri life pehle jesi hi hogi..yaani mere grandfather abhi bhi jinda hi hoge..pathik already mara hua hi hoga, maine apna atit badal diya tha lekin iske bawjood bhi uska koi bhi asar meri present life par nahi pada

Manthan “lekin tune toh abhi kaha hi hum apne past ko badal sakte hai, past ko change karna possible hai”

Mayank “haa, bilkul possible hai”

pathik “yaar yeh game khelna band kar”


Mayank “pathik yeh game nahi..balki haqiqat hai, jo hum sabpar beet chuki hai, doctor avi par beet chuki hai”

Avi jo abtak chup baitha tha voh kehta hai “time-travel karke hum apna past change kar sakte hai..lekin aisa karne par har baar ek nayi alternate timeline banegi..ek alternate universe banega”

Mayank “exactly, aap ke saath bhi yahi hua hai”


Manthan “iska matlab toh yeh hua ki kisi alternate earth par avi ne uss experiment ko rok diya hai aur usme voh disha ke saath khushi se apni life bita raha hai”

Mayank “haa manthan”

Pathik “toh fir hamari time-line kese tut sakti hai”

Sam “kyunki time jo hai voh hamare 10 dimensions me ek hi jesa hai, past change karne par uska effect timeline par jarur hota hai, fir voh chote se chota change hi kyu naa ho..uska effect har pal ke saath future me multiply hote rehta hai”


Mayank “doctor avi ke liye apne uss experiment ko rokna unke liye ek galti sudharne ke jesa tha, uss experiment ke naa hone par uska bahut se jeev ki life par asar padta hai, yaanha tak ki khud time par bhi asar padta hai…kyunki time-wraiths bhi toh usi time ka ek hissa hai, agar aap waqt ke saath chedchad karoge toh waqt aapko nahi chodega, aur uss experiment ka hamare time par bahut hi bada effect padta hai” voh thoda rukkar “agar hum apna chota se chota decision bhi dekhe toh uska asar hamare future me kahi na kahi jarur dikhata hai..uss decision se sirf hum hi nahi balki hamare pura universe usse jud jaata hai”

Pathik “pura universe kese..??”

Mayank “apne sar par gira hua sheb agar newton ne bina kuch soche khaa liya hota toh kya hum gravity ke baare me jaan paate…?? Tab shayad aaj hamari duniya itni aage nahi badh paati, newton ka voh ek decision ne aaj hamari puri duniya hi badal daali hai”

Manthan “chote se chota decision bhi future me badhkar bahut bada impact karta hai, ise butterfly effect bhi kehte hai”

Pathik “lekin yeh experiment already bahut se chizo se juda hua tha, yaaha tak ke tachyons se bhi”


Mayank “haa, bas isiliye particle accelerator experiment ke naa hone par uska time par itna jyada asar hua hai ki voh khud ko bacha nahi saka aur puri tarah se bikhar gaya”

Aarav “toh fir yanha aane ka fayda kya hua..?? itna toh hum bhi jaante the ki jo kuch bhi multiverse ke saath ho raha hai voh time-travel karne ka hi asar hai”


Mayank “aarav, yeh toh hum jaante hi the..lekin exactly kya hua tha kis vajah se hua tha yeh hum nahi jaante the, iss time travel ki aakhir me sach kya hai yeh hume ab maalum ho chukka hai”

Avi “maine apni life me bahut si galtiyaa ki hai, lekin shayad kismet ne muje ek mauka diya hai jisse mai apni ki hui galityo ko sudhar saku”

Sam “kese..??”


Avi “agar yeh jo kuch bhi hua voh particle accelerator ke experiment ke naa hone ki vajah se ho raha hai..toh, tu samaj raha haina mai kya kehna chahta hu” usne mayank ki aur dekhte hue kaha

Mayank “haa, samaj raha hu, we need to do one more trip to that night”

Avi “exactly tum sab ko yahi karna hai, maine already time ko bahut nuksaan pahuchaya hai, mai dubara time-travel karke haalat aur bigad naa nahi chahta, so manthan yeh kaam ab tuje hi karna hoga”

Sam “wait wait wait, ek aur baar time-travel..??”


Manthan “already hum itna toh sure ho gaye hai ki past me jaane par hum apna past toh change nahi kar sakte, toh fir time-travel karne ki kya jarurat hai..??”

Mayank “maine yeh kab kaha ki hume apna past change karna hai”

Avi “maine toh sirf time-travel karne ke liye kaha hai, uss experiment ko hone dene ke liye kaha”

Manthan “haa vahi, uss raat ko jaane ka matlab toh yahi hua na ki hume apne hi past ko change karna hai”

Mayank “nahi manthan, time ko bachane ka sirf yahi ek rasta hai, jis vajah se time tuta hai hume uss vajah ko hone hi nahi dena hai, matlab hum time-travel karke experiment ke baad vaale avishkar ko pehle vale avishkar se milne se rokna hai, bas sirf itna hi karna hai”

Sam “lekin isse hoga kya..??”


Mayank “isse hoga yeh ki jo kuch bhi past me pehle hua tha..jo mere saath hua hai voh sab fir dohraya jaayega, aur time-line intact rahegi..use koi nuksaan nahi pahuchega”

Pathik “par time travel karenge kese..?? tune hi toh kaha tha ki time tut chukka hai”


Mayank “maine yeh bhi kaha tha ki time ko naa toh toda jaa sakta hai aur naa hi moda jaa sakta hai, aur uske kahi roop bhi ho sakte hai”

Pathik “tu kabhi yeh bolta hai ki time tut chukka hai, kabhi yeh bolta hai ki time ko toda nahi jaa sakta, tu kehna kya chahta hai..??”

Mayank “agar yaad hai toh maine ek baat kahi thi, time-space ke bahar hum jo karenge uska action hamari time-line par effect nahi karega”

Pathik “haa yaad hai”


Mayank “same vese hi, hamara time tut chukka hai, toh hum abhi time-travel karenge toh uska asar hamari time-line par nahi padega, hume bas uss raat ke waqt me vaapas jaakar apna kaam karna hai aur kaam hote hi vaapas aajana hai, jo ki hum time-travel tute hue time se karenge toh hamare time travel karne ki vajah se time-line par koi nuksaan nahi pahuchega”

Sam “so basically dekha jaaye toh aisa lagega ki humne kabhi time travel kiya hi nahi hai”


Mayank “haa sam, lekin time ke tutne se pehle doc avi ne time travel kiya tha toh shayad kuch chote mote changes timeline me aa sakte hai..par usse jyada nuksaan nahi hoga”

Manthan “so, ateet me jaane ke liye kaun kaun ready hai..??”


Mayank “yeh kaam shayad mere akele ka nahi hai, toh mere saath kaun chalega”

Paridhi “mai saath chalungi”

Sam “aur mai bhi”

Mayank “nahi sam, tu hamare saath nahi chal sakta”


Sam “yeh ladayi time-travel karne se khatam nahi ho jayegi, yeh naa bhul ki Zorians se ladayi abhi baaki hai” ne chaunkte hue pucha

Mayank “haa isiliye mai keh raha hu, jab hum vapas lautenge toh jo jeev jis bhi time me hai voh vahi par trap ho jayega, voh time-portals apne aap gayab ho jayenge..tum dono apne waqt me kabhi vaapas nahi jaa paoge” usne sam aur akshita ki aur ishara karte hue kaha

Akshita “iska matlab ki jo Zorians iss waqt me hai voh yahi par reh jaayenge..??”

Mayank “haa akshita, aur mere khayaal se aapka jaana hi sahi rahega, kyunki 31st century se sirf aap log hi hai jise Zorians ki sachayi maalum hai, so mai request karta hu tumhe apne time me vaapas laut jaana chahiye”


Mayank ki baat sunne ke baad uss room me ekdum se sannata chaa jaata hai

To be continued…
Nice update milan ji
Kafi lamba or dimag ko uljha dene wla update tha sam or akshita ab wapas laut jayenge.mayank apne sath kis kis ko le ke jyega or ye idea kitna work krega pta nhi
 
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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

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Kudrat ka niyam hai jo chiz ka janam hota hai uska ek na ek din ant bhi jarur hota hai, lekin hamari dharti ka ant itna jaldi hoga yeh kisine nahi socha tha, sabhi log iss waqt base ke bahar kaale asmaan ke niche baithe the
Akshita “sam, hum aise hi bina kuch kiye nahi baith sakte”

Sam “kya matlab hai tera..??” usne sawaliya bhari najro se dekhte hue kaha

Akhita “sam, hum jab yanha aaye tab hum akele the..luckily hume yaha kuch dost mil gaye, uske baad hume manthan mila jisne Multiverse ke hona ka saboot diya..iska matlab yeh toh nahi hai ki hum ese hi haath par haath rakhkar baithe rahe”

Sam “aksh..iss tarah se baithna muje bhi acha nahi lag raha..par hum kar bhi kya sakte hai, muje kuch bhi samaj me nahi aa raha”

Akshita bade hi pyaar se “common sam, yeh tu keh raha hai..?? I mean tu Sam hai..hamari team ka leader, aur iss waqt hamare waqt me tere jitna intelligent shayad koi ho..sirf tu hi tha jo iss hadse ko samaj paaya tha..sirf tu hi tha jise inn time-portals ke baare me jaana”

Sam “tu kehna chahti hai..??”

Akshita “mai bas yeh kehna chahti hu ki har ek second hamare liye important hai, tu ya mai yaa fir hum mese koi bhi nahi janta manthan kab vapas aayega”

Pathik “lekin hum kar bhi kya sakte hai..?? aap logo ki kahani ne toh pura science ka najariya hi badal kar rakh diya”

Aarav “yeh toh sahi kaha pathik..lekin inn dono ki baat bhi sahi hai, luckily manthan jinda tha aur voh yanha aaya, but agar voh sach me mar gaya hota..i wish ke aisa hua hota, tab kya karte..?? uss waqt toh hamare liye inn dono ka hi sahara hota..inhi ki vajah se atleast hum log apne dushman ke baare me hum kuch toh jaan paaye hai” uski baat me abhi bhi manthan ke liye nafrat saath dikhayi de rahi thi

Pathik “aarav, sukramaan ki manthan jinda tha..agar voh nahi hota toh hum Time-Wraiths ke baare ma kabhi nahi jaan paate”

Akshita “kuch toh aisa hai jo hamare samne hote hue bhi hum use dekh nahi paa rahe” ne hatash hote hue kaha jise sunne ke baad vanha kuch der ke liye shanti chaa jaati hai

Sam kuch sochte hue badbada raha tha “time-portals, time-wraiths, dimension travel, dinosaurs kaa aana aur Zorians, ho kya raha hai yeh sab..??”

Sam ko ese badbadate dekh Akshita uski aur najar karti hai, achanak se Aarav ko kuch yaad aata hai “sam..yeh tuje ajeeb nahi lag raha..??”

Sam uski sawaliya najro se dekhta hai, aarav “manthan ne kaha tha Dexter time-force se bahar isiliye aaya tha kyunki voh unstable ho gaya tha, because jab particle accelerator ke experiment fail hone par manthan galti se dusre dimension me chala gaya tha”

Sam “haa, kaha toh usne yahi tha”

Aarav “toh fir yeh dusre time-wraith kaha se aaya..?? I mean ke uss experiment ko fail hue 16 mahine beet chuke hai..lekin time-wraiths ko humne kabhi nahi dekha, lekin voh achanak se hi kyu samne aaya Ur voh bhi tab jab Zorians ne Earth par humla kiya..??”

Akshita “sam..aarav ki yeh baat bilkul sach hai, time-wraith jaha se gujarata hai vaha ajeeb se nishan ban jaate hai aur ese nishan hume CORONAL city me mile the, voh bhi Zorians ke hamla karne ke baad”

Sam kuch sochte hue “aur manthan ne yeh kaha tha ki iss iss time-wraith me kuch alag tha”

Akshita “agar manthan ki baate sach hai..toh time-wraith time force se tabhi bahar aate hai jab voh unstable ho”

Pathik “toh kya kisine particle accelerator firse chalu kiya hai..??”

Sam kuch sochte hue “nahi pathik, time-wraith ke bahar aane ke aur bhi raste ho sakte hai”

Aarav “time-portals

Sam “exactly aarav”

Akshita “lekin sawaal fir vahi ka vahi aa jaata hai, Time-Portals apne aap kese aa sakte hai..??”

Sam kuch sochte hue “usse bada sawal toh yeh hai ki yeh time-portals sirf teen hi jagah par kyu hai”

Aksh “sam, tu kya bol raha hai..?? muje sach me kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha”

Sam “aksh, yeh time-portals kuch ajeeb nahi hai..pehla time-gate crateceous period me hai, dusre yaha 2018 Mumbai, aur teesra 3016 year”

Akshita “haa yeh ajeeb hai aur tune anjaane me jitni bhi baar time-travel kiya har baar tu Mumbai hi aaya hai..aur hamari puri army bhi yahi aayi thi, sirf dinosaurs hi ese jeev hai jo dono waqt me aate jaate rahte hai, lekin ek bhi time me voh jyada der nahi rukte”

Yeh sab esi baate thi jinhone sabhi ke dimaag ko hila kar rakh diya hai, Akshita ke mann me kuch aur sawaal panap rahe the “sam, ek aur chiz, yeh sab job hi ho raha hai voh kahi na kahi ek hi chiz se link kar raha hai”

Sam “kese..??”

Akshita “Time-Portals aur Time-wraith time ka hi ek hissa hai, Dinosaurs hamare waqt me sirf time-travel ke jariye hi aa sakte hai..indirectly Time se link karta hai..aur zorians, unke baare me hum sirf itna jaante hai ki voh bahut hi jyada taqatwar aliens hai”

Sam fir kuch sochte hue kehta hai “I think somehow time has broken, aur yehi vajah hai ki kuch jagah par time portals ban gaye hai, lekin yeh mai nahi keh sakta ki yeh kese possible ho sakta hai, but I am damn sure..time ab safe nahi hai”

Pathik “sam..teri yeah baat me koi valid point muje najar nahi aa raha, kyunki time-travel sirf tum dono ne kiya hai”

Akshita “sam tu itna surely kese keh sakta hai ki time ab safe nahi hai..??”

Sam “behosh hone se pehle maine manthan se ek sawaal kiya tha”

Sam “tune apni kahani me yeh bataya, jab tu dexter se juda tha uss waqt tuje apni zindagi ke alag alag pehlu dekhe” iss par manthan haa mein apna sar hilata hai “aur agar tune jisse muje bachaya, agar voh bhi ek time-wraith hai toh iss baar tune kya dekha..?? aur please, sach batana”

Manthan ko issi baat ka darr tha, jo sam ne kaha voh baat uske dimag me bahut pehle hi aa chuki thi “yeh baat mere dimaag me pehle se hi chal rahi hai, sach toh yeh hai ki maine kuch dekha hi nahi”

Sam chaunkte hue puchta hai “kuch bhi nahi…??”

Manthan “not a thing, aur yeh time-wraith, voh kaafi alag tha”

Sam “kese..??”

Manthan “I don’t know, mai jo soch raha hu voh shi hai ya galat, pichli baar jab bhi mai dexter ke kareeb jaata voh muje apne se dur faink deta tha, lekin iss baar aisa kuch bhi nahi hua”

Akshita “isse yeh toh prrof nahi hota ki time ab safe nahi hai”

Sam “tuje ajeeb nahi laga, I mean voh time-wraith hai, jitni bhi baar manthan ne dexter ko chua tha use kuch na kuch dekha tha..lekin iss baar use kuch dikhayi kyu nahi diya…?? yeh ek possibility hai ki agar time-line sahi nahi hai toh manthan kuch nahi dekh sakta”

Akshita “lekin sam, voh dexter unstable tha..shayad isliye Manthan voh sab dekh paaya ho"

Sam “bilkul ho sakta hai, toh fir usne yeh kyu kaha ki aur yeh vala time-wraith alag hai..??”

Pathik “exaclty yeh time-wriaths hote kya hai..??”

Sam “time-wraith ese jeev hai jo time-line ko protect karte hai..aisa maan lo ki voh ek army hai jo time-monsters, time-pirates se timeline ko bachati hai”

Pathik “right, toh yeh kese ho sakta hai ki time-line tut gayi aur unhe pata bhi nahi chala..??”

Sam “yeh toh mai nahi janta”

Akshita jo kuch der chup rehkar kuch soch rahi thi voh achanak se bolti hai “shayad sam sahi keh raha hai, kyunki hamare waqt me itni technology hone ke bawjood bhi hum kabhi multiverse ke baare me nahi jaan paaye” voh itna kehne ke baad chup ho jaati hai

Akshita ki baat sunkar sam chaunkte hue “aur naa hi hamare pass kisi ke bhi Dimension Travel karne ki koi information available hai”

Akshita “aur time-wraiths ke baare me sirf thoerys me likha hai, lekin unke hone ke koi bhi proof pure history me kahi bhi available nahi hai”

Sam “tachyons ka pehla experiment toh hua tha..lekin iss tarah ke incident ke baare me kahi par bhi koi jikar nahi hua” usne apni watch me rahe ek article ko dekhate hue kaha

Tabhi achanak se unse kuch duri par ek worm-hole open hota hai aur charo aur nile asmaani rang ki roshni fail gayi jis vajah se vaha maujud sabhi log apni aankhe band kar dete hai
Jab voh roshni hati toh aarav apni aankhe kholta hai aur uski najar sabse pehle uss shaks par padti hai jise dekhte hi uski aankho me paani aajata hai..Aur sirf aarav hi nahi Pathik ki najar Kruti par jam jaati hai

Pari ne mayank ka haath pakada hua tha aur voh iss earth par hui tabaahi ko dekh rahi thi..apni najre giri hui imarto ki aur dekhte hue mayank se kehti hai “manthan…kya hum iss bar sahi earth par aaye hai..??”

Mayank haa mein apna sar hilate hue “haa pari, welcome to Earth-2” usne samne sam ki aur dekhte hue kaha

Manthan ko dekhkar Sam uske pass jaane se khud ko rok nahi paata, voh bina kisi aur ko dekhe “manthan, I think shayad somehow time-line has broken” lekin voh aage kuch nahi bol paaya kyunki ab uski najar ek nahi balki dono manthan par padti hai

Manthan(Mayanak) ne apne piche khade logo ki aur ishara karte hue kaha “well yeh earth-2 se kuch dost hai”

Lekin sam abhi tak baari baari se dono hi manthan ko ghure jaa raha tha, voh apni aankhe band karte hue kehta hai “agar mai yeh apni aankho se nahi dekhta toh shayad mere mann me hamesa dil me shaq jarur rehta” usne mayank ki aur dekhte hue kaha

Aarav chalte hue pari ke samne jaane laga, lekin shayad pari ne abhi tak aarav ko nahi dekha tha..kyunki voh kabhi mayank aur sam ko dekhti toh kabhi uss tuti hi imarat ko dekhti
Pari ko abhi bhi vishwaas nahi ho raha tha ki voh sahi earth par aaye hai..lekin jese hi uske kaano me ek jaani pehchani awaaz sunayi di toh voh khud ko apni aankhe band karne se rok nahi paati
Pari ko apne kaano par vishwaas nahi ho raha tha, aarav ki awaaz sunkar voh yeh tay nahi kar paa rahi thi ki yeh uska veham hai yaa fir usne sahi me aarav ki awaaz ko suna
Aarav chalte hue pari ke samne aagaya tha, voh bhi ektak bina apni palke japkaye apni jaan se bhi pyaari behen ko fir ek baar apne samne dekh raha tha..voh bolne ke liye bahut pryash karta hai lekin uske muh se sirf ek hi awaaz nikalti hai “didi”

Firse Aarav ki awaaz sunkar pari khud ko rok nahi paati hai aur voh apni aankhe kholkar thik apne samne khade Aarav ko dekhne lagi, pari sabse jyada pyaar apne chote bhai se karti thi, aarav ko dekhte hi uski aankho se paani nikal aata hai “aarav” voh bas itna hi bol paayi ki aarav apna naam sunkar joro se pari ke gale lag jaata hai

Aarav ne jo dard itne mahino se apne dil me dabaya rakha tha voh sab ek saath baahar aajata hai, usne apni behen ko itne kaske gale lagaya tha jese voh iss paal ko apne andar samet lena chahta ho, voh abhi tak yakeen nahi kar paa raha tha ki uski jaan se bhi pyaari behen uske pass hai, voh pari ke gale lagte hi rone lag jaata hai

Aarav ke roni ki subkiya pari ko mehsoos ho rahi thi, aarav ke aansu uske chehre se hote hue Pari ke gardon ko bhego rahe the..voh aarav ko iss tarah rote hue nahi dekh paati aur pyaar se uske sar par haath firate hue kehti hai “betu, please chup hoja”

Aarav “di, aap kaha chali gayi thi” vese hi ruansi awaaz me bolta hai

Pari “mai toh kabhi kahi gayi hi nahi..mai toh hamesa tere pass thi”


Vahi dusri taraf Kruti aur Pathik ki najre ekdusre milti hai lekin dono mese koi kuch nahi bol paata voh bas ek dusre ki aankho me dekhte hue pass aate hai aur bina kuch bole hi ekdusre ke karib khade rahte hai
Manthan aur Siddhi ki najar ektak Pari aur Aarav par tiki hui thi, lekin Siddhi ki najar ek pal kisi aur taraf dekhti hai lekin bina kuch bole usne vapas apni najar Pari ki aur kar di

Manthan vapas aagaya yeh dekhkar Siddhi-2 ke chehre par uski khushi saaf dikh rahi thi..lekin uske saath me khadi Pari ko dekhkar uski voh muskaan chali jaati hau aur voh apna chehra jukate hue vaha se chali gayi

Pathik “ii….mai….voh” kuch bol nahi paata aur uski aankho se bhi aansu nikal aate hai

Mayank “maine kaha tha tuje, mai tuje pathik ke pass le jaunga”
ne kruti ke pass jaate hue kaha

sach me pyaar bhi kitna khubsurat haina, do insaan jo kabhi ek dusre se mile nahi the..lekin voh dono hi apne pyaar ko pehchan jaate hai..fir ek baar yeh shaabit ho jaata hai ki pyaar kabhi marta nahi hai..Pathik aur Kruti ache se jante the ki voh dono hi alag duniya se hai..lekin unke dil toh aaj bhi ek jese hi dhadak te hai..unn dono ko hi ekdusre ki aankho me apne liye beshumar pyaar dikhayi deta hai

Mayank ki baat sunkar Kruti bina kuch bole hi Pathik ke gale lag jaati hai aur pathik bhi kruti ko apni baanho me bhar leta hai

Mayank chalte hue sam ke pass aata hai “haa sam, tune sahi kaha, time-line tut chuki hai..lekin kuch aur bhi hai jiske baare me mai janta hu”

Sam “kya..??”

Mayank “kya hum kuch der baad baat kar sakte hai..??” usne pari aur aarav ki aur dekhte hue pucha

Sam bhi unhe dekhte hue kehta hai “thik hai bhai, shayad inn sab ke liye yeh bahut jaruri hai”

Mayank “thanks bhai” aur fir voh aarav ke pass jaata hai aur “I am sorry aarav, lekin aaj bhi muje pari ke khone ka dard hai”

Mayank ki awaaz sunkar aarav fauran apni aankhe khol deta hai aur pari se alag hokar use dekhne laga “I am sooo..sssooorrrryyyyy, mm..muuujee laga ki aap..I mean aap bilkul meri sis Paridhi ke jesi dikhti hai, aap meri sis haina..?” aarav ne haklate hue pari se pucha

Pari ekpal ke liye chaunk gayi ki aarav ne aisa kyu kiya, lekin use jald hi samaj aagaya ki akhir me kya hua “aarav, agar koi shak hai toh yeh baat apne dil se puch le”

Aarav “sach di..??”

Pari uske pass aati hai aur pyaar se uske chehre par haath rakhte hue “sach, mai teri behen hu aur tum mera pyaara sa chota bhai” apna sar haa mein hilate hue kehti hai

Pari ne pyaar se apne bhai ke gaal par kiss kiya aur uski aur dekhte hue “koi shaq..??”

Pari ke aisa karne par aarav thoda chidkar “kya didi aap bhi, mera pura gaal gila kar diya” kehte hue voh apne hatho se gaal pochne laga

Yeh harqat karte hi aarav khod ko rok nahi paaya aur fir ek baar pari ke gale lag jaata hai “di, aap meri hi di ho, muje koi shaq nahi hai…aap hi meri di ho” kehte hue voh rat lagane laga

Pari ne pyaar se apne bhai ke sar par hath firaya aur aankho hi aankho me mayank ko thanks kehti hai..aur uske baad mayank ek pal ke liye bhi vanha nahi rukta aur voh vanha se chale jaata hai

Kuch der baad aarav pari se alag hota hai aur uski aur dekhte hue “didi, aap abhi tak chocolates khati hai..?? di ab toh badi ho jaiye..dekhiye aapke daant kitne sad gaye hai” kehte hue voh hasne lagta hai

Pari bhi yeh sunkar jutha gussa dekhati hai “huh..tuje toh mai chodungi nahi, chachundar kahi ka” kehte hue voh aarav ko ghusse marne lagti hai

Har baar toh yeh kehne ke baad Aarav bhag jaata tha lekin voh iss baar aisa kuch nahi karta balki apni aankho me aansu liye hue muskurata hai aur voh pari ki maar khaaye jaata hai “I miss you di, I miss you so much”

Pari bhi vese hi haste hue aarav ke gale lag gayi “I miss you too bhai”

Siddhi aur manthan bhi inn dono ki nok jhok dekh rahe the, manthan kehta hai “finally sabke chehre par smile vapas aagayi”

Siddhi “haa sabke chehre par toh aagayi, lekin..” voh kuch bol nahi paati

Manthan “lekin kya..??”

Siddhi “kuch nahi manthan”

Pari fir aarav ko apne dosto se milati hai aur uske baad aarav pathik ki aur dekhte hue “ab toh chuse jesi shakal mat banana”

Pathik “ha voh toh dikh raha tha itne din kaun chusa bankar ghum raha tha” fir usne pari ki aur dekhte hue kaha “welcome back Pari ya Paridhi”

Pari “pari hi thik rahega”


Aarav “di, chaliye, mumma papa aapko dekhkar bahut khush ho jayenge”

To be continued…
Update 30
Badhiya update, akhirkar milan ne sabka milan karwa hi diya... ?? Lekin siddhi -2 ki jala di... ?? Ek baat time line tut chuki h to isliye itne time wraith har jagah mandara rahe hai to fir inn dinosaurs ko time wraith q nhi pel rhe h... ?? Bhai time wraith ko to sabko pelna chahiye bina bhed bhav kiye... ??? Aur mayank sam se kya baat krna chahta h sumadi me... Jara hume bhi sunao... ?? Mujhe lagta h jo trod ne inko zorians ke bare me jo bataya h ya to wo baate ho.... yaa kuch aur..... next padhta hu...
 
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Milan2010

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Awesome update Milan bhai, aakhir time travel ho hi gaya aur charo 2016 me aa bhi gaye. Yaha siddhi 2 ko sath lane ke pichy jo aapka motiv hai usey me kuch kuch samaz pa rha hu.ye kahani shuru se hi bahut acchi rhi. Bus hum indians aakhri me happy ending dekhne ki hi chahat rakhte hai, to aapse nivedan hai is aur bhi dhyan diniyega.ek aur Sam aur Akshita wapus apne ghar nahi ja payenge hamesha yahi rehnge aur unke planet wale ise ummid me ki wo ek din aayenge unki rah dekh rhy honge. Aap kuch aesa plan bhi ker sakte hai ki kam se kam Sam aur Akshita apne planet walo se contact ker apne current halat unhey bata sake ....
Aap ke liye pyar aur support ????
:thanks: Anky@123 bhai :dost:
bhai kya samaj rahe ho, jarur muje bhi toh bataiye
bhai, sach kahu toh ending ke baare me maine abhi tak kuch socha nahi hai..aur agar mai bata bhi dunga toh fir kahani ka maja nahi rahega
lekin haa itna jarur kahunga ki iss kahani ka ant bhi unique hoga
sam aur akshita ke saath kya hota hai yeh toh waqt hi bataega
mai bhala kya kar sakta hu..waqt jo karwaega vahi likh raha hu
saath bane rahiye dost :hug:
 

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Sam mayank pari aur siddhi charon ne time travel kar liya... Par ye jungle mein kahan aa gye... Ye kya locha hai.... Dekhte hain kya hua hai aur kya hoga aage... Mast update... Agle update ka intjar rahega....
:thanks: Devraj007 bhai :hug:
bhai jaha kahani ka naam hi strange hai toh jungle me aana bhi strange hi hoga na
thodi hi der me next update post kar raha hu
 

Milan2010

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Brilliant update
Finally avi se inki mulakat ho gyi. or avi ne apni kahani batani start ki usne toh kuch acha soch ke hi aisa kiya ye jante hue bhi ki iske kya side effects ho skte hai khair dekhte h ye manthan ke sawalo ka kya jawab dete h
:thanks: kirti ji :hug:
usne socha toh ache ke liye tha..lekin kabhi kabaar hum karna toh ache ke liye jaate hai..lekin uska asar baakiyo ki jindagiyo me bura padta hai
 

Milan2010

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Nice update milan ji
Kafi lamba or dimag ko uljha dene wla update tha sam or akshita ab wapas laut jayenge.mayank apne sath kis kis ko le ke jyega or ye idea kitna work krega pta nhi
:thanks: Kirti.s ji :hug:
aapke saare sawal ka jawab aapko agle update me mil jayega
saath bane rahiye
 

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Update 30
Badhiya update, akhirkar milan ne sabka milan karwa hi diya... ?? Lekin siddhi -2 ki jala di... ?? Ek baat time line tut chuki h to isliye itne time wraith har jagah mandara rahe hai to fir inn dinosaurs ko time wraith q nhi pel rhe h... ?? Bhai time wraith ko to sabko pelna chahiye bina bhed bhav kiye... ??? Aur mayank sam se kya baat krna chahta h sumadi me... Jara hume bhi sunao... ?? Mujhe lagta h jo trod ne inko zorians ke bare me jo bataya h ya to wo baate ho.... yaa kuch aur..... next padhta hu...
:thanks: The_lost_love ankit bhai :dost:
haa ab aap sab log muje iss baar gaaliya na do isliye milwa diya :devil:
bhai, ab aapke iss sawal ka jawab me itna hi kahunga ki yeh insaano aur aliens ke bich seemit hai
aur jaahir se baat hai maine dinosaurs ko kabhi real time me nahi dikhaya..sirf unka har jagah par jikar kiya hai ki unhe jagah jagah par dekha gaya hai
isliye unke saath kya hua hai yeh maine kabhi dikhaya hi nahi
dekhte hai aapka yeh last vala guess kitna sahi hota hai
saath bane rahiye :dost:
 
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