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Nevil singh

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Hii friends ye meri story nahi hai writer ka name nav hai mai ye sochi ki ye story Xforum pe hona chahiye is liye mai ise yaha likh rahi hu
IS story me apko magic aur scientific sab kuchh milega
YE story bas ek kalpanik hai isme jivit ya mritya byakti ya koi sthan se sambhandh nhi hai agar milta bhi hai to wo mahaj ek sanyog hoga
DHANYABAD
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Episode 1

Kamre ke pankho ke hawa se ud rahi lat se veer ki nigahe hat nahi rahi thi
us lat ke pichhe se jhak rahi kali badi aankhe surkh gulabi hoth wo sone si chamakti twacha ko niharta huya veer mano bhari class me period shuru hone wala shor bhi sun nhi pa rha tha 18 sal ka khubsurat navjawan veer Priya ko niharta huya apne seet ko yu pakada huya baitha tha mano seet chhut jayegi aur wo spring ki tarah hawa me uchhal jayega uski dil ki dhadkane tv show par aane wali add ki tarah baratedar chal rhi thi mano kah rhi ho ki ROMANTIC RELATION A SUBJECT TO SOCIAL RISK PLEASE READ THE GIRL CAREFULLY FOR THE PERPOSING par dil hai ki Manta nhi veer se ab raha nhi jaa rha tha aur wo apne bag se ek red rose aur ek pink colour ka card nikal kar dhire se jakar priya ke samne khada ho jata h ye dekh kar puri class aise sant ho jata h jaise class me koi teacher aa gya ho veer himat juta kar priya ke taraf gulab ke ful bada deta hai aur bol hi dalta hai
-I LOVE U PRIYA
Priya aav dekhti hai na tav aur veer ko piche dhaka de deti hai aur dat bhichte huye dhime avaj me kahti hai
-SHUT UP pichhe dekh
Veer ko bahut ajib lagta hai ki wo pyar me aage badhna chahta hai aur wo kahti hai piche dekh abhi veer soch hi rha tha ki piche se ek karkas awaj gunjati hai
-Wo heero Ashiq awara chal seet pe baith ja mujhe result announcement karna hai
Ab veer ko ahsas hota hai ki class sach me teacher ko dekh ke hi sant huya hai,
Bhai popat hone ka bhi koi had hoti hai us teacher ki aisi dahad sun kar Jan chali jaye ye ashiqi bhala kya chij hai veer dhadam se wahi apne seet pe baith jata hai
-Class ke sabhi bache pass ho gye hai sivaye ek ko chhod kar wo hai veer Raheja
Math teacher ke ye dusri dahad sach much janleva thi sabhi student has padte hai priya bhi..
veer ke sapno ke jahaj bich samandar me dubte huye sa fill ho rha tha use kya pata tha ki wo jindagi ke kagaj pe wo kismat ke kalam se jo love letter likhne wala tha use math ke equation kharab kar dega Is result ke announcement ki isse buri timing aur nhi ho sakti thi bechara veer use to lag rha tha ki puri class me sabse jyada priya hi uspe hass rhi thi tabhi math teacher aaker veer ke sar pe khada ho gya aur ek peper uske samne patak kar kahta hai
-Kal mujhe is performence result par tumhare parent ka sing chahiye Samjh gye LANTH KAHI KA...
Fir puri class me jor ka tahaka lagta hai aur usme sabse tej awaj priya ka hi sunayi deta hai LANTH KAHI KA HAHAHHHH......
Priya ke hasi jo veer ke dil me ful khila deti thi aaj wahi hasi use kante jaisa chubh rha tha ab veer se bardast nhi ho rha tha wo uth kar class se bahar chala jata hai
Veer ki kismat aaj bahut kharab tha bechara aaj matha aur pyar dono subject me fail ho gya aur ab parent se report card bhi sing karvana tha
Ghar mammy aur bahan hi hai papa to is duniya ko chhod kar pahle hi ja chuke hai business ke chalte kisi ne unka mardar kar diya tha tab se hi sayad veer ko padai me man lagna band ho gya tha
- Are aaj to bada jaldi aa gya
Veer ne ghar me ek tang dala hi tha ki maa ne Goli ki tarah saval dag di
veer ne jaise hi apne maa ka sawal suna usne turant hi jabab diya
- Are mummy janti ho aaj kya huya hai
Maa hadbada gyi ki aaj aisa kya ho gya isse pahle ki wo kucch puchti ki veer pahle hi bol pada
- Are mummy Aaj babal ho gya babal collage me wo jo hamare math wale teacher hai na unhe kucch gunde pitne aa gye the
Mummy ki chinta ki lakire aur gahari ho gyi veer fir bola
-Sab bol rahe the ki unko kisi aurat ke sath chakar hai
-Are par wo to sadi suda hai na aur achhe adami hai bhai Maa ne chinta jatai
-Are wahi to maa tum sab janti hi ho unke bare me Verry good ab is peper pe sing kar do Veer ne apni chal chali
- Kya hai is peper me Maa ne puchha
-Math teacher ka carecter sertificate hai maa ye sabhi bachho ko aur unke parents ko sing karva ke dena hai unko warna deen sir jo hai na wo us teacher ko job se nikal denge
Veer ye bol ka apne maa ko dhyan se dekhne laga ki uska ye paitra kam karta hai ya nhi
Par har bar ki tarah is bar bhi ye paitra kam kar hi gya Maa ne jhat se peper par sing kar diya
paper pe sing milte Veer waha se sarpat bhaga aur apne room me jakar apne bed par gir gya veer ke kamre ka hal aisa tha jaise waha pe koi world war huya ho mummy aur bahan ko us kamre me jana sakth manahi tha isi liye koi kamra ko saf bhi nhi kar pata tha
Veer apne bed par soya hi tha ki use ek awaj sunai diya
- Kaise ho Veer beta
Veer ko ye awaj jani pahchani lagi veer dahshat me aa gya par isse pahle veer kuchh bolta ki uske mobile se ek hollogram uchhal kar bahar aa gya jo dr. Khurana ki thi us hollogram ko dekh kar veer ke hath se mobile chhut kar niche ja girta hai
-Heart attack karvavoge kya uncle Veer jhalate huye bola
Dr. Khurana ki Hollogram bad kar veer ke kad jitna ho jata hai
- Aap is tarah mere life me jab chahe nhi Ghus sakte veer fir se jhalate huye bola
- Beta tumhare papa mere bahut achhe dost the unki wajah se aaj mai jinda hu isiliye dukh hota hai mujhe unke bete ko math me fail hote huye dekh kar veer ke bhavnavo ko samjhte huye dr. Khurana bole
- aaa aapko kaise pata ki mai math me fail ho gya hu veer hadbadate huye bolta hai
- beta tumhe to pata hai mai scientists hu koi bhi computer system mere pahuch se dur nhi hai tumhari life me ho rhe sabhi chije pata hai mujhe aur yahi meri duty hai sayad aise hi mai tumhare papa ke ahsano ka badla chuka saku beta mai chahta hu ki tumhare koi madad kar saku tum chaho to mai tumhe math padha sakta hu taki tum fail na ho sako
Dr. Khurana ne veer ko apne dil ki bat batai par 18 sal ke veer ko un bato ka koi matlab nhi tha is umra me gyan nhi freedom chahiye hoti hai Dr. Khurana fir veer ko kahte hai
-Beta tumhara padai me man nhi lagta to koi bat nhi mai tumhe apne lab me job bhi de sakta hu tum chaho to abhi se paise kama sakte ho tumhe nayi nayi chije sikhne ko milenge beta tumhe pata hai hamare dharti ek marta aisa grah nhi hai jaha jivan hai sachme aur bhi kayi aisi grah hai jaha jivan hai
Veer sochta hai ki aise bhi mera grah dasha kharab chal rahi hai aur uncle naye graho ke bare me sikha rahe hai akhir kaise pichha chhudau mai in gale padu uncle se Ab wo samajh chuka tha ki dr. Khurana se pichha chhudana itna asan nhi tha isiliye usne aas pass sekha aur fir usne apna mobile utha kar fishbore me dal diya gud gud karte mobile ke sath dr. Khurana ka hollogram bhi band ho gya veer ne apno hatho ko aise jhatka jaise koi musibat tal gyi ho par aaj fir se veer ko apna mobile table lamp ke niche sukhana padega

Dusre din
Veer ki nind dosto ke awaj se khulta hai aur veer ko realise hota hai ki aaj fir se wo collage ke liye let ho gya hai fata fat se taiyar hoke wo niche aata hai maa breakfast leke khadi hai veer bhagta huya breakfast uthata hai aur aage badh jata hai tabhi mummy pichhe se awaj deke use rokti hai veer ke pass jayada samay nhi hai par wo rukta hai
-Tumhare papa ko gye huye aaj pura ek sal ho gya hai
Maa ke muh se ye sun veer thoda gambhir ho jata hai maa age kahti hai
- Mai samjhti hu ki tum is sadme se bahar nhi nikle ho par beta tum padhai par dhyan nhi doge to tumhara musibate aur badh sakti hai akhir tumhe hi is ghar ka sagar banna hai beta
Ye sab sun kar veer bahut hi irritate hota hai par ha me sar hila deta hai tabhi maa apne purse se 500 ke do note nikal ke veer ko dete huye ye kahti hai ki wo jaker complimentary ka exam dede taki uska sal kharab na ho aur wo pichhe palat kar chali jati hai
Ye sun kar veer haka baka rah jata hai use ahsas ho gya ki maa ko uske fail hone ke bare me pata chal gya hai tab bhi mummy ne is bare me kuchh bhi nhi kaha fir veer bhi ghar ke bahar ke taraf nikal jata hai papa ke maut ke bad veer ko padai me man lagna bilkul band ho gya tha wo bas reality se dur rahna chahta tha isiliye complimentary exam ke mile paiso se wo dosto ke sath film dekhne chala jata hai pura din collage chod kar mummy se mile paiso se masti karne bad veer apne dosto ke sath ghar ke taraf nikal jata hai ghar par aane ke bad dekhta hai ki darwaje par khade teen log mummy par chila rahe hai sare dost ye dekh kar hairan ho jate hai lekin veer ko ahsas ho gya tha ki aaj phir bua aur chacha uske maa se property ko lekar ladai karne aaye hai veer dosto ke samne embarrass fill karne lagta hai
-Prerna akhir tum chahti kya ho ye ghar mere mata pita ka hai mera aur mere bhaiyo ka ispe barabar ka hak hai ab jab bihan bhaiya nhi rahe to ham unke patni aur bacho ko paresan nhi karna chahte ghar bechne ke bad unka jo bhi hisa Banega wo ham tumlogo ko de denge lekin agar tum ye puri haveli hadpane ki bichar me ho to ham aisa kabhi nhi hone denge Veer ki bua chilate huye bolti hai
Tabhi veer ke chcha bhi lapak padte hai
-Ha ya to hame is ghar ke hisab se teen crore rupay dedo ya ye ghar khali karo taki ham ye ghar bech ke apas me bat sake
Veer ke mummy aur bahan sahmi huyi thi veer ki bahan to maa ko pakad kar roye jaa rhi thi
-tee tee teen crore rupay mai kaha se laungi bhai sahab veer ke papa ke jane ke bad ham sab ki kya halat hai wo ap sab se chhupi nhi hai veer ke mummy ne gid gidate huye kaha
Ye sun kar veer ke dost veer ke taraf dekhne lage veer ko laga jaise uske image ka kachumar likal raha hai agar abhi usne kuchh nhi kiya to yaha bhi lutiya dubi samjhi tabhi veer ab us ladai me kud padta hai
-Aaplogo ko himat kaise huyi aise mere ghar pe aake maa ko dhamki dene ki
Veer ko aise guse me chilate huye dekh sab hairan rah jate hai
-Aaplogo ko saram nhi aati mere papa ne aap logo ko kitna madad ki hai aap sab ki family business ko akele bachaya hai us star group se aur star group ki dusmani ke chalte hi unki Jan chali gyi ab unke jane ke bad unke pariwar ko paresan karne aate hai
Mummy use rokne ki kosish karti hai
-Beta tu Santa ho jaaa
Par veer ka gussa ab dahlij par kar chuka tha
-Ye bachu business ka chhod aur is ghar ka bat kar ye ghar hamare father ka hai jisme ham sab bhai bahno ka barabar ka hissa hai bade chacha fufkarte huye bole
-Agar hame isme hissa nhi mila to.ham cort tak jayenge ab bol apni maa se ki khi se bhi lakar hame 3 crore dede bua bhi tevar dikhate huye boli
-Chup maa se kyu bolu mai apni maa ka beta veer tum sab se ye wada karta hu ki mai tumhare 3 crore laker tumhare muh par marunga veer dahadte huye bolta hai
Dosto ke sath khadi wo ladki muskurati hai jisse veer ka confident satve asman chhu leta hai
-Ab niklo mere ghar se warna mai kuchh galat kar baithunga
-Beta tumhare pass bas 6 mahino ka time hai hm dekh le kya kar sakta hai
Ye bol kar bua aur baki chacha waha se chale jate hai veer ki mummy hairani me use dekhti rah jati hai veer bhi ghar ke andar chala jata hai style marne ke chakar me veer 3 crore dene ko bol aaya tha par wo itna paise layega kaha se usne to apni samasya aur badha li thi ki tabhi use dr. Khurana ka khyal aata hai
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Episode 2 ( Dr. Khurana ka lab )

3 crore jutane ke chakar me veer apne camre me chahal kasami kar rha tha tabhi uske dimag me idea aata hai Khurana uncle Khurana ke name lete hi Khurana ka hollogram fir uske mobile se uchal kar bahar aata hai jise dekh kar har bar ki tarah veer dar jata hai
-Ha beta tumne mujhe bulaya Khurana bolta hai
-Uncle aap aladin ke jin ho kya ki mai apka name leta hu aur appear ho jate ho veer toda ascharya se bola
-Hahahhh are beta maine tumhare mobile par voice command install kar diya tha taki tum mujhe kisi bhi musibat me bulao aur mai jald se tumhare help ke liye aa saku Khurana haste huye bolta hai
Ye sun kar veer usne puchna chahta hai ki iske alawa koi kam dhandha hai ki nhi par paisa na milne ke dar se wo nhi puchta chup rah jata hai
-Bol putar kya help chahiye tujhe Khurana puchhta hai
-Help to chahiye tha , veer bol hi raha tha ki Khurana bolta hai
-To fir aa jao meri lab tumhe lab bhi ghuma dunga aur bat bhi kar lenge maine tumhare mobile par location bheja hai dekho ok see u soon
Ye bol kar khurana phone cut kar deta hai itni teji me ye sab hota hai ki veer presently surprise rah jata hai wo sochta hai ki Khurana itna bada scientists hai to 3 crore rupya to hone hi chahiye uske pass bas veer Khurana ke diye huye pate par pahuch jata hai aur charo taraf dekhta hai wo kisi uchhe kanch wali building ki kalpna liye idhar udhar dekh raha hai akhir itna bada scientists hai Khurana uncle to unka office bhi sandar hi hoga par waha to bas ek tuta futa makan dikh raha tha veer confused tha ki tabhi us tute fute makan se Khurana bhagta huya bahar aata hai
-Are putar tum aa gya welcome welcome welcome in my lab
Khurana ki bat sun ke veer ki man me bas ek hi khyal aata hai khoda pahad nikla chuha khurana uska hath pakad ke lagbhag ghasitate huye andar le jata hai
andar aane ke bad ka najara veer ko lagta h ki bhaiya gaya bais pani me kabadi ki dukan bhi is ghar se kafi achhi hoti hogi ab veer apne bhavnao par kabu nhi rakh paya aur apna saval dag hi deta hai
-Uncle aap to kah rahe the ki aap bahut bada scientists hai
ispar Khurana hadbadata hai
-A ha ha kyu kisi ne kuchh aur kaha h kya
Veer sarcastic hoke kahta hai
-Nhi wo itna bada office dekh kar aisa lag rha hai
Veer bol hi raha hota hai ki Khurana pass lage ek batan ko daba deta hai jisse pura ka pura floor harkat me aa jata hai aur kisi lift ki tarah niche jane lagta hai veer lagbhag ladkhadate huye girne wala tha par Khurana use sahara deta hai
-Ye ye ye kya hai uncle Veer ghabrate huye kahta hai
Par uske jabab me Khurana bas muskurata hai veer aise situation me muskurate huye dekh kar galiya dena chahta hai par bad me paise na milne ke dar se wo chup hi rah jata hai ab wo lift rukti hai aur ek darvaja khulta hai ek tej safed raushani se veer ki aankhe chaundhiya jata hai aur wo apne aankhe michne lagta hai wo apne miche huye aankho se dekhta hai to bas unhe dekhta hi rah jata hai ek bahut bada lab jaha charo taraf hi-tech machine laga huya hai badi badi screens lagi huyi hai jisme alag alag data aur videos chal rahe hai aur robotics hand apne apne kam me lage huye hai ye Khurana ke lab se jyada iran man ki workshop lag rhi thi veer ko lagta hai jaise wo apne sapno ki duniya me pahuch gya hai
-Wow uncle ye to tahalka hai
Veer ke muh se nikale huye sabd sun ke Khurana aise khus hota hai jaise apne khubsurti tarif sun ke koi ladki khus hoti hai
-Meri lab hai meri Khurana apne sine chaude karte hu kahta hai
Aur Khurana apne machine ko aise dekhne lagta hai jaise wo machine na ho kar koi paltu janwar ho
-Bol putar tumhe kya help chahiye tu jo bolega mai dunga akhir tum mere yar ka beta hai Khurana badi pyar se veer se puchta hai
Veer bhi itni freedom pake jaldi se bol deta hai
-uncle 3 crore rupay chahiye
Ye sunte hi Khurana apne hi machine par pisalte huye niche girte girte bachta hai aur khud ko sbhalte huye hairani se puchta hai
-Kya 3 3 crore
-H...ha uncle aap to de hi sakte ho veer puchta hai
Khurana ab khud ko straight karte huye sidhe hokar veer ko samjhata hai
-Dekh beta ye sab jo tum dekh rahe ho na ye sab mera nahi hai ye sab sarkar ne diya hai aur 3 crore to maine apne puri life me nhi dekhe hai to tujhe kaise de du
Khurana ki aisi dainiye halat dekh kar veer ko aur gussa aa rha hota hai
-Matlab aap meri madat nhi kar sakte
-Kar sakta hu aur karunga putar karunga na tum chahe to mai iss lab me tumhe job de dunga 20 thousands rupay salary bhi dilwa dunga
-Sachi 20 hajar rupay salary
Math me veer jyada achha nhi tha par wo apne mobile me calculate karta hai aur pata hai 20 hajar monthly salary me 3 crore jutane me use 125 sal lag jayenge
-Are uncle itna dino me to mere pote bhi budhe ho jayenge fir paiso ka kya karunga
Khurana majbur hai aur veer gusa Veer waha se jane hi wala hota hai ki uski najar ek pal rang ki telephone booth par padta hai jo lakdi ka lag rha tha veer hairan hota hai ki itne hi-tech lab me ek purane jaman ka telephone booth kya kar rha hai wo apni jigyasa sant karne ke liye Khurana se us booth ke bare me puchta hai sawal sun kar khurana ki mano aankhe chamak jata hai aur jaise ek 5 class ke bacha poem sunata hai waise hi Khurana veer ko us booth ke bare me batane lagta hai
-Veer ye to sabhi jante hai ki pure universe me prithvi hi aisa planet hai jaha jivan paya jate hai halaki pichle kuchh salo me scientists ko kuchh aise planet pata chala hai jaha par life paye gye hai hamare jaise hi log hamare jaise hi janwar aur hamare jaise hi ped paudhe lekin dekhne me hamse kaphi alag aam bhasa me ham aise logo ko ham alien ya dusri duniya ke log kahte hai
Dr. Khurana veer ko samjhate huye kahte hai aur veer unki bato ko samjhne ki kosish karta hai
-alien wo wo jaise PK movie me amir khan tha par uncle aise log to sirf filmo aur kiso kahaniyo me hote hai na mera matlab hai ki asal jindagi me aaj tak maine koi bhi alien nhi dekha ha bachpan me mera sapna tha ki man in balck movie mera bhi kisi alien se Amna samna ho jaye par phir mai bada ho gya aur iss sapne ko majak me le liya kyoki mai samajh gya ki ye sab keval kisso aur kahaniyo me hota hai
Dr. Khurana ki bat sun ke veer kaphi confuse tha Dr. Khurana ne muskurate huye veer se kaha
-Hamari filme aur kisse kahaniya kahi na kahi asal jindagi se hi to Judi hoti hai veer ab to science bhi ye man liya hai ki aliens bhi hote hai ab ye bat tumse kaise Judi huyi hai ye tumhe batata hu Aur fir veer dhyan se unki bate sunne lagta hai pichhle kuchh salo se hamare agency taitan grah me secret mission chala rahi hai jaha har sal ham taitan grah pe kuchh logo ko bhejte hai darasal us grah pe development abhi bhi apni pahli stage pe hai isiliye waha ke log puri tarah se viksit nhi ho paye hai waha kai log aise hai jo na to puri tarah se insan hai aur na hi janwar matlab unke sarir ke kuchh hise to insan ke jaise hi hai lekin unke harkate aur dimag janwar jaise hai sath hi sath waha kuchh janwar aise bhi hai jo viksit ho kar bahut khatarnak ho gye hai is tarh ke log aur janwar un logo ke liye khatra hai jo puri tarah develop ho gye hai aur jinki intelligence bhi hamlogo jaise hi hai lekin un logo ke sath sath aise janwar aur log hamare prithvi ke liye bhi khatra ban sakte hai isi liye har sal ham apne planet se kuchh log taitan grah pe bhejte hai taki wo log hamare prithvi ke taraf badh rahe khatre ko wahi pe khatam kar sake ye telephone booth usi taitan grah pe jane ka portal hai
Veer confuse hai aur sawal puchta hai
-Uncle jab us grah pe itna khatra hai to log jate hi kyu hai ha
-Paise kamane aur Takat pane ke liye
Dr. Khurana muskurate huye bolta hai
-Log kitne paise kama sakte hai waha par Veer surprise ho kar puchhta hai
-Unlimited samajh rahe ho unlimited
Khurana iss tarah se khus hokar bolta hai jisse veer ko yakin ho jaye ki uski paiso ki samsya bhi taitan grah pe jakar khatam ho sakti hai veer sochne lagta hai Veer ko dekh kar ki Khurana ko bhi ahsas hota hai ki veer taitan ke bare me soch raha hai Khurana turant hi veer ke sapno par pani ferte huye bolta hai
-Nhi nhi par tum waha nhi ja sakte iss liye socho bhi mat
Veer hairan ho jata hai
-Are bhai tum mere jigri dost ke eklaute bete ho yani mere bhi bete jaise hi huye mai tumhari jan khatre me nhi dal sakta tum ghar jao aur koi aur rasta dhundho paise jutane ka
Ye kahte huye Khurana veer ko apne lab se bahar jane ko kah dete hai halaki veer ghar ke taraf nikal jata hai par Khurana ki bat uske dimag me ghum rahi thi Aur sath me afsos bhi hai ki wo pariwar ke liye paise nhi juta paya Veer jaise hi ghar pahuchta hai to dekhta hai ki uske lafantar dosto ki toli bahar hi uska intjar kar rhi hai Veer samajh jata hai ki wolog kal wale bat par sawal puchenge aur wo embarrass hoga isiliye jaise hi wo dosto se milta hai khud hi Sara kahani sunane lag jata hai ki kaise uske papa ne uske dubte huye family business ko akele sambhala aur uske bua aur chacha ke sadiya karwai unhe ghar dilwaya unke wajah se star group panga bhi liya jiske wajah se unki Jan bhi chali gayi par unke jane ke bad uske bua aur chacha unhe unke dada jee ke ghar se nikalna chahte hai Veer ki kahani sun kar sabhi dost use sympathy dikhate hai abhi abhi jawan ho rahe ladko ke khun me jyada hi ubal hoti hai par dimag utna hi kam hota hai aise hi dimag ke bajah se veer ke dost use salah dete hai ki veer ko uske bua ke ghar se Jake is ghar ki property ke paper chura lene chahiye uske bad bua ho ya chacha koi bhi usko ghar khali karne liye legal action nhi ke payega aur use 3 crore rupay bhi nhi dene padenge veer bhi to usi umar ka hai use bhi ye idea jam jata hai wo decide karta hai ki kal wo bua ke ghar pe kagaj ko chori karne jayega
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Update 3 ( Taitan planet )

Sam dhalne ko hai veer aur uske 2 lafantar dost planing ke hisab se bua ke ghar ke bagal wale jhadiyo me sab ke so jane ka intjar kar rhe hai pop culture ko reality samjhane wale ladko ne puri jams bond wali taiyari kar rakhi thi jaise hi ghar ki bati bujhegi veer boundry cross kar ke ghar ke andar jayega fir pipe se chadh ke khidki par jayega aur khidki khol kar pepar churayega aur bhag jayega par jindagi jams bond ke movie se thodi alag hoti hai tabhi ghar ke bati bujhti hai aur veer khud ko jams bond samajh kar boundry cross karta hai aur fir pipe se upar chadhane ki kosish karta hai par ye itna asan nhi hai jald hi usko ye realise ho jata hai ki jams bond ke movie me bahut galat dikhate hai bechara kai kharoch aur chot lagate huye finally upar chadh hi jata hai aur jaise hi khidki khol kar andar jane ki kosish karta hai ki security ka alarm baj jata hai rat ke us sanate me shor bhar jata hai aur ghar ki sari batiya jal jati hai veer support ke liye apne dosto ke taraf dekhta hai par wo to alarm bajte hi rafuchakar ho gye the aur veer ko adhar me latakta huya chhod gye the tabhi bua aur unke family bahar aate hai aur veer range hatho pakda jata hai jald hi police aa chuki thi aur veer ko chori ke iljam me pakad le jane wali hoti hai ki tabhi bua ne chachao ko bhi bula liya jo pass hi me rahte hai veer ki sthiti kato to khun nhi wali thi use dar tha ki kahi mummy ko pata na chal jaye kya kar raha hai
-Kyu be bachhu tumne kya socha ki itni asani se hamare 3 crore gatakne denge tumhe bua jhalate huye boli
-Iski maa ko phone karo usko bhi to pata chale ki uski saput kya gul khila rha hai chacha dahadte huye bole
-nnnn nh nhi nhi mummy ko phone mat karna mummy ko pata chala to wo tut jayegi veer gidgidate huye bola
Ye sun kar bua aur chacha ek dusre se nain mataka karte hai aur fir veer ko kahte hai
-dekh be chhokre mai tumhe chhod dungi aur ye chori ki iljam bhi wapas le lungi lekin tumhe apne maa ko mana kar wo haveli bikwani hogi samjha tu to samajhdar hai na samajh raha hai na mai kya kah rahi hu bua payar se dhamkate huye bolti hai
-Aur agar wo havely in 6 mahino me khali nhi huyi to samajh le purani gharo me aag bahut jaldi lagti hai chacha ne dhamkate huye kaha
Chacha ne itni badi bat bol di ki veer ki puri astitva hi hill gya use ye ahsas ho gya tha ki uski ye chhoti si galti ka parinam kitna bhayanak ho sakta hai ab bat sirf paiso ki nahi rah gyi thi veer ki maa aur bahan ki surksha ki bhi thi kyuki ye lalchi log us haveli ko hasil karne ke liye kisi bhi had tak gir sakte hai veer ko ab apni bachgani harkat par bahut gussa aata hai fir uski bua aur chacha usko dhamki de kar bahar nikal dete hai is ghatna ne veer ka astitva jhakjhor ke rakh diya tha ab wo samjh chuka tha ki paisa kamane ka ek hi rasta hai taitan par jana dusre din veer collage se nikal kar sidhe Khurana ke office nikal jata hai Khurana apne lab me nhi tha veer use awaj deta par koi reply nhi aata hai veer bechain ho jata hai use bahut jaldi tha ab taitan par jake paise kamane ki alhadpan aur jaldibaji me usne khurana ka intezar nhi kiya isiliye wo decide karta hai ki wo khudhi kosish karega tabhi veer samne rakhe telephone booth me inter karta hai us booth me bas ekhi lal rang ka bada sa batan laga tha veer aas pass dekhta hai aur us batan ko daba deta hai batan dabate hi booth mano badh si aa jati hai tarah tarah ke rang charo taraf se veer par padne lagte hai aur dhire dhire booth me dhua bharne lagta hai hai veer us dhuye ko apne pair se uth kar kandhe tak jate huye dekh kar painik ho jata hai aur batan ko fir se dabane ke liye dhundhne lagta hai tabhi wo booth jor jor se shake karta hai aur puri tarah se veer us dhuye ke agosh me sama jata hai chhatpatate huye veer ko akhir wo batan milta hai aur use wo daba deta hai isi ke sath booth shake karna band ho jata hai aur ek click ke sath darwaja khulta hai veer aav dekhta hai na tav aur bahar bhag ke aata hai aur khas khas ke apne fefdo ko saf karta hai ye sab Karte huye use dhyan aata hai ki wo Khurana ke office me nhi hai wo apne charo taraf dekhta hai ki ek bilkul safed kamra hai hai charo taraf aur usme bas ek darwaja laga hai veer ghabra jata hai aur wo jhat se darwaja khol kar bahar jata hai darwaje se bahar jate ji veer ki duniya badal jata hai uski aankho ki putliya fail jata hai dil ki dhadkane aur tej ho jate hai wo apne charo taraf dekhta hai to use lagta hai jaise wo swarg me aa gya ho bade bade pahad use akash me tairta hua najar aata hai pedo ke pati ka itne rang usne apne puri jindgi me nhi dekhe the jamin pe bichhi ghass bhi aise chamak rahi thi jaise usme chhote chhote led balb lage ho hava me bhi jo sakchhata aur khusbu hai aisa pure jindgi me kabhi mahsus hi nhi huya wo mantra mugdh sa charo taraf dekh hi raha hota hai ki ek dahad se uska dhyan pichhe ki taraf chala jata hai pichhe ki taraf wo mud kar dekhta hai to use aisa lagta hai jaise uska dhadkan hi ek pal ke liye ruk gyi ho Achanak se uske chehare ka rang us jata hai aur pav Bejan se jamin pe gad jate hai wo dekhta hai ki uske samne ek ajib sa janwar khada hai uska sar sher ke jaisa hai par sarir gende ke jaisa ice age ki sher ke tarah bade bade tang bahar latak rahi hai pure sar par denticals nikale huye hai use dekhne ke bad veer chahkar bhi apne jagah se hil nhi pata tabhi wo janwar veer ki taraf chhalang laga deta hai par isse pahle ki wo veer ke pass pahuch pata ek bhala udta huya aakar us janwar se takra jata hai aur wo janwar chhitakar dur jaa girta hai veer hairan hokar bhale ke disha me dekhta hai ek ajib se ghode par sawar gahre hare rang ka labada odhe ek ghudswar apne hatho me talwar liye us janwar ke piche jata hai par jate huye ghudswar ek pal ke liye ruk ke piche dekhta hai jisse uske labade ka hood niche sarakta hai aur uske undar se kale lambe bal hawa me lahra jata hai wo ghodswar ek ladki thi behad khubsurat ladki jiski Kajal se bhari badi badi aankhe jab veer ko ghurti hai to veer ko lagta hai jaise uska dill kud kud kar sune se bahar aa jayega yodha ke bhes me itna Masum chehra ye combination sachme katil tha wo ladki pichhe mudkar us janwar ke pichhe chalu jati hai veer use awaj lagane hi wala hota ki ek aakar use khich le jata hai veer khudko fir se dhuye se ghira pata hai aur jab dhuya chhatta hai to dekhta hai ki uske samne Dr. Khurana khade hai aur behad gusse me use ghur rahe hai
-Ye kya bewkufi karne ja rahe the tum ha tumhe jimedari ka koi ahsas hai ya nhi Dr. Khurana veer par bhadkate huye bolte hai

Veer janta hai ki wo koi jabab dene ke halat me nhi hai uski ek galti se uski Jan bhi ja sakti thi
-Agar tumhe kuchh ho jata to kya hota aaj tum samjhte ho, tum samjhte kyu nhi ki veer tum abhi bache ho ye khatarnak khel tumhare liye nhi hai
Dr. Khurana veer ko samjhate huye bolte hai
Par veer ab gambhir ho chuka tha
-Uncle ye khel khelna mera shaukh bhar nhi hai ab ye meri jarurat ban chuka hai
Veer ki bat sunkar khurana sant hokar use sunne lagta hai ab veer unhe pichle 12 ghante me hone wali sari ghatanaye vistar se batata hai aur unhe samjhta hai ki unhe taitan par jakar paise kamana kitna jaruri hai unki bato ko sun kar Dr. Kurana gahari soch me pad jate hain aur veer mayush ho kar wahi baith jata hai kaphi sochne ke bad dr. Khurana kahte hai
-Thik hai tum agar taitan pe jana hi chahte ho to mai tumhe rokunga nhi par tumhe taitan par jane se pahle waha ke bare me sab janna hoga tumhe
-Mai taiyar hu uncle
Ye bolkar veer apne sara concentration Dr. Khurana pe laga deta hai
Dr Khurana ab veer ko taitan ke bare me veer ko batana shuru kar dete hai
- To suno Taitan grah pe hamara dev Ashram ke name se hai tum teleport ho kar wahi pe apne kamre me jaoge lekin veer waha gujara karna itna asan nhi hoga samay samay par tumhe apne takat badhane ke liye tumhe lebal par karne honge aur wo tab hoga jab tumhe jeen point milenge aur wo jeen tumhe tab milenge jab tum ailens ke sikar kar ke unka energy hasil karoge ye kaphi kuchh waisa hi hai jaise tumhare video gam me hota hai bas fark itna hai ki yaha par khatra asali hai tumhari ek chhoti si chuk tumhari jan bhi le sakti hai aur video games ki tarah tumhe yaha dusra mauka bui nhi milega
Jitni asani se Dr. Khurana ye kah rahe the veer janta hai ki ye usse kahi jyada muskil hai
-Taitan grah dikhne me hamari prithvi ki hi tarah hai lekin fir bhi hamase kaphi alag hai aur isi liye waha ke niyam bhi alag hai is duniya me science aur technology dono hi be wajah hai kyuki waha ke log abhi bhi develop ho rhe hai isiliye waha koi bhi scientific aur technical equipment kam nhi karte dusre sabd me kahe to waha ek machine gun se jyada ek still ka khanjar tumhare liye faydemand rahega missile aur nuclear hathiyar bhi kisi kam ke nhi honge yaha tak ki waha mobile phone ya koi electronic instruments bhi kam nhi karenge sab kuchh waisa hi hoga jaise ki prithvi ke development se pahle tha
Veer bahut hi dhyan se Dr. Khurana ki bate sum raha tha ye sunne me bhale hi kisi movie ki tarah lag rha ho lekin asal me bahut hi dilchasp tha par hairani ki bat ye thi ki veer ko isme aur bhi Ruchi aa rhi thi aur wo aage sunne ke liye utshuk tha
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