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Horror Saya. Dobara chudel ki prem kahani

Devil_Mind

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Agar mood kare to.

Ye bhi short story hai .. mujhe aapka lekhni pasand aaya
 

Shetan

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Shetan

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Congratulation for 500k views
Thankyou so much kmmalik. Part 2 ke sirf 500k hi nahi.
Mere 20,000 liles bhi hue.

Part 1 ke bhi 2 lakh views ho gae.


Thankyou very very much kmmalik
 

Shetan

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Shetan ji kya bolu app ko bass Maja laa diya bolo app ko kha kha chummu :liplock: pass hoti to apke likne app ko chum chum ke dhaneywad deta rehta chumeswari ho app
Are Rajpal sirf Likes hi de do. Mahenat safal ho jaegi meri.
 

Shetan

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Mujhe laga app ko comment jyada achee lagate hai:idk1:
Dono ki hi jarurat he. Sirf meri post hi post ho. To bhi achha nahi lagega. Comments chahiye hi.

Itni post kharchne ke bad tumhara score aage na badhe to bhi thik nahi he. Likes kamana bhi jaruri he.
 

Game888

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Dosto please updates ko Likes aur comments dono kijiyega. Me puri kosis karungi ki jald se jald aap tak updates pahochati rahu. Story contest ke karan me late hui. Par aage jaldi karne ki puri kosis karungi.



(1)
Reeta aur kampar dono hi Hakim ke us ghar se nikal chuke the. Unhe ab bhi dar tha ki kahi aage koi trep na ho. Par Reeta ko us se bhi bada dar tha. Vo kampar ke sath hi frant sheet par thi. Kampar car driving kar raha tha.


Reeta ; hame bihar gaya tak jana he kampar. 1700 ,1800 km dur he. Par us se pahele hame vapi jana he.

Kampar ; kya ham car se hi chalenge???

Reeta ; ha... Train aur flait se jakar ham oro ki jindgiya khatre me nahi dal sakte. Ab tum dekho. Tumhe car change karni he ya....

Kampar ; koi bat nahi. Ham vapi tak to pahoche. Vaha choriyo ki cars ka godam he.

Reeta janti thi ki 2 atmae uske pas esi he jisme se ek mrityu se pahele hi ek number ki kamini thi. Vo kuchh unhoni jarur karwaegi. Sayad pratap ki atma nahi. Par sharita bahot khatenak atma he. Dusra us chhoti se chandi ki matkiyo se to kai sari atmao ki aavaj aa rahi thi. Vo mout ko jarur khichegi. Aage raste me bahot khel hone vale the.

(1.1)


Jeet rat masti se soya. Mast sex bhi kiya. Par Reeta ke sath nahi jeeyara ke sath. Jise vo Reeta samaz raha tha. Subah uski need khuli to uski baho me Reeta(jeeyara) kash ke chipki hui jese need ke agosh me ho. Ek short hot nighty me Reeta(jeeyara) bahot hot lag rahi thi. Jate hue jeet ki bhi najar reet(jeeyara) par gai. Jo sone ka natak kar rahi thi.
Par us bechare ko kya pata ki vo soi hui nahi thi. Bas sone ka natak kar rahi thi. Jeet badi savdhani se use apne se dur karta he. Aur dabe pau room se nikal gaya. Vo darsal Rupali ke pas ja raha tha. Jeet ne bahot dhime se Rupali ke door ka room knock kiya.

Rupali ; door open ne puss karo.

Rupali ne andar se aavaj di to Jeet ko dar lagne laga. Kahi Reeta na jag jae. Par vo to Reeta nahi jeeyara thi. Ek chudel. Jo sab janti thi ki kya ho raha he. Jeet ne door push kiya. Samne Rupali ka hot look vo dekhte hi rahe gaya. Vo number vale chamse pahene koi book padh rahi thi. Par usne bhi Jeet ki taraf dekha.
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Ek tshirt aur short nikkar me rupali ki gori chikni tange dikh rahi thi. Jeet ek time ke lie to ye bhul gaya ki vo kyo aaya he.

Rupali ; to fir kya socha???

Jeet tapak se andar aaya. Door band kar ke speed me Rupali ke pas beth gaya. Rupali uski harkate not kar rahi thi. Jeet Rupali ki taraf zukte hue uski zang par apna hath rakh deta he.

Jeet ; kya ham kamini par bharosa kar sakte he??? Matlab vo mere papa ki bhi dushman he to kahi muje....

Rupali ne Jeet ka hath nahi hataya. Jeet ki ungliya harkat kar rahi thi.

Rupali ; kamini ki Reeta bhi dushman he. Aur tumhare papa bhi. Par vo dono to mil chuke he.

Jeet ; par....

Rupali ne Jeet ki bat kat di.

Rupali ; tumhare papa ke pas do raste he. Ek tumhari bali de de. Ya fir vo Reeta se milkar ek bacha peda kare. Aur uski bali de. Tum Kamini se mil jao. Reeta ke pet me tumhare bap se pahele tum bacha de do. Vo bali degi. Jiska bacha hoga usko power milegi.

Jeet soch me pad gaya ho.

Jeet ; par isme kamini meri kya madad karegi???

Rupali ; vo to tum us se milo. Fir pata chalega. Vese tumhare papa ne Kamini se shadi kar li he.

Jeet ka hath sarakne laga. Rupali ki nikkar me zango ki taraf se ungliya andar ghus chuki thi. Vo Rupali ki chut ko chhune ki kosis kar raha tha ki Rupali ne uska hath pakad liya.

Rupali ; reeta ko pata na chale ki ham Kamini se milne ja rahe he. Ab jao tum.

Jeet Rupali ko dekhte hi rahe gaya. Vo pahele to kai bar use chhune chumne ka chance de chuki thi. Par Rupali ne use roka aur hata diya. Jeet vese hi chupke se vapas apne room me pahocha. Par jese hi vo apne vale room ka door open karta he. Reeta(Jeeyara) use hi dekh rahi thi.

Reeta(Jeeyara) ; kaha gae the. Muje akela chhod kar.
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Jeet ekdam se ghabra gaya.

Jeet ; (smaile ghabrahat) are.... nahi.... Mmm me to bathroom gaya tha.

Reeta(Jeeyara) ; (smaile) ohhh me to samzi tum kahi chale gae.

Jeet Reeta(Jeeyara) ki taraf badhne laga. Use laga ki usne kuchh nahi suna.

Jeet ; (smaile) to esa mat socho na meri jaan.

Jeet Rupali ko chhu kar mood me aa raha tha. Uska mood ban gaya tha. Samne uske badle Reeta(Jeeyara) ka hot roop. Jeet bad par uske upar aa gaya. Aur ek tak Reeta(Jeeyara) ko dekhne laga.

Reeta(Jeeyara) ; (nashili smaile) ese kya dekh rahe ho.
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Jeet Reeta(Jeeyara) par zapat pade. Use kiss karne laga. Reeta(Jeeyara) bhi uska pura sath de rahi thi. Reeta(Jeeyara) sirf ek short nighty me hi thi. Usne apni nighty zatke se khichi. Utarne ke bajay vo fat gai. Use side fekte hi Reeta(Jeeyara) kiss karte hue Jeet ke land ko pakad leti he.
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Jeet khush ho raha tha. Uski najar me to reeta uske land ki deewani ho chuki thi. Par ye uska vahem tha. Jeet ko mardana ehsas karwana use ulzae rakhna tha. Use kya pata ki vo Reeta nahi. Jeet to mood me aate Reeta par chadh gaya. Aur joro se dhakke lagane laga.
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Par jeet apne bap ki tarah bimar nahi tha. Halaki ab vo jeet se bhi jyada swasth ho gaya tha. Jeet ne Reeta(Jeeyara) ki achhi chudai ki. Aur khatam hote hi vo bathroom me ghus gaya. Kuchh wakt bad vo taiyar hokar jane laga to Reeta(jeeyara) ne use roka.

Reeta(Jeeyara) ; kaha ja rahe ho???

Jeet ; (ghabrahat) vo vo vo kuchh kam he.

Jeet janta tha ki Rupali bahar uska car me intjar kar rahi he.

(1.2)

Vapi pahochne me kampar aur Reeta ko 3 ghante lag gae the. Map par to gau ka name sarch kiya. Aur vo2 log location par pahoch gae. Vo apni car gav me enter kar chuke the. Ye Maharastra aur gujrat ki seema par basa gav tha. Par gav gujrat me tha. Gav to vese advance ho chuka tha.
Par logo ke pahenave jyadatar traditional the. Sayad vo apna culture na chhodna chahte ho.

Reeta ; gadi roko.

Kampar ne car roki. Reeta bahar nikli. Reeta ko kuchh bacho ne gher liya. Jese car paheli bar dekhi ho. Reeta ek thoda sa dur khade ek bujurg ki taraf jane lagi. Jo 60 ke aas pas ka lag raha tha. Par car ke pas bacho ne shot machate jab car ko gher liya to Reeta dar ke pichhe ki taraf lapak kar bhagi. Sheet par 3 handi jinme se 2 mitthi aur ek chandi ki thi. Aur teeno me atmae thi.
Chandi vali me to kai sari. Jinki gindi khud Reeta bhi nahi janti thi. Reeta ne un bacho ko hataya.

Reeta ; car lock kar do. Koi in matkiyo ko chhu na pae.

Kampar ne ha me sar hilaya. Aur car andar se lock kar di. Reeta vapas vo bujurg ke pas pahochi.

Reeta ; baba ye Thakur pratap singh ki haveli kaha he.

Bujurg gor se Reeta ko dekhne laga.

Bujurg ; (gussa) jao yaha se. Yaha koi thakur vakur nahi he. Hamari musibate aur mat badhao.

Reeta ; ghabraiye mat baba. Me aap sab ki madad ke lie aai hu.

Bujurg ne Reeta ki face me umid ki kiran hi dekhi ho sayad. Bujurg ne apne gale se apna gamchha hataya. Lal gala katne jesa nishan tha.

Bujurg ; jab se chhote thakur mare he. Gav ke budhe jawan bache sab ke gale me ye nishan he. Jese is gav ko srap mila ho.

Reeta ; ho sakta he baba. Me ye srap khatam kar du.

Bujurg ; hamne kai tantrik ozao ko bulaya. Par sab bhag gae. Koi nahi bachta. Tum bhi kosis kar lo. Aao.

Bujurg aur Reeta pedal chalne lage. Kampar car dhire dhire pichhe lekar aane laga.

Bujurg ; rat me chhote Thakur ki rone ki aavaj aati he. Badi bhayanak aavaje he vo. Fasal hari bhari sukh jati he. Badi mushkil se ji rahe he ham.

Reeta ; baba me kosis karungi sab thik ho jae. Par....

Bujurg chup ho gaya. Uske chahere ki nirasha Reeta samaz gai. Atma ke nakaratmak hone ka prabhav. Gav na unnati kar pa raha tha. Aur na hi khushiyo se ji pa raha tha. Vo pahoche vaha ek haveli ka khandar tha. Chhat aadhi tuti hui. Deeware tuti hui. Pattharo se bani hui haweli kabhi shandar rahi hogi. Bujurg ruk gaya.

Bujurg ; bas vo rahi. Me aage nahi jaunga.

Reeta bujurg ko dekhti rahi fir aage badh gai. Reeta ne karib se us haveli ko dekha. Haveli 40 salo se jyada wakt se bekar bina malik ke thi. Jahir he khander hona hi tha. Reeta ne ghum kar kampar ko dekha. Reeta ne ha me sar hilaya. Vo car ki taraf jati he. Aur door khol kar un teeno handiyo ko le leti he.

Reeta ; tum mera zola le aao. Yaha bhi sayad 2,3 ghante lagenge.

Kampar ne zola le liya. Vo dono andar gae. Us haweli ke andar mahol pura thanda tha. Jab ki haveli khuli hui kandar si thi. Par andar itna thanda mahol ki ek bar to tvacha par hath ghumane ko man karne lage. Reeta ne ek badi jagah dekhi. Jo khuli hui thi. Un teen handiyo ko rakha. Aur zole se sab saman nikalne lagi.

Kampar ; kya ab bhi muje....

Reeta thoda sa has gai.

Reeta ; (smaile) are nahi nahi. Hame us se bat nahi karni. Tum aram se betho.

Reeta ne kampar ko bhi ek ghere me gher liya. Aur khud bhi ek gol ghere me ho gai. Par Reeta ne mantro ko padhte padhte pratap vali handi khol di.
Uspar ek lal kapda tha. Jise hata diya. Vo lagataar mantro ka jap bhi kar rahi thi. Bilkul pahele jese vo mombatti bhi jala chuki thi. Jiski madad se vo atma ki movment note kar sake. Reeta plan bana chuki thi ki pratap hi apne bete ki atma ko chalne ke lie manaega. Par vaha vo huaa jo nahi hona tha.
Kampar ko achanak zatka laga. Aur vo suraksha ghere me hone ke bavjud bhi ekdam se alag roop me aa gaya.

Kampar(atma) ; (badli aavaj) chali ja yaha se. Varna tu jinda nahi bachegi.

Reeta bhi ek bar ghabra gai. Uske hath me ahuti ki kuchh samagri thi. Jo hath se chhut gai.

Reeta ; tum kon ho????

Kampar jese usme koi rakshas ho. Vo joro se hasne laga.

Kampar(atma) ; mout.....mout hu me. Kabhi aurat jat pe bharosa nahi karta me. Har aurat ko mar dunga. Tu bhi ab jinda nahi bachegi. Aaj rat... (Hasna).....

Reeta mantar padhkar ahuti deti hui. Hawan ko tez karti he. Par aag umid se jyada tez hone lagi. Darsal reeta tamsik nahi satvik tarika apna rahi thi. Kyo ki atma jyada shaktishali thi. Par use tamshik vidhi ki jarurat to fir bhi thi.

Reeta ; me janti hi tuje aurat par bharosa kyo nahi he. Tu bas apna nam bata.

Us atma ko jese gussa aa gaya ho. Kampar khada huaa. Aur chalne laga. Vo deewar par sidha chalne laga.

Kampar(atma) ; param param name he mera. Kya kar legi tu.

Reeta samaz gai ki atma badla chahti he. Mukti nahi chahti. Is lie use dhokhe se lejana padega.

Reeta ; tuje sharita se badla lena hena. Tu meri bat manega to me sharita se tuje milva dungi. Fir tu le lena apna badla. Par meri madad ke bina tu kuchh nahi kar paega.

Kampar(param) ; (chillate hue) batao....batao... Kya karna hoga muje.

Reeta ne ek chhoti si handi aur nikali. Uspar band karne ke lie 2 kapde. Ek lal aur ek kala.

Reeta ; aai isme. Me tumhe uske pas le chalti hu.

Reeta jyot ki taraf dekhne lagi. Jese ehsas huaa. Reeta ne sabse pahele puri handi par kala kapda bandh diya. Aur fir uske upar lal kapda.

Reeta ne param ki atma ko bhi bandh diya. Kampar magar fir behosh ho gaya.









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