Incest Rohit- the life of a hollow man.

[maa420]

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[king1969]

Mazedar update

 

[maa420]

Mazedar update

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[maa420]

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Update 5 dal diya hain. Padho aur tell me how do you like it.

Main thora sa busy ho gaya tha isiliye itna time laga.

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[maa420]

Nice update bro

Thanks, and let me know what you like about the story, and do let me know what your expectations from the story.

 

[Smith_15]

Update 6
Hero should control his emotion, will become strong and successful to take revenge from his enemy. Have incest .

 

[maa420]

Update 6
Hero should control his emotion, will become strong and successful to take revenge from his enemy. Have incest .

for sure. But it won't be like others; it has more emotion. There won't be any fuckfest.

 

[Smith_15]

No, problem

 

[maa420]

Recap of Rohit: The Life of a Hollow
The Beginning: Hospital aur System ka Activation
Story start hoti hai ek intense scene se jaha Rohit hospital bed par khoon se lathpath pada hai. Uski sister figure, Sunaina, bilkul toot chuki hai aur Dr. Nadiya se bheek maang rahi hai ki uske bhai ko bacha le. Sunaina ka emotional breakdown dekh kar Dr. Nadiya bhi emotional ho jati hai par usse ICU se bahar nikalne ke liye bolti hai.
Jab Rohit ko hosh aata hai, use purani baatein yaad aati hain—kaise usne apne "father" Mr. Sanjay Gupta ka diya hua code decipher kiya tha, jo use ek warehouse tak le gaya. Waha black hoodies pehne kuch masked men ne us par talwar se hamla kiya aur use almost maar hi diya tha. Tabhi uske saamne ek blue window pop-up hoti hai: "System Activated". Uski new life assistant Cara (AI) use batati hai ki wo "System Acceptance Test" pass kar chuka hai aur use "Berserker" skill mili hai. Cara use samjhati hai ki wo ek AI interface hai jo sirf Rohit ko dikhai degi.
Rohit jab washroom mein Cara se baat kar raha hota hai, tabhi Sunaina ICU mein aati hai aur Rohit ko bed par na dekh kar panic kar jati hai. Rohit wapas aata hai, aur Sunaina gusse aur darr mein use ek thappad maarti hai fir gale laga leti hai. Dr. Nadiya Rohit ki itni jaldi recovery dekh kar hairan ho jati hai—ye ek medical miracle tha. Rohit baat ko chupane ke liye jhooth bolta hai ki ye government ka koi secret experiment tha, aur Nadiya maan jati hai. Rohit hospital se discharge le leta hai aur Sunaina aur Naina ke sath ghar (haveli) chala jata hai.

The secret of the Past & The Conflict:---
Scene shift hota hai Priya par (jo shayad Rohit ki biological sister hai). Wo ek bank locker mein ek USB drive ka password crack karne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Finally, wo us din ka date dalti hai jise sab "manhoos" maante hain (Rohit ka birthday), aur drive khul jati hai. Usme uske father ka video milta hai jo batate hain ki Rohit nirdosh hai aur unke sath koi game khela gaya hai. Priya emotional ho jati hai par abhi bhi Rohit (jise wo "rakshas" manti hai) ke liye uske man mein nafrat hai.
Wahi haveli mein, Cara Rohit ko batati hai ki use System ke assignment ke liye wapas us "nark" (purani jagah/hell) mein jana padega. Rohit Sunaina ko batata hai ki use 2 mahine ke liye office ke kaam se bahar jana hai. Sunaina zid karti hai ki wo bhi sath jayegi ya Rohit ko jane nahi degi. Argument badh jata hai, Rohit use "Grow up" bol deta hai, jiske jawab mein Sunaina use thappad maarti hai aur apne kamre mein band ho jati hai.

Park incident & The Berserker Rage:---
Rohit ka mood kharab ho jata hai aur wo mind clear karne park chala jata hai, jaha wo Nisa (Naina) ko milne bulata hai. Park mein galti se wo ek ameer, arrogant ladki se takra jata hai. Wo ladki Rohit ko "chapri" aur "gutter ka keeda" bolkar insult karti hai aur apne backup ko bulati hai. Rohit ka gussa control se bahar hone lagta hai aur Cara warn karti hai ki uska adrenaline dangerous level par hai.
Rohit waha se bhag kar jungle ki taraf nikal jata hai taki wo kisi ko nuksan na pahunchaye. Jungle mein use seizure aata hai aur wo gir jata hai. Cara uski body scan karti hai par condition critical ho jati hai.

Flashback:---
Jay aur Nishu ki Tragic Story:---
Behoshi ki halat mein, Rohit apne past (as Jay) ke sapne dekhta hai. Wo aur uski choti behen Nishu kisi dirty jagah jaha par woh don't kaid reh rahe hain.
Waha se nikalne ke liye jay planing banta hain aur uss plan main rocky jimmedari saup deta hain but ayn mauke main woh usse dhoka de deta hain. Scene shift hota hai jaha "Boss" aur uske gunde Rocky ke samne hai. Pata chalta hai ki Rocky ne Nishu ko maar diya hai. Jay badla lene ki kasam khata hai, par Rocky use ek vault (Z-7) mein fek deta hai aur ek bhari cheez uske upar girata hai.
Real world mein, Cara Protocol-3 initiate karne ki koshish karti hai par fail ho jati hai. Rohit khoon ki ulti karte hue hosh mein aata hai aur scan ko pause karta hai. Wo paas ke pond mein apna chehra dhota hai, jaha pani mein uska reflection kuch pal ke liye ek darawne janwar jaisa dikhta hai.

The encounter in the Jungle & Aftermath:----
Naina, jo park mein wait kar rahi thi, Rohit ko dhundte hue jungle mein aa jati hai. Wo Rohit ko pond ke paas paati hai. Rohit apna chehra chupata hai aur rude bankar use waha se jane ke liye kehta hai taki wo use is halat mein na dekhe. Lekin Naina notice kar leti hai ki Rohit ke kaan aur chehre se khoon beh raha hai.
Wo zabardasti Rohit ka chehra ghumati hai aur uski halat dekh kar ro padti hai. Rohit jhooth bolta hai ki wo gadde mein gir gaya tha, par Naina use hospital le jane ki zid karti hai. Rohit use door karne ke liye kehta hai, "You are just an employee, stay away." Naina hurt hoti hai par fir bhi use hospital le jati hai.
Hospital ke bahar car mein baithkar Rohit Dr. Nadiya ko call karta hai aur painkillers mangwata hai kyunki wo bheed mein nahi jana chahta. Uske senses itne tez ho gaye hain. use har choti awaz loudspeaker jaisi sunai de rahi hai—yaha tak ki Sunaina ki tadapti hui calls aur security guards ki baatein bhi.
Ek nurse use dawai deti hai aur Rohit usse pen-paper mangta hai. Story ek suspense par rukti hai jaha kisi aur jagah ek masked aadmi ek antique gun nikalta hai aur ek gidgidate hue aadmi par taan deta hai.

To be continued...



Wait for 3 days for next update {UPDATE--- 6}

Story ke plot design aur character design ke bare me sochne ko bahut yada time lag gaya.

So, from now my story has a goal. It will follow the rule and it will hit-----

Although I cannot change the title my story name is now on { Ek aur baar }
Besides Rohit: the life of Hollow man