Incest RAKSHASH

[riya singh]

Interesting update.

Thanku ji

 

[riya singh]

Riya yrr tum update to bahot sandar deti ho per suspens yesa bana ke rakhti ho ki padne wali/wala bas yahi sochte rah jaye ki aage kya hoga
Aapko pranam meri chooti baahan

Bahut bahut dhanyawad dear,
Suspense ke bina kahani kaisi, agar sab kuch phele se hi pata ho to kahani me maja kaise aayega

 

[riya singh]

Riya yrr tum update to bahot sandar deti ho per suspens yesa bana ke rakhti ho ki padne wali/wala bas yahi sochte rah jaye ki aage kya hoga
Aapko pranam meri chooti baahan

Bahut bahut dhanyawad dear,
Suspense ke bina kahani kaisi, agar sab kuch phele se hi pata ho to kahani me maja kaise aayega

 

[riya singh]

Awesome update
Pichli kahani se dekha jaaye toh Bhomik ji ka bhai Satvik hi tantrik hai but ye Rakshash kaun hai ....? Kya ye Dev hai ya Phir koi aur ....? Aur Bhomik ji Rakshash ka Pata bhi nahi laga paa rahe hai ...

Bahut bahut dhanyawad ji
Jaldi hi pata chal jayega

 

[riya singh]

Mast update

Akhir Rakshas aa hi gaya dev ne Rakshas ke roop me entry mar di or sab tabah kar diya waise usne jo kiya wo sahi hi kiya kyonki sabhi ne uska or uski maa ka apman hi kiya ha to saja sabko milni chahiye waise pratap singh ko na jane kyon jinda chhod diya waise pratap singh or bhanvar singh in sabki fatke hath me aa gayi ha

Waise wo Riva je samne ruk gaya pata nahi kyon lekin uski wajah se hi sabki jinda chhod diya

Dekhte han age kya hota ha

Bahut bahut dhanyawad ji
Jaldi rakshash bhi samne aayega

 

[riya singh]

Mast update

Akhir Rakshas aa hi gaya dev ne Rakshas ke roop me entry mar di or sab tabah kar diya waise usne jo kiya wo sahi hi kiya kyonki sabhi ne uska or uski maa ka apman hi kiya ha to saja sabko milni chahiye waise pratap singh ko na jane kyon jinda chhod diya waise pratap singh or bhanvar singh in sabki fatke hath me aa gayi ha

Waise wo Riva je samne ruk gaya pata nahi kyon lekin uski wajah se hi sabki jinda chhod diya

Dekhte han age kya hota ha

Bahut bahut dhanyawad ji
Jaldi rakshash bhi samne aayega

 

[riya singh]

Aakhir kar rakshash aa hi gya lekin thoda or dikhta uska tandav to accha rhta anyway overall Nice update

Bahut bahut dhanyawad ji

 

[riya singh]

riya singh
Last ke 7,8,9 update ke review busy schedule ke chalte nahi de paya

review 7, 8, 9, 10 updates

Lets review Begin's
Shuruwat mein yuddh kala ki pariksha mein devdutt sabhi Raj kumaro ko prajeet karke apne aap ko sarva shresth
Sidh karta hai .
Lekin lekin kamya Ki chaal ke chalte devdutt aur niharika par jutha ilzam laga diya jaata hai .
Yaha prashan uthta hai ki devdutt ke pass aisi kya shakti hai jisse usne sabhi yuvraaj banne wale task pass karliye .

After kamya ke suggestion par devdutt aur niharikha ko pure rajya mein nirwastra karkar ghumya jaata hai
Bohut Hi unexpected scene tha wo .
Lekin ye jaroori tha main protagonist ko story ke title ke mutabik rakhshas banna hai toh uske sath galat jaroori tha jisse devdutt mein duniya ke prati hate create ho .

Bhawar singh ke logo ne pahadi par pahuchne ke baad hi niharaka aur Devdutt KO ghayal kar pahadi se niche fek diya gaya
Yaha aisa lagta hai Ki niharika Ki maut ho chuki hai aur Dev jinda Bach gaya.

Pratap ne bharwar Singh ko harane ke liye Riva aur akshra ke sath shadi ka prastav diya .
Yaha pratap singh Ki chaal kamyab hui usne hamla bhi kar hi diya lekin rakshsh ke aane par aisa na hosaka .

Rakshash ka kohraam khatrnaak tha bhawar singh aur pratap Singh dono Ki halat karaab hogayi .

Ab sawal uthte hai
Yakin rakshash devdutt Hi hai lekin kya rakshah bann kar wo negative character play karega .

Pratap singh ki beti bhi kya rakshash se uska relation judega ?

Niharika kya sach mein mar gayi ?

Kasturi ne dev ko dhoka kyu diya kya Koi majboori mein usne aisa kiya ?

Satvik kis vidhya Ki liye dakshin Ki aur gaya?

Overall update bohut ache hai .
Waiting for more .

Regards
Eternity Arceus

Bahut bahut dhanyawad ji
Dev kya karta h ye jaldi pata chal jayega, aur rakshash kya kar rha h ye aapne dekh hi liya h, satavik ki vidya hi kahani me mod laayegi

 

[ayush01111]

Waiting for your morning update

 

[riya singh]

Nice

Thanku ji