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Update chhota to hai but abhi ju ne start kiya to kuchh nahi bol raheUpdate 14 - Eyes from the Rift
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Purnima : P-Pankaj tum! Tumne mujhpe haath uthaya??
Pankaj kuchh nahi bola bas Purnima ko ghoorta raha. Apni maa ko apne papa ke haathon thappad khate dekh Bhavya daudti hui aayi Purnima ke paas.
Bhavya : M-Mumma!! D-Dad? You... you just slapped Mom?!
Pankaj : Bhavya! apni mom ko andar le jao. ABHI!
Phir aur hona kya tha? Bhavya ne apni maa ke kandhe pakde. Purnima abhi bhi gaal ko haath se daba rahi thi, aansu ruk nahi rahe the. Dono dheere-dheere andar chali gayi.
Yehi waja thi, ki kyun purnima aur Bhavya abhi dinner pe sabhi ke saath upsthit nahi the?
Dining table par sannata aur gehra ho gaya. Kisi ne kuchh nahi kaha, kuchh nahi khaya. Sirf khane ki thandi hoti khushboo aur chandelier ki halki si jhankar bachi rahi. Aur iss raat, Aryan ka raaz..! ek aur baar ghar ke andhere kamron mein chhup gaya.
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Mumbai – 6:17 PM
Viraj Kapoor apne cabin mein baitha tha. Saamne sheeshe ki deewar ke paar Mumbai ki shaam dheere-dheere andhere mein ghul rahi thi, par Viraj ki nazar sheher par nahi thi woh intezar kar raha tha. Kisi khaas ka,
Clicck-!!
Cabin ka darwaaza khula. Andar dakhil hua ek lamba-chauda aadmi. Umr lagbhag pachaas–ikavan ke aas paas, par chehre par abhi bhi wahi chamak, wahi teekhi pakad. Peeth bilkul seedhi, jaise saalon ka tajurba use jhukne hi na deta ho. Poora suited-booted, polished shoes, aur aankhon mein woh self-confidence jo sirf purane, manjhe hue businessmen ke paas hota hai.
Prakash!
Wahi aadmi jiska intezar Viraj Kapoor kar raha tha. Prakash ke cabin mein aate hi Viraj apni chair chhod kar khada ho gaya. Chehre par ek professional muskaan, haath aage badhate hue-
Viraj (Smiles) : Well! Well! Well! Mr. Prakash, welcome to Treasure. Haha! Nice to see you. Please… have a seat.
Prakash ne bhi haath milaya. Pakad mazboot thi na zyada garm, na zyada thandi. Phir woh aaram se chair khisak kar baith gaya. Bilkul waise jaise koi pakka businessman baithta hai. Na jaldbaazi, na hichkichahat. Uske chehre par shantima thi, par uss shanti ke neeche ek halki si bechaini saaf jhalak rahi thi.
Viraj : Toh, Mr. Prakash… kaise aana hua?
Prakash ne time waste nahi kiya.
Prakash : Seedhi baat par aata hoon, Mr. Kapoor. You know… why I’m here.
Ek pal ke liye Viraj bhi soch mein pad gaya. Aakhir Prakash koi aam aadmi nahi tha. Sheher ke top-das ameer khandanon mein se ek, prakash ka sarparast. Uska aisa rawaiys laazmi tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Well… I know. Par main aapki zubaan se sunna chahta hoon.
Prakash ki nazar seedhi Viraj par tik gayi. Uski awaaz mein na bheekh thi, aur na hi vinamrata-
Prakash : Loan. Loan chahiye mujhe.
Aur iss baar Viraj ke chehre par ek shaitaani muskaan ubhar aayi. Woh apni chair par aur seedha ho kar baith gaya, ungliyon ko aapas mein fansa kar aage jhukte hue-
Viraj : Heh… haha! Really, Mr. Prakash? *smiles* Kuchh din pehle hi toh aapki haweli mein mehmaan the hum. Waha ka aayojan dekh kar toh aisa bilkul nahi laga ki aapko loan ki zarurat hai.
Haan, viraj Kapoor bhi uss haweli mein maujood tha, sirf wahi nahi uske sath Aur bhi businessman, udyogpatiyan waha maujud the, Ria ke birthday ke din. Par woh party sirf birthday ke liye nahi thi. Woh ek business showcase thi. Chamakti roshniyaan, mehngi wine, muskurate chehre… sab kuchh ek dikhawa. Andar se? Sab kuchh khokla.
Sheher ke 10 ameeron mein shumar hone ke bawajood, saalon ki aiyashi aur raeesi aur dikhawe ke bojh ne Prakash ko bankrupt hone ke kagaar par laa khada kiya tha. Usi shaam, Ria ke birthday ke beech, Viraj aur Prakash ke beech baat ho chuki thi. Aaj… bas final meeting thi.
Prakash (tez swar mein) : Baatein mat badhaiye, Mr. Kapoor! Sab kuchh pehle hi tay ho chuka hai. Aap mujhe loan sanction karoge. Aur isse fayda aapka hi hai..
Viraj : Hmm? Woh kaise?
Prakash bhi taiyaar tha. Usne teer wahi jagah chhodi jahan chot sabse gehri lagti hai.
Prakash : Mere jaisa naam agar tumse loan leta hai, toh log notice karte hain. Dusre businessmen bhi aayenge. Abhi main iss deal ko publicly disclose nahi karunga… par future mein?...
Obviously! *smiles*
Strong trust build hoga tumhare brand ke liye. Aur mujhe yeh batane ki zarurat nahi ki tum iss business mein abhi naye ho.
“Tch..!"
Bankrupt hone ke bawajood, uski boli mein kamzori ka ek katra bhi nahi tha. Ye dekh Viraj ne daant kas liye, par Viraj bhi koi kam shikari nahi tha. Bhediya tha, jo bakri ka bhesh pehne baitha ho.
Viraj (shaant muskaan ke saath) : Yes… yeh toh hai. Par main hi kyun, Mr. Prakash? Aap jaise logon ke liye iss sheher mein hazaaron companies hain. Phir mujhse hi loan kyun?
Prakash koi bachcha nahi tha. Usse pata tha Viraj kya sunna chahta hai. Woh aur seedha ho kar baitha, gala saaf kiya aur dheemi, tol-maap kar boli hui awaaz mein-
Prakash (calm & measured) : Mr. Kapoor…! reputation sabse badi cheez hoti hai hamare business mein. Agar main kisi bade known bank ya public institution se loan maangne jaata hoon abhi, toh log sochne lagenge 'Arre, Vardhani group koi problem mein hai kya?' Eyes raise ho jaayenge, whispers shuru ho jaayenge… aur fayde ki jagah sirf nuksan hi hoga mera. Reputation kharab hone se zyada bada loss kuch nahi hota. That’s exactly why I’ve come to you instead. My name and 'Vardhani Apex & Daughters' cement, metals, telecom, fashion in sab high-profile sectors mein acchi khasi operate karti hai. We’re not small players, we drive scale and innovation across these sectors. Ab agar yeh news leak ho gayi ki 'V-Apex' bankrupt hone ke kagaar pe hai… toh market mein panic mach jaayega. Shareholders nervous ho jaayenge, partners hesitate karenge, unnecessary turbulence aa jaayegi. Aisa noise hum afford nahi kar sakte. Isliye main aapse hi loan lena chahta hoon… aur yaad ki jiye, aapne khud haan bola tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Yeh toh mera kush naseeb hai, Mr. Prakash! Meri haan hai. But… *pause*
Prakash : but??
Viraj : ek hi shart pe! Kya app usmein razzi hai?
Prakash : S-shart!?
Viraj (Smiles) : yes! Wahi, jispe ham pahle bhi baat kar chuke hain!!
Prakesh (hesitates) : I-
Viraj : Sochiye. Dhyaan se sochiye. Haha!!
Ab jakar Prakash ke maathe par pasina chamak utha. "Kya... Kya shart pe haan bolu? Par...!?" Woh soch mein padh gaya. Use pata tha Viraj kis shart ki baat kar raha hai. Viraj ki nazar uss par jammi hui thi, jaise use pehle se hi yakeen ho Prakash maan jaayega,
Tabhi-
RING! RING! RING!
“Huh! Ghansha!! Yeh kyun call kar raha abhi?”
Viraj ke phone pe kisi ka call aaya tha, Dekha 'ghansha' naam ka koi call kar raha tha, aur agle hi pal uske chehre pe ek muskurahat chha gayi. Usne apne soft armrest se uthte hue Prakash se bola-
Viraj : aap… aap sochiye, Mr. Prakash! Mujhe ek important call aaya hai, attend karna hoga.
Prakash : hmm!?
Aur kehte hue Viraj apne cabin se bahar aate hi call pick up kiya- "Toh, ho gaya kaam?"
“Bosssss…” ghansha phone ke uss taraf se bola, uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha.
Jisse sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya. Aakhir udhar ho kya raha hai?
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle kisi ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de. uss taraf se-
“VIRAJ KAPOORRR!”
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Udhar, doosri taraf… kuchh der pehle-
Jaise hi Aryan auto ke paas pahunchta hai, uski aankhon ke saamne jo drishya aata hai, uska khoon jam jaata hai. Auto ke andar…Naina thi. Aur uske bilkul saamne ek anjaan aadmi, jiska haath dheere-dheere uski taraf badh raha tha. Haath… bilkul Naina ke kandhe ke paas pahunch chuka tha.
Bas ek pal. Sirf ek second. Aur usi ek second mein Aryan ki aankhein gusse se phat jaati hain.
THUD!!
Aadmi Naina ko chhoo paata, usse pehle hi Aryan bijli ki tarah lapakta hai aur beech mein hi uss haath ko pakad leta hai.
Uski ungliyaan seedha aadmi ki kalaai par jakad jaati hain itni zor se, ki aadmi ke chehre par turant dard ki lakeer kheench jaati hai.
Aadmi (hairaan) : Huh??
Naina (crying) : BHAIYAAAA!! *sniff*
Auto ke chaaron taraf khade uss aadmi ke teen gunde ek dum se ghabra jaate hain.
Unhe kuchh samajh hi nahi aata. bas itna dikhai deta hai ki ek ladka tezi se bhagta hua aaya aur pal bhar mein auto ke saamne khada ho gaya. Woh teeno hakke-bakke reh jaate hain.
Apne bhaiya ko saamne dekhte hi Naina ke dil mein jaise achanak se umeed ki roshni jal uthti hai. Woh kudke auto se utarti hai aur Aryan se iss tarah chipak jaati hai, jaise agar usne use chhod diya toh uske saath kuchh bahut bura ho jaayega.
Aryan ka ek haath abhi bhi aadmi ki kalaai ko sakht grip mein pakde hue tha, aur doosra haath usne Naina ke kandhe par rakhkar use apne aur kareeb kheench liya. Naina ki hichkiyaan aur tez ho jaati hain-
Naina : Ye… ye aadmi bol raha tha ki zameen Viraj Kapoor ke naam likh de hum, nahi toh ye… ye… *sniff* bhiyaa *hic*
Uski baat poori bhi nahi ho paati. Aryan ki ungliyaan aadmi ki kalaai par aur kas jaati hain.
Naina (rote hue) : B-bhaiya… ye… ye ganda aadmi m-mujhe chhoone ki koshish kar raha tha… *sniff* m-main darr gayi thi bhaiya *hic*
Bas!
Itna sunte hi Aryan ki aankhein gussa se aur zyada laal ho jaati hain. Uski nazar bilkul seedhi, uss aadmi par jam jaati hai. yeh aadmi uski behen ko chhoone ki himmat kar raha tha?
“GRRR!!”
Ek dhimi, lekin gehri awaaz Aryan ke muh se nikalti hai. Naina jab apni bheegi hui aankhon se upar dekhti hai, toh jo woh dekhti hai, uska dil aur tez dhadakne lagta hai. Woh dekhti hai-
Aryan ke hothon ki lakeer upar ki taraf uthi hui thi, uske safed daant bahar dikh rahe the, maathe par ek lambi nas phool kar ubhar aayi thi. aur… aur uske gale se ek halki si guhaar nikal rahi thi.
“GRRRR!!”
Naina ka sharir ek jhatke ke saath kaanp uthta hai. Uske dil ki dhadkane jaise seene ko tod kar bahar aana chahti ho. "Kya… kya bhaiya gusse mein hain? Kya bhaiya mujhe bachane ke liye in gande gundo se ladenge? Kya bhaiya mera dhal banenge?" Uski aankhein bilkul Aryan ke chehre par tiki hui thi. Use mehsoos hota hai ki jo haath uske kandhe par tha, aur bhi zor se kas gaya hai. Woh ek baar Aryan ke uss haath ko dekhti hai, phir uske chehre ko.
“B-bhaiya?” usne dheere se pukara. Aur tabhi-
Aryan uss aadmi ki kalaai ko zor se jhatakta hai aur poori taqat se kheenchta hai. Woh aadmi auto se aise bahar aata hai jaise hawa mein uchhal gaya ho, lekin uski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ki ungliyon mein bandhi hui thi. Auto do kadam peeche khisak jaata hai.
Aadmi : Aahh! B-bsdk… teri toh!??
Aryan : Naina! Auto mein baith!
Naina : B-b-
Aryan (aur zor se) : NAINA! AUTO MEIN BAITH!!!
Uski awaaz sunte hi Naina kaamp jaati hai.
Woh aage kuchh bol hi nahi paati. Turant palat kar auto mein jaakar baith jaati hai.
Ab bahar sirf woh aadmi, uske teen gunde jo chaaron taraf ghere hue the, aur beech mein akela Aryan khada tha.
Aadmi (gusse se) : Teri itni himmat tu… mujhe? Ghansha Bhai se ladne ka soch raha hai?? Abee! Dekh kya raha hai-! maar isse!
Aur hawa mein jaise toofan jamne laga…!
Order paate hi ghansha ki teen addmi ek saath Aryan ki aur badh jata hai, par Aryan abhi tak ghansha ki hath ko nahi chhoda, balki aur kas gaya tha.
Pehla gunda, jo sabse mota aur bhari-bharkam tha, ne apna haath utha kar Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki. Uski baazu hawaa mein ghoomi,
lekin!
Aryan ne tez nazar se uski harkat ko bhamp liya. Usne apna dusra haath, jo khali tha, jhatke se aage badhaya aur uss gunde ke gardan ko pakad kar zor se khincha. Gunda aage ki taraf jhuka, aur Aryan ne uske sirr ko apne ghutne se takraya–
THUD!
Gunde ka naak toot gaya, khoon bahne laga, aur woh zameen par gir pada, haath-paon maarte huye.
"Agghhhh!"
Ghansha, jiski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ke mazboot pakad mein thi, woh cheekh utha: "Ahh! Chhod saale! Teri-"
Lekin Aryan ne uski taraf dekha bhi nahi. Usne Ghansha ki kalaai ko aur zor se twist kiya, jaise koi ragad kar kapda nichod raha ho. Ghansha ka chehra dard se laal ho gaya, uski ungliyaan sunn ho rahi thi.
Doosra gunda, jo lambe baal wala aur patla tha, peeche se Aryan par hamla karne aaya. Usne apni jeb se ek chhuri nikaali aur Aryan ki peeth mein ghusane ki koshish ki. Aryan ne apne kaan se awaaz suni-
hawa ki sarsarahat, aur bina palat kar dekhe, uske sharir ne Apne aap react kya, usne apna pair peeche ki taraf uthaya. Uski laath seedhe gunde ke pet mein lagi, woh dohra ho gaya, saans atak gayi.
"Ugghhh!"
Aryan ne mauka nahi chhoda, usne Ghansha ko apne saath khinch kar ghooma, jaise koi chain se bandha kutta khinch raha ho, aur Ghansha ka badan doosre gunde se takraya.
THUD!
"Huhhhh!"
Dono gir gaye, lekin Aryan ne kalaai nahi chhodi, balki aur kas kar khincha, Ghansha ko zameen se utha kar wapas khada kar diya.
Teesra gunda, jo sabse tez aur chalaak dikhta tha, ne yehi mauka dekha aur Aryan ke pairon par hamla kiya. Usne neeche jhuk kar Aryan ki tang pakadne ki koshish ki, jaise wrestling mein tackle karte hain. Aryan ka balance bigadne wala tha, lekin usne apna dusra haath istemaal kiya-
Usne gunde ke baal pakde aur uske Sirr ko zor se neeche dhakela.
THUD!
Gunda ka chehra zameen se takraya, do bar bounce khate hue uski daant toot gaye. Muh se khoon bahe-
THUD!
"Agghhhhhhhhh!!"
Phir Aryan ne apna pair utha kar uske peeth par maara, woh bilkul chatta ho gaya, hil nahi pa raha tha.
Ab tak teenon gunde zameen par pade the, ek naak se khoon bahata, doosra saans lene ki koshish karta, teesra behosh sa. Yah sab Hua bas 5 minute ke andar.
Ghansha ab bhi Aryan ke pakad mein tha, uski kalaai laal ho chuki thi, Aryan ki pakad Itni majbut thi ki haddi shayad tootne wali thi. Woh cheekh raha tha: "Saale... Chhod! tu mujhe nahi jaanta, Tujhe jaan se-!"
Auto ke andar Naina ka chehra safed pad gaya. Usne haath muh par rakh liye, aankhein badi-badi. "B-bhaiya...!" uski awaaz kamp rahi thi. Woh darr se aur ghabrahat se kaanp rahi thi, lekin uski aankhein Aryan se hat nahi rahi thi. Apne bhiya ka ye Roop usne kabhi nahi dekha tha, na hi usne kabhi sapne mein socha tha.
"Huff!"
Aryan ki saanse tez thi, lekin uska chehra shant nahi tha, gusse se bhara tha. Usne Ghansha ko apne karib khincha, itna karib ki unki naake chhoo rahi thi-
"Tune... Meri behen ko chhune ki himmat ki?"
Aryan ki awaaz gehri aur bhadi thi, jaise koi sher gurra raha ho. Ghansha ne apne dusre haath se Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki, lekin-
Aryan ne uski harkat ko pehle hi bhamp liya. Usne apna khali haath se Ghansha ke gardan ko pakda aur zor se daba diya. Ghansha ki saans atak gayi, aankhein bahar nikal aayi. Aryan ne uski kalaai ko abhi bhi nahi chhoda– usne usi pakad se Ghansha ko utha kar peeche khadi unki hi car se takraya.
THUD!
Ghansha ka sirr car se takraya, khoon bhi bahne laga.
"Aaaaghhhhhhhhhhh!"
Ghansha ab kamzor ho raha tha, usne girne ki koshish ki lekin Aryan ne usko khincha aur apne ghutne se pet mein maara. Ghansha dohra ho gaya,
"Ugghhhh!"
Aryan ne phir se khincha aur chehre par mukka maara –
ek,
"Ahhhh!"
do,
"Agghhhhhh!"
teen,
"Huhhhhhhhggghh!"
Har mukke ke saath Ghansha ka chehra toot raha tha, naak tedha, honth phat gaye. Ant mein, Aryan ne uski kalaai ko aakhri twist diya-
CRACK!
"Aggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!"
Haddi hi toot gayi. Ghansha cheekh kar zameen par gir pada, behosh hone ke kagar pe tha, par Aryan usko besosh nahi hone deta, uski kamiz pakad ke usko wapas se uthaya.
"Nahi! Hufff!! Chhod do... Ab...!"
Aryan : call kar Viraj kapoor ko!
"Huh"
Aryan (yells) : CALL KAR VIRAJ KO!!
Usne chilka kar bola, Ghansha jhapka aur jaldi se Viraj ko call milaya. Udhar jab Viraj call uthata hai-
“Bosssss…” uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi dard se.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha. Kyunki Aryan uski gandarn jozse dabochke rakha tha. Dard bhari awaaz sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya.
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle Aryan ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de, uss taraf se-
Aryan : VIRAJ KAPOORRR!
Viraj : huh!!!?
Hawa ka rukh badla, jo ladka shayad hi kisi se chilla ke, gehri aawaz mein baad karta, wahi ladka ab-
Aryan : avni, unki family phir teri nazar meri family ki orr padhi? Uncle Sanjay ki zamin, aur unki Beti pe teri nazar padhi? Mere bahan pe???? Aakhri... Aakhri moka hai tere pass! PAHLA aur AAKHRi. Iske baad AGAR teri nazar meri bahan pe ya hamari zamin pe padhi...!
Viraj : huh!!?
Aryan : TOH, TU MERA WOH ROOP DEKHEGA, JO MAIN KHUD NAHI JAANTA, aur...! AUR HOGI TREI MOUT-!
Call cut!
viraj kapoor Kuchh bol pata, usse pehlehi Aryan ne call cut Kiya. Ageli hi pal usne ghansa ko chhoda aur uske muh pe hi phone fhenk mara.
THUD!
Ghansha zamin pe gir gaya, Kyra socha rakha tha usne? Ye koi ladka hoga asani se usko dhakka dega? Par huya kya, na sirf woh balki uski teen pantaro ko bhi Aryan buri tarah se peet dala. Akele!
Sayad Aryan ko abhi bhi realise nahi huya, ki usne kya Kara hai. Abhi bhi woh gusse mein hai. uski abhi bhi saanse tez, huffte huye Usne auto ki taraf dekha, jaha Naina baithi thi-
darr se kamp rahi thi bechari, lekin uski aankhon mein chamak thi, uska bhaiya, uska rakshak. Charon taraf ab shanti thi, sirf gundon ki karahne ki awaazein. Aryan ne apne haathon ko jhada, phir auto ki taraf badha.
Naina bhi auto se utarti hai, ek pal bhi nahi rukti, aur seedha daud lagati hai Aryan ki taraf. Jaise hi woh uske paas pahunchti hai, woh bina kuchh soche-samjhe uske gale se lag jaati hai, poori taqat se.
“Huh-!?”
Naina (crying) : Bhaiyaaaa…! *sniff* Aap... *sniff* aap theek ho na?????
Usne apni aankhon se dekha tha, kaise Aryan ne unn sabhi gundo ko ek-ek karke gira diya tha, phir bhi uska dil darr se bhara hua tha.
Apni behen ka aansuon se bhara chehra dekhkar, Aryan ke chehre ka gussa dheere-dheere pighalne lagta hai. Uske hothon par ek naram si muskaan aa jaati hai.
Aryan (Smiles) : Meri gudiya… tum theek ho na?
Naina (sob) : *hic* Mujhe laga tha… woh gunde m-mujhe-! *sniff* Aap nahi aate toh shayad ye gunde mujhe *sniff*
Aryan turant hi use aur zor se apni baahon mein bhar leta hai.
Aryan : ssssshh!! Naina... aur mat rona. Main hoon na? Bas… bas ab kuchh nahi hoga.
Woh usse shant karne ke liye, use apne seene se laga ke rakhta hai. Aryan ko mehsoos hota hai ki Naina kitni zyada darr gayi thi, uska sharir abhi bhi halki-halki kampan se kaanp raha tha.
Apna sirr Aryan ke seene se laga kar, Naina kaafi der tak waise hi khadi rehti hai. Aur dheere-dheere, uske andar ek ehsaas bharne lagta hai- Suraksha ka. Jo sirf Aryan hi use de sakta tha.
Kuchh der baad, Aryan thoda sa peeche hota hai. Apni dono badi-badi hatheliyon mein Naina ke naram gaalon ko sambhal kar thamta hai. aur apni ungliyon se uske aansu pooch deta hai. Naina abhi bhi sibakti hui, seedha Aryan ki aankhon mein dekhti hai.
Uske seene ke andar kuchh tha jo bohot zor se dhadak raha tha, lekin woh use chehre par bayaan nahi hone deti. Bas… chupchaap Aryan ki aankhon ko dekhti rehti hai.
Aryan : Jab tak main hoon, na... koi majal hai kisi ki jo meri behen ko takleef pahunchaye Hmmm? *smiles softly*
Naina (halke se, aankhon mein nami ke saath) : mmm~
Aryan : Good. Ab bilkul nahi rona.
Main hoon na? Chalo… ab ghar chalte hain.Theek hai?
Naina : umm~
Phir achanak usse kuchh yaad aata hai.
Naina : Ohh! Bhaiya!!! Woh auto wale uncle ji... Inn logon ne unhe dikki mein band karke rakha hai!
Aryan ka chehra turant sakht ho jaata hai. Woh bina waqt gawaaye dikki kholta hai. Andar se auto wala umar-daraz aadmi bahar nikalta hai, bechaara poori tarah paseene se bheega hua, saans phooli hui. Usne kaanpte hue haathon se
Aryan ko shukriya ada kiya. Uske baad, Aryan aur Naina auto mein baithte hain.
Auto dheere-dheere unhe ghar tak chhod deta hai.
Aur peeche…!
Ghansha aur uske aadmi wahi zameen par pade reh jaate hain, haar aur dard ke saath.
Lekin-
Koi thi… jo chupke se inn sab par nazar jamaye hue thi. Andhere ke beech ek sthir chhaya. Wahi thi jo Aryan ka peecha kar rahi thi, ek nirdosh si lagne wali, par andar se kisi gehre rahasya se bhari hui upasthiti.
Usne ek gehre crimson-red rang ke lambe aur bahut hi shandaar chadar hooded cloak pehne hue thi, jo uske sirr par chhaya hua hai. Hood ka aage ka hissa itna gehra hai ki uska chehra aadha chhupa hua lagta hai, sirf honth aur thodi si naak hi saaf dikhti hai. Kapdon ki banawat aisi jaise abhi abhi koi battlefield Se Aayi Ho.
Hawa mein nami thi, aur khamoshi itni gahri, Tab uski awaz goonji.
"Oye moy moy! Smotri-smotri, ya nakonets-to tebya pojmala!"
Uski dhimi hansi khali sadak par fail gayi, aur hawa mein ek ajeeb si kampan paida ho gayi.
Woh apni jeebh ko bahar nikalti hai, Dheere se apne lambe, safed aur chamakte nakhunon uspar pherte hue-
"You naughty... Mm~"
Jaise hi uske shabd khatam hue, uski jeebh aur bhi lambi hoti chali gayi. Aakar badalta gaya, laal, geeli aur asamanya roop se lachakdaar.
Bilkul uss nagin ki tarah jo apni shikaar ko door se mehsoos kar leti hai. Uski aankhon mein chamak ubhar aayi- bhookh nahi, balki lakshya ki.
Uski nigahen dur ja rahe uss auto par tik gayi, jaha Aryan maujood tha bekhabar, apni hi duniya mein. Jaise hi uski nazar uss par jami, ladki ke nakhun dheere dheere lambe hone lage.
Aur phir…
kuchh aisa hua jo prakriti ke niyamon ko chunauti deta tha.
Usne apna haath upar uthaya. Ungliyon ke beech hawa ka ghanatva badalne laga, jaise empty space apne astitva par sawal utha rahi ho. Usne apne lambi nakhun ko hawa mein lehraya, ek hi gati mein, bilkul sahi kon par, jaise kisi surgeon ka antim incision karti hai.
Aur agle hi pal… Khali jagah par ek daraar ubhar aayi.
Na zameen phati, na hawa tooti, par phir bhi iss reality ke taane-baane mein jaise ek spasht katav aa gaya. Jaise iss brahmand ke fibres ko zabardasti cheera gaya ho.
Uss darar se kaali roshni nikalne lagi, na poori roshni, na poora andhera, balki kuchh aisa jo physics ke kisi bhi spectrum mein fit nahi baithta tha.
Hawa ka tapman achanak gir gaya. Samay jaise ek pal ke liye ladkhada gaya. Aur bina kisi hichkichahat ke, woh ladki uss shunya sthan mein kadam rakh deti hai.
Palak jhapakte hi uska sharir uss darar ke andar sama gaya. Aur usi kshan, jaise hi woh uske paar pahunchi, daraar band ho gayi. Jaise Reality fabric khud ko phir se silne lagi, jaise kuchh hua hi na ho.
Sadak phir se khali thi. Khamosh.
Par ab… Aryan! Jo inn sab se anjaan tha.
Kahi na kahi, kisi aur layer of existence se, koi uski har chal par nazar rakhe hue thi. Aur shayad- yeh shuruat thi.
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Ghadi ki sui seedhi raat ke 12 par tiki hui thi. Kamre mein andhera tha, lekin Aryan ki aankhon se neend koson door thi. Woh ghar aa chuka tha. Naina ko bhi samjha diya tha, ki aaj jo kuchh bhi hua, uss baare mein Sanjay ji ko kuchh na bataye. Woh waise hi pichhle ek mahine se pareshaan chal rahe the. Aryan nahi chahta tha ki uski wajah se unki tension aur badhe.
“Fucckk!”
Bed par karvat badalte hi uski peeth mein ek tez sa dard uth gaya. Shayad shaam wali fight ke dauraan koi ghunsa ya laat lag gayi thi, uss waqt adrenaline Rush mein mehsoos nahi hua, par ab jab sharir shaant tha, dard apni maujoodgi jata raha tha. Lekin jo baat usse khaaye ja rahi thi… woh yeh dard nahi tha.
Ab jab dimag thoda shaant tha, Aryan soch pa raha tha. Aur wahi sabse khatarnak cheez thi. Pichhle kuchh dinon mein jo-jo hua tha… woh sab uske dimag ke saamne film ki tarah chal raha tha.
“So, I’m sure… mujhe kuchh ho gaya hai.”
“Hmmm…”
“Uss din ke baad se… mujhmein kaafi badlaav aaye hain. Ghaav bhar jaana, sharir par nishaan tak na rehna. Mussels ka aise badhna jaise kisi ne andar se phula diye ho. Aur ye… ye ajeeb si garmi, jo kabhi-kabhi poore jism mein daud jaati hai.”
Insaan apne baare mein sabse zyada jaanta hai. Aur Aryan ko poori tarah ehsaas tha ki woh pehle jaisa nahi raha. Par kaise? Kyun? Iska jawab uske paas nahi tha. Aur yehi baat usse dheere-dheere khaaye ja rahi thi.
“Pehle Rohan aur uske doston se fight… phir Lokesh aur Rajan… aur aaj ki fight?” Uski aankhen chhat ko ghoorti rahi.
“Mujhmein itni takat thi???”
Yeh tha self-doubt. Jab zindagi mein achanak aisi cheezein hone lagti hain jo tark ko hi tod kar rakh dein, toh self-doubt aana bilkul normal hota hai. Aryan bhi uss se alag nahi tha. Woh apni hi wajood par sawal utha raha tha.
“Ohhh! Fuckkkk!” Usne dono haathon se apna sar pakad liya. “Sarr phata ja raha hai!"
Aur phir… uske dimaag ke kone se ek aur chehra ubhar aaya.
Sanya.
“Aur woh… Sanya!” Uske honthon se ek thandi saans nikal gayi. “Bapre… iss ladki se toh bachke rehna padega. Pata nahi kya kar de.”
Uske saamne woh drishya bilkul saaf ho gaya, jab Sanya uske saamne baithe thi, apne nange badan ko chaddar se dhakne ki anupayogi koshish karti hui.
Sochne ki koshish na karte hue bhi, Aryan ka sharir react kar gaya. Uska lund ek pal ke liye jhatka maar kar sakht ho gaya.
“Damn… the hell!” Usne jhatke se karvat badli. “Mujhe sach mein neend chahiye. Abhi ke abhi.”
Kamra phir se shaant ho gaya. Sirf ghadi ki halki tik-tik.
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Lekin, Ghar ke dusare kamre Mein, vatavaran bilkul Alag tha. koi thi, jiski dhadkan badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Aaj usse nind nahi aayegi~
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Purnima : P-Pankaj tum! Tumne mujhpe haath uthaya??
Pankaj kuchh nahi bola bas Purnima ko ghoorta raha. Apni maa ko apne papa ke haathon thappad khate dekh Bhavya daudti hui aayi Purnima ke paas.
Bhavya : M-Mumma!! D-Dad? You... you just slapped Mom?!
Pankaj : Bhavya! apni mom ko andar le jao. ABHI!
Phir aur hona kya tha? Bhavya ne apni maa ke kandhe pakde. Purnima abhi bhi gaal ko haath se daba rahi thi, aansu ruk nahi rahe the. Dono dheere-dheere andar chali gayi.
Yehi waja thi, ki kyun purnima aur Bhavya abhi dinner pe sabhi ke saath upsthit nahi the?
Dining table par sannata aur gehra ho gaya. Kisi ne kuchh nahi kaha, kuchh nahi khaya. Sirf khane ki thandi hoti khushboo aur chandelier ki halki si jhankar bachi rahi. Aur iss raat, Aryan ka raaz..! ek aur baar ghar ke andhere kamron mein chhup gaya.
Continue...
Mumbai – 6:17 PM
Viraj Kapoor apne cabin mein baitha tha. Saamne sheeshe ki deewar ke paar Mumbai ki shaam dheere-dheere andhere mein ghul rahi thi, par Viraj ki nazar sheher par nahi thi woh intezar kar raha tha. Kisi khaas ka,
Clicck-!!
Cabin ka darwaaza khula. Andar dakhil hua ek lamba-chauda aadmi. Umr lagbhag pachaas–ikavan ke aas paas, par chehre par abhi bhi wahi chamak, wahi teekhi pakad. Peeth bilkul seedhi, jaise saalon ka tajurba use jhukne hi na deta ho. Poora suited-booted, polished shoes, aur aankhon mein woh self-confidence jo sirf purane, manjhe hue businessmen ke paas hota hai.
Prakash!
Wahi aadmi jiska intezar Viraj Kapoor kar raha tha. Prakash ke cabin mein aate hi Viraj apni chair chhod kar khada ho gaya. Chehre par ek professional muskaan, haath aage badhate hue-
Viraj (Smiles) : Well! Well! Well! Mr. Prakash, welcome to Treasure. Haha! Nice to see you. Please… have a seat.
Prakash ne bhi haath milaya. Pakad mazboot thi na zyada garm, na zyada thandi. Phir woh aaram se chair khisak kar baith gaya. Bilkul waise jaise koi pakka businessman baithta hai. Na jaldbaazi, na hichkichahat. Uske chehre par shantima thi, par uss shanti ke neeche ek halki si bechaini saaf jhalak rahi thi.
Viraj : Toh, Mr. Prakash… kaise aana hua?
Prakash ne time waste nahi kiya.
Prakash : Seedhi baat par aata hoon, Mr. Kapoor. You know… why I’m here.
Ek pal ke liye Viraj bhi soch mein pad gaya. Aakhir Prakash koi aam aadmi nahi tha. Sheher ke top-das ameer khandanon mein se ek, prakash ka sarparast. Uska aisa rawaiys laazmi tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Well… I know. Par main aapki zubaan se sunna chahta hoon.
Prakash ki nazar seedhi Viraj par tik gayi. Uski awaaz mein na bheekh thi, aur na hi vinamrata-
Prakash : Loan. Loan chahiye mujhe.
Aur iss baar Viraj ke chehre par ek shaitaani muskaan ubhar aayi. Woh apni chair par aur seedha ho kar baith gaya, ungliyon ko aapas mein fansa kar aage jhukte hue-
Viraj : Heh… haha! Really, Mr. Prakash? *smiles* Kuchh din pehle hi toh aapki haweli mein mehmaan the hum. Waha ka aayojan dekh kar toh aisa bilkul nahi laga ki aapko loan ki zarurat hai.
Haan, viraj Kapoor bhi uss haweli mein maujood tha, sirf wahi nahi uske sath Aur bhi businessman, udyogpatiyan waha maujud the, Ria ke birthday ke din. Par woh party sirf birthday ke liye nahi thi. Woh ek business showcase thi. Chamakti roshniyaan, mehngi wine, muskurate chehre… sab kuchh ek dikhawa. Andar se? Sab kuchh khokla.
Sheher ke 10 ameeron mein shumar hone ke bawajood, saalon ki aiyashi aur raeesi aur dikhawe ke bojh ne Prakash ko bankrupt hone ke kagaar par laa khada kiya tha. Usi shaam, Ria ke birthday ke beech, Viraj aur Prakash ke beech baat ho chuki thi. Aaj… bas final meeting thi.
Prakash (tez swar mein) : Baatein mat badhaiye, Mr. Kapoor! Sab kuchh pehle hi tay ho chuka hai. Aap mujhe loan sanction karoge. Aur isse fayda aapka hi hai..
Viraj : Hmm? Woh kaise?
Prakash bhi taiyaar tha. Usne teer wahi jagah chhodi jahan chot sabse gehri lagti hai.
Prakash : Mere jaisa naam agar tumse loan leta hai, toh log notice karte hain. Dusre businessmen bhi aayenge. Abhi main iss deal ko publicly disclose nahi karunga… par future mein?...
Obviously! *smiles*
Strong trust build hoga tumhare brand ke liye. Aur mujhe yeh batane ki zarurat nahi ki tum iss business mein abhi naye ho.
“Tch..!"
Bankrupt hone ke bawajood, uski boli mein kamzori ka ek katra bhi nahi tha. Ye dekh Viraj ne daant kas liye, par Viraj bhi koi kam shikari nahi tha. Bhediya tha, jo bakri ka bhesh pehne baitha ho.
Viraj (shaant muskaan ke saath) : Yes… yeh toh hai. Par main hi kyun, Mr. Prakash? Aap jaise logon ke liye iss sheher mein hazaaron companies hain. Phir mujhse hi loan kyun?
Prakash koi bachcha nahi tha. Usse pata tha Viraj kya sunna chahta hai. Woh aur seedha ho kar baitha, gala saaf kiya aur dheemi, tol-maap kar boli hui awaaz mein-
Prakash (calm & measured) : Mr. Kapoor…! reputation sabse badi cheez hoti hai hamare business mein. Agar main kisi bade known bank ya public institution se loan maangne jaata hoon abhi, toh log sochne lagenge 'Arre, Vardhani group koi problem mein hai kya?' Eyes raise ho jaayenge, whispers shuru ho jaayenge… aur fayde ki jagah sirf nuksan hi hoga mera. Reputation kharab hone se zyada bada loss kuch nahi hota. That’s exactly why I’ve come to you instead. My name and 'Vardhani Apex & Daughters' cement, metals, telecom, fashion in sab high-profile sectors mein acchi khasi operate karti hai. We’re not small players, we drive scale and innovation across these sectors. Ab agar yeh news leak ho gayi ki 'V-Apex' bankrupt hone ke kagaar pe hai… toh market mein panic mach jaayega. Shareholders nervous ho jaayenge, partners hesitate karenge, unnecessary turbulence aa jaayegi. Aisa noise hum afford nahi kar sakte. Isliye main aapse hi loan lena chahta hoon… aur yaad ki jiye, aapne khud haan bola tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Yeh toh mera kush naseeb hai, Mr. Prakash! Meri haan hai. But… *pause*
Prakash : but??
Viraj : ek hi shart pe! Kya app usmein razzi hai?
Prakash : S-shart!?
Viraj (Smiles) : yes! Wahi, jispe ham pahle bhi baat kar chuke hain!!
Prakesh (hesitates) : I-
Viraj : Sochiye. Dhyaan se sochiye. Haha!!
Ab jakar Prakash ke maathe par pasina chamak utha. "Kya... Kya shart pe haan bolu? Par...!?" Woh soch mein padh gaya. Use pata tha Viraj kis shart ki baat kar raha hai. Viraj ki nazar uss par jammi hui thi, jaise use pehle se hi yakeen ho Prakash maan jaayega,
Tabhi-
RING! RING! RING!
“Huh! Ghansha!! Yeh kyun call kar raha abhi?”
Viraj ke phone pe kisi ka call aaya tha, Dekha 'ghansha' naam ka koi call kar raha tha, aur agle hi pal uske chehre pe ek muskurahat chha gayi. Usne apne soft armrest se uthte hue Prakash se bola-
Viraj : aap… aap sochiye, Mr. Prakash! Mujhe ek important call aaya hai, attend karna hoga.
Prakash : hmm!?
Aur kehte hue Viraj apne cabin se bahar aate hi call pick up kiya- "Toh, ho gaya kaam?"
“Bosssss…” ghansha phone ke uss taraf se bola, uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha.
Jisse sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya. Aakhir udhar ho kya raha hai?
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle kisi ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de. uss taraf se-
“VIRAJ KAPOORRR!”
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Udhar, doosri taraf… kuchh der pehle-
Jaise hi Aryan auto ke paas pahunchta hai, uski aankhon ke saamne jo drishya aata hai, uska khoon jam jaata hai. Auto ke andar…Naina thi. Aur uske bilkul saamne ek anjaan aadmi, jiska haath dheere-dheere uski taraf badh raha tha. Haath… bilkul Naina ke kandhe ke paas pahunch chuka tha.
Bas ek pal. Sirf ek second. Aur usi ek second mein Aryan ki aankhein gusse se phat jaati hain.
THUD!!
Aadmi Naina ko chhoo paata, usse pehle hi Aryan bijli ki tarah lapakta hai aur beech mein hi uss haath ko pakad leta hai.
Uski ungliyaan seedha aadmi ki kalaai par jakad jaati hain itni zor se, ki aadmi ke chehre par turant dard ki lakeer kheench jaati hai.
Aadmi (hairaan) : Huh??
Naina (crying) : BHAIYAAAA!! *sniff*
Auto ke chaaron taraf khade uss aadmi ke teen gunde ek dum se ghabra jaate hain.
Unhe kuchh samajh hi nahi aata. bas itna dikhai deta hai ki ek ladka tezi se bhagta hua aaya aur pal bhar mein auto ke saamne khada ho gaya. Woh teeno hakke-bakke reh jaate hain.
Apne bhaiya ko saamne dekhte hi Naina ke dil mein jaise achanak se umeed ki roshni jal uthti hai. Woh kudke auto se utarti hai aur Aryan se iss tarah chipak jaati hai, jaise agar usne use chhod diya toh uske saath kuchh bahut bura ho jaayega.
Aryan ka ek haath abhi bhi aadmi ki kalaai ko sakht grip mein pakde hue tha, aur doosra haath usne Naina ke kandhe par rakhkar use apne aur kareeb kheench liya. Naina ki hichkiyaan aur tez ho jaati hain-
Naina : Ye… ye aadmi bol raha tha ki zameen Viraj Kapoor ke naam likh de hum, nahi toh ye… ye… *sniff* bhiyaa *hic*
Uski baat poori bhi nahi ho paati. Aryan ki ungliyaan aadmi ki kalaai par aur kas jaati hain.
Naina (rote hue) : B-bhaiya… ye… ye ganda aadmi m-mujhe chhoone ki koshish kar raha tha… *sniff* m-main darr gayi thi bhaiya *hic*
Bas!
Itna sunte hi Aryan ki aankhein gussa se aur zyada laal ho jaati hain. Uski nazar bilkul seedhi, uss aadmi par jam jaati hai. yeh aadmi uski behen ko chhoone ki himmat kar raha tha?
“GRRR!!”
Ek dhimi, lekin gehri awaaz Aryan ke muh se nikalti hai. Naina jab apni bheegi hui aankhon se upar dekhti hai, toh jo woh dekhti hai, uska dil aur tez dhadakne lagta hai. Woh dekhti hai-
Aryan ke hothon ki lakeer upar ki taraf uthi hui thi, uske safed daant bahar dikh rahe the, maathe par ek lambi nas phool kar ubhar aayi thi. aur… aur uske gale se ek halki si guhaar nikal rahi thi.
“GRRRR!!”
Naina ka sharir ek jhatke ke saath kaanp uthta hai. Uske dil ki dhadkane jaise seene ko tod kar bahar aana chahti ho. "Kya… kya bhaiya gusse mein hain? Kya bhaiya mujhe bachane ke liye in gande gundo se ladenge? Kya bhaiya mera dhal banenge?" Uski aankhein bilkul Aryan ke chehre par tiki hui thi. Use mehsoos hota hai ki jo haath uske kandhe par tha, aur bhi zor se kas gaya hai. Woh ek baar Aryan ke uss haath ko dekhti hai, phir uske chehre ko.
“B-bhaiya?” usne dheere se pukara. Aur tabhi-
Aryan uss aadmi ki kalaai ko zor se jhatakta hai aur poori taqat se kheenchta hai. Woh aadmi auto se aise bahar aata hai jaise hawa mein uchhal gaya ho, lekin uski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ki ungliyon mein bandhi hui thi. Auto do kadam peeche khisak jaata hai.
Aadmi : Aahh! B-bsdk… teri toh!??
Aryan : Naina! Auto mein baith!
Naina : B-b-
Aryan (aur zor se) : NAINA! AUTO MEIN BAITH!!!
Uski awaaz sunte hi Naina kaamp jaati hai.
Woh aage kuchh bol hi nahi paati. Turant palat kar auto mein jaakar baith jaati hai.
Ab bahar sirf woh aadmi, uske teen gunde jo chaaron taraf ghere hue the, aur beech mein akela Aryan khada tha.
Aadmi (gusse se) : Teri itni himmat tu… mujhe? Ghansha Bhai se ladne ka soch raha hai?? Abee! Dekh kya raha hai-! maar isse!
Aur hawa mein jaise toofan jamne laga…!
Order paate hi ghansha ki teen addmi ek saath Aryan ki aur badh jata hai, par Aryan abhi tak ghansha ki hath ko nahi chhoda, balki aur kas gaya tha.
Pehla gunda, jo sabse mota aur bhari-bharkam tha, ne apna haath utha kar Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki. Uski baazu hawaa mein ghoomi,
lekin!
Aryan ne tez nazar se uski harkat ko bhamp liya. Usne apna dusra haath, jo khali tha, jhatke se aage badhaya aur uss gunde ke gardan ko pakad kar zor se khincha. Gunda aage ki taraf jhuka, aur Aryan ne uske sirr ko apne ghutne se takraya–
THUD!
Gunde ka naak toot gaya, khoon bahne laga, aur woh zameen par gir pada, haath-paon maarte huye.
"Agghhhh!"
Ghansha, jiski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ke mazboot pakad mein thi, woh cheekh utha: "Ahh! Chhod saale! Teri-"
Lekin Aryan ne uski taraf dekha bhi nahi. Usne Ghansha ki kalaai ko aur zor se twist kiya, jaise koi ragad kar kapda nichod raha ho. Ghansha ka chehra dard se laal ho gaya, uski ungliyaan sunn ho rahi thi.
Doosra gunda, jo lambe baal wala aur patla tha, peeche se Aryan par hamla karne aaya. Usne apni jeb se ek chhuri nikaali aur Aryan ki peeth mein ghusane ki koshish ki. Aryan ne apne kaan se awaaz suni-
hawa ki sarsarahat, aur bina palat kar dekhe, uske sharir ne Apne aap react kya, usne apna pair peeche ki taraf uthaya. Uski laath seedhe gunde ke pet mein lagi, woh dohra ho gaya, saans atak gayi.
"Ugghhh!"
Aryan ne mauka nahi chhoda, usne Ghansha ko apne saath khinch kar ghooma, jaise koi chain se bandha kutta khinch raha ho, aur Ghansha ka badan doosre gunde se takraya.
THUD!
"Huhhhh!"
Dono gir gaye, lekin Aryan ne kalaai nahi chhodi, balki aur kas kar khincha, Ghansha ko zameen se utha kar wapas khada kar diya.
Teesra gunda, jo sabse tez aur chalaak dikhta tha, ne yehi mauka dekha aur Aryan ke pairon par hamla kiya. Usne neeche jhuk kar Aryan ki tang pakadne ki koshish ki, jaise wrestling mein tackle karte hain. Aryan ka balance bigadne wala tha, lekin usne apna dusra haath istemaal kiya-
Usne gunde ke baal pakde aur uske Sirr ko zor se neeche dhakela.
THUD!
Gunda ka chehra zameen se takraya, do bar bounce khate hue uski daant toot gaye. Muh se khoon bahe-
THUD!
"Agghhhhhhhhh!!"
Phir Aryan ne apna pair utha kar uske peeth par maara, woh bilkul chatta ho gaya, hil nahi pa raha tha.
Ab tak teenon gunde zameen par pade the, ek naak se khoon bahata, doosra saans lene ki koshish karta, teesra behosh sa. Yah sab Hua bas 5 minute ke andar.
Ghansha ab bhi Aryan ke pakad mein tha, uski kalaai laal ho chuki thi, Aryan ki pakad Itni majbut thi ki haddi shayad tootne wali thi. Woh cheekh raha tha: "Saale... Chhod! tu mujhe nahi jaanta, Tujhe jaan se-!"
Auto ke andar Naina ka chehra safed pad gaya. Usne haath muh par rakh liye, aankhein badi-badi. "B-bhaiya...!" uski awaaz kamp rahi thi. Woh darr se aur ghabrahat se kaanp rahi thi, lekin uski aankhein Aryan se hat nahi rahi thi. Apne bhiya ka ye Roop usne kabhi nahi dekha tha, na hi usne kabhi sapne mein socha tha.
"Huff!"
Aryan ki saanse tez thi, lekin uska chehra shant nahi tha, gusse se bhara tha. Usne Ghansha ko apne karib khincha, itna karib ki unki naake chhoo rahi thi-
"Tune... Meri behen ko chhune ki himmat ki?"
Aryan ki awaaz gehri aur bhadi thi, jaise koi sher gurra raha ho. Ghansha ne apne dusre haath se Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki, lekin-
Aryan ne uski harkat ko pehle hi bhamp liya. Usne apna khali haath se Ghansha ke gardan ko pakda aur zor se daba diya. Ghansha ki saans atak gayi, aankhein bahar nikal aayi. Aryan ne uski kalaai ko abhi bhi nahi chhoda– usne usi pakad se Ghansha ko utha kar peeche khadi unki hi car se takraya.
THUD!
Ghansha ka sirr car se takraya, khoon bhi bahne laga.
"Aaaaghhhhhhhhhhh!"
Ghansha ab kamzor ho raha tha, usne girne ki koshish ki lekin Aryan ne usko khincha aur apne ghutne se pet mein maara. Ghansha dohra ho gaya,
"Ugghhhh!"
Aryan ne phir se khincha aur chehre par mukka maara –
ek,
"Ahhhh!"
do,
"Agghhhhhh!"
teen,
"Huhhhhhhhggghh!"
Har mukke ke saath Ghansha ka chehra toot raha tha, naak tedha, honth phat gaye. Ant mein, Aryan ne uski kalaai ko aakhri twist diya-
CRACK!
"Aggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!"
Haddi hi toot gayi. Ghansha cheekh kar zameen par gir pada, behosh hone ke kagar pe tha, par Aryan usko besosh nahi hone deta, uski kamiz pakad ke usko wapas se uthaya.
"Nahi! Hufff!! Chhod do... Ab...!"
Aryan : call kar Viraj kapoor ko!
"Huh"
Aryan (yells) : CALL KAR VIRAJ KO!!
Usne chilka kar bola, Ghansha jhapka aur jaldi se Viraj ko call milaya. Udhar jab Viraj call uthata hai-
“Bosssss…” uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi dard se.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha. Kyunki Aryan uski gandarn jozse dabochke rakha tha. Dard bhari awaaz sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya.
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle Aryan ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de, uss taraf se-
Aryan : VIRAJ KAPOORRR!
Viraj : huh!!!?
Hawa ka rukh badla, jo ladka shayad hi kisi se chilla ke, gehri aawaz mein baad karta, wahi ladka ab-
Aryan : avni, unki family phir teri nazar meri family ki orr padhi? Uncle Sanjay ki zamin, aur unki Beti pe teri nazar padhi? Mere bahan pe???? Aakhri... Aakhri moka hai tere pass! PAHLA aur AAKHRi. Iske baad AGAR teri nazar meri bahan pe ya hamari zamin pe padhi...!
Viraj : huh!!?
Aryan : TOH, TU MERA WOH ROOP DEKHEGA, JO MAIN KHUD NAHI JAANTA, aur...! AUR HOGI TREI MOUT-!
Call cut!
viraj kapoor Kuchh bol pata, usse pehlehi Aryan ne call cut Kiya. Ageli hi pal usne ghansa ko chhoda aur uske muh pe hi phone fhenk mara.
THUD!
Ghansha zamin pe gir gaya, Kyra socha rakha tha usne? Ye koi ladka hoga asani se usko dhakka dega? Par huya kya, na sirf woh balki uski teen pantaro ko bhi Aryan buri tarah se peet dala. Akele!
Sayad Aryan ko abhi bhi realise nahi huya, ki usne kya Kara hai. Abhi bhi woh gusse mein hai. uski abhi bhi saanse tez, huffte huye Usne auto ki taraf dekha, jaha Naina baithi thi-
darr se kamp rahi thi bechari, lekin uski aankhon mein chamak thi, uska bhaiya, uska rakshak. Charon taraf ab shanti thi, sirf gundon ki karahne ki awaazein. Aryan ne apne haathon ko jhada, phir auto ki taraf badha.
Naina bhi auto se utarti hai, ek pal bhi nahi rukti, aur seedha daud lagati hai Aryan ki taraf. Jaise hi woh uske paas pahunchti hai, woh bina kuchh soche-samjhe uske gale se lag jaati hai, poori taqat se.
“Huh-!?”
Naina (crying) : Bhaiyaaaa…! *sniff* Aap... *sniff* aap theek ho na?????
Usne apni aankhon se dekha tha, kaise Aryan ne unn sabhi gundo ko ek-ek karke gira diya tha, phir bhi uska dil darr se bhara hua tha.
Apni behen ka aansuon se bhara chehra dekhkar, Aryan ke chehre ka gussa dheere-dheere pighalne lagta hai. Uske hothon par ek naram si muskaan aa jaati hai.
Aryan (Smiles) : Meri gudiya… tum theek ho na?
Naina (sob) : *hic* Mujhe laga tha… woh gunde m-mujhe-! *sniff* Aap nahi aate toh shayad ye gunde mujhe *sniff*
Aryan turant hi use aur zor se apni baahon mein bhar leta hai.
Aryan : ssssshh!! Naina... aur mat rona. Main hoon na? Bas… bas ab kuchh nahi hoga.
Woh usse shant karne ke liye, use apne seene se laga ke rakhta hai. Aryan ko mehsoos hota hai ki Naina kitni zyada darr gayi thi, uska sharir abhi bhi halki-halki kampan se kaanp raha tha.
Apna sirr Aryan ke seene se laga kar, Naina kaafi der tak waise hi khadi rehti hai. Aur dheere-dheere, uske andar ek ehsaas bharne lagta hai- Suraksha ka. Jo sirf Aryan hi use de sakta tha.
Kuchh der baad, Aryan thoda sa peeche hota hai. Apni dono badi-badi hatheliyon mein Naina ke naram gaalon ko sambhal kar thamta hai. aur apni ungliyon se uske aansu pooch deta hai. Naina abhi bhi sibakti hui, seedha Aryan ki aankhon mein dekhti hai.
Uske seene ke andar kuchh tha jo bohot zor se dhadak raha tha, lekin woh use chehre par bayaan nahi hone deti. Bas… chupchaap Aryan ki aankhon ko dekhti rehti hai.
Aryan : Jab tak main hoon, na... koi majal hai kisi ki jo meri behen ko takleef pahunchaye Hmmm? *smiles softly*
Naina (halke se, aankhon mein nami ke saath) : mmm~
Aryan : Good. Ab bilkul nahi rona.
Main hoon na? Chalo… ab ghar chalte hain.Theek hai?
Naina : umm~
Phir achanak usse kuchh yaad aata hai.
Naina : Ohh! Bhaiya!!! Woh auto wale uncle ji... Inn logon ne unhe dikki mein band karke rakha hai!
Aryan ka chehra turant sakht ho jaata hai. Woh bina waqt gawaaye dikki kholta hai. Andar se auto wala umar-daraz aadmi bahar nikalta hai, bechaara poori tarah paseene se bheega hua, saans phooli hui. Usne kaanpte hue haathon se
Aryan ko shukriya ada kiya. Uske baad, Aryan aur Naina auto mein baithte hain.
Auto dheere-dheere unhe ghar tak chhod deta hai.
Aur peeche…!
Ghansha aur uske aadmi wahi zameen par pade reh jaate hain, haar aur dard ke saath.
Lekin-
Koi thi… jo chupke se inn sab par nazar jamaye hue thi. Andhere ke beech ek sthir chhaya. Wahi thi jo Aryan ka peecha kar rahi thi, ek nirdosh si lagne wali, par andar se kisi gehre rahasya se bhari hui upasthiti.
Usne ek gehre crimson-red rang ke lambe aur bahut hi shandaar chadar hooded cloak pehne hue thi, jo uske sirr par chhaya hua hai. Hood ka aage ka hissa itna gehra hai ki uska chehra aadha chhupa hua lagta hai, sirf honth aur thodi si naak hi saaf dikhti hai. Kapdon ki banawat aisi jaise abhi abhi koi battlefield Se Aayi Ho.
Hawa mein nami thi, aur khamoshi itni gahri, Tab uski awaz goonji.
"Oye moy moy! Smotri-smotri, ya nakonets-to tebya pojmala!"
Uski dhimi hansi khali sadak par fail gayi, aur hawa mein ek ajeeb si kampan paida ho gayi.
Woh apni jeebh ko bahar nikalti hai, Dheere se apne lambe, safed aur chamakte nakhunon uspar pherte hue-
"You naughty... Mm~"
Jaise hi uske shabd khatam hue, uski jeebh aur bhi lambi hoti chali gayi. Aakar badalta gaya, laal, geeli aur asamanya roop se lachakdaar.
Bilkul uss nagin ki tarah jo apni shikaar ko door se mehsoos kar leti hai. Uski aankhon mein chamak ubhar aayi- bhookh nahi, balki lakshya ki.
Uski nigahen dur ja rahe uss auto par tik gayi, jaha Aryan maujood tha bekhabar, apni hi duniya mein. Jaise hi uski nazar uss par jami, ladki ke nakhun dheere dheere lambe hone lage.
Aur phir…
kuchh aisa hua jo prakriti ke niyamon ko chunauti deta tha.
Usne apna haath upar uthaya. Ungliyon ke beech hawa ka ghanatva badalne laga, jaise empty space apne astitva par sawal utha rahi ho. Usne apne lambi nakhun ko hawa mein lehraya, ek hi gati mein, bilkul sahi kon par, jaise kisi surgeon ka antim incision karti hai.
Aur agle hi pal… Khali jagah par ek daraar ubhar aayi.
Na zameen phati, na hawa tooti, par phir bhi iss reality ke taane-baane mein jaise ek spasht katav aa gaya. Jaise iss brahmand ke fibres ko zabardasti cheera gaya ho.
Uss darar se kaali roshni nikalne lagi, na poori roshni, na poora andhera, balki kuchh aisa jo physics ke kisi bhi spectrum mein fit nahi baithta tha.
Hawa ka tapman achanak gir gaya. Samay jaise ek pal ke liye ladkhada gaya. Aur bina kisi hichkichahat ke, woh ladki uss shunya sthan mein kadam rakh deti hai.
Palak jhapakte hi uska sharir uss darar ke andar sama gaya. Aur usi kshan, jaise hi woh uske paar pahunchi, daraar band ho gayi. Jaise Reality fabric khud ko phir se silne lagi, jaise kuchh hua hi na ho.
Sadak phir se khali thi. Khamosh.
Par ab… Aryan! Jo inn sab se anjaan tha.
Kahi na kahi, kisi aur layer of existence se, koi uski har chal par nazar rakhe hue thi. Aur shayad- yeh shuruat thi.
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Ghadi ki sui seedhi raat ke 12 par tiki hui thi. Kamre mein andhera tha, lekin Aryan ki aankhon se neend koson door thi. Woh ghar aa chuka tha. Naina ko bhi samjha diya tha, ki aaj jo kuchh bhi hua, uss baare mein Sanjay ji ko kuchh na bataye. Woh waise hi pichhle ek mahine se pareshaan chal rahe the. Aryan nahi chahta tha ki uski wajah se unki tension aur badhe.
“Fucckk!”
Bed par karvat badalte hi uski peeth mein ek tez sa dard uth gaya. Shayad shaam wali fight ke dauraan koi ghunsa ya laat lag gayi thi, uss waqt adrenaline Rush mein mehsoos nahi hua, par ab jab sharir shaant tha, dard apni maujoodgi jata raha tha. Lekin jo baat usse khaaye ja rahi thi… woh yeh dard nahi tha.
Ab jab dimag thoda shaant tha, Aryan soch pa raha tha. Aur wahi sabse khatarnak cheez thi. Pichhle kuchh dinon mein jo-jo hua tha… woh sab uske dimag ke saamne film ki tarah chal raha tha.
“So, I’m sure… mujhe kuchh ho gaya hai.”
“Hmmm…”
“Uss din ke baad se… mujhmein kaafi badlaav aaye hain. Ghaav bhar jaana, sharir par nishaan tak na rehna. Mussels ka aise badhna jaise kisi ne andar se phula diye ho. Aur ye… ye ajeeb si garmi, jo kabhi-kabhi poore jism mein daud jaati hai.”
Insaan apne baare mein sabse zyada jaanta hai. Aur Aryan ko poori tarah ehsaas tha ki woh pehle jaisa nahi raha. Par kaise? Kyun? Iska jawab uske paas nahi tha. Aur yehi baat usse dheere-dheere khaaye ja rahi thi.
“Pehle Rohan aur uske doston se fight… phir Lokesh aur Rajan… aur aaj ki fight?” Uski aankhen chhat ko ghoorti rahi.
“Mujhmein itni takat thi???”
Yeh tha self-doubt. Jab zindagi mein achanak aisi cheezein hone lagti hain jo tark ko hi tod kar rakh dein, toh self-doubt aana bilkul normal hota hai. Aryan bhi uss se alag nahi tha. Woh apni hi wajood par sawal utha raha tha.
“Ohhh! Fuckkkk!” Usne dono haathon se apna sar pakad liya. “Sarr phata ja raha hai!"
Aur phir… uske dimaag ke kone se ek aur chehra ubhar aaya.
Sanya.
“Aur woh… Sanya!” Uske honthon se ek thandi saans nikal gayi. “Bapre… iss ladki se toh bachke rehna padega. Pata nahi kya kar de.”
Uske saamne woh drishya bilkul saaf ho gaya, jab Sanya uske saamne baithe thi, apne nange badan ko chaddar se dhakne ki anupayogi koshish karti hui.
Sochne ki koshish na karte hue bhi, Aryan ka sharir react kar gaya. Uska lund ek pal ke liye jhatka maar kar sakht ho gaya.
“Damn… the hell!” Usne jhatke se karvat badli. “Mujhe sach mein neend chahiye. Abhi ke abhi.”
Kamra phir se shaant ho gaya. Sirf ghadi ki halki tik-tik.
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Lekin, Ghar ke dusare kamre Mein, vatavaran bilkul Alag tha. koi thi, jiski dhadkan badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Aaj usse nind nahi aayegi~
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That's it for today, guys. Like thok ke jaana aur review bhi. Also, you can see that I've changed the model for Naina's character. This is the model I created, how's she? And not just that every image you're seeing in this update, I made them all myself, for better experience. Enjoy.
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Update dhamakedar tha aur jis AI tool se image create Kari hai woh bhi sahi tha aur Aryan ki fight bhi acche se show kari..
Update par aate hai..
Isme daughters to Ria aur Mishka en dono ko hi denote kar rahe honge lekin Vardhani uska kuch samjh nahi aaya? Mujhe esa nahi lagta hai tumne ese hi yeh naam rakh diya hoga es naam ke piche bhi koi tagda reason hoga, jo hume shyd future updates mai dekhne ko mile..
Viraj aur Prakash kis shart ki baat kar rahe honge jaha tak hum sabhi ne Viraj ko dekha usse do chijen mai interest hai ek jameen mai aur dusri ladkiyon mai aur Viraj itna bhi bewakoof nhi ki Prakash se uski beti ke baare mai baat kare..
Bhale hi Prakash bankrupt ho aur apne bete Aryan se pyaar na karta ho lekin apni beti se pyaar karta hai kabhi company mai "Daughter" hai to pakka koi aur shart hogi..
Fight ke dauran Aryan ke senses bahut badh gaye the aur woh aane wali chij predict kar pa raha tha jese piche se kab koi usse maarne wala tha to usne uske pat par laat mari..
Dheere dheere Aryan ke senses bhi badh rahe ho aur uski fighting style bhi aur zada aggressive ho raha hai..
Aur jab Aryan ne Ghansha ka hath shuru mai pakda tha to uske muh se guhaar nikalti hai woh kisi janwar jese lag rahi thi, esa mujhe laga..
Ab woh nayi character, yeh kehna shyd thoda galat hoga lekin tumne usse kuch zada hi op(overpowered) dikha diya like apne nakhoono se space ko cheer dena..
Yeh story ki shuruaat mai nahi hona chahiye tha story ko bahut time ho gya lekin update ke usme yeh abhi zada badi nahi hai..
Aur Elders jin logo ki baat kar rahe the agar yeh woh nahi hui to isse zada op aur khatarnak aur kya ho sakta hai..
Badi tounge, lambe nakhoon yeh kesi species introduce kardi, wese agar in future Aryan aur es ladki ke bich koi scene hua to Aryan ko maza aa jayega..
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Agar itna sab hone ke baad bhi Aryan ko yeh doubt nahi hota ki uski body change ho gayi hai to woh gadha hi hota, chalo accha hua usse es baat ka realise hua lekin ab Aryan aage kya karega Viraj ko maarne ki dhamki dedi usse aage chalkar bahut problem creates hongi..
Aryan yaha Sanya ke baare mai soch raha hai wahi dusri taraf Naina Aryan ke baare mai, wese es update mai mujhe Naina zada sahi nahi lagi pata nahi kyu..
Overall update Superr tha aur writing style to hamesha ki tarah awesome hi tha..
Keep it up brother..
Update par aate hai..
Prakash ki company ka naam Vardhani Apex & Daughters hai..
Isme daughters to Ria aur Mishka en dono ko hi denote kar rahe honge lekin Vardhani uska kuch samjh nahi aaya? Mujhe esa nahi lagta hai tumne ese hi yeh naam rakh diya hoga es naam ke piche bhi koi tagda reason hoga, jo hume shyd future updates mai dekhne ko mile..
Viraj aur Prakash kis shart ki baat kar rahe honge jaha tak hum sabhi ne Viraj ko dekha usse do chijen mai interest hai ek jameen mai aur dusri ladkiyon mai aur Viraj itna bhi bewakoof nhi ki Prakash se uski beti ke baare mai baat kare..
Bhale hi Prakash bankrupt ho aur apne bete Aryan se pyaar na karta ho lekin apni beti se pyaar karta hai kabhi company mai "Daughter" hai to pakka koi aur shart hogi..
yaha mistake hai pehlehi sath mai likh diya
*Kyra isse bhi correct kar dena
Fight ke dauran Aryan ke senses bahut badh gaye the aur woh aane wali chij predict kar pa raha tha jese piche se kab koi usse maarne wala tha to usne uske pat par laat mari..
Dheere dheere Aryan ke senses bhi badh rahe ho aur uski fighting style bhi aur zada aggressive ho raha hai..
Aur jab Aryan ne Ghansha ka hath shuru mai pakda tha to uske muh se guhaar nikalti hai woh kisi janwar jese lag rahi thi, esa mujhe laga..
Ab woh nayi character, yeh kehna shyd thoda galat hoga lekin tumne usse kuch zada hi op(overpowered) dikha diya like apne nakhoono se space ko cheer dena..
Yeh story ki shuruaat mai nahi hona chahiye tha story ko bahut time ho gya lekin update ke usme yeh abhi zada badi nahi hai..
Aur Elders jin logo ki baat kar rahe the agar yeh woh nahi hui to isse zada op aur khatarnak aur kya ho sakta hai..
Badi tounge, lambe nakhoon yeh kesi species introduce kardi, wese agar in future Aryan aur es ladki ke bich koi scene hua to Aryan ko maza aa jayega..
Bro yeh konsi language hai smjh hi nahi aa rahi
..Agar itna sab hone ke baad bhi Aryan ko yeh doubt nahi hota ki uski body change ho gayi hai to woh gadha hi hota, chalo accha hua usse es baat ka realise hua lekin ab Aryan aage kya karega Viraj ko maarne ki dhamki dedi usse aage chalkar bahut problem creates hongi..
Aryan yaha Sanya ke baare mai soch raha hai wahi dusri taraf Naina Aryan ke baare mai, wese es update mai mujhe Naina zada sahi nahi lagi pata nahi kyu..
Overall update Superr tha aur writing style to hamesha ki tarah awesome hi tha..
Keep it up brother..
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Awesome update bhaiUpdate 14 - Eyes from the Rift
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Purnima : P-Pankaj tum! Tumne mujhpe haath uthaya??
Pankaj kuchh nahi bola bas Purnima ko ghoorta raha. Apni maa ko apne papa ke haathon thappad khate dekh Bhavya daudti hui aayi Purnima ke paas.
Bhavya : M-Mumma!! D-Dad? You... you just slapped Mom?!
Pankaj : Bhavya! apni mom ko andar le jao. ABHI!
Phir aur hona kya tha? Bhavya ne apni maa ke kandhe pakde. Purnima abhi bhi gaal ko haath se daba rahi thi, aansu ruk nahi rahe the. Dono dheere-dheere andar chali gayi.
Yehi waja thi, ki kyun purnima aur Bhavya abhi dinner pe sabhi ke saath upsthit nahi the?
Dining table par sannata aur gehra ho gaya. Kisi ne kuchh nahi kaha, kuchh nahi khaya. Sirf khane ki thandi hoti khushboo aur chandelier ki halki si jhankar bachi rahi. Aur iss raat, Aryan ka raaz..! ek aur baar ghar ke andhere kamron mein chhup gaya.
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Mumbai – 6:17 PM
Viraj Kapoor apne cabin mein baitha tha. Saamne sheeshe ki deewar ke paar Mumbai ki shaam dheere-dheere andhere mein ghul rahi thi, par Viraj ki nazar sheher par nahi thi woh intezar kar raha tha. Kisi khaas ka,
Clicck-!!
Cabin ka darwaaza khula. Andar dakhil hua ek lamba-chauda aadmi. Umr lagbhag pachaas–ikavan ke aas paas, par chehre par abhi bhi wahi chamak, wahi teekhi pakad. Peeth bilkul seedhi, jaise saalon ka tajurba use jhukne hi na deta ho. Poora suited-booted, polished shoes, aur aankhon mein woh self-confidence jo sirf purane, manjhe hue businessmen ke paas hota hai.
Prakash!
Wahi aadmi jiska intezar Viraj Kapoor kar raha tha. Prakash ke cabin mein aate hi Viraj apni chair chhod kar khada ho gaya. Chehre par ek professional muskaan, haath aage badhate hue-
Viraj (Smiles) : Well! Well! Well! Mr. Prakash, welcome to Treasure. Haha! Nice to see you. Please… have a seat.
Prakash ne bhi haath milaya. Pakad mazboot thi na zyada garm, na zyada thandi. Phir woh aaram se chair khisak kar baith gaya. Bilkul waise jaise koi pakka businessman baithta hai. Na jaldbaazi, na hichkichahat. Uske chehre par shantima thi, par uss shanti ke neeche ek halki si bechaini saaf jhalak rahi thi.
Viraj : Toh, Mr. Prakash… kaise aana hua?
Prakash ne time waste nahi kiya.
Prakash : Seedhi baat par aata hoon, Mr. Kapoor. You know… why I’m here.
Ek pal ke liye Viraj bhi soch mein pad gaya. Aakhir Prakash koi aam aadmi nahi tha. Sheher ke top-das ameer khandanon mein se ek, prakash ka sarparast. Uska aisa rawaiys laazmi tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Well… I know. Par main aapki zubaan se sunna chahta hoon.
Prakash ki nazar seedhi Viraj par tik gayi. Uski awaaz mein na bheekh thi, aur na hi vinamrata-
Prakash : Loan. Loan chahiye mujhe.
Aur iss baar Viraj ke chehre par ek shaitaani muskaan ubhar aayi. Woh apni chair par aur seedha ho kar baith gaya, ungliyon ko aapas mein fansa kar aage jhukte hue-
Viraj : Heh… haha! Really, Mr. Prakash? *smiles* Kuchh din pehle hi toh aapki haweli mein mehmaan the hum. Waha ka aayojan dekh kar toh aisa bilkul nahi laga ki aapko loan ki zarurat hai.
Haan, viraj Kapoor bhi uss haweli mein maujood tha, sirf wahi nahi uske sath Aur bhi businessman, udyogpatiyan waha maujud the, Ria ke birthday ke din. Par woh party sirf birthday ke liye nahi thi. Woh ek business showcase thi. Chamakti roshniyaan, mehngi wine, muskurate chehre… sab kuchh ek dikhawa. Andar se? Sab kuchh khokla.
Sheher ke 10 ameeron mein shumar hone ke bawajood, saalon ki aiyashi aur raeesi aur dikhawe ke bojh ne Prakash ko bankrupt hone ke kagaar par laa khada kiya tha. Usi shaam, Ria ke birthday ke beech, Viraj aur Prakash ke beech baat ho chuki thi. Aaj… bas final meeting thi.
Prakash (tez swar mein) : Baatein mat badhaiye, Mr. Kapoor! Sab kuchh pehle hi tay ho chuka hai. Aap mujhe loan sanction karoge. Aur isse fayda aapka hi hai..
Viraj : Hmm? Woh kaise?
Prakash bhi taiyaar tha. Usne teer wahi jagah chhodi jahan chot sabse gehri lagti hai.
Prakash : Mere jaisa naam agar tumse loan leta hai, toh log notice karte hain. Dusre businessmen bhi aayenge. Abhi main iss deal ko publicly disclose nahi karunga… par future mein?...
Obviously! *smiles*
Strong trust build hoga tumhare brand ke liye. Aur mujhe yeh batane ki zarurat nahi ki tum iss business mein abhi naye ho.
“Tch..!"
Bankrupt hone ke bawajood, uski boli mein kamzori ka ek katra bhi nahi tha. Ye dekh Viraj ne daant kas liye, par Viraj bhi koi kam shikari nahi tha. Bhediya tha, jo bakri ka bhesh pehne baitha ho.
Viraj (shaant muskaan ke saath) : Yes… yeh toh hai. Par main hi kyun, Mr. Prakash? Aap jaise logon ke liye iss sheher mein hazaaron companies hain. Phir mujhse hi loan kyun?
Prakash koi bachcha nahi tha. Usse pata tha Viraj kya sunna chahta hai. Woh aur seedha ho kar baitha, gala saaf kiya aur dheemi, tol-maap kar boli hui awaaz mein-
Prakash (calm & measured) : Mr. Kapoor…! reputation sabse badi cheez hoti hai hamare business mein. Agar main kisi bade known bank ya public institution se loan maangne jaata hoon abhi, toh log sochne lagenge 'Arre, Vardhani group koi problem mein hai kya?' Eyes raise ho jaayenge, whispers shuru ho jaayenge… aur fayde ki jagah sirf nuksan hi hoga mera. Reputation kharab hone se zyada bada loss kuch nahi hota. That’s exactly why I’ve come to you instead. My name and 'Vardhani Apex & Daughters' cement, metals, telecom, fashion in sab high-profile sectors mein acchi khasi operate karti hai. We’re not small players, we drive scale and innovation across these sectors. Ab agar yeh news leak ho gayi ki 'V-Apex' bankrupt hone ke kagaar pe hai… toh market mein panic mach jaayega. Shareholders nervous ho jaayenge, partners hesitate karenge, unnecessary turbulence aa jaayegi. Aisa noise hum afford nahi kar sakte. Isliye main aapse hi loan lena chahta hoon… aur yaad ki jiye, aapne khud haan bola tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Yeh toh mera kush naseeb hai, Mr. Prakash! Meri haan hai. But… *pause*
Prakash : but??
Viraj : ek hi shart pe! Kya app usmein razzi hai?
Prakash : S-shart!?
Viraj (Smiles) : yes! Wahi, jispe ham pahle bhi baat kar chuke hain!!
Prakesh (hesitates) : I-
Viraj : Sochiye. Dhyaan se sochiye. Haha!!
Ab jakar Prakash ke maathe par pasina chamak utha. "Kya... Kya shart pe haan bolu? Par...!?" Woh soch mein padh gaya. Use pata tha Viraj kis shart ki baat kar raha hai. Viraj ki nazar uss par jammi hui thi, jaise use pehle se hi yakeen ho Prakash maan jaayega,
Tabhi-
RING! RING! RING!
“Huh! Ghansha!! Yeh kyun call kar raha abhi?”
Viraj ke phone pe kisi ka call aaya tha, Dekha 'ghansha' naam ka koi call kar raha tha, aur agle hi pal uske chehre pe ek muskurahat chha gayi. Usne apne soft armrest se uthte hue Prakash se bola-
Viraj : aap… aap sochiye, Mr. Prakash! Mujhe ek important call aaya hai, attend karna hoga.
Prakash : hmm!?
Aur kehte hue Viraj apne cabin se bahar aate hi call pick up kiya- "Toh, ho gaya kaam?"
“Bosssss…” ghansha phone ke uss taraf se bola, uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha.
Jisse sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya. Aakhir udhar ho kya raha hai?
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle kisi ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de. uss taraf se-
“VIRAJ KAPOORRR!”
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Udhar, doosri taraf… kuchh der pehle-
Jaise hi Aryan auto ke paas pahunchta hai, uski aankhon ke saamne jo drishya aata hai, uska khoon jam jaata hai. Auto ke andar…Naina thi. Aur uske bilkul saamne ek anjaan aadmi, jiska haath dheere-dheere uski taraf badh raha tha. Haath… bilkul Naina ke kandhe ke paas pahunch chuka tha.
Bas ek pal. Sirf ek second. Aur usi ek second mein Aryan ki aankhein gusse se phat jaati hain.
THUD!!
Aadmi Naina ko chhoo paata, usse pehle hi Aryan bijli ki tarah lapakta hai aur beech mein hi uss haath ko pakad leta hai.
Uski ungliyaan seedha aadmi ki kalaai par jakad jaati hain itni zor se, ki aadmi ke chehre par turant dard ki lakeer kheench jaati hai.
Aadmi (hairaan) : Huh??
Naina (crying) : BHAIYAAAA!! *sniff*
Auto ke chaaron taraf khade uss aadmi ke teen gunde ek dum se ghabra jaate hain.
Unhe kuchh samajh hi nahi aata. bas itna dikhai deta hai ki ek ladka tezi se bhagta hua aaya aur pal bhar mein auto ke saamne khada ho gaya. Woh teeno hakke-bakke reh jaate hain.
Apne bhaiya ko saamne dekhte hi Naina ke dil mein jaise achanak se umeed ki roshni jal uthti hai. Woh kudke auto se utarti hai aur Aryan se iss tarah chipak jaati hai, jaise agar usne use chhod diya toh uske saath kuchh bahut bura ho jaayega.
Aryan ka ek haath abhi bhi aadmi ki kalaai ko sakht grip mein pakde hue tha, aur doosra haath usne Naina ke kandhe par rakhkar use apne aur kareeb kheench liya. Naina ki hichkiyaan aur tez ho jaati hain-
Naina : Ye… ye aadmi bol raha tha ki zameen Viraj Kapoor ke naam likh de hum, nahi toh ye… ye… *sniff* bhiyaa *hic*
Uski baat poori bhi nahi ho paati. Aryan ki ungliyaan aadmi ki kalaai par aur kas jaati hain.
Naina (rote hue) : B-bhaiya… ye… ye ganda aadmi m-mujhe chhoone ki koshish kar raha tha… *sniff* m-main darr gayi thi bhaiya *hic*
Bas!
Itna sunte hi Aryan ki aankhein gussa se aur zyada laal ho jaati hain. Uski nazar bilkul seedhi, uss aadmi par jam jaati hai. yeh aadmi uski behen ko chhoone ki himmat kar raha tha?
“GRRR!!”
Ek dhimi, lekin gehri awaaz Aryan ke muh se nikalti hai. Naina jab apni bheegi hui aankhon se upar dekhti hai, toh jo woh dekhti hai, uska dil aur tez dhadakne lagta hai. Woh dekhti hai-
Aryan ke hothon ki lakeer upar ki taraf uthi hui thi, uske safed daant bahar dikh rahe the, maathe par ek lambi nas phool kar ubhar aayi thi. aur… aur uske gale se ek halki si guhaar nikal rahi thi.
“GRRRR!!”
Naina ka sharir ek jhatke ke saath kaanp uthta hai. Uske dil ki dhadkane jaise seene ko tod kar bahar aana chahti ho. "Kya… kya bhaiya gusse mein hain? Kya bhaiya mujhe bachane ke liye in gande gundo se ladenge? Kya bhaiya mera dhal banenge?" Uski aankhein bilkul Aryan ke chehre par tiki hui thi. Use mehsoos hota hai ki jo haath uske kandhe par tha, aur bhi zor se kas gaya hai. Woh ek baar Aryan ke uss haath ko dekhti hai, phir uske chehre ko.
“B-bhaiya?” usne dheere se pukara. Aur tabhi-
Aryan uss aadmi ki kalaai ko zor se jhatakta hai aur poori taqat se kheenchta hai. Woh aadmi auto se aise bahar aata hai jaise hawa mein uchhal gaya ho, lekin uski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ki ungliyon mein bandhi hui thi. Auto do kadam peeche khisak jaata hai.
Aadmi : Aahh! B-bsdk… teri toh!??
Aryan : Naina! Auto mein baith!
Naina : B-b-
Aryan (aur zor se) : NAINA! AUTO MEIN BAITH!!!
Uski awaaz sunte hi Naina kaamp jaati hai.
Woh aage kuchh bol hi nahi paati. Turant palat kar auto mein jaakar baith jaati hai.
Ab bahar sirf woh aadmi, uske teen gunde jo chaaron taraf ghere hue the, aur beech mein akela Aryan khada tha.
Aadmi (gusse se) : Teri itni himmat tu… mujhe? Ghansha Bhai se ladne ka soch raha hai?? Abee! Dekh kya raha hai-! maar isse!
Aur hawa mein jaise toofan jamne laga…!
Order paate hi ghansha ki teen addmi ek saath Aryan ki aur badh jata hai, par Aryan abhi tak ghansha ki hath ko nahi chhoda, balki aur kas gaya tha.
Pehla gunda, jo sabse mota aur bhari-bharkam tha, ne apna haath utha kar Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki. Uski baazu hawaa mein ghoomi,
lekin!
Aryan ne tez nazar se uski harkat ko bhamp liya. Usne apna dusra haath, jo khali tha, jhatke se aage badhaya aur uss gunde ke gardan ko pakad kar zor se khincha. Gunda aage ki taraf jhuka, aur Aryan ne uske sirr ko apne ghutne se takraya–
THUD!
Gunde ka naak toot gaya, khoon bahne laga, aur woh zameen par gir pada, haath-paon maarte huye.
"Agghhhh!"
Ghansha, jiski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ke mazboot pakad mein thi, woh cheekh utha: "Ahh! Chhod saale! Teri-"
Lekin Aryan ne uski taraf dekha bhi nahi. Usne Ghansha ki kalaai ko aur zor se twist kiya, jaise koi ragad kar kapda nichod raha ho. Ghansha ka chehra dard se laal ho gaya, uski ungliyaan sunn ho rahi thi.
Doosra gunda, jo lambe baal wala aur patla tha, peeche se Aryan par hamla karne aaya. Usne apni jeb se ek chhuri nikaali aur Aryan ki peeth mein ghusane ki koshish ki. Aryan ne apne kaan se awaaz suni-
hawa ki sarsarahat, aur bina palat kar dekhe, uske sharir ne Apne aap react kya, usne apna pair peeche ki taraf uthaya. Uski laath seedhe gunde ke pet mein lagi, woh dohra ho gaya, saans atak gayi.
"Ugghhh!"
Aryan ne mauka nahi chhoda, usne Ghansha ko apne saath khinch kar ghooma, jaise koi chain se bandha kutta khinch raha ho, aur Ghansha ka badan doosre gunde se takraya.
THUD!
"Huhhhh!"
Dono gir gaye, lekin Aryan ne kalaai nahi chhodi, balki aur kas kar khincha, Ghansha ko zameen se utha kar wapas khada kar diya.
Teesra gunda, jo sabse tez aur chalaak dikhta tha, ne yehi mauka dekha aur Aryan ke pairon par hamla kiya. Usne neeche jhuk kar Aryan ki tang pakadne ki koshish ki, jaise wrestling mein tackle karte hain. Aryan ka balance bigadne wala tha, lekin usne apna dusra haath istemaal kiya-
Usne gunde ke baal pakde aur uske Sirr ko zor se neeche dhakela.
THUD!
Gunda ka chehra zameen se takraya, do bar bounce khate hue uski daant toot gaye. Muh se khoon bahe-
THUD!
"Agghhhhhhhhh!!"
Phir Aryan ne apna pair utha kar uske peeth par maara, woh bilkul chatta ho gaya, hil nahi pa raha tha.
Ab tak teenon gunde zameen par pade the, ek naak se khoon bahata, doosra saans lene ki koshish karta, teesra behosh sa. Yah sab Hua bas 5 minute ke andar.
Ghansha ab bhi Aryan ke pakad mein tha, uski kalaai laal ho chuki thi, Aryan ki pakad Itni majbut thi ki haddi shayad tootne wali thi. Woh cheekh raha tha: "Saale... Chhod! tu mujhe nahi jaanta, Tujhe jaan se-!"
Auto ke andar Naina ka chehra safed pad gaya. Usne haath muh par rakh liye, aankhein badi-badi. "B-bhaiya...!" uski awaaz kamp rahi thi. Woh darr se aur ghabrahat se kaanp rahi thi, lekin uski aankhein Aryan se hat nahi rahi thi. Apne bhiya ka ye Roop usne kabhi nahi dekha tha, na hi usne kabhi sapne mein socha tha.
"Huff!"
Aryan ki saanse tez thi, lekin uska chehra shant nahi tha, gusse se bhara tha. Usne Ghansha ko apne karib khincha, itna karib ki unki naake chhoo rahi thi-
"Tune... Meri behen ko chhune ki himmat ki?"
Aryan ki awaaz gehri aur bhadi thi, jaise koi sher gurra raha ho. Ghansha ne apne dusre haath se Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki, lekin-
Aryan ne uski harkat ko pehle hi bhamp liya. Usne apna khali haath se Ghansha ke gardan ko pakda aur zor se daba diya. Ghansha ki saans atak gayi, aankhein bahar nikal aayi. Aryan ne uski kalaai ko abhi bhi nahi chhoda– usne usi pakad se Ghansha ko utha kar peeche khadi unki hi car se takraya.
THUD!
Ghansha ka sirr car se takraya, khoon bhi bahne laga.
"Aaaaghhhhhhhhhhh!"
Ghansha ab kamzor ho raha tha, usne girne ki koshish ki lekin Aryan ne usko khincha aur apne ghutne se pet mein maara. Ghansha dohra ho gaya,
"Ugghhhh!"
Aryan ne phir se khincha aur chehre par mukka maara –
ek,
"Ahhhh!"
do,
"Agghhhhhh!"
teen,
"Huhhhhhhhggghh!"
Har mukke ke saath Ghansha ka chehra toot raha tha, naak tedha, honth phat gaye. Ant mein, Aryan ne uski kalaai ko aakhri twist diya-
CRACK!
"Aggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!"
Haddi hi toot gayi. Ghansha cheekh kar zameen par gir pada, behosh hone ke kagar pe tha, par Aryan usko besosh nahi hone deta, uski kamiz pakad ke usko wapas se uthaya.
"Nahi! Hufff!! Chhod do... Ab...!"
Aryan : call kar Viraj kapoor ko!
"Huh"
Aryan (yells) : CALL KAR VIRAJ KO!!
Usne chilka kar bola, Ghansha jhapka aur jaldi se Viraj ko call milaya. Udhar jab Viraj call uthata hai-
“Bosssss…” uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi dard se.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha. Kyunki Aryan uski gandarn jozse dabochke rakha tha. Dard bhari awaaz sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya.
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle Aryan ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de, uss taraf se-
Aryan : VIRAJ KAPOORRR!
Viraj : huh!!!?
Hawa ka rukh badla, jo ladka shayad hi kisi se chilla ke, gehri aawaz mein baad karta, wahi ladka ab-
Aryan : avni, unki family phir teri nazar meri family ki orr padhi? Uncle Sanjay ki zamin, aur unki Beti pe teri nazar padhi? Mere bahan pe???? Aakhri... Aakhri moka hai tere pass! PAHLA aur AAKHRi. Iske baad AGAR teri nazar meri bahan pe ya hamari zamin pe padhi...!
Viraj : huh!!?
Aryan : TOH, TU MERA WOH ROOP DEKHEGA, JO MAIN KHUD NAHI JAANTA, aur...! AUR HOGI TREI MOUT-!
Call cut!
viraj kapoor Kuchh bol pata, usse pehlehi Aryan ne call cut Kiya. Ageli hi pal usne ghansa ko chhoda aur uske muh pe hi phone fhenk mara.
THUD!
Ghansha zamin pe gir gaya, Kyra socha rakha tha usne? Ye koi ladka hoga asani se usko dhakka dega? Par huya kya, na sirf woh balki uski teen pantaro ko bhi Aryan buri tarah se peet dala. Akele!
Sayad Aryan ko abhi bhi realise nahi huya, ki usne kya Kara hai. Abhi bhi woh gusse mein hai. uski abhi bhi saanse tez, huffte huye Usne auto ki taraf dekha, jaha Naina baithi thi-
darr se kamp rahi thi bechari, lekin uski aankhon mein chamak thi, uska bhaiya, uska rakshak. Charon taraf ab shanti thi, sirf gundon ki karahne ki awaazein. Aryan ne apne haathon ko jhada, phir auto ki taraf badha.
Naina bhi auto se utarti hai, ek pal bhi nahi rukti, aur seedha daud lagati hai Aryan ki taraf. Jaise hi woh uske paas pahunchti hai, woh bina kuchh soche-samjhe uske gale se lag jaati hai, poori taqat se.
“Huh-!?”
Naina (crying) : Bhaiyaaaa…! *sniff* Aap... *sniff* aap theek ho na?????
Usne apni aankhon se dekha tha, kaise Aryan ne unn sabhi gundo ko ek-ek karke gira diya tha, phir bhi uska dil darr se bhara hua tha.
Apni behen ka aansuon se bhara chehra dekhkar, Aryan ke chehre ka gussa dheere-dheere pighalne lagta hai. Uske hothon par ek naram si muskaan aa jaati hai.
Aryan (Smiles) : Meri gudiya… tum theek ho na?
Naina (sob) : *hic* Mujhe laga tha… woh gunde m-mujhe-! *sniff* Aap nahi aate toh shayad ye gunde mujhe *sniff*
Aryan turant hi use aur zor se apni baahon mein bhar leta hai.
Aryan : ssssshh!! Naina... aur mat rona. Main hoon na? Bas… bas ab kuchh nahi hoga.
Woh usse shant karne ke liye, use apne seene se laga ke rakhta hai. Aryan ko mehsoos hota hai ki Naina kitni zyada darr gayi thi, uska sharir abhi bhi halki-halki kampan se kaanp raha tha.
Apna sirr Aryan ke seene se laga kar, Naina kaafi der tak waise hi khadi rehti hai. Aur dheere-dheere, uske andar ek ehsaas bharne lagta hai- Suraksha ka. Jo sirf Aryan hi use de sakta tha.
Kuchh der baad, Aryan thoda sa peeche hota hai. Apni dono badi-badi hatheliyon mein Naina ke naram gaalon ko sambhal kar thamta hai. aur apni ungliyon se uske aansu pooch deta hai. Naina abhi bhi sibakti hui, seedha Aryan ki aankhon mein dekhti hai.
Uske seene ke andar kuchh tha jo bohot zor se dhadak raha tha, lekin woh use chehre par bayaan nahi hone deti. Bas… chupchaap Aryan ki aankhon ko dekhti rehti hai.
Aryan : Jab tak main hoon, na... koi majal hai kisi ki jo meri behen ko takleef pahunchaye Hmmm? *smiles softly*
Naina (halke se, aankhon mein nami ke saath) : mmm~
Aryan : Good. Ab bilkul nahi rona.
Main hoon na? Chalo… ab ghar chalte hain.Theek hai?
Naina : umm~
Phir achanak usse kuchh yaad aata hai.
Naina : Ohh! Bhaiya!!! Woh auto wale uncle ji... Inn logon ne unhe dikki mein band karke rakha hai!
Aryan ka chehra turant sakht ho jaata hai. Woh bina waqt gawaaye dikki kholta hai. Andar se auto wala umar-daraz aadmi bahar nikalta hai, bechaara poori tarah paseene se bheega hua, saans phooli hui. Usne kaanpte hue haathon se
Aryan ko shukriya ada kiya. Uske baad, Aryan aur Naina auto mein baithte hain.
Auto dheere-dheere unhe ghar tak chhod deta hai.
Aur peeche…!
Ghansha aur uske aadmi wahi zameen par pade reh jaate hain, haar aur dard ke saath.
Lekin-
Koi thi… jo chupke se inn sab par nazar jamaye hue thi. Andhere ke beech ek sthir chhaya. Wahi thi jo Aryan ka peecha kar rahi thi, ek nirdosh si lagne wali, par andar se kisi gehre rahasya se bhari hui upasthiti.
Usne ek gehre crimson-red rang ke lambe aur bahut hi shandaar chadar hooded cloak pehne hue thi, jo uske sirr par chhaya hua hai. Hood ka aage ka hissa itna gehra hai ki uska chehra aadha chhupa hua lagta hai, sirf honth aur thodi si naak hi saaf dikhti hai. Kapdon ki banawat aisi jaise abhi abhi koi battlefield Se Aayi Ho.
Hawa mein nami thi, aur khamoshi itni gahri, Tab uski awaz goonji.
"Oye moy moy! Smotri-smotri, ya nakonets-to tebya pojmala!"
Uski dhimi hansi khali sadak par fail gayi, aur hawa mein ek ajeeb si kampan paida ho gayi.
Woh apni jeebh ko bahar nikalti hai, Dheere se apne lambe, safed aur chamakte nakhunon uspar pherte hue-
"You naughty... Mm~"
Jaise hi uske shabd khatam hue, uski jeebh aur bhi lambi hoti chali gayi. Aakar badalta gaya, laal, geeli aur asamanya roop se lachakdaar.
Bilkul uss nagin ki tarah jo apni shikaar ko door se mehsoos kar leti hai. Uski aankhon mein chamak ubhar aayi- bhookh nahi, balki lakshya ki.
Uski nigahen dur ja rahe uss auto par tik gayi, jaha Aryan maujood tha bekhabar, apni hi duniya mein. Jaise hi uski nazar uss par jami, ladki ke nakhun dheere dheere lambe hone lage.
Aur phir…
kuchh aisa hua jo prakriti ke niyamon ko chunauti deta tha.
Usne apna haath upar uthaya. Ungliyon ke beech hawa ka ghanatva badalne laga, jaise empty space apne astitva par sawal utha rahi ho. Usne apne lambi nakhun ko hawa mein lehraya, ek hi gati mein, bilkul sahi kon par, jaise kisi surgeon ka antim incision karti hai.
Aur agle hi pal… Khali jagah par ek daraar ubhar aayi.
Na zameen phati, na hawa tooti, par phir bhi iss reality ke taane-baane mein jaise ek spasht katav aa gaya. Jaise iss brahmand ke fibres ko zabardasti cheera gaya ho.
Uss darar se kaali roshni nikalne lagi, na poori roshni, na poora andhera, balki kuchh aisa jo physics ke kisi bhi spectrum mein fit nahi baithta tha.
Hawa ka tapman achanak gir gaya. Samay jaise ek pal ke liye ladkhada gaya. Aur bina kisi hichkichahat ke, woh ladki uss shunya sthan mein kadam rakh deti hai.
Palak jhapakte hi uska sharir uss darar ke andar sama gaya. Aur usi kshan, jaise hi woh uske paar pahunchi, daraar band ho gayi. Jaise Reality fabric khud ko phir se silne lagi, jaise kuchh hua hi na ho.
Sadak phir se khali thi. Khamosh.
Par ab… Aryan! Jo inn sab se anjaan tha.
Kahi na kahi, kisi aur layer of existence se, koi uski har chal par nazar rakhe hue thi. Aur shayad- yeh shuruat thi.
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Ghadi ki sui seedhi raat ke 12 par tiki hui thi. Kamre mein andhera tha, lekin Aryan ki aankhon se neend koson door thi. Woh ghar aa chuka tha. Naina ko bhi samjha diya tha, ki aaj jo kuchh bhi hua, uss baare mein Sanjay ji ko kuchh na bataye. Woh waise hi pichhle ek mahine se pareshaan chal rahe the. Aryan nahi chahta tha ki uski wajah se unki tension aur badhe.
“Fucckk!”
Bed par karvat badalte hi uski peeth mein ek tez sa dard uth gaya. Shayad shaam wali fight ke dauraan koi ghunsa ya laat lag gayi thi, uss waqt adrenaline Rush mein mehsoos nahi hua, par ab jab sharir shaant tha, dard apni maujoodgi jata raha tha. Lekin jo baat usse khaaye ja rahi thi… woh yeh dard nahi tha.
Ab jab dimag thoda shaant tha, Aryan soch pa raha tha. Aur wahi sabse khatarnak cheez thi. Pichhle kuchh dinon mein jo-jo hua tha… woh sab uske dimag ke saamne film ki tarah chal raha tha.
“So, I’m sure… mujhe kuchh ho gaya hai.”
“Hmmm…”
“Uss din ke baad se… mujhmein kaafi badlaav aaye hain. Ghaav bhar jaana, sharir par nishaan tak na rehna. Mussels ka aise badhna jaise kisi ne andar se phula diye ho. Aur ye… ye ajeeb si garmi, jo kabhi-kabhi poore jism mein daud jaati hai.”
Insaan apne baare mein sabse zyada jaanta hai. Aur Aryan ko poori tarah ehsaas tha ki woh pehle jaisa nahi raha. Par kaise? Kyun? Iska jawab uske paas nahi tha. Aur yehi baat usse dheere-dheere khaaye ja rahi thi.
“Pehle Rohan aur uske doston se fight… phir Lokesh aur Rajan… aur aaj ki fight?” Uski aankhen chhat ko ghoorti rahi.
“Mujhmein itni takat thi???”
Yeh tha self-doubt. Jab zindagi mein achanak aisi cheezein hone lagti hain jo tark ko hi tod kar rakh dein, toh self-doubt aana bilkul normal hota hai. Aryan bhi uss se alag nahi tha. Woh apni hi wajood par sawal utha raha tha.
“Ohhh! Fuckkkk!” Usne dono haathon se apna sar pakad liya. “Sarr phata ja raha hai!"
Aur phir… uske dimaag ke kone se ek aur chehra ubhar aaya.
Sanya.
“Aur woh… Sanya!” Uske honthon se ek thandi saans nikal gayi. “Bapre… iss ladki se toh bachke rehna padega. Pata nahi kya kar de.”
Uske saamne woh drishya bilkul saaf ho gaya, jab Sanya uske saamne baithe thi, apne nange badan ko chaddar se dhakne ki anupayogi koshish karti hui.
Sochne ki koshish na karte hue bhi, Aryan ka sharir react kar gaya. Uska lund ek pal ke liye jhatka maar kar sakht ho gaya.
“Damn… the hell!” Usne jhatke se karvat badli. “Mujhe sach mein neend chahiye. Abhi ke abhi.”
Kamra phir se shaant ho gaya. Sirf ghadi ki halki tik-tik.
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Lekin, Ghar ke dusare kamre Mein, vatavaran bilkul Alag tha. koi thi, jiski dhadkan badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Aaj usse nind nahi aayegi~
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Are ye to shuru hote hi khatam ho gyaUpdate 14 - Eyes from the Rift
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Purnima : P-Pankaj tum! Tumne mujhpe haath uthaya??
Pankaj kuchh nahi bola bas Purnima ko ghoorta raha. Apni maa ko apne papa ke haathon thappad khate dekh Bhavya daudti hui aayi Purnima ke paas.
Bhavya : M-Mumma!! D-Dad? You... you just slapped Mom?!
Pankaj : Bhavya! apni mom ko andar le jao. ABHI!
Phir aur hona kya tha? Bhavya ne apni maa ke kandhe pakde. Purnima abhi bhi gaal ko haath se daba rahi thi, aansu ruk nahi rahe the. Dono dheere-dheere andar chali gayi.
Yehi waja thi, ki kyun purnima aur Bhavya abhi dinner pe sabhi ke saath upsthit nahi the?
Dining table par sannata aur gehra ho gaya. Kisi ne kuchh nahi kaha, kuchh nahi khaya. Sirf khane ki thandi hoti khushboo aur chandelier ki halki si jhankar bachi rahi. Aur iss raat, Aryan ka raaz..! ek aur baar ghar ke andhere kamron mein chhup gaya.
Continue...
Mumbai – 6:17 PM
Viraj Kapoor apne cabin mein baitha tha. Saamne sheeshe ki deewar ke paar Mumbai ki shaam dheere-dheere andhere mein ghul rahi thi, par Viraj ki nazar sheher par nahi thi woh intezar kar raha tha. Kisi khaas ka,
Clicck-!!
Cabin ka darwaaza khula. Andar dakhil hua ek lamba-chauda aadmi. Umr lagbhag pachaas–ikavan ke aas paas, par chehre par abhi bhi wahi chamak, wahi teekhi pakad. Peeth bilkul seedhi, jaise saalon ka tajurba use jhukne hi na deta ho. Poora suited-booted, polished shoes, aur aankhon mein woh self-confidence jo sirf purane, manjhe hue businessmen ke paas hota hai.
Prakash!
Wahi aadmi jiska intezar Viraj Kapoor kar raha tha. Prakash ke cabin mein aate hi Viraj apni chair chhod kar khada ho gaya. Chehre par ek professional muskaan, haath aage badhate hue-
Viraj (Smiles) : Well! Well! Well! Mr. Prakash, welcome to Treasure. Haha! Nice to see you. Please… have a seat.
Prakash ne bhi haath milaya. Pakad mazboot thi na zyada garm, na zyada thandi. Phir woh aaram se chair khisak kar baith gaya. Bilkul waise jaise koi pakka businessman baithta hai. Na jaldbaazi, na hichkichahat. Uske chehre par shantima thi, par uss shanti ke neeche ek halki si bechaini saaf jhalak rahi thi.
Viraj : Toh, Mr. Prakash… kaise aana hua?
Prakash ne time waste nahi kiya.
Prakash : Seedhi baat par aata hoon, Mr. Kapoor. You know… why I’m here.
Ek pal ke liye Viraj bhi soch mein pad gaya. Aakhir Prakash koi aam aadmi nahi tha. Sheher ke top-das ameer khandanon mein se ek, prakash ka sarparast. Uska aisa rawaiys laazmi tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Well… I know. Par main aapki zubaan se sunna chahta hoon.
Prakash ki nazar seedhi Viraj par tik gayi. Uski awaaz mein na bheekh thi, aur na hi vinamrata-
Prakash : Loan. Loan chahiye mujhe.
Aur iss baar Viraj ke chehre par ek shaitaani muskaan ubhar aayi. Woh apni chair par aur seedha ho kar baith gaya, ungliyon ko aapas mein fansa kar aage jhukte hue-
Viraj : Heh… haha! Really, Mr. Prakash? *smiles* Kuchh din pehle hi toh aapki haweli mein mehmaan the hum. Waha ka aayojan dekh kar toh aisa bilkul nahi laga ki aapko loan ki zarurat hai.
Haan, viraj Kapoor bhi uss haweli mein maujood tha, sirf wahi nahi uske sath Aur bhi businessman, udyogpatiyan waha maujud the, Ria ke birthday ke din. Par woh party sirf birthday ke liye nahi thi. Woh ek business showcase thi. Chamakti roshniyaan, mehngi wine, muskurate chehre… sab kuchh ek dikhawa. Andar se? Sab kuchh khokla.
Sheher ke 10 ameeron mein shumar hone ke bawajood, saalon ki aiyashi aur raeesi aur dikhawe ke bojh ne Prakash ko bankrupt hone ke kagaar par laa khada kiya tha. Usi shaam, Ria ke birthday ke beech, Viraj aur Prakash ke beech baat ho chuki thi. Aaj… bas final meeting thi.
Prakash (tez swar mein) : Baatein mat badhaiye, Mr. Kapoor! Sab kuchh pehle hi tay ho chuka hai. Aap mujhe loan sanction karoge. Aur isse fayda aapka hi hai..
Viraj : Hmm? Woh kaise?
Prakash bhi taiyaar tha. Usne teer wahi jagah chhodi jahan chot sabse gehri lagti hai.
Prakash : Mere jaisa naam agar tumse loan leta hai, toh log notice karte hain. Dusre businessmen bhi aayenge. Abhi main iss deal ko publicly disclose nahi karunga… par future mein?...
Obviously! *smiles*
Strong trust build hoga tumhare brand ke liye. Aur mujhe yeh batane ki zarurat nahi ki tum iss business mein abhi naye ho.
“Tch..!"
Bankrupt hone ke bawajood, uski boli mein kamzori ka ek katra bhi nahi tha. Ye dekh Viraj ne daant kas liye, par Viraj bhi koi kam shikari nahi tha. Bhediya tha, jo bakri ka bhesh pehne baitha ho.
Viraj (shaant muskaan ke saath) : Yes… yeh toh hai. Par main hi kyun, Mr. Prakash? Aap jaise logon ke liye iss sheher mein hazaaron companies hain. Phir mujhse hi loan kyun?
Prakash koi bachcha nahi tha. Usse pata tha Viraj kya sunna chahta hai. Woh aur seedha ho kar baitha, gala saaf kiya aur dheemi, tol-maap kar boli hui awaaz mein-
Prakash (calm & measured) : Mr. Kapoor…! reputation sabse badi cheez hoti hai hamare business mein. Agar main kisi bade known bank ya public institution se loan maangne jaata hoon abhi, toh log sochne lagenge 'Arre, Vardhani group koi problem mein hai kya?' Eyes raise ho jaayenge, whispers shuru ho jaayenge… aur fayde ki jagah sirf nuksan hi hoga mera. Reputation kharab hone se zyada bada loss kuch nahi hota. That’s exactly why I’ve come to you instead. My name and 'Vardhani Apex & Daughters' cement, metals, telecom, fashion in sab high-profile sectors mein acchi khasi operate karti hai. We’re not small players, we drive scale and innovation across these sectors. Ab agar yeh news leak ho gayi ki 'V-Apex' bankrupt hone ke kagaar pe hai… toh market mein panic mach jaayega. Shareholders nervous ho jaayenge, partners hesitate karenge, unnecessary turbulence aa jaayegi. Aisa noise hum afford nahi kar sakte. Isliye main aapse hi loan lena chahta hoon… aur yaad ki jiye, aapne khud haan bola tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Yeh toh mera kush naseeb hai, Mr. Prakash! Meri haan hai. But… *pause*
Prakash : but??
Viraj : ek hi shart pe! Kya app usmein razzi hai?
Prakash : S-shart!?
Viraj (Smiles) : yes! Wahi, jispe ham pahle bhi baat kar chuke hain!!
Prakesh (hesitates) : I-
Viraj : Sochiye. Dhyaan se sochiye. Haha!!
Ab jakar Prakash ke maathe par pasina chamak utha. "Kya... Kya shart pe haan bolu? Par...!?" Woh soch mein padh gaya. Use pata tha Viraj kis shart ki baat kar raha hai. Viraj ki nazar uss par jammi hui thi, jaise use pehle se hi yakeen ho Prakash maan jaayega,
Tabhi-
RING! RING! RING!
“Huh! Ghansha!! Yeh kyun call kar raha abhi?”
Viraj ke phone pe kisi ka call aaya tha, Dekha 'ghansha' naam ka koi call kar raha tha, aur agle hi pal uske chehre pe ek muskurahat chha gayi. Usne apne soft armrest se uthte hue Prakash se bola-
Viraj : aap… aap sochiye, Mr. Prakash! Mujhe ek important call aaya hai, attend karna hoga.
Prakash : hmm!?
Aur kehte hue Viraj apne cabin se bahar aate hi call pick up kiya- "Toh, ho gaya kaam?"
“Bosssss…” ghansha phone ke uss taraf se bola, uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha.
Jisse sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya. Aakhir udhar ho kya raha hai?
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle kisi ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de. uss taraf se-
“VIRAJ KAPOORRR!”
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Udhar, doosri taraf… kuchh der pehle-
Jaise hi Aryan auto ke paas pahunchta hai, uski aankhon ke saamne jo drishya aata hai, uska khoon jam jaata hai. Auto ke andar…Naina thi. Aur uske bilkul saamne ek anjaan aadmi, jiska haath dheere-dheere uski taraf badh raha tha. Haath… bilkul Naina ke kandhe ke paas pahunch chuka tha.
Bas ek pal. Sirf ek second. Aur usi ek second mein Aryan ki aankhein gusse se phat jaati hain.
THUD!!
Aadmi Naina ko chhoo paata, usse pehle hi Aryan bijli ki tarah lapakta hai aur beech mein hi uss haath ko pakad leta hai.
Uski ungliyaan seedha aadmi ki kalaai par jakad jaati hain itni zor se, ki aadmi ke chehre par turant dard ki lakeer kheench jaati hai.
Aadmi (hairaan) : Huh??
Naina (crying) : BHAIYAAAA!! *sniff*
Auto ke chaaron taraf khade uss aadmi ke teen gunde ek dum se ghabra jaate hain.
Unhe kuchh samajh hi nahi aata. bas itna dikhai deta hai ki ek ladka tezi se bhagta hua aaya aur pal bhar mein auto ke saamne khada ho gaya. Woh teeno hakke-bakke reh jaate hain.
Apne bhaiya ko saamne dekhte hi Naina ke dil mein jaise achanak se umeed ki roshni jal uthti hai. Woh kudke auto se utarti hai aur Aryan se iss tarah chipak jaati hai, jaise agar usne use chhod diya toh uske saath kuchh bahut bura ho jaayega.
Aryan ka ek haath abhi bhi aadmi ki kalaai ko sakht grip mein pakde hue tha, aur doosra haath usne Naina ke kandhe par rakhkar use apne aur kareeb kheench liya. Naina ki hichkiyaan aur tez ho jaati hain-
Naina : Ye… ye aadmi bol raha tha ki zameen Viraj Kapoor ke naam likh de hum, nahi toh ye… ye… *sniff* bhiyaa *hic*
Uski baat poori bhi nahi ho paati. Aryan ki ungliyaan aadmi ki kalaai par aur kas jaati hain.
Naina (rote hue) : B-bhaiya… ye… ye ganda aadmi m-mujhe chhoone ki koshish kar raha tha… *sniff* m-main darr gayi thi bhaiya *hic*
Bas!
Itna sunte hi Aryan ki aankhein gussa se aur zyada laal ho jaati hain. Uski nazar bilkul seedhi, uss aadmi par jam jaati hai. yeh aadmi uski behen ko chhoone ki himmat kar raha tha?
“GRRR!!”
Ek dhimi, lekin gehri awaaz Aryan ke muh se nikalti hai. Naina jab apni bheegi hui aankhon se upar dekhti hai, toh jo woh dekhti hai, uska dil aur tez dhadakne lagta hai. Woh dekhti hai-
Aryan ke hothon ki lakeer upar ki taraf uthi hui thi, uske safed daant bahar dikh rahe the, maathe par ek lambi nas phool kar ubhar aayi thi. aur… aur uske gale se ek halki si guhaar nikal rahi thi.
“GRRRR!!”
Naina ka sharir ek jhatke ke saath kaanp uthta hai. Uske dil ki dhadkane jaise seene ko tod kar bahar aana chahti ho. "Kya… kya bhaiya gusse mein hain? Kya bhaiya mujhe bachane ke liye in gande gundo se ladenge? Kya bhaiya mera dhal banenge?" Uski aankhein bilkul Aryan ke chehre par tiki hui thi. Use mehsoos hota hai ki jo haath uske kandhe par tha, aur bhi zor se kas gaya hai. Woh ek baar Aryan ke uss haath ko dekhti hai, phir uske chehre ko.
“B-bhaiya?” usne dheere se pukara. Aur tabhi-
Aryan uss aadmi ki kalaai ko zor se jhatakta hai aur poori taqat se kheenchta hai. Woh aadmi auto se aise bahar aata hai jaise hawa mein uchhal gaya ho, lekin uski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ki ungliyon mein bandhi hui thi. Auto do kadam peeche khisak jaata hai.
Aadmi : Aahh! B-bsdk… teri toh!??
Aryan : Naina! Auto mein baith!
Naina : B-b-
Aryan (aur zor se) : NAINA! AUTO MEIN BAITH!!!
Uski awaaz sunte hi Naina kaamp jaati hai.
Woh aage kuchh bol hi nahi paati. Turant palat kar auto mein jaakar baith jaati hai.
Ab bahar sirf woh aadmi, uske teen gunde jo chaaron taraf ghere hue the, aur beech mein akela Aryan khada tha.
Aadmi (gusse se) : Teri itni himmat tu… mujhe? Ghansha Bhai se ladne ka soch raha hai?? Abee! Dekh kya raha hai-! maar isse!
Aur hawa mein jaise toofan jamne laga…!
Order paate hi ghansha ki teen addmi ek saath Aryan ki aur badh jata hai, par Aryan abhi tak ghansha ki hath ko nahi chhoda, balki aur kas gaya tha.
Pehla gunda, jo sabse mota aur bhari-bharkam tha, ne apna haath utha kar Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki. Uski baazu hawaa mein ghoomi,
lekin!
Aryan ne tez nazar se uski harkat ko bhamp liya. Usne apna dusra haath, jo khali tha, jhatke se aage badhaya aur uss gunde ke gardan ko pakad kar zor se khincha. Gunda aage ki taraf jhuka, aur Aryan ne uske sirr ko apne ghutne se takraya–
THUD!
Gunde ka naak toot gaya, khoon bahne laga, aur woh zameen par gir pada, haath-paon maarte huye.
"Agghhhh!"
Ghansha, jiski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ke mazboot pakad mein thi, woh cheekh utha: "Ahh! Chhod saale! Teri-"
Lekin Aryan ne uski taraf dekha bhi nahi. Usne Ghansha ki kalaai ko aur zor se twist kiya, jaise koi ragad kar kapda nichod raha ho. Ghansha ka chehra dard se laal ho gaya, uski ungliyaan sunn ho rahi thi.
Doosra gunda, jo lambe baal wala aur patla tha, peeche se Aryan par hamla karne aaya. Usne apni jeb se ek chhuri nikaali aur Aryan ki peeth mein ghusane ki koshish ki. Aryan ne apne kaan se awaaz suni-
hawa ki sarsarahat, aur bina palat kar dekhe, uske sharir ne Apne aap react kya, usne apna pair peeche ki taraf uthaya. Uski laath seedhe gunde ke pet mein lagi, woh dohra ho gaya, saans atak gayi.
"Ugghhh!"
Aryan ne mauka nahi chhoda, usne Ghansha ko apne saath khinch kar ghooma, jaise koi chain se bandha kutta khinch raha ho, aur Ghansha ka badan doosre gunde se takraya.
THUD!
"Huhhhh!"
Dono gir gaye, lekin Aryan ne kalaai nahi chhodi, balki aur kas kar khincha, Ghansha ko zameen se utha kar wapas khada kar diya.
Teesra gunda, jo sabse tez aur chalaak dikhta tha, ne yehi mauka dekha aur Aryan ke pairon par hamla kiya. Usne neeche jhuk kar Aryan ki tang pakadne ki koshish ki, jaise wrestling mein tackle karte hain. Aryan ka balance bigadne wala tha, lekin usne apna dusra haath istemaal kiya-
Usne gunde ke baal pakde aur uske Sirr ko zor se neeche dhakela.
THUD!
Gunda ka chehra zameen se takraya, do bar bounce khate hue uski daant toot gaye. Muh se khoon bahe-
THUD!
"Agghhhhhhhhh!!"
Phir Aryan ne apna pair utha kar uske peeth par maara, woh bilkul chatta ho gaya, hil nahi pa raha tha.
Ab tak teenon gunde zameen par pade the, ek naak se khoon bahata, doosra saans lene ki koshish karta, teesra behosh sa. Yah sab Hua bas 5 minute ke andar.
Ghansha ab bhi Aryan ke pakad mein tha, uski kalaai laal ho chuki thi, Aryan ki pakad Itni majbut thi ki haddi shayad tootne wali thi. Woh cheekh raha tha: "Saale... Chhod! tu mujhe nahi jaanta, Tujhe jaan se-!"
Auto ke andar Naina ka chehra safed pad gaya. Usne haath muh par rakh liye, aankhein badi-badi. "B-bhaiya...!" uski awaaz kamp rahi thi. Woh darr se aur ghabrahat se kaanp rahi thi, lekin uski aankhein Aryan se hat nahi rahi thi. Apne bhiya ka ye Roop usne kabhi nahi dekha tha, na hi usne kabhi sapne mein socha tha.
"Huff!"
Aryan ki saanse tez thi, lekin uska chehra shant nahi tha, gusse se bhara tha. Usne Ghansha ko apne karib khincha, itna karib ki unki naake chhoo rahi thi-
"Tune... Meri behen ko chhune ki himmat ki?"
Aryan ki awaaz gehri aur bhadi thi, jaise koi sher gurra raha ho. Ghansha ne apne dusre haath se Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki, lekin-
Aryan ne uski harkat ko pehle hi bhamp liya. Usne apna khali haath se Ghansha ke gardan ko pakda aur zor se daba diya. Ghansha ki saans atak gayi, aankhein bahar nikal aayi. Aryan ne uski kalaai ko abhi bhi nahi chhoda– usne usi pakad se Ghansha ko utha kar peeche khadi unki hi car se takraya.
THUD!
Ghansha ka sirr car se takraya, khoon bhi bahne laga.
"Aaaaghhhhhhhhhhh!"
Ghansha ab kamzor ho raha tha, usne girne ki koshish ki lekin Aryan ne usko khincha aur apne ghutne se pet mein maara. Ghansha dohra ho gaya,
"Ugghhhh!"
Aryan ne phir se khincha aur chehre par mukka maara –
ek,
"Ahhhh!"
do,
"Agghhhhhh!"
teen,
"Huhhhhhhhggghh!"
Har mukke ke saath Ghansha ka chehra toot raha tha, naak tedha, honth phat gaye. Ant mein, Aryan ne uski kalaai ko aakhri twist diya-
CRACK!
"Aggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!"
Haddi hi toot gayi. Ghansha cheekh kar zameen par gir pada, behosh hone ke kagar pe tha, par Aryan usko besosh nahi hone deta, uski kamiz pakad ke usko wapas se uthaya.
"Nahi! Hufff!! Chhod do... Ab...!"
Aryan : call kar Viraj kapoor ko!
"Huh"
Aryan (yells) : CALL KAR VIRAJ KO!!
Usne chilka kar bola, Ghansha jhapka aur jaldi se Viraj ko call milaya. Udhar jab Viraj call uthata hai-
“Bosssss…” uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi dard se.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha. Kyunki Aryan uski gandarn jozse dabochke rakha tha. Dard bhari awaaz sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya.
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle Aryan ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de, uss taraf se-
Aryan : VIRAJ KAPOORRR!
Viraj : huh!!!?
Hawa ka rukh badla, jo ladka shayad hi kisi se chilla ke, gehri aawaz mein baad karta, wahi ladka ab-
Aryan : avni, unki family phir teri nazar meri family ki orr padhi? Uncle Sanjay ki zamin, aur unki Beti pe teri nazar padhi? Mere bahan pe???? Aakhri... Aakhri moka hai tere pass! PAHLA aur AAKHRi. Iske baad AGAR teri nazar meri bahan pe ya hamari zamin pe padhi...!
Viraj : huh!!?
Aryan : TOH, TU MERA WOH ROOP DEKHEGA, JO MAIN KHUD NAHI JAANTA, aur...! AUR HOGI TREI MOUT-!
Call cut!
viraj kapoor Kuchh bol pata, usse pehlehi Aryan ne call cut Kiya. Ageli hi pal usne ghansa ko chhoda aur uske muh pe hi phone fhenk mara.
THUD!
Ghansha zamin pe gir gaya, Kyra socha rakha tha usne? Ye koi ladka hoga asani se usko dhakka dega? Par huya kya, na sirf woh balki uski teen pantaro ko bhi Aryan buri tarah se peet dala. Akele!
Sayad Aryan ko abhi bhi realise nahi huya, ki usne kya Kara hai. Abhi bhi woh gusse mein hai. uski abhi bhi saanse tez, huffte huye Usne auto ki taraf dekha, jaha Naina baithi thi-
darr se kamp rahi thi bechari, lekin uski aankhon mein chamak thi, uska bhaiya, uska rakshak. Charon taraf ab shanti thi, sirf gundon ki karahne ki awaazein. Aryan ne apne haathon ko jhada, phir auto ki taraf badha.
Naina bhi auto se utarti hai, ek pal bhi nahi rukti, aur seedha daud lagati hai Aryan ki taraf. Jaise hi woh uske paas pahunchti hai, woh bina kuchh soche-samjhe uske gale se lag jaati hai, poori taqat se.
“Huh-!?”
Naina (crying) : Bhaiyaaaa…! *sniff* Aap... *sniff* aap theek ho na?????
Usne apni aankhon se dekha tha, kaise Aryan ne unn sabhi gundo ko ek-ek karke gira diya tha, phir bhi uska dil darr se bhara hua tha.
Apni behen ka aansuon se bhara chehra dekhkar, Aryan ke chehre ka gussa dheere-dheere pighalne lagta hai. Uske hothon par ek naram si muskaan aa jaati hai.
Aryan (Smiles) : Meri gudiya… tum theek ho na?
Naina (sob) : *hic* Mujhe laga tha… woh gunde m-mujhe-! *sniff* Aap nahi aate toh shayad ye gunde mujhe *sniff*
Aryan turant hi use aur zor se apni baahon mein bhar leta hai.
Aryan : ssssshh!! Naina... aur mat rona. Main hoon na? Bas… bas ab kuchh nahi hoga.
Woh usse shant karne ke liye, use apne seene se laga ke rakhta hai. Aryan ko mehsoos hota hai ki Naina kitni zyada darr gayi thi, uska sharir abhi bhi halki-halki kampan se kaanp raha tha.
Apna sirr Aryan ke seene se laga kar, Naina kaafi der tak waise hi khadi rehti hai. Aur dheere-dheere, uske andar ek ehsaas bharne lagta hai- Suraksha ka. Jo sirf Aryan hi use de sakta tha.
Kuchh der baad, Aryan thoda sa peeche hota hai. Apni dono badi-badi hatheliyon mein Naina ke naram gaalon ko sambhal kar thamta hai. aur apni ungliyon se uske aansu pooch deta hai. Naina abhi bhi sibakti hui, seedha Aryan ki aankhon mein dekhti hai.
Uske seene ke andar kuchh tha jo bohot zor se dhadak raha tha, lekin woh use chehre par bayaan nahi hone deti. Bas… chupchaap Aryan ki aankhon ko dekhti rehti hai.
Aryan : Jab tak main hoon, na... koi majal hai kisi ki jo meri behen ko takleef pahunchaye Hmmm? *smiles softly*
Naina (halke se, aankhon mein nami ke saath) : mmm~
Aryan : Good. Ab bilkul nahi rona.
Main hoon na? Chalo… ab ghar chalte hain.Theek hai?
Naina : umm~
Phir achanak usse kuchh yaad aata hai.
Naina : Ohh! Bhaiya!!! Woh auto wale uncle ji... Inn logon ne unhe dikki mein band karke rakha hai!
Aryan ka chehra turant sakht ho jaata hai. Woh bina waqt gawaaye dikki kholta hai. Andar se auto wala umar-daraz aadmi bahar nikalta hai, bechaara poori tarah paseene se bheega hua, saans phooli hui. Usne kaanpte hue haathon se
Aryan ko shukriya ada kiya. Uske baad, Aryan aur Naina auto mein baithte hain.
Auto dheere-dheere unhe ghar tak chhod deta hai.
Aur peeche…!
Ghansha aur uske aadmi wahi zameen par pade reh jaate hain, haar aur dard ke saath.
Lekin-
Koi thi… jo chupke se inn sab par nazar jamaye hue thi. Andhere ke beech ek sthir chhaya. Wahi thi jo Aryan ka peecha kar rahi thi, ek nirdosh si lagne wali, par andar se kisi gehre rahasya se bhari hui upasthiti.
Usne ek gehre crimson-red rang ke lambe aur bahut hi shandaar chadar hooded cloak pehne hue thi, jo uske sirr par chhaya hua hai. Hood ka aage ka hissa itna gehra hai ki uska chehra aadha chhupa hua lagta hai, sirf honth aur thodi si naak hi saaf dikhti hai. Kapdon ki banawat aisi jaise abhi abhi koi battlefield Se Aayi Ho.
Hawa mein nami thi, aur khamoshi itni gahri, Tab uski awaz goonji.
"Oye moy moy! Smotri-smotri, ya nakonets-to tebya pojmala!"
Uski dhimi hansi khali sadak par fail gayi, aur hawa mein ek ajeeb si kampan paida ho gayi.
Woh apni jeebh ko bahar nikalti hai, Dheere se apne lambe, safed aur chamakte nakhunon uspar pherte hue-
"You naughty... Mm~"
Jaise hi uske shabd khatam hue, uski jeebh aur bhi lambi hoti chali gayi. Aakar badalta gaya, laal, geeli aur asamanya roop se lachakdaar.
Bilkul uss nagin ki tarah jo apni shikaar ko door se mehsoos kar leti hai. Uski aankhon mein chamak ubhar aayi- bhookh nahi, balki lakshya ki.
Uski nigahen dur ja rahe uss auto par tik gayi, jaha Aryan maujood tha bekhabar, apni hi duniya mein. Jaise hi uski nazar uss par jami, ladki ke nakhun dheere dheere lambe hone lage.
Aur phir…
kuchh aisa hua jo prakriti ke niyamon ko chunauti deta tha.
Usne apna haath upar uthaya. Ungliyon ke beech hawa ka ghanatva badalne laga, jaise empty space apne astitva par sawal utha rahi ho. Usne apne lambi nakhun ko hawa mein lehraya, ek hi gati mein, bilkul sahi kon par, jaise kisi surgeon ka antim incision karti hai.
Aur agle hi pal… Khali jagah par ek daraar ubhar aayi.
Na zameen phati, na hawa tooti, par phir bhi iss reality ke taane-baane mein jaise ek spasht katav aa gaya. Jaise iss brahmand ke fibres ko zabardasti cheera gaya ho.
Uss darar se kaali roshni nikalne lagi, na poori roshni, na poora andhera, balki kuchh aisa jo physics ke kisi bhi spectrum mein fit nahi baithta tha.
Hawa ka tapman achanak gir gaya. Samay jaise ek pal ke liye ladkhada gaya. Aur bina kisi hichkichahat ke, woh ladki uss shunya sthan mein kadam rakh deti hai.
Palak jhapakte hi uska sharir uss darar ke andar sama gaya. Aur usi kshan, jaise hi woh uske paar pahunchi, daraar band ho gayi. Jaise Reality fabric khud ko phir se silne lagi, jaise kuchh hua hi na ho.
Sadak phir se khali thi. Khamosh.
Par ab… Aryan! Jo inn sab se anjaan tha.
Kahi na kahi, kisi aur layer of existence se, koi uski har chal par nazar rakhe hue thi. Aur shayad- yeh shuruat thi.
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Ghadi ki sui seedhi raat ke 12 par tiki hui thi. Kamre mein andhera tha, lekin Aryan ki aankhon se neend koson door thi. Woh ghar aa chuka tha. Naina ko bhi samjha diya tha, ki aaj jo kuchh bhi hua, uss baare mein Sanjay ji ko kuchh na bataye. Woh waise hi pichhle ek mahine se pareshaan chal rahe the. Aryan nahi chahta tha ki uski wajah se unki tension aur badhe.
“Fucckk!”
Bed par karvat badalte hi uski peeth mein ek tez sa dard uth gaya. Shayad shaam wali fight ke dauraan koi ghunsa ya laat lag gayi thi, uss waqt adrenaline Rush mein mehsoos nahi hua, par ab jab sharir shaant tha, dard apni maujoodgi jata raha tha. Lekin jo baat usse khaaye ja rahi thi… woh yeh dard nahi tha.
Ab jab dimag thoda shaant tha, Aryan soch pa raha tha. Aur wahi sabse khatarnak cheez thi. Pichhle kuchh dinon mein jo-jo hua tha… woh sab uske dimag ke saamne film ki tarah chal raha tha.
“So, I’m sure… mujhe kuchh ho gaya hai.”
“Hmmm…”
“Uss din ke baad se… mujhmein kaafi badlaav aaye hain. Ghaav bhar jaana, sharir par nishaan tak na rehna. Mussels ka aise badhna jaise kisi ne andar se phula diye ho. Aur ye… ye ajeeb si garmi, jo kabhi-kabhi poore jism mein daud jaati hai.”
Insaan apne baare mein sabse zyada jaanta hai. Aur Aryan ko poori tarah ehsaas tha ki woh pehle jaisa nahi raha. Par kaise? Kyun? Iska jawab uske paas nahi tha. Aur yehi baat usse dheere-dheere khaaye ja rahi thi.
“Pehle Rohan aur uske doston se fight… phir Lokesh aur Rajan… aur aaj ki fight?” Uski aankhen chhat ko ghoorti rahi.
“Mujhmein itni takat thi???”
Yeh tha self-doubt. Jab zindagi mein achanak aisi cheezein hone lagti hain jo tark ko hi tod kar rakh dein, toh self-doubt aana bilkul normal hota hai. Aryan bhi uss se alag nahi tha. Woh apni hi wajood par sawal utha raha tha.
“Ohhh! Fuckkkk!” Usne dono haathon se apna sar pakad liya. “Sarr phata ja raha hai!"
Aur phir… uske dimaag ke kone se ek aur chehra ubhar aaya.
Sanya.
“Aur woh… Sanya!” Uske honthon se ek thandi saans nikal gayi. “Bapre… iss ladki se toh bachke rehna padega. Pata nahi kya kar de.”
Uske saamne woh drishya bilkul saaf ho gaya, jab Sanya uske saamne baithe thi, apne nange badan ko chaddar se dhakne ki anupayogi koshish karti hui.
Sochne ki koshish na karte hue bhi, Aryan ka sharir react kar gaya. Uska lund ek pal ke liye jhatka maar kar sakht ho gaya.
“Damn… the hell!” Usne jhatke se karvat badli. “Mujhe sach mein neend chahiye. Abhi ke abhi.”
Kamra phir se shaant ho gaya. Sirf ghadi ki halki tik-tik.
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Lekin, Ghar ke dusare kamre Mein, vatavaran bilkul Alag tha. koi thi, jiski dhadkan badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Aaj usse nind nahi aayegi~
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That's it for today, guys. Like thok ke jaana aur review bhi. Also, you can see that I've changed the model for Naina's character. This is the model I created, how's she? And not just that every image you're seeing in this update, I made them all myself, for better experience. Enjoy.
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Accha to ab Aryan ke asli pita bhi Viraj Kapoor ke chakkar me phasne jaa rahey hai shayad usne bhi unki beti ki demand rakhi hogi. Lekin aaj kapoor ne maut ki ek ahat sunnto li hai magar isko abhi yaqeen nahi hoga jab tak woh ek do baar aur bhid na jaye Aryan se.Update 14 - Eyes from the Rift
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Purnima : P-Pankaj tum! Tumne mujhpe haath uthaya??
Pankaj kuchh nahi bola bas Purnima ko ghoorta raha. Apni maa ko apne papa ke haathon thappad khate dekh Bhavya daudti hui aayi Purnima ke paas.
Bhavya : M-Mumma!! D-Dad? You... you just slapped Mom?!
Pankaj : Bhavya! apni mom ko andar le jao. ABHI!
Phir aur hona kya tha? Bhavya ne apni maa ke kandhe pakde. Purnima abhi bhi gaal ko haath se daba rahi thi, aansu ruk nahi rahe the. Dono dheere-dheere andar chali gayi.
Yehi waja thi, ki kyun purnima aur Bhavya abhi dinner pe sabhi ke saath upsthit nahi the?
Dining table par sannata aur gehra ho gaya. Kisi ne kuchh nahi kaha, kuchh nahi khaya. Sirf khane ki thandi hoti khushboo aur chandelier ki halki si jhankar bachi rahi. Aur iss raat, Aryan ka raaz..! ek aur baar ghar ke andhere kamron mein chhup gaya.
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Mumbai – 6:17 PM
Viraj Kapoor apne cabin mein baitha tha. Saamne sheeshe ki deewar ke paar Mumbai ki shaam dheere-dheere andhere mein ghul rahi thi, par Viraj ki nazar sheher par nahi thi woh intezar kar raha tha. Kisi khaas ka,
Clicck-!!
Cabin ka darwaaza khula. Andar dakhil hua ek lamba-chauda aadmi. Umr lagbhag pachaas–ikavan ke aas paas, par chehre par abhi bhi wahi chamak, wahi teekhi pakad. Peeth bilkul seedhi, jaise saalon ka tajurba use jhukne hi na deta ho. Poora suited-booted, polished shoes, aur aankhon mein woh self-confidence jo sirf purane, manjhe hue businessmen ke paas hota hai.
Prakash!
Wahi aadmi jiska intezar Viraj Kapoor kar raha tha. Prakash ke cabin mein aate hi Viraj apni chair chhod kar khada ho gaya. Chehre par ek professional muskaan, haath aage badhate hue-
Viraj (Smiles) : Well! Well! Well! Mr. Prakash, welcome to Treasure. Haha! Nice to see you. Please… have a seat.
Prakash ne bhi haath milaya. Pakad mazboot thi na zyada garm, na zyada thandi. Phir woh aaram se chair khisak kar baith gaya. Bilkul waise jaise koi pakka businessman baithta hai. Na jaldbaazi, na hichkichahat. Uske chehre par shantima thi, par uss shanti ke neeche ek halki si bechaini saaf jhalak rahi thi.
Viraj : Toh, Mr. Prakash… kaise aana hua?
Prakash ne time waste nahi kiya.
Prakash : Seedhi baat par aata hoon, Mr. Kapoor. You know… why I’m here.
Ek pal ke liye Viraj bhi soch mein pad gaya. Aakhir Prakash koi aam aadmi nahi tha. Sheher ke top-das ameer khandanon mein se ek, prakash ka sarparast. Uska aisa rawaiys laazmi tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Well… I know. Par main aapki zubaan se sunna chahta hoon.
Prakash ki nazar seedhi Viraj par tik gayi. Uski awaaz mein na bheekh thi, aur na hi vinamrata-
Prakash : Loan. Loan chahiye mujhe.
Aur iss baar Viraj ke chehre par ek shaitaani muskaan ubhar aayi. Woh apni chair par aur seedha ho kar baith gaya, ungliyon ko aapas mein fansa kar aage jhukte hue-
Viraj : Heh… haha! Really, Mr. Prakash? *smiles* Kuchh din pehle hi toh aapki haweli mein mehmaan the hum. Waha ka aayojan dekh kar toh aisa bilkul nahi laga ki aapko loan ki zarurat hai.
Haan, viraj Kapoor bhi uss haweli mein maujood tha, sirf wahi nahi uske sath Aur bhi businessman, udyogpatiyan waha maujud the, Ria ke birthday ke din. Par woh party sirf birthday ke liye nahi thi. Woh ek business showcase thi. Chamakti roshniyaan, mehngi wine, muskurate chehre… sab kuchh ek dikhawa. Andar se? Sab kuchh khokla.
Sheher ke 10 ameeron mein shumar hone ke bawajood, saalon ki aiyashi aur raeesi aur dikhawe ke bojh ne Prakash ko bankrupt hone ke kagaar par laa khada kiya tha. Usi shaam, Ria ke birthday ke beech, Viraj aur Prakash ke beech baat ho chuki thi. Aaj… bas final meeting thi.
Prakash (tez swar mein) : Baatein mat badhaiye, Mr. Kapoor! Sab kuchh pehle hi tay ho chuka hai. Aap mujhe loan sanction karoge. Aur isse fayda aapka hi hai..
Viraj : Hmm? Woh kaise?
Prakash bhi taiyaar tha. Usne teer wahi jagah chhodi jahan chot sabse gehri lagti hai.
Prakash : Mere jaisa naam agar tumse loan leta hai, toh log notice karte hain. Dusre businessmen bhi aayenge. Abhi main iss deal ko publicly disclose nahi karunga… par future mein?...
Obviously! *smiles*
Strong trust build hoga tumhare brand ke liye. Aur mujhe yeh batane ki zarurat nahi ki tum iss business mein abhi naye ho.
“Tch..!"
Bankrupt hone ke bawajood, uski boli mein kamzori ka ek katra bhi nahi tha. Ye dekh Viraj ne daant kas liye, par Viraj bhi koi kam shikari nahi tha. Bhediya tha, jo bakri ka bhesh pehne baitha ho.
Viraj (shaant muskaan ke saath) : Yes… yeh toh hai. Par main hi kyun, Mr. Prakash? Aap jaise logon ke liye iss sheher mein hazaaron companies hain. Phir mujhse hi loan kyun?
Prakash koi bachcha nahi tha. Usse pata tha Viraj kya sunna chahta hai. Woh aur seedha ho kar baitha, gala saaf kiya aur dheemi, tol-maap kar boli hui awaaz mein-
Prakash (calm & measured) : Mr. Kapoor…! reputation sabse badi cheez hoti hai hamare business mein. Agar main kisi bade known bank ya public institution se loan maangne jaata hoon abhi, toh log sochne lagenge 'Arre, Vardhani group koi problem mein hai kya?' Eyes raise ho jaayenge, whispers shuru ho jaayenge… aur fayde ki jagah sirf nuksan hi hoga mera. Reputation kharab hone se zyada bada loss kuch nahi hota. That’s exactly why I’ve come to you instead. My name and 'Vardhani Apex & Daughters' cement, metals, telecom, fashion in sab high-profile sectors mein acchi khasi operate karti hai. We’re not small players, we drive scale and innovation across these sectors. Ab agar yeh news leak ho gayi ki 'V-Apex' bankrupt hone ke kagaar pe hai… toh market mein panic mach jaayega. Shareholders nervous ho jaayenge, partners hesitate karenge, unnecessary turbulence aa jaayegi. Aisa noise hum afford nahi kar sakte. Isliye main aapse hi loan lena chahta hoon… aur yaad ki jiye, aapne khud haan bola tha.
Viraj (smiles) : Yeh toh mera kush naseeb hai, Mr. Prakash! Meri haan hai. But… *pause*
Prakash : but??
Viraj : ek hi shart pe! Kya app usmein razzi hai?
Prakash : S-shart!?
Viraj (Smiles) : yes! Wahi, jispe ham pahle bhi baat kar chuke hain!!
Prakesh (hesitates) : I-
Viraj : Sochiye. Dhyaan se sochiye. Haha!!
Ab jakar Prakash ke maathe par pasina chamak utha. "Kya... Kya shart pe haan bolu? Par...!?" Woh soch mein padh gaya. Use pata tha Viraj kis shart ki baat kar raha hai. Viraj ki nazar uss par jammi hui thi, jaise use pehle se hi yakeen ho Prakash maan jaayega,
Tabhi-
RING! RING! RING!
“Huh! Ghansha!! Yeh kyun call kar raha abhi?”
Viraj ke phone pe kisi ka call aaya tha, Dekha 'ghansha' naam ka koi call kar raha tha, aur agle hi pal uske chehre pe ek muskurahat chha gayi. Usne apne soft armrest se uthte hue Prakash se bola-
Viraj : aap… aap sochiye, Mr. Prakash! Mujhe ek important call aaya hai, attend karna hoga.
Prakash : hmm!?
Aur kehte hue Viraj apne cabin se bahar aate hi call pick up kiya- "Toh, ho gaya kaam?"
“Bosssss…” ghansha phone ke uss taraf se bola, uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha.
Jisse sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya. Aakhir udhar ho kya raha hai?
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle kisi ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de. uss taraf se-
“VIRAJ KAPOORRR!”
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Udhar, doosri taraf… kuchh der pehle-
Jaise hi Aryan auto ke paas pahunchta hai, uski aankhon ke saamne jo drishya aata hai, uska khoon jam jaata hai. Auto ke andar…Naina thi. Aur uske bilkul saamne ek anjaan aadmi, jiska haath dheere-dheere uski taraf badh raha tha. Haath… bilkul Naina ke kandhe ke paas pahunch chuka tha.
Bas ek pal. Sirf ek second. Aur usi ek second mein Aryan ki aankhein gusse se phat jaati hain.
THUD!!
Aadmi Naina ko chhoo paata, usse pehle hi Aryan bijli ki tarah lapakta hai aur beech mein hi uss haath ko pakad leta hai.
Uski ungliyaan seedha aadmi ki kalaai par jakad jaati hain itni zor se, ki aadmi ke chehre par turant dard ki lakeer kheench jaati hai.
Aadmi (hairaan) : Huh??
Naina (crying) : BHAIYAAAA!! *sniff*
Auto ke chaaron taraf khade uss aadmi ke teen gunde ek dum se ghabra jaate hain.
Unhe kuchh samajh hi nahi aata. bas itna dikhai deta hai ki ek ladka tezi se bhagta hua aaya aur pal bhar mein auto ke saamne khada ho gaya. Woh teeno hakke-bakke reh jaate hain.
Apne bhaiya ko saamne dekhte hi Naina ke dil mein jaise achanak se umeed ki roshni jal uthti hai. Woh kudke auto se utarti hai aur Aryan se iss tarah chipak jaati hai, jaise agar usne use chhod diya toh uske saath kuchh bahut bura ho jaayega.
Aryan ka ek haath abhi bhi aadmi ki kalaai ko sakht grip mein pakde hue tha, aur doosra haath usne Naina ke kandhe par rakhkar use apne aur kareeb kheench liya. Naina ki hichkiyaan aur tez ho jaati hain-
Naina : Ye… ye aadmi bol raha tha ki zameen Viraj Kapoor ke naam likh de hum, nahi toh ye… ye… *sniff* bhiyaa *hic*
Uski baat poori bhi nahi ho paati. Aryan ki ungliyaan aadmi ki kalaai par aur kas jaati hain.
Naina (rote hue) : B-bhaiya… ye… ye ganda aadmi m-mujhe chhoone ki koshish kar raha tha… *sniff* m-main darr gayi thi bhaiya *hic*
Bas!
Itna sunte hi Aryan ki aankhein gussa se aur zyada laal ho jaati hain. Uski nazar bilkul seedhi, uss aadmi par jam jaati hai. yeh aadmi uski behen ko chhoone ki himmat kar raha tha?
“GRRR!!”
Ek dhimi, lekin gehri awaaz Aryan ke muh se nikalti hai. Naina jab apni bheegi hui aankhon se upar dekhti hai, toh jo woh dekhti hai, uska dil aur tez dhadakne lagta hai. Woh dekhti hai-
Aryan ke hothon ki lakeer upar ki taraf uthi hui thi, uske safed daant bahar dikh rahe the, maathe par ek lambi nas phool kar ubhar aayi thi. aur… aur uske gale se ek halki si guhaar nikal rahi thi.
“GRRRR!!”
Naina ka sharir ek jhatke ke saath kaanp uthta hai. Uske dil ki dhadkane jaise seene ko tod kar bahar aana chahti ho. "Kya… kya bhaiya gusse mein hain? Kya bhaiya mujhe bachane ke liye in gande gundo se ladenge? Kya bhaiya mera dhal banenge?" Uski aankhein bilkul Aryan ke chehre par tiki hui thi. Use mehsoos hota hai ki jo haath uske kandhe par tha, aur bhi zor se kas gaya hai. Woh ek baar Aryan ke uss haath ko dekhti hai, phir uske chehre ko.
“B-bhaiya?” usne dheere se pukara. Aur tabhi-
Aryan uss aadmi ki kalaai ko zor se jhatakta hai aur poori taqat se kheenchta hai. Woh aadmi auto se aise bahar aata hai jaise hawa mein uchhal gaya ho, lekin uski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ki ungliyon mein bandhi hui thi. Auto do kadam peeche khisak jaata hai.
Aadmi : Aahh! B-bsdk… teri toh!??
Aryan : Naina! Auto mein baith!
Naina : B-b-
Aryan (aur zor se) : NAINA! AUTO MEIN BAITH!!!
Uski awaaz sunte hi Naina kaamp jaati hai.
Woh aage kuchh bol hi nahi paati. Turant palat kar auto mein jaakar baith jaati hai.
Ab bahar sirf woh aadmi, uske teen gunde jo chaaron taraf ghere hue the, aur beech mein akela Aryan khada tha.
Aadmi (gusse se) : Teri itni himmat tu… mujhe? Ghansha Bhai se ladne ka soch raha hai?? Abee! Dekh kya raha hai-! maar isse!
Aur hawa mein jaise toofan jamne laga…!
Order paate hi ghansha ki teen addmi ek saath Aryan ki aur badh jata hai, par Aryan abhi tak ghansha ki hath ko nahi chhoda, balki aur kas gaya tha.
Pehla gunda, jo sabse mota aur bhari-bharkam tha, ne apna haath utha kar Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki. Uski baazu hawaa mein ghoomi,
lekin!
Aryan ne tez nazar se uski harkat ko bhamp liya. Usne apna dusra haath, jo khali tha, jhatke se aage badhaya aur uss gunde ke gardan ko pakad kar zor se khincha. Gunda aage ki taraf jhuka, aur Aryan ne uske sirr ko apne ghutne se takraya–
THUD!
Gunde ka naak toot gaya, khoon bahne laga, aur woh zameen par gir pada, haath-paon maarte huye.
"Agghhhh!"
Ghansha, jiski kalaai abhi bhi Aryan ke mazboot pakad mein thi, woh cheekh utha: "Ahh! Chhod saale! Teri-"
Lekin Aryan ne uski taraf dekha bhi nahi. Usne Ghansha ki kalaai ko aur zor se twist kiya, jaise koi ragad kar kapda nichod raha ho. Ghansha ka chehra dard se laal ho gaya, uski ungliyaan sunn ho rahi thi.
Doosra gunda, jo lambe baal wala aur patla tha, peeche se Aryan par hamla karne aaya. Usne apni jeb se ek chhuri nikaali aur Aryan ki peeth mein ghusane ki koshish ki. Aryan ne apne kaan se awaaz suni-
hawa ki sarsarahat, aur bina palat kar dekhe, uske sharir ne Apne aap react kya, usne apna pair peeche ki taraf uthaya. Uski laath seedhe gunde ke pet mein lagi, woh dohra ho gaya, saans atak gayi.
"Ugghhh!"
Aryan ne mauka nahi chhoda, usne Ghansha ko apne saath khinch kar ghooma, jaise koi chain se bandha kutta khinch raha ho, aur Ghansha ka badan doosre gunde se takraya.
THUD!
"Huhhhh!"
Dono gir gaye, lekin Aryan ne kalaai nahi chhodi, balki aur kas kar khincha, Ghansha ko zameen se utha kar wapas khada kar diya.
Teesra gunda, jo sabse tez aur chalaak dikhta tha, ne yehi mauka dekha aur Aryan ke pairon par hamla kiya. Usne neeche jhuk kar Aryan ki tang pakadne ki koshish ki, jaise wrestling mein tackle karte hain. Aryan ka balance bigadne wala tha, lekin usne apna dusra haath istemaal kiya-
Usne gunde ke baal pakde aur uske Sirr ko zor se neeche dhakela.
THUD!
Gunda ka chehra zameen se takraya, do bar bounce khate hue uski daant toot gaye. Muh se khoon bahe-
THUD!
"Agghhhhhhhhh!!"
Phir Aryan ne apna pair utha kar uske peeth par maara, woh bilkul chatta ho gaya, hil nahi pa raha tha.
Ab tak teenon gunde zameen par pade the, ek naak se khoon bahata, doosra saans lene ki koshish karta, teesra behosh sa. Yah sab Hua bas 5 minute ke andar.
Ghansha ab bhi Aryan ke pakad mein tha, uski kalaai laal ho chuki thi, Aryan ki pakad Itni majbut thi ki haddi shayad tootne wali thi. Woh cheekh raha tha: "Saale... Chhod! tu mujhe nahi jaanta, Tujhe jaan se-!"
Auto ke andar Naina ka chehra safed pad gaya. Usne haath muh par rakh liye, aankhein badi-badi. "B-bhaiya...!" uski awaaz kamp rahi thi. Woh darr se aur ghabrahat se kaanp rahi thi, lekin uski aankhein Aryan se hat nahi rahi thi. Apne bhiya ka ye Roop usne kabhi nahi dekha tha, na hi usne kabhi sapne mein socha tha.
"Huff!"
Aryan ki saanse tez thi, lekin uska chehra shant nahi tha, gusse se bhara tha. Usne Ghansha ko apne karib khincha, itna karib ki unki naake chhoo rahi thi-
"Tune... Meri behen ko chhune ki himmat ki?"
Aryan ki awaaz gehri aur bhadi thi, jaise koi sher gurra raha ho. Ghansha ne apne dusre haath se Aryan ke chehre par mukka maarne ki koshish ki, lekin-
Aryan ne uski harkat ko pehle hi bhamp liya. Usne apna khali haath se Ghansha ke gardan ko pakda aur zor se daba diya. Ghansha ki saans atak gayi, aankhein bahar nikal aayi. Aryan ne uski kalaai ko abhi bhi nahi chhoda– usne usi pakad se Ghansha ko utha kar peeche khadi unki hi car se takraya.
THUD!
Ghansha ka sirr car se takraya, khoon bhi bahne laga.
"Aaaaghhhhhhhhhhh!"
Ghansha ab kamzor ho raha tha, usne girne ki koshish ki lekin Aryan ne usko khincha aur apne ghutne se pet mein maara. Ghansha dohra ho gaya,
"Ugghhhh!"
Aryan ne phir se khincha aur chehre par mukka maara –
ek,
"Ahhhh!"
do,
"Agghhhhhh!"
teen,
"Huhhhhhhhggghh!"
Har mukke ke saath Ghansha ka chehra toot raha tha, naak tedha, honth phat gaye. Ant mein, Aryan ne uski kalaai ko aakhri twist diya-
CRACK!
"Aggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!"
Haddi hi toot gayi. Ghansha cheekh kar zameen par gir pada, behosh hone ke kagar pe tha, par Aryan usko besosh nahi hone deta, uski kamiz pakad ke usko wapas se uthaya.
"Nahi! Hufff!! Chhod do... Ab...!"
Aryan : call kar Viraj kapoor ko!
"Huh"
Aryan (yells) : CALL KAR VIRAJ KO!!
Usne chilka kar bola, Ghansha jhapka aur jaldi se Viraj ko call milaya. Udhar jab Viraj call uthata hai-
“Bosssss…” uski aawaz karkhar rahi thi dard se.
Viraj : Kya! Kya hua…???
“B-bosss!! Woh… Woh… Aghhhhhhhhh!!!”
Kehte hue beech mein hi woh chilla utha. Kyunki Aryan uski gandarn jozse dabochke rakha tha. Dard bhari awaaz sunn ek baar ke liye Viraj bhi saham ke reh gaya.
Viraj : W-what… What happened? Kya ho raha hai udhar?
“Huuuuu! B-bosss… Yeh… Yeh!” Par isse pehle ki woh kuchh keh pata, usse pehle Aryan ne uske haath se phone chheen liya. Aur phir ek tez aur gehri aawaz Viraj ko apne kaano pe sunai de, uss taraf se-
Aryan : VIRAJ KAPOORRR!
Viraj : huh!!!?
Hawa ka rukh badla, jo ladka shayad hi kisi se chilla ke, gehri aawaz mein baad karta, wahi ladka ab-
Aryan : avni, unki family phir teri nazar meri family ki orr padhi? Uncle Sanjay ki zamin, aur unki Beti pe teri nazar padhi? Mere bahan pe???? Aakhri... Aakhri moka hai tere pass! PAHLA aur AAKHRi. Iske baad AGAR teri nazar meri bahan pe ya hamari zamin pe padhi...!
Viraj : huh!!?
Aryan : TOH, TU MERA WOH ROOP DEKHEGA, JO MAIN KHUD NAHI JAANTA, aur...! AUR HOGI TREI MOUT-!
Call cut!
viraj kapoor Kuchh bol pata, usse pehlehi Aryan ne call cut Kiya. Ageli hi pal usne ghansa ko chhoda aur uske muh pe hi phone fhenk mara.
THUD!
Ghansha zamin pe gir gaya, Kyra socha rakha tha usne? Ye koi ladka hoga asani se usko dhakka dega? Par huya kya, na sirf woh balki uski teen pantaro ko bhi Aryan buri tarah se peet dala. Akele!
Sayad Aryan ko abhi bhi realise nahi huya, ki usne kya Kara hai. Abhi bhi woh gusse mein hai. uski abhi bhi saanse tez, huffte huye Usne auto ki taraf dekha, jaha Naina baithi thi-
darr se kamp rahi thi bechari, lekin uski aankhon mein chamak thi, uska bhaiya, uska rakshak. Charon taraf ab shanti thi, sirf gundon ki karahne ki awaazein. Aryan ne apne haathon ko jhada, phir auto ki taraf badha.
Naina bhi auto se utarti hai, ek pal bhi nahi rukti, aur seedha daud lagati hai Aryan ki taraf. Jaise hi woh uske paas pahunchti hai, woh bina kuchh soche-samjhe uske gale se lag jaati hai, poori taqat se.
“Huh-!?”
Naina (crying) : Bhaiyaaaa…! *sniff* Aap... *sniff* aap theek ho na?????
Usne apni aankhon se dekha tha, kaise Aryan ne unn sabhi gundo ko ek-ek karke gira diya tha, phir bhi uska dil darr se bhara hua tha.
Apni behen ka aansuon se bhara chehra dekhkar, Aryan ke chehre ka gussa dheere-dheere pighalne lagta hai. Uske hothon par ek naram si muskaan aa jaati hai.
Aryan (Smiles) : Meri gudiya… tum theek ho na?
Naina (sob) : *hic* Mujhe laga tha… woh gunde m-mujhe-! *sniff* Aap nahi aate toh shayad ye gunde mujhe *sniff*
Aryan turant hi use aur zor se apni baahon mein bhar leta hai.
Aryan : ssssshh!! Naina... aur mat rona. Main hoon na? Bas… bas ab kuchh nahi hoga.
Woh usse shant karne ke liye, use apne seene se laga ke rakhta hai. Aryan ko mehsoos hota hai ki Naina kitni zyada darr gayi thi, uska sharir abhi bhi halki-halki kampan se kaanp raha tha.
Apna sirr Aryan ke seene se laga kar, Naina kaafi der tak waise hi khadi rehti hai. Aur dheere-dheere, uske andar ek ehsaas bharne lagta hai- Suraksha ka. Jo sirf Aryan hi use de sakta tha.
Kuchh der baad, Aryan thoda sa peeche hota hai. Apni dono badi-badi hatheliyon mein Naina ke naram gaalon ko sambhal kar thamta hai. aur apni ungliyon se uske aansu pooch deta hai. Naina abhi bhi sibakti hui, seedha Aryan ki aankhon mein dekhti hai.
Uske seene ke andar kuchh tha jo bohot zor se dhadak raha tha, lekin woh use chehre par bayaan nahi hone deti. Bas… chupchaap Aryan ki aankhon ko dekhti rehti hai.
Aryan : Jab tak main hoon, na... koi majal hai kisi ki jo meri behen ko takleef pahunchaye Hmmm? *smiles softly*
Naina (halke se, aankhon mein nami ke saath) : mmm~
Aryan : Good. Ab bilkul nahi rona.
Main hoon na? Chalo… ab ghar chalte hain.Theek hai?
Naina : umm~
Phir achanak usse kuchh yaad aata hai.
Naina : Ohh! Bhaiya!!! Woh auto wale uncle ji... Inn logon ne unhe dikki mein band karke rakha hai!
Aryan ka chehra turant sakht ho jaata hai. Woh bina waqt gawaaye dikki kholta hai. Andar se auto wala umar-daraz aadmi bahar nikalta hai, bechaara poori tarah paseene se bheega hua, saans phooli hui. Usne kaanpte hue haathon se
Aryan ko shukriya ada kiya. Uske baad, Aryan aur Naina auto mein baithte hain.
Auto dheere-dheere unhe ghar tak chhod deta hai.
Aur peeche…!
Ghansha aur uske aadmi wahi zameen par pade reh jaate hain, haar aur dard ke saath.
Lekin-
Koi thi… jo chupke se inn sab par nazar jamaye hue thi. Andhere ke beech ek sthir chhaya. Wahi thi jo Aryan ka peecha kar rahi thi, ek nirdosh si lagne wali, par andar se kisi gehre rahasya se bhari hui upasthiti.
Usne ek gehre crimson-red rang ke lambe aur bahut hi shandaar chadar hooded cloak pehne hue thi, jo uske sirr par chhaya hua hai. Hood ka aage ka hissa itna gehra hai ki uska chehra aadha chhupa hua lagta hai, sirf honth aur thodi si naak hi saaf dikhti hai. Kapdon ki banawat aisi jaise abhi abhi koi battlefield Se Aayi Ho.
Hawa mein nami thi, aur khamoshi itni gahri, Tab uski awaz goonji.
"Oye moy moy! Smotri-smotri, ya nakonets-to tebya pojmala!"
Uski dhimi hansi khali sadak par fail gayi, aur hawa mein ek ajeeb si kampan paida ho gayi.
Woh apni jeebh ko bahar nikalti hai, Dheere se apne lambe, safed aur chamakte nakhunon uspar pherte hue-
"You naughty... Mm~"
Jaise hi uske shabd khatam hue, uski jeebh aur bhi lambi hoti chali gayi. Aakar badalta gaya, laal, geeli aur asamanya roop se lachakdaar.
Bilkul uss nagin ki tarah jo apni shikaar ko door se mehsoos kar leti hai. Uski aankhon mein chamak ubhar aayi- bhookh nahi, balki lakshya ki.
Uski nigahen dur ja rahe uss auto par tik gayi, jaha Aryan maujood tha bekhabar, apni hi duniya mein. Jaise hi uski nazar uss par jami, ladki ke nakhun dheere dheere lambe hone lage.
Aur phir…
kuchh aisa hua jo prakriti ke niyamon ko chunauti deta tha.
Usne apna haath upar uthaya. Ungliyon ke beech hawa ka ghanatva badalne laga, jaise empty space apne astitva par sawal utha rahi ho. Usne apne lambi nakhun ko hawa mein lehraya, ek hi gati mein, bilkul sahi kon par, jaise kisi surgeon ka antim incision karti hai.
Aur agle hi pal… Khali jagah par ek daraar ubhar aayi.
Na zameen phati, na hawa tooti, par phir bhi iss reality ke taane-baane mein jaise ek spasht katav aa gaya. Jaise iss brahmand ke fibres ko zabardasti cheera gaya ho.
Uss darar se kaali roshni nikalne lagi, na poori roshni, na poora andhera, balki kuchh aisa jo physics ke kisi bhi spectrum mein fit nahi baithta tha.
Hawa ka tapman achanak gir gaya. Samay jaise ek pal ke liye ladkhada gaya. Aur bina kisi hichkichahat ke, woh ladki uss shunya sthan mein kadam rakh deti hai.
Palak jhapakte hi uska sharir uss darar ke andar sama gaya. Aur usi kshan, jaise hi woh uske paar pahunchi, daraar band ho gayi. Jaise Reality fabric khud ko phir se silne lagi, jaise kuchh hua hi na ho.
Sadak phir se khali thi. Khamosh.
Par ab… Aryan! Jo inn sab se anjaan tha.
Kahi na kahi, kisi aur layer of existence se, koi uski har chal par nazar rakhe hue thi. Aur shayad- yeh shuruat thi.
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Ghadi ki sui seedhi raat ke 12 par tiki hui thi. Kamre mein andhera tha, lekin Aryan ki aankhon se neend koson door thi. Woh ghar aa chuka tha. Naina ko bhi samjha diya tha, ki aaj jo kuchh bhi hua, uss baare mein Sanjay ji ko kuchh na bataye. Woh waise hi pichhle ek mahine se pareshaan chal rahe the. Aryan nahi chahta tha ki uski wajah se unki tension aur badhe.
“Fucckk!”
Bed par karvat badalte hi uski peeth mein ek tez sa dard uth gaya. Shayad shaam wali fight ke dauraan koi ghunsa ya laat lag gayi thi, uss waqt adrenaline Rush mein mehsoos nahi hua, par ab jab sharir shaant tha, dard apni maujoodgi jata raha tha. Lekin jo baat usse khaaye ja rahi thi… woh yeh dard nahi tha.
Ab jab dimag thoda shaant tha, Aryan soch pa raha tha. Aur wahi sabse khatarnak cheez thi. Pichhle kuchh dinon mein jo-jo hua tha… woh sab uske dimag ke saamne film ki tarah chal raha tha.
“So, I’m sure… mujhe kuchh ho gaya hai.”
“Hmmm…”
“Uss din ke baad se… mujhmein kaafi badlaav aaye hain. Ghaav bhar jaana, sharir par nishaan tak na rehna. Mussels ka aise badhna jaise kisi ne andar se phula diye ho. Aur ye… ye ajeeb si garmi, jo kabhi-kabhi poore jism mein daud jaati hai.”
Insaan apne baare mein sabse zyada jaanta hai. Aur Aryan ko poori tarah ehsaas tha ki woh pehle jaisa nahi raha. Par kaise? Kyun? Iska jawab uske paas nahi tha. Aur yehi baat usse dheere-dheere khaaye ja rahi thi.
“Pehle Rohan aur uske doston se fight… phir Lokesh aur Rajan… aur aaj ki fight?” Uski aankhen chhat ko ghoorti rahi.
“Mujhmein itni takat thi???”
Yeh tha self-doubt. Jab zindagi mein achanak aisi cheezein hone lagti hain jo tark ko hi tod kar rakh dein, toh self-doubt aana bilkul normal hota hai. Aryan bhi uss se alag nahi tha. Woh apni hi wajood par sawal utha raha tha.
“Ohhh! Fuckkkk!” Usne dono haathon se apna sar pakad liya. “Sarr phata ja raha hai!"
Aur phir… uske dimaag ke kone se ek aur chehra ubhar aaya.
Sanya.
“Aur woh… Sanya!” Uske honthon se ek thandi saans nikal gayi. “Bapre… iss ladki se toh bachke rehna padega. Pata nahi kya kar de.”
Uske saamne woh drishya bilkul saaf ho gaya, jab Sanya uske saamne baithe thi, apne nange badan ko chaddar se dhakne ki anupayogi koshish karti hui.
Sochne ki koshish na karte hue bhi, Aryan ka sharir react kar gaya. Uska lund ek pal ke liye jhatka maar kar sakht ho gaya.
“Damn… the hell!” Usne jhatke se karvat badli. “Mujhe sach mein neend chahiye. Abhi ke abhi.”
Kamra phir se shaant ho gaya. Sirf ghadi ki halki tik-tik.
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Lekin, Ghar ke dusare kamre Mein, vatavaran bilkul Alag tha. koi thi, jiski dhadkan badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Aaj usse nind nahi aayegi~
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That's it for today, guys. Like thok ke jaana aur review bhi. Also, you can see that I've changed the model for Naina's character. This is the model I created, how's she? And not just that every image you're seeing in this update, I made them all myself, for better experience. Enjoy.
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