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Sham ko karan ki ankh pahale khul jati h to wo pata h ki uski jan yani jyoti sote hue kab uski chati p aagayi na to use na jyoti ko pata chala

Jyoti sote hue bahut hi pyari dikh rahi thi , bilkul jeSe ek choti bachi ho , karan use kuch der yu hi dekhte raha , uska man to ni tha , apni gudiya ko uthane ka , per kal unhe jana tha , jiski unhe teyari bhi kerni thi.

Isliye usne pyaar se jyoti ko dono galo ko chum k, halke se hotho ko bhi chum liya.

Or karan k esa kerte hi jyoti uth gayi or pyaar se boli.

Jyoti :- good evening bhaiyu...

Karan :- good evening my sweety , to tum jag rahi thi , fir ye sone ki acting kyu ker rahi thi

Jyoti bacho ki tarah :- ager ni kerti to apni pyare bhaiyu ki itni pyari kissi kese milti or kiss do na bhai

Karan :- acha natkhat or kisi chahiye ..

Or ye bol wo jyoti ko apne niche leker gudgudi kerne laga or jyoti khil khila k hasne lagi .

Uska khilkhilata pyara chahera dekh karan to usi me kho sa gaya , or ye baat jab jyoti ne dekhi to wo sharmate hue boli.

Jyoti :- bhai ese mat ghuro, mujhe sharam aati h.

Karan :- dekhne de mujhe gudiya , tera ye sunder or masum chahera , tu ni janti tera ye bhai kese raha bina tere rasatal lok me , jis chahare ko bina dekhe , m rahane ka soch bhi ni sakta tha , us chahre k didaar in ankho ko ek hafte baad hua h meri bahana , in ankho ki pyaas bujha lene de meri gudiya .

Jyoti nam ankho se:- bhai aapse dur ho ker mujhe bhi kaha chen tha , bhale hi shani dev ne mujhe us mahal me har suvidha di , per sath sath mane aapka pura safar bhi dekha , kese aapne mere liye , kitni taklif jheli , kese aapne aman or jhumki ka nayay kiya mane sab dekha bhai,

mujhe khud p bahut gussa bhi aaya ki vaha meri jaan itni taklif jhel raha h or yaha me aaram se bethi hu , lekin shani dev ki maya k kaaran m kuch ker bhi to ni sakti thi na bhai.

Jyoti ki ankho me ansu dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha or vo use sine se lagate hue bola.

Karan :- are meri gudiya tu bat bat pe rone kyu lagti h , jo hua use badla to ni ja sakta na , ab use bhul ja.

Wese ye sab acha hi to hua , humare karan pure rasatal ko pishachon se mukti mili or hume aman or shweta k roop me naye dost bhi .

Kuch din baad jab meri shaktiya jab wapas mil jayegi , to m tumhe bhi waha lekar jaunga .Tumhe un dono se mil ker bahut maja aayega

Jyoti :- sirf aman or shweta se hi bhai , aap kisi or ko bhul to ni rahe ya mujhe kisi se chupa rahe ho

Karan samjh gaya ki uska ishara kaya ki or tha , karan ko jab ye pata chala ki jyoti ne sab kuch dekha h to uski fat gayi ye soch kee ki ,ki usne jarur kaya k sath ki gayi uski masti bhi dekh li hogi.

Karan :- or kon gudiya , tu kiski baat ker rahi h m kuch samjha ni.

Karan ne janbhujker anjan banne ki koshis ki , bachne ki koshis kerte hue.

Jyoti thode gusse me :- kyu itni jaldi bhul gaye , aapke dost aman ki bhabhi , yani ki apni hone wali wife yani us kaya k baare me.

Ye sab kya chal raha h bhai , m kuch din aapse dur kya hui , aapne ye sab shuru ker diya.

Karan ghabra gaya, vo bhale hi duniya ka rakshak tha, per use apni bahan k gusse se bahut dar lagata tha.

Karan ghabrate hue :- are are gudiya , jesa tu soch rahi h vesa kuch ni h , vo to sirf meri ek saheli h.

Jyoti :- acha to kon apni saheli ko apni hone wali wife bolta h.

Karan or jyada ghabrate :- are meri lado m to wo majak ker raha tha, bhal jiski tere jesi itni pyari gf hogi , vo kisi or ki or kyu dekhega bhala , koi pagal hi hoga wo to

Karan ko yu ghabrata dekh jyoti khud ko control ni ker payi or jor se hasne lagi.

Jyoti :- are mere budu golu bhaiya , just relax me to majak ker rahi thi.

Karan ki ye sun jan me jan aayi or wo bola.

Karan :- kya chipkali tune to mujhe dara hi diya.

Jyoti :- kyu itna dar lagta h mujhse .

Karan :- dar ni gudiya , ye to pyaar h mera tere liye or dar to bas is baat ka h ki tum mujhse dur na ho jao kisi galat fehmi k chalte hue.

Jyoti karan k gale lagte hue :- awwww , you are so sweet bhaiya , or aaapko darne ki jarurat ni h mere bhaiyu , aapki jyoti ko apse dur koi ni ker sakta , mane aapse pahale bhi bola h na , aapse jyada bharosa to m mahadev p bhi na karu to fir ye dar kyu bhai.

Karan :- pata ni gudiya jabse hum rasatal se lote h tabse ek ajib sa dar lag raha h , jese kuch bahut bura hone wala h , jese ki tujse mujhe koi dur ker dega.

Jyoti :- aap chinta mat kero bhai , aapse dur to mujhe swayam ishvar bhi na ker paye , to ye chote moti musibaton se kya darna.

Yu hi karan ko jyoti santwana deti h or fir dono bhai bahan thoda tiruanntapuram shahr ghumte h or raat ko hotel aake so jate h


Wahi dusri or


Ek ghar me ek ladka or ek ladki ek dusre ko kiss ker rahe the , ladka bahut hi wildly kiss ker raha tha or ladki bhi uska pura sath de rahi thi.

Wo dono ek dusre ko kiss kam ker rahe the or kaat jyada rahe the , jese ek dusre ko kha hi jayenge.

Kuch der baad ladka ladki k hotho ko chod uski gardan ko chumne laga , jisse ladki siskiya lene lagi.

Ladki :- aahhh assi. Ohhh yeah.

Fir ladka ladki k piche jaa ker uske boobs dabate hue uski gardan chumne laga or uske mummo ko janvaro ki tarah dabane laga

Kuch der isi position m rahane k baad ladki se bardasht ni hua or usne piche mud ker ek hi jhatke me
Buttons ko todte hue uski shirt ko utar diya or uski chati ko chumti hui pent k uper se uske land ko pakadke boli.

Ladki :- bas mere raja , ab or mat tarsao, ab or bardasht ni hota , ab apne ye ustad se meri muniya ki pyas bhuja do

Ladka us ladki ko baho me bhar ke chumte hue :- abhi thoda ruko to sahi janeman , abhi to maja shuru hua h.

Ye bol ladke ne ladki ka top fad dala , jisse uke aam jese bade bade boobs uske samne aagaye , jo ek choti si lal rang ki transparent bra me kaid the.

Ladke k to ye najara dekhte hi muh me pani aagaya or wo ladki k boobs p tut pada or bra k uper se hi unhe chusne or katne laga or ek hath se dusre boobs ko dabane laga or ladki ladke ka land pant k uper se dabane lagi

Ladke ne kiss kerte hue ladki ki shorts ko kab utar diya , ye us ladki ko bhi pata na chala or ab vo sirf hare yellow bra or yellow panty me rah gayi thi.

Panty m kapda na k barabar hi tha , jo bas uski chut ko dhak raha tha or wo panty string wali thi , transparent.

Fir ladka uski bra ko fad hi dala or uske boobs ko chuste hue ek hath us ladki ki panty m dal k chut ragadne laga.

Fir kuch der baad jab ladki se control na hua to usne ladke ko khud se alag kiya or niche ghutno k bal beth ker uski pant khol deti h

Ladke ne under wear ni pahana tha to , jese hi ladki ne pent kholi , to uska land spring ki tarah nikal ke ladki k chahare se takraya.

Ladka :- dekh kya rahi ho meri jaan , apne khilone se pyaar ni karogi.

Ye sunte hi ladki ne muskurate hue us ladke k land ko pahale to ache se chata or fir ek hi baar me uske adhe land ko muh me leker lolipop ki tarah chusne lagi.

Ladka :- aahhh ohhh , suck it , ese hi chus meri jaan, ese hi chus , kya mast chusti h re tu

Ye bol ladka khud hi apna land aage piche ker us ladki k muh ko chodne laga.

10 min land chuswane k baad , ladka ladki ko utha ke bed pe patak deta h or uski panty bhi fad k uski chut per tut pada or kute ki tarah uski chut chatne laga.

Ladki :- aahhh bhai ese hi chato meri chut , kha jao apni randi bahan ki chut , aah ese hi .

Ladka :- ha meri pyari randi bahana , aaj to teri chut kha jaunga , kya mast chut h teri , itne salo se chod raha hu , per aaj bhi utni hi tight h

Ladki :-. Aahh , ye sab mane aapke liye hi to kiya h bhai, roj exercise kerke aaj tak ise dhili ni hone diya

Aaahh chodo bhai , aapki jib se chodo meri chut.

Ladka apni jib ko apni bahan ki chut me daal kee aage piche ker raha tha or fir uski chut ko uper se leke niche tak chat ne laga

Ladki :- aah ab or bardaasht ni hota bhai , chod dalo mujhe , faad do meri bur apne is mote lode se viraj bhai , ab or ni bardast hota

(Ji ha dosto ye ladka or ladki or koi ni viraaj or maya hi the , jo ek dusre k sath sex ker rahe the.

Kam umer me maa baap k marne k baad , akele ye jab delhi me rah rahe the , to dono ek dusre ka bahut ache se khayal rakhte , dono bhai bahan kam dosto ki tarah jyada rahate or kab indono ko ek dusre se pyaar ho gaya , inhe khud hi ni pata chala or koi inke sath na hone ki vajah se inme kisi ka dar bhi ni tha .

Or ek din inhone ek dusre ko purpose ker diya or delhi me apna ghar badal ker waha pati patni ki tarah rahane lage or sex relation bhi inme ban chuke the.

In dono me pyaar jarur tha , lekin havas bhi dono me kut kut k bhari thi , viraaj k sexual relation or bhi kayi ladkiyo k sath the , jiska maya ko bhi pata tha , maya bhale hi viraaj k alawa kisi se ni chudwati , lekin use dusri ladkiyo ko apne bhai k niche letane me bhi kaafi maja aata

Yaha tak ki usne apni kayi saheliyon ko viraaj se chudwaya bhi , chahe pyaar k bahane , ya blackmail ker.

Jo ladki unki baato m na aati to uske liye bhi plan tha unke pas , wo raat ko us ladki ko as a friend rukne k liye bulate or usko nind ki dawai deke sula ker , uski nudes pic lelete or baad me use blackmail kerte.)

Viraj :- ha jarur meri darling , pahale apne bhai k land ko gila to ker de

Ye sun Maya uthi or uska dobara ek baar 2 min land chus k gila ker diya

Or fir viraj ne maya ki chut ki fanko p apna land rakh ek jordar dhaka mara , jisse uska pura land ek hi baar me pura maya ki chut me ghus gaya .

Jise maya ki ek jordar chikh nikal gayi or boli.

Maya :- aaah dhire kero na bhai , m bahan hu apki koi randi ni.

Viraj uske hoth chumte hue :- are meri randi bahan , tu to ese chila rahi h ,jese pahali baar chud rahi ho.

Ruk tujhe abhi maja deta hu.

Ye bol viraaj ne dhakke lagane shuru ker diye or uske boobs dabate hue use chodne laga.

Maya :- aaaaaahhhhhhhhh ohhhhhh, yeahhhhhh, chodo mujhe bhai , ese hi chodo mujhe or tej bhai or tej , fuck me hard aaaaahhhh ohhhhhhhhhhhh.

Kuch der tak viraj maya ko usi position me choda , fir usne use ghodi bana diya or ek hi jhatke me pura land uski chut me ghused ke chodne laga.


Viraaj :- aaahhhhh , kya tight chut h teri ,meri randi bahan , pura ka pura land jakda hua h isne .

Bol tujhe maja aaraha h ki ni meri randi.

Maya :- aaahhhh bhai , bHut maja aaraha h , ese hi chodo mujhe bhai meri chut ko faad dalo , m aapki randi hu bhai , apni chinal bahan ki chut ka aaj bhosda bana dalo.
Aaahhhh ohhh yeah , fuck me hard ,

Ye sun viraj or josh me aagaya or maya k balo ko khichte hue jor jor se use chodne laga .

Or fir uske balo ko chod ker , uski gand pe taphad barsate hue use chodne laga.

Maya :- aaah bhai aaaah fucke me deaper bhai , maro or maro bhai meri gand pe , aaahhhhh kya mast land h tera bhai , ese hi thodi na meri sari randi saheliya jo aapse chudi h wo apki tarife kerti ghumti h , ohh yeah.

Viraaj :- haa wo to h meri bahana , per sala bahut din ho gaya nayi chut chode hue .

Maya :- aaah bas kuch din or intezaar ker lo bhai , humare plan k kamyab hote hi vo kamini jyoti or vo randi riya , dono hi aapke niche hogi , fir ji bhar ke dono ki gand fadna.

Viraaj :- ha yar ,m to kabse us din ka intezaar ker raha hu jab us kutiya ko apne lode ka swad chakhau , sali kya. Mast maal h , per sare din apne us bhai k sath chipki rahati h , pata bhi kiya college me uske baare me , per sali pata hi ni kis miti ki bani h , kisi ko rati bhar bhi bhav ni deti.

Maya :- aaahhhh ohhhh bhav de ya na de usse kya fark padta h bhai tumhe , tere ko to bas uska ras nichodna h.a

Viraaj :- bas itna hi ni meri bahan , us sali ko to m apni rakhail banaunga , sali ki vajah se humne bahut bejiti sahi h z jiska hisab wo jindagi bhar chukayegi.

Maya :- bhai wo hoga jo hoga , pahale mujhe to thanda ker do...


Viraaj :- ha kyu ni meri rani bahana , le ...

Ye bol viraj maya ki chut me or jor jor se dhake lagane laga or fir usne maya ko apne uper leker niche se dhake lagane laga .

Maya bhi uchal uchal k sath dene lagi , or kuch der bad wo jab thak gayi to viraj k sine p let gayi .

Viraj bhi jhadne wala tha to , usne full speed se dhake lagane laga or maya k hotho ko chusne laga or 10 min baad vo jhad gaya or sara pani maya ki chut me chod diya.

Or maya ko apne uper hi letaye hue bola ,

Viraj :- wese vo dono aa kab rahe h wapas.

Maya :- radha bata rahi thi ki unka phone aaya tha , wo dono kal lot rahe h.

Viraj kamini muskan k sath :- ye to bahut achi baat h , ab aayega maja , jab us karan ko m puri tarah barbad ker dunga , uski jyoti ko usise chin ker.

Ye bol wo or maya dono hasne lage or dono apne aap ko saf ker , nange hi ek sath so gaye

Back to the hero.


Agle din karan or jyoti flight se wapas apne shahar pahunch gaye to paya unhe receive kerne keval rohan sonam or shivani hi aayi h.

Karan radha ko na paker heran to hua , per us baat ko jyada mahatv na dete hue vo apne dosto ki or bhada

Rohan jese hi karan ko dekhta h to vo usse gale milta h or sonam jyoti se , fit sonam karan se or jyoti rohan se gale mili

Sonam bacho jese naraj hone ki acting kerte hue .

Sonam :- ye kya bhai , aapne to bola tha ki aap 3 din baad aajaoge or aaj 6th day h , ye to galat baat h

Karan pyar se sonam k gal chum ker usse mafi mangta h or exam khatam hone k baad use ghumane le jane ka promise kerta h , jisse wo khush ho jati h.

Jyoti :- rohan bhai , riya di ni aayi aapke sath

Karan :- ha aaj esa pahali baar hua ki radha hume recive kerne ni aayi.

Sonam shikayati andaz me :- bhai mane to use aapke aane ki timing bhi batayi thi , per usne busy hone ka bol k mana ker diya , vo boli ki vo baad m mil legi

Rohan :- ha bhai , riya di ne bhi kuch esa hi bola.

Karan :- oh acha chalo koi baat ni , ao ghar chale

Fir wo charo rohan ki gadi me beth ker karan k ghar ki or nikal pade , raste me jab gadi ek red light pe ruki to karan ne jo dekh use dekh herani bhi hui or dukh bhi.

Usne dekha radha or riya maya or viraj k sath samne ek theater se movie dekh k nikal rahi h .

Karan ne ishare se jyoti ko bhi ye dikhaya , jise dekh jyoti ko taklif hui .

Fir wo sab apne ghar pahunch gaye or sonam ki jid k kaaran aaj wo tino ek kamre me hi soye.

Fir kuch din ese hi nikal gaye or karan or jyoti k final exam bhi start ho gaye

Lekin karan or jyoti ne ye baat notice ki ki ab pahale jesa kuch ni raha tha.

Jo radha karan se ek din bhi bina baat kiye rah ni pati thi , wo kayi kayi din milna to chodo , usse phone bhi ni kerti or esa hi kuch hal riya ka bhi tha.

Riya bhi jo apna jyadatar samay , rohan ya karan or jyoti k sath bitati thi , wo bhi ab jyadatar samay radha ki tarah viraj or mAya k sath bitati , pata ni esa kya jadu sa ker diya tha un per maya or viraaj ne .

Lekin rohan or sonam ko shuru se hi maya or viraj pasand ni the , isliye wo unse dur hi rahate the , jiske chalte wo kafi close ho gaye the ek dusre ki or.

Ek din sonam.thoda sa tension me bethi thi , tab karan uske pass jaker bola .

Karan :- kya hua sonu , tu itna tension m kyu h.

Sonam :- kuch ni bhai , wo mere kuch papers shimla k hi govt office m rah gaye h , or wo kafi important h , unhe hi mujhe jaldi collect kerne k liye jana hoga.

Karan :- oh to ye baat h , to kya hua tum jaa ao na ek baar , mere or jyoti k to exam chal rahe h , tum esa kero tum rohan ko apne sath le jao , wo thoda ghum bhi lega .

Sonam ko karan ka ye idea pasand aagaya or karan ne jab rohan se is baare me baat ki to pahale to wo thoda hichkichya , shayad use kisi chij ki tension thi , jiske chalte wo jana ni chahata tha , per fir karan or jyoti k baar bar bolne per wo bhi man gaya or vo dono agle din shimla k liye nikal gaye train se.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or preety bhi karib 3 ghante k safar k baad haveli pe pahunch gayi or preety ne sabse pahale ghuste hi veer k kamre me gayi or amritunjay ko veer k muh me dalne lagi.

Jal k prabhav se kuch der veer ka sharir kuch der chamka or fir vo vapas normal ho gaya.

Or wo uthate hi chilaya

Veer :- preetyyyyy.

Preety veer ko sahi salamat dekh khushi k ansu rote hue boli.

Preety :- m yaha hu veer .

Veer jese hi preety ko dekhta h to jhat se use baho me bhar bola.

Veer :- tum thik to hona preetu, tumhe kuch hua ni.

Preety :- jiska itna pyaar kerne wAla dost ho , use bhala kuch ho sakta h kya veer

Veer :- preety m tumse kuch kahana chahata hu ,

I love u preety.

M tumse aaj se hi ni bachpan se pyaar kerta aaya hu, per tumse kah pane ki himat ni ker paya , per ab m or ni ruk sakta preety, tumne meri jaan bana ker mujhe apna karzdar bana diya h .

Ab mujhe apna karz chukane ka moka do meri preetu, please accept my love.

Preety :- I love u tooo veer , m bhi tume bachpan se chahati thi , per mera bhi hal tum jesa tha.

Or khabardat aage se ye karz ki baat ki to , pyar me karz nam ki koi jagah ni hoti

Veer preety ke muh se I love u tooo sun khushi se jhum utha or uske pure chahare ko chumne laga or preety bhi

Tabhi naina bol uthi

Naina :- oh laila majnu , ye sab kerne se pahale gate to band ker liya kero or jhali tu to jese bhul hi gayi ki m bhi yaha hu.

Naina ki baat sun dono love birds sharma gaye , jinhe dekh naina hasti h or unhe kuch time sath bitane dene k liye , waha se nikal gayi.

Or apne kamre me jaker packing kerne lagi, tabhi usne apni maa ki photo dikhi.

Naina photo dekhte hue :- maa aap jyada chinta mat kerna , aapki beti jald hi aapko dhund legi or us samraat ka ant ker aapko mukt kerwayegi.

Ye bol wo apna bag pack kerke sone chali gayi.


2 din baad karan or jyoti k final exam khatam ho gaye ab vo free the or wo dono khush bhi the ki ab unhe ful time job bhi jald hi mil jayegi .

Lekin karan apni shaktiyo k vihin hone k kaaran aane wale khatre se anjan tha.

Or kuch din baad vo.manhus din aahi gaya , jis din karan ki puri jindagi badalne wali thi

Aaj maya or viraj ka janmdin tha , wo dono bhi judwa the , jiske chalte unhone ek badi si party rakhi thi

Jisme usne karan or jyoti samet sabhi ko invite kiya , karan or jyoti ache se teyar ho ker viraaj k ghar pahunche jaha party thi.

Jyoti ne aaj ek black colour ki dress pahani thi , jisme wo bahu sunder lag rahi thi , kuch esi .




Hamesha ki tarah karan uski khub tarif kerta h or vo dono sonam or rohan k sath nikal pade viraj k ghar ki or jaha radha or riya pahale se hi mojud the

Viraj ne karan or jyoti samet sabka ache se welcome kiya , or fir karan or jyoti radha se mile , jo unse kafi din bad mili thi

Radha ne tab bhi jyada bhav na dete hue , ek formality k sath un dono se mili, jisse karan or jyoti ko had se jyada taklif hui , per unhonne khud ko control kiya or is baare m baad me radha se baat kerne ka soch, party ko enjoy kerne ki koshis kerne lage.

Thodi der baad sare guest chale gaye or ab sirf wo sab dost hi bache the.

Tabhi maya jyoti samet sabhi ladkiyo ko apne room me le gayi .

Viraaj :- chal bhai , ye sab ladkiya to apne me lag gayi , chal kyu na hum bhi chat pe gum lete h

Karan viraaj ki baat man uske sath chat pe chal pada , kuch der baat kerne k baad viraj ne karan ko ek glass drink di.

Karan :- sorry yar m alcohol ni pita.

Viraj :- ha yaar m janta hu , isliye tere liye ye soft drink hi laya hu

Karan ye sun usse vo glass le leta h or usse baate kerne laga


Tabhi viraj ko kisi ka phone aata h or wo excuse me bol waha se nikal gaya or fir waha maya aagayi.

Karan :- are maya tum yaha , wese birthday girl apni friends ko chod k yaha kya ker rahi h

Maya :- kyu , kya tum mere dost ni ho karan jo esa bol.rahe ho.

Karan :- are ni ni maya mere kahane ka vo matlab ni tha , tum meri ek achi dost ho

Maya :- oh I see , are ye kya tumne abhi tak apni drink ni pi , acha lao m pila deti hu tumhe

Karan :- are ni ni maya , iski kya jarurat h , m pi lunga na.

Maya :- abhi tumne kaha na m tumhari dost hu , to kya apni dost ki baat ni manoge or vese bhi birthday girl ko mana ni kiya jata.

Ye bol wo karan k hatho se glass leker use pilane lagi or jab hi glas uske muh se hataya , jab glass pura khali ho gaya.

Fir wo wahi khadi karan se baate kerne lagi or kuch der baad fir karan ko chakker se aane lage , shayad us drink me kuch milaya hua tha , jiski vajah se esa ho raha tha.

Maya :- kya hua karan ....

Karan sir pakadte hue :- pata ni maya , per achanak se mujhe chakkar se aarahe h.

Maya ye sun muskurane lagi or fir natak kerte hue boli.

Maya :- kya tumhari tabiyat kharab h , tum esa kero thodi der rest ker lo

Karan ko maya ki baat sahi lagi or maya ka sahara le wo uper hi bane kamre me chala gaya.

Karan jese hi us kamre me pahuncha to kisi me piche se uske sir p kisi vajandar chij se vaar ker dala , or shaktiya na hone ki vajah se or drink ki vajah se behosh ho gaya.

Thodi der baad karan ki ankh jab khuli jab uske uper kisi ne pani dala or jab bo utha to usne paya wo shirtless bed pe pada h or uske sare dost use ghur rahe h or jyoti to bina kisi reaction k butt jese bani khadi h.

Or sabse jyada herani to tab hui , jab usne dekha ki maya jiske kapde fate hue h wo viraaj k gale lage ro rahi h

Karan ko kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki ye ho kya raha h , usne riya se pucha.

Karan :- di , yaha kya ho raha h , m ese bina shirt k yaha kese or ye maya ko kya hua.

Riya ne jese hi ye suna , usne gusse se ek jordar thappad karan ko marte hue bola.

Riya :- mat bol apni gandi juban se mujhe di kamine.

Karan ki to riya ki aakhe fati ki fati rah gayi riya ka ye ravaiya dekh .

Usne jyoti se pucha.

Karan :- gudiya , ye sab kya ho raha h , ye di mujhse ese kyu baat ker rahi h.

Per jyoti to pathar bani si vahi khadi thi.

Viraaj :- vo kya bolegi kamine , tune apni gandi harkat se use bolne layak choda hi kaha

Karan gusse se :- ye kya bakwas ker raha h tu viraaj , jawan sambhal k baat ker

Tabhi karan k gaal pe ek or thappad pada , lekin is baar thappad radha ne mara tha

Radha gusse se :- jawan sambhal k baat ker mere bhai se mr karan , tamij ki baat to dur tu shukar mana , teri is harkat k baad bhi humne police ko ni bulaya .

Radha ka ye reaction to karan pe ek bahut bada bomb tha , jo radha uski itni ijjat kerti thi , wo aaj itni badtamiji se baat ker rahi thi

Karan :- aakhir aap sab ko ho kya gaya h , jo aap mujhse yu bartav ker rahe ho

Riya :- dekho to iski besharmi ko , itna sab kuch kerne k baad bhi puch raha h , isne kiya kya .

Ek to tume maya ka rape kerne ki koshis ki or ab humpe hi chila raha h.

Karan ye sun ker to jese pagal hone wala tha.

Karan :- ni ye sab jhut h , mane kuch ni kiya

Tabhi radha ne karan ko ek or thappad mar k bola

Radha :- besharam kamine , itne sab hone k baad bhi tum bol rahe ho ki tumne kuch ni kiya , humne tume range hatho pakda h .

Vo to viraaj bhai sahi time p pahunch ker tere sir pe mar ke tuje behosh ker diya , verna to tum ...

Chiii

Karan bahut samjhane ki koshis kerta h un sabko samjhane ki per koi bhi uski ni sunta or use dutkarne or marne lage.

Karan jyoti k pass gaya or ghutno k bal rote hue bola.

Karan :- gudiya , kam se kam tum to apne bhai p yakin kero , tum to janti hi ho na m esa ni ker sakta hu , tum kuch bolti kyu ni gudiya kuch to bolo.

Jyoti achanak se vahi gir padi or behosh ho gayi ,shayad use sadma laga tha, ye dekh karan ki halat or kharab ho gayi or wo rote hue jyoti ko uthane ki koshis kerne laga.

Aj wo pahali baar khud ko itna asahay samjh raha tha , wo chah ker bhi sach samne ni la sakta tha.

Riya :- ab to thodi sharam ker lo karan , tere is ghatiya harkat se jyoti ko sadma laga h , ager tujhme jara si bhi sharm bachi h or jara si bhi tune jyoti se tune pyaar kiya h to.

Tujhe usi jyoti ki kasam h , chale ja hamari jindagi se dur or kabhi lot k wapas mat aana.

Riya ki ye baat sun karan ki to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gayi ,riya k muh se jyoti ki kasam sun ker to wo khud kisi sadme me chala gaya.

Karan ansuo k sath :- thik h ager aap sab ko yahi lagta h ki me gunehgar huu or meri bahan ki ye halat meri vajah se hui h to , m abhi hi aap sabko chod k chala jata hu

(Hath jodte hue) per aap sabse meri bas ek vinti h ki , aap log meri gudiya ka khayal rakhna , vo bahut hi bholi h , use duniyadari ki koi jyada samjh ni h , please usko kuch mat hone dena, bas itni vinti h aapse

Lekin kisi ne karan ki or mudker dekha tak ni or karan ghar se bahar nikal apni bike se nikal gaya , shahar k bahar ki or lekin ye rasta uske jungle wale ghar ka to bilkul bhi ni tha, is baat se anjaan ki ek bahut bada khatra uske piche hi chal raha h

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.
Sorry for late update friends , or haa kuch readers ki bahut request pe mane sex add to ker diya , per m iske liye abhi mentally prepare ni tha , isliye jesa bhi aapko lage aap apne review jarur dijiyega.
Or janne k liye ki kya khatra karan ki or badh raha h or kya jyoti ka karan p vishwas kya tur jayega , ya jyoti ka vishwas adig rahega or adig raha to wo kese karan ko bachayegi janne k liye sath bane rahiye




 
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Dark Devil

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Nice update bhai
Ye Kya hua Maya aur viraaj ki bàat
pe Jyoti ne aise hi yakeen Kar liya
Viraaj aur Maya ka Sach kàb aur kaise
Sabke saamne ayega ye dekhna padega
Jyoti aur Riya ki hifaazat k liye
bhale hi abhi Karan nai hai but unka
Sahayak to Jyoti aur Karan k dosto pe
Hamesha nazar rakhe hue hai
Wo unko bacha lega viraaj aur Maya k
Gande mansoobo se

Waiting for the next update
 
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Harry rocks

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Fantastic update

Super megaupdate
Karan ne bhkti se kdf ko hra diya
Nilmani ko pane ke bad karan ko shaktiya kam nhi kr rhi h
To ummid h ki ab jyoti ka action avtar milega
Lgta h samrat tk phuchne se phle karan jyoti or naina mil jayegas
Karan or megha ka relation ka suspense jldi khtm kre

Good work

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Nast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

Awesome update bro
Shani dev ka apman kiye bina hi yudh jit liya jo sambhav tha aur Akhir kar karan ne nilmani hasil kar hi liya
Lekin bhai D2 aur naina ki ladai me maza nahi aya kuch jaldi hi khatam hoga
But apart from it update was fabulous bro
Keep going

Harry rocks bahut hi umda shandar jabardust update
To Karan Nd Jyoti ne finally nilmani prapt krli
Aapne yudh Nd bhakti bhav ko bahut hi umda tarike se represent Kia
Lekin Aapne sharir tarike se suspense bhi create krdia q Harry Bhai that's a good writings skill
Naina Nd Preeti ne bhi Dracula ko mar dia Nd Jo hathiar Mila hai jarur uska smbndh SAMRAAT ki maut se Hoga
Finally 2 update aur first part aur khtm
I think aap next part main SAMRAAT Ka ant krenge both main Nd at last Naina KJ se milenge aur vohi end Hoga
It's a tricky think question akhir Naina ki maa ko ehsaas q hua KJ ki problem Ka iska answer second part main doge I thought

Overall a great update

mast update h bhai
maza aa gya
is update ki jitni taarif ki jaye kam h
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 625
 

Harry rocks

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Lajawab super fantastic mind blowing update Bhai

Super bhai maza agaya per muje ek baat kehni thi jo apne jo mantra likhe the wo shudha hindi me likhte tho kya kehne uska khair mantra tho mujse pada nahi gaya lakin update mast tha

Apka ye baar baar jyoti ko karan ke saath rehne ko bolna muje kisi sankat ki anubhav kara raha hai jo bi karo jyoti or karan alag ho bi gaye usko jyada din mat khinchna pls ye meri request hai apse thank you

Are are edit karne ki jaroorat nahi bhai pls apka kehna sahi hai yaha jyadatar logonko hindi nahi padna ata so pls bhai edit naa kare jaisa hai waise hi rehne do

Bhai u r write ,I m sorry actually first part pahle likh gya

Fantastic update... Keep it up....

Nice& big update.

Aakhir kar karan ko sonam aur nil moni dono hi mil gya.
Is nil moni karan ki asli shatru kaal bhanu ko khatam korne me kam aye ga.
Aab jioty ki bari aye hai karan ki raksha korna.Aapne bahut ache se karan ki karib rishtedar ki uske liye fikar dikhaya hai.

Sonam aur Rohan kiu ek saath so raha tha?Rohan to uske ghar me hona chaiye tha.


Magar kfd to God hai usse kaise chot laga?

Naina aur preety draculla2 ki ant kor dia.
Aab dekhte hai aage ki update me kia hota hai.

Overall good update.

Awesome update Bhai Ab dekhte hain naina aur preety ke safar ka kya hota hai

Bahut badhiya fantastic update Bhai...

Again blaster update bro.
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Naina bhi karan aur joyti ki tarah buddhimaan h.
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Lagta h joyti aur karan k khilaf koi sajish hone wali h dono ko alag karne ki but kuch to protection rahegi hi rakshak k sahayak k hone se.
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Excellent writing and great going.
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Keep posting.
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Zabardast update hain bhai aakhir shani dev ne apni leela rach ke karan ka sahi imtehaan liya aur karan bhi apni sujh bhuj se isme utreen hua aur jaisay usay phal milna chahiye thaa waisay hi unko phal ke.taur pe.neel mani mili magar shani dev ki chetavani ke tahat jald hi bada sankat aane wala hai aur shayad yah karan aur jyoti ke rishtey per bhi asar daley. Aur megha ka bhi rishta shayad kuch khaas lagta hain. Dekhay kia hota hai waisay ab yah adhayay samapti ki aur hain. Yaha se agli stage ke rahesaya aur story line set honi bhi shuru ho gayi hain.

Bahut hi uchh sreni ka update bhai. Is update ka ullekh karna bhi apne aap me ek mahan kary hoga jo ki mujh jaise tuch se vaykti se na ho payega. Isliye sirf itna hi kahunga ki ye update super se bhi uppar wala tha.
Waiting 4 next update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kya satik varnan kiya h.
Kitni sundarta se aapne dikhaya h sari baton ko .
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
aakhir kar karan aur jyoti ne beeemani prapt kar hi liya hai,
vahi dusri taraf naina ne d2 aur uske saathiyon ka naash kar diya hai,
aur use samrat ke ant ka ashtra bhi mila hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Nice update

Nice uodate bhai
Keep rocking :)

WAAH BHAI KYA TAREEF KARU
KYA REVIEW DU MERE TOH KUCH SAMAJH ME HI NAHI AA RAHA.
KYUN KI JIS TARAH SE AAP NE IS UPDATE KI VYAKHYA KI HAI BAHUT KAM LOG AISA KAR PAATE HAIN.
MERE PAAS SHABD NAHI HAI AAP KI TAREEF KARNE KE LIYE.LAJWAAB KAR DIYA BHAI AAPNE.
KITNI KHOOBSOORATI SE AAP NE SHANI DEV SE JARAN KA YUDDH DIKHAYA HAI.AISA LAGA HI NAHI KI SACH ME YUDDH HO RAHA HAI.
MUJHE TOH AISA LAGA KI JAISE SHANI DEV YUDDH NA KAR KE KARAN KE JYOTI KE PRATI PREM KI PARIKSHA LE RAHE HO .JAISE KARAN KE SATH KHEL RAHE HO.
AUR KARAN WAKAYI ME SHANI DWV KI PARIKSHA KO SAHI TARAH SE POORN KIYA.BHAGWAAN KO BAL SE NAHI BALKI BHAKTI MARG SE HI PARAJIT KIYA JA SAKTA HAI.BHAKTI HI EK AISA HATHIYAR HAI JISE BHAGWAAN BHI NI KAAT SAKTE.
DEVI CHHAYA KA KARAN AUR JYOTI KO MAA KA PYAR DENA HRIDAY KO GADGAD KAR DIYA BHAI.
ANTATAH KARAN NE NEELMANI PRAPT KAR LIYA AUR AB NEELMANI KI SHAKTI KO JAGRIT HONE ME SAMAY LAGEGA.JAISA KI SHANI DEV NE KAHA AUR TAB TAK KARAN EK SAMANYA INSAAN KI TARAH HO JAYEGA .MUJHE LAGTA HAI AB BAARI HAI JYOTI KI PARIKSHA KI.
NAINA AUR PREETY NE MIL KAR D2 KA ANT KAR HI DIYA.NAINA APNI SOOJH BOOJH SE D2 KA ANT KARNE ME SAFAL HUYI.AUR PREETY KO LE KAR WAPAS VEER KE PAAS LOUT RAHI HAI.
SHANI DEV KE SATH YUDDH KE DOURAAN MEGHA KO BHI AABHAAS HUA AUR USNE YOG KE DWARA DEKHA BHI KI KARAN AUR SHANI DEV YUDDH KAR RAHE HAIN.PAR YAHA EK BAAT HAI MEGHA KE PAAS YOG SHAKTI KAHA SE AAYI USKA KARAN SE KYA SAMBANDH HAI.PREETY KO BHI AHSAAS KI USKA KOI APNA MUSEEBAT ME HAI.SONAM KO BHI SAME FILLING HUYI.
BAHUT SI BAATEN HAIN.KHAIR JAANE DO.
AAGE SAB KUCH PATA CHAL HI JAYEGA .
DEKHATE HAIN AGALE UPDATE ME KYA DHAMAAL MACHAATE HO
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 625
 
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