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Karan ne bhkti se kdf ko hra diya
Nilmani ko pane ke bad karan ko shaktiya kam nhi kr rhi h
To ummid h ki ab jyoti ka action avtar milega
Lgta h samrat tk phuchne se phle karan jyoti or naina mil jayegas
Karan or megha ka relation ka suspense jldi khtm kre
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Karan ne bhkti se kdf ko hra diya
Nilmani ko pane ke bad karan ko shaktiya kam nhi kr rhi h
To ummid h ki ab jyoti ka action avtar milega
Lgta h samrat tk phuchne se phle karan jyoti or naina mil jayegas
Karan or megha ka relation ka suspense jldi khtm kre
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Update no :- 98
Jyoti karan ki baat sun k chonk gayi or boli.
Jyoti :- ye aap kya bol rahe h bhai , kya yahi h ...
Karan bich me :- ha gudiya yahi h vo , jinka na koi shatru h , na koi mitra , na koi sambhandh na koi pratibandh .
Shrasti me kaal ko niyantran me rakhne wali keval 3n hi shaktiya h .
1 swayam mahadev
2 mata adishakti
Or 3 :- swayam karmfal data shani.
Kyunki sharasti me kal or karmfal ke santulan bana rahe , isliye swayam mahadev ne inka srijan kiya h.
Ha jyoti yahi h vo jinki chal h dhimi , tez h jinki maar , jinki padchap.sunati h nyaya dhwani.
Karm fal data
Jyoti :- shani.
Karan :- das ka pranam swikar kare prabhu.
Ye bol karan or jyoti shani dev ko dandvat pranam kerte h.
Yuvak :- tumne bilkul uchit uttar diya putra , m hi hu karmfal data shani .
Tumne apni har pariksha ko ache se purn kiya or sath hi sath tumne rasatal lok ko dusht pishachon k aatank se bhi mukt karwaya , isliye hum tumse prabhavit or kafi prasan bhi h putra .
Parantu hum yaha tumhare samaksh karmfal data k roop me ni apitu , nilmani k rakshak k roop me prakat hue h.
Karan :- kya nilmani k rakshak or vo bhi karmfal data , esa kyu bhagwan,
Shani dev :- esa isliye putra , kyunki jab shrikrishna nilmani devo ko.somp.rahe the , tab indra samet sabhi devo k man me is nilmani ko pane ki lalsa aagayi or wo sab usko pana chahate the.
Tab shrikrishna ne mera aahavahan kiya or m waha pahunch gaya.
M :- pranam prabhu.
Shrikrishna :- aaiye shani dev , hum aapse sahayta chahte h , bas usike liye ek vinati kerna chahata hu.
M :- vinati ni prabhu , aap to aadesh dijiye.
Tab shrikrishna ne mujhe nilmani dete hue bole.
Shrikrishna :- lijiye karmfal data , is sansar me keval aap hi h jis per ye mani apna prabhav ni dal sakti , kyunki aap apne guru mahadev ki tarah virakt h , isliye ye mani hum aapko somp rahe h , aapko is mani ki suraksha ka dayitv tab tak nibhana hoga , jab tak iske yogya koi aa ni jata astitv me.
M :- jo aagya prabhu.
To is tarah shrikrishna ne mujhe is mani ka dayitv sompa, or jesa mane pahale hi kaha tha , nilmani ko pane ki icha se hi tum yaha aaye , isliye rasatal lok me tumhare aate hi tumhari sabse priya yani ki jyoti danv per lag chuki thi.
Isliye ager nilmani ko ager tumhe pana h to tumhe mujhse to yudh kerna hi hoga, anyatha tumhe jyoti ko sadev - 2 k liye bhulna hoga.
Shani dev ki ye baate sun ker karan or jyoti k to chahre hi safed pad gaye , unhe samjh hi ni aaraha tha , ab vo kya kare.
Unki to ek or kua to dusri or khai wali situation wali sthithi uttpan ho gayi thi.
Ek or unka hamesha hamesha k liye bichadna tha , to dusri or swayam shani dev ki chunoti , jo swayam aajay h , or uper se karan unse yudh ker maryada bhang bhi ni ker sakta tha.
Shani dev fir bole :- shigra nirnay lo karan , humare paas vyarth kerne ko adhik samay ni h.
Karan :- ye aapne kese dharm sankat me dal diya bhagwan apne is daas ko .
Na to ye karan apni bahan , apni atma , apni shakti jyoti se dur ho sakta h , or na hi unper shastra uthane ka sahas ker sakta h jo mere mahadev k sabse priya h or jinka ye karan ansh h.
Shani :- dono me se ek marg ka chayan to tumhe kerna hi hoga karan , kyunki yahi niyati or karmfal ka vidhan h , yadi fal pana h to karm to kerna padega.
Karan ne kafi der sochta raha, fir wo bola.
Karan :- shama kijiyega prabhu ,parantu ye karan apni jyoti ko chod ker ni ja sakta.
Shani :- arthat , tum yudh kerne ko sajj ho , chalo jesi tumhari icha.
Ye bol shani dev ne apne dand ko to gayab kiya or ab unke hath me aagaya unka divya dhanush.
Shani :- apne shastra uthao karan or yudh kero mujhse.
Ye bol shani dev ne apni pratyncha khich ker chod di , jisse pure rasatal lok m ek bhayanak garjana hui.
Karan ne bhi apna hath upper kiya or uske hath me ek dhanush aagaya , usne shastra to utha liye the , per uski antaratma is baat k liye use bilkul swikriti ni de rahi thi.
Kyunki shani dev unke liye utne hi pujniya or samanniya the , jitne ki mahadev.
Shani dev :- kaha kho gaye karan , yudh me dhyan kendrit kero.
Ye bol unhone ek baan karan ki or choda , jo sidha ja ker karan k kandhe me ghus gaya or karan ki chink nikal gayi .
Jyoti rote hue chillayi :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii
Wo karan k pass jana chahati thi , lekin shani dev ki adrishy divar k karan wo asmarth thi.
Shani dev :- utho karan or yudh kero , yu kayaro wali pravarti tumhari kabse ho gayi .
Bhul jao tumhare samne kon khada h or jis karmpath ka tumne chayan kiya h , uska palan bhi kero.
Dekho jyoti ko kese tadaf rahi h tumhare liye wo , kya tumhe jara si bhi daya ni aarahi apni bahan ki is dasha per , ya tumhara itna hi prem tha , apni bahan k prati .
Ager esa h to abhi k abhi nikal jao tum yaha se , tum jyoti k bilkul yogya ni ho.
Shani dev k kathor vachan sun karan k ander ek tis si uthi or usne ek jhatke me apne kandhe se wo tir nikal ker, wapas khada hua or bola
Karan :- ni shani dev , karan apne pran tyag sakta h , per apni jyoti ko ni , m apni jyoti ko yaha se bina liye ni jaunga , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.
Shani :- yadi esa h to fir yudh kero.
Ye bol shani dev ne ek or tir karan ki or choda , pet is baar karan bhi teyar tha , usne bhi apne dhanush se ek tir choda , jo shani dev k tir se ja ker takraya , wo shani dev k tir ko bhed to na saka , parantu uski gati kam kerne m kamyab raha , jisse karan shani dev k tir se is baar bach gaya.
Fir dono ka mahasangram ka aarambh ho gaya ,dono ne ek dusre k uper tiro ki varsha kerna aarambh ker diya , karan khud shani ka hi ansh tha , to kuch had tak wo shani dev ko takkar de pa raha tha.
Kabhi shani dev ka tir karan kaat deta , to kabhi karan ke tir shani dev
Unke bano ki takrahat itni bhishn thi ki 3no lok dol rahe the, sare dev aasman me bhagwan or unke ansh k is adbhut sangram ko dekhne waha upasthit ho chuke the.
Wahi dusri or
Location :- shani lok.
Shani dev ki mata yani ki devi chaya bhi vaha bethi apne putra or uske ansh ka ye sangram dekh rahi thi.
Tabhi vaha chintit swar me narad ji prakat hue or devi chaya ko pranam kerte hue bole.
Narad ji :- ye kesi lila ker rahe h shani dev devi chaya , apne hi ansh se sangram , bhala is sab ki kya avashyakta h.
Ye baat aap or hum sabhi bhali bhanti jante h ki , shani dev ajay h or unhe tridev or trideviyo k alawa koi prajit ni ker sakta , karan matra shani ka ansh h , swayam shani ni.
Aap kuch kerte kyu ni devi , apne putra ko rokiye , kyunki karan to bina jyoti ko paye rukne wala ni h , chahe uske pran bhi kyu na chale jaye is sangram me.
Devi chaya :- devrishi ye aap bhalibhanti jante h ki shani ne ek baar jo than liya , wo use avashya purn kerta h , yahi gun karan ne bhi shani se prapt kiya h , isliye m bhi is sandarbh me kuch ni ker sakti .
Or aap to vyarth hi chintit ho rahe h devrishi, mat bhuliye shani h vo , jo kuch bhi , vo jo kuch bhi kerta h soch samjh ker or samaj k kalyan k liye hi kerta h , to uske kisi bhi karm per prashn chinh lagane ka koi sawal hi ni uttha .
Isliye hey devrishi aap kripya shant rahe or mujhe apne putra ki is lila ka anand lene dijiye.
Wahi dusri or .
Location :- samraat haveli.
Megha abhi hamesha ki tarah us sthan pe bethi hui mahadev ka dhyan ker rahi thi , tabhi vo bhi vichlit ho dhyan se bahar aagayi
Megha :- ye achanak se mera man vichlit kyu ho raha h , esa kyu pratit ho raha h ki mera koi apna kisi sankat me h.
Mujhe jaldi se is baare me pata kerna hoga , ye soch usne dobara dhyan me beth gayi.
Megha ko bhi apne dhyan me karan or shani dev ka maha sangram dikhai deta h , jise dekh wo chonk gayi or wapas dhyan se bahar aagayi or hath jod bolne lagi.
Megha rote hue :- hey shani dev , hey prabhu ye kya ker rahe h ap , esa anarth kyu bhagwan , mere.............. Se kya galti ho gayi ki aap apne ansh se yudh ker rahe h bhagwan .
Esa anarth mat kijiye prabhu , kripya shant hoker is sangram ko samapt ker dijiye bhagwan , verna bahut bada anarth ho jayega , or ager mere.............. Ko kuch hua , to aapki ye bhakt bhi jivit ni rah payegi prabhu , kripya shant ho jaiye.
Ye bol megha wahi mala leker shani dev ka dhyan kerne lagi.
Wahi dusri or
Naina us pishach k sath pishachon k raja k pass pahunch gayi , jaha vo ek badi si gufa me beth tha , din hone ki vajah se , lekin wo gufa bhi kisi mahal se kam ni thi , kyunki us raja ne apni mayavi shaktiyo se us gufa me mahal jesi har sukh suvidha banayi hui thi.
(M us raja ko Dracula 2 yani d2 likhunga).
D2 abhi apne bade se sofe pe tange pasare hue leta hua tha or ek glass me khun pi raha tha ,
tabhi uski najar pishach k sath khadi naina or preety pe padi.
D2 :- are wah ranga(pishach) tune to aaj dil khush ker diya re , ek sath 2 2 itni kadak maal laker , inko to me apni vishesh dasi banaunga.
Ranga ghabra ker d2 k pass gaya or dhire se uske kan k pas bola.
Ranga :- are malik jara apni jawan ko lagam dijiye , verna lene k dene pad jayenge.
D2 :- abe chutiye tu mujhe dara raha h or vo bhi in ladkiyo se.
Ranga :- are malik puri baat to sun lo , ye koi mamuli ladki ni h(preety ki or ishara kerte hue ) ye ladki ek trittya h.
D2 ye sunte hi chonk k khada ho gaya or bola .
D2 :- kkkya trittya.
Naina :- ha trittya or wo bhi koi mamuli trittya ni , maharaj samrat ne hume bheja h tera ant kerte hue.
Ye sun k to d2 ki gand gale me aagayi or vo gidgidate hue bola.
D2 :- maharaj ne mujhe marne ko bheja h , per kyu.
Preety :- kyunki tume sabko ye bata diya h ki maharaj ka thikana kaha h.
D2 :- ni ni mane esa kuch ni kiya , ye jhut h.
Preety :- to kya tum ye kahana chahate ho ki maharaj jhut bol rahe h.
D2 :- ni ni mane esa to ni kaha , lekin jhut m bhi ni bol raha , mane to unhe akhiri baar hi tab dekhe hi salo ho gaye.
Naina :- kab or kaha dekha tha tune , bata.
D2 :- jab vo apni pujarin , danav dadi komolika ko darshan dene aaye the, madhavgarh me.
Preety :- madhavgarh me kaha.
D2 :- madhavgarh me ....
D2 bolte bolte ruk gaya or use dal me kuch kala hone ka ahasas ho gaya , tab usne apni ankhe band ki to use positive shakti ka ahasas hua , jisse vo samjh gaya ki ye dono use bakra bana rahi h.
D2 haste hue :- bahut chalak samjhti h na khud ko tu ladki , per ek bevkufi to tune ker di , yaha aane se pahale tujhe apne yantra or vesi hi pavitr chijo ko kahi chod k aana chahiye tha .
Ranga ye samrat ki bheji hui ni , balki koi bhut nashak h jo hamara nash kerne or hamse maharaj k bhed lene aayi h.
Or ye trittya ek gaddar h , jo samraat k khilaf ja rahi h, bandi bana lo dono ko.
Ranga ye sun apne dant bahar nikalta h or aawaz ker apne sathiyo ko bulata h.
Lekin bas 10 jane hi vaha pahunche kyunki bakiyon ka kaam to preety ne pahale hi tamam ker diya tha .
D2 :- kaha rah gaye wo sare nikamme
Preety :- kahi tum inko to ni bula rahe.
Ye bol preety ne apna ek hath aage kiya , jisse ek roshni nikal gufa ki divar se takrayi or waha ek tv screen ban gayi or us screen per mare hue sare pishachon ki lashe dikhne lagi.
D2 :- ni chodunga tumhe, bhale hi m tumse ni lad sakta , per teri ye dost to maregi
Ye bol d2 apne chamgadad roop me aagaya or naina p jhapat pada .
Naina ne us per firring kerni chahi to ye kya goliya hi khatam ho gayi or jese usne apna khanjar nikala .
Lekin usse pahale wo kuch ker pati ranga ne ek bada sa patthar naina k hath pe de mara , jisse wo khanjar uske hath se chut k gir gaya.
Preety naina ki madad k liye aage bhadi to ranga samet sare 20 pishachon ne use charo or se gher liya tha, or wo unse ulajhne me lagi hui thi , halaki wo sab ek trittya k aage kuch ni the , per preety abhi apni shaktiyon ko puri tarah full power m use ni ker pa rahi thi abhi , jab usne pahale wo puple gola bana ker choda tha ,uske baad se use kuch kamjori mahasoos ho rahi thi , fir bhi vo unse lad rahi thi .
Wahi d2 naina ki or bhadne laga , or haste hue bola.
D2 :- ab kese bachegi ladki , tere sare hathiya to khatam ho gaye.
Yr bol wo naina k jese hi karib aa us per hamla kerna chaha , tabhi naina ne apna secret hathiyar nikal ker d2 pe dal diya .
Wo hathiyar or kuch ni bas lahsoon ka ras tha , lekin lahsoon ka ras pishachon p tejab ki tarah kaam kerta h , or naina ye baat janti thi , isliye emergency k liye usne ek choti si bottle me ras dal ker layi thi or apni shorts ki pichli jeb me usne rakh liya tha use.
Ras sidhe d2 k chahare pe gira tha , jisse usse bhayanak jalan hone lagi or wo apne chahre pe hath rakh chikhne laga.
Naina ne usi time moke ka fayda utha , jaldi se apne bag se bargad ki lakdi ka bana trishul nikala or d2 k sine m dil wali side ghop diya.
Jiske sath hi d2 chinkhta chilata hua mar gaya or uske marte hi baki pishach bhi kamjor pad gaye , or tabhi preety ne bhi moke ka fayda utha ek bada sa aag ka gola banaya or unki or fek diya , jise wo sare bache hue pishach bhi tadaf tadaf k mar gaye.
Jiske sath kalgarh ka jungle pishach mukt ho gaya.
Lekin tabhi d2 k sharir se ek pile rang ka gola nikla or naina k paas ja ker ruk gaya.
Use chune k liye jese hi naina ne apna hath uthaya to wo gola apne aap hi aagaya or wo apne aap hi ek lohe k tukde me badal gaya.
Dekh ker mano esa lag raha tha ki vo kisi hathiyar ka hisa ho , jiske aage or piche dono ka hissa ni tha.
Naina ne is baare ne baad me sochne ka soch use bag me rakha or preety k paas gayi
Preety ko kamjori se chakkar aane lage , lekin uske girne se pahale hi naina ne use sambhal liya or sahar deker jungle k bahar aagayi or preety ko aaram kerne ka bol vo khud gadi chala nikal padi wapas nahar singh ki haveli ki or.
Lekin jesa ahsaas megha ko ho raha tha , achanak se use bhi hone laga , use to kuch samjh hi ni aaraha tha , esa kyu ho raha h , lekin use bhi ahasas ho raha tha ki jese koi apna musibat me h.
Naina :- hey maa , ye kesi lila h aapki , kyu ese ahasas mujhe bar bar hote h , jese kabhi mera koi bahut karibi mere pass ho or ab ye ki ab vo sankat me h ma.
Maa meri bas aapse yahi prathna h ki ager mere ahasas me jara bhi satya h to he maa , wo jo bhi h , unki raksha kijiyega..
Ese hi prathna ker wo apne raste nikal padi.
Wahi dusri or
Location :- karan house
Sonam or rohan ka aaj last exam bhi khatam ho gaya tha , to vo aaj ghar aaker dopahar me so gaye the , dono ek hi room me ek sath hi so rahe the , lekin dono k dil me koi galat bhavna ni thi , vo bas ek bhai bahan ki tarah hi soye hue the.
Tabhi achanak se soti hui sonam k chahare pe bechani k bhav aane lage or wo achanak tez aawaj me bhai bolte hue uth gayi.
Sonam ki aawaz sun rohan bhi hadbada ker uth gaya or sonam ko hampte hue dekh , wo uski pith sahalate hue bola.
Rohan :- kya hua sonu , koi bura sapna dekha.
Sonam :- ha bhai esa hi kuch samjh lijiye , mujhe ba jane ese kyu lag raha h ki karan bhai or di musibat me h .
Rohan :- off oh , gudiya tum bekar me pareshan ho rahi, wo bas ek bura sapna hi to tha , tum relax ho jao , karan or jyoti bilkul thik honge.
Sonam :- ni bhai , mera man ni man raha , mujhe abhi bhai se bat kerni h.
Rohan :- acha thik h sonu , m abhi karan ko phone lagata hu.
Ye bol rohan karan ko phone lagata h , lekin karan ka phone not reachable aaraha tha.
Sonam :- dekha bhai , unka phone bhi ni lag raha , mujhe bahut dar lag raha h bhai, kuch kijiye
Rohan kayi baar try kerta h , lekin phone ni lag raha tha or lagta bhi keSe vo prathvi pe the hi ni.
Rohan sonam ko samjhane ki bahut koshis ker raha tha , lekin wo sun hi ni rahi thi.
Rohan :- sonu please tum shant ho jao , mujh per ni to kam se kam apne kanha pe to bharosa rakho , vo karan or jyoti ko bhala kuch hone denge kya.
Kanha ka nam sun sonam sidha mandir ki or bhagi or ladoo gopal k pass jaker boli.
Sonam :- kanha dekho na mera man bahut ghabra raha h , jese ki bhai koi musibat me ho , tum to sab kuch jante hona kanha , agr meri is ghabrahat me jara si bhi sachai h to please kanha , apni is bhakt ki prathna suno kanha or mere bhai or di ki raksha kerna.
Ye bol sonam vahi beth gayi or prathna kerne lagi , rohan k chahre pr bhi pareshani or dar ki lakire saf saf dikh rahi thi or wo bhi sonam k sath vahi beth prathna kerne laga.
Or karan k purane ghar p kavya ka bhi kuch yahi hal tha , wo bhi ishvar se prathna ker rahi thi.
Back to the hero .
Karan or shani dev ka sangram bahut hi bhishan ho gaya tha ab , ab dono or se hi or bhi ghatak ban chal rahe the.
Lekin karmfal data shani ko karan bhi kitni der takkar de pata , shani dev k har ban ka tez or bal badta ja raha tha .
Ab to ye hal ho gaya tha ki karan k sare tir kat rahe the , or shani dev ke tir chodne ki gati bhi bhadti ja rahi thi
Ab to ye haal ho gaya tha ki karan unki speed ka mukabla hi ni ker pa raha tha , vo jitni der me ek tir chodta utne me to shani dev 5 tir chod dete , jinko wo dodge bhi ni ker pata .
Karan man me :- ager esa hi chalta raha to m shigra hi parajit ho jaunga or meri jyoti mujhse hamesha hamaesha dur ho jayegi .
(Nam ankho se ) ni ni me esa ni hone de sakta , m apni jyoti ko khud se dur ni hone de sakta , per m karu bhi to kya karu , kyunki mere samne pratidvandvi k roop me khade bhi shani dev h , jinse m chaha ker bhi na to lad sakta hu or na hi jit sakta hu.
Karan puri tarah se hatash hota ja raha tha ki apni vivashata k kaaran , use kuch samjh ni aaraha tha .
Tabhi shani dev ka ek or tir aaaker karan k sharir me dhas gaya or vo gir pada.
Jyoti rote hue fir se chilayi .
Jyoti :- bhaiiiiii
Karan uthne ki koshis kerte hue :- mat ro meri gudiya , m bilkul thik hu , tum chinta mat ker , m shighra hi tujhe mukt kerwa lunga.
Jyoti rote hue :- bhai ab or mujhse aapki ye halat ni dekhi jati , aap please mujhe chod k chale jaiye yaha , m aapse duri kese n kese fir bhi bardasht ker lungi ,per ye m kadapi bardasht ni ker paungi ki meri vajah se aapko meri ankho k samne kuch ho gaya ho to.
Jyoti ne ye itni hriday vidarak baat kah to di thi , per ye jyoti hi janti thi ki is baat ko kahane me usne kitni ashaniya pida mahasus ki thi , karan se uska bichadna matlab tha , uski mrityu . Lekin usse apne bhai ki ye halat bhi ni dekhi ja rahi thi , isliye usne dil per patthar rakh ye baat kahi.
Isliye bhai please aap lot jaiye , shayad niyati ne hamara sath yahi tak likha tha.
Karan rote hue chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiii, ye asambhav h gudiya , ye karab apni jyoti ko kabhi ni chod k ja sakta or ager ye niyati h to (shani dev ki or dekhte hue ) aaj us niyati ko likhne wale ishvar ko bhi apne kaal chakra me parivartan kerna hoga, kyunki aaj ager karan jyoti se vimukh hua to ye karan bhi jivit ni rahega or apne is bhakt ki mrityu k jimedar aap honge shani dev aap.
Shani dev :- jo kaha h ager use purn kerna chahate ho to tir apne dhanush k chalayo karan , shabdo k ni.
Ye bol unhone ek or tir karan pe choda , or karan ne bhi khud ko sambhal tir choda, lekin ek baar fir karan ka hi tir kat gaya.
Karan man me :- esa chalta raha to is sangram ka nirnay mere khilaf hi aayega.per m karu bhi to kya karu.
Tabhi ek sath 2 tir karan ki or aaye , jisme se ek to karan ne apne tir se kaat diya , per dusra uski bah ko chu k nikal gaya.
Karan man me :- hey mahadev , hey prabhu , apne is bhakt ki sahayata kijiye .
Hey triloki nath , apne bhakt ki apne hi priya shishya se raksha kijiye.
Shani dev man me :- putra tum marg jante ho ya yu kaho wo tumhari chetna me hi h , avashyakata h to bas tumhe apni chetna ka aatm manthan kerne ka, tab tumhe swatah hi marg ka gyan ho jayega.
Tabhi ek or tir karan k ek bah per lag gaya , karan ne use nikala or fir mahadev se prathna kerte hue bola.
Karan :- hey bholenath , kya aapko apne bhakto ki is dasha pe jara si bhi daya ni aarahi , jo aap koi pratikriya ni ker rahe , ya apke hi is das ki bhakti me kuch kami rah gayi jo .......
Karan apni bat bolte bolte hi bich me rah gaya or uske chahre pe ek asha bhari muskan aagayi ,jise dekh kfd k chahare pe bhi muskan agayi.
Karan man me :- mil gaya marg , ha yahi ek matra upaay bacha h jisse meri vijay nishchit bhi ho jayegi or shani dev ka apman bhi na hoga.
Bhakti , bhakti hi wo marg h evam vo kavach h ,jiske aage ishvar bhi apne bhakt k aage har jate h.
(Mahadev se man me) dhanyawad bholenath , aapne apne bhakt ko marg hi dikha hi diya.
Ye sab soch karan ne apna dhanush dharti pe rakh diya.
Shani dev sab jante hue bhi bole.
Shani dev :- kya hua karan , itni shigra hi apni prayay swikar ker le.
Karan muskurate hue :- jo prajay swikar ker le wo karmfal.data ka ansh kaha bhagwan .
Karan hath jod shani dev ka sabse priya stotra gana shuru kerta h.
Karan :- krishnah , shani pingal mand sorihi
kono-antaka roudra-yama-tha babhruh
krishnah shanih pingala manda sourih
nityam smrito yo harate cha peedam
tasmai namah shree ravi-nandanaya
Karan na keval stotra k shlok ga raha tha ,balki sath sath un stotra ka bhavarth bhi ga raha tha.
Bhavarth 1 :- bhakti bhav se samarpit ho ker jo das naam pukarega , sada sada jo japta rahe dukh uska nasht ho jayega.
Hey ravinandan namaskar , namaskar prabhu namaskar.
Karan :- shlok 2 :-
tilairya-vair-masha gudanna danaih
Lohena neelambara danato va
preenati mantrair-nijavasare cha
tasmai namah shree ravi-nandanaya
Bhavarth 2 :- til, gud, udad ,ann , jou ,loha ,nilvastra jo kerte dan , shani mantro ka jaap kare to shani kerte unka kalyan , shani mantro ka jap kare to shani karte unka.
Shradha bhav se namaskar , bhakti bhav se namaskar .
Karan :- shlok :-3
Shanaishtakm ch pyatah prabhat.
Nityam suputrahi pashu bhanhveshch .
Pathetu sokhyam bhuvi bhan yuktah
Prapnoti nirvan padam tadante
Bhavarth :- shani ashtak ka path kare jo subah sada jo milker parivar , jivan lila me sukhi rahe , mrityu k baad mile moksh ka dvar ,
Jivan lila me sukhi rahe , mrityu k baad mile moksh ka dwaar.
Hey ravi nandan namaskar , hey ravinandan namaskar.
Karan apna gaan purn kerte hue , ghutno pe beth gaya or shani dev k charno m apna shish rakh diya.
Karan ki madur aawaz me apna priya stotra sun shani dev kafi prasan ho gaye the or prabhavit bhi .
Unhone apna dhanush gayab kiya or karan ko khud uthate hue bole.
Shani :- utho putra , ab iski aavashyakta ni h , tum meri is pariksha or yu kahe ki antim parikrama me bhi uttirn hue.
Tumne aaj ye pramanit ker diya , ki tumhari rachna ka mera nirnay bilkul uchit tha.
Tabhi waha narad ji prakat hue ,, jinhe dekh karan or jyoti ko kafi khushi hui or wo unhe pranam kerte h .
Karan or jyoti ek sath :- pranam devrishi.
Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Aayushmam bhavah putra , sakal manorath purn ho tumhare putri.
Shiv priya bilkul uchit kH rahe h bacho aaj Na keval Tumne apni budhi , apni shakti or apni bhakti se marg me aayi har kathinaee ko saralta se paar kiya, apitu is pure sansaar ko prem ki ek nayi paribhasha se bhi avgat karwaya .
Tumne aaj sidh kiya h ki man me sachi bhakti or apne priya k prati vishuddh prem ho to , vyakti ishwer se bhi jit jata h.
Fir narad ji shani dev se bole .
Narad ji :- prabhu , kripya ab to jyoti ko mukt ker apne ansh per kripya kijiye.
Shani dev ashirwad dete hue :- tathastu ..
Itna bolte hi karan or jyoti k bich ki wo divaar hat gayi , lekin karan ab bahut jyada thak chuka tha, jiska kaaran tha ki ek to uski itni kathin yatra or uper se fir sakshat shani se yudh , jisme wo bahut ghayal ho chuka tha.
Lekin fir bhi vo himat kerte hue utha or jyoti ki or bhadne laga , or khushi se muskurate hye jyoti bhi karan ki or dhire dhire badne lagi.
Lekin karan k kadam kamjori k mare ladkhada gaye or wo girne laga , jab jyoti ne ye dekha to wo dodte hue karan k pas gayi or use sambhal te hue use leker niche beth gayi or karan ka sir apni god me takh rone lagi.
Karan ko to is halat me bhi jyoti k rone ki chinta ni thi or wo lete lete hi jyoti k ansu ponch na rone ka ishara kerta h or muskurane ka ishara kerta h.
Karan ka apne prati itna prem dekh , jyoti ki khushi ki koi sima hi ni thi , lekin use rona bhi aaraha tha , ki usi prem k chalte karan ki ye halat thi.
Isliye usne karan k chahare ko rote hue sine se laga liya , or bolne lagi.
Jyoti :- bhai itna bhi prem mat kijiye mujhe , jiska karj m na chuka pau.
Karan :- kesi baat kerti h pagli , prem bhi kabhi koi karz ho sakta h kya or tu to meri jan meri shwas sab kuch h , bhala tujhse dur hoker mera astitv rahata kya, tu sirf meri bahan hi ni , meri aatma h tu , or bina apni aatma k bhala m .Jinda rah sakta hu kya.
Jyoti karan k muh pe hath rakh esi mahus baat bolne se mana kerti h , tabhi achanak karan k khasi aane lagi or jyoti ghabra k pani dhundne k liye uthne wali hi thi ki tabhi kisi ne piche se jyoti k sir ko sahalaya or jyoti k kano m ek aawaz padi.
Aawaz :- jyoti beti.
Jyoti jab ye aawaz sunti h to chonk k jese hi piche mud ker dekha to wo khushi se
Jyoti :- maa
Ye bol aawaz wali shaks k gale lag gayi , jo or koi ni asha thi.
Asha ne jyoti ko gale lagaye hue hi karan k sir ko utha ker apni god me rakh liya.
Karan bhi apni ma ko dekh khush ho gaya or itna hi bol paya
Karan :- maaa
Or iske sath hi vo behosh ho gaya , jisse jyoti ghabra gayi or asha se boli.
Jyoti rote hue :- mA dekho na bhai ko kya ho gaya , kuch kijiye na ma.
Asha :- ro mat beti , karan ko kuch ni hoga.
Ye bol wo shani dev ki or dekhti h or shani dev bhi ishara samajh karan ko uthate h or usi mahal ke ek kaksh me le jaker letate h.
Shani dev :- putri chinta ki koi baat ni h , karan keval durbalta ke karanavash , behosh hua h.
(Apne hath me ek lep ka katora mangwa ker ) lo putri ise karan ke tan k ghavo pe laga do , isse wo shighra hi swasth ho jayega.
Jyoti unse lep le ker karan k lagane lagi or jab usne wo lep laga diya to asha ne jyoti k sir per hath fera , jisse jyoti ko bhi nind aagayi or wo bhi karan k side me hi so gayi.
Fir un dono ko sote hue chod asha or shani dev dusre ek kaksh me gaye .
Jaha asha ne apne asli roop me aagayi , ji ha dosto ek baar fir devi chaya hi asha k roop me aayi thi , karan or jyoti se milne.
Asha ka chahara bilkul devi chaya jesa hi tha , bas unko apne vastra badlne ki hi avashyakta hoti thi .
Shani :- pranam mata.
Devi chaya :- kalyan ho putra .
Ye bol unhone shani ko gale laga liya , parantu jese hi devi chaya ka hath shani dev k tan se chua , to shani dev ki halki si aah nikal gayi.
Jise sun devi chaya ek baar tk ghabra gayi , fir unhe samjh aagaya ki mamla kya h.
Devi chaya :- putra apne uper ka vastra utaro.
Shani :- are ni ni mata , iski koi avashyakta ni h , m bilkul swasth hu.
Devi chaya :- are kaha na ek baar vastra utaro , apni mata se kya sharmana.
Ye bol devi chaya ne khud hi uper ka vastr utar diya shani ka or jese hi unhone esa kiya to shani ka tan dekh ker wo ghabra gayi , kyunki unke badan pe kayi jagah tir k nishan the.
Hua yu tha ki jese jese shani dev karan per yani apne ansh per pariksha k chalte prahar ker pida pahucha rahe the , utni hi pida wo swyam ko bhi de rahe the.
Devi chaya nam ankho se :- ye ky putra , itni chot , is sabki kya avashyakta thi putra.
Shani :- avashyakta thi mata , bhale hi karan ki pariksha lena mera karm tha , parantu apne hi ek ansh or apne guru k param bhakt k uper prahar jo mane kiye the , uska karmfal to mujhe bhi milna avashyak tha na.
Manushya sochte h ki unke karmo k dand k roop me jo m unhe kasht deta hu , uske mujhe aanand aata h .
Parantu vo ye ni samjhte ki jitne kasht m unhe deta hu , usse kayi guna pida mujhe swayam hoti h .
Isiliye to m kisi ko marg per lane se pahale use chetavani avashya deta hu mata , ki vo anuchit marg ko tyag uchit marg pe aajaye.
Devi chaya :- m bhi na kitni murkh hu , jise baato me swayam devaguru brihaspati ni hara paye , to m bhala kon hoti hu.
Ye bol devi chaya bhi shani k tan per oshadhi ka lep lagati h or fir kuch der unhe bhi vishram karwati h.
Fir sham tak karan or jyoti jag jate h to apne pas apni maa (devi chaya) ko dekh khushi se jhum uthe or unke gale lag khushi rote hue bole.
Karan :- mumma aap aagayi , aap usdin hume chod ker kyu chali gayi thi .
Jyoti :- ha mumma , hum ne aapko kitna miss kiya or ye aapke kapdo ko kya hua , ye ese kapde kyu .
Darasal ab devi chaya apne devi vale roop me hi thi, unhone apne kapde ni badle the , kyunki wakt aagaya tha ki ab karan or jyoti ko apna sach batane ka.
Tabhi kaksh me shani dev bhi aate h , jinhe dekh karan or jyoti unhe pranam kerte h.
Per shani dev un dono ko ashirwad dete hue , asha yani apni mata devi chaya ko pranam kerte h.
Jise dekh karan or jyoti dono hi heran ho jate h , tab shani dev bole.
Shani dev :- m janta hu putra , tumhare man me kayi prashna h , jinme se kuch ke uttar m tumhe deta hu
Putra jo tumhare samne abhi mojud h vo meri bhakt aasha ni , balki surya patni , arthat meri mata Devi chaya h, or mata ne hi us din tum dono ko us din sambhala tha
Ye sun to mano karan or jyoti mano jam se hi gaye , abhi jo thodi der pahale unke chahre pe khushi thi vo secondo me gayab ho gayi
Jise dekh devi chaya ko acha ni laga or unhone wapas se karan or jyoti ko sine se laga boli.
Devi chaya :- ha putra ye satya h ki m asha ni hu , parantu ye satya bhi ni h ki tum dono meri santan ni h ki tum dono meri santan ni ho .
Tum dono hi mere putra shani k hi ansh ho , is naate m tumhari bhi mata hui
Karan or jyoti hath jod :- dhanyawad devi, aapne hume sahi samay per sambhala or hume durbal hone se roka.
Devi chaya :- are abhi to kaha mane , tum dono bhi meri santan ho , bhala koi mata ko bhi dhanyawad kahata h , or ha ye devi ka sambhodan band kero , abse tum mujhe shani ki bhanti hi mata kaha karoge or jab bhi aavashyakata ho mera smaran ker lena , tumhari mata sadev tumhare liye upasthit rahegi.
Karan or jyoti :- ji mata.
Ye sun devi chaya muskurate hue apni bahe fela deti h or jisme karan or jyoti sama jate h.
Kuch der yuhi devi chaya ne karan or jyoti ko gale lagaye rakha fir wo sab alag hue.
Shani dev :- putra karan , ab samay aachuka h , karmfal pane ka.
Ye bol shani dev ne apna ek hath uper kiya or ek nili roshni k sath unke hath me nilmani aagayi .
Shani :- apne puraskar ko grahan kero putra.
Karan :- jo aagya prabhu.
Ye bol karan hath jod apni ankhe band ker leta h , jiske sath hi nilamani apne aap udker karan me sama gayi. Or usike sath kuch der tak karan ka sharir nile rang ki roshni se chamakta raha .
Fir dhire dhire karan samanya hone laga , tabhi usko fir se thodi kamjori si mahasus hui , lekin jyoti ne sambhal liya.
Shani dev gambhir swar me bole :- putra nilmani ko to tumne praapt ker liya h , parantu .
Jyoti :- parantu kya shani dev.
Shani dev :- parantu putri , nilmani ki shaktiya karan k sharir me dhire dhire jagrit hogi , jiske chalte ek mah tak karan apni baki shaktiyon ka prayog bhi bhali bhanti ni ker payega , wo lagbhag ek samanya manushy saman hi hoga.
Isliye putri tumhe karan ka vishesh dhyan rakhna hoga , karan ki suraksha ab tumhara dayitv h , kyunki aane wale samay me tum dono per , visheshkar karan pe sankat ke megh mandra rahe h , jinse keval tum hi karan ki raksha ker sakti ho
Isliye smaran rahe putri tumhara prem or karan k prati vishwas hi karan ki sabse badi shakti or kavach h , ise kabhi bhi khone mat dena.
Jyoti :- jesa aap kahe bhagwan , aaj tak mere bhai ne meri har sankat se bhalibhanti raksha ki h .
Ab mera samay aagaya h apne bhai ki raksha ka uttaradayitv nibhane ka ,jise me apne pure man se nibhaungi, mera prem or vishwas apne bhai k liye , us kailash ki tarah adig h bhagwan , jis per mahadev nivas kerte h .
Is vishwas ko is sansar ki koi bhi shakti khatam ni ker sakti.
Shani dev man me :- asha to meri bhi yahi h putri ki bhavishya me esa hi rahe.
Shani dev :- vese putra karan , tumne mujhe pahachana kese.
Karan muskurate hue :- prabhu aap sach me apne guru mahadev ki bhanti bhole h .
Apke gale me sthit is mala se hi mujhe aapki pahachan ho gayi thi prabhu.
Or ha bhagwan apko apne janmdivas ki hardik shubkamnaye .
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Jab karan or jyoti padmanabh mandir jane ko teyar ho rahe the, tabhi unhe dhyan aaya ki aaj to shani amavasya h or sath me shani jayanti bhi.
Itna dhyan me aate hi dono bhai bahan pass k mojud shani mandir me gaye , jo aaj itne bade utsav k kaaran braham muhurat me hi khul chuka tha.
Vaha pahunche to un dono ne paya ki mandir to khul chuka h , lekin puja samagri ki koi bhi dukan abhi tak ni khuli to karan ne apni chutki bajayi or uske hath me puja ki sabhi samagri aagayi .
Arthath sarso ka tel , til , udad or shani dev se sambandhit sabhi samgri , jinke pese karan ne apni shaktiyo se hi band dukano k gale me rakh diye the.
Jyoti :- ye kya bhai , aapne mala to mangwayi hi ni.
Mala isliye ni aayi thi , kyunki us dukan me phulo ki mala mojud ni thi.
Tabhi jyoti ko idea aaya or usne mandir k bagiche se ful chun ker vahi beth ek mala banyi un fulo ki or dono bhai bahan mandir me jaker puja kerte h or shani dev ki murti per wo mala chada dete h
Ab shani dev to thare saral swabhav k , karan or jyoti ki bhakti bhav se chadayi hui mala unhonne turant swikar ker li or vo mala murti se gayab ho sidha shani dev k gale e aagayi thi
Or jab shani dev ne karan ko apni pahachan batane ko kaha to karan turant us mala ko pahachan gaya or uper se shani dev k vastra or rang roop dekh ker use ye baat confirm bhi ho gayi.
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Devi chaya :- manna padega , mera karan putra satya me hi kafi budhiman h
Shani dev :- aakhir ansh kiska h .
Devi chaya majak kerte hue :- mera .
Jiske sath sab hasne lage . Fir karan or jyoti ne shani dev se lotne ki aagya mangi.
Shani dev :- thik h putro , ab tum prasthan ker sakte ho or meri baat sadev smaran rakhna ki tum dono ka prem or ek jutta hi tumhari sabse badi shakti h.
Fir kuch bate devi chaya or shani dev ne karan or jyoti ko samjhayi or fir shani dev ne karan or jyoti ko ankhe band kerne ko bola .
Or kuch samay bad jab dono ne apni ankhe kholi , to unhone paya ki vo ab apne hotel k room me h.
Karan or jyoti abhi is yatra se thak chuke the , isliye wo kapde badal ker ek dusre ki baho me lipat ker so gaye .
Dharti lok k samay k anusar to unhe bas ek hi din alag rahna pada tha, parantu rasatal ka samay chakra dharti se bhin tha , jiske anusar wo pure ek hafte baad mile the or ek dusre ki baho me the .
Jis karan unhe parmanand ki anubhuti ho rahi thi , jiske karan unhe jald hi nind aagayi.
Wahi dusri or sonam , megha ,naina or kavya ko bhi ab chen aagaya tha , jiske liye unhone ishvar ko dhanywad kiya .
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Jyoti karan ki baat sun k chonk gayi or boli.
Jyoti :- ye aap kya bol rahe h bhai , kya yahi h ...
Karan bich me :- ha gudiya yahi h vo , jinka na koi shatru h , na koi mitra , na koi sambhandh na koi pratibandh .
Shrasti me kaal ko niyantran me rakhne wali keval 3n hi shaktiya h .
1 swayam mahadev
2 mata adishakti
Or 3 :- swayam karmfal data shani.
Kyunki sharasti me kal or karmfal ke santulan bana rahe , isliye swayam mahadev ne inka srijan kiya h.
Ha jyoti yahi h vo jinki chal h dhimi , tez h jinki maar , jinki padchap.sunati h nyaya dhwani.
Karm fal data
Jyoti :- shani.
Karan :- das ka pranam swikar kare prabhu.
Ye bol karan or jyoti shani dev ko dandvat pranam kerte h.
Yuvak :- tumne bilkul uchit uttar diya putra , m hi hu karmfal data shani .
Tumne apni har pariksha ko ache se purn kiya or sath hi sath tumne rasatal lok ko dusht pishachon k aatank se bhi mukt karwaya , isliye hum tumse prabhavit or kafi prasan bhi h putra .
Parantu hum yaha tumhare samaksh karmfal data k roop me ni apitu , nilmani k rakshak k roop me prakat hue h.
Karan :- kya nilmani k rakshak or vo bhi karmfal data , esa kyu bhagwan,
Shani dev :- esa isliye putra , kyunki jab shrikrishna nilmani devo ko.somp.rahe the , tab indra samet sabhi devo k man me is nilmani ko pane ki lalsa aagayi or wo sab usko pana chahate the.
Tab shrikrishna ne mera aahavahan kiya or m waha pahunch gaya.
M :- pranam prabhu.
Shrikrishna :- aaiye shani dev , hum aapse sahayta chahte h , bas usike liye ek vinati kerna chahata hu.
M :- vinati ni prabhu , aap to aadesh dijiye.
Tab shrikrishna ne mujhe nilmani dete hue bole.
Shrikrishna :- lijiye karmfal data , is sansar me keval aap hi h jis per ye mani apna prabhav ni dal sakti , kyunki aap apne guru mahadev ki tarah virakt h , isliye ye mani hum aapko somp rahe h , aapko is mani ki suraksha ka dayitv tab tak nibhana hoga , jab tak iske yogya koi aa ni jata astitv me.
M :- jo aagya prabhu.
To is tarah shrikrishna ne mujhe is mani ka dayitv sompa, or jesa mane pahale hi kaha tha , nilmani ko pane ki icha se hi tum yaha aaye , isliye rasatal lok me tumhare aate hi tumhari sabse priya yani ki jyoti danv per lag chuki thi.
Isliye ager nilmani ko ager tumhe pana h to tumhe mujhse to yudh kerna hi hoga, anyatha tumhe jyoti ko sadev - 2 k liye bhulna hoga.
Shani dev ki ye baate sun ker karan or jyoti k to chahre hi safed pad gaye , unhe samjh hi ni aaraha tha , ab vo kya kare.
Unki to ek or kua to dusri or khai wali situation wali sthithi uttpan ho gayi thi.
Ek or unka hamesha hamesha k liye bichadna tha , to dusri or swayam shani dev ki chunoti , jo swayam aajay h , or uper se karan unse yudh ker maryada bhang bhi ni ker sakta tha.
Shani dev fir bole :- shigra nirnay lo karan , humare paas vyarth kerne ko adhik samay ni h.
Karan :- ye aapne kese dharm sankat me dal diya bhagwan apne is daas ko .
Na to ye karan apni bahan , apni atma , apni shakti jyoti se dur ho sakta h , or na hi unper shastra uthane ka sahas ker sakta h jo mere mahadev k sabse priya h or jinka ye karan ansh h.
Shani :- dono me se ek marg ka chayan to tumhe kerna hi hoga karan , kyunki yahi niyati or karmfal ka vidhan h , yadi fal pana h to karm to kerna padega.
Karan ne kafi der sochta raha, fir wo bola.
Karan :- shama kijiyega prabhu ,parantu ye karan apni jyoti ko chod ker ni ja sakta.
Shani :- arthat , tum yudh kerne ko sajj ho , chalo jesi tumhari icha.
Ye bol shani dev ne apne dand ko to gayab kiya or ab unke hath me aagaya unka divya dhanush.
Shani :- apne shastra uthao karan or yudh kero mujhse.
Ye bol shani dev ne apni pratyncha khich ker chod di , jisse pure rasatal lok m ek bhayanak garjana hui.
Karan ne bhi apna hath upper kiya or uske hath me ek dhanush aagaya , usne shastra to utha liye the , per uski antaratma is baat k liye use bilkul swikriti ni de rahi thi.
Kyunki shani dev unke liye utne hi pujniya or samanniya the , jitne ki mahadev.
Shani dev :- kaha kho gaye karan , yudh me dhyan kendrit kero.
Ye bol unhone ek baan karan ki or choda , jo sidha ja ker karan k kandhe me ghus gaya or karan ki chink nikal gayi .
Jyoti rote hue chillayi :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii
Wo karan k pass jana chahati thi , lekin shani dev ki adrishy divar k karan wo asmarth thi.
Shani dev :- utho karan or yudh kero , yu kayaro wali pravarti tumhari kabse ho gayi .
Bhul jao tumhare samne kon khada h or jis karmpath ka tumne chayan kiya h , uska palan bhi kero.
Dekho jyoti ko kese tadaf rahi h tumhare liye wo , kya tumhe jara si bhi daya ni aarahi apni bahan ki is dasha per , ya tumhara itna hi prem tha , apni bahan k prati .
Ager esa h to abhi k abhi nikal jao tum yaha se , tum jyoti k bilkul yogya ni ho.
Shani dev k kathor vachan sun karan k ander ek tis si uthi or usne ek jhatke me apne kandhe se wo tir nikal ker, wapas khada hua or bola
Karan :- ni shani dev , karan apne pran tyag sakta h , per apni jyoti ko ni , m apni jyoti ko yaha se bina liye ni jaunga , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.
Shani :- yadi esa h to fir yudh kero.
Ye bol shani dev ne ek or tir karan ki or choda , pet is baar karan bhi teyar tha , usne bhi apne dhanush se ek tir choda , jo shani dev k tir se ja ker takraya , wo shani dev k tir ko bhed to na saka , parantu uski gati kam kerne m kamyab raha , jisse karan shani dev k tir se is baar bach gaya.
Fir dono ka mahasangram ka aarambh ho gaya ,dono ne ek dusre k uper tiro ki varsha kerna aarambh ker diya , karan khud shani ka hi ansh tha , to kuch had tak wo shani dev ko takkar de pa raha tha.
Kabhi shani dev ka tir karan kaat deta , to kabhi karan ke tir shani dev
Unke bano ki takrahat itni bhishn thi ki 3no lok dol rahe the, sare dev aasman me bhagwan or unke ansh k is adbhut sangram ko dekhne waha upasthit ho chuke the.
Wahi dusri or
Location :- shani lok.
Shani dev ki mata yani ki devi chaya bhi vaha bethi apne putra or uske ansh ka ye sangram dekh rahi thi.
Tabhi vaha chintit swar me narad ji prakat hue or devi chaya ko pranam kerte hue bole.
Narad ji :- ye kesi lila ker rahe h shani dev devi chaya , apne hi ansh se sangram , bhala is sab ki kya avashyakta h.
Ye baat aap or hum sabhi bhali bhanti jante h ki , shani dev ajay h or unhe tridev or trideviyo k alawa koi prajit ni ker sakta , karan matra shani ka ansh h , swayam shani ni.
Aap kuch kerte kyu ni devi , apne putra ko rokiye , kyunki karan to bina jyoti ko paye rukne wala ni h , chahe uske pran bhi kyu na chale jaye is sangram me.
Devi chaya :- devrishi ye aap bhalibhanti jante h ki shani ne ek baar jo than liya , wo use avashya purn kerta h , yahi gun karan ne bhi shani se prapt kiya h , isliye m bhi is sandarbh me kuch ni ker sakti .
Or aap to vyarth hi chintit ho rahe h devrishi, mat bhuliye shani h vo , jo kuch bhi , vo jo kuch bhi kerta h soch samjh ker or samaj k kalyan k liye hi kerta h , to uske kisi bhi karm per prashn chinh lagane ka koi sawal hi ni uttha .
Isliye hey devrishi aap kripya shant rahe or mujhe apne putra ki is lila ka anand lene dijiye.
Wahi dusri or .
Location :- samraat haveli.
Megha abhi hamesha ki tarah us sthan pe bethi hui mahadev ka dhyan ker rahi thi , tabhi vo bhi vichlit ho dhyan se bahar aagayi
Megha :- ye achanak se mera man vichlit kyu ho raha h , esa kyu pratit ho raha h ki mera koi apna kisi sankat me h.
Mujhe jaldi se is baare me pata kerna hoga , ye soch usne dobara dhyan me beth gayi.
Megha ko bhi apne dhyan me karan or shani dev ka maha sangram dikhai deta h , jise dekh wo chonk gayi or wapas dhyan se bahar aagayi or hath jod bolne lagi.
Megha rote hue :- hey shani dev , hey prabhu ye kya ker rahe h ap , esa anarth kyu bhagwan , mere.............. Se kya galti ho gayi ki aap apne ansh se yudh ker rahe h bhagwan .
Esa anarth mat kijiye prabhu , kripya shant hoker is sangram ko samapt ker dijiye bhagwan , verna bahut bada anarth ho jayega , or ager mere.............. Ko kuch hua , to aapki ye bhakt bhi jivit ni rah payegi prabhu , kripya shant ho jaiye.
Ye bol megha wahi mala leker shani dev ka dhyan kerne lagi.
Wahi dusri or
Naina us pishach k sath pishachon k raja k pass pahunch gayi , jaha vo ek badi si gufa me beth tha , din hone ki vajah se , lekin wo gufa bhi kisi mahal se kam ni thi , kyunki us raja ne apni mayavi shaktiyo se us gufa me mahal jesi har sukh suvidha banayi hui thi.
(M us raja ko Dracula 2 yani d2 likhunga).
D2 abhi apne bade se sofe pe tange pasare hue leta hua tha or ek glass me khun pi raha tha ,
tabhi uski najar pishach k sath khadi naina or preety pe padi.
D2 :- are wah ranga(pishach) tune to aaj dil khush ker diya re , ek sath 2 2 itni kadak maal laker , inko to me apni vishesh dasi banaunga.
Ranga ghabra ker d2 k pass gaya or dhire se uske kan k pas bola.
Ranga :- are malik jara apni jawan ko lagam dijiye , verna lene k dene pad jayenge.
D2 :- abe chutiye tu mujhe dara raha h or vo bhi in ladkiyo se.
Ranga :- are malik puri baat to sun lo , ye koi mamuli ladki ni h(preety ki or ishara kerte hue ) ye ladki ek trittya h.
D2 ye sunte hi chonk k khada ho gaya or bola .
D2 :- kkkya trittya.
Naina :- ha trittya or wo bhi koi mamuli trittya ni , maharaj samrat ne hume bheja h tera ant kerte hue.
Ye sun k to d2 ki gand gale me aagayi or vo gidgidate hue bola.
D2 :- maharaj ne mujhe marne ko bheja h , per kyu.
Preety :- kyunki tume sabko ye bata diya h ki maharaj ka thikana kaha h.
D2 :- ni ni mane esa kuch ni kiya , ye jhut h.
Preety :- to kya tum ye kahana chahate ho ki maharaj jhut bol rahe h.
D2 :- ni ni mane esa to ni kaha , lekin jhut m bhi ni bol raha , mane to unhe akhiri baar hi tab dekhe hi salo ho gaye.
Naina :- kab or kaha dekha tha tune , bata.
D2 :- jab vo apni pujarin , danav dadi komolika ko darshan dene aaye the, madhavgarh me.
Preety :- madhavgarh me kaha.
D2 :- madhavgarh me ....
D2 bolte bolte ruk gaya or use dal me kuch kala hone ka ahasas ho gaya , tab usne apni ankhe band ki to use positive shakti ka ahasas hua , jisse vo samjh gaya ki ye dono use bakra bana rahi h.
D2 haste hue :- bahut chalak samjhti h na khud ko tu ladki , per ek bevkufi to tune ker di , yaha aane se pahale tujhe apne yantra or vesi hi pavitr chijo ko kahi chod k aana chahiye tha .
Ranga ye samrat ki bheji hui ni , balki koi bhut nashak h jo hamara nash kerne or hamse maharaj k bhed lene aayi h.
Or ye trittya ek gaddar h , jo samraat k khilaf ja rahi h, bandi bana lo dono ko.
Ranga ye sun apne dant bahar nikalta h or aawaz ker apne sathiyo ko bulata h.
Lekin bas 10 jane hi vaha pahunche kyunki bakiyon ka kaam to preety ne pahale hi tamam ker diya tha .
D2 :- kaha rah gaye wo sare nikamme
Preety :- kahi tum inko to ni bula rahe.
Ye bol preety ne apna ek hath aage kiya , jisse ek roshni nikal gufa ki divar se takrayi or waha ek tv screen ban gayi or us screen per mare hue sare pishachon ki lashe dikhne lagi.
D2 :- ni chodunga tumhe, bhale hi m tumse ni lad sakta , per teri ye dost to maregi
Ye bol d2 apne chamgadad roop me aagaya or naina p jhapat pada .
Naina ne us per firring kerni chahi to ye kya goliya hi khatam ho gayi or jese usne apna khanjar nikala .
Lekin usse pahale wo kuch ker pati ranga ne ek bada sa patthar naina k hath pe de mara , jisse wo khanjar uske hath se chut k gir gaya.
Preety naina ki madad k liye aage bhadi to ranga samet sare 20 pishachon ne use charo or se gher liya tha, or wo unse ulajhne me lagi hui thi , halaki wo sab ek trittya k aage kuch ni the , per preety abhi apni shaktiyon ko puri tarah full power m use ni ker pa rahi thi abhi , jab usne pahale wo puple gola bana ker choda tha ,uske baad se use kuch kamjori mahasoos ho rahi thi , fir bhi vo unse lad rahi thi .
Wahi d2 naina ki or bhadne laga , or haste hue bola.
D2 :- ab kese bachegi ladki , tere sare hathiya to khatam ho gaye.
Yr bol wo naina k jese hi karib aa us per hamla kerna chaha , tabhi naina ne apna secret hathiyar nikal ker d2 pe dal diya .
Wo hathiyar or kuch ni bas lahsoon ka ras tha , lekin lahsoon ka ras pishachon p tejab ki tarah kaam kerta h , or naina ye baat janti thi , isliye emergency k liye usne ek choti si bottle me ras dal ker layi thi or apni shorts ki pichli jeb me usne rakh liya tha use.
Ras sidhe d2 k chahare pe gira tha , jisse usse bhayanak jalan hone lagi or wo apne chahre pe hath rakh chikhne laga.
Naina ne usi time moke ka fayda utha , jaldi se apne bag se bargad ki lakdi ka bana trishul nikala or d2 k sine m dil wali side ghop diya.
Jiske sath hi d2 chinkhta chilata hua mar gaya or uske marte hi baki pishach bhi kamjor pad gaye , or tabhi preety ne bhi moke ka fayda utha ek bada sa aag ka gola banaya or unki or fek diya , jise wo sare bache hue pishach bhi tadaf tadaf k mar gaye.
Jiske sath kalgarh ka jungle pishach mukt ho gaya.
Lekin tabhi d2 k sharir se ek pile rang ka gola nikla or naina k paas ja ker ruk gaya.
Use chune k liye jese hi naina ne apna hath uthaya to wo gola apne aap hi aagaya or wo apne aap hi ek lohe k tukde me badal gaya.
Dekh ker mano esa lag raha tha ki vo kisi hathiyar ka hisa ho , jiske aage or piche dono ka hissa ni tha.
Naina ne is baare ne baad me sochne ka soch use bag me rakha or preety k paas gayi
Preety ko kamjori se chakkar aane lage , lekin uske girne se pahale hi naina ne use sambhal liya or sahar deker jungle k bahar aagayi or preety ko aaram kerne ka bol vo khud gadi chala nikal padi wapas nahar singh ki haveli ki or.
Lekin jesa ahsaas megha ko ho raha tha , achanak se use bhi hone laga , use to kuch samjh hi ni aaraha tha , esa kyu ho raha h , lekin use bhi ahasas ho raha tha ki jese koi apna musibat me h.
Naina :- hey maa , ye kesi lila h aapki , kyu ese ahasas mujhe bar bar hote h , jese kabhi mera koi bahut karibi mere pass ho or ab ye ki ab vo sankat me h ma.
Maa meri bas aapse yahi prathna h ki ager mere ahasas me jara bhi satya h to he maa , wo jo bhi h , unki raksha kijiyega..
Ese hi prathna ker wo apne raste nikal padi.
Wahi dusri or
Location :- karan house
Sonam or rohan ka aaj last exam bhi khatam ho gaya tha , to vo aaj ghar aaker dopahar me so gaye the , dono ek hi room me ek sath hi so rahe the , lekin dono k dil me koi galat bhavna ni thi , vo bas ek bhai bahan ki tarah hi soye hue the.
Tabhi achanak se soti hui sonam k chahare pe bechani k bhav aane lage or wo achanak tez aawaj me bhai bolte hue uth gayi.
Sonam ki aawaz sun rohan bhi hadbada ker uth gaya or sonam ko hampte hue dekh , wo uski pith sahalate hue bola.
Rohan :- kya hua sonu , koi bura sapna dekha.
Sonam :- ha bhai esa hi kuch samjh lijiye , mujhe ba jane ese kyu lag raha h ki karan bhai or di musibat me h .
Rohan :- off oh , gudiya tum bekar me pareshan ho rahi, wo bas ek bura sapna hi to tha , tum relax ho jao , karan or jyoti bilkul thik honge.
Sonam :- ni bhai , mera man ni man raha , mujhe abhi bhai se bat kerni h.
Rohan :- acha thik h sonu , m abhi karan ko phone lagata hu.
Ye bol rohan karan ko phone lagata h , lekin karan ka phone not reachable aaraha tha.
Sonam :- dekha bhai , unka phone bhi ni lag raha , mujhe bahut dar lag raha h bhai, kuch kijiye
Rohan kayi baar try kerta h , lekin phone ni lag raha tha or lagta bhi keSe vo prathvi pe the hi ni.
Rohan sonam ko samjhane ki bahut koshis ker raha tha , lekin wo sun hi ni rahi thi.
Rohan :- sonu please tum shant ho jao , mujh per ni to kam se kam apne kanha pe to bharosa rakho , vo karan or jyoti ko bhala kuch hone denge kya.
Kanha ka nam sun sonam sidha mandir ki or bhagi or ladoo gopal k pass jaker boli.
Sonam :- kanha dekho na mera man bahut ghabra raha h , jese ki bhai koi musibat me ho , tum to sab kuch jante hona kanha , agr meri is ghabrahat me jara si bhi sachai h to please kanha , apni is bhakt ki prathna suno kanha or mere bhai or di ki raksha kerna.
Ye bol sonam vahi beth gayi or prathna kerne lagi , rohan k chahre pr bhi pareshani or dar ki lakire saf saf dikh rahi thi or wo bhi sonam k sath vahi beth prathna kerne laga.
Or karan k purane ghar p kavya ka bhi kuch yahi hal tha , wo bhi ishvar se prathna ker rahi thi.
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Karan or shani dev ka sangram bahut hi bhishan ho gaya tha ab , ab dono or se hi or bhi ghatak ban chal rahe the.
Lekin karmfal data shani ko karan bhi kitni der takkar de pata , shani dev k har ban ka tez or bal badta ja raha tha .
Ab to ye hal ho gaya tha ki karan k sare tir kat rahe the , or shani dev ke tir chodne ki gati bhi bhadti ja rahi thi
Ab to ye haal ho gaya tha ki karan unki speed ka mukabla hi ni ker pa raha tha , vo jitni der me ek tir chodta utne me to shani dev 5 tir chod dete , jinko wo dodge bhi ni ker pata .
Karan man me :- ager esa hi chalta raha to m shigra hi parajit ho jaunga or meri jyoti mujhse hamesha hamaesha dur ho jayegi .
(Nam ankho se ) ni ni me esa ni hone de sakta , m apni jyoti ko khud se dur ni hone de sakta , per m karu bhi to kya karu , kyunki mere samne pratidvandvi k roop me khade bhi shani dev h , jinse m chaha ker bhi na to lad sakta hu or na hi jit sakta hu.
Karan puri tarah se hatash hota ja raha tha ki apni vivashata k kaaran , use kuch samjh ni aaraha tha .
Tabhi shani dev ka ek or tir aaaker karan k sharir me dhas gaya or vo gir pada.
Jyoti rote hue fir se chilayi .
Jyoti :- bhaiiiiii
Karan uthne ki koshis kerte hue :- mat ro meri gudiya , m bilkul thik hu , tum chinta mat ker , m shighra hi tujhe mukt kerwa lunga.
Jyoti rote hue :- bhai ab or mujhse aapki ye halat ni dekhi jati , aap please mujhe chod k chale jaiye yaha , m aapse duri kese n kese fir bhi bardasht ker lungi ,per ye m kadapi bardasht ni ker paungi ki meri vajah se aapko meri ankho k samne kuch ho gaya ho to.
Jyoti ne ye itni hriday vidarak baat kah to di thi , per ye jyoti hi janti thi ki is baat ko kahane me usne kitni ashaniya pida mahasus ki thi , karan se uska bichadna matlab tha , uski mrityu . Lekin usse apne bhai ki ye halat bhi ni dekhi ja rahi thi , isliye usne dil per patthar rakh ye baat kahi.
Isliye bhai please aap lot jaiye , shayad niyati ne hamara sath yahi tak likha tha.
Karan rote hue chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiii, ye asambhav h gudiya , ye karab apni jyoti ko kabhi ni chod k ja sakta or ager ye niyati h to (shani dev ki or dekhte hue ) aaj us niyati ko likhne wale ishvar ko bhi apne kaal chakra me parivartan kerna hoga, kyunki aaj ager karan jyoti se vimukh hua to ye karan bhi jivit ni rahega or apne is bhakt ki mrityu k jimedar aap honge shani dev aap.
Shani dev :- jo kaha h ager use purn kerna chahate ho to tir apne dhanush k chalayo karan , shabdo k ni.
Ye bol unhone ek or tir karan pe choda , or karan ne bhi khud ko sambhal tir choda, lekin ek baar fir karan ka hi tir kat gaya.
Karan man me :- esa chalta raha to is sangram ka nirnay mere khilaf hi aayega.per m karu bhi to kya karu.
Tabhi ek sath 2 tir karan ki or aaye , jisme se ek to karan ne apne tir se kaat diya , per dusra uski bah ko chu k nikal gaya.
Karan man me :- hey mahadev , hey prabhu , apne is bhakt ki sahayata kijiye .
Hey triloki nath , apne bhakt ki apne hi priya shishya se raksha kijiye.
Shani dev man me :- putra tum marg jante ho ya yu kaho wo tumhari chetna me hi h , avashyakata h to bas tumhe apni chetna ka aatm manthan kerne ka, tab tumhe swatah hi marg ka gyan ho jayega.
Tabhi ek or tir karan k ek bah per lag gaya , karan ne use nikala or fir mahadev se prathna kerte hue bola.
Karan :- hey bholenath , kya aapko apne bhakto ki is dasha pe jara si bhi daya ni aarahi , jo aap koi pratikriya ni ker rahe , ya apke hi is das ki bhakti me kuch kami rah gayi jo .......
Karan apni bat bolte bolte hi bich me rah gaya or uske chahre pe ek asha bhari muskan aagayi ,jise dekh kfd k chahare pe bhi muskan agayi.
Karan man me :- mil gaya marg , ha yahi ek matra upaay bacha h jisse meri vijay nishchit bhi ho jayegi or shani dev ka apman bhi na hoga.
Bhakti , bhakti hi wo marg h evam vo kavach h ,jiske aage ishvar bhi apne bhakt k aage har jate h.
(Mahadev se man me) dhanyawad bholenath , aapne apne bhakt ko marg hi dikha hi diya.
Ye sab soch karan ne apna dhanush dharti pe rakh diya.
Shani dev sab jante hue bhi bole.
Shani dev :- kya hua karan , itni shigra hi apni prayay swikar ker le.
Karan muskurate hue :- jo prajay swikar ker le wo karmfal.data ka ansh kaha bhagwan .
Karan hath jod shani dev ka sabse priya stotra gana shuru kerta h.
Karan :- krishnah , shani pingal mand sorihi
kono-antaka roudra-yama-tha babhruh
krishnah shanih pingala manda sourih
nityam smrito yo harate cha peedam
tasmai namah shree ravi-nandanaya
Karan na keval stotra k shlok ga raha tha ,balki sath sath un stotra ka bhavarth bhi ga raha tha.
Bhavarth 1 :- bhakti bhav se samarpit ho ker jo das naam pukarega , sada sada jo japta rahe dukh uska nasht ho jayega.
Hey ravinandan namaskar , namaskar prabhu namaskar.
Karan :- shlok 2 :-
tilairya-vair-masha gudanna danaih
Lohena neelambara danato va
preenati mantrair-nijavasare cha
tasmai namah shree ravi-nandanaya
Bhavarth 2 :- til, gud, udad ,ann , jou ,loha ,nilvastra jo kerte dan , shani mantro ka jaap kare to shani kerte unka kalyan , shani mantro ka jap kare to shani karte unka.
Shradha bhav se namaskar , bhakti bhav se namaskar .
Karan :- shlok :-3
Shanaishtakm ch pyatah prabhat.
Nityam suputrahi pashu bhanhveshch .
Pathetu sokhyam bhuvi bhan yuktah
Prapnoti nirvan padam tadante
Bhavarth :- shani ashtak ka path kare jo subah sada jo milker parivar , jivan lila me sukhi rahe , mrityu k baad mile moksh ka dvar ,
Jivan lila me sukhi rahe , mrityu k baad mile moksh ka dwaar.
Hey ravi nandan namaskar , hey ravinandan namaskar.
Karan apna gaan purn kerte hue , ghutno pe beth gaya or shani dev k charno m apna shish rakh diya.
Karan ki madur aawaz me apna priya stotra sun shani dev kafi prasan ho gaye the or prabhavit bhi .
Unhone apna dhanush gayab kiya or karan ko khud uthate hue bole.
Shani :- utho putra , ab iski aavashyakta ni h , tum meri is pariksha or yu kahe ki antim parikrama me bhi uttirn hue.
Tumne aaj ye pramanit ker diya , ki tumhari rachna ka mera nirnay bilkul uchit tha.
Tabhi waha narad ji prakat hue ,, jinhe dekh karan or jyoti ko kafi khushi hui or wo unhe pranam kerte h .
Karan or jyoti ek sath :- pranam devrishi.
Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Aayushmam bhavah putra , sakal manorath purn ho tumhare putri.
Shiv priya bilkul uchit kH rahe h bacho aaj Na keval Tumne apni budhi , apni shakti or apni bhakti se marg me aayi har kathinaee ko saralta se paar kiya, apitu is pure sansaar ko prem ki ek nayi paribhasha se bhi avgat karwaya .
Tumne aaj sidh kiya h ki man me sachi bhakti or apne priya k prati vishuddh prem ho to , vyakti ishwer se bhi jit jata h.
Fir narad ji shani dev se bole .
Narad ji :- prabhu , kripya ab to jyoti ko mukt ker apne ansh per kripya kijiye.
Shani dev ashirwad dete hue :- tathastu ..
Itna bolte hi karan or jyoti k bich ki wo divaar hat gayi , lekin karan ab bahut jyada thak chuka tha, jiska kaaran tha ki ek to uski itni kathin yatra or uper se fir sakshat shani se yudh , jisme wo bahut ghayal ho chuka tha.
Lekin fir bhi vo himat kerte hue utha or jyoti ki or bhadne laga , or khushi se muskurate hye jyoti bhi karan ki or dhire dhire badne lagi.
Lekin karan k kadam kamjori k mare ladkhada gaye or wo girne laga , jab jyoti ne ye dekha to wo dodte hue karan k pas gayi or use sambhal te hue use leker niche beth gayi or karan ka sir apni god me takh rone lagi.
Karan ko to is halat me bhi jyoti k rone ki chinta ni thi or wo lete lete hi jyoti k ansu ponch na rone ka ishara kerta h or muskurane ka ishara kerta h.
Karan ka apne prati itna prem dekh , jyoti ki khushi ki koi sima hi ni thi , lekin use rona bhi aaraha tha , ki usi prem k chalte karan ki ye halat thi.
Isliye usne karan k chahare ko rote hue sine se laga liya , or bolne lagi.
Jyoti :- bhai itna bhi prem mat kijiye mujhe , jiska karj m na chuka pau.
Karan :- kesi baat kerti h pagli , prem bhi kabhi koi karz ho sakta h kya or tu to meri jan meri shwas sab kuch h , bhala tujhse dur hoker mera astitv rahata kya, tu sirf meri bahan hi ni , meri aatma h tu , or bina apni aatma k bhala m .Jinda rah sakta hu kya.
Jyoti karan k muh pe hath rakh esi mahus baat bolne se mana kerti h , tabhi achanak karan k khasi aane lagi or jyoti ghabra k pani dhundne k liye uthne wali hi thi ki tabhi kisi ne piche se jyoti k sir ko sahalaya or jyoti k kano m ek aawaz padi.
Aawaz :- jyoti beti.
Jyoti jab ye aawaz sunti h to chonk k jese hi piche mud ker dekha to wo khushi se
Jyoti :- maa
Ye bol aawaz wali shaks k gale lag gayi , jo or koi ni asha thi.
Asha ne jyoti ko gale lagaye hue hi karan k sir ko utha ker apni god me rakh liya.
Karan bhi apni ma ko dekh khush ho gaya or itna hi bol paya
Karan :- maaa
Or iske sath hi vo behosh ho gaya , jisse jyoti ghabra gayi or asha se boli.
Jyoti rote hue :- mA dekho na bhai ko kya ho gaya , kuch kijiye na ma.
Asha :- ro mat beti , karan ko kuch ni hoga.
Ye bol wo shani dev ki or dekhti h or shani dev bhi ishara samajh karan ko uthate h or usi mahal ke ek kaksh me le jaker letate h.
Shani dev :- putri chinta ki koi baat ni h , karan keval durbalta ke karanavash , behosh hua h.
(Apne hath me ek lep ka katora mangwa ker ) lo putri ise karan ke tan k ghavo pe laga do , isse wo shighra hi swasth ho jayega.
Jyoti unse lep le ker karan k lagane lagi or jab usne wo lep laga diya to asha ne jyoti k sir per hath fera , jisse jyoti ko bhi nind aagayi or wo bhi karan k side me hi so gayi.
Fir un dono ko sote hue chod asha or shani dev dusre ek kaksh me gaye .
Jaha asha ne apne asli roop me aagayi , ji ha dosto ek baar fir devi chaya hi asha k roop me aayi thi , karan or jyoti se milne.
Asha ka chahara bilkul devi chaya jesa hi tha , bas unko apne vastra badlne ki hi avashyakta hoti thi .
Shani :- pranam mata.
Devi chaya :- kalyan ho putra .
Ye bol unhone shani ko gale laga liya , parantu jese hi devi chaya ka hath shani dev k tan se chua , to shani dev ki halki si aah nikal gayi.
Jise sun devi chaya ek baar tk ghabra gayi , fir unhe samjh aagaya ki mamla kya h.
Devi chaya :- putra apne uper ka vastra utaro.
Shani :- are ni ni mata , iski koi avashyakta ni h , m bilkul swasth hu.
Devi chaya :- are kaha na ek baar vastra utaro , apni mata se kya sharmana.
Ye bol devi chaya ne khud hi uper ka vastr utar diya shani ka or jese hi unhone esa kiya to shani ka tan dekh ker wo ghabra gayi , kyunki unke badan pe kayi jagah tir k nishan the.
Hua yu tha ki jese jese shani dev karan per yani apne ansh per pariksha k chalte prahar ker pida pahucha rahe the , utni hi pida wo swyam ko bhi de rahe the.
Devi chaya nam ankho se :- ye ky putra , itni chot , is sabki kya avashyakta thi putra.
Shani :- avashyakta thi mata , bhale hi karan ki pariksha lena mera karm tha , parantu apne hi ek ansh or apne guru k param bhakt k uper prahar jo mane kiye the , uska karmfal to mujhe bhi milna avashyak tha na.
Manushya sochte h ki unke karmo k dand k roop me jo m unhe kasht deta hu , uske mujhe aanand aata h .
Parantu vo ye ni samjhte ki jitne kasht m unhe deta hu , usse kayi guna pida mujhe swayam hoti h .
Isiliye to m kisi ko marg per lane se pahale use chetavani avashya deta hu mata , ki vo anuchit marg ko tyag uchit marg pe aajaye.
Devi chaya :- m bhi na kitni murkh hu , jise baato me swayam devaguru brihaspati ni hara paye , to m bhala kon hoti hu.
Ye bol devi chaya bhi shani k tan per oshadhi ka lep lagati h or fir kuch der unhe bhi vishram karwati h.
Fir sham tak karan or jyoti jag jate h to apne pas apni maa (devi chaya) ko dekh khushi se jhum uthe or unke gale lag khushi rote hue bole.
Karan :- mumma aap aagayi , aap usdin hume chod ker kyu chali gayi thi .
Jyoti :- ha mumma , hum ne aapko kitna miss kiya or ye aapke kapdo ko kya hua , ye ese kapde kyu .
Darasal ab devi chaya apne devi vale roop me hi thi, unhone apne kapde ni badle the , kyunki wakt aagaya tha ki ab karan or jyoti ko apna sach batane ka.
Tabhi kaksh me shani dev bhi aate h , jinhe dekh karan or jyoti unhe pranam kerte h.
Per shani dev un dono ko ashirwad dete hue , asha yani apni mata devi chaya ko pranam kerte h.
Jise dekh karan or jyoti dono hi heran ho jate h , tab shani dev bole.
Shani dev :- m janta hu putra , tumhare man me kayi prashna h , jinme se kuch ke uttar m tumhe deta hu
Putra jo tumhare samne abhi mojud h vo meri bhakt aasha ni , balki surya patni , arthat meri mata Devi chaya h, or mata ne hi us din tum dono ko us din sambhala tha
Ye sun to mano karan or jyoti mano jam se hi gaye , abhi jo thodi der pahale unke chahre pe khushi thi vo secondo me gayab ho gayi
Jise dekh devi chaya ko acha ni laga or unhone wapas se karan or jyoti ko sine se laga boli.
Devi chaya :- ha putra ye satya h ki m asha ni hu , parantu ye satya bhi ni h ki tum dono meri santan ni h ki tum dono meri santan ni ho .
Tum dono hi mere putra shani k hi ansh ho , is naate m tumhari bhi mata hui
Karan or jyoti hath jod :- dhanyawad devi, aapne hume sahi samay per sambhala or hume durbal hone se roka.
Devi chaya :- are abhi to kaha mane , tum dono bhi meri santan ho , bhala koi mata ko bhi dhanyawad kahata h , or ha ye devi ka sambhodan band kero , abse tum mujhe shani ki bhanti hi mata kaha karoge or jab bhi aavashyakata ho mera smaran ker lena , tumhari mata sadev tumhare liye upasthit rahegi.
Karan or jyoti :- ji mata.
Ye sun devi chaya muskurate hue apni bahe fela deti h or jisme karan or jyoti sama jate h.
Kuch der yuhi devi chaya ne karan or jyoti ko gale lagaye rakha fir wo sab alag hue.
Shani dev :- putra karan , ab samay aachuka h , karmfal pane ka.
Ye bol shani dev ne apna ek hath uper kiya or ek nili roshni k sath unke hath me nilmani aagayi .
Shani :- apne puraskar ko grahan kero putra.
Karan :- jo aagya prabhu.
Ye bol karan hath jod apni ankhe band ker leta h , jiske sath hi nilamani apne aap udker karan me sama gayi. Or usike sath kuch der tak karan ka sharir nile rang ki roshni se chamakta raha .
Fir dhire dhire karan samanya hone laga , tabhi usko fir se thodi kamjori si mahasus hui , lekin jyoti ne sambhal liya.
Shani dev gambhir swar me bole :- putra nilmani ko to tumne praapt ker liya h , parantu .
Jyoti :- parantu kya shani dev.
Shani dev :- parantu putri , nilmani ki shaktiya karan k sharir me dhire dhire jagrit hogi , jiske chalte ek mah tak karan apni baki shaktiyon ka prayog bhi bhali bhanti ni ker payega , wo lagbhag ek samanya manushy saman hi hoga.
Isliye putri tumhe karan ka vishesh dhyan rakhna hoga , karan ki suraksha ab tumhara dayitv h , kyunki aane wale samay me tum dono per , visheshkar karan pe sankat ke megh mandra rahe h , jinse keval tum hi karan ki raksha ker sakti ho
Isliye smaran rahe putri tumhara prem or karan k prati vishwas hi karan ki sabse badi shakti or kavach h , ise kabhi bhi khone mat dena.
Jyoti :- jesa aap kahe bhagwan , aaj tak mere bhai ne meri har sankat se bhalibhanti raksha ki h .
Ab mera samay aagaya h apne bhai ki raksha ka uttaradayitv nibhane ka ,jise me apne pure man se nibhaungi, mera prem or vishwas apne bhai k liye , us kailash ki tarah adig h bhagwan , jis per mahadev nivas kerte h .
Is vishwas ko is sansar ki koi bhi shakti khatam ni ker sakti.
Shani dev man me :- asha to meri bhi yahi h putri ki bhavishya me esa hi rahe.
Shani dev :- vese putra karan , tumne mujhe pahachana kese.
Karan muskurate hue :- prabhu aap sach me apne guru mahadev ki bhanti bhole h .
Apke gale me sthit is mala se hi mujhe aapki pahachan ho gayi thi prabhu.
Or ha bhagwan apko apne janmdivas ki hardik shubkamnaye .
Flashback.
Jab karan or jyoti padmanabh mandir jane ko teyar ho rahe the, tabhi unhe dhyan aaya ki aaj to shani amavasya h or sath me shani jayanti bhi.
Itna dhyan me aate hi dono bhai bahan pass k mojud shani mandir me gaye , jo aaj itne bade utsav k kaaran braham muhurat me hi khul chuka tha.
Vaha pahunche to un dono ne paya ki mandir to khul chuka h , lekin puja samagri ki koi bhi dukan abhi tak ni khuli to karan ne apni chutki bajayi or uske hath me puja ki sabhi samagri aagayi .
Arthath sarso ka tel , til , udad or shani dev se sambandhit sabhi samgri , jinke pese karan ne apni shaktiyo se hi band dukano k gale me rakh diye the.
Jyoti :- ye kya bhai , aapne mala to mangwayi hi ni.
Mala isliye ni aayi thi , kyunki us dukan me phulo ki mala mojud ni thi.
Tabhi jyoti ko idea aaya or usne mandir k bagiche se ful chun ker vahi beth ek mala banyi un fulo ki or dono bhai bahan mandir me jaker puja kerte h or shani dev ki murti per wo mala chada dete h
Ab shani dev to thare saral swabhav k , karan or jyoti ki bhakti bhav se chadayi hui mala unhonne turant swikar ker li or vo mala murti se gayab ho sidha shani dev k gale e aagayi thi
Or jab shani dev ne karan ko apni pahachan batane ko kaha to karan turant us mala ko pahachan gaya or uper se shani dev k vastra or rang roop dekh ker use ye baat confirm bhi ho gayi.
Flashback end.
Devi chaya :- manna padega , mera karan putra satya me hi kafi budhiman h
Shani dev :- aakhir ansh kiska h .
Devi chaya majak kerte hue :- mera .
Jiske sath sab hasne lage . Fir karan or jyoti ne shani dev se lotne ki aagya mangi.
Shani dev :- thik h putro , ab tum prasthan ker sakte ho or meri baat sadev smaran rakhna ki tum dono ka prem or ek jutta hi tumhari sabse badi shakti h.
Fir kuch bate devi chaya or shani dev ne karan or jyoti ko samjhayi or fir shani dev ne karan or jyoti ko ankhe band kerne ko bola .
Or kuch samay bad jab dono ne apni ankhe kholi , to unhone paya ki vo ab apne hotel k room me h.
Karan or jyoti abhi is yatra se thak chuke the , isliye wo kapde badal ker ek dusre ki baho me lipat ker so gaye .
Dharti lok k samay k anusar to unhe bas ek hi din alag rahna pada tha, parantu rasatal ka samay chakra dharti se bhin tha , jiske anusar wo pure ek hafte baad mile the or ek dusre ki baho me the .
Jis karan unhe parmanand ki anubhuti ho rahi thi , jiske karan unhe jald hi nind aagayi.
Wahi dusri or sonam , megha ,naina or kavya ko bhi ab chen aagaya tha , jiske liye unhone ishvar ko dhanywad kiya .
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
Stay tuned.
Shani dev ka apman kiye bina hi yudh jit liya jo sambhav tha aur Akhir kar karan ne nilmani hasil kar hi liya
Lekin bhai D2 aur naina ki ladai me maza nahi aya kuch jaldi hi khatam hoga
But apart from it update was fabulous bro
Keep going
Stone cold
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Awesome update bro
Shani dev ka apman kiye bina hi yudh jit liya jo sambhav tha aur Akhir kar karan ne nilmani hasil kar hi liya
Lekin bhai D2 aur naina ki ladai me maza nahi aya kuch jaldi hi khatam hoga
But apart from it update was fabulous bro
Keep going
Shani dev ka apman kiye bina hi yudh jit liya jo sambhav tha aur Akhir kar karan ne nilmani hasil kar hi liya
Lekin bhai D2 aur naina ki ladai me maza nahi aya kuch jaldi hi khatam hoga
But apart from it update was fabulous bro
Keep going
Hunterrrr69
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Harry rocks bahut hi umda shandar jabardust update
To Karan Nd Jyoti ne finally nilmani prapt krli
Aapne yudh Nd bhakti bhav ko bahut hi umda tarike se represent Kia
Lekin Aapne sharir tarike se suspense bhi create krdia q Harry Bhai that's a good writings skill
Naina Nd Preeti ne bhi Dracula ko mar dia Nd Jo hathiar Mila hai jarur uska smbndh SAMRAAT ki maut se Hoga
Finally 2 update aur first part aur khtm
I think aap next part main SAMRAAT Ka ant krenge both main Nd at last Naina KJ se milenge aur vohi end Hoga
It's a tricky think question akhir Naina ki maa ko ehsaas q hua KJ ki problem Ka iska answer second part main doge I thought
Overall a great update
Aapne yudh Nd bhakti bhav ko bahut hi umda tarike se represent Kia
Lekin Aapne sharir tarike se suspense bhi create krdia q Harry Bhai that's a good writings skill
Naina Nd Preeti ne bhi Dracula ko mar dia Nd Jo hathiar Mila hai jarur uska smbndh SAMRAAT ki maut se Hoga
Finally 2 update aur first part aur khtm
I think aap next part main SAMRAAT Ka ant krenge both main Nd at last Naina KJ se milenge aur vohi end Hoga
It's a tricky think question akhir Naina ki maa ko ehsaas q hua KJ ki problem Ka iska answer second part main doge I thought
Overall a great update
Jon123
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mast update h bhai
maza aa gya
is update ki jitni taarif ki jaye kam h
maza aa gya
is update ki jitni taarif ki jaye kam h