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Navgraho se ashirwad pane k baad jyoti or karan rohan or kaya k sath chal pada ghar ki or lekin ek baat to thi jo apni heroine ko heran ker rahi thi ki rohan to karan ko normal dekh heran tha , jis kaaran uske or karan k bich jhagda bhi hua tha dosto wala.


Fir sabhi khushi khushi chal pade apne ghar ki or rohan k kaagraj swaroop ki swari kerte hue.


Jyoti :- kaya ek baat to batao tumhe herani ni hui bhai ko normal dekh ker .


Kaya kuch ni bolti bas karan ki or dekhti h or karan kaya ki or usi waqt dono ki hasi fut padi.


Or dono haste hue ek dusre ko highfive dete h




Jyoti ye dekh herani se dono ko dekhti h or boli.


Jyoti halke gusse se :- kaya kamini iska matlab tu janti thi ki bhai natak ker rahe h, teri to m ye .


Ye kah ker jyoti kaya p tut padne hui lekin uska balance bigadne ko hui , karan ne use sambhala or bola.


Karan :- are shant meri fulam devi shant .


Jyoti :- aap to kuch bolo hi mat bhai , acha majak kiya domo best friends ne milker .


Ye bol ker jyoti ne fula liya.


Karan :- lo bhai ab gf se akele m milne m madad bestie ni keregi to or kon karega.

Kyu kaya.


Kaya karan k gal khichte hue :- ofcourse mere prince golu.


Jyoti jaha karan ko kaya dwara uske golu naam se pukare jane pe has padi wahi kaya ka esa kerna karan ko le gaya uski yaado m jiski mot ne karan k dil k ek kone aaj tak dard k sagar m dubaye hue tha.


Yani ki zoya ki.


Karan ko apna past yaad ane laga jab wo pahali baar jyoti k sath usse apni zoya se mila tha .


Wo uska jyoti k sath uski hasi majak ,


"Prince"


Ye sirf naam ni tha , ek emotion tha uske liye , jo uski pahali best friend uski Zoya ne diya tha or akser use isi naam se hi pukara kerti thi.


Or uska akhri shabd bhi yahi tha.


"Princeeeeeeeeeeeeeee"


Yahi dard bhari chik ek goli k aawaz k sath ek baaar fir uske kaano m gunj uthi.


Or karan bhi ni kah ker hadbada gaya , or wapas apne hosh m aaya . wo to shukr h ki usne ni kafi dhire bola tha or hava m udne ki wajah se shayad rohan jyoti or kaya ne bhi ni suni thi.


Lekin karan galat tha ki usr kisine suna ni , koi to tha ya thi , jo or koi ni wahi thi jiski yaad m karan kabristan gaya tha or jaha wo bhi waha milne aayi thi ,ha yani zoya, lekin is baar bhi karan use dekh na paya.


Kaya karan ko hilate hue :- sakha kaha kho gaye.


Karan :- kahi bhi to ni.


Kaya :- bachu bestie ne help to ker di , lekin wada yaad rakhna apni bestie ko date p le jane kaa.


Karan kaya ko ye baat batane se rukne ka ishara kerta raha lekin kaya ne baat puri ker hi di .


Fir kaya ko jab ahasas hua to jyoti ko


Jyoti :- acha bachu to ye baat hai aap milo mujhe m baatai hu aapko .


Ye bol jyoti ne halke se uske pet m mukka dhar diya.


Kaya dhime se :- lagta h sakha , jyoti ruth gayi firse ab kya karenge .


Karan haste huye :- are chinta mat kero sakhi , wo sirf majak ker rahi h.


Yu hi hasi majak kerte hue sabhi dost ghar pahunch gaye.


Ghar pahunch sabse pahale wo sabse najre bacha land ker apne apne clone ko wapas apne ander lete h.


Or jese hi karan apne clone ko apne ander wapas leta h to fir achanak se khilkhila ker hasne laga.


Jyoti :- kya baat h bhai ap achanK yu hasne kyu lage .


Karan :- ander to chalo gudiya khud hi pata chal jayega.


Ye bol karan jyoti or apne dosto k sath apne ghar m ghusa to usne paya ki ek tufaan uska hi intezaar ker raha tha.


"Kuttte aaj tu mere hatho se ni bachne wala".



Yahi ek garjti aawaz un sab k kano m padi.


Rohan :- lo bhai karan teri to gayi bhes pani m .


Karan haste hue. :- bhes pani m ni bhai , balki ab mere uper tut padne wali h


Abhi karan ne apni baat Puri hi ki thi ki ek aawaz uske kaan m padi jise sun wo hadbada gaya.


Kutte tune mujhe bhes bola.


Ye or koi ni shruti thi , jo uper se leker niche tak puri bhi bhigi hui thi, uske baal uljhe hue the , saaf najar aaraha tha ki kisi ne us bichari p pani dal diya tha , jab wo so rahi thi, kisi ne kya ye humare karan (clone) bhai sahab ka hi kam tha 😂😂😂


Karan :- are ni ni m ese kese bol sakta hu shruti , tu to meri pyari bahan h , meri tikhi mirchi .


Shrishti :- or ye tikhi mirchi tumhe kuch jyada hi tikhi lagne wali h big bro .


Ye bol shruti karan k uper jhapatne ko bhagi lekin karan bhi teyar tha wo bhi bhagne laga or shuru hui dono ki pakad pakdai.


Thodi der bhagha dodi k baad karan ko apni maa yani ki asha najar aayi jo abhi puja ghar se bahar aayi thi.


Karan apni ma k piche chupte hue :- mummy mummy , mujhe bachao is tikhi mirchi se.


Shruti shikayati andaaz me :- dekhiye na bhua is ghade ne aaj fir mujh per pani daal ker mujhe uthaya.


Asha shruti ki halat dekh halke se haste hue sh :- achaaa ...


Shruti roni surat bana :- bhuaaa aap bhi.


Asha hasna rok karan k kaan khichte hue :- kyu re badmash teri himmat kese hui meri bachi ko tang kerne ki .


Karan :- aahhh mummy chodo naa dard ho raha h , aage se esa ni hoga promise.


Asha karan ka kan chodte hue :- jo bola h wo yaad rakhna verna bahut pitayi lagaungi.


Karan :-ha bilkul mummy aage se aapki beti p pani ni dalunga 😂😂😂😂 balki usko hi pani m daal.


Ye bol karan shruti ki choti khich bhag gaya


Shruti :- kutte ab to tu gaya .


Ye bol wo fir uske piche bhagi.


Asha karan se :- ruk badmash


Kavya waha aate hue :- kya hua didi subah subah kyu dat rahi ho bacho ko , in bacho ki shararte or hasi majak hi to h is ghar ki asli ronak h , jinhone is ghar m wapas pran fuke h.


Asha :- baat to sahi h teri kavu , or bhagwan kare humare bache ese hi humesha Hasi Khushi mil jhul ker rahe , kisiki najar na lage unhe.


Kuch der ki bhagdod k baad karan kese n kese shant ker or maafi mang use apne room m bhejta h , or fir hall m sofe per jyoti k sath sofe per beth jata h.


Tab jyoti boli.


Jyoti :- bhai aapko ni lagta aap kuch bhul rahe h.


Karan :- kya bhul raha hu m gudiya.


Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas ek or ishara kerti h , jise dekh karan ki siti piti gul ho gayi , kyunki us taraf uski sona yani ki sonam khadi thi.


Or sirf khadi ni thi , uski ankho se ansu jhar jhar bah rahe the taklif or dard k mishran k sath, jise dekh karan k dil m esa dard utha ki mano jese kisi ne sine m khanjar ghop diye ho .


Karan issse pahale ki age kuch bole usse pahale hi sona waha se gusse se muh mod chali jati h.


Karan ,:- are sona sonaaa ruko to..


Karan nishahay ho jyoti ki taraf dekhta h madad ki aas me.


Jyoti nakhrile andaaz me :- meri taraf mat dekhiye , m kuch ni kernr wali , galti aapne ki h dandnayak ji to dand aapko hi bhugtna hoga hii hii .


Ye kahate haste hue jyoti waha se nikal gayi.


Wahi dusri or


Cosmic canon ki rays asma ko bahut ghahri chot pahunchayi thi , uski shadow huntress power ne use marne se to bacha liya , lekin jyoti ki vidhwanskari shakti se nirmit thi , jis kaaran uska prahar atyant ghatak tha.


Lekin karan ne apni healing power ka use ker use shaktihin hone se to bacha liya tha , lekin use apni shakti fully recover kerne m abhi samay lagna tha or use aaram ki sakht jarurat thi.


Or is samay wo wahi ker rahi thi , wo abhi so hi rahi thi ki uske samne wahi drishya or wahi ghatna uske sapna ban ker samne ane lagi thi.


Jab wo apni sheild se canon ko rokne ki kosish ker rahi thi , lekin wo jyada der tak use rok naa payi or sheild k tutne k sath hi wo lazer k dhakke se dur ja giri thibor lazer sidha ja ker seal ko todne lagi.


Asma ghayal thi , lekin usne himmat na hari or usne ladkhadate hue wapas sheild bana usko rokne ki koshis ki lekin sheild ek baar fir tut gayi.


Or asma fir uski chapet m aagayi , lekin asma ki bahaduri to dekho wo fir bhi piche ni hati or usne ray ko apne uper lena hi shuru ker diya , jise usko apar pida or kasht hone laga , use esa lag raha tha ki uska sharir kabhi bhi fat sakta h tabhi achanak.


Achanak ek highly advance mini missile aaker cannon se ja lagi or agle hi pal us canon k parkhache ud gaye.


Jiske dhamake k sath charo or dhua dhua ho gaya or asma bhi rays k rukne se dhadam se gir padi or hafne lagi herani se jab usne us disha ki or apna dhyan kedrit kiya to ek jani pahachani energy ek soul mahasus hui.


Asma herani or khushi se :- kya m sahi hu , kya ye tum ho naa jack.


Tabhi ek aawaz k sath dhus chatta h or samne aata h ek highly advance suit pahne udte hue ek ladka .


Ladka :- tumhara andaza kabhi galat ho sakta h huntress .


Ye kahate hue wo udta hua asma k pas aata h or use sambhalta h .


Asma jack k chahre p hath firate hue jese use mahasus ker rahi ho :- jack tum aagaye , tum ni jante mane , (hickicha k bat badlte hue ) mera matlab mane or bhai jan ne tumhe kitna miss kiya, kaha chale gaye the tum


Ye bol Asma jack k gale lag jati h , kuch jyada hi kasker jisse jack ashaj mahasus kerta h .


Jack alag ho :- tum thik to ho na asma , ye sab kese hua .


Asma jab sari baat batati h or bolti h.


Asma. Badi hi soft tune :- lekim ab mujhe koi chinta ni ab tum jo aa gaye ho na jack , ab hum firse ek team banke in sabko khatm ker denge .


Ye bol wo bade pyaar se jack k chare ko sahalane lagi , jisse javk or uncomfortable ho gaya or dur hote hue bola.


Jack :- esa ab possible ni h asma , ab mujhe jana hoga .


Ye bol wo waha se jane k liye uthne laga


Asma :- jack please esa mat kaho ,mana ki past m jo hua wo bahut galt hua , lekin is sansar ko is multiverse ko fir ek baar humari jarurat h , eße m tum kese ja sakte ho.


Jack :- jid mat kero asma ye bat tum bhi janti ho ki m wapas ni lotne wala , wo to mujhe tumhari jan khatrw m hone ka signal mila jab m aaya , verna in sabse ab mera koi lena dena ni , mujhe ab jane do.


Asma :- ni jack ab m tumhe wapas kahi ni jane dungi


Jack man me :- maaf kerna asma lekin tumne mujhe ye kerne ko majbur ker diya h.


Ye sochne k sath hi uske suit k hath se ek pin nikal asma ki gardan m lag gayi or use behoshi chane lagi .


Or jack udte hue jane laga ,


Asma behosh hote hue :- ruk jaoooo jackkkkkkkkkkl


Yahi chilate hue wo nind se jag gayi or rone lagi


Asma ki chikh sun karan waha aya or asma ko shant kerwane laga .


Asma karan k chahre ko chu use pahachante hue :- bhaijan bhai jan hume jack ko dhundna hoga , wo hume ese wapas chod ker ni ja sakta .


Karan :- asu , meri gudiya shant ho ja , m tumhare jajbato ko bhali bhanti samjhta hu , per tum khud hi socho , aJ jack k aane se ek baat to saaf ho gayi hai ki jack ka humari life m wapas aane ki ek ummid abhi jinda h or hume firse pure jor shor se apne pryaso ka aarmbh ker dena chahiye.


Asma :- aapne thik kaha bhai , hum apni ji jan laga denge jack ko khojne m .


Per seal ka kya bhai us canon ko bhale hi nasht ker diya gaya h lekin usne seal ko kafi bhari nuksan pahunchaya h.


Karan :- tum seal ki chinta mat kero asu filhal k liye mane use apni mantra shaktiyo dwara wapas thik to ker diya lekin abhi uski power pahale jese hone m samay lagega ese m uski security ki jimmedari ab mane khud hi lunga.


Karan apne man me :- pret raj .


Tabhi samne pret raj prakat ho jate h , jinki mojudgi mahasur ker asma satar ho apni huntress form m aajati h , mano jese usne pretraj ko apna dushman man liya ho.


Karan :- shant ho jao asu , ye dushman ni humare sathi h.


Fir karan asma or pretraj ko ek dusre se introduce kerwata h or sath m portal of realms ki jimmedari sompte hue use wo sakht nirdesh deta h ki bina permission k ager waha jo koi aaye use bejijhak mot k ghat utar de.


Wahi dusri or


Location :- Patal lok.


Prathvi se lotne k baad humesha ki tarah apni har se bhokhlaya hua vp or uska bhai apne hi mahal m tod fod ker rahe the.


Vp :- aaahgggg Ek baar fir hum un devtao or uske us chokre se har gaye .


Saya :- or sharm se to dub marne ki baat to ye h ki jise hume apne hatho se marna tha , ulta usne hi hume mukt kera humpe upkaar ker hume na keval hume apmanit kiya , balki vidambna to dekho hume na keval uski sahayata kerni padi apitu vijay k baad ashirwad bhi deker arahe h hum use


Vp :- tumne sahi kaha bhrataa , or is apnan ka pratishodh to hum leker hi rahenge , chalo abhi se ek nayi yozna banana aarambh kerte h


Saya :- ni bhrata vp , ab hum esa kuch ni karenge filhal , jante ho kyu hum har baar harte h , kyuki har baar hum adhirta se yojna bana galat samay pe uspe prahar kerte h , jab use humare har prahar ka utter mil jata h.


Lekin is baar hum apni ye galti ni doharyenge, is baar hum dhairya se kam leker intezar kerenge sahi samay aane ka or jab wo sahi samay aayega to hum esa jordar prahar karenge, jisse bachna us karan k liye kathin hi ni asambhav bhi hoga.


Ye bol vo saya hasne laga or sath m vp bhi.


Wahi dusri or


Har ki bhoklahat se tadafne wale sirf ye dono hi ni the , balki wo bhi tha jiske kaaran asma ki jan jate jate rahi or wo or koi ni shera tha.


Gusse se wo bhi pagal hue ja raha tha or sath m tod fod khud bhi ker raha tha apne office m .


Lekin ye kya shera jo tod fod ki thi , wo to kuch bhi ni thi uske aage jis tabahi ko dekh shera pagla gaya tha.


Hua darasl ye tha ki jack ne na keval shera ko canon uda dali thi , balki sath m usne canon jo shera k main computer se judi hui thi , uske jariye usne uske main computer m ek esa virys bhi pahucha diya tha ki jiske agle pal hi uska na keval sara data nasht ho gaya balki uska sara computer system hi blast ker gaya.


Shera gusse se chilate hue :- kisne kisne kiya ye , kiski ye mazal jisne shera k kaam m tang adayi chodunga ni m use..


(Ek jagah beth hafte hue )Kitna karib tha m apne lakshya k , lekin ek blast ne sari mahanat p pani fer diya aakhir kon tha wo.


(Apni assistant jesmine ko waha asta dekh) jesmine kuch pata laga ki kon tha wo kamina jisne varsho ki mahanat yani humare data ko barbaad ker dala.


Jesmine :- i m sorry sir, per abhi tak m uska koi pata ni laga payi , per sir don't worry jald hi uska pata laga usko m nark ki yatra pe bhej dungi.


Shera :- ni ye kam tum ni , khud m karunga , lekin ye samjh ni aaraha ki bina deta or knowledge k ab hum aage kya karenge


Jesmine :- don't fear when jesmine here sir , mujhe esi hi kisi situation ka andaza pahale se hi tha , isliye mane pahale hi sab data ka backup ready ker liya tha , asiye mere sath.


Fir jesmine shera ko ek jagah leke jati h , jaha pahunchte hi shera khushi se uchal pada kyu ki us room m same to same vesa hi computer tha jesa abhi nasht hua tha , with same data.


Shera jesmine ko khich k apni baho m lete hue use chum leta h or bola.


Shera :- shabas jesmine isliye to tum meri sanse favourite ho , i love ur passion for yr work yaar.


Jesmine :- sir abhi ek khushkhabri or h sir , mane uska bhi pata laga liya h jiska aapne mujhe morning m kaha tha.


Shera :- are wah to chalo der kis baat ki.


Ye bol shera or jesmine ek spacecraft m beth teleport ho pahunch jate h space m or waha jaker apmi tracter beam ka use ker wo use ker kisiko space se apni ship m khich lete h


Jo koi chij ni balki ek shaks tha , shaks bole to koi shaks ni ek vishalakar daitya hi kah lo use kyunki uska height 7.5 feet thi.


Shaks ghayal avastha me tha wo shera se puchta h .


Shaks :- kon ho tum or tumne mujhe kis prayojan k liye bachaya.


Shera :- i like ur attitude, sidha mudde ki baat p aaye ho , to suno dost mera bhi vahi uddeshya h jo ki tumhara h wo h dandnayak se badla .


Hum dono ka dushman ek hi h to kyu na tum meri team ko joinn ker lo.


Shaks :- team , kesi team


ek esi team jo na keval damdnayak or uske sathiyo ko khatam keregi , balki multiverse pe raj karegi , bolo dost banoge humari team ka hisaa


Shaks kuch sochte hue :- dushman ka dushman apna dost hota h , thik h dost m tumhari team join kerne ko teyar hu per meri ek shart h us dn ko m hi apne hatho se marunga.


Shera muskurate hue :- manzoor hai or shaddow council m tumgara swagat h bhandasur.


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Sham ka samay tha or karan chat p khada kese sonam ko manaya jaye is bare m soch hi raha tha ki tabhi Shivani waha aati.


Shivani :- bhaiya bhaiya.


Karan :- ha princess bolo kya baat h.


Shivani :- bhaiya aapko or jyoti didi ko taiji bula rahi h aapke room m


Karan man me :- maa ko is samay humse kya kaam aagaya , chalo chal ker dekhte h.


5 min baad karan or jyoti apne kamre m upasthit hote h or fir asha bhi vaha aati h or room ko band ker pahale lock lagati h or fir wo jo kerti h uski ummid dono bhai bahan ne filhal to bilkul bhi ni ki thi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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Bahut hi behtreen update. Agar kisi tarah Zoya ko waapas laya jaaye to kahani mein aur bhi maza aa jayega. Ye Shera ka kaam bhi ab tammam hona chahiye, agar saare vilein zinda rahenge to kahani boring ho jaayegi. Fantastic update.
 

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lovely update ..jyoty ko apne bachpan ke din yaad aa gaye jab karan ne yaddasht jaane ka natak kiya tha .
preety bhi theek nahi kar paayi karan ko .
karan natak hi kar raha tha apni behan ko satane ke liye ye baadme pata chala .
naina ke mann me abhi bhi nafrat bhari padi hai karan ke liye .ab naina ko kya hint mila aur wo kya karna chahti hai dekhte hai .
achcha hua ki asma ko kuch hua nahi sirf behosh thi .shera aur jack aage kya karenge 🤔..

lohitang ka ghamand khatm ho gaya aur jyoty ke saamne hasth jodne se wo theek bhi ho gaya .
 
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Navgraho se ashirwad pane k baad jyoti or karan rohan or kaya k sath chal pada ghar ki or lekin ek baat to thi jo apni heroine ko heran ker rahi thi ki rohan to karan ko normal dekh heran tha , jis kaaran uske or karan k bich jhagda bhi hua tha dosto wala.


Fir sabhi khushi khushi chal pade apne ghar ki or rohan k kaagraj swaroop ki swari kerte hue.


Jyoti :- kaya ek baat to batao tumhe herani ni hui bhai ko normal dekh ker .


Kaya kuch ni bolti bas karan ki or dekhti h or karan kaya ki or usi waqt dono ki hasi fut padi.


Or dono haste hue ek dusre ko highfive dete h




Jyoti ye dekh herani se dono ko dekhti h or boli.


Jyoti halke gusse se :- kaya kamini iska matlab tu janti thi ki bhai natak ker rahe h, teri to m ye .


Ye kah ker jyoti kaya p tut padne hui lekin uska balance bigadne ko hui , karan ne use sambhala or bola.


Karan :- are shant meri fulam devi shant .


Jyoti :- aap to kuch bolo hi mat bhai , acha majak kiya domo best friends ne milker .


Ye bol ker jyoti ne fula liya.


Karan :- lo bhai ab gf se akele m milne m madad bestie ni keregi to or kon karega.

Kyu kaya.


Kaya karan k gal khichte hue :- ofcourse mere prince golu.


Jyoti jaha karan ko kaya dwara uske golu naam se pukare jane pe has padi wahi kaya ka esa kerna karan ko le gaya uski yaado m jiski mot ne karan k dil k ek kone aaj tak dard k sagar m dubaye hue tha.


Yani ki zoya ki.


Karan ko apna past yaad ane laga jab wo pahali baar jyoti k sath usse apni zoya se mila tha .


Wo uska jyoti k sath uski hasi majak ,


"Prince"


Ye sirf naam ni tha , ek emotion tha uske liye , jo uski pahali best friend uski Zoya ne diya tha or akser use isi naam se hi pukara kerti thi.


Or uska akhri shabd bhi yahi tha.


"Princeeeeeeeeeeeeeee"


Yahi dard bhari chik ek goli k aawaz k sath ek baaar fir uske kaano m gunj uthi.


Or karan bhi ni kah ker hadbada gaya , or wapas apne hosh m aaya . wo to shukr h ki usne ni kafi dhire bola tha or hava m udne ki wajah se shayad rohan jyoti or kaya ne bhi ni suni thi.


Lekin karan galat tha ki usr kisine suna ni , koi to tha ya thi , jo or koi ni wahi thi jiski yaad m karan kabristan gaya tha or jaha wo bhi waha milne aayi thi ,ha yani zoya, lekin is baar bhi karan use dekh na paya.


Kaya karan ko hilate hue :- sakha kaha kho gaye.


Karan :- kahi bhi to ni.


Kaya :- bachu bestie ne help to ker di , lekin wada yaad rakhna apni bestie ko date p le jane kaa.


Karan kaya ko ye baat batane se rukne ka ishara kerta raha lekin kaya ne baat puri ker hi di .


Fir kaya ko jab ahasas hua to jyoti ko


Jyoti :- acha bachu to ye baat hai aap milo mujhe m baatai hu aapko .


Ye bol jyoti ne halke se uske pet m mukka dhar diya.


Kaya dhime se :- lagta h sakha , jyoti ruth gayi firse ab kya karenge .


Karan haste huye :- are chinta mat kero sakhi , wo sirf majak ker rahi h.


Yu hi hasi majak kerte hue sabhi dost ghar pahunch gaye.


Ghar pahunch sabse pahale wo sabse najre bacha land ker apne apne clone ko wapas apne ander lete h.


Or jese hi karan apne clone ko apne ander wapas leta h to fir achanak se khilkhila ker hasne laga.


Jyoti :- kya baat h bhai ap achanK yu hasne kyu lage .


Karan :- ander to chalo gudiya khud hi pata chal jayega.


Ye bol karan jyoti or apne dosto k sath apne ghar m ghusa to usne paya ki ek tufaan uska hi intezaar ker raha tha.


"Kuttte aaj tu mere hatho se ni bachne wala".



Yahi ek garjti aawaz un sab k kano m padi.


Rohan :- lo bhai karan teri to gayi bhes pani m .


Karan haste hue. :- bhes pani m ni bhai , balki ab mere uper tut padne wali h


Abhi karan ne apni baat Puri hi ki thi ki ek aawaz uske kaan m padi jise sun wo hadbada gaya.


Kutte tune mujhe bhes bola.


Ye or koi ni shruti thi , jo uper se leker niche tak puri bhi bhigi hui thi, uske baal uljhe hue the , saaf najar aaraha tha ki kisi ne us bichari p pani dal diya tha , jab wo so rahi thi, kisi ne kya ye humare karan (clone) bhai sahab ka hi kam tha 😂😂😂


Karan :- are ni ni m ese kese bol sakta hu shruti , tu to meri pyari bahan h , meri tikhi mirchi .


Shrishti :- or ye tikhi mirchi tumhe kuch jyada hi tikhi lagne wali h big bro .


Ye bol shruti karan k uper jhapatne ko bhagi lekin karan bhi teyar tha wo bhi bhagne laga or shuru hui dono ki pakad pakdai.


Thodi der bhagha dodi k baad karan ko apni maa yani ki asha najar aayi jo abhi puja ghar se bahar aayi thi.


Karan apni ma k piche chupte hue :- mummy mummy , mujhe bachao is tikhi mirchi se.


Shruti shikayati andaaz me :- dekhiye na bhua is ghade ne aaj fir mujh per pani daal ker mujhe uthaya.


Asha shruti ki halat dekh halke se haste hue sh :- achaaa ...


Shruti roni surat bana :- bhuaaa aap bhi.


Asha hasna rok karan k kaan khichte hue :- kyu re badmash teri himmat kese hui meri bachi ko tang kerne ki .


Karan :- aahhh mummy chodo naa dard ho raha h , aage se esa ni hoga promise.


Asha karan ka kan chodte hue :- jo bola h wo yaad rakhna verna bahut pitayi lagaungi.


Karan :-ha bilkul mummy aage se aapki beti p pani ni dalunga 😂😂😂😂 balki usko hi pani m daal.


Ye bol karan shruti ki choti khich bhag gaya


Shruti :- kutte ab to tu gaya .


Ye bol wo fir uske piche bhagi.


Asha karan se :- ruk badmash


Kavya waha aate hue :- kya hua didi subah subah kyu dat rahi ho bacho ko , in bacho ki shararte or hasi majak hi to h is ghar ki asli ronak h , jinhone is ghar m wapas pran fuke h.


Asha :- baat to sahi h teri kavu , or bhagwan kare humare bache ese hi humesha Hasi Khushi mil jhul ker rahe , kisiki najar na lage unhe.


Kuch der ki bhagdod k baad karan kese n kese shant ker or maafi mang use apne room m bhejta h , or fir hall m sofe per jyoti k sath sofe per beth jata h.


Tab jyoti boli.


Jyoti :- bhai aapko ni lagta aap kuch bhul rahe h.


Karan :- kya bhul raha hu m gudiya.


Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas ek or ishara kerti h , jise dekh karan ki siti piti gul ho gayi , kyunki us taraf uski sona yani ki sonam khadi thi.


Or sirf khadi ni thi , uski ankho se ansu jhar jhar bah rahe the taklif or dard k mishran k sath, jise dekh karan k dil m esa dard utha ki mano jese kisi ne sine m khanjar ghop diye ho .


Karan issse pahale ki age kuch bole usse pahale hi sona waha se gusse se muh mod chali jati h.


Karan ,:- are sona sonaaa ruko to..


Karan nishahay ho jyoti ki taraf dekhta h madad ki aas me.


Jyoti nakhrile andaaz me :- meri taraf mat dekhiye , m kuch ni kernr wali , galti aapne ki h dandnayak ji to dand aapko hi bhugtna hoga hii hii .


Ye kahate haste hue jyoti waha se nikal gayi.


Wahi dusri or


Cosmic canon ki rays asma ko bahut ghahri chot pahunchayi thi , uski shadow huntress power ne use marne se to bacha liya , lekin jyoti ki vidhwanskari shakti se nirmit thi , jis kaaran uska prahar atyant ghatak tha.


Lekin karan ne apni healing power ka use ker use shaktihin hone se to bacha liya tha , lekin use apni shakti fully recover kerne m abhi samay lagna tha or use aaram ki sakht jarurat thi.


Or is samay wo wahi ker rahi thi , wo abhi so hi rahi thi ki uske samne wahi drishya or wahi ghatna uske sapna ban ker samne ane lagi thi.


Jab wo apni sheild se canon ko rokne ki kosish ker rahi thi , lekin wo jyada der tak use rok naa payi or sheild k tutne k sath hi wo lazer k dhakke se dur ja giri thibor lazer sidha ja ker seal ko todne lagi.


Asma ghayal thi , lekin usne himmat na hari or usne ladkhadate hue wapas sheild bana usko rokne ki koshis ki lekin sheild ek baar fir tut gayi.


Or asma fir uski chapet m aagayi , lekin asma ki bahaduri to dekho wo fir bhi piche ni hati or usne ray ko apne uper lena hi shuru ker diya , jise usko apar pida or kasht hone laga , use esa lag raha tha ki uska sharir kabhi bhi fat sakta h tabhi achanak.


Achanak ek highly advance mini missile aaker cannon se ja lagi or agle hi pal us canon k parkhache ud gaye.


Jiske dhamake k sath charo or dhua dhua ho gaya or asma bhi rays k rukne se dhadam se gir padi or hafne lagi herani se jab usne us disha ki or apna dhyan kedrit kiya to ek jani pahachani energy ek soul mahasus hui.


Asma herani or khushi se :- kya m sahi hu , kya ye tum ho naa jack.


Tabhi ek aawaz k sath dhus chatta h or samne aata h ek highly advance suit pahne udte hue ek ladka .


Ladka :- tumhara andaza kabhi galat ho sakta h huntress .


Ye kahate hue wo udta hua asma k pas aata h or use sambhalta h .


Asma jack k chahre p hath firate hue jese use mahasus ker rahi ho :- jack tum aagaye , tum ni jante mane , (hickicha k bat badlte hue ) mera matlab mane or bhai jan ne tumhe kitna miss kiya, kaha chale gaye the tum


Ye bol Asma jack k gale lag jati h , kuch jyada hi kasker jisse jack ashaj mahasus kerta h .


Jack alag ho :- tum thik to ho na asma , ye sab kese hua .


Asma jab sari baat batati h or bolti h.


Asma. Badi hi soft tune :- lekim ab mujhe koi chinta ni ab tum jo aa gaye ho na jack , ab hum firse ek team banke in sabko khatm ker denge .


Ye bol wo bade pyaar se jack k chare ko sahalane lagi , jisse javk or uncomfortable ho gaya or dur hote hue bola.


Jack :- esa ab possible ni h asma , ab mujhe jana hoga .


Ye bol wo waha se jane k liye uthne laga


Asma :- jack please esa mat kaho ,mana ki past m jo hua wo bahut galt hua , lekin is sansar ko is multiverse ko fir ek baar humari jarurat h , eße m tum kese ja sakte ho.


Jack :- jid mat kero asma ye bat tum bhi janti ho ki m wapas ni lotne wala , wo to mujhe tumhari jan khatrw m hone ka signal mila jab m aaya , verna in sabse ab mera koi lena dena ni , mujhe ab jane do.


Asma :- ni jack ab m tumhe wapas kahi ni jane dungi


Jack man me :- maaf kerna asma lekin tumne mujhe ye kerne ko majbur ker diya h.


Ye sochne k sath hi uske suit k hath se ek pin nikal asma ki gardan m lag gayi or use behoshi chane lagi .


Or jack udte hue jane laga ,


Asma behosh hote hue :- ruk jaoooo jackkkkkkkkkkl


Yahi chilate hue wo nind se jag gayi or rone lagi


Asma ki chikh sun karan waha aya or asma ko shant kerwane laga .


Asma karan k chahre ko chu use pahachante hue :- bhaijan bhai jan hume jack ko dhundna hoga , wo hume ese wapas chod ker ni ja sakta .


Karan :- asu , meri gudiya shant ho ja , m tumhare jajbato ko bhali bhanti samjhta hu , per tum khud hi socho , aJ jack k aane se ek baat to saaf ho gayi hai ki jack ka humari life m wapas aane ki ek ummid abhi jinda h or hume firse pure jor shor se apne pryaso ka aarmbh ker dena chahiye.


Asma :- aapne thik kaha bhai , hum apni ji jan laga denge jack ko khojne m .


Per seal ka kya bhai us canon ko bhale hi nasht ker diya gaya h lekin usne seal ko kafi bhari nuksan pahunchaya h.


Karan :- tum seal ki chinta mat kero asu filhal k liye mane use apni mantra shaktiyo dwara wapas thik to ker diya lekin abhi uski power pahale jese hone m samay lagega ese m uski security ki jimmedari ab mane khud hi lunga.


Karan apne man me :- pret raj .


Tabhi samne pret raj prakat ho jate h , jinki mojudgi mahasur ker asma satar ho apni huntress form m aajati h , mano jese usne pretraj ko apna dushman man liya ho.


Karan :- shant ho jao asu , ye dushman ni humare sathi h.


Fir karan asma or pretraj ko ek dusre se introduce kerwata h or sath m portal of realms ki jimmedari sompte hue use wo sakht nirdesh deta h ki bina permission k ager waha jo koi aaye use bejijhak mot k ghat utar de.


Wahi dusri or


Location :- Patal lok.


Prathvi se lotne k baad humesha ki tarah apni har se bhokhlaya hua vp or uska bhai apne hi mahal m tod fod ker rahe the.


Vp :- aaahgggg Ek baar fir hum un devtao or uske us chokre se har gaye .


Saya :- or sharm se to dub marne ki baat to ye h ki jise hume apne hatho se marna tha , ulta usne hi hume mukt kera humpe upkaar ker hume na keval hume apmanit kiya , balki vidambna to dekho hume na keval uski sahayata kerni padi apitu vijay k baad ashirwad bhi deker arahe h hum use


Vp :- tumne sahi kaha bhrataa , or is apnan ka pratishodh to hum leker hi rahenge , chalo abhi se ek nayi yozna banana aarambh kerte h


Saya :- ni bhrata vp , ab hum esa kuch ni karenge filhal , jante ho kyu hum har baar harte h , kyuki har baar hum adhirta se yojna bana galat samay pe uspe prahar kerte h , jab use humare har prahar ka utter mil jata h.


Lekin is baar hum apni ye galti ni doharyenge, is baar hum dhairya se kam leker intezar kerenge sahi samay aane ka or jab wo sahi samay aayega to hum esa jordar prahar karenge, jisse bachna us karan k liye kathin hi ni asambhav bhi hoga.


Ye bol vo saya hasne laga or sath m vp bhi.


Wahi dusri or


Har ki bhoklahat se tadafne wale sirf ye dono hi ni the , balki wo bhi tha jiske kaaran asma ki jan jate jate rahi or wo or koi ni shera tha.


Gusse se wo bhi pagal hue ja raha tha or sath m tod fod khud bhi ker raha tha apne office m .


Lekin ye kya shera jo tod fod ki thi , wo to kuch bhi ni thi uske aage jis tabahi ko dekh shera pagla gaya tha.


Hua darasl ye tha ki jack ne na keval shera ko canon uda dali thi , balki sath m usne canon jo shera k main computer se judi hui thi , uske jariye usne uske main computer m ek esa virys bhi pahucha diya tha ki jiske agle pal hi uska na keval sara data nasht ho gaya balki uska sara computer system hi blast ker gaya.


Shera gusse se chilate hue :- kisne kisne kiya ye , kiski ye mazal jisne shera k kaam m tang adayi chodunga ni m use..


(Ek jagah beth hafte hue )Kitna karib tha m apne lakshya k , lekin ek blast ne sari mahanat p pani fer diya aakhir kon tha wo.


(Apni assistant jesmine ko waha asta dekh) jesmine kuch pata laga ki kon tha wo kamina jisne varsho ki mahanat yani humare data ko barbaad ker dala.


Jesmine :- i m sorry sir, per abhi tak m uska koi pata ni laga payi , per sir don't worry jald hi uska pata laga usko m nark ki yatra pe bhej dungi.


Shera :- ni ye kam tum ni , khud m karunga , lekin ye samjh ni aaraha ki bina deta or knowledge k ab hum aage kya karenge


Jesmine :- don't fear when jesmine here sir , mujhe esi hi kisi situation ka andaza pahale se hi tha , isliye mane pahale hi sab data ka backup ready ker liya tha , asiye mere sath.


Fir jesmine shera ko ek jagah leke jati h , jaha pahunchte hi shera khushi se uchal pada kyu ki us room m same to same vesa hi computer tha jesa abhi nasht hua tha , with same data.


Shera jesmine ko khich k apni baho m lete hue use chum leta h or bola.


Shera :- shabas jesmine isliye to tum meri sanse favourite ho , i love ur passion for yr work yaar.


Jesmine :- sir abhi ek khushkhabri or h sir , mane uska bhi pata laga liya h jiska aapne mujhe morning m kaha tha.


Shera :- are wah to chalo der kis baat ki.


Ye bol shera or jesmine ek spacecraft m beth teleport ho pahunch jate h space m or waha jaker apmi tracter beam ka use ker wo use ker kisiko space se apni ship m khich lete h


Jo koi chij ni balki ek shaks tha , shaks bole to koi shaks ni ek vishalakar daitya hi kah lo use kyunki uska height 7.5 feet thi.


Shaks ghayal avastha me tha wo shera se puchta h .


Shaks :- kon ho tum or tumne mujhe kis prayojan k liye bachaya.


Shera :- i like ur attitude, sidha mudde ki baat p aaye ho , to suno dost mera bhi vahi uddeshya h jo ki tumhara h wo h dandnayak se badla .


Hum dono ka dushman ek hi h to kyu na tum meri team ko joinn ker lo.


Shaks :- team , kesi team


ek esi team jo na keval damdnayak or uske sathiyo ko khatam keregi , balki multiverse pe raj karegi , bolo dost banoge humari team ka hisaa


Shaks kuch sochte hue :- dushman ka dushman apna dost hota h , thik h dost m tumhari team join kerne ko teyar hu per meri ek shart h us dn ko m hi apne hatho se marunga.


Shera muskurate hue :- manzoor hai or shaddow council m tumgara swagat h bhandasur.


Back to the hero


Sham ka samay tha or karan chat p khada kese sonam ko manaya jaye is bare m soch hi raha tha ki tabhi Shivani waha aati.


Shivani :- bhaiya bhaiya.


Karan :- ha princess bolo kya baat h.


Shivani :- bhaiya aapko or jyoti didi ko taiji bula rahi h aapke room m


Karan man me :- maa ko is samay humse kya kaam aagaya , chalo chal ker dekhte h.


5 min baad karan or jyoti apne kamre m upasthit hote h or fir asha bhi vaha aati h or room ko band ker pahale lock lagati h or fir wo jo kerti h uski ummid dono bhai bahan ne filhal to bilkul bhi ni ki thi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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nice update ..karan ke clone ne kuch jyada hi dhamal macha rakhi thi ghar me 🤣..
karan ko zoya ki yaad aa gayi jab kaya ne usko golu kaha tha .aisa kya tha past me jisko karan yaad karke dukhi hota rehta hai 🤔..

asma ko yaad aaya ki kaise jack ne canon tabah kiya par asma ke saath rehne se mana kar diya .aisa lagta hai asma pyar karti hai jack se par jack nahi 🤔.
shera to baukhala gaya tha canon ke tootne se aur computer ke destroy hone se par jasmine wakai bahut chalak hai jisne sab data ka back up rakha tha .
aur ye bhandasur ko dhundkar apne saath mila liya shera ne .

saya aur vp apni haar se gusse me hai aur koi nayi yojna banane ki soch rahe hai ,par saya ne sahi kaha ki jaldbaji me kuch nahi karna hai warna karan se jeet nahi sakte .
 

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Navgraho se ashirwad pane k baad jyoti or karan rohan or kaya k sath chal pada ghar ki or lekin ek baat to thi jo apni heroine ko heran ker rahi thi ki rohan to karan ko normal dekh heran tha , jis kaaran uske or karan k bich jhagda bhi hua tha dosto wala.


Fir sabhi khushi khushi chal pade apne ghar ki or rohan k kaagraj swaroop ki swari kerte hue.


Jyoti :- kaya ek baat to batao tumhe herani ni hui bhai ko normal dekh ker .


Kaya kuch ni bolti bas karan ki or dekhti h or karan kaya ki or usi waqt dono ki hasi fut padi.


Or dono haste hue ek dusre ko highfive dete h




Jyoti ye dekh herani se dono ko dekhti h or boli.


Jyoti halke gusse se :- kaya kamini iska matlab tu janti thi ki bhai natak ker rahe h, teri to m ye .


Ye kah ker jyoti kaya p tut padne hui lekin uska balance bigadne ko hui , karan ne use sambhala or bola.


Karan :- are shant meri fulam devi shant .


Jyoti :- aap to kuch bolo hi mat bhai , acha majak kiya domo best friends ne milker .


Ye bol ker jyoti ne fula liya.


Karan :- lo bhai ab gf se akele m milne m madad bestie ni keregi to or kon karega.

Kyu kaya.


Kaya karan k gal khichte hue :- ofcourse mere prince golu.


Jyoti jaha karan ko kaya dwara uske golu naam se pukare jane pe has padi wahi kaya ka esa kerna karan ko le gaya uski yaado m jiski mot ne karan k dil k ek kone aaj tak dard k sagar m dubaye hue tha.


Yani ki zoya ki.


Karan ko apna past yaad ane laga jab wo pahali baar jyoti k sath usse apni zoya se mila tha .


Wo uska jyoti k sath uski hasi majak ,


"Prince"


Ye sirf naam ni tha , ek emotion tha uske liye , jo uski pahali best friend uski Zoya ne diya tha or akser use isi naam se hi pukara kerti thi.


Or uska akhri shabd bhi yahi tha.


"Princeeeeeeeeeeeeeee"


Yahi dard bhari chik ek goli k aawaz k sath ek baaar fir uske kaano m gunj uthi.


Or karan bhi ni kah ker hadbada gaya , or wapas apne hosh m aaya . wo to shukr h ki usne ni kafi dhire bola tha or hava m udne ki wajah se shayad rohan jyoti or kaya ne bhi ni suni thi.


Lekin karan galat tha ki usr kisine suna ni , koi to tha ya thi , jo or koi ni wahi thi jiski yaad m karan kabristan gaya tha or jaha wo bhi waha milne aayi thi ,ha yani zoya, lekin is baar bhi karan use dekh na paya.


Kaya karan ko hilate hue :- sakha kaha kho gaye.


Karan :- kahi bhi to ni.


Kaya :- bachu bestie ne help to ker di , lekin wada yaad rakhna apni bestie ko date p le jane kaa.


Karan kaya ko ye baat batane se rukne ka ishara kerta raha lekin kaya ne baat puri ker hi di .


Fir kaya ko jab ahasas hua to jyoti ko


Jyoti :- acha bachu to ye baat hai aap milo mujhe m baatai hu aapko .


Ye bol jyoti ne halke se uske pet m mukka dhar diya.


Kaya dhime se :- lagta h sakha , jyoti ruth gayi firse ab kya karenge .


Karan haste huye :- are chinta mat kero sakhi , wo sirf majak ker rahi h.


Yu hi hasi majak kerte hue sabhi dost ghar pahunch gaye.


Ghar pahunch sabse pahale wo sabse najre bacha land ker apne apne clone ko wapas apne ander lete h.


Or jese hi karan apne clone ko apne ander wapas leta h to fir achanak se khilkhila ker hasne laga.


Jyoti :- kya baat h bhai ap achanK yu hasne kyu lage .


Karan :- ander to chalo gudiya khud hi pata chal jayega.


Ye bol karan jyoti or apne dosto k sath apne ghar m ghusa to usne paya ki ek tufaan uska hi intezaar ker raha tha.


"Kuttte aaj tu mere hatho se ni bachne wala".



Yahi ek garjti aawaz un sab k kano m padi.


Rohan :- lo bhai karan teri to gayi bhes pani m .


Karan haste hue. :- bhes pani m ni bhai , balki ab mere uper tut padne wali h


Abhi karan ne apni baat Puri hi ki thi ki ek aawaz uske kaan m padi jise sun wo hadbada gaya.


Kutte tune mujhe bhes bola.


Ye or koi ni shruti thi , jo uper se leker niche tak puri bhi bhigi hui thi, uske baal uljhe hue the , saaf najar aaraha tha ki kisi ne us bichari p pani dal diya tha , jab wo so rahi thi, kisi ne kya ye humare karan (clone) bhai sahab ka hi kam tha 😂😂😂


Karan :- are ni ni m ese kese bol sakta hu shruti , tu to meri pyari bahan h , meri tikhi mirchi .


Shrishti :- or ye tikhi mirchi tumhe kuch jyada hi tikhi lagne wali h big bro .


Ye bol shruti karan k uper jhapatne ko bhagi lekin karan bhi teyar tha wo bhi bhagne laga or shuru hui dono ki pakad pakdai.


Thodi der bhagha dodi k baad karan ko apni maa yani ki asha najar aayi jo abhi puja ghar se bahar aayi thi.


Karan apni ma k piche chupte hue :- mummy mummy , mujhe bachao is tikhi mirchi se.


Shruti shikayati andaaz me :- dekhiye na bhua is ghade ne aaj fir mujh per pani daal ker mujhe uthaya.


Asha shruti ki halat dekh halke se haste hue sh :- achaaa ...


Shruti roni surat bana :- bhuaaa aap bhi.


Asha hasna rok karan k kaan khichte hue :- kyu re badmash teri himmat kese hui meri bachi ko tang kerne ki .


Karan :- aahhh mummy chodo naa dard ho raha h , aage se esa ni hoga promise.


Asha karan ka kan chodte hue :- jo bola h wo yaad rakhna verna bahut pitayi lagaungi.


Karan :-ha bilkul mummy aage se aapki beti p pani ni dalunga 😂😂😂😂 balki usko hi pani m daal.


Ye bol karan shruti ki choti khich bhag gaya


Shruti :- kutte ab to tu gaya .


Ye bol wo fir uske piche bhagi.


Asha karan se :- ruk badmash


Kavya waha aate hue :- kya hua didi subah subah kyu dat rahi ho bacho ko , in bacho ki shararte or hasi majak hi to h is ghar ki asli ronak h , jinhone is ghar m wapas pran fuke h.


Asha :- baat to sahi h teri kavu , or bhagwan kare humare bache ese hi humesha Hasi Khushi mil jhul ker rahe , kisiki najar na lage unhe.


Kuch der ki bhagdod k baad karan kese n kese shant ker or maafi mang use apne room m bhejta h , or fir hall m sofe per jyoti k sath sofe per beth jata h.


Tab jyoti boli.


Jyoti :- bhai aapko ni lagta aap kuch bhul rahe h.


Karan :- kya bhul raha hu m gudiya.


Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas ek or ishara kerti h , jise dekh karan ki siti piti gul ho gayi , kyunki us taraf uski sona yani ki sonam khadi thi.


Or sirf khadi ni thi , uski ankho se ansu jhar jhar bah rahe the taklif or dard k mishran k sath, jise dekh karan k dil m esa dard utha ki mano jese kisi ne sine m khanjar ghop diye ho .


Karan issse pahale ki age kuch bole usse pahale hi sona waha se gusse se muh mod chali jati h.


Karan ,:- are sona sonaaa ruko to..


Karan nishahay ho jyoti ki taraf dekhta h madad ki aas me.


Jyoti nakhrile andaaz me :- meri taraf mat dekhiye , m kuch ni kernr wali , galti aapne ki h dandnayak ji to dand aapko hi bhugtna hoga hii hii .


Ye kahate haste hue jyoti waha se nikal gayi.


Wahi dusri or


Cosmic canon ki rays asma ko bahut ghahri chot pahunchayi thi , uski shadow huntress power ne use marne se to bacha liya , lekin jyoti ki vidhwanskari shakti se nirmit thi , jis kaaran uska prahar atyant ghatak tha.


Lekin karan ne apni healing power ka use ker use shaktihin hone se to bacha liya tha , lekin use apni shakti fully recover kerne m abhi samay lagna tha or use aaram ki sakht jarurat thi.


Or is samay wo wahi ker rahi thi , wo abhi so hi rahi thi ki uske samne wahi drishya or wahi ghatna uske sapna ban ker samne ane lagi thi.


Jab wo apni sheild se canon ko rokne ki kosish ker rahi thi , lekin wo jyada der tak use rok naa payi or sheild k tutne k sath hi wo lazer k dhakke se dur ja giri thibor lazer sidha ja ker seal ko todne lagi.


Asma ghayal thi , lekin usne himmat na hari or usne ladkhadate hue wapas sheild bana usko rokne ki koshis ki lekin sheild ek baar fir tut gayi.


Or asma fir uski chapet m aagayi , lekin asma ki bahaduri to dekho wo fir bhi piche ni hati or usne ray ko apne uper lena hi shuru ker diya , jise usko apar pida or kasht hone laga , use esa lag raha tha ki uska sharir kabhi bhi fat sakta h tabhi achanak.


Achanak ek highly advance mini missile aaker cannon se ja lagi or agle hi pal us canon k parkhache ud gaye.


Jiske dhamake k sath charo or dhua dhua ho gaya or asma bhi rays k rukne se dhadam se gir padi or hafne lagi herani se jab usne us disha ki or apna dhyan kedrit kiya to ek jani pahachani energy ek soul mahasus hui.


Asma herani or khushi se :- kya m sahi hu , kya ye tum ho naa jack.


Tabhi ek aawaz k sath dhus chatta h or samne aata h ek highly advance suit pahne udte hue ek ladka .


Ladka :- tumhara andaza kabhi galat ho sakta h huntress .


Ye kahate hue wo udta hua asma k pas aata h or use sambhalta h .


Asma jack k chahre p hath firate hue jese use mahasus ker rahi ho :- jack tum aagaye , tum ni jante mane , (hickicha k bat badlte hue ) mera matlab mane or bhai jan ne tumhe kitna miss kiya, kaha chale gaye the tum


Ye bol Asma jack k gale lag jati h , kuch jyada hi kasker jisse jack ashaj mahasus kerta h .


Jack alag ho :- tum thik to ho na asma , ye sab kese hua .


Asma jab sari baat batati h or bolti h.


Asma. Badi hi soft tune :- lekim ab mujhe koi chinta ni ab tum jo aa gaye ho na jack , ab hum firse ek team banke in sabko khatm ker denge .


Ye bol wo bade pyaar se jack k chare ko sahalane lagi , jisse javk or uncomfortable ho gaya or dur hote hue bola.


Jack :- esa ab possible ni h asma , ab mujhe jana hoga .


Ye bol wo waha se jane k liye uthne laga


Asma :- jack please esa mat kaho ,mana ki past m jo hua wo bahut galt hua , lekin is sansar ko is multiverse ko fir ek baar humari jarurat h , eße m tum kese ja sakte ho.


Jack :- jid mat kero asma ye bat tum bhi janti ho ki m wapas ni lotne wala , wo to mujhe tumhari jan khatrw m hone ka signal mila jab m aaya , verna in sabse ab mera koi lena dena ni , mujhe ab jane do.


Asma :- ni jack ab m tumhe wapas kahi ni jane dungi


Jack man me :- maaf kerna asma lekin tumne mujhe ye kerne ko majbur ker diya h.


Ye sochne k sath hi uske suit k hath se ek pin nikal asma ki gardan m lag gayi or use behoshi chane lagi .


Or jack udte hue jane laga ,


Asma behosh hote hue :- ruk jaoooo jackkkkkkkkkkl


Yahi chilate hue wo nind se jag gayi or rone lagi


Asma ki chikh sun karan waha aya or asma ko shant kerwane laga .


Asma karan k chahre ko chu use pahachante hue :- bhaijan bhai jan hume jack ko dhundna hoga , wo hume ese wapas chod ker ni ja sakta .


Karan :- asu , meri gudiya shant ho ja , m tumhare jajbato ko bhali bhanti samjhta hu , per tum khud hi socho , aJ jack k aane se ek baat to saaf ho gayi hai ki jack ka humari life m wapas aane ki ek ummid abhi jinda h or hume firse pure jor shor se apne pryaso ka aarmbh ker dena chahiye.


Asma :- aapne thik kaha bhai , hum apni ji jan laga denge jack ko khojne m .


Per seal ka kya bhai us canon ko bhale hi nasht ker diya gaya h lekin usne seal ko kafi bhari nuksan pahunchaya h.


Karan :- tum seal ki chinta mat kero asu filhal k liye mane use apni mantra shaktiyo dwara wapas thik to ker diya lekin abhi uski power pahale jese hone m samay lagega ese m uski security ki jimmedari ab mane khud hi lunga.


Karan apne man me :- pret raj .


Tabhi samne pret raj prakat ho jate h , jinki mojudgi mahasur ker asma satar ho apni huntress form m aajati h , mano jese usne pretraj ko apna dushman man liya ho.


Karan :- shant ho jao asu , ye dushman ni humare sathi h.


Fir karan asma or pretraj ko ek dusre se introduce kerwata h or sath m portal of realms ki jimmedari sompte hue use wo sakht nirdesh deta h ki bina permission k ager waha jo koi aaye use bejijhak mot k ghat utar de.


Wahi dusri or


Location :- Patal lok.


Prathvi se lotne k baad humesha ki tarah apni har se bhokhlaya hua vp or uska bhai apne hi mahal m tod fod ker rahe the.


Vp :- aaahgggg Ek baar fir hum un devtao or uske us chokre se har gaye .


Saya :- or sharm se to dub marne ki baat to ye h ki jise hume apne hatho se marna tha , ulta usne hi hume mukt kera humpe upkaar ker hume na keval hume apmanit kiya , balki vidambna to dekho hume na keval uski sahayata kerni padi apitu vijay k baad ashirwad bhi deker arahe h hum use


Vp :- tumne sahi kaha bhrataa , or is apnan ka pratishodh to hum leker hi rahenge , chalo abhi se ek nayi yozna banana aarambh kerte h


Saya :- ni bhrata vp , ab hum esa kuch ni karenge filhal , jante ho kyu hum har baar harte h , kyuki har baar hum adhirta se yojna bana galat samay pe uspe prahar kerte h , jab use humare har prahar ka utter mil jata h.


Lekin is baar hum apni ye galti ni doharyenge, is baar hum dhairya se kam leker intezar kerenge sahi samay aane ka or jab wo sahi samay aayega to hum esa jordar prahar karenge, jisse bachna us karan k liye kathin hi ni asambhav bhi hoga.


Ye bol vo saya hasne laga or sath m vp bhi.


Wahi dusri or


Har ki bhoklahat se tadafne wale sirf ye dono hi ni the , balki wo bhi tha jiske kaaran asma ki jan jate jate rahi or wo or koi ni shera tha.


Gusse se wo bhi pagal hue ja raha tha or sath m tod fod khud bhi ker raha tha apne office m .


Lekin ye kya shera jo tod fod ki thi , wo to kuch bhi ni thi uske aage jis tabahi ko dekh shera pagla gaya tha.


Hua darasl ye tha ki jack ne na keval shera ko canon uda dali thi , balki sath m usne canon jo shera k main computer se judi hui thi , uske jariye usne uske main computer m ek esa virys bhi pahucha diya tha ki jiske agle pal hi uska na keval sara data nasht ho gaya balki uska sara computer system hi blast ker gaya.


Shera gusse se chilate hue :- kisne kisne kiya ye , kiski ye mazal jisne shera k kaam m tang adayi chodunga ni m use..


(Ek jagah beth hafte hue )Kitna karib tha m apne lakshya k , lekin ek blast ne sari mahanat p pani fer diya aakhir kon tha wo.


(Apni assistant jesmine ko waha asta dekh) jesmine kuch pata laga ki kon tha wo kamina jisne varsho ki mahanat yani humare data ko barbaad ker dala.


Jesmine :- i m sorry sir, per abhi tak m uska koi pata ni laga payi , per sir don't worry jald hi uska pata laga usko m nark ki yatra pe bhej dungi.


Shera :- ni ye kam tum ni , khud m karunga , lekin ye samjh ni aaraha ki bina deta or knowledge k ab hum aage kya karenge


Jesmine :- don't fear when jesmine here sir , mujhe esi hi kisi situation ka andaza pahale se hi tha , isliye mane pahale hi sab data ka backup ready ker liya tha , asiye mere sath.


Fir jesmine shera ko ek jagah leke jati h , jaha pahunchte hi shera khushi se uchal pada kyu ki us room m same to same vesa hi computer tha jesa abhi nasht hua tha , with same data.


Shera jesmine ko khich k apni baho m lete hue use chum leta h or bola.


Shera :- shabas jesmine isliye to tum meri sanse favourite ho , i love ur passion for yr work yaar.


Jesmine :- sir abhi ek khushkhabri or h sir , mane uska bhi pata laga liya h jiska aapne mujhe morning m kaha tha.


Shera :- are wah to chalo der kis baat ki.


Ye bol shera or jesmine ek spacecraft m beth teleport ho pahunch jate h space m or waha jaker apmi tracter beam ka use ker wo use ker kisiko space se apni ship m khich lete h


Jo koi chij ni balki ek shaks tha , shaks bole to koi shaks ni ek vishalakar daitya hi kah lo use kyunki uska height 7.5 feet thi.


Shaks ghayal avastha me tha wo shera se puchta h .


Shaks :- kon ho tum or tumne mujhe kis prayojan k liye bachaya.


Shera :- i like ur attitude, sidha mudde ki baat p aaye ho , to suno dost mera bhi vahi uddeshya h jo ki tumhara h wo h dandnayak se badla .


Hum dono ka dushman ek hi h to kyu na tum meri team ko joinn ker lo.


Shaks :- team , kesi team


ek esi team jo na keval damdnayak or uske sathiyo ko khatam keregi , balki multiverse pe raj karegi , bolo dost banoge humari team ka hisaa


Shaks kuch sochte hue :- dushman ka dushman apna dost hota h , thik h dost m tumhari team join kerne ko teyar hu per meri ek shart h us dn ko m hi apne hatho se marunga.


Shera muskurate hue :- manzoor hai or shaddow council m tumgara swagat h bhandasur.


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Sham ka samay tha or karan chat p khada kese sonam ko manaya jaye is bare m soch hi raha tha ki tabhi Shivani waha aati.


Shivani :- bhaiya bhaiya.


Karan :- ha princess bolo kya baat h.


Shivani :- bhaiya aapko or jyoti didi ko taiji bula rahi h aapke room m


Karan man me :- maa ko is samay humse kya kaam aagaya , chalo chal ker dekhte h.


5 min baad karan or jyoti apne kamre m upasthit hote h or fir asha bhi vaha aati h or room ko band ker pahale lock lagati h or fir wo jo kerti h uski ummid dono bhai bahan ne filhal to bilkul bhi ni ki thi


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