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Nice update broUpdate 01
Location : Massachusetts , USA
[ English Conversation Translated in Hindi ]
Kate : To Fir Kab Nikal Rahe Ho Tum ?
Prem : Aaj Raat !
Kate : Aaj Raat ? Aur Tum Ab Bata Rahe Ho !
Prem : Ha Wo Aaj Raat Jane Ka Hi Plan Bana Diya Aur Ticket Bhi Book Kara Di !
Kate : Waapas Kab Milege ?
Prem : Bahut Jald !
Kate : Me Tumhara Intezaar Karugi !
Prem : Pehle Tum MBA Complete Kar Lo ! Tumhe Abhi Ek Aur Saal Hai !
Kate : Haa ! Wese Ellisa Se Baat Huyi !
Prem : Haa ! Video Call Par Baat Huyi Thi !
Ellisa Ka Hometown NewYork Me Hai Aur Degree Lene Ke Baad Wo Apne Hometown Chali Gayi Thi .
Kate : Tumhare Waada Karne Ke Baad Hi Wo Gayi Hai ! Mujhe Bhi Call Aaya Tha Ellisa Ka !
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Prem : Hmmm !
Kate : Wahi Waada Mujhe Tumse Bhi Chahiye !
Prem : ( Smiles )
Kate : Mujhe Sunna Hai !
Prem : OK ! Me Waada Karta Hu Ki Me Tumse Bhi Shaadi Karuga !
Kate : Good ! Apne Waade Ko Bhul Mat Jaana !
Prem : Me Kabhi Apna Waada Naa Hi To Bhulta Hu Aur Naa Hi Todta Hu !
Kate : ( Smiles ) Jaanti Hu !
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Prem : ( Mann Me ) Ab Se Zindagi Bhar Waada Karna Band !
Prem : Ab Me Chalta Hu ! Packing Bhi Karni Hai !
Prem Aur Kate Dono Ek Dusre Ko Kiss Karte Hai .
5 Min Baad Dono Alag Hoke Ek Dusre Ko Jor Se Hug karte Hai .
Kate : ( Tears ) l'll Miss You !
Prem : Me Too ! Tumhari in Khubsurat Aankho Me Aansu Acche Nahi Lagte !
Prem Apne Hatho Se Kate Ke Aansu Ponch Leta Hai .
Prem : Chalo Ab Me Chalta Hu ! Apna Khayaal Rakhna ! Me Waapas Bahut Jald Aauga ! Bye !
Kate : Bye ! Love You !
Prem : Love You Too !
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3 Days Ago ~
[ English Conversation Translated in Hindi ]
Prem : Chalo ! Tumhara Samaan bhi Rakh Diya Hai Car Me !
Ellisa : Tum India Kab Jaa Rahe Ho ?
Prem : Kuch Dino Baad !
Ellisa : Mujhe Jaane Ka Mann Nahi Kar Raha Hai !
Prem : To Mann Ko Manaiye ! 2 Saal Baad Tum Apne Parents Se Nahi Mili Ho ! Thode Din Unke Sath Raho ! Uske Baad To Tumhari Placement Wali Job Start Ho Jayegi !
Ellisa : ( Sad )
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Prem : Ab Emotional Mat Ho Jao ! Smile !
Ellisa : Pehle Tum Mujhse Ek Waada Karo !
Prem : Kesa Wada ?
Ellisa : Yahi Ki Hum Dono Shaadi Karege ! Mujhe Pata Hai Abhi Nahi Par Baad Me Jaroor !
Prem : OK ! Me Waada Karta Hu Ki Me Tumse Shaadi Karuga ! Ab Chalo Thoda Khush Ho Jao !
Ellisa : Love You !
Prem : Love You Too !
Prem Ellisa Ki Taraf Badhke Usko Lip Par Kiss Karta Hai .
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Present Time ~
Kuch Ghante Baad Ek Bag Ke Saath Prem Airport Ke Liye Nikal Jata Hai . Airport Par Pahuchne Ke Baad Check in Ho Jane Ke Baad Apne Business Class Me Wo Baith Jata Hai .
Jaha Massachusetts Me 9:30 Ho Rahe The Wahi India Me Subah 11 Baj Rahi Thi .
Location : Boy's Washroom , MKG College , Mumbai , India
Rohit : Dekho ! Tum Mujhe Jaante Nahi Ho ! Me Tumhe is College Se Restrict Karwa Sakta Hu !
' CHATAAK '
Ek Jordaar Thappad Rohit Ke Gaalo Par Padta Hai. Usne Chashma Pehna Hua Tha Woh Bhi Niche Gir Jaata Hai .
Ravi : Bhen Ke Lode Jyada Bakchodi Karega ! Saale Yahi Teri Gaand Maar Duga !
Jayant : Iska Mobile Check Kar ! Usme Hoga Kritika Ka Number !
Ravi : Haan ! Chal Be Lodu Apna Mobile Nikal !
Rohit : Nahi !
' Chataak '
Rohit Ke Gaalo Par Ek Aur Jordaar Thappad Padta Hai . Rohit Ki Aankho Se Aansu Behne Lag Jaate Hai . Wahi Jayant Rohit Ko Kas Ke Pakad Leta Hai Aur Ravi Rohit Ki Checking Karne Lagta Hai . Ravi Mobile Dhundhne Ki Koshish Karta Hai Par Use Mobile Nahi Milta Hai . Ravi Rohit Ka Bag Bhi Check Karta Hai Par Use Nahi Milta Hai .
Ravi : Mobile Kaha Hai Tera !
Rohit : ( Tears ) Me Aaj Lana Bhul Gaya !
Ravi : Bakchodi Karega ! Bhosdike Teri Behen Ki Gaand Maarne Se Pehle Teri Gaand Marluga Yahi ! Mere Saath Faaltu Bakchodi Mat Kar ! Chupchaap Mobile Nikal !
Rohit : ( Tears ) N..Nahi Hai Mere Pass !
Ek Jordaar Mukka Rohit Ki Naak Par Padta Hai . Uske Naak Se Khun Nikalne Lag Jata Hai .
Ravi : Aaj Tujhe Chod Raha Hu Jhaantu ! Par Kal Mujhe Teri Behen Kritika Ka Number Chahiye ! Agar Mujhe Kal Number Nahi Mila To Beta Bada Sa Danda Teri Gaand Me Daal Duga ! Samjha ! Aur Haan ! Agar Ye Baat Kisi Ko Pata Chali To Me Teri Aesi Haalat Karuga Ki Tere Ghar Wale Bhi Tereko Nahi Pehchaan Payege ! Samjha !
Rohit Kuch Jawaab Nahi Deta .
Ravi Rohit Ke Gote Pakad Leta Hai .
Rohit : Aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Nahhiiiiiiiiiiiii Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ravi : Samjha Ki Nahi Samjha !
Rohit : Ahhhhhhhh Samjhaaaaaaaaaaaa !
Ravi : Hmmm ! Shabaash !
Ravi Rohit Ke Gote Chod Deta Hai Aur Jayant Ke Saath Waha Se Chala Jata Hai . Rohit Wahi Niche Baithke Rone Lagta Hai .
Ravi Aur Jayant 4th Year Student The Aur Kritika Ki Class Me Hi The . Pichle 2 Saal Se Ye Dono Fail Ho Rahe Hai Aur 4th Year Me Hi Hai . Dono Hi Rohit Ko Kritika Ke Mobile Number Ke Liye Torture Kar Rahe The . Kritika Pure College Ki Sabse Khubsurat Aur Hot Ladki Thi . Pura College Hi Uska Deewana Tha .
Pure Mehra Family Me Kabhi Bhi Koyi Bhi School Ya College Kabhi Bouncer Lekar Nahi Jaata Tha . Jiski Wajah Se Ravi aur Jayant Ne Rohit Ko Akela Washroom Me Pakadte Hi Usse Wahi Daboch Lete Hai .
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Location : Bengaluru , Karnataka
Selva : Yes Master ! Aapne Bulaya !
Master : Selva ! Kal Hume Chennai Ke Liye Nikalne Hai !
Selva : OK Master ! Par Jaane Ka Maqsad ?
Master : Ek Zaruri Kaam Hai ! Chennai Se Letter Aaya Hai !
Ladki 1 : Chennai Se Latter ? Sab Thik To Hai Na Dadaji !
Master : Sab Thik Hai Yaa Nahi Woh To Waha Jaakar Hi Pata Chalega ! Tab Tab Restaurant Tum Dono Bacchiyo Ko Hi Sambhalna Hai !
Ladki 1 : Ji Dadaji !
Master : Tumhari Behen Kaha Hai ?
Ladki 1 : Wo Upar Restaurant Me Hai !
Master : Hmmm ! Prem Ki Kya Khabar Hai ?
Ladki 1 : Dadaji Meri Usse Baat Nahi Huyi Bahut Dino Se ! Aaj Call Karti Hu Mai Usse !
Master : Selva ! Apne Bag Pack Karlo ! Aur Haan.. Hum Flight Se Jayege Isliye Koyi Bhi Weapon Saath Me Mat Lena !
Selva : Ji Master !
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Yeah that's It For Today . Thoda Chota Update Hai but Agle Update Me Compensation Kar Luga . Have A Good Weekend . Like Karna Aur Apna Constructive Criticism Dena Mat Bhulna . Next Update On 28 February At 5 PM . Cheers![]()
Nice updateUpdate 01
Location : Massachusetts , USA
[ English Conversation Translated in Hindi ]
Kate : To Fir Kab Nikal Rahe Ho Tum ?
Prem : Aaj Raat !
Kate : Aaj Raat ? Aur Tum Ab Bata Rahe Ho !
Prem : Ha Wo Aaj Raat Jane Ka Hi Plan Bana Diya Aur Ticket Bhi Book Kara Di !
Kate : Waapas Kab Milege ?
Prem : Bahut Jald !
Kate : Me Tumhara Intezaar Karugi !
Prem : Pehle Tum MBA Complete Kar Lo ! Tumhe Abhi Ek Aur Saal Hai !
Kate : Haa ! Wese Ellisa Se Baat Huyi !
Prem : Haa ! Video Call Par Baat Huyi Thi !
Ellisa Ka Hometown NewYork Me Hai Aur Degree Lene Ke Baad Wo Apne Hometown Chali Gayi Thi .
Kate : Tumhare Waada Karne Ke Baad Hi Wo Gayi Hai ! Mujhe Bhi Call Aaya Tha Ellisa Ka !
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Prem : Hmmm !
Kate : Wahi Waada Mujhe Tumse Bhi Chahiye !
Prem : ( Smiles )
Kate : Mujhe Sunna Hai !
Prem : OK ! Me Waada Karta Hu Ki Me Tumse Bhi Shaadi Karuga !
Kate : Good ! Apne Waade Ko Bhul Mat Jaana !
Prem : Me Kabhi Apna Waada Naa Hi To Bhulta Hu Aur Naa Hi Todta Hu !
Kate : ( Smiles ) Jaanti Hu !
![]()
Prem : ( Mann Me ) Ab Se Zindagi Bhar Waada Karna Band !
Prem : Ab Me Chalta Hu ! Packing Bhi Karni Hai !
Prem Aur Kate Dono Ek Dusre Ko Kiss Karte Hai .
5 Min Baad Dono Alag Hoke Ek Dusre Ko Jor Se Hug karte Hai .
Kate : ( Tears ) l'll Miss You !
Prem : Me Too ! Tumhari in Khubsurat Aankho Me Aansu Acche Nahi Lagte !
Prem Apne Hatho Se Kate Ke Aansu Ponch Leta Hai .
Prem : Chalo Ab Me Chalta Hu ! Apna Khayaal Rakhna ! Me Waapas Bahut Jald Aauga ! Bye !
Kate : Bye ! Love You !
Prem : Love You Too !
______________________________________
3 Days Ago ~
[ English Conversation Translated in Hindi ]
Prem : Chalo ! Tumhara Samaan bhi Rakh Diya Hai Car Me !
Ellisa : Tum India Kab Jaa Rahe Ho ?
Prem : Kuch Dino Baad !
Ellisa : Mujhe Jaane Ka Mann Nahi Kar Raha Hai !
Prem : To Mann Ko Manaiye ! 2 Saal Baad Tum Apne Parents Se Nahi Mili Ho ! Thode Din Unke Sath Raho ! Uske Baad To Tumhari Placement Wali Job Start Ho Jayegi !
Ellisa : ( Sad )
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Prem : Ab Emotional Mat Ho Jao ! Smile !
Ellisa : Pehle Tum Mujhse Ek Waada Karo !
Prem : Kesa Wada ?
Ellisa : Yahi Ki Hum Dono Shaadi Karege ! Mujhe Pata Hai Abhi Nahi Par Baad Me Jaroor !
Prem : OK ! Me Waada Karta Hu Ki Me Tumse Shaadi Karuga ! Ab Chalo Thoda Khush Ho Jao !
Ellisa : Love You !
Prem : Love You Too !
Prem Ellisa Ki Taraf Badhke Usko Lip Par Kiss Karta Hai .
![]()
______________________________________
Present Time ~
Kuch Ghante Baad Ek Bag Ke Saath Prem Airport Ke Liye Nikal Jata Hai . Airport Par Pahuchne Ke Baad Check in Ho Jane Ke Baad Apne Business Class Me Wo Baith Jata Hai .
Jaha Massachusetts Me 9:30 Ho Rahe The Wahi India Me Subah 11 Baj Rahi Thi .
Location : Boy's Washroom , MKG College , Mumbai , India
Rohit : Dekho ! Tum Mujhe Jaante Nahi Ho ! Me Tumhe is College Se Restrict Karwa Sakta Hu !
' CHATAAK '
Ek Jordaar Thappad Rohit Ke Gaalo Par Padta Hai. Usne Chashma Pehna Hua Tha Woh Bhi Niche Gir Jaata Hai .
Ravi : Bhen Ke Lode Jyada Bakchodi Karega ! Saale Yahi Teri Gaand Maar Duga !
Jayant : Iska Mobile Check Kar ! Usme Hoga Kritika Ka Number !
Ravi : Haan ! Chal Be Lodu Apna Mobile Nikal !
Rohit : Nahi !
' Chataak '
Rohit Ke Gaalo Par Ek Aur Jordaar Thappad Padta Hai . Rohit Ki Aankho Se Aansu Behne Lag Jaate Hai . Wahi Jayant Rohit Ko Kas Ke Pakad Leta Hai Aur Ravi Rohit Ki Checking Karne Lagta Hai . Ravi Mobile Dhundhne Ki Koshish Karta Hai Par Use Mobile Nahi Milta Hai . Ravi Rohit Ka Bag Bhi Check Karta Hai Par Use Nahi Milta Hai .
Ravi : Mobile Kaha Hai Tera !
Rohit : ( Tears ) Me Aaj Lana Bhul Gaya !
Ravi : Bakchodi Karega ! Bhosdike Teri Behen Ki Gaand Maarne Se Pehle Teri Gaand Marluga Yahi ! Mere Saath Faaltu Bakchodi Mat Kar ! Chupchaap Mobile Nikal !
Rohit : ( Tears ) N..Nahi Hai Mere Pass !
Ek Jordaar Mukka Rohit Ki Naak Par Padta Hai . Uske Naak Se Khun Nikalne Lag Jata Hai .
Ravi : Aaj Tujhe Chod Raha Hu Jhaantu ! Par Kal Mujhe Teri Behen Kritika Ka Number Chahiye ! Agar Mujhe Kal Number Nahi Mila To Beta Bada Sa Danda Teri Gaand Me Daal Duga ! Samjha ! Aur Haan ! Agar Ye Baat Kisi Ko Pata Chali To Me Teri Aesi Haalat Karuga Ki Tere Ghar Wale Bhi Tereko Nahi Pehchaan Payege ! Samjha !
Rohit Kuch Jawaab Nahi Deta .
Ravi Rohit Ke Gote Pakad Leta Hai .
Rohit : Aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Nahhiiiiiiiiiiiii Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ravi : Samjha Ki Nahi Samjha !
Rohit : Ahhhhhhhh Samjhaaaaaaaaaaaa !
Ravi : Hmmm ! Shabaash !
Ravi Rohit Ke Gote Chod Deta Hai Aur Jayant Ke Saath Waha Se Chala Jata Hai . Rohit Wahi Niche Baithke Rone Lagta Hai .
Ravi Aur Jayant 4th Year Student The Aur Kritika Ki Class Me Hi The . Pichle 2 Saal Se Ye Dono Fail Ho Rahe Hai Aur 4th Year Me Hi Hai . Dono Hi Rohit Ko Kritika Ke Mobile Number Ke Liye Torture Kar Rahe The . Kritika Pure College Ki Sabse Khubsurat Aur Hot Ladki Thi . Pura College Hi Uska Deewana Tha .
Pure Mehra Family Me Kabhi Bhi Koyi Bhi School Ya College Kabhi Bouncer Lekar Nahi Jaata Tha . Jiski Wajah Se Ravi aur Jayant Ne Rohit Ko Akela Washroom Me Pakadte Hi Usse Wahi Daboch Lete Hai .
___________________________________________
Location : Bengaluru , Karnataka
Selva : Yes Master ! Aapne Bulaya !
Master : Selva ! Kal Hume Chennai Ke Liye Nikalne Hai !
Selva : OK Master ! Par Jaane Ka Maqsad ?
Master : Ek Zaruri Kaam Hai ! Chennai Se Letter Aaya Hai !
Ladki 1 : Chennai Se Latter ? Sab Thik To Hai Na Dadaji !
Master : Sab Thik Hai Yaa Nahi Woh To Waha Jaakar Hi Pata Chalega ! Tab Tab Restaurant Tum Dono Bacchiyo Ko Hi Sambhalna Hai !
Ladki 1 : Ji Dadaji !
Master : Tumhari Behen Kaha Hai ?
Ladki 1 : Wo Upar Restaurant Me Hai !
Master : Hmmm ! Prem Ki Kya Khabar Hai ?
Ladki 1 : Dadaji Meri Usse Baat Nahi Huyi Bahut Dino Se ! Aaj Call Karti Hu Mai Usse !
Master : Selva ! Apne Bag Pack Karlo ! Aur Haan.. Hum Flight Se Jayege Isliye Koyi Bhi Weapon Saath Me Mat Lena !
Selva : Ji Master !
•
•
•
Yeah that's It For Today . Thoda Chota Update Hai but Agle Update Me Compensation Kar Luga . Have A Good Weekend . Like Karna Aur Apna Constructive Criticism Dena Mat Bhulna . Next Update On 28 February At 5 PM . Cheers![]()