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Adultery My Complete Intentions - The Beginning

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KEKIUS MAXIMUS

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nice ....20 ladke maarne aaye the hero ko ?...warna rohan ki akele ki bas ki baat nahi thi panga lene ki ...
par hero ka attitude bhi zabardast hai ?...
par manisha kyu rone lagi ,kya pyar karti hai aur batati nahi ?...
 

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UPDATE:-4 (Fucked up badly)




Main subah 4 baje so ke utha aur running karne ke liye taiyar hone ke liye t-shirt pehen hi raha tha ki tabhi achank se pata laga bc kohni mein bhayanak dard hai hath bhi na uth raha tha, lawda exercise karega mera aur sayad ye akhri din tha jab mein itni jaldi utha hu. Maine der na karte huye ek painkiller li aur so gaya doobara.


2 ghante hi soya tha ki dadiji ne jaga diya agar koi aur hota to pakka gaali khata lekin dadi ko kuch keh bhi nahi sakta tha na isliye chupchap utha aur naha-dho ke sab kirya karam nipta, ek dum hot maal ban gaya , kohni mein dard tha par itna nahi tha.


Maine breakfast kiya aur bus stand ki taraf chal diya, lekin aaj mujhe ek cheez thodi badli badli si lagi ki mere se kam umar ke ladke mujhse dar rahe hai aur pata nahi kyu unki aankho mein dar dekh ke mujhe khushi ho rahi thi ander se. Aur dar isliye rahe they kyuki kal maine rahul ko jo foda tha aur police case bhi nahi hua.


Khair ye uut-pataang cheeze sochta hua mein panwadi ki dukaan pe aaya.


Main:- tau ek ciggrete diyo.


Tau:- lo Chaudhary sahab.


Ye word sunke Maine usey ghoora lekin us lawde ko koi fark nahi pada.


Main:- tau aaj chotu kaha hai, dikhayi nahi de raha.

Tau :- beta tabiyat kharab hai uski, kal tanki pe gaya tha tabse bol raha hai ki badan mein dard hai.


Maine apna tez dimag :roll: lagaya aur pata kar liya ki chotu betichod pit ke aaya hai apni item ke chakkar mein, waise sahi hua uske ke sath aashiqui ka bhoot to utra.


Maine ye sab sochte sochte ciggrete bhi pi li aur dukaan se bahar bhi aa gaya.


Bc aaj ye vivek kaha reh gaya lawda akela to nahi jana padega school. Ab akele jaane mein koi dikkat nahi thi par doosre gaon ke ladke akela dekh ke gaand jaroor tod sakte they meri, lekin main bahubali banke jaane ko taiyar tha.


Tabhi bus aayi aur usme chahd gaye main aur ravi, ravi merese baat nahi kar raha tha aaj, aur mujhe bhi koi fark nahi pad raha tha usse.


Bus chali to maine ek ladke se pucha jo vivek ke ghar ke paas rehta hai


Main:- oyyy londe vivek kyu nahi aaya aaj.


Wo:- bhai uske sir bhaari hai, aur unhone kaha tha ki aapko bolu ki sambhal ke jaaye.


Main :- hmmm thik hai.


Main baitha aur khidki se bahar dekhne laga to kal ki baat dhyan mein aayi bc priya se to setting ho gayi meri to jugad kyu nahi bithata main.


Lekin mere armaano pe pani fir gaya jab usey Manisha ke sath baitha dekha. Bc mera to dil hi dhadkna band ho jata hai manisha ko dekh ke, duniya bhar ki cuteness bhagwan ne usey hi de di sayad. Ab priya ko chhod ke main bas manisha ko hi dekhe jaa raha tha usne bhi ye notice kar liya tha lekin wo ignore maar rahi thi mere ko.


Ignore maarne ke bhi kayi reason they uske jinme se kuch to mujhe pata hai. Ek to wo rajpura ki hai matlab hamare dushman gaon ki. Number do wo thode ameer ghar se hai aur usey middle class ladke nahi pasand, bc ye logic samjh to nahi aaya mere but who cares.


Khair bus school mein ghusi aur hum sab utarke apni apni class mein chal diye, mujhe pata tha aaj ka din bc bore hounga Bina vivek ke kyuki main aur kisi se jada bolta nahi hu kyuki main viswas nahi karta kisi pe.


Khair hum class mein bag rakhke prayer mein gaye aur wo sadi si prayer gaayi jo bachpan se sunte aur gaate aa rahe hai main to bas samne khadi mams ko taad raha tha, deepika mam to maal lag rahi thi aaj black punjabi suit mein.


Hum logo ne prayer ki aur class ki taraf ho liye, lekin main chal diya mutne aur pani piney kyuki pain killer leni thi mujhe kohni ke liye.


Sab kaam niptake main class ke door pe khada tha aur ander wo choti hight ka master amit khada tha.

Main:- may i come in sir!

Amit:- come in, aage se jaldi aana aur wo tumhara bigda hua dost kaha hai.


Main:- okk sir aur uski tabiyat kharab hai thodi.


Amit:- tum usse dur raha karo nahi to wo bigaad dega tumhe bhi tum sarif ladke lagte ho.

Main: okk

Sarif word sunke puri class niche mundi karke hasne lagi kuch ko chod ke aur wo sab naye face they mere liye aur main bhi inke liye naya hi hounga.


Bc AK ko nahi jante ye :wtf:


Khair wo amit padha ke nikal gaya aur second period ka teacher aane mein thoda time tha to main aise hi baitha tha gumsum kyuki mera yaar nahi aaya tha.


Lekin tabhi ek ladka aage blackboard ke samne khada hoke jor se bola


Ladka:- Hello guys, mera naam rohan hai aur main hu Delhi ke bade bussiness man harsh Chaudhary ka bhatija. Main is school mein bachpan se padha hu to meri hi chalegi yaha aur koi naya launda tez bana to tod ke baitha diya jayega.


Mujhe uski ghisi-piti baato mein bilkul bhi intrest nahi tha aur naa hi fark pad raha tha ki wo kiska londa hai aur kiska nahi, main to mast ladkiya taad raha tha bas.


Ladka:- to sab log ek ek karke intro do apna apna aur koyi ladayi ho to mujhe batana main compromise karwa dunga meri chalti hai yaha.


Wo ladka rohan sab ka intro leta raha jo naye they bc sab chodu darke apna intro de rahe they. Tabhi priya ka number aaya aur usne apna intro diya to us rohan ki laar tapak rahi thi usko dekhke. Aur fir manisha ne apna intro diya.


Rohan:- nyc manisha, koi dikat ho to mujhe batana tum.


Manisha ne haa mein sir hila ke baith gayi chup chap


Aur wo chutiya sabka intro lete lete mere pe aa gaya aur mein ye dua kar raha tha ki teacher aa jaye par sabhi teachers meeting mein they naye periods schedule ko leke.


Rohan:- oyyy last bench wale khada hoke apna intro de.


Maine uski baat ko ansuna kar diya kyuki main kisi ke order pe nahi chalta.


Meri taraf se koyi jawab na pakar wo chillaya,


Rohan:- oyyy ladke samjh nahi aata kya ek baar mein, apna naam bata chal.


Uski is harkat se saari class ki nazar mujhpe aa gayi aur jo mujhe pehle se jante they unhe pata tha ki meri satki to main fod dunga isey bina kuch soche samjhe.


Main khada hua tabhi meri aage baitha ladka bola bhai kyu panga lete ho chodo na usey badi party hai.


Main:- chup be lawde .


Main usko ignore karke rohan ke bilkul samne jaake khada ho gaya, hieght wagarh same thi hamari body mein wo thoda halka tha mere se sehri jo tha bc maggi khake bada hua hoga


Rohan:- chal naam bata apna


Main(ghurke):- AK


Rohan:- abey pura naam bata, chutiya hai kya gawar.


Ab iska bahut jyada ho raha tha aur mujhe gussa bhi aane laga tha ki ye jhaat jaisa londa bhut bol raha hai.


Maine kuch nahi bola bas uske collar pakde aur apne se thoda dur karke ek raipta diya khichke wo chutiya sun ho gaya ek thappad mein bc life mein nahi khaya hoga usne aisa thappad aur maine bachpan se ab tak aise thappad anginat khaaye hai.


Thappad ki awaz itni tez thi ki sab bache shaant ho gaye ek chamiya ko chod ke wo bc mere samne aake khadi ho gayi.


Ladki:- mere bhai ko hath kaise lagaya tumne.


Main:- fir maarke dikhau kya?


Ladki:- you?


Main:- bas bas ab koi filmi dialogue na mariyo dimag ghum gaya to tere bhi dhar dunga.


Rohan:- bahut mehnga padega tujhe ye, teri zindagi nark bana dunga.


Main:- sun lawde meri zindagi pehle se hi nark hai aur tere jaise londe bahut dekhe hai maine ladne se pehle thodi research kar le mere pe AK ye do word hi kaafi hai meri pehchan ke liye.

Ladki:- ladkiyo se baat karne ki tameez nahi hai kya tumhe?


Main:- nahi!


Ladki:- dekh lungi tumhe!

Main:- dekh liyo jee bhar ke, photo bhej dunga apni shaadi ke liye.


Ab aage koi dialogue maarta isse pehle teesre period ki bell baji aur ek takla teacher aa gaya math ka.



Khair main bhi apni jagah pe aake baitha to wo aage wala ladka bola jiska naam deepak hai khaas chela hai ye mera.


Deepak:- AK bhai principal iske papa ka dost hai.


Main:- to kya lawda kaat lenge mera.

Wo kuch nahi bola


Main:- waise is hot londiya ka naam kya hai,

Deepak:- riya hai bhai.

Hmmm riya! Mast maal hai waise.



Wo deepak bhi chup ho gaya kyuki usey pata tha wo mujhse behes nahi kar sakta even koi nahi kar sakta.


Maine aaj ka din badi muskil se nikala school mein. Jab chutti huyi to bc jaise mukti mil gayi is sansaar se.


Maine ek kagaz pe apna number likha jo priya ko dena tha bus mein. Bus mein bhi main chupchap baitha tha ki tabhi achanak se bus ne break maari bhut tez mera dhyan kahi aur tha isliye mera sir baja aage wali seat pe, dard ke sath gussa bhi bhut aaya isliye kuch meethe sabd nikal gaye sabke samne,


Main:- lawde andha hai kya, dekh ke na chaka sakta.


Main bol hi raha tha aur puri bus mujhe ghur rahi thi ki kaisi satkeli khopdi hai ye lekin tabhi ek ladka bus mein chadha, sakal se hi gunda type lag raha tha


Ladka:- oyyy AK kon hai tumme se ?

Sab bache mere ko dekhne lage.


Main:- appointment leke miliyo abhi mood na hai mera, ya number leja mera call kar liyo. :roll3: is

Us ladke ne mijhe ghura aur bola


Ladka:- chal niche utar tujhse baat karni hai.


Mujhe pata tha bc jo bhi hai ye baat to nahi karni inhe pelne hi aaye honge ,par bhenchod ye hai kon.


Main:- aeyyy driver bus chala be koi bhi aisi kaise school ki bus mein chadh sakta hai utar isko.


Driver:- beta ye MLA sahab ka beta hai.


:WTF: MLA ka ladka mere piche kyu pada hai.

Kahir main koi scene create nahi karna chahta isliye socha niche utar ke baat karta hu jada bolega to pel dunga.


Main:- chal bhai niche kya baat karni hai tere ko.


jab utarne laga to chupke se wo kagaz priya ki goad me daal di jo manisha ne dekh liya aur wo hum dono ko aankhe faad ke dekhne lagi.


Bc niche utra to gaand fat gayi kyuki samne 20 ladke khade they aur saare college students lag rahe they. Bas dimag mein ek baat aayi ki chud gaya aaj to.


Saare bus ke bache humey hi dekh rahe they, matlab bejati pakki hai :sigh:


Main:- bol bhai kya baat hai.


Ladka:- tu us school se naam katwa le.


Main:- aur main aisa kyu karu.


Ladka:- tujhe pata bhi hai aaj tune kis ke ladke pe hath uthaya hai jagdish Chaudhary ke bete pe jo harsh Chaudhary ka bhai hai.

Main:- kon Harsh Chaudhary, wait wait tu kahi us ki to baat nahi kar raha.


Bhenchod! Ander hi ander chillaya main kyuki rohan ne bataya tha sabko lekin main hawabaazi mein dhyan nahi diya.


Ab is harsh Chaudhary ke baare mein bata du
Ye basically ek white criminal hai, matlab delhi ka don hai ye, har kaale dhandhe mein naam hai iska lekin isko koi touch nahi kar sakta kyuki koi saboot nahi hai kisi ke paas, normal log to isey business man samjhte hai.


Matlab gaand fat chuki thi meri kyuki maine ek don ke bhatije ko thappad maara.


Ladka:- abey kaha kho gaya.


Main:- sun be lawde mujhe jhaant fark nahi padta kon hai wo aur tu kon hai.

Hawabaazi main bol to gaya lekin iska anzaam bura hoga socha na tha,

Kyuki piche se ek bat mere ghutne ke piche wale hisse pe pada aur wo itni tez tha ki main gaand faad chillaya lekin still khada tha aur tabhi us ladke ne samne se ek punch diya muh pe bc sab kuch hill gaya mera,

2 second ke liye pura blank ho gaya main, par ek bat aur pada ghutne pe aur main fir chillaya aur is baar sidha ghutno pe niche gira main kyuki jaan hi na bachi thi be ab vivek ki yaad aa rahi thi ki wo lawda yaha hota to aadhi maar usey padti.

Khair wo londa mere samne aaya jisne piche se maara tha mujhe aur ye lawda rohan hi tha.

Rohan:- arey arey AK sir to ghutno pe aa gaye.

Maine usey ghur ke dekha

Rohan:- aankhe nichi karke baat kar.

Main:- tu khud hi karwa ke dekh le.


Usne meri chest mein laat marni chahi lekin main laat pakdi aur usey apni taraf khicha aur wo niche gira main uska pade pade ka galla pakad liya aur bhut jor se daba diya like uski aankhe laal ho gayi thi us chutiye ne nakhoon tak gada diye they mere hatho mein. Lekin wo marta usse pehle mere sir pe ek danda pada aur mera hath apne aap chut gaya main blank ho chuka tha aur piche ki taraf gir gaya aur fir laat dande jo pade wo pade mujhe kuch mehsoos nahi ho raha tha, wo sab ruke aur us londe ne mera gala pakad ke uthaya mera face pura khoon se sana hua tha koi pehchaan bhi na paaye aisa tha,

Ladka:- ab bhi aankhe niche nahi huyi teri


Main:- koi nahi karwa sakta bhsdk.


Lekin wo mujhe aur marte isse pehle police ki car ka siren suna aur wo sab rafu-chakar ho liye aur main piche ko ludak gaya aur meri nazar jab bus ki taraf gayi to bc dil hi ruk gaya, kyuki manisha ka face pura anshoo se bhiga hua tha aur priya ka face bas dara hua sa tha matlab manisha ke dil mein kuch to hai yahi soch ke mere dard bhare face pe smile aa gayi.


Ab blood bhut jada nikal chuka tha aur isliye aankhe band ho rahi thi meri lekin dhundhli aankho se manisha meri taraf aati huyi nazar aa rahi thi, wo aayi aur mere sir ko apni god mein rakh liya.


Manisha:- AK please aankhe band mat karna police aa hi gayi bas

Main bolna to chahta tha lekin bol na paya isliye bas muskura diya.

Aur mere muskurane se wo aur tez rone lagi, bc rota kon hai yaar meri gaand tut gayi main fir bhi na roya aur na ye bola ki aur mat maaro.


Manisha:- kyu karte ho tum aisa, kya jaroorat thi ladne ki normal ladko ki tarah bhi to reh sakte ho.


Ab mujhe fir se apni pitayi yaad aa gayi jo manisha ko dekhke main bhul chuka tha.

Main:- calm down. Pehle us MLA ko marunga aur fir us Harsh Chaudhary ke pure khandan ko jinda jala dunga, ek ko bhi nahi chodunga.


Aur ye bolte bolte meri aankhe band ho gayi, bas ab aag lag chuki thi puri body main, body behosh ho chuki tha lekin dimag still kaam kar raha tha aur bas ek hi baat gunz rahi thi ki

" I want revenge bitch, lets the devil comes outside"

Aur ye sayad meri pehli intention thi jo mujhe puri karni thi, ab dheere dheere dimag bhi sunn pad gaya aur main so gaya gehri nind mein ya dimag jo bhi ho, kyuki uske baad kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nahi.


TO BE CONTINUED ??
Awesome update bhai
Bahut hi mast update
Kya likhte ho bhai
Manisha ka kya scene hai
Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

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UPDATE:-4 (Fucked up badly)




Main subah 4 baje so ke utha aur running karne ke liye taiyar hone ke liye t-shirt pehen hi raha tha ki tabhi achank se pata laga bc kohni mein bhayanak dard hai hath bhi na uth raha tha, lawda exercise karega mera aur sayad ye akhri din tha jab mein itni jaldi utha hu. Maine der na karte huye ek painkiller li aur so gaya doobara.


2 ghante hi soya tha ki dadiji ne jaga diya agar koi aur hota to pakka gaali khata lekin dadi ko kuch keh bhi nahi sakta tha na isliye chupchap utha aur naha-dho ke sab kirya karam nipta, ek dum hot maal ban gaya , kohni mein dard tha par itna nahi tha.


Maine breakfast kiya aur bus stand ki taraf chal diya, lekin aaj mujhe ek cheez thodi badli badli si lagi ki mere se kam umar ke ladke mujhse dar rahe hai aur pata nahi kyu unki aankho mein dar dekh ke mujhe khushi ho rahi thi ander se. Aur dar isliye rahe they kyuki kal maine rahul ko jo foda tha aur police case bhi nahi hua.


Khair ye uut-pataang cheeze sochta hua mein panwadi ki dukaan pe aaya.


Main:- tau ek ciggrete diyo.


Tau:- lo Chaudhary sahab.


Ye word sunke Maine usey ghoora lekin us lawde ko koi fark nahi pada.


Main:- tau aaj chotu kaha hai, dikhayi nahi de raha.

Tau :- beta tabiyat kharab hai uski, kal tanki pe gaya tha tabse bol raha hai ki badan mein dard hai.


Maine apna tez dimag :roll: lagaya aur pata kar liya ki chotu betichod pit ke aaya hai apni item ke chakkar mein, waise sahi hua uske ke sath aashiqui ka bhoot to utra.


Maine ye sab sochte sochte ciggrete bhi pi li aur dukaan se bahar bhi aa gaya.


Bc aaj ye vivek kaha reh gaya lawda akela to nahi jana padega school. Ab akele jaane mein koi dikkat nahi thi par doosre gaon ke ladke akela dekh ke gaand jaroor tod sakte they meri, lekin main bahubali banke jaane ko taiyar tha.


Tabhi bus aayi aur usme chahd gaye main aur ravi, ravi merese baat nahi kar raha tha aaj, aur mujhe bhi koi fark nahi pad raha tha usse.


Bus chali to maine ek ladke se pucha jo vivek ke ghar ke paas rehta hai


Main:- oyyy londe vivek kyu nahi aaya aaj.


Wo:- bhai uske sir bhaari hai, aur unhone kaha tha ki aapko bolu ki sambhal ke jaaye.


Main :- hmmm thik hai.


Main baitha aur khidki se bahar dekhne laga to kal ki baat dhyan mein aayi bc priya se to setting ho gayi meri to jugad kyu nahi bithata main.


Lekin mere armaano pe pani fir gaya jab usey Manisha ke sath baitha dekha. Bc mera to dil hi dhadkna band ho jata hai manisha ko dekh ke, duniya bhar ki cuteness bhagwan ne usey hi de di sayad. Ab priya ko chhod ke main bas manisha ko hi dekhe jaa raha tha usne bhi ye notice kar liya tha lekin wo ignore maar rahi thi mere ko.


Ignore maarne ke bhi kayi reason they uske jinme se kuch to mujhe pata hai. Ek to wo rajpura ki hai matlab hamare dushman gaon ki. Number do wo thode ameer ghar se hai aur usey middle class ladke nahi pasand, bc ye logic samjh to nahi aaya mere but who cares.


Khair bus school mein ghusi aur hum sab utarke apni apni class mein chal diye, mujhe pata tha aaj ka din bc bore hounga Bina vivek ke kyuki main aur kisi se jada bolta nahi hu kyuki main viswas nahi karta kisi pe.


Khair hum class mein bag rakhke prayer mein gaye aur wo sadi si prayer gaayi jo bachpan se sunte aur gaate aa rahe hai main to bas samne khadi mams ko taad raha tha, deepika mam to maal lag rahi thi aaj black punjabi suit mein.


Hum logo ne prayer ki aur class ki taraf ho liye, lekin main chal diya mutne aur pani piney kyuki pain killer leni thi mujhe kohni ke liye.


Sab kaam niptake main class ke door pe khada tha aur ander wo choti hight ka master amit khada tha.

Main:- may i come in sir!

Amit:- come in, aage se jaldi aana aur wo tumhara bigda hua dost kaha hai.


Main:- okk sir aur uski tabiyat kharab hai thodi.


Amit:- tum usse dur raha karo nahi to wo bigaad dega tumhe bhi tum sarif ladke lagte ho.

Main: okk

Sarif word sunke puri class niche mundi karke hasne lagi kuch ko chod ke aur wo sab naye face they mere liye aur main bhi inke liye naya hi hounga.


Bc AK ko nahi jante ye :wtf:


Khair wo amit padha ke nikal gaya aur second period ka teacher aane mein thoda time tha to main aise hi baitha tha gumsum kyuki mera yaar nahi aaya tha.


Lekin tabhi ek ladka aage blackboard ke samne khada hoke jor se bola


Ladka:- Hello guys, mera naam rohan hai aur main hu Delhi ke bade bussiness man harsh Chaudhary ka bhatija. Main is school mein bachpan se padha hu to meri hi chalegi yaha aur koi naya launda tez bana to tod ke baitha diya jayega.


Mujhe uski ghisi-piti baato mein bilkul bhi intrest nahi tha aur naa hi fark pad raha tha ki wo kiska londa hai aur kiska nahi, main to mast ladkiya taad raha tha bas.


Ladka:- to sab log ek ek karke intro do apna apna aur koyi ladayi ho to mujhe batana main compromise karwa dunga meri chalti hai yaha.


Wo ladka rohan sab ka intro leta raha jo naye they bc sab chodu darke apna intro de rahe they. Tabhi priya ka number aaya aur usne apna intro diya to us rohan ki laar tapak rahi thi usko dekhke. Aur fir manisha ne apna intro diya.


Rohan:- nyc manisha, koi dikat ho to mujhe batana tum.


Manisha ne haa mein sir hila ke baith gayi chup chap


Aur wo chutiya sabka intro lete lete mere pe aa gaya aur mein ye dua kar raha tha ki teacher aa jaye par sabhi teachers meeting mein they naye periods schedule ko leke.


Rohan:- oyyy last bench wale khada hoke apna intro de.


Maine uski baat ko ansuna kar diya kyuki main kisi ke order pe nahi chalta.


Meri taraf se koyi jawab na pakar wo chillaya,


Rohan:- oyyy ladke samjh nahi aata kya ek baar mein, apna naam bata chal.


Uski is harkat se saari class ki nazar mujhpe aa gayi aur jo mujhe pehle se jante they unhe pata tha ki meri satki to main fod dunga isey bina kuch soche samjhe.


Main khada hua tabhi meri aage baitha ladka bola bhai kyu panga lete ho chodo na usey badi party hai.


Main:- chup be lawde .


Main usko ignore karke rohan ke bilkul samne jaake khada ho gaya, hieght wagarh same thi hamari body mein wo thoda halka tha mere se sehri jo tha bc maggi khake bada hua hoga


Rohan:- chal naam bata apna


Main(ghurke):- AK


Rohan:- abey pura naam bata, chutiya hai kya gawar.


Ab iska bahut jyada ho raha tha aur mujhe gussa bhi aane laga tha ki ye jhaat jaisa londa bhut bol raha hai.


Maine kuch nahi bola bas uske collar pakde aur apne se thoda dur karke ek raipta diya khichke wo chutiya sun ho gaya ek thappad mein bc life mein nahi khaya hoga usne aisa thappad aur maine bachpan se ab tak aise thappad anginat khaaye hai.


Thappad ki awaz itni tez thi ki sab bache shaant ho gaye ek chamiya ko chod ke wo bc mere samne aake khadi ho gayi.


Ladki:- mere bhai ko hath kaise lagaya tumne.


Main:- fir maarke dikhau kya?


Ladki:- you?


Main:- bas bas ab koi filmi dialogue na mariyo dimag ghum gaya to tere bhi dhar dunga.


Rohan:- bahut mehnga padega tujhe ye, teri zindagi nark bana dunga.


Main:- sun lawde meri zindagi pehle se hi nark hai aur tere jaise londe bahut dekhe hai maine ladne se pehle thodi research kar le mere pe AK ye do word hi kaafi hai meri pehchan ke liye.

Ladki:- ladkiyo se baat karne ki tameez nahi hai kya tumhe?


Main:- nahi!


Ladki:- dekh lungi tumhe!

Main:- dekh liyo jee bhar ke, photo bhej dunga apni shaadi ke liye.


Ab aage koi dialogue maarta isse pehle teesre period ki bell baji aur ek takla teacher aa gaya math ka.



Khair main bhi apni jagah pe aake baitha to wo aage wala ladka bola jiska naam deepak hai khaas chela hai ye mera.


Deepak:- AK bhai principal iske papa ka dost hai.


Main:- to kya lawda kaat lenge mera.

Wo kuch nahi bola


Main:- waise is hot londiya ka naam kya hai,

Deepak:- riya hai bhai.

Hmmm riya! Mast maal hai waise.



Wo deepak bhi chup ho gaya kyuki usey pata tha wo mujhse behes nahi kar sakta even koi nahi kar sakta.


Maine aaj ka din badi muskil se nikala school mein. Jab chutti huyi to bc jaise mukti mil gayi is sansaar se.


Maine ek kagaz pe apna number likha jo priya ko dena tha bus mein. Bus mein bhi main chupchap baitha tha ki tabhi achanak se bus ne break maari bhut tez mera dhyan kahi aur tha isliye mera sir baja aage wali seat pe, dard ke sath gussa bhi bhut aaya isliye kuch meethe sabd nikal gaye sabke samne,


Main:- lawde andha hai kya, dekh ke na chaka sakta.


Main bol hi raha tha aur puri bus mujhe ghur rahi thi ki kaisi satkeli khopdi hai ye lekin tabhi ek ladka bus mein chadha, sakal se hi gunda type lag raha tha


Ladka:- oyyy AK kon hai tumme se ?

Sab bache mere ko dekhne lage.


Main:- appointment leke miliyo abhi mood na hai mera, ya number leja mera call kar liyo. :roll3: is

Us ladke ne mijhe ghura aur bola


Ladka:- chal niche utar tujhse baat karni hai.


Mujhe pata tha bc jo bhi hai ye baat to nahi karni inhe pelne hi aaye honge ,par bhenchod ye hai kon.


Main:- aeyyy driver bus chala be koi bhi aisi kaise school ki bus mein chadh sakta hai utar isko.


Driver:- beta ye MLA sahab ka beta hai.


:WTF: MLA ka ladka mere piche kyu pada hai.

Kahir main koi scene create nahi karna chahta isliye socha niche utar ke baat karta hu jada bolega to pel dunga.


Main:- chal bhai niche kya baat karni hai tere ko.


jab utarne laga to chupke se wo kagaz priya ki goad me daal di jo manisha ne dekh liya aur wo hum dono ko aankhe faad ke dekhne lagi.


Bc niche utra to gaand fat gayi kyuki samne 20 ladke khade they aur saare college students lag rahe they. Bas dimag mein ek baat aayi ki chud gaya aaj to.


Saare bus ke bache humey hi dekh rahe they, matlab bejati pakki hai :sigh:


Main:- bol bhai kya baat hai.


Ladka:- tu us school se naam katwa le.


Main:- aur main aisa kyu karu.


Ladka:- tujhe pata bhi hai aaj tune kis ke ladke pe hath uthaya hai jagdish Chaudhary ke bete pe jo harsh Chaudhary ka bhai hai.

Main:- kon Harsh Chaudhary, wait wait tu kahi us ki to baat nahi kar raha.


Bhenchod! Ander hi ander chillaya main kyuki rohan ne bataya tha sabko lekin main hawabaazi mein dhyan nahi diya.


Ab is harsh Chaudhary ke baare mein bata du
Ye basically ek white criminal hai, matlab delhi ka don hai ye, har kaale dhandhe mein naam hai iska lekin isko koi touch nahi kar sakta kyuki koi saboot nahi hai kisi ke paas, normal log to isey business man samjhte hai.


Matlab gaand fat chuki thi meri kyuki maine ek don ke bhatije ko thappad maara.


Ladka:- abey kaha kho gaya.


Main:- sun be lawde mujhe jhaant fark nahi padta kon hai wo aur tu kon hai.

Hawabaazi main bol to gaya lekin iska anzaam bura hoga socha na tha,

Kyuki piche se ek bat mere ghutne ke piche wale hisse pe pada aur wo itni tez tha ki main gaand faad chillaya lekin still khada tha aur tabhi us ladke ne samne se ek punch diya muh pe bc sab kuch hill gaya mera,

2 second ke liye pura blank ho gaya main, par ek bat aur pada ghutne pe aur main fir chillaya aur is baar sidha ghutno pe niche gira main kyuki jaan hi na bachi thi be ab vivek ki yaad aa rahi thi ki wo lawda yaha hota to aadhi maar usey padti.

Khair wo londa mere samne aaya jisne piche se maara tha mujhe aur ye lawda rohan hi tha.

Rohan:- arey arey AK sir to ghutno pe aa gaye.

Maine usey ghur ke dekha

Rohan:- aankhe nichi karke baat kar.

Main:- tu khud hi karwa ke dekh le.


Usne meri chest mein laat marni chahi lekin main laat pakdi aur usey apni taraf khicha aur wo niche gira main uska pade pade ka galla pakad liya aur bhut jor se daba diya like uski aankhe laal ho gayi thi us chutiye ne nakhoon tak gada diye they mere hatho mein. Lekin wo marta usse pehle mere sir pe ek danda pada aur mera hath apne aap chut gaya main blank ho chuka tha aur piche ki taraf gir gaya aur fir laat dande jo pade wo pade mujhe kuch mehsoos nahi ho raha tha, wo sab ruke aur us londe ne mera gala pakad ke uthaya mera face pura khoon se sana hua tha koi pehchaan bhi na paaye aisa tha,

Ladka:- ab bhi aankhe niche nahi huyi teri


Main:- koi nahi karwa sakta bhsdk.


Lekin wo mujhe aur marte isse pehle police ki car ka siren suna aur wo sab rafu-chakar ho liye aur main piche ko ludak gaya aur meri nazar jab bus ki taraf gayi to bc dil hi ruk gaya, kyuki manisha ka face pura anshoo se bhiga hua tha aur priya ka face bas dara hua sa tha matlab manisha ke dil mein kuch to hai yahi soch ke mere dard bhare face pe smile aa gayi.


Ab blood bhut jada nikal chuka tha aur isliye aankhe band ho rahi thi meri lekin dhundhli aankho se manisha meri taraf aati huyi nazar aa rahi thi, wo aayi aur mere sir ko apni god mein rakh liya.


Manisha:- AK please aankhe band mat karna police aa hi gayi bas

Main bolna to chahta tha lekin bol na paya isliye bas muskura diya.

Aur mere muskurane se wo aur tez rone lagi, bc rota kon hai yaar meri gaand tut gayi main fir bhi na roya aur na ye bola ki aur mat maaro.


Manisha:- kyu karte ho tum aisa, kya jaroorat thi ladne ki normal ladko ki tarah bhi to reh sakte ho.


Ab mujhe fir se apni pitayi yaad aa gayi jo manisha ko dekhke main bhul chuka tha.

Main:- calm down. Pehle us MLA ko marunga aur fir us Harsh Chaudhary ke pure khandan ko jinda jala dunga, ek ko bhi nahi chodunga.


Aur ye bolte bolte meri aankhe band ho gayi, bas ab aag lag chuki thi puri body main, body behosh ho chuki tha lekin dimag still kaam kar raha tha aur bas ek hi baat gunz rahi thi ki

" I want revenge bitch, lets the devil comes outside"

Aur ye sayad meri pehli intention thi jo mujhe puri karni thi, ab dheere dheere dimag bhi sunn pad gaya aur main so gaya gehri nind mein ya dimag jo bhi ho, kyuki uske baad kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nahi.


TO BE CONTINUED ??
Nice update bhai
 
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:thanks: for your lovely review brother
Aise review se motivation milta hai bhut



Vivek ke liye kyuki uski gaand tut sakti thi


Ek chota sa character


Wohi same jealsousy aage badhne ki hod


Imperial blue :daru:


Aage aayegi uski bhi story


Awesom posm murder tha update ka


Yep aage se dhyan rakhunga



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