Adultery My Complete Intentions - The Beginning

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Congress bhai new aur kafi achchha update tha yeh

Thanks Vipul bhai

 

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Devil Bhai Apne to Pehle update me he dahmaka kiye huwe he
Nice strat bro
next update
Ka intejar rahega Devil

Jamesleon bhai

 

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bina sex ke liye kaunsa prefix hona chahiye ????

 

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Nice start bro

Thanks bhidu

 

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abe janam hoga tabhi to baat aage badhegi na



haa pakaya hota to literally me updates skips kar deta



gaon ko well developed gaon bol raha noob haa town sahi hai



haa ye bat to hai ki paisa hai ya nai wo har kisi ki najar me alag chiz hoti hai

first person story achhi ja rahi hai

haa jo bola sahi bola aadmi fattu ban sakta hai dar ki bajah se aur dar shayad kuchh aur bhi karwa sakta hai





wese jitna likha hai chhote dimag se utna badhiya hai

hota hai esa jab aapko kuchh explain na kiya jaye ya fir puri baat na pata ho

mandir se to uthake laye the ki nai wo to baad me pata chal jayega men

dekhna ye hai ki aage wo dialogue to nai aayega na

aaj mere pass gadi hai bungla hai bank balance hai tumhare pass kya hai aaaiiinn

mere pass maa hai





ye dada dadi ko lapetne wali line sahi me mast thi

haa to kon rakhega be ese logo se najdikiya

roj uthke jagde hi dekhna hai na fir





budhe sab wese hi the ijjat bahot pyari hoti hai inhe

fir bhale hi khud lota leke subhe sabko apni gand dikhaye




sab dhire dhire hi bade hote men thodi na ye boobs hai to zyada masle to jaldi se bade hogye

ye padhke mujhe wo yaad aaya ki saala ek time to apun ko laga apun hi bhagwan hai sab pata rehta tha ki kya hoga

time table ban gaya tha

dekhte hai iske dar k sath sath jo chiz badhi hai wo kitni khatarnak badhti hai



haa ek time k baad body dhit ho jayegi

haa to akela insan jo dar dar k ji raha ho aur jiske ghar me hi baap maarta ho wo bahar jake kya ladega men

ghar ka time table kam thodi hai jo bahar jake bhi maar khani hai



agar dada dabata nai to shayad wo bewda baap ab tak wo bhi saaf kar deta men

pata nai but bahot suna hai ki daru ki bajah se ghar khai hogya ho ya paise ki tangi aagyi ho





senti kar dega ju mujhe

haa ye sabse khatarnak part hota hai



haa ye baat mujhe bhi samaj nai aayi

aur agar hero ki mom hero ki uske baap k pass chhod k gayi to kyun gayi

kuchh to reason hoga na

aur gayi to gayi wapis uski khabar kyun na li

haa jab wo chhota bacha tha to kese yaad rahega men but kuchh keh nai sakte men shayad usko yaad bhi ho lekin sach to aage jake hi pata chalega





ye to sala bada twist nikla be

dekhne layak ye bhi hota ki us manisha ka reaction kya hota




achha aur tez dimag dar aur uske baad jo nafrat ye sare deadly combos hai men

dekhte hai aage kake ye sab chiz kesa tandav karti hai

baat to sahi hai samne hath utha sakte hai lekin abhi bhi fayda kya hai

loha garam ho tab hi hathoda marne ka







haha mobile aur bache ke hath me

tharki insan porn sites dekhta rahgea

haa mobile aur internet ka best advantage wahi hai ki aap padh sakte ho usme se

jese log sex kese karna hai konsi nayi position hai wo sab bhi wahi se sikhte hai

dekhte hai bacha sikh k kitna aage badhta hai aur kya kya fayda hota hai use





ye manna possible to nai but chhut bhi sakti hai

wese ek dry state wala esa opinion de wo sahi nai lagega

:dekhte hai uska raaz kya hai



haa dekha mene bola tha bache k hath me mobile yani wo bigdega

haa aazadi jo mil gayi to ab uski haramipan khul k bahar aayegi na

haa to ghar walo ko itni herani kyun huyi men

baap wahi karta tha usne chhod diya to ladke ne apna khandani warse me mila business start kara

dekhte hai ye sab aage usko kaha tak le jate hai

wese dost log uske the






ye aazadi aur mobile ne isko mast bigada hai

dekhte hai ye badlaw aur kya kya kand karte hai





kuchh bar first and third person ka mixture dikh raha hai lekin notice nahi hoga to chal sakta hai but will tell you

dekhte hai na ke barabar ki family me kon hai aur kya kar rahe




dada ka to thik hai usko to abhi tak apne sarpanch hone ka ghamand hi nai gaya bc

dadi k bare me galat to kuchh insect readers aur fan hi soch sakte bc

koi ek esa character jisko hero pyar karta hai interesting





true suspense to mummy k bare me jo hai wohi dekhna hai ki uska kya kehna hai men

haa ye bat sahi kahi ki uski bajah se shayad hero nafrat kar betha duniya se ya fir duniya me bane rishto se

wese duniya ki maa chodne ki jarurat nai hai duniya to already madarchod hai





ye bat dekhne ki hai ki vishal k sath aage jake milan kese hoga aur kya kya hoga fir

ravi ko line pe laya matlab pit diya kya usko





inka bhi kalyan karega kya hero ye dekhna hai




manish ka number jab lagega to kese aur kesa number lagega wo dekhna hai men

karan ka bhi number laga do men

simran ka kya hai ye to pata nai but aage jake kuchh to raaz wagera khulega na aur insect readers apne khyal dur rakhna BC





haa important character k bare me to tu pehle bhi bol chuka hai

thare bare me janke kya karna hai bc sab 1st person hai to thare bare me hi batayega na tu khud

autobiography





principal ko tapka to nahi diya na men

to chhote se sahar se suru hogi tabahi





ladkiya pyar karti hai

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dekhte hai kya kya pata chalta hai AK k bare me







ladkiyo k samne hawa bazi ye kab kiya mene esa be

me bhi rebu ese hi dunga aage fir hawa bazi wale

haa dekhte hai aage



haa ye achha kiya aaj hi first update deke

as a introduction update it is good

kuchh kuchh jagah mujhe 1st and 3rd person ka mixup laga but nazar nai aayega

update bahot mast tha shayad mere rebu se ju ko pata lag jayega (roj itne bade rebu ki aasha na rakhiyo)

story k plot k hisab se 1st person narration is good

jo ju bich me ( ) comments likhte ho usko 1st person banao to aur mazedar ho jayega kuchh kuchh jagah wo comments 3rd person lagti hai

but overall starting ekdum fadu kiya hai

dekhte hai aage kya hota hai jab naye school naye sahar me hero apni gandh machayega

for next update
bahot chhap liya mene

-:Demon King:- darling
Bc kya bolu main mujhe khud nahi pata kyu gaand maar li meri tune waise jo galtiya hai unko sudhar lunga agli baar se
Bas aise hi review dete rahe aur teri bahut bajaunga story mein

 

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NICE UPDATE BHAI

Thanks bhidu

 

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Trailer ki khushbu aa rahi hai ya thriller ki men

Wese sahi kaha story sach me mast hai aur thriller to iske nag ang me bhara hai

Dekhle beta next month me bhi start kar raha hu to yaha jitni meri marega waha me uski double bajaunga

Itna bhola bhi na hai ju SK jitna is comment men ban raha men

 

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Fabulous update bhai

Thanks Black water bhai

 

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Jesa update vesa review bro
Short update,short review ??

3500 word ka update chota

 

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Next update 30 min baad



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