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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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Lovingheart

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Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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hardik arora

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bhai jabardast update ... lekin ik baat khna chahta hi vo yeh ki is story me suspence itna jyada bnao ki story dhasu lge kyunki ab tk maine jo pda h usse yeh toh pta chl gya ki kishan ke pass powers h ... toh suspence itna bnao ki sab readers ko suruwat se ik kadi se kadi jodni pde or or sare suspence waqt aane pe kholo jab suspence kholne ka shi samay ho... or kishan ke pass powers h yeh story end me pta chle kishan ke frnds or kishan ki family ko
 

Lovingheart

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bhai jabardast update ... lekin ik baat khna chahta hi vo yeh ki is story me suspence itna jyada bnao ki story dhasu lge kyunki ab tk maine jo pda h usse yeh toh pta chl gya ki kishan ke pass powers h ... toh suspence itna bnao ki sab readers ko suruwat se ik kadi se kadi jodni pde or or sare suspence waqt aane pe kholo jab suspence kholne ka shi samay ho... or kishan ke pass powers h yeh story end me pta chle kishan ke frnds or kishan ki family ko

Bhai jyada lamba suspense meri story ke liye hanikarak hai but ek suspense abhi baki rahega jab tak uska sahi waqt ni ayega
 
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Update 8


Jab servent ne meri halat Pihu ko batayi to wph pareshan ho gayi aur jaldi jaldi sab sametne lagi Ritu bhi use hadbadi mein dekh samajh gayi ki baat Kishan se related hai kyu ki Pihu aksar tab hi hadbadi mein kam karti thi jab Kishan ko kuch hota gai ja Kishan se related baat ho Pihu buri tarha pareshan ho jati thi

Ritu - Pihu chodh in cheezo ko chal Kishan ke pass chale

Pihu - par yeh files

Ritu - yeh sab important ni hai Kishan important hai

Pihu - han chal

Dono jaldi se vahan se nikal gayi


πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ


Vahi Mahi Nitin aur Arun ke sath khushiyan mana rahi thi par isse pehle usne Rahul ki class bhi lagayi ki kese ghatiya gunde bheje the usne par akhir mein sab jashan mana rahe the

Mahi - aaj main bohat khush hu mene lagbhag apni manzil pa li hai

Arun - sahi kaha aaj tumhari vajha se ham bhi apni manzil ke kareeb hai aaj se Kishan hamare hatho ki kathputli hoga

Mahi - sahi kaha par mera irada use apna gulam banana nahi hai

Arun - yeh sab chodho aur apne vaade ki baat karo kab pura kar rahi ho apna vaada

Mahi - bohat jaldi

Arun aur Nitin khush ho gaye aur vahan se chale gaye par yahan Mahi ki ankhen nam thi woh khud se boli

Mahi - agar meri mazburi na hoti to main tum dono ko apne aas pass bhi na bhatakne deti par meri mazburi hai maa baba mujhe maff karna shayad mera rasta galat hai par mujhe yahi rasta sahi laga

Aur woh ankhen saaf karke age ke kam mein lag gayi



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Idhar Pihu aur Ritu ghar pohanch chuki thi aur jaldi bhahti hui Kishan me room mein ghus gayi Kishan abi bhi gumsum sa bed pe pada dheere dheere asun baha raha tha

Pihu aur Ritu jaldi se uske pass gaye Ritu ne uska sar pakad uthaya aur apni goad mein rakh liya aur uske sar mein ungliyan firane lagi

Aur Pihu ne uske upar jhuk ke uska chehra apne hatho mein tham liya

Pihu - kya hua babu ese kyu ro rahe ho

Ritu - batao bache kya hua koi baat hui kya aaj fir se

Unko batein sun ke Kishan ki rulayi fut padi aur usne Pihu ko gale laga liya aur Ritu ka hath pakad liya aur rone laga


Kishan - (rote hue) didi aaj fir mujh se insan ko samjhne ke galti ho gayi aaj fir dosti ke naam pe main dhokha kha gya aaj fir kisi ne dosti ke naam pe dil chalni chalni kar diya

Kishan ki batein sunn dono ladkio ko ankhen bhi nam thi

Ritu - Kishu beta bata to kya hua puri baat to bata hame

Fir Koshan ne unhe puri baat bata di jise sun unhe gussa ane laga aur Kishan ke dil mein kisi aur ke liye feelings hona yeh baat unke dil mein dard utha gayi

Kishan - par maine bhi unhe sawak sikhane ki soch li hai aap log kuch nahi karengi

Ritu - bhai ham un sab ki jaan le lenge

Kishan - nahi di apko meri kasam aap esa kuch nahi karogi

Pihu - par bhai

Kishan - par bar kuch nahi maine kasam di hai
Agar todi to mera mara muh

Abi Kishan ne pura bola bhi nahi ki Ritu ne jhuk ke uske hotho pe apne hoth rakh diye
Aur Pihu uski chest pe mukke marne lagi

Ritu ne uske hoth chodh diye fir boli

Ritu - bhai esi batein mat bola karo tum

Pihu - bhai tum bohat gande ho tumhare siva hamara hai hi kon tum plz esi batein mat kiya karo

Ritu - agar tujhe kuch ho gya to ham bhi zinda nahi reh payengi

Kishan - (rote hue) di mera konsa mann karta hai yeh sab kehne ka ya karne ka par kya karu yeh waqt har baar mere sath koi khel khelta hai 4 saal pehle ki batein abi tak bhula na paya hu aur aaj yeh Arun aur Nitin

Pihu uske asun saaf karte hue

Pihu - bhai chodho unhe tum age se esi batein mat karna bas verna ham kabhi tumse baat ni karenge

Kishan - acha nahi karunga par meri ek sharat hai

Ritu - (Kishan ki gaal pe hath ferte hue) aur woh kya hai

Kishan - yahi ki aap dono mujhe yeh lip kiss na kiya karo

Pihu jhat se upar uth ke uske hoth chus li aur boli

Pihu - yeh to kabhi bhi na hoga

Aur Ritu ne bhi turant uske hotho ek sur bar chume aur boli

Ritu - yeh cheez to ham ni chodne wale

Kishan - (muh fula ke) di aap bhi apko bhi Pihu di ne bigad diya jao meko ni apse baat karni

Aur woh side hoke let gya
Pihu aur Ritu ne use dono taraf se gher liya aur usse se sat ke let gaye aur dono ne se jakad liya

Pihu - ale ale hamala babu gucha ho gya

Ritu - han woh bhi inna sara ab iche manay kese

Pihu - Ritu meko to ek hi tareeka ata hai

Ritu - aur woh konsa

Pihu - woh hai yeh

Aur yeh bolke usne Kishan ke pet mein gudgudi shuru kar di Kishan hasne laga udhar se Ritu bhi shuru ho gayi ab Kishan bin pani ki machli ki tarha tadaf raha tha

(TP - abe hutiye drama kyu kar ra jab gudgudi na hori

Kishan - to kya karu be drama hi karunga tujhe unke chehre pe hassi nahi dikh rahi kya

TP - to

Kishan - Abe Lodu jab main inki khushi ke liye main apni jaan dao pe laga sakta hu to iss hassi ke liye chota sa drama bhi nahi kar sakta kya aur vese bhi rulaya bhi to maine hi tha na inhe

TP - acha yeh chodh mujhe yeh bata ki tu in dono ka pyar kab apnayega

Kishan - tujhe kya lagta hai ki yeh itna asan hai ham logo ka Rishta vich mein ata hai iss liye main inke pyar ko accept ni kar pa raha hu aur agar maine accept bhi kar liya to samaz kya bolega

TP - Samaz ki maa ki ankh mujhe yeh bata ki kya samaz ne Pihu ko sambhala tha nahi na kya pehle Ritu ke pariwar wale usse pyar karte the nahi na to fir ab Samaz kya gand marvane ayega agar aya bhi to sab ko khatam kar diyo samjha kya

Kishan - tu samajh nahi raha hai yaar

TP - abe oye bhosdike samaz tu ni raha hai tu logo ke chehre padh leta hai na to unke bhi padhe honge chal yeh chodh unko tujh se kitna pyar hai yeh bina chehra padhe hi pata chal jata hai dekh tu udas kya hua dekh kese tadap gayi woh dono asun the unki ankhon mein ab dekh teri hassi se unke chehre pe bhi hassi hai jese teri jaan un dono mein hai vese hi unki tujh mein ab fasila tere hath mein hai unko sari zindgi dukhi karna hai ya khush rakhna hai

Kishan - Par

TP - par bar kuch nahi ab ja unke pass nahi to gand tod dunga teri samjha

Kishan - ok ok ja ra hu gussa kyu hora hai)

(Ab kahani Kishan ki jubani kuch waqt ke liye)

Main jaan bujh ke jhooth mooth ka has raha tha aur woh dono mujhe gudgudi karti ja rahi thi

Main - di bas karo plz ab aur nahi sehan hota hahahaha plz di hahaha

Pihu - hihihihi ni hatungi bol gussa hoga hamse

Main - hahaha nahi di plz ruko na

Ritu - hehehe muh fulane ka drama karega

Main - hahahaha nahi di nahi marunga plz chodh do na apko meri kasam

Mere kasam dete hi donl ruk gayi aur hafne lagi haste haste thak gayi thi dono main bari bari se dono ke mathe pe kiss kiya aur khud se chipka liya un dono ne bhi meri cest pe sar rakh liya aur sakoon se lait gayi

Fir achanak se Pihu di ko kuch sujha aur woh mere upar let gayi ufffff unke naram naram boobs meri chahthi mein dhas gaye kuch der tak unho me meri ankhon mein dekha aur woh dheere dheere meri face ke kareeb apna face lane lagi aur main na mein sar hilane laga lekin woh nahi ruki

Unki ankhon mein jo beshumar pyar tha woh dekh ke main aone ander ke jazbaton ko sambhal nahi paya aur apni palke jhapka ke unko kiss ki anumati dedi

Fir kya tha unho be jaldi se apne hoth mere hotho se jod diye aur halke halke chusne lagi haaaayyyyeeee kya maza tha main vyan ni kar sakta unke naram naram honth aur unka rass uffffff maine bhi response dena shuru kar diya dheere dheere kiss ne raftar pakad li aur Pihu di ne mera hath pakad ke apne hip pe rakh diya par maine hata liya aur kiss tod ke unse bola


Main - di abi main insab me liye tyar ni hu plz

Pihu di - ok babu i understand

Fur unho ne halka se mere hotho ko chuma aur side ho gayi unke side hote hi Ritu di mere upar lait gayi aur unho ne kiss shuru kar diya kuch der unke hoth chuse fur woh bhi meri side mein lait gayi

Main - I Love You Pihu Di I Love You Ritu Di

Pihu di, Ritu di - I Love You to babu

Pihu - aur han ab se yeh di lagana chodh do aur sirf naam se pukarna hame samjhe mere janu

Main - ji jo aagya

(Now its time fir third person)

Uske baad teeno ek ek bar aur kiss ki aur ese hi laite laite so gaye ek dusre ki bahon mein
 
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