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Operation Room – Silence, Then Chaos
INT. OPERATION THEATRE – NIGHT
Sab kuch white hai… lights, gloves, bed… aur uske beech ek aadmi – 50 saal ka, rgakha hua, behosh.
(Heartbeat monitor: Beep… Beep… Beep…)
Suddenly –
DOCTOR (urgent tone)
“Scalpel!”
NURSE 1 (quickly)
“Here, sir.”
DOCTOR (focused)
“BP drop ho raha hai… suction do… jaldi!”
(Suction sound, metal clinks, monitor speeds up)
DOCTOR (calm but tense)
“Chest open karo… clear the airway… yes, now!”
Ek aur nurse pasine se bhiga hua kapda uske forehead se hataati hai. Har koi busy hai. Har second bhaari hai.
Phir ek lamba silence… monitor seedha line dikhata hai…
(Beep…. flatline….)
Doctor aankhon mein thoda guilt, thoda thakaan leke peeche hota hai.
DOCTOR (thandi saans ke saath)
He’s back. Par zyada time nahi hai. ICU mein shift karo.”
NURSE 2 (softly)
“yes, sir.”
Doctor’s CABIN – The Truth of Loneliness
INT. DOCTOR’S CABIN – NIGHT (few hours later)
Doctor chair par baitha hai, aankhon ke neeche dark circles, haath mein file.
DOCTOR
“Call kar kisi family member ko… bata do ki halat critical hai.”
NURSE (pausing, condused)
“Sir… ye akela admit hua tha. koi bhi sath nahi aaya.”
DOCTOR (raising eyes)
“Koi dost? Relatives? Emergency contact number?”
NURSE (thoda halki awaaz mein)
“File mein kuch bhi nahi sir… aur jab admit hua tha tab bhi. Naam tak who khud ne nahi bataya tha.”
Ek moment ke liye cabin mein silence ho jaata hai.
DOCTOR (thoda soch kar)
“Hmm… akela aadmi…”
NURSE (soft tone)
“jaise… kisi ka tha hi nahi.”
ICU – First Inner Monologue
INT. ICU ROOM – NIGHT
Light dim hai, machine slow deep kar rahi hai.
Main aankhein band kiye padha hoon… par andar kuch chal raha hai…
Main akela nahi tha… par main kabhi kisi ka tha hi nahi. Ye jo silence hai na… ye naya nahi hai mere liye. Ye silence jo tum mehsoos kar rahe ho ye Bacchpan se hi sath tha mere.
Bas ek zinda laash ke jaisa bed par leta hua hoon. Jaan chali bhi gayi meri toh kya badlega? Shaanti tab bhi nahi milegi…
Kyu? kyunki jalane wala bhi koi nahi hai…
Haan, mujhe pata hai – yahi deserve karta hoon main.
Gande, ghinone kaam kiye hain maine… aur shayad isi liye yeh sab mere saath ho raha hai. Yeh akelapan, yeh andhera – meri hi banayi hui kabr hai.
(pause, halki hansi)
Btw, sorry… maine aapko apna introduction toh diya hi nahi. Aur pata nahi kya kya bak raha hoon – budha jo ho gaya hoon. dimaag bhi thik se kaam nahi karta.
Toh haan. aap jo dekh rahe ho… who end hai. Life 100 saal ki hoti hai kehte hain… par mere liye bas 50 mein full stop lagne wala hai.
Ab toh sab mere haath se ja chukka hai… right?
(light laugh, but thoda dard bhara)
Ager aap free ho… toh main aapko apni zindagi ki ek rollercoaster ride par le jana chahunga.
Aur BTW…!! abhi mere paas koi kaam toh raha nahi…!!
Waise bhi, ager aap busy hote… toh abhi yahan sunne nahi aate. Right? Haha…sorry.
Toh chaliye… chalet hain…
32 saal piche…
Jab main 18 ka tha. Jawani ka pehla jhatka… aur zindagi ka sabse bada sach.
Operation Room – Silence, Then Chaos
INT. OPERATION THEATRE – NIGHT
Sab kuch white hai… lights, gloves, bed… aur uske beech ek aadmi – 50 saal ka, rgakha hua, behosh.
(Heartbeat monitor: Beep… Beep… Beep…)
Suddenly –
DOCTOR (urgent tone)
“Scalpel!”
NURSE 1 (quickly)
“Here, sir.”
DOCTOR (focused)
“BP drop ho raha hai… suction do… jaldi!”
(Suction sound, metal clinks, monitor speeds up)
DOCTOR (calm but tense)
“Chest open karo… clear the airway… yes, now!”
Ek aur nurse pasine se bhiga hua kapda uske forehead se hataati hai. Har koi busy hai. Har second bhaari hai.
Phir ek lamba silence… monitor seedha line dikhata hai…
(Beep…. flatline….)
Doctor aankhon mein thoda guilt, thoda thakaan leke peeche hota hai.
DOCTOR (thandi saans ke saath)
He’s back. Par zyada time nahi hai. ICU mein shift karo.”
NURSE 2 (softly)
“yes, sir.”
Doctor’s CABIN – The Truth of Loneliness
INT. DOCTOR’S CABIN – NIGHT (few hours later)
Doctor chair par baitha hai, aankhon ke neeche dark circles, haath mein file.
DOCTOR
“Call kar kisi family member ko… bata do ki halat critical hai.”
NURSE (pausing, condused)
“Sir… ye akela admit hua tha. koi bhi sath nahi aaya.”
DOCTOR (raising eyes)
“Koi dost? Relatives? Emergency contact number?”
NURSE (thoda halki awaaz mein)
“File mein kuch bhi nahi sir… aur jab admit hua tha tab bhi. Naam tak who khud ne nahi bataya tha.”
Ek moment ke liye cabin mein silence ho jaata hai.
DOCTOR (thoda soch kar)
“Hmm… akela aadmi…”
NURSE (soft tone)
“jaise… kisi ka tha hi nahi.”
ICU – First Inner Monologue
INT. ICU ROOM – NIGHT
Light dim hai, machine slow deep kar rahi hai.
Main aankhein band kiye padha hoon… par andar kuch chal raha hai…
Main akela nahi tha… par main kabhi kisi ka tha hi nahi. Ye jo silence hai na… ye naya nahi hai mere liye. Ye silence jo tum mehsoos kar rahe ho ye Bacchpan se hi sath tha mere.
Bas ek zinda laash ke jaisa bed par leta hua hoon. Jaan chali bhi gayi meri toh kya badlega? Shaanti tab bhi nahi milegi…
Kyu? kyunki jalane wala bhi koi nahi hai…
Haan, mujhe pata hai – yahi deserve karta hoon main.
Gande, ghinone kaam kiye hain maine… aur shayad isi liye yeh sab mere saath ho raha hai. Yeh akelapan, yeh andhera – meri hi banayi hui kabr hai.
(pause, halki hansi)
Btw, sorry… maine aapko apna introduction toh diya hi nahi. Aur pata nahi kya kya bak raha hoon – budha jo ho gaya hoon. dimaag bhi thik se kaam nahi karta.
Toh haan. aap jo dekh rahe ho… who end hai. Life 100 saal ki hoti hai kehte hain… par mere liye bas 50 mein full stop lagne wala hai.
Ab toh sab mere haath se ja chukka hai… right?
(light laugh, but thoda dard bhara)
Ager aap free ho… toh main aapko apni zindagi ki ek rollercoaster ride par le jana chahunga.
Aur BTW…!! abhi mere paas koi kaam toh raha nahi…!!
Waise bhi, ager aap busy hote… toh abhi yahan sunne nahi aate. Right? Haha…sorry.
Toh chaliye… chalet hain…
32 saal piche…
Jab main 18 ka tha. Jawani ka pehla jhatka… aur zindagi ka sabse bada sach.
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