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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Zoro x

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Two days later

Ashmita apne car ko kahi gusse me bhagaye ja rahi thi, uske chehre par gussa aur bahut jada tension dikh rahi thi
" es kutte ka main muh tod dungi agar aaj mujhe ye dikh gaya to, humesha eski marji to chalegi nahi jab man aaya kuch bhi kar diya jab man aaya gayab ho jaye, ek baar batana to chahiye na ki kuch kaam hai, kahi ja raha hu, etne time me aajaunga, tension mat lena lekin nahi esko kisi ki fikar ho to bataye na... maine bhi kaise insaan ko apna dost bana liya... sab teri hi galti hai ashmita sab teri hi galti hai...ab bhugat..usse to vaise bhi koe fark nahi padta kisi chhij aur tu pareshan hoye ja"
Ashmita apne man me hi bhadakti hue apni car ko dodaye ja rahi thi aur jaldi hi vo apni manjil par pahuch gaye
Jaldi se ghadi park ki aur upar ki aur chalne lagi
Gate ke samne pahuch kar
" vo nahi hai yaha par" piche se aawaz aae aur jab ashmita ne mud ke dekha to madhuri ma'am khadi thi

Ashmita- aapko pata hai kaha gaya hai?
Do dino se gayab hai, na phone utha raha hai aur na message ka jawab de raha hai?
Ma'am- mujhe bhi nahi pata
Maine bhi call ki thi lekin pata nahi kaha gaya... humesha aise hi gayab ho jata hai kisi ko bina bataye

Ashmita- es baar milega to eski tange tood dungi fir dekhti hu kaise bhagega
Ma'am- coffee peoge?

Ashmita- nahi vo actually mujhe kaam hai thanks
Ma'am- kya pata aa hi jaye coffee Peete peete

Ashmita ka to vaise hi jane ka man nahi tha vaha se to vo Ma'am ko hi ha bol kar unke ghar par chali gaye

Ma'am kuch der baad do cup coffee leke aaye aur ashmita ke sath bath gaye

Kuch der tak to koe kuch nahi bola lekin fir Ma'am ko hi bolna pada
Ma'am- ek baat puchu?
Ashmita- jee

Ma'am- lucifer kya mayne rahta hai tumhre liye?
Ashmita- matlab?

Ma'am- don't get me wrong I just want to know
Vo to kuch batata nahi hai aur esliye kuch help bhi nahi ho pati uski
Tum hi bata do
Ashmita- mera na kabhi koe dost nahi raha... bachpan me ek tha lekin vo chhod ke chala gaya uske baad kabhi vo friends wali feelings hi nahi aaye
Koe dost bhi banana chahte the to just because I'm rich
Lekin lucifer alag hai, main kaise batau aapko but main nahi chahti ki vo kabhi mujhse door ho

Ma'am- you want to be with him as a friend?
Ashmita- Ma'am
Main aapko Ma'am bula sakti hu?
Lucifer bhi Ma'am hi bulata hai

Ma'am-sure
Ashmita- I'm not gonna lie but something I really hate him I mean most of the time
Vo mujhe bas irritate karta rahta hai lekin fir yaad karti hu to acha bhi lagta hai

Ma'am- you love him?
Ashmita- nahi Ma'am I don't love him
Matlab vaise wala pyaar nahi hai

Ma'am- tum confuse ho
Ashmita- main usse dost manti hu
Dost ki tarah hi dekhti hu aur dost ki tarah hi uski care karti hu

Ma'am- aur vo kya chahta hai?
Ashmita- I don't know
Vo to bas apne aapko janana chahta hai sayad

Ma'am- kya tumhe usse hamdardi hai uske past ki vajah se?
Ashmita- past to sabka aisa hi hota hai
In fact everyone have a story
Vo jaise mujhe treat karta hai us se aisa lagta hai ki I'm also a normal human being
Bas that's it

Ma'am- usse kabhi kisi dusri ladki ke sath dekhti ho to kaisa lagta hai?
Ashmita- kaisa bhi nahi lagta
Jab vo mujhse juth bolta hai to gussa aata hai

Ma'am- he is a good guy
Ashmita- I know
Bas usse thoda sahi guidance ki jarurat hai

Ma'am- vo tum de sakti ho
Ashmita- nahi nahi
Meri to bilkul nahi sunta vo
Agar main usse kuch karne ko bolungi to vo bilkul uska opposite hi karega
Pagal kahi ka

Ma'am- ha ye to hai
Ulta to karta hai vo
Acha ek kaam karte hai
Ashmita- kya?

Ma'am- tum us par hak jamane lag jao
Agar koe baat nahi maan raha to ad jao ki hoga to yehi hai chahe kuch bhi kar lo fir dekho vo kaise react karta hai
Ashmita- mujhe pata hai kaise react karega

Ma'am- kaise?
Ashmita- ulti sidhi harkate karega fir mujhe gussa dilaega aur in the end apni marji ki kar dega fir baad me manane ki kosis bhi nahi karega

Ma'am- ab manana hi mat
Kya pata vo bhi tumhe apna samjhne lag jaye aise aur fir tumhe apni problems share karne lage?
Dekho problems solve tabhi hoti hai jab unka pata ho
Abhi to sirf etna pata hai ki vo apne past ke bare me nahi janta but eske aage kya?
Ashmita- eske aage kya?

Ma'am- kya pata kuch aur ho jiski vajah se vo pareshan ho aur bata nahi raha ho?
Kya pata aur bhi bahut bade reason ho?
Ashmita- aap uske liye etna kyu sochte ho?

Ma'am- uska dard apna jaisa lagta hai
Jab hum apno ko kho dete hai to mujhe pata hai kaisa feel hota hai
Ashmita- I'm sorry

Ma'am- koe baat nahi
I just want to help
Ashmita- okay ma'am
Ye bhi try karke dekh lenge but where is he?

Ma'am- uska ek associate hai
Usse pucha tumne?
Ashmita- areee ha
Naag usse sayad pata ho
Nahi nahi mujhe nahi lagta Ma'am usne naag ko bhi bataya hoga

Ma'am- try karke to dekh lo
Ashmita- mujhe pata nahi vo kaha rahta hai
Ek baar hi mila hai vo bhi restaurant me

Ma'am- dekh lo mil jaye to
Nahi to mujhe lagta hai lucifer aajayega vapas
Ashmita- mujhe pata nahi kal se kyu ghabrahat ho rahi hai

Ma'am- he will be fine
Usse kuch nahi hoga
Ashmita- badi muskil se ek dost mila tha
I just don't want to lose him

Ma'am- he is lucifer
Usse kya ho sakta hai?
Kya pata koe lead mili ho to chala gaya ho
Ashmita- ha lekin bata ke to jana chahiye tha na
Hum konsa usse rok hi lete?

Ma'am- etna dimag lucifer me?
Ashmita- pehle uska dimag ka ilaaz hi karana padega fir hi aage kuch hoga

Fir kuch der aur dono baat karte hai aur uske baad ashmita vaha se apne office chali jati hai
Usse lag raha tha ki kya pata vo direct office hi aagya ho lekin aisa hua nahi tha lucifer nahi aaya tha office

Ashmita apne cabin me chali gaye aur kaam karne ki kosis karne lagi lekin Lucifer ke thoughts usse kaam nahi karne de rahe the
Aise time par hume humesha yehi lagta hai ki kahi samne wala mar to nahi gaya hoga ya fir usse kuch ho to nahi gaya?
Yehi sab thoughts uske dimag me bhi chal rahe the ki achanak uska door knock hua aur usse fir se laga ki lucifer aagaya hai
" come in" vo turant boli lekin samne anisha ko dekh ke hi uska mood kharab ho gaya

Ashmita- kya hua? *rude*
Anisha- Ma'am design dikhane the *polite*

Ashmita- baad me aana * firse rude*
Anisha- okay ma'am
Aur jane lagi tabhi pata nahi ashmita ko kya hua "ruko, chalo dikhao abhi"
Aur anisha ruk gaye aur ashmita ke samne wali chair ke pass khadi hogaye

Ashmita- sit
Anisha dhayan se bath gaye aur ashmita ki taraf dekhne lag gaye
Ashmita- dikhao

Fir vo apne kuch designs dekhane lagi aur ashmita kuch der ke liye lucifer ko bhul kar apna kaam karne lagi

Ashmita- bahut issues hai esme
Tumhe ek baar aur check karna padega
Anisha- ma'am ye to demo tha bas idea ke liye

Ashmita- agar kisi ko apna idea bhi dikhane jao to bhi usme galtiyo ki koe gunjash nahi honi chahiye
Anisha- sorry Ma'am

Ashmita- tum meri expectations se acha kaam kar rahi hu bas thoda sa sikhne ki jarurat hai
Anisha- main jaldi hi sikh lungi ma'am

Ashmita- tumne lucifer ko dekha kya?
Pata nahi kyu ashmita ne anisha se pucha ye jante hue bhi ki usko mana kiya tha lucifer ke aas pass rahne ko
Anisha- nahi ma'am
Kya hua?

Ashmita- pata nahi kaha chala gaya bina bataye do din hogaye
Anisha- ma'am vo mujhe Beach ke pass mile the teen chaar din pehle

Ashmita- kuch bataya usne tumhe?
Anisha- jada baat nahi hue bas vo kisi ko dund rahe the

Ashmita- kisko?
Anisha- ye to nahi pata Ma'am
Main vaha bathi hue thi aur vo kahi se aaye the fir do minute baat karke chale gaye
Maine nahi ki ma'am unse baat vohi kar rahe the

Ashmita- koe baat nahi
Vo aisa hi hai
Tum ja sakti ho
Anisha- thank you ma'am
Aur vo mud ke chali gaye


Ek bistar par lucifer pada hua tha aur uske dil ke bicho bich ek ajeeb sa chaku laga hua tha
Khoon se uske kale kapde bhi rangeen ho chuke the aur vo vapas sapno ki dunia me ja chuka tha
Pata nahi vo kamjor pad raha tha ya fir uske dusman jada takatvar ho rahe the ki baar baar lucifer ko nuksaan pahuchane me kamyaab ho jate the
Ye to waqt hi bataega lekin abhi lucifer sahi condition me bilkul nahi tha
Vahi ek sundar si ladki uske jhakmo par marham patti kar rahi thi jo angreji dawaeya to bilkul nahi lag rahi thi
Sayad desi thi aur desi hi lucifer par acha asar bhi karti
Lekin abhi tak vo chaku nahi nikala tha uske sareer se sayad esliye ki usse khoon bahut jada bahne lag jayega aur bina hospital usse rokna bahut muskil hoga
Baki ke jo chhote mote jhakam the vaha par davae lagaye ja chuki thi
Ladki- kya ye chaku nikal du ab?
Kahi jada time rahne se koe reaction na kar de
Ladki 2- agar tum nikal sakti ho safely tabhi nikalna

Ladki- aapki help lagegi
Ladki 2- mujh se blood nahi dekha jata

Ladki- aaj dekhna hi padega aur bahut jada dekhna padega
Ladki 2- koe aur option nahi hai kya?

Ladki- ha hai na hospital le jane ka
Lekin vaha se sab explain kon karega?
Ladki 2- ye marna nahi chahiye
Bahut answer chahiye mujhe es se

Ladki - marna hota to abhi tak mar chuka hota
Main ek jhatke me ye nikalungi aur aap turant jhakam par es kapde ko dabba dena
Es par maine meds laga di hai lekin aapko ache se daba kar rakhna hoga taki blood kam se kam nikale aur jaldi hi nikalna band hojaye
Ladki 2 gehri saas lete hue ohh lucifer tum mujh se kya kya aur karvaoge
Ok done jaldi se karo

Uska etna bolna tha ki pehli wali ne ek jhatke me lucifer ke sareer se chaku nikal diya aur usse aisa feel hua ki chaku ke sath sath vo bhi kuch nikla hai lekin abhi moment aisi thi ki usne ye sochna sahi nahi samjha to turant dusri wali ne jhakam dhak diya aur sath me apni aankhen bhi band Kar di
Sayad sach me khoon nahi dekha jata us se

Ladki 1 chaku side me fek kar jaldi se jhakam par marham patti karne lagi vahi dusri wali aankhen band karke bot ki tarah khadi rahi

Ladki 2- jaldi karo
Mujhe vomit jaisa ho raha hai
Ladki- ruko ruko abhi nahi
Jhakam bahut gahra hai
Aur vo jaldi jaldi hath chalane lagi
10 minutes lage usse stretches karne me aur fir dono ek sath piche hat gaye pehli wali to normal hi lag rahi thi lekin dusre wali ne vahi thodi se vomit kar di aur aisa lag raha tha jaise vo abhi behosh ho jayegi

Ladki- ho gaya
Ladki 2- hmm ka..kab t..tak hosh aajayega

Ladki- I'm not sure
Aane ko subah tak aajaye lekin nahi aaye to weeks bhi lag sakte hai
Ab mujhe jana hoga mummy Papa akele hai
Tumhe kabhi bhi jarurat pade to call kar dena main turant aajaungi
Ladki 2- thank you sakshi
But please kisi ko batana mat

Sakshi- I won't
Don't worry
Aur vo vaha se chali jati hai....
बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
ये लुसिफर कहां जंग लड़ रहा हैं लोन भाई
सीने में चाकू घुपवा लिया कहीं सपने में तो नहीं हैं पास्ट लाइफ में
मेंम ओर अस्मिता कितनी फिकर कर रहीं हैं लुसिफर की
अब क्या रास्ता निकालती हैं लुसिफर के दिमाग के लिए

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
 

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Past

Trisha- kyu ghumte ho banjare ki tarah tum raat ko?
Manjil nahi mili ya andhere se pyaar ho gaya hai?
Lucifer- main hi andhera hu aur apne aap se pyaar to hargiz nahi hai

Trisha- batho mere sath thodi der
Lucifer- kuch batane mat lagna mere bare me

Trisha- vohi to mera kaam hai
Es andhere me thodi roshini jal jaye to sama bandh jayega
Lucifer- bahuto ne kosis ki lekin aaj vo sab jamin ke bahut ander dafan hai

Trisha- dafan to sabko hi hona hai
Aaj nahi ho rahe to es aaj ko jee leete hai
Lucifer- chalo karo kosis tum bhi

Trisha- aaj apne bare me batati hu
Lucifer- yes yes please

Trisha- mujhe ye yaad nahi main kaha paida hue ya kiske ghar par hue
Jab hosh aaya tab jungle me thi
Kuch rishi muni the vaha unhone hi mujhe pala aur sari sikha di
Lekin waqt ka pahiya kaha rukta hai dheere dheere karke vo bhi dunia se chale gaye aur main vapas akele hi ho gaye
Kuch samay tak to vahi jungle me hi rahi fir uske baad socha jo gyaan mila hai mujhe kyu na us ka sahi jagah istemal kiya jaye

Aur estemaal karne ke liye hell se achi jagah aur kya ho sakti thi
Esliye yaha aagaye

Lucifer- ye hell nahi hai
Trisha- hell heaven humare man ka vaham hai

Lucifer- nahi hell aur heaven raat aur din hai
Trisha- har kisi ko raat pasand nahi hoti aur har kisi ko din se pyaar nahi hota
Tum andhere ke premi ho to tum raat se pyaar karte ho

Lucifer- aur tum ujale ki pahchan ho kya?
Galat jagah aagaye
Trisha- meri khud ki koe pahchan nahi hai kisi chhij ki to kya hi pahchan banungi?

Lucifer- nanga hi to aaya tha jeb me rakh pahchan
Trisha- tumhe pata hai ye sab maine tumhe kyu bataya?

Lucifer- ha pata hai
Trisha- kyu?

Lucifer- ye dikhane ke liye ki hum sab akele hai
Trisha- etne samjhdar ho to khush kyu nahi rah sakte?

Lucifer- khushi hi to chahiye
Trisha- khushi chahne se nahi milti
Jo pass hai usse me khojni padti hai

Lucifer- tumhe to vo kya bolte hai motivational speaker?
Jo fokat ka gyaan chhodte hai unme hona hai
Bas baatein kara lo aur kuch hona nahi
Trisha- tum batho to aaj
Kya pata tum se kuch sikhne ko mil jaye

Lucifer- sikho mujhse
Main gyan ka bhandaar hu

Trisha ne samne sukhi ladkiyo se aag jala li aur ye dono aamne samne bath gaye aur usne aankhen band kar li

Trisha- tum bhi apni aankhen band karlo
Lucifer- fir tumhe dekhunga kaise?

Trisha- abhi tumhe khud ko dekhna hai
Lucifer- okay
Aur apni aankhen band kar leta hai

Abhi to uske dimag me ek hi chhij chal rahi thi lekin jaise jaise samne jal rahi lakdiyo se nikalne wali khusbhu uske sareer me ghusne lagi lucifer ka dimag ek dam center par aa gaya aur vo ek dream me chala gaya

In dream

Sabse pehle jo usse dikha vo tha saanvi ka muskurate hue chehra jisse dekh kar uske chehre par bhi ek bahut pyaari smile aagaye aur uske baad usse dikhne laga khud ka muskurata hua chehra
Un expected?
Yes bilkul unexpected tha ye uske liye khud ko muskurate hue dekhna

Aur uske baad to usse ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek anjane chehre dikhane lagi jo sab bahut khush the aur lucifer ke ass pass hi mandra rahe the

Unhe dekh ke koe bhi andaja laga sakta tha ki ye lucifer ke apne log hai jo usse bahut muhobaat karte hai

Lucifer ki presence un logo ki muskaan ka karan thi aur un logo ki presence lucifer ke

Sab haste khelte dikh rahe the ki ek dam se waqt badal gaya jajbaat badal gaye aur kaale baadal chah gaye

Ek bheed me lucifer akela khada tha aur uske charo taraf sirf aur sirf laashe biche hue thi

Uska khud ka sareer khoon se lath path tha jo sayad uska nahi tha

Hatho me uski talwar chamk rahi thi aur aankhon me dard umda hua tha

Ye vo lucifer tha jisko log jante the vo nahi jo abhi earth par tha

Dream me hi usne charo taraf najar utha kar dekha to vaha bshut sare insaan shataan maare pade the

Kisi ka sar nahi tha to kisi ka pair
Etne dardnaak maut mare the ki uske bare me likh bhi nahi sakta koe

Abhi vo ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki us bheed me usse ek chehra najar aaya jo bhi center me pada hua tha

Saaf usse dikhae nahi de raha tha to uske najdeek jane laga aur jaise hi uska chehra lucifer ki aankhon ke samne aaya lucifer ki aankhen apne aap khul gaye

Usne vo chehra aaj pehli baar dekha tha lekin usse dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise barso se usse janta ho vo

Aur usse bahut jada peeda mahsoos hone lagi
Kisi anjaan shaksh ke liye to usse etna nahi feel hona chahiye the eska ek hi matlab tha ki jo bhi vo shaksh tha vo lucifer ke life me bahut upar apni position rakhta tha

Lucifer ne chhilaya na dara aur na hi piche ki taraf bhaga vo mon jaha tha vahi aankhen khol kar shant batha raha

Dobara aakhen band karne ki uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi aur bolne ki conditon me vo tha nahi

Sayad trisha ko andaja ho gaya ki lucifer ki aankhen khul gaye hai kyuki ab vo bhi lucifer ke chehre ko hi dekh rahi thi sayad kuch janane ki kosis kar rahi thi

Trisha- kuch dikha?
Lucifer- nahi
Etne raat me yaha mat ghuma karo dimag kharab ho sakta hai aur lucifer bina kuch bole vaha se uth ke chala gaya

Trisha samjh gaye thi ki kuch to hua hai uske sath lekin ab vo kuch nahi kar sakti thi****

Ashmita- kaha ja raha hai tu?
Lucifer- arjun ko dundne

Ashmita- kyaaa???
Arjun ka naam sunte hi ashmita chok gaye
Lucifer- puri dunia tere aur tere arjun par nahi chalti
Main kisi dusre arjun ki baat kar raha tha

Ashmita- mat ja na aaj
Lucifer- kyu?

Ashmita- aaj chal na kahi ghum ke aate hai
Lucifer- kya ho gaya tujhe aaj?

Ashmita- kuch nahi
Bas aaj mat ja
Lucifer- main evening tak aajaunga

Ashmita- jayega matlab?
Manega nahi?
Lucifer- nahi jata fir
Bata kya karne ka man hai?

Ashmita- ghabra raha hai dil mera
Lucifer- tera?
Dil ghabra raha hai?
Kya majak hai ashu?

Ashmita- tu nahi jayega na aaj?
Lucifer- mujhe kuch nahi hoga

Ashmita- ek baat nahi manta tu meri
Lucifer- nahi ja raha kahi
Theek hai?
Faltu me blackmail karti rahti hai

Ashmita- tu kitna acha hai
Lucifer- es evening ka badla anisha se nikalunga main

Ashmita- ek kaam kar ja tu
Kutte kamine
Lucifer- tu mere upar se uthegi to kahi jaunga na?
Weight jada ho gaya hai tujhme

Ashmita- ha to kya etna weight bhi nahi utha sakta tu?
Lucifer- main tujhe puri zindagi utha ke rakh sakta hu
Tu ek baar bol to sahi

Ashmita- tujhe maine mana kab kiya hai?
Lucifer- tune ha bhi kab kiya hai?

Ashmita- ha utha le mujhe puri zindagi apni gaud me
Kya utha payega tu?

Ashmita aur Lucifer dono ko hi es sawal ka jawab bahut ache se pata tha esliye lucifer bas muskura diya aur jawab kuch nahi diya sath me ashmita ne bhi es baat ko jada push nahi kiya kyuki sach to vo bhi janti hi thi

Lucifer- ice cream khaegi?
Ashmita- vaise to dieting hai lekin tu khila raha hai to kha lungi

Lucifer- chusegi ya chategi?
Ashmita- dono karungi

Lucifer- chal fir
Ashmita- anisha se baat hue teri?

Lucifer- kis bare me?
Ashmita- kisi bhi bare me
Sab theek hai?

Lucifer- tumhri behan hai tum pucho
Ashmita- teri bhi to lover hai
Tu nahi bata sakta?

Lucifer- i dont fuck and talk ashu
Ashmita- ha ha bada aaya mahatma

Lucifer- are mujhe inaaya se bhi milna tha
Ashmita- main chalu sath?

Lucifer- kabab me haddi banana hai?
Ashmita- tu ek plate me do kabab nahi kha sakta?

Lucifer- dusra wala bahut spicy hai
Mujhe pasand nahi etna tikha
Ashmita- are ha vo payal ka phone aaya tha

Lucifer- ha ha uski bhi leni hai
Matlab usko bhi leni hai help mujhse
Ashmita- kitna kamina hai na tu lucifer?

Lucifer- kya bol rahi thi vo?
Ashmita- bas thank you vagra vagra

Lucifer- mere bare me bhi to bola hoga kuch pyaar bhare sabd
Ashmita- aisa to kuch nahi bola

Lucifer- etni buri kyu hai ye dunia?
Ashmita- tumhe hi sudharni hai

Lucifer- ha main hi to hu masiha dunia ka?
Ashmita- banana to tumhe hi hai

Lucifer- sahi bol rahi hu
Suno
Ashmita- sunao

Lucifer- yaar ek ladki hai usse sehar ghumana hai
Ashmita- ek aur ladki bolo

Lucifer- nahi vo ek hi hai
Ashmita- to ghuma do

Lucifer- maine konsa dekha hai?
Saraab ke thikane ke alava aur kya pata hai mujhe?
Ashmita- vohi important hai tere liye

Lucifer- tu ghuma de to bata
Ashmita- main kyu ghumao?
Tera raita hai tu saaf kar

Lucifer- yaar usne ek baar meri jaan bachae thi
Ashmita-.
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Theek hai
Rota rahta hai pure din
Ghuma dungi lekin tu sath rahega samjha???....
Nyc update bhai
 

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Trisha- kyu ghumte ho banjare ki tarah tum raat ko?
Manjil nahi mili ya andhere se pyaar ho gaya hai?
Lucifer- main hi andhera hu aur apne aap se pyaar to hargiz nahi hai

Trisha- batho mere sath thodi der
Lucifer- kuch batane mat lagna mere bare me

Trisha- vohi to mera kaam hai
Es andhere me thodi roshini jal jaye to sama bandh jayega
Lucifer- bahuto ne kosis ki lekin aaj vo sab jamin ke bahut ander dafan hai

Trisha- dafan to sabko hi hona hai
Aaj nahi ho rahe to es aaj ko jee leete hai
Lucifer- chalo karo kosis tum bhi

Trisha- aaj apne bare me batati hu
Lucifer- yes yes please

Trisha- mujhe ye yaad nahi main kaha paida hue ya kiske ghar par hue
Jab hosh aaya tab jungle me thi
Kuch rishi muni the vaha unhone hi mujhe pala aur sari sikha di
Lekin waqt ka pahiya kaha rukta hai dheere dheere karke vo bhi dunia se chale gaye aur main vapas akele hi ho gaye
Kuch samay tak to vahi jungle me hi rahi fir uske baad socha jo gyaan mila hai mujhe kyu na us ka sahi jagah istemal kiya jaye

Aur estemaal karne ke liye hell se achi jagah aur kya ho sakti thi
Esliye yaha aagaye

Lucifer- ye hell nahi hai
Trisha- hell heaven humare man ka vaham hai

Lucifer- nahi hell aur heaven raat aur din hai
Trisha- har kisi ko raat pasand nahi hoti aur har kisi ko din se pyaar nahi hota
Tum andhere ke premi ho to tum raat se pyaar karte ho

Lucifer- aur tum ujale ki pahchan ho kya?
Galat jagah aagaye
Trisha- meri khud ki koe pahchan nahi hai kisi chhij ki to kya hi pahchan banungi?

Lucifer- nanga hi to aaya tha jeb me rakh pahchan
Trisha- tumhe pata hai ye sab maine tumhe kyu bataya?

Lucifer- ha pata hai
Trisha- kyu?

Lucifer- ye dikhane ke liye ki hum sab akele hai
Trisha- etne samjhdar ho to khush kyu nahi rah sakte?

Lucifer- khushi hi to chahiye
Trisha- khushi chahne se nahi milti
Jo pass hai usse me khojni padti hai

Lucifer- tumhe to vo kya bolte hai motivational speaker?
Jo fokat ka gyaan chhodte hai unme hona hai
Bas baatein kara lo aur kuch hona nahi
Trisha- tum batho to aaj
Kya pata tum se kuch sikhne ko mil jaye

Lucifer- sikho mujhse
Main gyan ka bhandaar hu

Trisha ne samne sukhi ladkiyo se aag jala li aur ye dono aamne samne bath gaye aur usne aankhen band kar li

Trisha- tum bhi apni aankhen band karlo
Lucifer- fir tumhe dekhunga kaise?

Trisha- abhi tumhe khud ko dekhna hai
Lucifer- okay
Aur apni aankhen band kar leta hai

Abhi to uske dimag me ek hi chhij chal rahi thi lekin jaise jaise samne jal rahi lakdiyo se nikalne wali khusbhu uske sareer me ghusne lagi lucifer ka dimag ek dam center par aa gaya aur vo ek dream me chala gaya

In dream

Sabse pehle jo usse dikha vo tha saanvi ka muskurate hue chehra jisse dekh kar uske chehre par bhi ek bahut pyaari smile aagaye aur uske baad usse dikhne laga khud ka muskurata hua chehra
Un expected?
Yes bilkul unexpected tha ye uske liye khud ko muskurate hue dekhna

Aur uske baad to usse ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek anjane chehre dikhane lagi jo sab bahut khush the aur lucifer ke ass pass hi mandra rahe the

Unhe dekh ke koe bhi andaja laga sakta tha ki ye lucifer ke apne log hai jo usse bahut muhobaat karte hai

Lucifer ki presence un logo ki muskaan ka karan thi aur un logo ki presence lucifer ke

Sab haste khelte dikh rahe the ki ek dam se waqt badal gaya jajbaat badal gaye aur kaale baadal chah gaye

Ek bheed me lucifer akela khada tha aur uske charo taraf sirf aur sirf laashe biche hue thi

Uska khud ka sareer khoon se lath path tha jo sayad uska nahi tha

Hatho me uski talwar chamk rahi thi aur aankhon me dard umda hua tha

Ye vo lucifer tha jisko log jante the vo nahi jo abhi earth par tha

Dream me hi usne charo taraf najar utha kar dekha to vaha bshut sare insaan shataan maare pade the

Kisi ka sar nahi tha to kisi ka pair
Etne dardnaak maut mare the ki uske bare me likh bhi nahi sakta koe

Abhi vo ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki us bheed me usse ek chehra najar aaya jo bhi center me pada hua tha

Saaf usse dikhae nahi de raha tha to uske najdeek jane laga aur jaise hi uska chehra lucifer ki aankhon ke samne aaya lucifer ki aankhen apne aap khul gaye

Usne vo chehra aaj pehli baar dekha tha lekin usse dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise barso se usse janta ho vo

Aur usse bahut jada peeda mahsoos hone lagi
Kisi anjaan shaksh ke liye to usse etna nahi feel hona chahiye the eska ek hi matlab tha ki jo bhi vo shaksh tha vo lucifer ke life me bahut upar apni position rakhta tha

Lucifer ne chhilaya na dara aur na hi piche ki taraf bhaga vo mon jaha tha vahi aankhen khol kar shant batha raha

Dobara aakhen band karne ki uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi aur bolne ki conditon me vo tha nahi

Sayad trisha ko andaja ho gaya ki lucifer ki aankhen khul gaye hai kyuki ab vo bhi lucifer ke chehre ko hi dekh rahi thi sayad kuch janane ki kosis kar rahi thi

Trisha- kuch dikha?
Lucifer- nahi
Etne raat me yaha mat ghuma karo dimag kharab ho sakta hai aur lucifer bina kuch bole vaha se uth ke chala gaya

Trisha samjh gaye thi ki kuch to hua hai uske sath lekin ab vo kuch nahi kar sakti thi****

Ashmita- kaha ja raha hai tu?
Lucifer- arjun ko dundne

Ashmita- kyaaa???
Arjun ka naam sunte hi ashmita chok gaye
Lucifer- puri dunia tere aur tere arjun par nahi chalti
Main kisi dusre arjun ki baat kar raha tha

Ashmita- mat ja na aaj
Lucifer- kyu?

Ashmita- aaj chal na kahi ghum ke aate hai
Lucifer- kya ho gaya tujhe aaj?

Ashmita- kuch nahi
Bas aaj mat ja
Lucifer- main evening tak aajaunga

Ashmita- jayega matlab?
Manega nahi?
Lucifer- nahi jata fir
Bata kya karne ka man hai?

Ashmita- ghabra raha hai dil mera
Lucifer- tera?
Dil ghabra raha hai?
Kya majak hai ashu?

Ashmita- tu nahi jayega na aaj?
Lucifer- mujhe kuch nahi hoga

Ashmita- ek baat nahi manta tu meri
Lucifer- nahi ja raha kahi
Theek hai?
Faltu me blackmail karti rahti hai

Ashmita- tu kitna acha hai
Lucifer- es evening ka badla anisha se nikalunga main

Ashmita- ek kaam kar ja tu
Kutte kamine
Lucifer- tu mere upar se uthegi to kahi jaunga na?
Weight jada ho gaya hai tujhme

Ashmita- ha to kya etna weight bhi nahi utha sakta tu?
Lucifer- main tujhe puri zindagi utha ke rakh sakta hu
Tu ek baar bol to sahi

Ashmita- tujhe maine mana kab kiya hai?
Lucifer- tune ha bhi kab kiya hai?

Ashmita- ha utha le mujhe puri zindagi apni gaud me
Kya utha payega tu?

Ashmita aur Lucifer dono ko hi es sawal ka jawab bahut ache se pata tha esliye lucifer bas muskura diya aur jawab kuch nahi diya sath me ashmita ne bhi es baat ko jada push nahi kiya kyuki sach to vo bhi janti hi thi

Lucifer- ice cream khaegi?
Ashmita- vaise to dieting hai lekin tu khila raha hai to kha lungi

Lucifer- chusegi ya chategi?
Ashmita- dono karungi

Lucifer- chal fir
Ashmita- anisha se baat hue teri?

Lucifer- kis bare me?
Ashmita- kisi bhi bare me
Sab theek hai?

Lucifer- tumhri behan hai tum pucho
Ashmita- teri bhi to lover hai
Tu nahi bata sakta?

Lucifer- i dont fuck and talk ashu
Ashmita- ha ha bada aaya mahatma

Lucifer- are mujhe inaaya se bhi milna tha
Ashmita- main chalu sath?

Lucifer- kabab me haddi banana hai?
Ashmita- tu ek plate me do kabab nahi kha sakta?

Lucifer- dusra wala bahut spicy hai
Mujhe pasand nahi etna tikha
Ashmita- are ha vo payal ka phone aaya tha

Lucifer- ha ha uski bhi leni hai
Matlab usko bhi leni hai help mujhse
Ashmita- kitna kamina hai na tu lucifer?

Lucifer- kya bol rahi thi vo?
Ashmita- bas thank you vagra vagra

Lucifer- mere bare me bhi to bola hoga kuch pyaar bhare sabd
Ashmita- aisa to kuch nahi bola

Lucifer- etni buri kyu hai ye dunia?
Ashmita- tumhe hi sudharni hai

Lucifer- ha main hi to hu masiha dunia ka?
Ashmita- banana to tumhe hi hai

Lucifer- sahi bol rahi hu
Suno
Ashmita- sunao

Lucifer- yaar ek ladki hai usse sehar ghumana hai
Ashmita- ek aur ladki bolo

Lucifer- nahi vo ek hi hai
Ashmita- to ghuma do

Lucifer- maine konsa dekha hai?
Saraab ke thikane ke alava aur kya pata hai mujhe?
Ashmita- vohi important hai tere liye

Lucifer- tu ghuma de to bata
Ashmita- main kyu ghumao?
Tera raita hai tu saaf kar

Lucifer- yaar usne ek baar meri jaan bachae thi
Ashmita-.
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Theek hai
Rota rahta hai pure din
Ghuma dungi lekin tu sath rahega samjha???....
Ye kon dikh gaya tha Lucii ko sapne mein, jiski wajah se wo pareshaan ho gaya tha? Ashmita bhi kaafi interesting character hai aur Lucii ke liye ek dost, ek Humsafar, ek maa ki tarah pyar aur care karti hai wo bhi bina kuch ecpect kiye. Bahut hi anokha aur pyara relationship hai dono ka. Superb Lone survivor bhai
 

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Anika- uski himmat kaise hue esse marne ki
I fucking kill him
I will fucking kill him

Lucifer to shekhar ko goliyo se bhun kar turant hi vaha se chala gaya tha aur jab anika ko realize hua ki yaha kya hua hai vo aag babula ho gaye

Samne naag khada tha jo bilkul shant tha uske muh se kuch nahi nikala kyuki lucifer ke sath rah kar usse thoda bahut to samjh me aa hi gaya tha ki lucifer bina kisi reason ke kuch nahi karta aur agar usne shekhar ko maara hai to eska bhi koe na koe reason to jarur hoga

Esliye hi vo anika ki kisi bhi baat par reply nahi kar raha tha aur kuch der baad shekhar ki body uthane laga

Anika- kya kar rahe ho tum?
Naag- ye ab uthega nahi aur last rites karna humara dharma hai

Anika- esko pagal kutto ko khila dungi main ye respect deserve nahi karta
Naag- ye nahi karta hoga lekin eski body karti hai, main karta hu
Esliye eski last rites izzat se hogi

Anika- tumne esko hath bhi lagaya to bich se kaat dungi tumhe aur essi ke side me lete hue honge tum
Naag- apne gusse par na control kiya kar
Janti hogi tum jadu aur hogi brutal
Lekin maine pata nahi kitne dekhe hai tumhre jaise
Esliye mujhe dhamki mat diya kar
Aur lucifer ko jitna ho sake gussa kam dilaya kar nahi to vo sochega nahi ek baar bhi

Anika- dekh lungi main tumko aur tumhre lucifer ko
Aur anika vaha se gusse me chali gaye***

Knock knock
Lucifer is here

Madhuri ke ghar ke bahar khada ho kar lucifer bachho ki tarah chhila raha tha aur eski vajah se madhuri ne turant gate khol bhi diya

Gate kholte hi lucifer ko aisa look diya ki lucifer ussi me kho gaye

Madhuri ne apni aankhen chada kar aur hatho se ishara karke lucifer ko puch rahi thi ki kya bakchodi hai ye

Lekin lucifer ko kya hi fark padne wala tha

Alia- chachuuu vo chhilate hue aae aur lucifer ki gaud me chaad gaye

Alia- aapko meri yaad nahi aati kya?
Lucifer- yaad?
Tumhri?
Hmm??

Alia- hmm kya?
Lucifer- sochne to do aati hai ya nahi

Alia- aise nahi hota hai
Aapko meri yaad aani chahiye
Lucifer- theek hai aage se mujhe aapki yaad aayegi
Theek hai?

Alia - yessss
Lucifer- baki sab kaha hai?

Alia- padh rahe hai
Lucifer- vo padh rahe hai to tum kya kar rahi ho?

Alia- main unko padha rahi ho chachu
Lucifer- ohh yes my big girl

Alia- yessss
Lucifer- mumma ne kya banaya hai?

Alia- mumma bol rahi thi ki tumhre chachu aayenge esliye special banaungi
Lekin aap aaye hi nahi kal
Lucifer- acha acha mere liye special?
Tumhre liye mumma banati hai kabhi special?

Alia- mera to kauf hi khatam ho gaya hai jab se bhaiya aur didi aaye hai
Lucifer- hehe khauf khatam mat hone dena

Alia- yess main nahi hone dungi
Lucifer- chalo fir padhae karo ab jake
Main fir tumhe chocolates dunga

Alia- mujhe pizza bhi chahiye
Madhuri- Aliaaaa???

Alia- aaj mujhe pizza chahiye
Pizza chahiye
Pizza chahiye
Madhuri- jab se rahul aur muskaan aaye hai tab se ye bahut jiddi ho gaye hai

Lucifer- apna bachpan jeena suru kiya hai maam ab esne
Chalo aap padhae karo main khilaunga aapko pizza
Alia- thank you maamu
You're the best
Aur alia khush hote hue ander bhag gaye

Lucifer- kabhi maamu kabhi chachu pata nahi kitne rishte hai mere es ghar me
Madhuri- maamu hi theek hai

Lucifer- incest karaogi kya aap?
Madhuri- kal kaha the?

Lucifer- kal main mahnat kar raha tha
Madhuri- aaye thi tumhri mahnat ki aawaz yaha tak

Lucifer- fir kyu puch rahe ho jab sab pata hi hai to?
Madhuri- kon thi vo ladki?

Lucifer- ohh jealousy???
Madhuri- maine eggs banae the kal

Lucifer- kya baatein ghumate ho aap
Madhuri- aaj kya khaoge?

Lucifer- kha to aapko bhi sakta hu
Lekin aap jo khilaoge kha lunga
Madhuri- vo bache bahar ghumne ki jidd kar rahe the

Lucifer- to ghuma do bahar
Kya problem hai
Madhuri- tum sath chalna
Akele problem hoti hai sabko sambhalne me

Lucifer- etne mature bache hai aapko
Kis chhij ki problem ho rahi hai?
Madhuri- nahi chal sakte?

Lucifer- aapke sath to main jahanum bhi chala jau
Kya baat kar rahi ho aap
Madhuri- kisi chhij ka sidhe sidhe jawab nahi de sakte kya tum?

Lucifer- nahi
Madhuri- bata dena jab tumhre pass time ho to

Lucifer- abhi chal lo
Waqt ki waqt hai mere pass
Madhuri- abhi to raat ho gaye hai

Lucifer- jab bhi chalna ho bata dena
Madhuri- thank you

Lucifer- ek baat puchni thi
Madhuri- tum mere se permission le rahe ho?

Lucifer- ha
Madhuri- pucho

Lucifer- main har type ki baat kar leta hu aapse
Aapko bura to nahi lagta na?
Madhuri- it's okay

Lucifer- bura lagta hai ya nahi ye batao
Madhuri- nahi

Lucifer- fir theek hai
Madhuri- tum bahut pure ho lucifer

Lucifer- look who is saying
Aao romance kare i mean dinner khaye bana kar
Madhuri- tumhe kuch pata chala

Lucifer- kis bare me?
Madhuri- tumhre bare me?

Lucifer- jab pata chalna hoga chal jayega kyu faltu me apna time aur dimag kharab kare
Madhuri- you should focus on mediation

Lucifer- aap apni gaud me batha kar ya lita kar karva dena
Vahi ek jagah hai jaha mujhe aaram mil sakta hai aur main dhayan laga sakta hu
Madhuri- okay

Lucifer- okay??
Madhuri- agar es se tumhe help mil sakti hai to fir theek hai

Lucifer- mazak kar rahi ho?
Madhuri- kyu karungi?

Lucifer- chalo to pehle dhayan hi laga lete hai
Madhuri- morning me
Abhi khana bana lete hai

Lucifer- theek hai
Aur jab chalna ho tab bata dena
I am always ready for you***

Anisha- vo ek book thi na tumhre pass?
Lucifer- book??
Mere pass?
Kab thi?

Anisha- are jo tumne mujhe di thi padhne ko
Lucifer- kamsutra thi kya?

Anisha- mazak mat karo
I'm serious
Lucifer- kya hua ye batao

Anisha- mujhe vo book chahiye
Lucifer- kyu??

Anisha- mujhe padhna hai
Lucifer- padhi to thi tumne

Anisha- dobara padhna hai
Ab ache se samjh me aayegi
Lucifer- flat par hi kahi padhi hogi
Doond lo

Anisha- tum dundo
Lucifer- main dundu?

Anisha- ha mujhe bahut kaam hai
Lucifer- kya kaam hai?

Anisha- seva karni hai na tumhri
Lucifer- haye haye
Etni seva dhanya ho gaya main to

Anisha- ab mujhe dund ke do
Lucifer- kaha book me fas gaye tum yaar
Dekho kitni achi raat hai
Raat se yaad aaya tumhe ghar nahi jana?

Anisha- maine mom ko sab sach bata diya
Lucifer- kya sach?

Anisha- tumhre aur mere bare me
Lucifer- kitni pitae hue fir?

Anisha- bahut jada
Lucifer- aao kapde nikalo main marham laga deta hu

Anisha- mom ne kuch kaha hi nahi
Pata nahi kyu vo mujhe samjh nahi pa rahi hai
Lucifer- mom hai tumhri
Thoda dar to lagega hi na?

Anisha- vo baat to hai lekin fir bhi unhe samjhna chahiye
Main jaisi hu vaise hi rahungi
Fake ban kar jeena mujhe na kabhi pasand aaya tha aur na kabhi aayega

Lucifer- pata nahi kyu ye baat kisi ko samjh kyu nahi aati hai
Etni simple se baat to hai
Anisha- fir bhi nahi samjh pate log esko

Lucifer- samjh jayenge
Tumne kya bola apni mom ko ki maa main lucifer ke ander sama gaye thi?
Ya Lucifer mere ander sama gaya tha?
Anisha- samjhdar ko ishara kafi hota hai

Lucifer- lekin tumhe to sab detail me explain karna chahiye tha na?
Anisha- jarurat nahi padhi

Lucifer- ashmita ko jab sab detail me pata hai na Priyanka ko bhi pata hona chahiye
Anisha- naam mat leke bola karo unko

Lucifer- ohh sorry
Kya bolu fir?
Anisha- bukh lagi hai

Lucifer- mangva le fir kuch
Anisha- bana lao na

Lucifer- yaar kitni mahnat karaogi?
Kabhi book dundna to kabhi khana
Etna kaam nahi ho payega mujh se
Anisha- main khila deti hu to
Book bhi main dund lungi
Udaas kyu ho rahe ho?

Lucifer- chalo bahar se mangva lete hai
Anisha- main bana leti hu
Tum bas book ka idea de do mujhe
Lucifer- tumhe khane ke baad sochunga sayad yaad aajaye....
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann
 

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Trisha- kyu ghumte ho banjare ki tarah tum raat ko?
Manjil nahi mili ya andhere se pyaar ho gaya hai?
Lucifer- main hi andhera hu aur apne aap se pyaar to hargiz nahi hai

Trisha- batho mere sath thodi der
Lucifer- kuch batane mat lagna mere bare me

Trisha- vohi to mera kaam hai
Es andhere me thodi roshini jal jaye to sama bandh jayega
Lucifer- bahuto ne kosis ki lekin aaj vo sab jamin ke bahut ander dafan hai

Trisha- dafan to sabko hi hona hai
Aaj nahi ho rahe to es aaj ko jee leete hai
Lucifer- chalo karo kosis tum bhi

Trisha- aaj apne bare me batati hu
Lucifer- yes yes please

Trisha- mujhe ye yaad nahi main kaha paida hue ya kiske ghar par hue
Jab hosh aaya tab jungle me thi
Kuch rishi muni the vaha unhone hi mujhe pala aur sari sikha di
Lekin waqt ka pahiya kaha rukta hai dheere dheere karke vo bhi dunia se chale gaye aur main vapas akele hi ho gaye
Kuch samay tak to vahi jungle me hi rahi fir uske baad socha jo gyaan mila hai mujhe kyu na us ka sahi jagah istemal kiya jaye

Aur estemaal karne ke liye hell se achi jagah aur kya ho sakti thi
Esliye yaha aagaye

Lucifer- ye hell nahi hai
Trisha- hell heaven humare man ka vaham hai

Lucifer- nahi hell aur heaven raat aur din hai
Trisha- har kisi ko raat pasand nahi hoti aur har kisi ko din se pyaar nahi hota
Tum andhere ke premi ho to tum raat se pyaar karte ho

Lucifer- aur tum ujale ki pahchan ho kya?
Galat jagah aagaye
Trisha- meri khud ki koe pahchan nahi hai kisi chhij ki to kya hi pahchan banungi?

Lucifer- nanga hi to aaya tha jeb me rakh pahchan
Trisha- tumhe pata hai ye sab maine tumhe kyu bataya?

Lucifer- ha pata hai
Trisha- kyu?

Lucifer- ye dikhane ke liye ki hum sab akele hai
Trisha- etne samjhdar ho to khush kyu nahi rah sakte?

Lucifer- khushi hi to chahiye
Trisha- khushi chahne se nahi milti
Jo pass hai usse me khojni padti hai

Lucifer- tumhe to vo kya bolte hai motivational speaker?
Jo fokat ka gyaan chhodte hai unme hona hai
Bas baatein kara lo aur kuch hona nahi
Trisha- tum batho to aaj
Kya pata tum se kuch sikhne ko mil jaye

Lucifer- sikho mujhse
Main gyan ka bhandaar hu

Trisha ne samne sukhi ladkiyo se aag jala li aur ye dono aamne samne bath gaye aur usne aankhen band kar li

Trisha- tum bhi apni aankhen band karlo
Lucifer- fir tumhe dekhunga kaise?

Trisha- abhi tumhe khud ko dekhna hai
Lucifer- okay
Aur apni aankhen band kar leta hai

Abhi to uske dimag me ek hi chhij chal rahi thi lekin jaise jaise samne jal rahi lakdiyo se nikalne wali khusbhu uske sareer me ghusne lagi lucifer ka dimag ek dam center par aa gaya aur vo ek dream me chala gaya

In dream

Sabse pehle jo usse dikha vo tha saanvi ka muskurate hue chehra jisse dekh kar uske chehre par bhi ek bahut pyaari smile aagaye aur uske baad usse dikhne laga khud ka muskurata hua chehra
Un expected?
Yes bilkul unexpected tha ye uske liye khud ko muskurate hue dekhna

Aur uske baad to usse ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek anjane chehre dikhane lagi jo sab bahut khush the aur lucifer ke ass pass hi mandra rahe the

Unhe dekh ke koe bhi andaja laga sakta tha ki ye lucifer ke apne log hai jo usse bahut muhobaat karte hai

Lucifer ki presence un logo ki muskaan ka karan thi aur un logo ki presence lucifer ke

Sab haste khelte dikh rahe the ki ek dam se waqt badal gaya jajbaat badal gaye aur kaale baadal chah gaye

Ek bheed me lucifer akela khada tha aur uske charo taraf sirf aur sirf laashe biche hue thi

Uska khud ka sareer khoon se lath path tha jo sayad uska nahi tha

Hatho me uski talwar chamk rahi thi aur aankhon me dard umda hua tha

Ye vo lucifer tha jisko log jante the vo nahi jo abhi earth par tha

Dream me hi usne charo taraf najar utha kar dekha to vaha bshut sare insaan shataan maare pade the

Kisi ka sar nahi tha to kisi ka pair
Etne dardnaak maut mare the ki uske bare me likh bhi nahi sakta koe

Abhi vo ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki us bheed me usse ek chehra najar aaya jo bhi center me pada hua tha

Saaf usse dikhae nahi de raha tha to uske najdeek jane laga aur jaise hi uska chehra lucifer ki aankhon ke samne aaya lucifer ki aankhen apne aap khul gaye

Usne vo chehra aaj pehli baar dekha tha lekin usse dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise barso se usse janta ho vo

Aur usse bahut jada peeda mahsoos hone lagi
Kisi anjaan shaksh ke liye to usse etna nahi feel hona chahiye the eska ek hi matlab tha ki jo bhi vo shaksh tha vo lucifer ke life me bahut upar apni position rakhta tha

Lucifer ne chhilaya na dara aur na hi piche ki taraf bhaga vo mon jaha tha vahi aankhen khol kar shant batha raha

Dobara aakhen band karne ki uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi aur bolne ki conditon me vo tha nahi

Sayad trisha ko andaja ho gaya ki lucifer ki aankhen khul gaye hai kyuki ab vo bhi lucifer ke chehre ko hi dekh rahi thi sayad kuch janane ki kosis kar rahi thi

Trisha- kuch dikha?
Lucifer- nahi
Etne raat me yaha mat ghuma karo dimag kharab ho sakta hai aur lucifer bina kuch bole vaha se uth ke chala gaya

Trisha samjh gaye thi ki kuch to hua hai uske sath lekin ab vo kuch nahi kar sakti thi****

Ashmita- kaha ja raha hai tu?
Lucifer- arjun ko dundne

Ashmita- kyaaa???
Arjun ka naam sunte hi ashmita chok gaye
Lucifer- puri dunia tere aur tere arjun par nahi chalti
Main kisi dusre arjun ki baat kar raha tha

Ashmita- mat ja na aaj
Lucifer- kyu?

Ashmita- aaj chal na kahi ghum ke aate hai
Lucifer- kya ho gaya tujhe aaj?

Ashmita- kuch nahi
Bas aaj mat ja
Lucifer- main evening tak aajaunga

Ashmita- jayega matlab?
Manega nahi?
Lucifer- nahi jata fir
Bata kya karne ka man hai?

Ashmita- ghabra raha hai dil mera
Lucifer- tera?
Dil ghabra raha hai?
Kya majak hai ashu?

Ashmita- tu nahi jayega na aaj?
Lucifer- mujhe kuch nahi hoga

Ashmita- ek baat nahi manta tu meri
Lucifer- nahi ja raha kahi
Theek hai?
Faltu me blackmail karti rahti hai

Ashmita- tu kitna acha hai
Lucifer- es evening ka badla anisha se nikalunga main

Ashmita- ek kaam kar ja tu
Kutte kamine
Lucifer- tu mere upar se uthegi to kahi jaunga na?
Weight jada ho gaya hai tujhme

Ashmita- ha to kya etna weight bhi nahi utha sakta tu?
Lucifer- main tujhe puri zindagi utha ke rakh sakta hu
Tu ek baar bol to sahi

Ashmita- tujhe maine mana kab kiya hai?
Lucifer- tune ha bhi kab kiya hai?

Ashmita- ha utha le mujhe puri zindagi apni gaud me
Kya utha payega tu?

Ashmita aur Lucifer dono ko hi es sawal ka jawab bahut ache se pata tha esliye lucifer bas muskura diya aur jawab kuch nahi diya sath me ashmita ne bhi es baat ko jada push nahi kiya kyuki sach to vo bhi janti hi thi

Lucifer- ice cream khaegi?
Ashmita- vaise to dieting hai lekin tu khila raha hai to kha lungi

Lucifer- chusegi ya chategi?
Ashmita- dono karungi

Lucifer- chal fir
Ashmita- anisha se baat hue teri?

Lucifer- kis bare me?
Ashmita- kisi bhi bare me
Sab theek hai?

Lucifer- tumhri behan hai tum pucho
Ashmita- teri bhi to lover hai
Tu nahi bata sakta?

Lucifer- i dont fuck and talk ashu
Ashmita- ha ha bada aaya mahatma

Lucifer- are mujhe inaaya se bhi milna tha
Ashmita- main chalu sath?

Lucifer- kabab me haddi banana hai?
Ashmita- tu ek plate me do kabab nahi kha sakta?

Lucifer- dusra wala bahut spicy hai
Mujhe pasand nahi etna tikha
Ashmita- are ha vo payal ka phone aaya tha

Lucifer- ha ha uski bhi leni hai
Matlab usko bhi leni hai help mujhse
Ashmita- kitna kamina hai na tu lucifer?

Lucifer- kya bol rahi thi vo?
Ashmita- bas thank you vagra vagra

Lucifer- mere bare me bhi to bola hoga kuch pyaar bhare sabd
Ashmita- aisa to kuch nahi bola

Lucifer- etni buri kyu hai ye dunia?
Ashmita- tumhe hi sudharni hai

Lucifer- ha main hi to hu masiha dunia ka?
Ashmita- banana to tumhe hi hai

Lucifer- sahi bol rahi hu
Suno
Ashmita- sunao

Lucifer- yaar ek ladki hai usse sehar ghumana hai
Ashmita- ek aur ladki bolo

Lucifer- nahi vo ek hi hai
Ashmita- to ghuma do

Lucifer- maine konsa dekha hai?
Saraab ke thikane ke alava aur kya pata hai mujhe?
Ashmita- vohi important hai tere liye

Lucifer- tu ghuma de to bata
Ashmita- main kyu ghumao?
Tera raita hai tu saaf kar

Lucifer- yaar usne ek baar meri jaan bachae thi
Ashmita-.
.
Theek hai
Rota rahta hai pure din
Ghuma dungi lekin tu sath rahega samjha???....
जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann
 

Death Kiñg

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Ashmita aur Inaaya ki agli mulakat ka besabri se intezar hai men! Pichhli baar jab dono saath dikhi thi, tab Anisha ke baare mein charcha ho rahi thi, parantu Ashmita ki feelings bhi baahar aa gayi thi... Us samay laga tha ki jald hi dono ki puraani dosti dobara zinda ho sakti hai, parantu abhi tak aisa kuchh hua nahi hai... Ashmita to Inaaya se na kabhi naaraz thi, aur an hone ka to sawaal hi paida nahi hota... Notable, ye hai ki ab Inaaya ka rukh bhi badla hai Ashmita ke prati... Pehle wo Ashmita ke zikra par chidh si jaati thi, parantu ab aisa kuchh nahi hai... To, mere hisaab se jab dono agli baar milengi, tab poori tarah sab normal ho jaana chahiye...

Ashmita is the X – Factor in Lucifer's life... Inaaya bhale hi uska pehla pyaar, Saanvi ke roop mein usne Devil ko pehli baar pyaar ka ehsas karwaya ho, Tara (Eda), ki apni ek khaas jagah ho Lucifer ke mann mein, parantu, jo role Ashmita ka hai Lucifer ki life mein wo behad alag hai... She dominates him, and that's the striking difference between Ashmita & all the other girls... Kewal mazaak mein hi nahi, balki soch mein bhi Ashmita, Lucifer ko dominate karti hai, wo jaanti hai ki Lucifer se kaise apni baat manwani hai, and that's why It's saddening ki shayad Ashmita hi Lucifer ko mukti degi... :sad:

Btw. Ashmita ka dil ghabra kyon raha tha? Anything scary going to happen in their lives? Maybe Anisha... Anisha aur Priyanka ki baatein beshak darane waali thi, Anisha ka motive behad khatarnak hai, ye pooro tarah saaf ho chuka hai... Parantu, kya Ashmita ko kisi bhi prakar ka nuksan, mental ya physical, pahunchakar wo Lucifer ke prakop se bach paayegi... I don't think ki Ashmita ko kisi bhi tarah se koyi hurt kare, Tara ko bhi shayad, to Lucifer use chhodega, chahe fir wo koyi bhi ho... Aur yahaan, saaf aasar dikhayi de rahen hain, ki Anisha ka target kewal Raichand hi nahi, balki Tara aur Ashmita bhi hain...

Priyanka ne na jaane kaise upbringing ki hai Anisha ki jo wo is prakar ki soch rakhe huye hai... Uski baaton se laga bhi tha ki Priyanka ne Anisha ko badle ke liye taiyar kiya tha, par baad mein uska mann badal gaya, ya kahun ki wo shayad consequences ka sochkar darr gayi... Anisha ko jo chetawani di hai usne, ki wo bhavishya mein shayad akeli reh jaaye, uska arth shayad yahi hai ki Tara aur Ashmita ko nuksaan pahunchana uske liye hi hanikarak ho sakta hai, but I don't think ki Anisha abhi kuchh bhi samajh paane ki situation mein hai... Uske paas koyi kaaran hi nahi, ki wo apna badla bhoolkar dobara ek nayi shuruaat kare...

Khair, ab kuchh sawaal hi bache hain is matter mein to... Priyanka ki hakeekat kya hai? Aisa kya jaanta hai Lucifer uske baare mein, jiski wajah se wo Lucifer se dari huyi hai... Kya Priyanka ke sambandh bhi the Raichand se? Kya Priyanka ke saath Raichand ke sambandhon ke kaaran hi Anisha ki Maa ne suicide kiya tha? Btw. I think ki jo bhi baat hai, Anisha achhi tarah se jaanti hai... Priyanka ka mann kaise parivartit ho gaya, aur usne badle ka maarg chhod diya, ye bhi ek sawaal hai... I hope Anisha ko jo chetawani di Priyanka ne waisa kuchh na ho, she's too innocent, to be left alone in the world!

Is beech Inaaya ne ek aakhiri koshish ki Lucifer ko samjhane ki, wo baatein samjhane ki jise samajhne ka samay ab nikal chuka hai... Lucifer jaanta hai ki ab uske paas adhik samay bacha nahi hai, to aise mein wo apni real life hi jeena chahta hai, koyi nakli zindagi nahi, aur yahi sahi faisla hai... Parantu, ye baat bhi sach hai ki, Inaaya is, maybe, the purest of all the lovers of Lucifer... Either it was Saanvi or it's Inaaya, behad saaf dil tha is ladki ka, aur ab bhi hai... She doesn't want anyone to die, especially wo nahi chahti ki kisi ki maut ka kaaran Lucifer bane... She craves for a peaceful world, where she can live peacefully with Lucifer, par ab ye kahana sambhav hai...

Maadhuri ko lekar jo kaha usne, wo galat to tha hi, par shayad wo jaan – boojhkar hi kaha tha usne kisi kaaran se, ya ho sakta hai ki anjaane mein bhi keh gayi ho... Jo bhi ho, ab dobara to in dono mein ye sudharne – bigadne ki baatein hone nahi waali, to dekhte hain ab Inaaya kya karegi... Haalanki, dekha jaaye to uske kehne par hi Shekhar ko aazad kiya hai Lucifer ne (aazad kya kiya, aur bhi torture hone ke liye bhej diya hai Eda madam ke paas)... Khair, in sab baaton ka koyi nishkarsh nahi nikal sakta, Lucifer has been built to destroy and Saanvi (Inaaya) loves a peaceful world, she wants a peaceful world but love has made her accept, a devil of his own kind!

Idhar Maadhuri shayad ab poori tarah gir chuki hai Lucifer ke paale mein... Ab Lucifer pichhe hate to hate, par Maadhuri ab shayad uski kisi bhi baat ko naa nahi bol payegi, kisi bhi baat ko! Abhi ke liye to Maadhuri aur teeno bachhon ko kahin ghumane le jaana waala hai Lucifer, baat to yoga wagerah ki bhi huyi hai dono mein, par dekhna chahunga ki Maadhuri kya chahti hai? Mujhe nahi lagta ki ab wo khud par aur zyada control kar paayegi, but kahin na kahin, pichhle kuchh updates se ye laga ki shayad Lucifer reluctant ho aane waale samay mein, Maadhuri se rishta banane ko lekar...

Alia ke bhi darshan huye bohot saare updates ke baad, and it's heartening ki ab wo bhi apna bachpan khulkar jeene lagi hai... Jis bachpan mein zidd na ho, wo bachpan khokhla hi hota hai, aur finally Alia wo kar paa rahi hai, wo jee paa rahi hai, jo itne samay se shayad possible nahi tha... Kuchh aur ho na ho, par Lucifer ne jo is family ke liye kiya hai, meri nazar mein is se bada punya kuchh nahi ho sakta, aur aisa koyi paap nahi, jiske chheente ye punya mita na paaye... Dekhte hain ye parivar kis aur jaa raha hai, aur jaisi Inaaya ne chinta jatayi, jya hoga jab Shekhar ke saath kya hua, in sabko pata chalega, would be interesting to read if that happens!

Khair, Inaaya, Ashmita, Anisha, in teenon ke chaaron taraf hi ye teeno updates ghoome, and I think kuchh samay tak Anisha hi centre of mass rehne waali hai, kyonki wo kya plan kar rahi hai, wo abhi tak samajh nahi aaya hai... Lucifer se wo book bhi maangi hai usne! Koyi doubt hua hai kya use? I think ki Anisha hi pehli shakhs hogi, jo Lucifer ko samajh paayegi, uska ateet, uska vartman, uska bhavishya, sab kuchh... Payal ka phone bhi aaya tha Ashmita ko, dekhte hain ye kab dikhegi ab, wahin agla number kahani mein entry ka shayad Kaashvi ka hi hai, yaani gyaan ki ganga behne waali hai kuchh hi updates baad!

Trisha ke past scene mein jo sapna Lucifer ko aaya, usmein kiska thobda dikha tha use jo wo itna pareshan ho gaya... Kya Arjun naamak us launde ko Lucifer ne hi tapkaya tha? Arjun ko Anisha bhi nahi dhoond paayi, ye kewal do hi sambhavnao ki aur ishara karta hai, pehla Lucifer hi Arjun hai, ya doosra, jo maine oopar likha, dekhte hain kaun mahanubhav tha wo, jiski laash ne Lucifer ko vichlit kar diya...

Teenon hi updates bohot hi khubsurat the bhai! Inaaya & Ashmita, as Lucifer said are like sweet & spice to the story, jitne bhi scenes hon in dono ke, apna ek alag hi aura hota hai har ek scene ka, especially tab jab dono gyaan de rahi hon Lucifer ko! Anisha has been the torch bearer of suspense & thrill in the story, from some of the updates, dekhte hain uska raaz kab khulta hai...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
 

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Abhi vo ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki us bheed me usse ek chehra najar aaya jo bhi center me pada hua tha

Saaf usse dikhae nahi de raha tha to uske najdeek jane laga aur jaise hi uska chehra lucifer ki aankhon ke samne aaya lucifer ki aankhen apne aap khul gaye

Usne vo chehra aaj pehli baar dekha tha lekin usse dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise barso se usse janta ho vo

Aur usse bahut jada peeda mahsoos hone lagi
Kisi anjaan shaksh ke liye to usse etna nahi feel hona chahiye the eska ek hi matlab tha ki jo bhi vo shaksh tha vo lucifer ke life me bahut upar apni position rakhta tha

Lucifer ne chhilaya na dara aur na hi piche ki taraf bhaga vo mon jaha tha vahi aankhen khol kar shant batha raha

Dobara aakhen band karne ki uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi aur bolne ki conditon me vo tha nahi
aasa kon anjan insaan tha ki uski deadbody dekh ke he gand fat gyi lucifer ki shayd future se koi ho skta h
aab ye to abhi pata chalega he na wait he krna pade ga aage aane wale updates ka jaab he pata chale ga hahahhaha

Lucifer- yaar usne ek baar meri jaan bachae thi
Ashmita-.
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Theek hai
Rota rahta hai pure din
Ghuma dungi lekin tu sath rahega samjha???....
jab ashmita ko pata chala ki usne lucifer ki jaan bachai h to ashmita ne bhi ha bol he diya
vese jisne lucifer ki jaan bachai ho uske leye ashmita itna to krr he sakti h



awesome update
waiting for next
 
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