Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[gopal.10495]

Supper hai boss....
Ab lagta hai eda vi apni pankh kaat legi

 

[JAI]

nice update dear

 

[Thakur008]

Aur kya dimag me hai aapke?

Shyad devil

 

[Thakur008]

UPDATE-161
Tara- lucifer???
Lucifer utho
Kya hogya tumhe?
Tum theek ho?
Jameen par gire hue lucifer ko tara uthane ki kosis kar rahi thi

Vo kaha yaha anisha ke bare me baat karne aaye thi aur lucifer ko aise jamin par gira dekh kar puri safeed pad chuki thi

Vo baar baar usse hila rahi thi aur pani bhi daal rahi thi uske upar

Aur sayad ye kaam kar gaya aur lucifer ki aankhen khulne lagi
Bahut relaxed feel kar raha tha vo aur jab usne khud ko tara ki gaud me leta dekha to chehre par ek alag hi smile aa gaye

Tara- thank goooodddd
Tara ne ek chain ki saas li jab usne lucifer ko jaga dekha

Tara- what the hell happened here?
Lucifer jo ab puri tarah se jaag chuka tha vo tara ke chehre ko hi dekhe ja raha tha

Aaj usse vo bahut masoom lag rahi thi

Lucifer- tumhra chehra ulta kyu ho gaya hai?
Tara- because tum meri gaud me lete hue ho
Utho aur batao kya hua tumhe?

Lucifer dheere dheere se uski gaud se uth khada hua aur firse usse niharne laga

Tara- kya dekh rahe ho?
Lucifer- tum theek ho?

Tara- mujhe kya hoga?
Tum batao tumhe kya hua?
Yaha jameen par kyu leete hue the?
Lucifer- tumhri gaud ka intezaar kar raha tha

Tara- tum theek ho na lucifer
Vo stressed way me puchi
Lucifer- better than ever

Tara- mujhe to dara hi diya tha tumne
Lucifer- tum dar gaye thi?
Kyu?

Tara- agar aise jamin par gire rahoge to darungi bhi nahi?
Lucifer ne bade pyaar se tara ke chehre ko dekha fir apne hatho se uske gallo ko touch kiya
Tara ki aankhen apne aap band ho gaye thi sayad lucifer ke hatho ka kamaal tha ya fir kuch aur ye to kya hi bataye lekin lucifer ke ek touch matar ne tara ko madhosh kar diya tha

Lucifer- kitni pyaari ho tum
Aaj sayad pehli baar lucifer ne tara ki tarif ki hogi aur tara ka man ye sunte hi prafulit ho gaya

Tara- thank you
Lucifer- you're one of the best thing that ever happend to me

Lucifer aaj bahut jada hi relaxed dikh raha tha nahi to aise baatein vo karta nahi aur vo bhi tara ke sath to bilkul bhi nahi karta

Lucifer- tumhre khush rahne ka waqt aa gaya hai
I know tum bahut suffer kari ho lekin ab aur nahi karna padega
Tara- tum theek ho na lucifer?

Lucifer- ha aaj hi to main theek hua hu
Pata nahi kab se aise din ka intezaar tha mujhe
Tara- mujhe anisha ke bare me baat karni thi
Tara topic change karte hue boli kyuki vo pagal hone lagi thi lucifer ki baaton se aur agar aisa thodi der aur chalta rahta to vo bilkul apne hosh gava deti aur fir us list me ek aur naam jud jata

Lucifer- mujhe nahi karni uske bare me
Tara- please help me na

Lucifer- listen to me
Anisha is no kid okay?
Usse free hand do aur apna pyaar aise dikhao jis se usse na to koe burden lage aur vo apni jid chhod de
Main es me tumhri koe help nahi kar paunga
Jo karna hai tum behano ko hi karna hai
Tara- ek rasta to dikha do

Lucifer- aankhne kholo rasta samne dikh jayega
Tum teeno ka ye bahut personal matter hai aur esme main involve nahi hona chahta i hope you understand
Tara- tumhe pata to bahut kuch hai lekin batate nahi ho

Lucifer- pata to mujhe brahmand ki utpatti ka bhi hai lekin eska ye matlab to nahi ki main dunia me gaata firu?
Tara- main to abhi ki baat kar rahi hu

Lucifer- abhi ka matter to us se bhi bada hai
Brahmaand kaise bana ye batana jada easy hai as compared to what is going on between your sisters
Tara- tum bas baatein banate rahte ho

Lucifer- maine kabhi tumhe samjha nahi na?
Tum kamaal ho tara
Tara- aaj tumhe Kya ho raha hai?
Pehle to kabhi aisi baat nahi ki

Lucifer- pehle tumhe dekha hi nahi na
Tara- kitni baar to dekha hai

Lucifer- aaj jaise nahi dekha
Kya chhij ho tum tara tumhe maloom nahi hai
Tara- bas bas aaj ke liye bahut tareef ho gaye
Kuch kal ke liye bhi bacha lo

Lucifer- tumhre liye kabhi khatam nahi hoga bas devil vapas na aajaye
Tara- devil?

Lucifer- main devil hi to hu
Tara- vo to tum ho hi

Lucifer- abhi to nahi hu
Tara- aaj hum lad nahi rahe

Lucifer- tumhe ladna hai mere sath?
Tara- tum hi ladte rahte the mujhse

Lucifer- abhi to nahi lad raha
Tara- aise hi raha karo fir
Ache lagte ho

Lucifer- ladte hue acha nahi lagta?
Tara- tumhe gussa jada hi aata hai

Lucifer- mere pass raha karo fir nahi aayega
Tara- mere samne hi to aata hai
Aashu ke samne to tumhri bolti band ho jati hai

Lucifer- vo ashu hai aur tum tara
Tara- she loves you a lot

Lucifer- you too loves me
Tara- huh
Sakal dekhi hai apni?

Lucifer- ladkiyo ke liye etna muskil kyu hota hai ye admit karna?
Tara- mujhe late ho raha hai
Aur tara jaise hi muddi lucifer ne uska hath pakad liya aur ghuma kar apne se chhipka liya

Lucifer- kyu bhagti ho tum mujhse humesha?
Mere khaate lage hai ya fir main tumhe kha jaunga?
Na tum mujhe tab samjh paye aur na aaj samjh pa rahi ho
Kya karu main jis se tumhe samjh aaye?
Ha?
Kya karu main?
Mat bhaga kar mere se
Lucifer ne jis dard bhari aawaz me bola tara to khadi ki khadi rah gaye

Uske muh se sabad nikalne hi band ho gaye aur vo chhup chhap khadi bas lucifer ki aankhon me dekhne lagi

Sare jahan ka dard umda hua tha vaha abhi aur tara ye saaf saaf dekh pa rahi thi

Usse samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ab vo kya bole aur kya nahi bas lucifer ki aankhon me khud ke liye beintehaa muhobaat ko saaf saaf dekh pa rahi thi vo

Etna saaf ki uske sareer ne uska sath dena chhod diya aur uske hontho ne lucifer ke hontho ko apna bana liya

Etna pyaar bhaara kiss tha vo ki sayad hi lucifer ne aisa kabhi experience kiya hoga

Kuch hi seconds chala aur tara piche hat gaye
Sarm ke mare uska chehra laal peela pad raha tha aur vo ab lucifer se najar nahi mila pa rahi thi

Tara- mujhe kuch kaam yaad aagya
Aur vo aise bhagi vaha se jaise pagal kutte piche pad gaye ho

Lucifer ne bhi jada react ya overreact nahi kiya kyuki abhi vo moment ko samjh pa raha tha aur usse ek important kaam bhi karna tha

Esliye apne kapde pahne aur nikal gaya apne ghar se

Kaha pahucha?
Naag ke farmhouse par

Ander hi usse naag anika aur shekhar dikh gaye

Anika ne shekhar ko kaato ke upar latka rakha tha aur uski halaat aise thi ki abhi mar jayega

Lucifer aaya anika se uski najar mili lucifer ne naag ki kamar se gun nikali aur
Dhad dhad dhad dhad dhad dhad
Sari goliya shekhar ke sareer me utaar di*****

Thadaaaaaaammmmmmm ek bahut tej aawaz pure hell me fail gaye

Koe ek bahut badi imaarat ko chhirta hua niche gir raha tha

Aur dekhte hi dekhte puri imaarat jamin se mil gaye thi

Mazikeen ne jab ye dekha to vo doddte hue us jagah ki taraf badhi
Uske hatho me uske sare weapons the aur aankhon me demon wali chamak

Lekin jaise hi usne samne dekha uske hathiyaar apne aap jamin par gir gaye aur vo ghutno ke bal sar niche karke bath gaye

Samne eda khadi ho rahi thi aur uska chehra abhi bhi vaisa hi tha jaise kuch der pehle tha matlab ki abhi bhi uski aankhen laal hi thi aur garm lava jaisa kuch uske sareer se nikal raha tha

Eda ki laal aankhen dekhte hi mazikeen ne kneel kar diya

Eda- bring me all the souls
It's time to teach them some lessons
Ek bahut robdaar aawaz me vo boli jisse sun kad mazikeen ko vaisa hi laga jaisa usse lucifer ko sunte time lagta tha

Ek baar ke liye to usse yehi laga tha ki lucifer hi aagya vapas hell me

Eda ne order de diya tha aur mazikeen sar jhukaye vaha se order follow karne chali gaye

Eda charo taraf dekhte hue aage badh rahi thi aur abhi jaha hell me bahut sor saraba tha eda ke vaha land karte hi ek dam sanaata chha gaya

Un souls ko to yehi lag raha tha na ki lucifer vapas aa gaya aur lucifer ke vapas aane ka sidha sidha matlab usse dikhne lag gaya tha jo unke sath barso pehle hua tha

Abhi unhe ye bilkul andaza nahi tha ki lucifer nahi devil vapas aaya hai aur ab unhe saja milni hai jo barso se pending chal rahi thi

Khauf hell ki havao tak me dekha ja sakta tha aisa haal ho gaya tha vaha

Kuch hi der me mazikeen vapas aagaye aur uske sath hi bediyo me bandhe bahut sare souls thi

Eda- enme se vo konsi hai jinko abhi tak karmo ki saja nahi mili hai?
Mazikeen- sab vohi hai maalik
Aapke jane ke baad se jitni bhi aaye sab sirf kaddi hi rahi hai kisi ko saja nahi mili

Eda- lekin aaj milegi
Tel garm karo aaj enko fry karenge
Mazikeen- jee maalik

Eda- aur get me a big knife
I need to get rid of these things
Eda ne apne wings ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha
Mazikeen- jee maalik

Mazikeen eda ki har baat ko sar jhuka kar maan rahi thi kyuki samne eda thode hi khadi thi
Samne to vo tha jo mazikeen ko bhi aisa manjar dikha deta ki uski gand ke bhi chhote chhote hisse ho jate

Yehi sab sochte hue mazikeen eda ki har baat maan rahi thi aur ye sab sun kar vaha khadi souls vaise hi mootne lag gaye the

Kyuki vaha besak lucifer nahi tha lekin lucifer ki parchae jarur khadi hue thi...

Mera Guess Shi tha ki vo devil he h

Tara ka bhi number lag he gya ye train to ruk he na rhi isme to sab bharte ja rhe h apata na konse station pr Jake ruke gi ye train

Ab eda ko bhi heaven se nikal diya gya h/ usne khud chorr diya

Hell me uske swagat ke liye souls ko itna tadpaya jaye ki unko bhi apne kiye hue sare galat krmo ki yaad aaye ki kyo vo sare kaam kiye inn logo ne

Btw awesome update bro

 

[Lib am]

UPDATE-161
Tara- lucifer???
Lucifer utho
Kya hogya tumhe?
Tum theek ho?
Jameen par gire hue lucifer ko tara uthane ki kosis kar rahi thi

Vo kaha yaha anisha ke bare me baat karne aaye thi aur lucifer ko aise jamin par gira dekh kar puri safeed pad chuki thi

Vo baar baar usse hila rahi thi aur pani bhi daal rahi thi uske upar

Aur sayad ye kaam kar gaya aur lucifer ki aankhen khulne lagi
Bahut relaxed feel kar raha tha vo aur jab usne khud ko tara ki gaud me leta dekha to chehre par ek alag hi smile aa gaye

Tara- thank goooodddd
Tara ne ek chain ki saas li jab usne lucifer ko jaga dekha

Tara- what the hell happened here?
Lucifer jo ab puri tarah se jaag chuka tha vo tara ke chehre ko hi dekhe ja raha tha

Aaj usse vo bahut masoom lag rahi thi

Lucifer- tumhra chehra ulta kyu ho gaya hai?
Tara- because tum meri gaud me lete hue ho
Utho aur batao kya hua tumhe?

Lucifer dheere dheere se uski gaud se uth khada hua aur firse usse niharne laga

Tara- kya dekh rahe ho?
Lucifer- tum theek ho?

Tara- mujhe kya hoga?
Tum batao tumhe kya hua?
Yaha jameen par kyu leete hue the?
Lucifer- tumhri gaud ka intezaar kar raha tha

Tara- tum theek ho na lucifer
Vo stressed way me puchi
Lucifer- better than ever

Tara- mujhe to dara hi diya tha tumne
Lucifer- tum dar gaye thi?
Kyu?

Tara- agar aise jamin par gire rahoge to darungi bhi nahi?
Lucifer ne bade pyaar se tara ke chehre ko dekha fir apne hatho se uske gallo ko touch kiya
Tara ki aankhen apne aap band ho gaye thi sayad lucifer ke hatho ka kamaal tha ya fir kuch aur ye to kya hi bataye lekin lucifer ke ek touch matar ne tara ko madhosh kar diya tha

Lucifer- kitni pyaari ho tum
Aaj sayad pehli baar lucifer ne tara ki tarif ki hogi aur tara ka man ye sunte hi prafulit ho gaya

Tara- thank you
Lucifer- you're one of the best thing that ever happend to me

Lucifer aaj bahut jada hi relaxed dikh raha tha nahi to aise baatein vo karta nahi aur vo bhi tara ke sath to bilkul bhi nahi karta

Lucifer- tumhre khush rahne ka waqt aa gaya hai
I know tum bahut suffer kari ho lekin ab aur nahi karna padega
Tara- tum theek ho na lucifer?

Lucifer- ha aaj hi to main theek hua hu
Pata nahi kab se aise din ka intezaar tha mujhe
Tara- mujhe anisha ke bare me baat karni thi
Tara topic change karte hue boli kyuki vo pagal hone lagi thi lucifer ki baaton se aur agar aisa thodi der aur chalta rahta to vo bilkul apne hosh gava deti aur fir us list me ek aur naam jud jata

Lucifer- mujhe nahi karni uske bare me
Tara- please help me na

Lucifer- listen to me
Anisha is no kid okay?
Usse free hand do aur apna pyaar aise dikhao jis se usse na to koe burden lage aur vo apni jid chhod de
Main es me tumhri koe help nahi kar paunga
Jo karna hai tum behano ko hi karna hai
Tara- ek rasta to dikha do

Lucifer- aankhne kholo rasta samne dikh jayega
Tum teeno ka ye bahut personal matter hai aur esme main involve nahi hona chahta i hope you understand
Tara- tumhe pata to bahut kuch hai lekin batate nahi ho

Lucifer- pata to mujhe brahmand ki utpatti ka bhi hai lekin eska ye matlab to nahi ki main dunia me gaata firu?
Tara- main to abhi ki baat kar rahi hu

Lucifer- abhi ka matter to us se bhi bada hai
Brahmaand kaise bana ye batana jada easy hai as compared to what is going on between your sisters
Tara- tum bas baatein banate rahte ho

Lucifer- maine kabhi tumhe samjha nahi na?
Tum kamaal ho tara
Tara- aaj tumhe Kya ho raha hai?
Pehle to kabhi aisi baat nahi ki

Lucifer- pehle tumhe dekha hi nahi na
Tara- kitni baar to dekha hai

Lucifer- aaj jaise nahi dekha
Kya chhij ho tum tara tumhe maloom nahi hai
Tara- bas bas aaj ke liye bahut tareef ho gaye
Kuch kal ke liye bhi bacha lo

Lucifer- tumhre liye kabhi khatam nahi hoga bas devil vapas na aajaye
Tara- devil?

Lucifer- main devil hi to hu
Tara- vo to tum ho hi

Lucifer- abhi to nahi hu
Tara- aaj hum lad nahi rahe

Lucifer- tumhe ladna hai mere sath?
Tara- tum hi ladte rahte the mujhse

Lucifer- abhi to nahi lad raha
Tara- aise hi raha karo fir
Ache lagte ho

Lucifer- ladte hue acha nahi lagta?
Tara- tumhe gussa jada hi aata hai

Lucifer- mere pass raha karo fir nahi aayega
Tara- mere samne hi to aata hai
Aashu ke samne to tumhri bolti band ho jati hai

Lucifer- vo ashu hai aur tum tara
Tara- she loves you a lot

Lucifer- you too loves me
Tara- huh
Sakal dekhi hai apni?

Lucifer- ladkiyo ke liye etna muskil kyu hota hai ye admit karna?
Tara- mujhe late ho raha hai
Aur tara jaise hi muddi lucifer ne uska hath pakad liya aur ghuma kar apne se chhipka liya

Lucifer- kyu bhagti ho tum mujhse humesha?
Mere khaate lage hai ya fir main tumhe kha jaunga?
Na tum mujhe tab samjh paye aur na aaj samjh pa rahi ho
Kya karu main jis se tumhe samjh aaye?
Ha?
Kya karu main?
Mat bhaga kar mere se
Lucifer ne jis dard bhari aawaz me bola tara to khadi ki khadi rah gaye

Uske muh se sabad nikalne hi band ho gaye aur vo chhup chhap khadi bas lucifer ki aankhon me dekhne lagi

Sare jahan ka dard umda hua tha vaha abhi aur tara ye saaf saaf dekh pa rahi thi

Usse samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ab vo kya bole aur kya nahi bas lucifer ki aankhon me khud ke liye beintehaa muhobaat ko saaf saaf dekh pa rahi thi vo

Etna saaf ki uske sareer ne uska sath dena chhod diya aur uske hontho ne lucifer ke hontho ko apna bana liya

Etna pyaar bhaara kiss tha vo ki sayad hi lucifer ne aisa kabhi experience kiya hoga

Kuch hi seconds chala aur tara piche hat gaye
Sarm ke mare uska chehra laal peela pad raha tha aur vo ab lucifer se najar nahi mila pa rahi thi

Tara- mujhe kuch kaam yaad aagya
Aur vo aise bhagi vaha se jaise pagal kutte piche pad gaye ho

Lucifer ne bhi jada react ya overreact nahi kiya kyuki abhi vo moment ko samjh pa raha tha aur usse ek important kaam bhi karna tha

Esliye apne kapde pahne aur nikal gaya apne ghar se

Kaha pahucha?
Naag ke farmhouse par

Ander hi usse naag anika aur shekhar dikh gaye

Anika ne shekhar ko kaato ke upar latka rakha tha aur uski halaat aise thi ki abhi mar jayega

Lucifer aaya anika se uski najar mili lucifer ne naag ki kamar se gun nikali aur
Dhad dhad dhad dhad dhad dhad
Sari goliya shekhar ke sareer me utaar di*****

Thadaaaaaaammmmmmm ek bahut tej aawaz pure hell me fail gaye

Koe ek bahut badi imaarat ko chhirta hua niche gir raha tha

Aur dekhte hi dekhte puri imaarat jamin se mil gaye thi

Mazikeen ne jab ye dekha to vo doddte hue us jagah ki taraf badhi
Uske hatho me uske sare weapons the aur aankhon me demon wali chamak

Lekin jaise hi usne samne dekha uske hathiyaar apne aap jamin par gir gaye aur vo ghutno ke bal sar niche karke bath gaye

Samne eda khadi ho rahi thi aur uska chehra abhi bhi vaisa hi tha jaise kuch der pehle tha matlab ki abhi bhi uski aankhen laal hi thi aur garm lava jaisa kuch uske sareer se nikal raha tha

Eda ki laal aankhen dekhte hi mazikeen ne kneel kar diya

Eda- bring me all the souls
It's time to teach them some lessons
Ek bahut robdaar aawaz me vo boli jisse sun kad mazikeen ko vaisa hi laga jaisa usse lucifer ko sunte time lagta tha

Ek baar ke liye to usse yehi laga tha ki lucifer hi aagya vapas hell me

Eda ne order de diya tha aur mazikeen sar jhukaye vaha se order follow karne chali gaye

Eda charo taraf dekhte hue aage badh rahi thi aur abhi jaha hell me bahut sor saraba tha eda ke vaha land karte hi ek dam sanaata chha gaya

Un souls ko to yehi lag raha tha na ki lucifer vapas aa gaya aur lucifer ke vapas aane ka sidha sidha matlab usse dikhne lag gaya tha jo unke sath barso pehle hua tha

Abhi unhe ye bilkul andaza nahi tha ki lucifer nahi devil vapas aaya hai aur ab unhe saja milni hai jo barso se pending chal rahi thi

Khauf hell ki havao tak me dekha ja sakta tha aisa haal ho gaya tha vaha

Kuch hi der me mazikeen vapas aagaye aur uske sath hi bediyo me bandhe bahut sare souls thi

Eda- enme se vo konsi hai jinko abhi tak karmo ki saja nahi mili hai?
Mazikeen- sab vohi hai maalik
Aapke jane ke baad se jitni bhi aaye sab sirf kaddi hi rahi hai kisi ko saja nahi mili

Eda- lekin aaj milegi
Tel garm karo aaj enko fry karenge
Mazikeen- jee maalik

Eda- aur get me a big knife
I need to get rid of these things
Eda ne apne wings ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha
Mazikeen- jee maalik

Mazikeen eda ki har baat ko sar jhuka kar maan rahi thi kyuki samne eda thode hi khadi thi
Samne to vo tha jo mazikeen ko bhi aisa manjar dikha deta ki uski gand ke bhi chhote chhote hisse ho jate

Yehi sab sochte hue mazikeen eda ki har baat maan rahi thi aur ye sab sun kar vaha khadi souls vaise hi mootne lag gaye the

Kyuki vaha besak lucifer nahi tha lekin lucifer ki parchae jarur khadi hue thi...

Tara is Eda reincarnation, what the hell. That means Tara or Eda is Lucii's first love. What a twist Lone survivor bro. Now Tara is in the line or I would say Tara is sharing first position with Inaya.

Now devil is in Eda's body so not sure what would he plan and if will cut the wings than Eda cannot return to heaven. Why Lucii suddenly killed Shekar? So that devil can punish him more in hell? Superb update

 

[Death Kiñg]

Inaaya : Saanvi
Ashmita : Simran
Anisha : Mitika
Payal : Shreya
Maadhuri : Maya
Kaashvi : Trisha
Tara : Eda....

Got it now..

Jaisa ki apun ne kaha hi tha.. (Annika : Roshini ko add karne ka hai bas, late entry thi uski).

Firstly, the scene between Tara & Lucifer.. Their conversation and the depiction of feelings & emotions.. was pure gold!

Tara bhi Lucifer par flat ho chuki thi, ye to hume pehle se hi pata tha... Jab un donon behnon ke saath Lucifer water park mein gaya tha, tabhi uski list mein Tara ka naam jud chuka tha... Parantu, pichhli kuchh mulakaton, especially last one, mein dono ke beech jo baatein huyi, uski wajah se laga tha ki jo anjaam Eda aur Lucifer ka hua tha wahi shayad Tara aur Lucifer ka bhi hoga, parantu ab cheezein badalti huyi nazar aa rahi hain... This meeting between Tara & Lucifer, for the first time, was filled with love & happiness only!

Lucifer ki maata shree ne Eda ko vardan types kuchh diya tha, ki wo aur Lucifer ek zaroor honge aur Eda ko uska pyaar zaroor milega... Wahin Supreme ne kaha tha ki Eda aur Lucifer ek naa ho paaye, iska ek bohot bada kaaran tha... What I can understand is, Lucifer ke andar devil ne apni jagah bana li thi, aur Eda ek Angel thi, isiliye shayad dono ka milan sambhav nahi tha... Lucifer ki Maa ke aashirvaad ke phal swaroop, Lucifer ke andar se Devil ki aatma/swaroop/power nikalkar Eda mein sama chuki hai... Ab bhi Eda aur Lucifer ka direct samagam sambhav nahi, kyonki equation wahi hai... Parantu, Tara ke roop mein Eda ka ansh/swaroop aur Lucifer ke ek hone mein aisi koyi samasya hone nahi waali hai...

Ab sawaal ye hai ki kya Eda jaanti thi Tara ke astitva ke baare mein, yadi haan, to kya usne ye sab huddang jo machaya Heaven mein, wo isi mantavya ko poora karne hetu machaya taaki Lucifer ke andar se devil ko baahar nikaala jaa sake... Haalanki, abhi ye saaf nahi hua hai ki Devil kaise nikla Lucifer ke andar se... Kyonki, mujhe nahi lagta ki kisi bhi situation mein Lucifer ne aisa intezaam kiya hoga, jiske chalte Eda ko Devil ka kop bhogna pade, to aise mein ek hi possibility hai ki Supreme ne Eda se krodhit hokar (because of Guruji & Raaj), use wahi saza de di hai, jo Lucifer ko di thi : Hell Lord...

Ab Eda ne Hell ki baagdor sambhal li hai, aur usne apne pankh kaatne ka bhi faisla kar liya hai... Souls ki to lag gayi hai, kyonki itne samay se jo Lucifer ki absence mein unki mauj ho rahi thi, wo ab khatam hone waali hai... I'm interested in Shekhar though,uski soul bhi Hell hi jaayegi na? Yaani, ek nark se mukt hokar, doosre aur us se bhi dangerous nark mein jaane waala hai wo? Secondly, Eda ka kya hoga? Kyonki Lucifer ka ant, maut hi hai, ye kaafi clear hai, to Eda.. jise same usi raaste par fenk diya gaya hai jis par Lucifer ko fenka gaya tha, to kya Eda ki maut bhi nischit ho chuki hai? One thing I want is Supreme ki maut, kyonki agar Lucifer aur Eda bina galti ke marenge to Supreme to exist karna deserve hi nahi karte...

Tara, Anisha ke baare mein baat karne aayi thi Lucifer se parantu Lucifer ne wahi kiya jo sabse best tha... Anisha ko pyaar ki zaroorat hai, us apnepan ki zaroorat hai jo use kabhi nahi mila... Anisha ke iraade sahi nahi lag rahe hain aur jo baatein Anisha aur Lucifer ke beech huyi thi pehle, us se laga tha ki Anisha ki planning behad khatarnak hai, shayad bohot negative bhi... Parantu, mujhe yahi lagta hai ki Tara aur Ashmita apne pyaar aur dulaar se use bhi change kar sakti hai... Waise Lucifer is maamle mein zyada soch nahi raha hai, to shayad Anisha ki planning ke anjaam ko lekar wo pehle hi aashvast hai...

Tara aur Lucifer ke madhya huyi kiss future mein hone waali ghatnaon ka bhi sanket de gayi... Shayad agla number Tara ka hi hoga parantu dekhna ye hai ki Tara kaise react karegi is sab par... Pyaar to karti hi hai wo Lucifer se, so lagta yahi hai ki jaldi hi Lucifer teeno behno ko ek saath waali apni fantasy bhi poori kar paayega, ya shayad nahi, kyonki Ashmita se to uski fati padi rehti hi hai... Is beech Shekhar ko maar diya hai Lucifer ne, aur saabit kar diya hai ki Devil ka hi prakop aur prabhav tha wo Lucifer par, jiske kaaran aaj wo is haalat mein hai, yaani Supreme aur Guruji ne jo bhi sikhaya use, bachpan se us se bhi koyi bohot kroor nahi banta Lucifer yadi uspar Devil ka saaya na hota...

Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki Annika kaise react karegi Shekhar ki maut par... Kya wo Lucifer par hi baras padegi, ya hamesha ki tarah Naag hi beech mein pisega? Raaj, wo kya karega, bhale hi Eda ko zabardasti Raaj ki taraf dhakela gaya ho, par lagta to hai ki Raaj sach mein pyaar karta tha Eda se, aur oopar se wo Lucifer ko apna idol bhi maanta hai... Ab jab dono ko hi same anjaam ke liye dhakel diya gaya hai, to kya jiski aashanka Eda ne jatayi thi wo sach ho jaayega, yaani Raaj ka vidroh! Let's see aage kya hota hai...

Bohot hi khubsurat update tha bhai! Jaisa maine kaha ki shayad kahani ka ab tak ka sabse behtar... Iske aage shayad kuchh aur kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai!

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[The king]

UPDATE-161
Tara- lucifer???
Lucifer utho
Kya hogya tumhe?
Tum theek ho?
Jameen par gire hue lucifer ko tara uthane ki kosis kar rahi thi

Vo kaha yaha anisha ke bare me baat karne aaye thi aur lucifer ko aise jamin par gira dekh kar puri safeed pad chuki thi

Vo baar baar usse hila rahi thi aur pani bhi daal rahi thi uske upar

Aur sayad ye kaam kar gaya aur lucifer ki aankhen khulne lagi
Bahut relaxed feel kar raha tha vo aur jab usne khud ko tara ki gaud me leta dekha to chehre par ek alag hi smile aa gaye

Tara- thank goooodddd
Tara ne ek chain ki saas li jab usne lucifer ko jaga dekha

Tara- what the hell happened here?
Lucifer jo ab puri tarah se jaag chuka tha vo tara ke chehre ko hi dekhe ja raha tha

Aaj usse vo bahut masoom lag rahi thi

Lucifer- tumhra chehra ulta kyu ho gaya hai?
Tara- because tum meri gaud me lete hue ho
Utho aur batao kya hua tumhe?

Lucifer dheere dheere se uski gaud se uth khada hua aur firse usse niharne laga

Tara- kya dekh rahe ho?
Lucifer- tum theek ho?

Tara- mujhe kya hoga?
Tum batao tumhe kya hua?
Yaha jameen par kyu leete hue the?
Lucifer- tumhri gaud ka intezaar kar raha tha

Tara- tum theek ho na lucifer
Vo stressed way me puchi
Lucifer- better than ever

Tara- mujhe to dara hi diya tha tumne
Lucifer- tum dar gaye thi?
Kyu?

Tara- agar aise jamin par gire rahoge to darungi bhi nahi?
Lucifer ne bade pyaar se tara ke chehre ko dekha fir apne hatho se uske gallo ko touch kiya
Tara ki aankhen apne aap band ho gaye thi sayad lucifer ke hatho ka kamaal tha ya fir kuch aur ye to kya hi bataye lekin lucifer ke ek touch matar ne tara ko madhosh kar diya tha

Lucifer- kitni pyaari ho tum
Aaj sayad pehli baar lucifer ne tara ki tarif ki hogi aur tara ka man ye sunte hi prafulit ho gaya

Tara- thank you
Lucifer- you're one of the best thing that ever happend to me

Lucifer aaj bahut jada hi relaxed dikh raha tha nahi to aise baatein vo karta nahi aur vo bhi tara ke sath to bilkul bhi nahi karta

Lucifer- tumhre khush rahne ka waqt aa gaya hai
I know tum bahut suffer kari ho lekin ab aur nahi karna padega
Tara- tum theek ho na lucifer?

Lucifer- ha aaj hi to main theek hua hu
Pata nahi kab se aise din ka intezaar tha mujhe
Tara- mujhe anisha ke bare me baat karni thi
Tara topic change karte hue boli kyuki vo pagal hone lagi thi lucifer ki baaton se aur agar aisa thodi der aur chalta rahta to vo bilkul apne hosh gava deti aur fir us list me ek aur naam jud jata

Lucifer- mujhe nahi karni uske bare me
Tara- please help me na

Lucifer- listen to me
Anisha is no kid okay?
Usse free hand do aur apna pyaar aise dikhao jis se usse na to koe burden lage aur vo apni jid chhod de
Main es me tumhri koe help nahi kar paunga
Jo karna hai tum behano ko hi karna hai
Tara- ek rasta to dikha do

Lucifer- aankhne kholo rasta samne dikh jayega
Tum teeno ka ye bahut personal matter hai aur esme main involve nahi hona chahta i hope you understand
Tara- tumhe pata to bahut kuch hai lekin batate nahi ho

Lucifer- pata to mujhe brahmand ki utpatti ka bhi hai lekin eska ye matlab to nahi ki main dunia me gaata firu?
Tara- main to abhi ki baat kar rahi hu

Lucifer- abhi ka matter to us se bhi bada hai
Brahmaand kaise bana ye batana jada easy hai as compared to what is going on between your sisters
Tara- tum bas baatein banate rahte ho

Lucifer- maine kabhi tumhe samjha nahi na?
Tum kamaal ho tara
Tara- aaj tumhe Kya ho raha hai?
Pehle to kabhi aisi baat nahi ki

Lucifer- pehle tumhe dekha hi nahi na
Tara- kitni baar to dekha hai

Lucifer- aaj jaise nahi dekha
Kya chhij ho tum tara tumhe maloom nahi hai
Tara- bas bas aaj ke liye bahut tareef ho gaye
Kuch kal ke liye bhi bacha lo

Lucifer- tumhre liye kabhi khatam nahi hoga bas devil vapas na aajaye
Tara- devil?

Lucifer- main devil hi to hu
Tara- vo to tum ho hi

Lucifer- abhi to nahi hu
Tara- aaj hum lad nahi rahe

Lucifer- tumhe ladna hai mere sath?
Tara- tum hi ladte rahte the mujhse

Lucifer- abhi to nahi lad raha
Tara- aise hi raha karo fir
Ache lagte ho

Lucifer- ladte hue acha nahi lagta?
Tara- tumhe gussa jada hi aata hai

Lucifer- mere pass raha karo fir nahi aayega
Tara- mere samne hi to aata hai
Aashu ke samne to tumhri bolti band ho jati hai

Lucifer- vo ashu hai aur tum tara
Tara- she loves you a lot

Lucifer- you too loves me
Tara- huh
Sakal dekhi hai apni?

Lucifer- ladkiyo ke liye etna muskil kyu hota hai ye admit karna?
Tara- mujhe late ho raha hai
Aur tara jaise hi muddi lucifer ne uska hath pakad liya aur ghuma kar apne se chhipka liya

Lucifer- kyu bhagti ho tum mujhse humesha?
Mere khaate lage hai ya fir main tumhe kha jaunga?
Na tum mujhe tab samjh paye aur na aaj samjh pa rahi ho
Kya karu main jis se tumhe samjh aaye?
Ha?
Kya karu main?
Mat bhaga kar mere se
Lucifer ne jis dard bhari aawaz me bola tara to khadi ki khadi rah gaye

Uske muh se sabad nikalne hi band ho gaye aur vo chhup chhap khadi bas lucifer ki aankhon me dekhne lagi

Sare jahan ka dard umda hua tha vaha abhi aur tara ye saaf saaf dekh pa rahi thi

Usse samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ab vo kya bole aur kya nahi bas lucifer ki aankhon me khud ke liye beintehaa muhobaat ko saaf saaf dekh pa rahi thi vo

Etna saaf ki uske sareer ne uska sath dena chhod diya aur uske hontho ne lucifer ke hontho ko apna bana liya

Etna pyaar bhaara kiss tha vo ki sayad hi lucifer ne aisa kabhi experience kiya hoga

Kuch hi seconds chala aur tara piche hat gaye
Sarm ke mare uska chehra laal peela pad raha tha aur vo ab lucifer se najar nahi mila pa rahi thi

Tara- mujhe kuch kaam yaad aagya
Aur vo aise bhagi vaha se jaise pagal kutte piche pad gaye ho

Lucifer ne bhi jada react ya overreact nahi kiya kyuki abhi vo moment ko samjh pa raha tha aur usse ek important kaam bhi karna tha

Esliye apne kapde pahne aur nikal gaya apne ghar se

Kaha pahucha?
Naag ke farmhouse par

Ander hi usse naag anika aur shekhar dikh gaye

Anika ne shekhar ko kaato ke upar latka rakha tha aur uski halaat aise thi ki abhi mar jayega

Lucifer aaya anika se uski najar mili lucifer ne naag ki kamar se gun nikali aur
Dhad dhad dhad dhad dhad dhad
Sari goliya shekhar ke sareer me utaar di*****

Thadaaaaaaammmmmmm ek bahut tej aawaz pure hell me fail gaye

Koe ek bahut badi imaarat ko chhirta hua niche gir raha tha

Aur dekhte hi dekhte puri imaarat jamin se mil gaye thi

Mazikeen ne jab ye dekha to vo doddte hue us jagah ki taraf badhi
Uske hatho me uske sare weapons the aur aankhon me demon wali chamak

Lekin jaise hi usne samne dekha uske hathiyaar apne aap jamin par gir gaye aur vo ghutno ke bal sar niche karke bath gaye

Samne eda khadi ho rahi thi aur uska chehra abhi bhi vaisa hi tha jaise kuch der pehle tha matlab ki abhi bhi uski aankhen laal hi thi aur garm lava jaisa kuch uske sareer se nikal raha tha

Eda ki laal aankhen dekhte hi mazikeen ne kneel kar diya

Eda- bring me all the souls
It's time to teach them some lessons
Ek bahut robdaar aawaz me vo boli jisse sun kad mazikeen ko vaisa hi laga jaisa usse lucifer ko sunte time lagta tha

Ek baar ke liye to usse yehi laga tha ki lucifer hi aagya vapas hell me

Eda ne order de diya tha aur mazikeen sar jhukaye vaha se order follow karne chali gaye

Eda charo taraf dekhte hue aage badh rahi thi aur abhi jaha hell me bahut sor saraba tha eda ke vaha land karte hi ek dam sanaata chha gaya

Un souls ko to yehi lag raha tha na ki lucifer vapas aa gaya aur lucifer ke vapas aane ka sidha sidha matlab usse dikhne lag gaya tha jo unke sath barso pehle hua tha

Abhi unhe ye bilkul andaza nahi tha ki lucifer nahi devil vapas aaya hai aur ab unhe saja milni hai jo barso se pending chal rahi thi

Khauf hell ki havao tak me dekha ja sakta tha aisa haal ho gaya tha vaha

Kuch hi der me mazikeen vapas aagaye aur uske sath hi bediyo me bandhe bahut sare souls thi

Eda- enme se vo konsi hai jinko abhi tak karmo ki saja nahi mili hai?
Mazikeen- sab vohi hai maalik
Aapke jane ke baad se jitni bhi aaye sab sirf kaddi hi rahi hai kisi ko saja nahi mili

Eda- lekin aaj milegi
Tel garm karo aaj enko fry karenge
Mazikeen- jee maalik

Eda- aur get me a big knife
I need to get rid of these things
Eda ne apne wings ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha
Mazikeen- jee maalik

Mazikeen eda ki har baat ko sar jhuka kar maan rahi thi kyuki samne eda thode hi khadi thi
Samne to vo tha jo mazikeen ko bhi aisa manjar dikha deta ki uski gand ke bhi chhote chhote hisse ho jate

Yehi sab sochte hue mazikeen eda ki har baat maan rahi thi aur ye sab sun kar vaha khadi souls vaise hi mootne lag gaye the

Kyuki vaha besak lucifer nahi tha lekin lucifer ki parchae jarur khadi hue thi...

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[Silent lover]

UPDATE-161
Tara- lucifer???
Lucifer utho
Kya hogya tumhe?
Tum theek ho?
Jameen par gire hue lucifer ko tara uthane ki kosis kar rahi thi

Vo kaha yaha anisha ke bare me baat karne aaye thi aur lucifer ko aise jamin par gira dekh kar puri safeed pad chuki thi

Vo baar baar usse hila rahi thi aur pani bhi daal rahi thi uske upar

Aur sayad ye kaam kar gaya aur lucifer ki aankhen khulne lagi
Bahut relaxed feel kar raha tha vo aur jab usne khud ko tara ki gaud me leta dekha to chehre par ek alag hi smile aa gaye

Tara- thank goooodddd
Tara ne ek chain ki saas li jab usne lucifer ko jaga dekha

Tara- what the hell happened here?
Lucifer jo ab puri tarah se jaag chuka tha vo tara ke chehre ko hi dekhe ja raha tha

Aaj usse vo bahut masoom lag rahi thi

Lucifer- tumhra chehra ulta kyu ho gaya hai?
Tara- because tum meri gaud me lete hue ho
Utho aur batao kya hua tumhe?

Lucifer dheere dheere se uski gaud se uth khada hua aur firse usse niharne laga

Tara- kya dekh rahe ho?
Lucifer- tum theek ho?

Tara- mujhe kya hoga?
Tum batao tumhe kya hua?
Yaha jameen par kyu leete hue the?
Lucifer- tumhri gaud ka intezaar kar raha tha

Tara- tum theek ho na lucifer
Vo stressed way me puchi
Lucifer- better than ever

Tara- mujhe to dara hi diya tha tumne
Lucifer- tum dar gaye thi?
Kyu?

Tara- agar aise jamin par gire rahoge to darungi bhi nahi?
Lucifer ne bade pyaar se tara ke chehre ko dekha fir apne hatho se uske gallo ko touch kiya
Tara ki aankhen apne aap band ho gaye thi sayad lucifer ke hatho ka kamaal tha ya fir kuch aur ye to kya hi bataye lekin lucifer ke ek touch matar ne tara ko madhosh kar diya tha

Lucifer- kitni pyaari ho tum
Aaj sayad pehli baar lucifer ne tara ki tarif ki hogi aur tara ka man ye sunte hi prafulit ho gaya

Tara- thank you
Lucifer- you're one of the best thing that ever happend to me

Lucifer aaj bahut jada hi relaxed dikh raha tha nahi to aise baatein vo karta nahi aur vo bhi tara ke sath to bilkul bhi nahi karta

Lucifer- tumhre khush rahne ka waqt aa gaya hai
I know tum bahut suffer kari ho lekin ab aur nahi karna padega
Tara- tum theek ho na lucifer?

Lucifer- ha aaj hi to main theek hua hu
Pata nahi kab se aise din ka intezaar tha mujhe
Tara- mujhe anisha ke bare me baat karni thi
Tara topic change karte hue boli kyuki vo pagal hone lagi thi lucifer ki baaton se aur agar aisa thodi der aur chalta rahta to vo bilkul apne hosh gava deti aur fir us list me ek aur naam jud jata

Lucifer- mujhe nahi karni uske bare me
Tara- please help me na

Lucifer- listen to me
Anisha is no kid okay?
Usse free hand do aur apna pyaar aise dikhao jis se usse na to koe burden lage aur vo apni jid chhod de
Main es me tumhri koe help nahi kar paunga
Jo karna hai tum behano ko hi karna hai
Tara- ek rasta to dikha do

Lucifer- aankhne kholo rasta samne dikh jayega
Tum teeno ka ye bahut personal matter hai aur esme main involve nahi hona chahta i hope you understand
Tara- tumhe pata to bahut kuch hai lekin batate nahi ho

Lucifer- pata to mujhe brahmand ki utpatti ka bhi hai lekin eska ye matlab to nahi ki main dunia me gaata firu?
Tara- main to abhi ki baat kar rahi hu

Lucifer- abhi ka matter to us se bhi bada hai
Brahmaand kaise bana ye batana jada easy hai as compared to what is going on between your sisters
Tara- tum bas baatein banate rahte ho

Lucifer- maine kabhi tumhe samjha nahi na?
Tum kamaal ho tara
Tara- aaj tumhe Kya ho raha hai?
Pehle to kabhi aisi baat nahi ki

Lucifer- pehle tumhe dekha hi nahi na
Tara- kitni baar to dekha hai

Lucifer- aaj jaise nahi dekha
Kya chhij ho tum tara tumhe maloom nahi hai
Tara- bas bas aaj ke liye bahut tareef ho gaye
Kuch kal ke liye bhi bacha lo

Lucifer- tumhre liye kabhi khatam nahi hoga bas devil vapas na aajaye
Tara- devil?

Lucifer- main devil hi to hu
Tara- vo to tum ho hi

Lucifer- abhi to nahi hu
Tara- aaj hum lad nahi rahe

Lucifer- tumhe ladna hai mere sath?
Tara- tum hi ladte rahte the mujhse

Lucifer- abhi to nahi lad raha
Tara- aise hi raha karo fir
Ache lagte ho

Lucifer- ladte hue acha nahi lagta?
Tara- tumhe gussa jada hi aata hai

Lucifer- mere pass raha karo fir nahi aayega
Tara- mere samne hi to aata hai
Aashu ke samne to tumhri bolti band ho jati hai

Lucifer- vo ashu hai aur tum tara
Tara- she loves you a lot

Lucifer- you too loves me
Tara- huh
Sakal dekhi hai apni?

Lucifer- ladkiyo ke liye etna muskil kyu hota hai ye admit karna?
Tara- mujhe late ho raha hai
Aur tara jaise hi muddi lucifer ne uska hath pakad liya aur ghuma kar apne se chhipka liya

Lucifer- kyu bhagti ho tum mujhse humesha?
Mere khaate lage hai ya fir main tumhe kha jaunga?
Na tum mujhe tab samjh paye aur na aaj samjh pa rahi ho
Kya karu main jis se tumhe samjh aaye?
Ha?
Kya karu main?
Mat bhaga kar mere se
Lucifer ne jis dard bhari aawaz me bola tara to khadi ki khadi rah gaye

Uske muh se sabad nikalne hi band ho gaye aur vo chhup chhap khadi bas lucifer ki aankhon me dekhne lagi

Sare jahan ka dard umda hua tha vaha abhi aur tara ye saaf saaf dekh pa rahi thi

Usse samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ab vo kya bole aur kya nahi bas lucifer ki aankhon me khud ke liye beintehaa muhobaat ko saaf saaf dekh pa rahi thi vo

Etna saaf ki uske sareer ne uska sath dena chhod diya aur uske hontho ne lucifer ke hontho ko apna bana liya

Etna pyaar bhaara kiss tha vo ki sayad hi lucifer ne aisa kabhi experience kiya hoga

Kuch hi seconds chala aur tara piche hat gaye
Sarm ke mare uska chehra laal peela pad raha tha aur vo ab lucifer se najar nahi mila pa rahi thi

Tara- mujhe kuch kaam yaad aagya
Aur vo aise bhagi vaha se jaise pagal kutte piche pad gaye ho

Lucifer ne bhi jada react ya overreact nahi kiya kyuki abhi vo moment ko samjh pa raha tha aur usse ek important kaam bhi karna tha

Esliye apne kapde pahne aur nikal gaya apne ghar se

Kaha pahucha?
Naag ke farmhouse par

Ander hi usse naag anika aur shekhar dikh gaye

Anika ne shekhar ko kaato ke upar latka rakha tha aur uski halaat aise thi ki abhi mar jayega

Lucifer aaya anika se uski najar mili lucifer ne naag ki kamar se gun nikali aur
Dhad dhad dhad dhad dhad dhad
Sari goliya shekhar ke sareer me utaar di*****

Thadaaaaaaammmmmmm ek bahut tej aawaz pure hell me fail gaye

Koe ek bahut badi imaarat ko chhirta hua niche gir raha tha

Aur dekhte hi dekhte puri imaarat jamin se mil gaye thi

Mazikeen ne jab ye dekha to vo doddte hue us jagah ki taraf badhi
Uske hatho me uske sare weapons the aur aankhon me demon wali chamak

Lekin jaise hi usne samne dekha uske hathiyaar apne aap jamin par gir gaye aur vo ghutno ke bal sar niche karke bath gaye

Samne eda khadi ho rahi thi aur uska chehra abhi bhi vaisa hi tha jaise kuch der pehle tha matlab ki abhi bhi uski aankhen laal hi thi aur garm lava jaisa kuch uske sareer se nikal raha tha

Eda ki laal aankhen dekhte hi mazikeen ne kneel kar diya

Eda- bring me all the souls
It's time to teach them some lessons
Ek bahut robdaar aawaz me vo boli jisse sun kad mazikeen ko vaisa hi laga jaisa usse lucifer ko sunte time lagta tha

Ek baar ke liye to usse yehi laga tha ki lucifer hi aagya vapas hell me

Eda ne order de diya tha aur mazikeen sar jhukaye vaha se order follow karne chali gaye

Eda charo taraf dekhte hue aage badh rahi thi aur abhi jaha hell me bahut sor saraba tha eda ke vaha land karte hi ek dam sanaata chha gaya

Un souls ko to yehi lag raha tha na ki lucifer vapas aa gaya aur lucifer ke vapas aane ka sidha sidha matlab usse dikhne lag gaya tha jo unke sath barso pehle hua tha

Abhi unhe ye bilkul andaza nahi tha ki lucifer nahi devil vapas aaya hai aur ab unhe saja milni hai jo barso se pending chal rahi thi

Khauf hell ki havao tak me dekha ja sakta tha aisa haal ho gaya tha vaha

Kuch hi der me mazikeen vapas aagaye aur uske sath hi bediyo me bandhe bahut sare souls thi

Eda- enme se vo konsi hai jinko abhi tak karmo ki saja nahi mili hai?
Mazikeen- sab vohi hai maalik
Aapke jane ke baad se jitni bhi aaye sab sirf kaddi hi rahi hai kisi ko saja nahi mili

Eda- lekin aaj milegi
Tel garm karo aaj enko fry karenge
Mazikeen- jee maalik

Eda- aur get me a big knife
I need to get rid of these things
Eda ne apne wings ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha
Mazikeen- jee maalik

Mazikeen eda ki har baat ko sar jhuka kar maan rahi thi kyuki samne eda thode hi khadi thi
Samne to vo tha jo mazikeen ko bhi aisa manjar dikha deta ki uski gand ke bhi chhote chhote hisse ho jate

Yehi sab sochte hue mazikeen eda ki har baat maan rahi thi aur ye sab sun kar vaha khadi souls vaise hi mootne lag gaye the

Kyuki vaha besak lucifer nahi tha lekin lucifer ki parchae jarur khadi hue thi...

Matlb bhai kya twist dala eda ko hell soup diya supreme ne bahut khub dekhte h aage kya hota hai wo

 

[Lone survivor]

The finest update of the story till now..

You're one of the best writers I've read on the forum.

Are bhai bhai bhai
Kyu sarminda kar rahe ho?
I just write what I feel and that's it
This is the only way for me to let my feelings out and I am blessed to have such an amazing readers who connects with me
Thank you so much everyone for everything

 

[parkas]

Lone survivor bhai next update kab tak aayega?