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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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Sandy307 bhaya
aapke Sher pr Maine bhi ek Sher arj kiya hai mulaija farmaiyega...

Is lucche ko lucchi bna denge,
Is kacche ko kacchi bna denge,
Tum jyada mere samip mat aana,
Warna uski agarbatti ko mombatti bna denge...

:D :D :D :D

Yha yha lucchi Luci ke liye prayog kiya ja rha hai
agarbatti yha land ko represent kr rha hai :D
Hahahaha bhai sab ek se badh ke ek sayar bathe hai yaha
 
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Lone survivor

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Itni achhi story abhi mughse chhuti hui h ....

Bahut mast story likh rahe h aap....

Kuch points shuru me badshah story se milte lage but mast h story ...

Ab to agle update ka intezar h....


Waiting for your next update....

Badshah konsi story hai? Sayad maine padhi ho esliye thoda bahut similarity aagaye ho
Anyway welcome bhai
Keep supporting
 
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UPDATE-19
Tara- ye tumhre hath par kya hua?
Ashmita- kuch nahi didi bas thoda kat lag gaya tha

Tara- mujhe to aisa lag raha hai tumne Jan bhuj kar kat lagaya hai?
Kuch hua hai kya?
Ashmita- are nahi didi main khana bana rahi thi to galti se kat gaya

Tara- khana?
Tum?
Hahahaha
Ashmita- that's the fake laugh didi

Tara- ye to meri zindagi ki realistic hassi thi
Tumne aaj tak zindagi me kabhi kitchen me kadam rakha hai?
Ashmita- didi esliye to kat gaya aur har chhin ka first time bhi to hota hai

Tara- lucifer se jhagda hua hai kya?
Lucifer- mere baare me baat ho rahi hai kya?
Lucifer piche se aate hue bola

Tara- what the hell you're doing here ?
Lucifer- aapse milne aaya tha
Man taras gaya tha aisi khubsurati dekhe

Tara- apne man ko samjhao aur niklo yaha se
Lucifer- main bahar wait kar raha hu

Tara- wait?
Ye tumhre hath ko bhi kya hua?
Lucifer aur ashmita ab ek dusre ko dekhne lage jaise sach na batane ko bol rahe ho

Tara- bolo?
Lucifer- ashmita se puch lena na
Mujhe kyu pareshan kar rahe ho?
Aur vo vaha se bahar aajata hai ashmita ki fasa kar

Tara- what is going on here?
Ashmita- are didi kuch nahi hua hai aur kya aap usse jante nahi ho?
Puri dunia ki bakwas karta rahta hai

Tara- lekin tum dono ka hath ek sath kaise kat sakta hai?
Ashmita- coincidence naam ki bhi koe chhij hoti hai didi

Tara- mujhe to kuch aur hi lag raha hai
Kha meri kasam?
Ashmita- didi nahi pehle hi bahut kasame kha chuki hu ab aur nahi

Tara- kasame kha chuki hu matlab?
Tum dono me pyaar to nahi ho gaya?
Aur etni jaldi commitment bhi kar di?
Ashmita- kuch bhi didi?
Pyaar aur lucifer se?
Usse pehle Main marna pasand karungi

Tara- acha aur ye yaha kya kar raha hai?
Ashmita- dad se pucho
Unka hi Kara dhara hai sab

Tara- ab dad kaha se bich me aagaye?
Ashmita- vo bich me hi the starting se
Acha ab main chalti hu late ho gaye pehle hi

Tara- mera to sar dard karne lag gaya
Coffee peke jaungi ab
Uske baad ashmita vaha se bahar aajati hai aur lucifer ke sath office chali jati hai

Ashmita- kuch partners hume dhokha de rahe hai, accounts me bahut issues dikh rahe hai
Lucifer- to main kya karu?

Ashmita- tum jake theek karo?
Lucifer- nokar samjha hai kya mujhe?

Ashmita- tum mere liye kaam karte ho samjhe?
Lucifer- main tumhre sath kaam karta hu samjhi?
Jada order dene ki jarurat nahi hai mujhe

Ashmita- tumse sidhe muh baat nahi hoti kya?
Lucifer- jiske sath karni chahiye uske sath karta hu aur jiske sath nahi karni uske sath nahi karta

Ashmita- maine kya bigada hai tumhra?
Lucifer- kuch nahi bas tumse gandi smell aati hai

Ashmita- apni bakwas band karo aur ye kaam karo
Lucifer- jake naha ke aa pehle
Mera yaha bathna muskil ho raha hai

Ashmita- tumhara muh kuch jada bada nahi ho gaya?
Lucifer- mera sab kuch hi bada hai
Dekhna hai tume?

Ashmita- mujhe aisi baat pasand nahi hai
Lucifer- to mujhe izzat se bola kar

Ashmita- main izzat se hi boli thi
Tum khud ladne lage ho
Lucifer- to fir aur izzat dikhao

Ashmita- main kisi aur se kara lungi kaam
Bhaad me jao
Lucifer- main hone hi nahi dunga
Dekhta hu kaise karati ho kaam

Ashmita- tumhri problem kya hai?
Maine tumhe kuch galat kaha hai kya?
Jo etna badak rahe ho?
Lucifer- tumne to etna galat kar diya hai ki main marne ke baad hi dard me hi rahunga
Ashmita ne jaise hi uski baat ka matlab samjha vo ek dam chhup ho gaye aur ab pure raste bas shanti hi rahi
Koe kuch nahi bola

Ashmita cabin

Ashmita- siya ko andar bejhna vo call par bolti hai
Kuch der baad Siya bhi aajati hai

Siya- good morning ma'am
Good morning s.s..sir lucifer ko vaha dekh ek hakla gaye bechari vahi ashmita un dono ko ghur ke dekhne lagi

Lucifer- ab hue hai good meri morning
Subah se pata nahi kaise kaise chehre dikh rahe hai
But what you're doing here
Tum to receptionist thi na?
Siya- Mr. Raichand told me to be miss raichand secretary

Lucifer- nice acha hai acha hai
Fir to tum mere aas pass hi rahogi

Ashmita- siya apna kaam se kaam rakha karo bas
Meri board ke sath meeting Fix karao
Bechari siya ko aise hi daat diya vo to sirf apna kaam kar rahi thi

Siya- yes ma'am
Ashmita- aur mujhe last year ke financial report lake do
Siya- okay ma'am
Aur vo chali jati hai

Ashmita- tum kaise jante ho siya ko?
Thoda gusse me bolti hai
Lucifer- sundar ladkiyo ke bare me janana mujhe pasand hai

Ashmita- ha vohi to aata hoga tum jaise ko?
Lucifer- sahi bol rahi ho bas mere sath kaam karne wali bhi sundar hoti to kya hi baat thi

Ashmita uski baatein sun ke jal bhun gaye thi lekin boli kuch nahi kyuki usse pata tha lucifer ke muh se niklega to gutter hi esliye chhup rahne me hi bhalae lagi usse

Eske baad dono meeting me chale gaye kaha ashmita sab ki bahut buti tarah class le rahi thi aur lucifer vaha batha bas ek sundar ladki ko ghure ja raha tha jo sayad apne dad ki jagah aaj aae thi, ek to ashmita unki maar rahi thi aur upar se lucifer ke aise ghurne se vo aur jada uncomfortable ho rahi thi lekin bechari bol kuch nahi pa rahi thi

Eske baad ashmita ne sab ko vaha se bhar fek diya aur gusse me lucifer ko ghurne lagi lekin usne koe react nahi kiya
Ashmita usse galliya dena chahti thi lekin control kiya usne bhi kisi tarah

Aur fir apne cabin me aakar financial report dekhne lagi
Lucifer vahi batha tej se bola Sala kitni boring life hoti hai logo ki bas kam kam aur kam
Fir sochte hai log hume pyaar kyu nahi karte
Ashmita chhup rahi

Lucifer fir bolta hai mujhe to ye bhi lagta hai enke koe dost bhi nahi honge
Kon hi dosti karega aise logo se?
Ashmita ab bhi kuch nahi boli

Lucifer fir se bola aur sayad aaj tak virgin bhi honge
Ashmita bahut gusse lucifer can you please shut the fuck off?

Lucifer- ab kya bolne par bhi pabandi hai?
Aur main tumhe kya kah raha hu?
Aahmita- main kaam kar rahi hu
Tumhe dikh nahi raha hai kya?

Lucifer- main ignore maar raha hu
Ashmita- tum bahar bath jao aur jitni marji utni bakwas karte raho

Lucifer- siya ke pass chala jata hu
Vo interesting lag rahi hai mujhe
Ashmita- usse apna kaam karne do please?
Office ke baad chale jana uske pass

Lucifer- kam kam aur bas kaam
Theek hai madam
Kar lo apna kaam

Tabhi naag ka message aaya uske pass jisme likha tha ki bhai ashmita ke mom ke bare me to kuch bhi nahi pata
Aisa lag raha hai jaise vo gayab kar di gaye hai
Na koe photo na koe information kuch bhi to nahi hai uske bare me
Lucifer ne message padha aur fir phone band karke chhup chhap bath gaya

Vahi suresh ke hatho me bhi vaisi hi file thi jo inaaya ke pass thi aur usme bhi kuch nahi tha lekin usne inaaya ki tarah kisi se kuch question nahi pucha bas vo file me jo ek do chhij thi isse padha aur fir band karke rakh di file

Fir kisi ko phone karke pucha ki lucifer aur ashmita kaha hai aur kya unko follow kiya ja raha hai?
Sab answers sun ke vo fir se phone kaat ke chhup chhap bath gaya

Yaha sab log ek dusre ke bare me janane ki bharpur kosis kar rahe the lekin safal ek bhi nahi ho raha tha
Pata nahi kaisa circle tha ye jisme sab ek se bade secret prani the

Vahi ma'am do teen dino se lucifer se mili hi nahi thi aur jab bhi dekhti uska flat lock hi milta tha
Kabhi kabhi man karta ki call kar lu fir sochti ki call karke bolungi kya?
Kuch bolne ko to tha hi nahi uske pass
Fir sochti ki bol dungi Alia miss kar rahi hai lekin fir apne hi idea ko cancel kar deti

Inaaya ne kal ki bejjati ke baad lucifer se door rahna hi sahi samjha aur pehle ki tarah hi apne aapko kaam me dhaal liya
Jo abhi thodi der pehle lucifer ashmita ko suna raha tha vo actually inaaya ke liye jada suit karta hai
Uski jindagi me na koe fun hai na koe dost aur vo abhi tak virgin bhi hai
Uske liye hi hai bas kaam kaam aur kaam
Lekin vo aisa kyu hai?
Ye important question hai jiska answer main abhi nahi dunga

Aise hi kuch din gujre aur ashmita lucifer ek sath hote hue bhi aur door jane lage
Sayad unke sath rahna hi unki duriyo ka karan ban raha tha
Vaise ye sab abhi ke liye to theek tha lekin long run me ye problem create kar sakta tha

Vahi suresh apna sara kaam chhod ke bas lucifer ke bare me janane ki kosis kar raha tha aur lucifer kisi bhi tarah ashmita ki mom ke bare me lekin dono hi fail ho rahe the

Raat ko lucifer naag je pass chala jata hai uski gand marne ke liye
Lucifer- tere se ek kaam nahi hota?
Maine tujhe etni badi gang di aur tu ek aurat ke bare me pata nahi kar pa raha hai?
Naag- bhai vo aurat to jaise paida hi nahi hue
Raichand jaisi family ki bahu hone ke bavjud uski ek photo tak nahi social media par
Na uska kahi naam mention hota hai aur na ek bhi article Chappa hai unse related
Ab aap hi batao main kaise pata karu?

Lucifer- tujhe bc suresh ke illuminati hone ka to pata chal gaya tha aur etni chhoti baat ko dundne ke liye rona Macha raha hai
Naag-bhai eske baare me har jagah afwae hai
Kitne sare articles pade hue hai aur kitne logo ne dawa kiya hai jo ab es dunia me nahi rahe
Lekin unki maa ke bare me kuch nahi hai bhai

Lucifer- matlab tu nahi karega mera kaam?
Naag- main sirf yehi karne ki kosis kar raha hu pichle kitne dino se
Kuch bhi to pata nahi chal raha

Lucifer- bahane mat bana
Tere se ho hi nahi raha sidhe kyu nahi bol deta
Naag- bhai aap ashmita se hi kyu nahi puch lete
Aap to humesha unke sath rahte ho na?

Lucifer- are waw naag tu to bada samjhdar ho gaya hai
Ye idea mere dimag me kyu nahi aaya?
Ohh lode agar vo mujhe batati to main tujh se kyu puchta?
Naag- matlab aap ek ladki se information nahi nikal pa rahe?

Lucifer naag ko ek bahut danger look deta hai lekin naag ko aaj hassi aajati hai
Lucifer gusse me beta gand bacha ke rakhiyo mere se
Tere laksan theek nahi lag rahe mujhe
Aur vaha se chala jata hai....
 
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