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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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UPDATE-21
Inaaya ek location par khadi thi aur uske sath kuch guards bhi the, dekhne se hi lag raha tha ki kisi gunde ka area hai aur inaaya bahar khadi khadi soch rahi thi ki ander jau ya nahi jau fir socha ab yaha tak aa hi gaye hai to chal leti hu aur ander ki taraf chal di lekin guards bahar hi chhod diye

Gate par usse roka lekin apne baap ke naam ki vajah se usse jane diya

Vaha kafi log the aur sab gunde hi the esliye inaaya ko lachahi najaro se dekh rahe the aur dekhe bhi kyu nahi inaaya thi hi aisi chhij

Vo dheere dheere chalte hue hall me pahuch gaye jaha ek aadmi apne kuch bando se baat Kar raha tha jisse dekh ke inaaya ne socha yehi boss hai vaha ka aur tab tak usne bhi inaaya ko dekh liya tha aur esliye baki sab ko vaha se jane ko bol diya

Sab inaaya ki khubsurati par najar dalte hue vaha se chale gaye

*** kisne milna hai?
Kya kaam hai?
Inaaya- aapse hi milna tha
Kisi ke bare me jankari chahiye thi

*** bathiye
Aur inaaya vahi bath gaye aur ek photo nikal ke table par rakh di
Us bande ne photo dekhi aur muskurane lag gaya kyuki vo inaaya ko bhi ache se janta tha aur jo photo me tha usse bhi

Inaaya- eske bare me information chahiye, Jamin se lekar aasaman tak sab kuch
Paise sare advance me mil jayenge lekin kaam jald se jald hona chahiye
*** bori me bhar kar body bejhva du kya?

Inaaya- nahi nahi marna nahi hai bas information chahiye
*** may I ask you the reason?

Inaaya- paiso ke bare me pucho bas
*** vo kya hai na aap bahut kutti chhij ke bare me puch rahi ho esliye soch nahi pa raha ki kitne paise mangu?

Inaaya- tum jante ho esse?
*** sab jante hai enhe

Inaaya- enhe?
**** hum yaha sab ko ijjat dete hai

Inaaya- kab tak kaam ho jayega?
**** morning me information ke sath sath banda bhi bejh dunga

Inaaya- theek hai
Paise?
**** morning me jo information dene aaega vo bata dega

Inaaya- theek hai fir morning me milte hai
Aur inaaya uthi aur vaha se chali gaye vahi vo banda bas muskurata rah gaya

Edhar ashmita ke ghar me sab alag alag dunia me jee rahe the lekin reason sirf ek hi tha lucifer

Suresh ko ye nahi pata chal raha tha ki lucifer kon hai aur kya chahta hai to ashmita ko to kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ab usse apne fasle par bhi doubt hone lag gaya tha
To Tara apni behan ki pareshani ki vajah se pareshan thi
Sab soch lucifer ke bare me hi rahe the aur sab ke pass dhero sawal bhi the lekin jawab kisi ke pass nahi tha

Koe aur bhi tha jo lucifer ke bare me soch raha tha lekin usse reason kuch aur tha aur vo thi madhuri ma'am
Madhuri ma'am ek married aurat jo ek stranger se etna attached ho gaye thi vo bhi bahut kam waqt me apni feelings ko control nahi kar paa rahi thi
Na chahte hue bhi vo baar baar lucifer ke bare me sochne lag jati aur fir apne hi man ko datne lagti fir kuch sochti aur fir vohi chhij
Vo samjh nahi paa rahi thi ki uske sath aisa kyu ho raha hai lekin hakikat ye thi ki uske sath ho raha tha
Sayad short term me acha bhi ho lekin long term me???
Eska jawab abhi to kisi ke pass nahi tha

Ab jiske bare me etna sab ho raha hai uske bare me Jan lete hai vo kya kar raha hai?
Lucifer apne room me ek chhilam sulga kar balcony me batha taare dekh raha tha
Uske chehre par na ek sikan thi aur na koe emotions vo bas emotionless hoke batha hua tha aur jo abhi kuch dino me uske sath ghatnaye ghati thi uske bare me soch raha tha
Aur kaise vo kisi bhi chhij ko rok nahi paa raha tha, upar se uska khud ka chehra usse pareshan kar raha tha aur uske pass eska bhi koe solution nahi tha

Bich me uske pass naag ka bhi phone aaya tha lekin usko bhi do baatein suna kar phone kaat diya aur fir apne khayalo me kho gaya
Usse baar baar guruji ki vo baatein yaad aa rahi thi ki jo tujhe chahiye sab tumhre andar hi hai bas ek baar jhak ke dekhne ki deri hai eska sidha sa matlab lucifer ne yehi nikala tha ki uska past uske hi andar dafaan hai aur ashmita kisi tarah us past se related hai esliye uski mom ke bare me pata karna bahut jaruri thi
Lekin kahi se bhi usse kuch pata nahi chal raha tha
Bechara galat fasa hua tha vo aur khoon ki bhukh bhi bhadti ja rahi thi uski

Ye sab sochte sochte sab nind ke aagosh me chale gaye aur hue ek new subah

Aaj lucifer ne morning me hi ashmita ko text kar diya tha ki thoda late ho jayega, call nahi kiya text kiya tha sayad ashmita se baat nahi karna chahta tha vo aur tayar hoke kahi nikal gaya

Vahi jab se subah hue thi inaaya apne office me bathi bathi gate ki taraf hi najar doda rahi thi ki jaldi se jaldi usse lucifer ki information batane wala aajaye
Usne apne guards tak ko bhi bol diya tha ki aaj agar koe usse milne aaye to usse bilkul na roke

Bahut der ho gaye thi lekin abhi tak koe nahi aaya tha aur inaaya baar baar apne phone ko on karti us bande ka number dial karti fir kaat deti aur time dekh ke phone off kar deti

Bahut der se yehi chal raha tha har ek minute inaaya ke liye ghato jaisi saabit ho rahi thi

Tabhi uska cabin knock hua aur usne hadbadate hue come in bola lekin samne ka banda dekh ke uska chehra murjha gaya kyuki samne lucifer khada tha
Lucifer ko dekhte hi usse kuch samjh nahi aaya ki kya kare kya bole aur lucifer vaha kar kya raha hai?

Vo aaya aur inaaya ke samne wali chair par bath gaya aur usse dekhne laga
Do minute tak to koe kuch nahi bola fir inaaya ko hi puchna pada what you're doing here?

Lucifer- tumne hi to bulaya tha?
Inaaya- maine kab bulaya tumhe?
Dekho lucifer meri bahut important meeting hai abhi
To tum jao?

Lucifer- mere sath hi hai tumhri meeting
Inaaya- kya matlab?

Lucifer- are kal jisse tum milne gaye thi usne hi bejha hai mujhe
Kuch information chahiye thi sayad tumhe?
Inaaya ye sun kar ek dam se hadbada gaye ki lucifer ko kaise pata ye sab aur lucifer khud kyu aaya hai?

Inaaya- kya matlab main kuch samjhi nahi?
Lucifer- mujhe naag ne bejha hai

Ha to bhaiyo jisse kal inaaya mili thi vo koe aur nahi naag hi tha aur bechari inaaya lucifer ki information mangne pahuchi to bhi naag ke pass

Inaaya- ko..kon naaag main kisi naag ko nahi janti vo hadbate hue boli
Lucifer- kya chahiye tumhe?
Sidhe sidhe bolo
Ek dam sidhe sidhe
Thodi tej awaz me bola lucifer

Inaaya- main to bas yuhi chali gaye thi
Meri intention tumhe dard deni ki nahi thi
Lucifer- vo tum de bhi nahi sakti
Ab agar kuch puchna hai to pucho nahi to price pay karne ke liye tayar ho jao

Inaaya- what price?
Lucifer- tumhra kaam hua hai
To eska koe price to hoga na
Naag ne bola tha tumhe ki subah pata chal jayega price ke bare me

Inaaya- mujhe kuch nahi puchna aur kuch nahi dena
Tum chale jao yaha se
Lucifer- that's not how we work
Kaam hua hai to price dena padega

Inaaya- main deal cancel karti hu
Lucifer- kaam hone ke baad deal cancel nahi hoti

Inaaya- jab maine kuch pucha hi nahi to deal kaise puri hue?
Lucifer- main to batane aagya na
Pucho

Inaaya- mujhe kuch nahi puchna
Lucifer- last chance

Inaaya- mujhe kuch nahi janana tumhre bare me
Lucifer- badiya
Now price

Inaaya- kuch nahi milega tumhe kuch bhi nahi samjhe
Lucifer- tumne underworld se ek deal kari aur uske pure hone ke baad price pay nahi kar rahi ho?
Underworld will not forget this?

Inaaya- dara rahe ho mujhe?
Lucifer- price to pay karna padega inaaya
Ya to tum kar do ya fir tumhre kisi apne ko karna padega lekin ye wada hai mera us se tumhre bahut dard hoga lekin tum kuch kar nahi paogi

Inaaya- fine kya chahiye tumhe?
Kitne paise?
Bahut frustrated hoke boli
Lucifer- paise ka kya karunga main?

Inaaya- to fir kya chahiye jaldi batao waqt nahi hai mere pass
Lucifer- ashmita ki mom kon thi
Unka naam kya tha aur unki ek photo
Ye sab chahiye bas mujhe

Inaaya- tum uske piche kyu pade ho?
Lucifer- you lost your chance
Now you can't ask shit
You better pay me now

Inaaya- I don't know anything about her mother
Koe bhi nahi janta
Lucifer- mujhe ye nahi sunana ki tum janti ho ya nahi ya fir koe aur janta hai ya nahi
Ye price hai jo tumhe karna hai
Ek week ka time de raha hu uske baad tum samjh jao

Inaaya- kisi ne nahi dekha unko
Yaha tak ki jab hum chhote the tab bhi koe unki baat nahi karta tha
Uske ghar me uski mom ki ek photo tak nahi hai
Main kaise pata karu?
Batana jara?
Lucifer- not my problem

Inaaya- lucifer tum samjh nahi rahe ho?
Uske ghar me uski mom ke bare me baatein bhi nahi hoti?
Lucifer- tum nahi samjh rahi ho
Agar tumne ye kaam nahi kiya to tumhri ek aur pyaari chhij tumse chhin jayegi aur unfortunately uski vajah bhi tum hi hogi
To mujhe nahi pata ki tum kaise pata karogi lekin tumhe karna padeda
Esliye bahana chhodo aur kaam karo
Ek week ka time hai tumhre pass
Sirf ek week

Aur lucifer vaha se chala gaya piche chhod gaya to inaaya ko jisse idea bhi nahi tha ki vo kitni badi musibaat me pad chuki hai
Kaha vo lucifer ke chakkaro me nahi padti to ye sab nahi hota
Nikalna chahti thi uski information, vo bhi nahi puchi sayad kuch pata chal jata aur apno ki jaan jhokim me daal di

Usne sari meetings cancel ki aur shanti se bath ke kuch sochne lagi....
 
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