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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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Zabardast kamal ki update hai lucci bhaya to axhy bn rahy hain achi baat hai story bht mazy ki ja rahi hai or sb sy achi baat k story main sex nahi hai to parhny main or maza a raha hai that's why you are awesome
Sex aayega lekin jaha jaruri hoga vahi
Ek update me mile aur dusre me sex ho jaye ye pasand nahi mujhe
 

Lone survivor

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Chalo kisi ka to past open hoga varna story me suspense he suspense hai 🤣
( Jokes apart) story bahut hatke ja rhi hai or majedar bhi ha vese ab Lucifer ki personality me changes aare h jo ki aacha bhi h but abhi ye changes vha tak nhi pahuche jaha tak saanvi dekhna chahti thi
Aab dekhte hai kya Lucifer sach me badle ga apne aap ko ya vo apne kisi fayde ke leye ye sab krr rha h 🙄🤐

Vese aasa kya hua tha inaaya or ashmita ke beech jo itna jada nafrat krti hai inaaya

Regards
ThÄkUr
Afsos rahega ki aaj bhi suspense nahi khulne wala
Sab apna fayda dekh rahe hai mujhe to aisa hi lagta hai bhai
 

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UPDATE-57
Inaaya- kar liya shanti se discuss sab
Ab?
Lucifer- ab jo tum dono ka man kare vo karo, main to bas etna hi chahta tha

Inaaya- aur mera man kya chahta hai vo mujhe bahut ache se pata hai aur vo change nahi hoga
Lucifer- as you wish
Ab kuch pee le?

Inaaya- it's your day
Tum jo chahe kar sakte ho
Lucifer- tum sure ho?

Inaaya- ha main sure hu
Lucifer- theek hai fir aaj tum dono ache se baat karogi aur ab koe purani baat nahi hogi and we will have a really good night

Inaaya- sirf aaj ki raat
Lucifer- sirf aaj ki raat

Inaaya- okay
Ashu...sorry ashmita glass pass kar do na
Ashmita teen glass lagati hai aur chote chhote shots banane lagti hai

Ashmita- red acha lagta hai tum par
Inaaya- main hu hi etni khubsurat ki mujh par sab acha lagta hai

Ashmita- ye bhi sach hi hai
Lucifer- are tum to bina kapdo ke bhi achi hi lagogi
Try karke dekh sakti ho abhi

Inaaya- main soch hi rahi thi ki abhi tak ye sala lucifer samne kyu nahi aaya hai
Ashmita- kisi eske samne ho jana fir dekhna kaise bhagta hai vaha se

Inaaya- tumne try kiya hai kya?
Ashmita- he is just my friend

Lucifer- friends ke sath to hum bahut kuch karte hai aur mere sath abhi tak kuch bhi nahi hua
So sad?
Ashmita- waqt ke sath sab ho jayega

Inaaya- eski baaton me na hi aaye hum to theek rahega
He is a very very good manipulator
Lucifer- maine kab manipulate kiya tumhe?

Ashmita- inaaya sahi hi bol rahi hai tu bahut ache se baat ghumta hai
Lucifer- tujhe bhi ghuma du?

Inaaya- tum aaj piano play karke dikhane wale the
Lucifer- badle me tum kiss karne wali thi

Inaaya- maine sirf tumhre liye naya piano me mangvaya hai
Lucifer- usse kisi bar me lagva dete hai main vaha har roj perform kiya karunga
Sala saraab aur paise khub milenge
Hai na?

Ashmita- dekho ghuma raha hai na tu baat?
Lucifer- sach bata raha hu
Koe meri baat par yakeen kyu nahi karta?

Inaaya- chhilam nahi laye tum?
Lucifer- main aaj vaise hi hosh me nahi hu
Tum dono ne vaise bhi bahut nasha chada diya hai

Ashmita- ye fir baatein ghuma raha hai
Lucifer- tu to sar par chaad ke nachne lag gaye mere?

Inaaya- tumne hi dost banaya hai
Lucifer- tum nahi ho dost meri

Inaaya- to main kya hu?
Lucifer- batau? Ankh marte hue

Inaaya- nahi rahne do
Fir lucifer ek chhilam jalata hai aur badiya bade bade kas marne lagta hai

Inaaya- tumne to mana kiya tha na?
Lucifer- tab nahi thi ab jadu se vapas le aaya

Inaaya- mujhe bhi do
Fir lucifer inaaya ko pass kar deta hai

Ashmita- khana acha banaya hai tumne inaaya
Inaaya- thank you

Inaaya ek kas maar ke chalo ab jaldi se piano suna do bahut wait kar rahi hu main
Lucifer- chalo
Vaise mujhe aata nahi hai lekin ungliya bol rahi hai ki vo kar sakti hai

Ashmita- bas to mano ungliyo ki
Lucifer uthata hai aur chhat ke dusre kone me rakhe piano ki taraf chalne lagta hai
Lucifer- mere pyaar me mat pad jana tum dono
Inaaya- too late lucifer

Lucifer- kya?
Inaaya- kuch nahi
Ab baatein mat banao

Lucifer bath gaya piano ke pass ek hath me chhilam liye aur us par aise hath ferne laga jaise barso ka sath hai piano ke sath lucifer ka
Usse kuch dhundli dhundli chhije dikhne lagi jaha ek piano aag me jhulas raha hai aur lucifer usko bahut speed me play kar raha hai

Dheere dheere lucifer ke hath piano par chalne lage aur ashmita aur inaaya dono uske dhoon me madhosh hone lage
Aisa lag raha tha jaise lucifer nahi sach me the god of hell hi baja raha hai aur puri kayanat usse dekhne me lagi hue hai

Kuch hi minutes me inaaya aur ashmita dono puri tarah se hosh kho chuki thi
Unhe lucifer ke piano ke aawaz ke alava aur kuch nahi sunae de raha tha
Aur ya kuch dikhae de raha tha

Half an hour tak lucifer bajata raha aur inaaya aur ashmita bas usme khoti rahe

Jab lucifer ne khatam kiya tab bhi en dono ko hosh nahi aaya tha enke kano me ab bhi vo madhur dhun baj rahi thi

Lucifer kab unke pass pahuch gaye unhe pata bhi nahi chala

Lucifer- hello?
Etna kharab bhi nahi tha jo tum dono so gaye
Lucifer chutki bajate hue bolta hai tab jake unhe hosh aata hai

"WOW" dono ke muh se bas etna hi nikla

Lucifer- hosh me aajao ab
Ashmita- it was so so good lucifer
Maine socha bhi nahi tha ki tum etna acha piano play kar sakte ho

Lucifer- kya karu main hu hi etna talented
Ashmita- vo to tum ho hi

Lucifer- inaaya?
Vo to ab tak ussi dunia me thi lucifer ki aawaz se usse hosh aaya
Vo khadi hue lucifer ke pass aaye aur apne laal gulabi honth lucifer ke hontho se mila diye

Pata nahi usne ye lucifer se impressed hokar kiya ya ashmita ko dikhane ke liye lekin ye kuch seconds uske feelings ko bahut ache se baya kar rahe the

Ashmita ne jaise hi ye dekha uski aankhen apne aap niche ho gaye

Keval 5-6 seconds ke liye hi unke honth mile the fir inaaya piche ho gaye

Inaaya- maine bola vo tumne kar diya aur jo tumne bola vo maine
Lucifer- dobara karo
Ye to feel hone se pehle hi khatam hogya

Inaaya- akele aate to sayad aur kuch bhi ho jata
Lucifer- well than thank you for the night and of course for the kiss

Inaaya- it's all my pleasure
Ashmita- lucifer tum chal rahe ho ya rukoge?

Lucifer- ha chal raha hu
Raat bahut ho gaye hai vaise bhi
Inaaya- you can stay if you want

Lucifer- fir kabhi
Aaj kisi ko laya hu to usse safely ghar drop karna bhi mera farz hai
Inaaya- as you wish

Ashmita- thank you for the night and for being so nice inaaya
Inaaya- I hope ye last ho hum dono ki sath me

Ashmita- good night inaaya
Inaaya- good night

Lucifer- theek hai fir hum nikalte hai
Aur inaaya unke sath niche aagaye unhe bahar tak drop karne ke liye

Lucifer ne car ki keys ashmita ko de di jo inaaya ki taraf dekhte hue car me bath gaye

Inaaya- it was a great night
Thank you aur lucifer ko apne galle laga liya
Lucifer- ander ke kapde nahi dekh paya
Hope tumne vohi pahne ho jo maine bola tha

Inaaya bas muskura di aur fir lucifer usse bye bolte hue car me bath gaya aur inaaya usse jate hue dekhne lagi
Vo tab tak vaha khadi rahi jab tak lucifer uski aankhon se ojhal nahi ho gaya ho

Ashmita- thank you
Lucifer- kis liye?

Ashmita- mujhe lane ke liye aur inaaya ko mujh se baat karvane ke liye
Lucifer- mujhe to bas thoda drama dekhna tha bore ho gaya tha esliye

Ashmita- kisi bhi liye ho kiya to
Lucifer- tune kuch diya nahi mujhe

Ashmita- aaj to bahut kuch mil gaya tujhe
Khush to bahut hoga
Lucifer- kuch bhi to nahi mila
Tu de to bata

Ashmita- mujh se umeed mat Kariyo
Main aisa aur kuch kaam nahi karungi jiski vajah se inaaya aur mujhse naraj ho
Lucifer- tum dono bacho ki tarah ladte ho
Aise karne se kuch nahi hota dusmani aisi honi chahiye ki ya to mar jao ya maar do

Ashmita- vaise main tumse agree karti hu es baare me lekin inaaya meri dusman nahi hai
Lucifer- to kya hai?

Ashmita- vo to meri dost hai
Bas thoda naraaj hai
Lucifer- vo dost hai to main kya hu?

Ashmita- vo achi dost tu bas dost
Lucifer- dil hi tood diya tune to

Ashmita- ab kya kar sakti hu
Jo hai vo hai
Lucifer- tere ghar chalu?

Ashmita- main tere chalu?
Lucifer- NAHI

Ashmita- nahi kyu?
Lucifer- are mera matlab hai tera room bahut acha hai
Vaha jada comfort hai

Ashmita- mujhe to tere flat hi jana hai aaj
Lucifer- tere upar chaad ke sounga fir

Ashmita- ande bhi fudva lega fir
Lucifer- bahut strong hai mere ande

Ashmita- try karke dekh lena
Lucifer- tu one piece me mere sath soyegi to fir mujhe try karna hi padega
Aur koe option hi nahi bachta fir to

Ashmita- tu ek kaam kar mujhe mere ghar hi chhod de
Lucifer- main bhi to tab se yehi bol raha hu

Ashmita- aur tu apne flat jayega mere ghar nahi
Lucifer- are main abla purush akela raat me kaise jaunga?
Kuch to raham karo?

Ashmita- kar diya raham maine

Uske baad dono ashmita ke ghar pahuchte hai aur lucifer bhi vahi so jata hai lekin dusre room me
Aaj ashmita ne uski gand par laat maar kar usse dusre room me bejh diya tha
Kyu?
Vohi jane mujhe kya pata

Subah normal hi hue aur dono office chale gaye
Ashmita to kaam ke lag gaye aur lucifer anisha ko dundne laga jo kuch design kar rahi thi aur uska dhayan lucifer par bilkul nahi tha

Lucifer- hie anisha ke pass jake bolta hai
Vo najar utha ke lucifer ko dekhti hai fir thodi piche ho jati hai
Lucifer- hie dobara bolta hai
Anisha- hi

Lucifer- kaisi ho?
Anisha- theek hu thanks

Lucifer- kaam ka kya raha?
Anisha- vo...v..voo

Lucifer- vovo kya?
Anisha- maine bataya tha ki mujhse nahi ho pa raha hai
I tried my best lekin jiski koe information online available hi nahi hai to usko main nahi dund sakti

Lucifer- maine bhi kuch kaha tha tumko
Anisha- I know aur main har roj sirf uski ko karne ke bare me sochti hu
Main kitne dino se theek se so bhi nahi paye hu dar ke karan
Meri maa ka mere alava aur koe nahi hai Agar mujhe kuch hogya to unka kya hoga?

Lucifer- emotionally blackmail kiya ja raha hai kya mujhe?
Agar ha to mujhe koe fark nahi padta esliye faltu ka try mat karo
Aur mujhe ye aurat(ashmita ne jo apni mom ki photo dikhae thi) eske bare me pata karke batao
Agar eske bare me bata diya to tumhri mom ke liye stable life main bana dunga
Anisha- unstable mat karna bas

Lucifer- Agar kaam nahi hua to unstable bhi ho sakti hai, bahut unstable
Anisha- ye kon hai?
Kya us ladke jaisi hi hai?

Lucifer- aisa maan sakte ho
Anisha- aapke pass to bahut resources hai unse kyu nahi pata karva lete?

Lucifer- mujhe khubsurat ladkiyo se kaam karna acha lagta hai
Anisha- main ha tabhi karungi jab aap promise karo ki agar kaam nahi bhi hua to bhi aap mujhe ya meri mom ko kuch nahi karoge

Lucifer- OK promise
Anisha- abhi office time hai to office ka kaam karungi
Baki ka kaam office me baad me

Lucifer- theek hai karo
Aur fir lucifer vaha se chala jata hai

Pure din ashmita busy rahi aur lucifer bas time pass karta raha aur fir raat ko office ke baad bahar ghume laga

Uska apne flat jane ka man nahi kar raha tha aur vo gaya bhi nahi tha do teen dino se apne flat
Kabhi kahi chala jata to kabhi kahi lekin flat nahi gaya tha

Aaj bhi vo aisa hi kar raha tha bahar hi saraab pe aur ache khase nashe me ho gaya tha

Fir sadak par bhatakne laga ek hath me bottle aur dusre hath me joint liye duniyadari se door lucifer apne aapko sameete hue chala ja raha tha

Rasta usse apne aap dikh raha tha ya fir aaj lucifer manjil ki taraf nahi ja raha tha balki manjil khud lucifer ki taraf aa rahi thi

Aur vo aakar kab lucifer se takra gaye usse pata bhi nahi chala.....

Past

Lucifer- aajao tumhe aasman me le chalu Chand ko uski aukaat dikhani hai
Ladki- hehe
Hum Chand ke upar hi hai lucifer aur usse uski aukaat pata hai

Lucifer- mujhe usko sarminda karna hai
Ladki- vo bahut sundar hai koe usse sarminda nahi kar sakta

Lucifer- tabhi to tumhe leke chalna chahta hu
Tumhri khubsurati dekh kar vo dekhna kaise tilmila uthega
Ladki- na baba na
Mujhe nahi lena Chand se panga

Lucifer- mere hote hue tumhe darne ki jarurat hai kya?
Ladki- essi baat ka to dar hai
Agar tumne kuch kiya aur Chand Chand na raha to fir koe khubsurati ko compare kisse karega?

Lucifer- tum se
Tumhe Chand ki jagah par batha du?
Us se to jada hi chamak hai tum me
Ladki- aaj kal kuch jada romantic nahi ho gaye ho tum?

Lucifer- main to Sacha banda hu
Jo dil me aata hai bol deta hu
Ladki- kya humesha mujhe aise hi pyaar karte rahoge?

Lucifer- jab tak ye yaadast hai tab tak to koe nahi rok sakta
Ladki- acha?
Matlab humara pyaar etna kacha hai ki tumhri yaaddast hi usse bhula sakti hai?

Lucifer- possibilities honi chahiye har chhij ki
Ladki- to tumhe ye bolna chahiye tha ki main humesha karta rahunga chahe meri yaaddast rahe ya na rahe

Lucifer- jab mere dil me tumhri yaad hi nahi rahegi to pyaar karunga kaise?
Ladki- pyaar karne ke liye yaaddast ka hona jaruri nahi hai lucifer

Lucifer- to kis chhij ki jarurat hai?
Ladki- kisi bhi chhij ki nahi
Agar do log apas me sacha pyaar karte hai to unhe koe bhula nahi sakta

Lucifer- acha aur ek din main gayab ho gaya to tum kya karoge?
Ladki- mujhe kismat par yakeen hai
Kahi na kahi to hum dono aapas me fir se takraenge hi....
 
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