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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Naina

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Avinashi ke order milte hi sabhi tukdi NilBhut ke rajya se duriyan banana shuru kar chuki thi... Sabhi lagbhag 10 kilometer tak piche hat chuke the.. Samne ka ran pura khali ho chuka tha aur kahin koi jivit sainik najar nahi aa raha tha kewal lasen hi bichhi hui thi.


Avinashi kahin dur baitha humla karne ka aadesh diya, aur NilBhut Rajya par missiles ke badal mandra chuke the. Ek sath itne missiles chhode gaye ki pura aakash dhak chuka tha..


Serin, Avinashi ke redio frequency par aa kar…. "Kyon be chuje mere banaye hatiyar se mujhe hi marne chala hai"..


Avinashi:- Marne chala nahi hun Serin, mar hi diya hun ab bus main apne screen par tumhare chithre hote dekhunga…


Idhar Nandni control room me baith'kar command dena shuru kar di. Anti blasting missile active ho chuke the… aur dekhte hi dekhte hawa me he sare missile dhuan-dhuan ho chuke the…


Serin, ab bhi Avinashi ke frequency par thi, aur usse sunati hui kahne lagi…. "Juniors jara inpar choclet missile girao. Hum bhi to jarra iss dhille ki taiyari to dekhe..


Avinashi:- Bus kya Serin purani baten .. jab tumne mujhe haraya tha, tab main bacha tha.. ab main faulad hun.. aur tumhe nahi lagta ki ye chhote patakhe (chocklet missile) humara kya bigad lenge…..


Serin:- Bewakoof..


Avinashi jab tak apni bewakoofi samjh pata, tabtak usne anti blasting missiles command de diye… missile se missile hawa me takrayi aur chhote chhote-chocklet ki barish aakash se hone lagi.


Jaise hi wo niche jamin par girte, halake pile rang ke dhuyen ke sath, itna tej acid hawa me chhod rahe the ki Mahamahim ke lagbhag sainik uss acid ke chapet me aa gaye…


Duan sarir ke jis hisse me lagta kapde sahit mans ko aisa gala raha tha ki charo ore pira se sabhi karrah rahe the… 500 carore ki kul sena se lagbhag 2 carore log hi samne ki ladai me mare gaye the. Lekin jab se tecnology ladai shuru hui thi, Serin ke pahle hi war se Mahamahim ki lagbhag sabhi tukdiyan prabhavit ho chuki thi.. aur jo prabhawit nahi huye the wo bhid se alag hokar apne adrishi janwar par sawar hokar bhagna shuru kar chuke the…


Serin:- Kya Avinashi, dhile mujh se technology ladai ladne aaya hai.. next item pesh kar…


Next item pesh karne ke liye uska swasthaya hona bhi to jaroori tha.. wo aur uske 1 lakh log iss prakar acid ki chapet me aaye the unke chehre se lekar paun aur hath tak jhulse huye the. Radio ke dusre ore se kewal chinkh hi sunai de rahi thi…


Lagbhag 600 km dur ke sainya base par Mahamahim pura yudh dekh raha tha. Shurvat ke jit ki khushi ke alawa pichhle 2 ghante me usse koi achhi khabar nahi mili thi… baukhlahat me Mahamahim ne apne teeno sena-nayak se wapas ussi formation me ladne ke aadesh de diye jiski shurwat se unhe jit mili thi…


Mahamahim apne logon ko aadesh de hi raha tha, ki tabhi uss sainya base par katuhal ka mahol sa ho gaya. Bhagte huye kayi sainik Mahamahim ke pass aakar bahar ka najara dekhne ke liye kahne lage…


Virane me bana ek bada sa sainya base, jahan 5 lakh sainikon ke sath Mahamahim yudh ka najara dekh rahe the. Ye 5 lakh Mahamahim ke mukhya angrakshak kahlate the jo kafi kurur aur atyachari the aur inke atyachar ki kahani ka anth likha ja raha tha….


Kahin dur me Jivisha khadi hokar hans rahi thi aur apne hathon ko jaise hi wo hawa me lahrati, log khud-w-khud upar uth jate. Aur upar ka jo najara tha usse dehkar to Mahamahim ke mathe se bhi pasina chune laga…


Jivisha ke hath hawa me faile aur Nischal ki wo tej daur.. jabtak Jivisha hath upar utha kar niche bhumi par marti, uss se pahle hi Nischal ka khanjar faisla kar jati aur niche kati fati lash girna shuru ho jati..


Maut ka aisa tandav karne me dono vyast the ki wahan ke sainik me bhagdar si machne lagi, lekin apne maut se tej koi bhag paya hai kya…


Nischal apni raftar se jiske pass se gujar jata, piche uske chira hua badan 2 hisson me bant'kar gir jata… "Baby kuch chuhon ka shikar mujhe bhi karna hai, sab tum hi maar rahe ho"..


Nischal:- My love, tumne to rajya ke dwar par bhi to kitno ko mara tha. Tum to yahan uss chuhe ko lalkaro na, jo chhipa hua hai.. baki uss Parijivi Mittoso ke kidon ko main dekhta hun…


Jivisha:- Good idea… oye kide Mittoso, kahan apne base par khada hai sale.. chal aa ja maidan me.. pura din nahi hai mere pass ladne ke liye… baby sala apne base se bahar na aa raha hai.. apne kaan band karo main 2-4 achi wali, aur sanskaron wali gali de dun..


Nischal, bina raham ke lagatar uske angrakshakon ko kat'te huye…. "Nana muh ganda mat karo.. ruko main bulata hun... Chutiye Mahamahim.. aa ja ranbhumi me beta… aaj teri aisi bajegi ki sare gaaa maaa paaa wale bhi samjh na payenge ki ye tabla baja tha ya tera puchhwada…


Jivisha:- Huhhh !!! Ek to mujhe gali dene se rok diye upar se ye gali thi ya apne kisi dost se baat kar rahe the. Dhyan se suno kaise bhadas wali gali dete hai... Oye maa de fokke Mittoso.. tera double dj sale.. jaldi bahar aa..


Nischal:- Ab ye maa de fokke ka kya matlab hua.. aur tere double dj ka kya matlab hai..


Jivisha:- Wahhhh ! Sab ko maar diye.. Ab jaldi se aakar mujhe kiss do fir batati hun matlab..


"Hahaha... Intense situation me bhi iski ye adayen".. Nischal hanste huye uske pass pahuncha aur apne honth se honth laga kar Jivisha ko chumne laga


Idhar Mahamahim apne sena ko wapas aane ka hukum de chuka tha… hukum dekar wo bahar nikla… najara bahut bhishan tha aur Mahamahim apne dushman se nipatne khud bahar aa kar Jivisha ki lalkaar aur Nischal ki raftaar dekh raha tha…


Nischal ki raftar aur uska khanjar, aaj Mahamahim ke sabse kurur logon ka imtahaan lena shuru kar chuki thi aur jo bina imtahaan diye bhagne ki jee tod kosis kar rahe the, unhe pakad kar exam dilwaya ja raha tha.


Mahamahim ke aakhon ke aage jo najara tha wo kururta ki prakashth paribhasha thi, jisme Nischal daurte huye jiske pass se gujarta, uss ke kamar ke bich apna khanjar ghusa kar, bich se ridh ki haddi sahit sar ko chirte huye, aage nikal jata…


Mahamahim ke aakhon me khun utar aaya tha. Pahle apne 5 lakh logon ka marna, fir Nischal aur Jivisha ki lalkaar aur galiyan. Aur ab dono ek dusre ko aise chum rahe the, mano yahan uska koi astitwa hi nahi. Mahamahim apne ek-ek kadam badhate apne dono hath jaise hi niche se upar le gaya, ret ka bawandar niche se upar uthne laga…


Aisa lag raha tha Mahamahim ne pura ret ka samundr utha rakha tha jise hath ke ishare se usne Nischal aur Jivisha ke ore dhakel diya… Puri ret tej bawandar me tabdil ho'kar bekabu raftar se unki ore badhne lagi… Jivisha, Nischal ko chumti rahi aur chumte huye hi usne, apne ek hath ko upar uthayi aur jaise kisi traffic par gadiyon ko rukne ka ishara dete hain, Jivisha bhi uss bawandar ko hathon se rukne ka ishara ki…


Ret ka uncha tila hawa me hi ruk gaya. Puri aandhi shant ho chuki thi. Jivisha badi teji se apni mutthi ko jaise hi band ki, puri ret mutthi ka aakaar bana chuki thi. Aur Jaise hi Jivisha ne jhatke ke sath apni mutthi kholi puri ret jhatke me hi titar bitar ho gayi….


Jivisha kiss ko todti, Nischal ki aakhon me dekh'kar muskurati hui kahne lagi…. "Love action time. Main iss kide ko dekhti hun aur marne ko betaab kayi sare log humari ore badh rahe hain, tum unhe dekho"..


Nischal, hanste huye apna sar jhuka'kar…. "Jaisi aap ki aagya ho"…


Nischal badi teji ke sath Mahamahim ke ore badhne laga.. Mahamahim, apne ore teji se badh rahe Nichal ko rokne ke liye jaise hi apna hath upar karke hawa me kiya, Nischal hawa me kayi feet uncha to utha, lekin agle hi pal Gulati mar'kar wo niche thik Mahamahim ke karib pahunch chuka tha..


Nischal uski aakhon me dekh'kar apna hath jaise hi aage badhaya, Mahamahim ne apni najar bhar dali aur aisa laga uski najar Nischal ke sine ko bhed degi….


"Abe yahan main kadhi hun sale aur tu meri jaan par buri najar dal raha"… Jivisha apni baat kah'kar jaise hi apne anguthe aur middle fingers ke top ko milayi, Mahamahim ki dono palak jhapak gayi…. "Baby do ghuma kar iss 2 kaudi ke aadmi ko aur jakar bhid par kahar barasao, tabtak isse main kuch tehzib sikha deti hun"…


Jaise hi Mahamahim ki palken jhapki aur Jivisha ki aawaj kan me pari, Nischal ne ek jhannatedar tamacha uske kan ke niche jadte huye, kayi guna raftaar ke sath bahaga…


"Hahahaha.. Kya Mittoso, mere baby ne khatirdari me koi kami to nahi chhodi"…


Mahamahim pure gusse me aate huye apni aakhen mund kar dono hath aise failaya ki kale badal charo ore chhane lage… bhay ki lahar Mahamahim ke pass se uthi aur pure Zoren me logon ne mehsus kiya... ..


Tabhi Jivisha muskurati hui apni dono hath kholi aur pyar se aise jhumi ki charo ore ke kale badal chhatna shuru ho gaye… Mahamahim aakash ko dekh'kar samjh gaya ki jiski shaktiyon par wo aaj tak uchhalte aa raha tha uski asli waris uske samne khadi thi..


Mittoso teji ke sath apna ek hath Jivisha ke ore ghumaya aur dusra hath Nischal ke ore karke, hawa me le jakar gala ghotna shuru kiya. "Chatakk, chatakkk, chatakkk".. Jivisha ne apne ek hath se hawa me bane bhanwar ko rokti, dusre hath se lagatar Mahamahim ko thappad marti rahi… Mahamahim ko itne thappad pade ki uska gaal laal ho gaya…


"Abe gadhe Mittoso wo ek Viggo Sigma hai… tu chutiya uska gala ghonte rah, tabtak main tera gaal laal karti hun"… Jivisha apni baat kahkar lagatar thappad marti rahi. Mahamahim ko lag raha tha wo apni ikchha shakti se Nischal ka gala ghont sakta tha, lekin Nischal ko iss se koi fark nahi para, ulta uske gaal laal ho gaye.


Takriban 50 caror sainik Mahamahim ko sahayta dene ke liye karib pahunch chuke the, jise Nichal dure se aate huye dekh chuka tha. Nischal badi hi aasani se Mahamahim ke giraft se chhutkar, un vishalkay sainikon ke jhund ke ore daud laga diya… shaynnn ki raftar, lambi katar aur jab Nischal sabko apne khanjar se kat'te huye nikla, log kewal hawa me hi najar aa rahe the..


Aisa lag raha tha kayi lakh log ek sath kat'kar hawa me gaye aur fir niche aa gaye… raftaar aur maut ka tandav shuru ho chuka tha.. Nischal jab ek baar katna shuru kiya, tab kisi ko pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki maut kahan se aayi, kab aayi aur unhe nigal kar chali gayi.


Ab tak jis Viggo ke bare me sab ne sun rakha tha, pahli baar puri sena uska aatank dekh rahi thi.. koi raham nahi, koi mafi nahi.. bus Nischal ke hath ka khanjar aur teji ke sath uska chirna…


Rakt se ranbhumi laal ho chuki thi. Jahan bhi najar ja rahi thi, kewal hawa me uchhalte log the aur niche girti unki kati si lash. Aisa raktpaat jiski charcha kabhi Rijo ne ki thi aur ye log sun'kar bhi uspar viswas nahi karna chahte the. Aaj jab Nischal ki raftaar aur uske khanjar se samna hua, lohe ke kaleja rakhne walon ko bhi Herat attack aa gaya.


Jaan bachate huye sainik wapas bhagne lage lekin pichhe se Serin apni blad chalati hui kafi raftaar se badh rahi thi.. maut ka tandav uss pure ranbhumi me chal raha tha.. aage se Nischal aur pichhe se Serin aur bich me fase sainik apne maut aane se pahle dar ke mare mut rahe the…


"Abe ghonchu tu ye sab mat dekh. Jyada dekhega to confuse ho jayega"..


Jaise hi Nischal Mahamahim ke hath ki jakad se chhuta tha, wo hairan ho'kar bus yahi soch raha tha, ki uske itne prabal ikchha shakti se koi kaise chhut sakta hai… Abhi ek aschrya se ubra nahi tha, ki dusra jhatka lagna shuru ho gaya tha.. Kayi lakh log ek sath upar jate, kati hui lash aur rakt ki barish niche hone lagti…


Mahamahim stabdh ho'kar mano jam sa gaya tha. Jivisha ki aawaj par wo hosh me aaya aur gusse se aakhen laal karte huye… "Chalo Malkia iss khel ko yahin khatm karte hai. Ab nahi chahiye teri takat. Taiyar ho ja"..


Mahamahim ne apne baal jhatke… aankhen mund kar usne dhyan lagaya…. "Mere malik, tumhari Malkia ko ab ya to tumhi sambhalo, ya mujhe kho do"..
ran niti ho ya dialogue baazi sach mein kaafi dilchasp rahi... haan kuch katu bakya bhi bole hero heroine ne :D
Main toh ye soch ke hairan hun ki aapne itna kuch kaise imagine kar liya... matlab har ek pehlu ko... koun kab kya bolega, koun kab kispe attack karega.. kab koi kirdaar kis pal mein kamjor padega..in sabhi baaton itni sathikata se sanjo ke update ka roop dena sach mein apne apme bemisaal hai.. khas kar nischal aur jivu... dono ne toh tandam hi karne lag gaye wahan pe..
Lekin shayad mintos khud haarta dekh kisi powerful shakti ko avahan kar raha hai...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
 

Naina

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Mahamahim ne jiska bhi dhyan lagaya ho, lekin dhyan lagakar jab usne pana dayan panja aage badhaya, Jivisha apne sine ke bayen hisse me Mahamahim ke panje ki tej jakad mehsus kar rahi thi, jo uske sine se dil chirkar bahar nikal lena chah raha tha..


Jivisha gahri shwans leti jaisi hi dhyan lagayi, ander bilkul andhera tha aur wo kisi tillishm ke ander fans chuki thi. Nischal teji se daurta hua Serin ke pass pahuncha aur usse utha kar Jivisha ke pass le aaya… Jivisha aakhen mundi apni jagah khadi thi aur uske sine ke bayen hisse se khun badi teji ke sath nikal raha tha…


Serin ne apne hath jaise hi Jivisha ke ore badhaya …. "Nah isse chhuna nahi Serin, tum hawai support mangwao, aur dhyan rahe yahan koi bhi marna nahi chahiye… ye Mahamahim bhi nahi"…


Serin iss se pahle kuch puch pati Nischal bhi Jivisha ke karib khada hokar apni aakhen mund chuka tha… halanki abhi ke liye to koi khatra nahi tha, kyonki pahle Nischal ke giraye kahar aur baad me Serin ki jugalbandi ne wahan ke fauj ko aisa kata tha ki wo to jaan bachakar bhagne me vyast the..


Lekin Serin koi bhi jokhim nahi uthana chahti thi, isliye usne turant Shwetna se sampark karke viman se takriban 2000 marak plane bulwa kar wahan ki cahuksi karne ke liye bol di..


Apne juniors ko turant hi yah aadesh di ki wahan ke samrajya ko purn roop se suraksha ghera me le le… juniors ko samjhane ke baad Serin, Nandni se location share karti hui…. "Nandni apne 4000 logon ke sath iss pure location par najar banaye rakho aur dushman par koi bhi raham nahi karna hai.. kewal dhyan rahe bich me Nischal, Jivisha aur Mahamahim hai, in teeno ko kuch nahi hona chahiye"…


Idhar Nischal dhyan laga kar Jivisha ke dimag me prawes kar gaya. Matr nano second me wo dimag ke har sanayu tantu ko chhedte huye pure raftaar ke sath ander ghusta chala gaya…


Dimag me uske gati ko rokne ke liye Jivisha ke ander tarah-tarah ki yaden dali gayi thi… jisme har uss Malkia ki marmik tasveer thi, jisse Mahamahim dwara noch'kar khaya gaya tha… Bharmane ki ek achhi kosis jo Prithvi par hui sapna ke ghatna se prerit thi… lekin Bharmane ke kram me wo yah bhul chuke the ki tab Nischal sikh raha tha, lekin ab Nischal apne vidhya me nipun tha…


Matr second bhar ke samay me Nischal, Jivisha ke dimag ke uss hisse me tha, jahan Jivisha apna dhyan lagate waqt fasi hui thi.… Jivisha andhre me kahin baith kar dard se krrah rahi thi… tabhi wahan charo ore ujala jo gaya.. Samne Nischal khada tha..


Andhera jab chhanta aur Nischal ka pyara chehra Jivisha ko najar aaya, wo apne dard ko darkinar karti daur kar Nischal ke gale lag gayi…. "Nischal, sine me bahut tej dard ho raha hai.. aisa lag raha hai kisi ka panja mere sine me ghuskar mera dil nikalne wala hai" …


Nischal:- To fir chalo uske kiye ki saja dete hai…


Nischal, Jivisha ko apne gode me uthaya aur Jivisha ki jab aankh khuli tab wo ek alag hi duniya me thi… Jivisha dard se chhatpatate hui kahne lagi… "Ye kaun si jagah hai Nischal, yahan aakar to meri pira asahniya ho gayi hai"..


Charo ore kali rakh se tile bane huye the, jispar jalti hui laal law saaf dikh rahi thi… charo ore halka andhera tha, mano yahan ghanghor badri chhayi ho… aisa bhayanak manjar tha mano khushiyon ne sadiyon se yahan muh mod rakha ho..


Nischal, Jivisha ki aakhon me dekhte huye… "Dard aur andhkar ne tumhe bhramit kiya hai Jisa.. bus Alfas grih ke bare me dhyan karo"..


Jivisha:- Ahhhh ! Ye dard meri jaan le raha hai Nischal … main kuch bhi dhyan lagane me asamrth hun…


Nischal, Jivisha ko apne sine se lagate huye, uske sar ko chum'kar thoda piche hua. Apne upar ke kapde nikal'kar, apna khanjar nikala aur dhire se apne sine par chalane laga…


"Baby, nahi karo na please… main mar jaungi"… Jivisha puri tarah kamjor parti hui rone lagi..


Nischal muskurate huye apne sine me khanjar ki nok ghusa diya… rakt ki dhar khanjar ke niche se bahne lagi… Jivisha vyakulta se uski ore badhi kintu Nischal usse rokte huye…


"Jivisha, tmnhara dard me hona mera kaleja chir raha hai… dekho mere sine par tumhare panje ke nishan jo mit rahe hai.. matlab meri jodi apne anth ke nikat hai… ya to tum mirtu ko prajit karo, warna mere kul ka shrap yahan bhi kaam karega… dusre Viggo Sigma ka aathwan vansaj bhi apni jodi banane ke baad marega. Lekin main apni jodi ke bina kuch din iss sansar me tarap kar nahi marna chahunga… main to muskurate huye tunhare sath aaunga"…


Jivisha uski baat sukar kisi tarah muskurai aur apne dono hath failakar wo fir se madhosh hona shuru ho gayi… Nischal Jivisha ke pichhe aakar uske badan se lipat gaya aur uske kano ke niche hontn se sparsh karne laga… honth ke chhuan se Jivisha ke badan me mithi si umang daur gayi aur badan khushi se sihar gaya…



Jaise-jaise Jivisha, Nischal me kho rahi thi.. wahan ke kale badal chhant rahe the.. Jivisha ka dard bhi dhire-dhire kam hota ja raha tha… aur dard jaise-jaise kam hota ja raha tha, pyar aur umang bhi badi teji ke sath badhta ja raha tha..


Kuch hi pal me dono itne madhosh huye ki wahan ke kale badal aur andhkar sama kahin gayab sa ho gaya… charo ore shwet hi shwet najar aa raha tha.. aur iss shwet se jagah me kahin dur 2 kale se log najar aa rahe the… jo unke karib badh rahe the…


"Kya baat hai, aaj tak mujhe kisi ne itna prabhawit nahi kiya jitna Tum dono ne kiya. Aaj tak main sab ko chunte aa raha tha, lekin mujhe koi dhundh le, aisa samast brahmand me koi nahi… kyonki ye samast brahmand hi main hun… Prithvi bhi main hun, Zoren bhi main hun, Aizem bhi main hun aur Aaynek bhi main hi hun.. shristhi ke jis kan me mujhe dhundhoge main wahin hun"…


Jivisha:- Maaf karna badbole Surpmarich, tumse abhi mere love se nipto, jabtak main iss durachari Mittoso se nipat'ti hun.. wo kya hai na abhi waqt nahi hai humare pass…


Jivihsa apni baat kah'kar jaise hi aage badhi, Mahamahim ke sath khada wo divya asur Surpmarich ne kewal apni najar uthayi aur Nischal aur Jivisha dono hawa me tang gaye… "Tumhari tuchh si sahktiyon par jab tumhe itna gurur hai, fir mujhe kitna gurur hona chahiye"


"Apna gurur tu apne pichhwade me dal le Surpmarich"… Nischal gusse me aakhen laal karte apni baat kaha aur Surpmarich ke najron se jaal se wo achanak hi ojhal ho'kar thik uske piche pahunch gaya...


Jaise hi Nischal, Surpmarich ke piche pahunch, Surpmarich uss se bhi tej hota, Nischal ke piche pahunch gaya… lekin aage pichhe ke iss khel me Jivisha se uska dhyan hat gaya aur Jivisha bhi apni sampurn shaktiyan khol chuki thi…


Jivisha ki ikchha shakti ka prawah itna khatarnak tha ki Surpmarich jabtak Jivisha ki ikchha shakti ke ghere par dhyan kendrit karta, tab-tak Nischal ek baar fir uske pichhe pahunch'kar, usse apne hathon se uthaya aur niche jamin par puri takat se patak diya…


Surpmarich ka dhyan Jivisha se hat gaya aur bhumi par girte hi wo uthkar turant hi khada ho gaya aur badi hi teji ke sath Nischal par lapka… jaise hi wo Nischal par lapak raha tha Mahamahim apne dono hath uthakar Nischal par humla karne ke liye taiyar ho gaya…


Jivisha mauka dekh'kar turant hi Mahamahim ke karib pahunchi aur apna panja sidha uske kaleje me ghusa'kar uska jinda dil, kaleja chirkar bahar nikal li..


Jaise hi uska dil bahar nikla uska jagah par anginat bomb girne lage… Surpmarich ki tej si chinkh nikal gayi…. "Nahiiiii".. aur baukhla'kar usne Nischal ke sar par itna tej mukka chala diya ki yadi Jivisha ne mukke aur Nichal ke sar ke bich Mahamahim ke sarir ko na feka hota, Nischal ke dimag ka chatni ban gaya hota…


Lekin fir bhi Surpmarich ka wo itna balsali prahar tha ki Mahamahim ke sine ko bhed'kar mukka teji se Nischal ke sar par laga aur wo behosh ho gaya… Surpmarich apna prahar kar'ke gusse me wahan se gayab ho gaya… Jivisha, Nischal ke pass daur kar pahunchi aur uske sar ko apne god me lekar balon me hath ferne lagi…


Charo ore bhishan bomb fut rahe the… lekin Jivisha apni jagah baith'kar, Nischal ke sar ko gode me rakh'kar, uske chehre par hath fer rahi thi… Nischal lagbhag behoshi ke aalam me apni aakhen khola, apna hath badha kar usne Jivisha ke aashu ko saaf kiya.. dhime se honth hilate huye kahne laga… "chalo chalte hain, warna hum yahin fans jaynge"..


Nischal ne Jivisha ka hath thama aur dono Mahamahim ke dimag se bahar aaye… dono jaise hi bahar aaye, Jivisha aakhen khol'kar sidha Nischal ke ore lapki aur uske girte sarir ko tham'kar wahin niche baith gayi…


Bahar to jaise lashon ka dher bana hua tha aur Serin ke pass 2 jinda bandhak khade the… ek Apini aur dusra Avinashi… Jivisha ek najar Apini ko dekhi aur apna hath utha kar uska gala daboch kar lashon ke dher me fekhti hui kahne lagi….


"Baby wo Apini mujhe dikha aur tumhara wada maine pura kar diya… aakhen khol kar to dekho, Serin ne akele apne dum par ye pura ranbhumi jit lee hai… Mahamahim ki maha sena yahan lashon ke dher me tabdil hai aur jo bach gaye wo aatmsamarpan kar chuke hain"..


Serin, Jivisha ke sar par hath ferti…. "Isse medical ki jaroorat hai Bhabhi, chalo isse lekar chalte hain".. ..


Nischal ko wahan se utha'kar viman me wapas laya gaya. Buri tarah ghayal Jivisha bhi thi aur wo bhi viman me pahunchte hi behosh ho gayu. Yudh jit to gaye the, lekin koi bhi iss jit ka jashn nahi mana raha tha…


Serin, Nischal aur Jivisha ko medical sahayata de rahi thi wahi Ansh NilBhut ke logon ke sath milkar, unke 5 caror logon me se jitno ki jaan bacha sakta tha utno ki jaan bachane me laga hua tha…


Idhar Nandni, Shwetna ke sath milkar atmsamartpit kiye sainiko ko wahan ke ranbhumi se lashon ko hatakar unhe dafanane ke kaam me lagi hui thi… Takriban aadhi raat Jivisha ko hosh aaya… aakhen khulte hi Jivisha Nischal ko dhundhne lagi…


Nischal ko sabse alag rakh'kar ilaj kiya ja raha tha. Jivisha uss jagah ko dhundh'kar wahan pahunchi. Serin ab bhi Nischal ke pass hi thi aur kuch padesan si dikh rahi thi..


"Kya hua, sab thik to hai na.. tum itni vyakul kyon ho"… Jivisha Serin ke kandhe par hath deti hui puchhne lagi..


Serin:- Shayad iske brain cell damage ho gaye hain, isliye iska hath aur paun ne kaam karna band kar chuka hai..


Serin ki baat sun'kar Jivisha ko jajse gahra Sadma laga ho, uske aashu chhlak aaye, wo roti hui Serin se lipat gayi… Serin uske pith thap-thapate huye santwana deti hui kahne lagi…


"Bhabhi Nischal ko aapke ke pyar aur hasi ki jaroorat hogi, warna wo toot jayega. Aap pyar se uska sath dogi to ye waqt bhi tal jayega. Aur haan, please aisa nahi dikhaeyega ki wo ashay ho gaya hai."..


Serin apne aashu pahle baha chuki thi lekin Jivisha ke liye ye marmik kshn tha. Wo khud ko sambhalne ke liye Serin se kuch waqt maang'kar wahan se chali gayi. Wahan se wo sidha Alfas grih me pahunchi aur apne bahte aanshuon ke sath pustak ke panne ko fir se paltane lagi…
ab yeh Supari machis koun hai :mad:
Iski wajah se bechari jivu ko itni taklif uthani padi upor se nischal ke bhi brain cells damage ho gaye...
shwetna thik hi kah rahi thi yeh minttos hai hi parjivi.. pehle malika ki shaktiyo pe phudok raha tha aur ab jab haarne laga toh us sufari machis se bhikh mangne laga ki in dono ko khatam kar de... par yahan bhi asafal raha... kyunki jivu aur nischal sirf saririk hi nahi balki dimagi ladayi mein bhi us minttos se kahi zyada aage hai... chalo achha hua joh yeh kamina maara gaya aur zoren grah ko bhi is parjivi se chhutkara mil gaya.. par afsos ladte waqt nischal kuch zyada hi ghayal ho gaya...
par ek baat samajh na aayi... ye mintos kya us snpari machis ka chaheta tha kya joh woh itna bawla ho gaya mintos ki maut dekh... aur ye kya bak baka raha tha woh hi sab kuch hai usse hi sab kuch hai... to darke maare udhar se bhaga kyun... Khair... matlab jeet jivu aur nischal and uske party ki huyi :vhappy: ab us cuckold sabbiya ki baari :bat:
chalo achha hua jo abhinashi pakda gaya aur sath hi woh tharki apini maara gaya..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

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yaha to story complete ho gai :eek:
is baar nichay ladai main apne hat or pear ne kam karna band diya.

pahale to bechare ko koi faltu ka hatyar chalane ke liye uske hat or pear kam karna band kar diye tha.

or bhi but kuch badal diya story main tum ne.

dekha pahle kaha tha tum ko apni story ka pdf bana ke rakha lo.
par tum ne suna nahi.
fear se likhane pada gai na aadhi story:D
 
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yaha to story complete ho gai :eek:
is baar nichay ladai main apne hat or pear ne kam karna band diya.

pahale to bechare ko koi faltu ka hatyar chalane ke liye uske hat or pear kam karna band kar diye tha.

or bhi but kuch badal diya story main tum ne.

dekha pahle kaha tha tum ko apni story ka pdf bana ke rakha lo.
par tum ne suna nahi.
fear se likhane pada gai na aadhi story:D
fear nahi...
phir :declare:
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ab to admin ko bol kar edit karwana padega :declare:
ju bol rahe the ki jab naye update aayenge toh revo bhi denge aap... well.. Story bhi completed ho chuki hai par ju ke revos na aaye ishq risk pe... ek jamana hua karta tha jab stories pe Rg sahab ke revos stories pe sabse zyada hote the.. even itne comments ki writer se bhi zyada... :smarty:
 

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Bilkul subah ka waqt tha… Jivisha muskurati hui Alfas grih se bahar nikli.. Kund me nahane ke karan uska chehra aur bhi jyada khila hua lag raha tha… Jivisha ne wahan ke dwarpaal ko bolkar sabhi ko turant hi sabha bahwan me bulwa li…


Ek ore NilBhut samuday ki pratinidhi Shwetna apne logon ke sath baithi hui thi, to dusri ore Jatin aur Baby Takshat samuday ka pratinidhitwa kar rahi thi… aur dono hi samuday ke logon ne jhuk'kar apni nayi shashika ka swagat kiya…


Jivisha:- Tum sab ki yah haalat ka karan, kewal aur kewal ye sar jhukana hi hai… Aaj se main yahan ka rajtantra khatm krati hun aur yahan par prajatantra ko bahal karti hun..


Dono hi pakshon ke logon ne badi utsukta se prajatantra ka matlab puchhne lage… kayi sare video Play huye jisme prajatantra ke working culture, ek saman adhikar, ek saman kanoon, satta aur takat kisi ek ke hath me na hokar balki sabko saman adhikaron ki vyawastha ko dikhaya jane laga…


Chunki Jatin prithvi par kafi lambe arse se raha tha aur usse yah kanoon vaywastha kafi pasand thi, isliye wah iss baat ke liye raji ho gaya… Jatin aur Shwetna ki aguwai me ek team ka gathan hua, jo iss pure Zoren ko 30 zone me vibhajit karke ek kusal prajatantra ko bahal karti…


Jivisha apni baat puri karke sabha ko Jatin aur Shwetna ke hawale kar'ke apne liye bus wo Alfas grih rakh li jo Shwetna ki dekh-rekh me Jivisha aur Nischal ki amanat rahti…


Subha ka waqt tha, Jivisha Zoren grah par shanti aur shashan vaywastha bahal kar'ke wapas chali aayi thi. Muskura to rahi thi lekin uski muskurahaton me bhi ek khamoshi si thi…


Jivisha apne anterman me jhanknti apni udasi ko bhanp gayi, isliye wo Nischal ke pass na ja'kar Chirag aur Aarsi ke pass pahunch gaye… dono daur kar Jivisha ke pass pahunche… Chirag subkate huye puchne laga… "Didi aap ke sine se khun nikal raha tha, dard bhi ho raha hai kya aap ko"..


Jivisha, uske sar ke baal ko bikherti hui, apne gaal se uske gaal ko ragarti hui, usse pyar se chumti kahne lagi… "Kya betu tu to bada ho gaya hai.. aur jarra mujhe apni bahu ko dekhne de… Aarsi tum bhi badi ho gayi haan"..


Aarsi:- Didi, didi jab hum dono bade ho gaye hain, to fir humari shadi karwa do na…


Chirag:- Abhi shadi ki baat nahi karni chahiye Aarsi..


Aarsi:- Lekin kyon baby..


Chirag:- Duffer, film me nahi dekhti, ghar me jab kisi ko chot lag jaye ya ghayal ho jaye to shadi ki baat nahi karte, sab kuch normal hone ke baad karte hain..


Aarsi:- Ohhh ! Mujhe nahi pata tha ye baat… koi nahi hum 2,4 din me thode aur bade ho jayenge fir shadi karenge..


Jivisha:- Oh ho.. aur shadi ke baad ghar kaise chalaoge..


Chirag:- Wo Kasak 2.0 bua hai na.. wo na ek bade se research centre ki master hai aur hum dono unke assistant. Hum dono ki to job bhi lag gayi hai…


Jivisha:- Baat to ye bhi sahi hai.. job to hai tunhare pass. Lekin kya Aarsi ke commissioner papa aur Chirag ki hitlar mammi manegi....


Aarsi, Jivisha ke mathe par apni chhoti si hatheli se dhakke deti hui kahne lagi… "Aap bhi na didi, sathiya gayi ho. Hum 2 sal pahle bhage the, wo log to ab tak apne nati-pote ke intzar me honge"..


Jivisha kya kahe aur kya na kahe, uske muh par to tala he lag gaya tha. Haalanki Aarsi kah to bilkul sahi rahi thi, lekin yadi ye case kisi aur ke sath hota to… lekin ab inhe kya jawab de…


"Band kar diya in chilgojon ne tera muh"… Nandni unke pass aa kar baith'ti hui kahne lagi… iss se pahle ki dono kuch bolte, Nandni dono se kahne lagi.... "Tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho, tumhe to Serin ne bulaya hai"..


Dono Serin ka naam sun'kar hi wahan se uth'kar bhage.. unhe Serin ke liye aise bhagte dekh Nandni kahne lagi... "Tere dono bachon ka kafi karib se khyal rakhi hai usne"..


Jivisha:- Bahut dard jhele hain usne Nandu, shayad Nischal ke hisse ka dard bhi wo jhel gayi. Kal raat mili thi, khud to vyakul thi aur mujhe himmat rakhne ke liye kah rahi thi..


Nandni:- Ek kaam karenge, usse hum apne pagal gange me samil kar lenge..


Jivisha:- Wo to sahi hai Nandu, Lekin ye to lagbhag Kasak ki tarah dikhti hai…


Nandni:- Ye to aur bhi fayde wala rahega..


Jivisha:- Kaise..


Nandni:- Mujhe kya pata bus flow me nikal gaya…


Jivisha:- Haan ye flow me nikalna, jab normal the kitne khush the na… wo flow me kuch bhi kisi ko kah dena, fir har koi lag gaye uss betuke flow ko sabit karne me…


Nandni:- Haan yaad hai… Main tum dono ko miss karungi.. Behad..


Jivisha:- Dono ko miss karungi se kya matlab hai tumhara..


Nandni:- Main aur Aakash soch rahe the ki, kal hum dono Chirag aur Aarsi ko lekar Prithvi nikal jaye. Hum yahan dusron ke ghar ki samsya ka samdhan me to jute hain, lekin apne hi ghar ke log kin haalaton me honge, unki koi khabar nahi… Nandita bhabhi ne bure waqt me kitni madad ki thi aur 2 sal se apne bache ko dekhi nahi, wahi haal Aarsi ke papa ka bhi hoga. Uss bechare ki to badi beti ko bhi in logon ne maar dala tha…


Jivisha:- Thanks yaar … tere jane se kam se kam aage ke liye mera sar dard to kam ho jayega…


Nandni:- Haan so to hai, sabhi logon ke drame mujhe hi jhelne honge .. koi na raste me 2 din ka waqt hoga.. bahana soch lenge…


Jivisha:- Acha sun wo Nischal ne tere aur Ansh ke liye kuch apne hath se banaya tha, socha tha jab wahan Aizem par sab ko kuch na kuch deta, ussi waqt tum dono ko bhi wo deta, lekin ab to tum ja rahi ho, to wo bhi leti chali jao..


Nandni:- Tu kyon de rahi hai mujhe, main to uss kadus se hi le lungi. Waise bhi kal wo lashon ke dher ko hatwane me itni thak gayi ki uss se mil hi nahi payi.. abhi kaisa hai wo..


Jivisha:- Acha hai..


Nandni:- Baat kya hai Jisa… tu kya chhipa rahi hai..


Jivisha:- Uske sar me thodi si chot aayi hai.. aur..


Nandni, hairani se Jivisha ke ore dab-dabatyi najron se dekhti…. "Wo fir se coma me chala gaya kya? Ye iske sath hi aisa kyun hota hai? Main na grih shanti yagya karwaungi, ye baar-baar Nischal ke sath ghtna hona grahon ka koi dosh lagta hai.."


Jivisha:- Nahi wo coma me nahi hai. Balki brain cell damage hone se uske hath aur paun ke kaam karna band kar diya hai… ..


Nandni:- Arreee yaar ye kya ho gaya… Hey bhagwan kyon ache logon ko padesan karte ho.. kab usne kisi ka bura chaha hai…


Jivisha, Nandni ke aanshu pochhti…. "Yaar tu royegi to uska aur mera, hum dono ka husla toot jayega.. bura waqt hai ye bhi tal jayega"…


Nandni:- Kahan hai wo, mujhe abhi milna hai.. tu mujhe pahle nahi bata sakti thi, jab main yahan se jane ki baat kar rahi thi. Usne kabhi taklif me saath nahi chhoda, main usse kaise chhod'kar jane ki soch sakti hun…


Jivisha:- Ullu rona band karegi.. shant ho ja bahna… main kah rahi hun na bura waqt hai tal jayega… yahan par to sab hain lekin apne pariwar ke pass humari koi khabar tak nahi. Tumne bilkul sahi socha hai.. tu aaram se wahan nikal ja.. waise bhi 10-15 din baad hum pahunch he rahe hain wahan..


Nandni:- Shut up.. main usse chhod kar kahin nahi ja rahi..


"Bhabhi sahi bol rahi hai Nandni, rahi baat Nischal ki to main wada karti hun agle 10 se 15 din me hum sab tunhare pass honge. Ek wada maine bhabhi se kiya tha puchh lo usse nibhayi ki nahi"… Serin unke pass aati hui kahne lagi..


Nandni:- Hmmm ! Yaar ikchha to nahi thi jane ki.. dil nahi maan raha hai..


Serin:- Jab maine usse khud se alag kiya tha tab mera bhi dil nahi maan raha tha.. nahi mana tha mera dil ki wo bhola akele kaise iss duniya ko sambhalega… kaise survive karega.. lekin mujhe bhi dil majboot karna para tha. Dekho ussi ka natija hai ki aaj uske wajah se mujhe bhi pariwar aur doston ke bich ka sukh mila hai… warna aise pariwar ki kamna to kahin dur-dur tak sapne me bhi nahi thi...


Jivisha:- Tu aaram se hans kar mil Nischal se, fir kuch dino ki to baat hai.. aur haan kamini humare bagair shadi nahi kar lena…


Nandni:- Main to raji bhi ho jaun lekin ab to Ansh hi raji nahi hoga.. doston ke naam par to uske pass Nischal ke siwa koi hai bhi nahi.. aur humare yahan ladka apne baap ke bina ek baar shadi kar sakta hai, lekin dost ke bina to usse lagega shadi nahi maiyyat samaroh ka aayojan hua tha..chal chalkar mil leti hun uss khadus se..


Jivisha:- Serin, Nischal ko hosh aa gaya kya ?


Serin:- Haan kuch der pahle hi aaya tha.. ek baar batane aayi thi tab aap log nahi the..


Nandni:- Kaisa react kiya usne..


Serin:- Imandari bataun to wo thoda sa padesan hua, lekin bilkul normal tha.. kah raha tha bade-bade events me aise hadse hote rahte hain… mere hath paun sab to tum sab ho..


Nandni:- Haan sahi hi to kaha hai usne.. waise bhi bahut bhagta tha.. ab ek jagah kam se kam baitha to rahega..


Uski baat sun'kar sabhi hans diye aur hanste hanste achanak hi rone lage.. Kuch pal gum mitane ke baad teeno hi pahunchi medical section me… pura medical section ko khali dekh'kar Jivisha aaschrya se puchhne lagi… "Yahan ke ghayal log sab kahan gaye"..


Serin:- Jo gambhir roop se chotil the, unhe NilBhut ke hospital me rakha gaya hai… aur baki sab ko chhuti de di gayi hai.. iss ladai me in logon ne 2 carore log khoye hain.. lekin apne logon ko kisi ne ro kar vida nahi kiya, balki pure jashn ke sath unki aakhri vidai di gayi…


Nandni:- Batao ek ye log hain, aur ek tum sab ho… Nischal ke liye bus ro rahe ho..


Jivisha:- Haan pagal khali hum log hi roye the na.. chal ab..


Jaise hi teeno ander pahunche… "Kya hai khadus, suni tere hath paun chale gaye"… Nandni uske bistar ke kinare baith'kar puchhne lagi …


Nischal:- Matlab ye baat akhbar me bhi aa gayi kya?


Nandni:- Sir aap itne mahan hasti hain ki aap ke chhink ki charcha to pure universe me hoti hai, fir to ye aapke hath aur paun hain..


Nischal:- Haan durbhagyavash ye sahi khabar hai..


Nandni:- Bahut bhagta tha na… ab thik hua.. hamesa najron ke samne rahega.. waise iske muh par tape laga'kar iska rape kar dun to kisi ko pata tak nahi chalega…


Jivisha uske sar par pichhe se hath marti… "Jhalli kahin ki, ja tu apne doctor ko pakad.. mere maal par najar dali to dekh lena. Oye jiju apni biwi ko sambhalo yaar.. ye kuch jyada hi maze le rahi hai"…


Ansh:- Ab kya hi bataun pahle sirf suna tha ab dekh raha hun, ladkiyan shadi ke baad besharm ho jati hain..


Nischal:- Doctor sahab Shadi to Jivisha ki bhi ho gayi hai.. aap ke kahne ka kya matlab hai wo bhi besharm hai..


Jivisha apni aakhen dikhati… "Bade matlab nikale ja rahe hain haan"..


"Aaj ki subah aise khili si aaogi to main to pagal ho jaunga"… Aur Jivisha ke honton par Nischal ke honton ka sparsh …


"Had hai baby ye kya kar rahe ho… besharm to tum ho gaye"… Sab log Jivisha ke ore dekhte huye… "Kya hua aisa kya kar diya Nischal ne"..
. ab had hi paar kar di inlogo ne... sab ke sab cnp master ban baithe hai... prithvi se pehle dhaatu churate the ye kam tha joh ab shasan pakriya bhi churane lag gaye... :sigh: apne tarike se jiye woh log kahe prithvi se cnp karte hai..
Ab yeh kya nandu bhi jaa rahi hai... ek toh kasak aur sawelkar bhi nahi hai upor yeh bhi chali jayegi toh bilkul hi suni suni si ho jayegi mahol.. ab toh chirag aur aarshi bhi jaa rahi hai.. Bin inke rounak hi nahi rahegi :sigh: kitne Khwaab bun rahe hai dono shaadi ke liye... bichare chutku chutki gang :sigh:
Bechari nandu nischal ko dekh dukhi bhi hai par khud ko uske samne majboot dikha rahi hai khud ko..jivu bhi wohi kosish mein hai dard chupaye khud ko normal dikhake... hansi ka ek mahol chhai huyi hai wahan pe.. par kab tak... ab tak toh woh sabbiya bhi us rukha aur sukha sang milke har taraf se inlogo gherne ki planning ko anjaam bhi de chuka hoga..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 
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