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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

aman rathore

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Kayi kathayen hain jivan ki. Kuch ka man'na hai prithvi jaisi kai aise grah hain, jahan par jivan basta hai, to kaiyon ka man'na hai ki ye sab kewal magadhant kahaniyan hai. Alians ka astitw lagbhag waisa he hai jaisa bhut ka astitw.


Kuch log jo mante hain unhe viswas hai aur jo log nahi mante wo log un viswas karne walon ko andh-viswasi mante hain. Sach ka koi sakshay nahi, isliye iss baat ko kabhi sabit nahi kiya ja sakta.


Dusre grah se rah rahe iss prajati ki bhi kahani lagbhag kuch aisi he thi. Inke astitw ka koi sakshya tha nahi, aur jinhone bhi inhe dekha ya mehsus kiya, koi bhi iss baat ko batane ke liye jinda nahi bache.


Ek prajati, Zoren grah ke, jiss ke kuch sadsya dharti par khoji the, aur unke hone ka kisi ko ilm tak nahi tha. Aesi prajati jo kisi bhi sajiw ka roop le sakte the, narbhakchhiyon ka ek samuh jinhe insani mans khane me ajib sa sukoon milta tha.


Kai varshon se ye sher ke roop me rahte the aur apna shikar ko aise he fasa kar uski sari indriyan jagrit karke, usse noch-nich kar khate the.... panch logon ka samuh jisme 3 nar aur 2 madyen thi. Josefer, Uday ka asli naam tha aur wo iss samuh ka mukhiya tha.


Josefer..... Iss ladki ke ander cotten dal kar isse thik karo, hum isse bhi kahin fek aate hain jaise baki do ko pahle feka tha....


Ek adrisya viman, jo macro particle se bana tha. Jise insani aakhon se dekh pana muskil tha. Palak jhapakte he ye viman light wave se travel karte duniya ke ek chhor se dusre chhor par pahunch sakta tha.


Josefer apna viman taiyar kar raha tha, jab tak uske baki ke sathi Sweksha ke ander cotton bhar kar, uske upar ke fate chamri ko sil kar thik kar rahe the ... tabhi char bare viman uss jagah par utra...


Kai sare logon ke bich se ek lamba kad-kathi ka aadmi bahar nikla..... usse dekh kar panchon apne ghutne par baith kar apna sir jhuka liya....


Wo aadmi sare sena ko command dena wala Rijo tha. Rijo koi naam nahi balki ek padwi thi, jo pure Zoren grah me eklauta hota tha. Wahan ke mahamahim ka sab se karibi aur uss ke baad uss jagah ka sab se shaktisali sadasya.


Rijo, Josefer ko utha kar uske kandhe par hath rakhta...... "Tumhara kaam kabil-e-tarif hai. Hum tum se bahut khush hain"


Josefer, bakiyon ki tarah sir jhukaye...... "Sukriya Rijo"


Rijo.... Tumhe pata hai na humari malkia ka pata chal chuka hai.


Josefer..... Haan pata hai Rijo. Par usse to Apini dekh raha hai na.


Rijo.... Haan par iss baar Apini bhi usse kabu nahi kar sakta. Yun samjh lo ki ab tak jitni bhi Malkia ka pata chala hai, unme ye sabse shaktisali hai. Uss ki ikchha shakti ka koi mel nahi. Apni soyi hui ikchha skatiyon me bhi usne khatre ko itni dur se bhanpa ki, Apini bhi bas dekhta rah gaya.


Josefer.... Humare liye kya hukum hai Rijo.


Rijo..... Tum apne logon ke sath Apini se sampark karo. Malkia ko dhundho aur hifajat ke sath usse Zoren ki seema tak le kar aao.


Josefer..... Ji Rizo main aap ko niras nahi karunga.


Rijo.... Tum aur Apini ne mil kar, yadi ye kaam kar diye, to fir hum, tum dono ko khoji ke kaam se hata kar, uttari aur dakhsni sima ki kaman de denge.


Josefer.... Sukriya Rijo hume wapas bulane ke liye.


Rijo..... Haan tum dono ne yahan apni bahut sewayen di hai isliye hum ne ye faisla kiya. Lekin uss se pahle tumhe ye kaam karna hoga. Malkia ko puri hifajat se, aur bina uski jankari ke lana hai. Malkia ke bare me tumhe jankari to hai na.


Josefer.... Haan Rijo, Apini ne hume bataya tha. Humari malkia yahan Jivisha naam se jani jati hain. Aur wo Pune sahar se kahin gayab ho gayi hain.


Rijo.....Thik hai tum sab mil kar iss kaam ko anjaam do. Tab tak main tumhari jagah kisi aur khoji ke samuh ko yahan par bhejne ki taiyari karta hun.



Rijo ke jate he pure samuh me khushi ki lahar daur gayi. Pura samuh khushi se nachne laga.... Sab ko shant karte huye Josefer kahne laga.... "Adrish Janwar ko nind se jagane ka waqt aa gaya hai. Usse jagao hum abhi Apini se milne chalenge"



Evening time ..... Indore....



Kaam ki thakan se jivisha ke paun me jaise pankhe lage ho, paun itne kanp rahe the ki bechari thik se khadi bhi nahi ho pa rahi thi. Sabse najren bacha kar aaram karne ke liye Durga devi ke he kamre me ghus gayi.


Dusri ore Durga devi ne Nischal ko apne kamre se anguthi lane bheji thi, jo wo dhund raha tha. Jaise he Jivisha ander ghusi, Nischal ko uss kamre me kuch dhundhte dekhi...... "Mujhe pakka yakin ho gaya ki tum chor ho"


Nischal..... Ye almira kidhar hai...


Jivisha, Shocked..... Himmat to dekho mujh se he puchh raha, almira kidhar hai. Bhago iss kamre se, iss kamre se to kya mujh se he dur bhag jao.


Nischal.... Teri problem kya hai, main tere kisi kaam me tang arrata hun, jo tu mujhe har waqt kuch na kuch kahti rahti hai.


Jivisha..... Sadak chhap, tum jaise choron se aur kaisi bhasha ki ummid kar sakti hun.... tumhe kya chahiye, paise, jewar... sab main de dungi, par tum iss ghar se kuch nahi churaoge.


Nischal kuch sochte huye..... Hmmm ! Thik hai tu chidh mat main he jata hun...


Nischal sidha uss ghar se he bahar nikal kar aaya, aur khali si jagah dekh kar fir se ek baar Serin se contact kiya.....


Serin, ne ke device par ussi frequency se dobara contact.. wo harbara kar Nischal ko frequency ko line par leti kahne lagi..... "Nischal tumhe locate kiya ja raha hai, jald he ek team yahan se nikalne wali hai".


Nischal..... Kis commander ko apni maut itni pyari ho gayi...


Serin.... Commander nahi Sabaiya aa raha hai tumhare pichhe...


Nischal....... Kya ??? Sabaiya..... Yahan se main nikal nahi paunga bina yahan ki jankari ke. Tum se ek kaam thik se nahi ho paya. Ye kaisi decoding ki ho Serin, main inke bich famlier nahi ho pa raha. Sab mujhe shaq ki najar se dekh rahe hain. Main apni chijen wapas nahi le pa raha uski wajah sirf tum ho.


Serin..... Mera viswas karo, maine puri jankari tumhe bhej di hai. Waise kya tumne uss jagah ko bina jane he apni chijen wapas khud se jorne ki kosis kiye...


Nischal..... Haan, mujhe laga main iss jagah ko jaan chuka hun, isliye khud ko sari chijon se jorne ki kosis kiya tha, par asafal raha.


Serin..... Tabhi tumhe locate kar pa raha hain...


Nischal.... Tum kuch kar sakti ho kya....


Serin.... Nahi, main kuch nahi kar sakti. Sari chijen active ho chuki hai, usse jab tak tum se jora na gaya active he rahega. Signal weak hai, par ek baar uss signal ko trace karne wo log yahan nikal gaye to tumhara pata laga lenge.


Nischal.... Yahan ki bhasha ko ek baar aur decode karo aur pata karo ki mujhse kya chuk ho rahi hai. Tabtak main bhi yahan dekhta hun... sayad kuch madad yahan se mil jaye....


Serin ko sari baten samjhakar, Nichal contact karne ki sari chijen samet, jaise he pichhe mura, samne Nandni thi. Nandni usse hairani se dekhte huye puchhne lagi..... "Ye tum paglon ki tarah mathe aur hathon par pura wire lagaye kis bhasha me baat kar rahe the".


"Lagta hai yahan ek raajdar banana he parega, ab samay nahi bacha hai mere pass"...... Nischal, Nandni ka hath pakrte usse khinchte huye.... "Chal mere sath"


Nandni.... Hath chhoro mera jungli....


Nischal... Tu mere sath aisi jagah chal jahan hume koi na dekh sake..... Tu chal to main sab samjhata hun....


Nadni, apna hath chhurane ki kosis karti huyi..... "Pagal, gawar main tumhare sath kahin nahi jane wali"


Nischa..... Kaise tujhe samjhaun. Tu meri juban par mat ja, bas itna samjh ki main tum se madad mang raha hun...


Nandni, hairani se Nischal ko dekhne lagi, aankhon me minnat aur juban par ajib si bhasha... kuch sochti wo nischal ko ek aisi jagah le gayi jahan un dono ko koi sun aur dekh nahi sakta tha....


Nadni.... Kaho kya kahna hai tumhe..


Nischal ek gahri sans leta.... "Main tum logon ke bich ka nahi hun, kahin dur se aaya hun"...


Nandni.... Haan dekh kar he lagta hai, kisi jungle se aaye ho...


Nischal.... Nahi tu samjhti kyon nahi, main tumhare iss grah ka he nahi hun... kahin dur antriksh se aaya hun...


Nandni jor-jor se hasti hui...... "Aaj din bhar alian wali bahut sari filmen dekh chuke na. Ab mujhe samjh me aa raha hai, kyon tum wire laga kar aise paglon ki tarah kar rahe the. Suno Nischal wo movie me dikhayi ghatna sab kalpnik hoti hai".....


Nischal..... Kaise samjhaun. Tujhe meri baton par yakin kyon nahi ho raha.....


Nandni.... Hehehehe.... haan jungli tumhari baton par pura yakin hai... chalen ab ghar...


Nischal.... Chup ekdum... achha tu bata, apni aankhon se kahan tak dekh sakti hai....


Nandni hasti hui.... "Kyon uss jagah se tum pani nikal kar dikhane wale ho kya ??"....


Nischal ki ore dekhte huye wo bolte-bolte apni najar kahin dur tak daurayi. Dhak se kaleja, aur hansi bilkul gayab. Nandni ka muh khula ka khula rah gaya....


Abhi to bagal me usse dekte huye najar dusri ore ki thi, aur wahan dur Nischal khara tha. Nandni chaunk kar fir najron ko wahan ki jahan par Nischal pahle tha.... sir jaise ghum gaya ho aur hath paun kapne lage..... Nischal wahan pass me bhi tha...


Nandni ke chehre par dar ka pasina aa gaya. Nichal apna hath badha kahne laga..... "Main tumhari najron ke wave se jyada tej daur sakta hun"....


Nandni usse sunegi kya.... Jaise he Nischal apne hath uski ore badhate huye ye baat kah raha tha wo chakkar kha kar gir gayi......
:lol: :lol1: bechari Nandini ka to wicket hi down ho gaya hai :hehe:
 

aman rathore

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Khoji ne "thik hai" kaha..... aur Nischal ko marne ke irade se aage badhne lage. Idhar Nischal in sab se be khabar Jivisha ko wapas le jane ki taiyari kar raha tha.....


Josefer ka hukum milte he fir to humle ki taiyari shuru ho chuki thi. Lekin Nischal ke bare me bhi un khojiyon ko jarra bhi ilm nahi tha.... unhone viman ko niche la kar humle ki taiyari me niche utre. Par Nischal to Jivisha ko gode me liye hawa ki raftar se daur laga chuka tha....


Nischal bilkul pass se nikla un khojiyon ke aur wo log chhu tak nahi paye. Dono khoji achambhit the. Dono khoji sath me unka janwar sab uske piche daure par second bhar ka samay nahi laga hoga Nischal ko, aur wo un sab ki najron se ojhal ho chuka tha.


Sabhi turant viman me sawar ho gaye aur viman apne pure raftar se badh chali. Nischal apne har khatre se bekhabar, apne raste ja raha tha. Tabhi achanak Nischal ke sarir ke dahine hisse me jordar prahar hua.


Nischal khatre ko jarra bhi bhanp nahi paya. Unka wo vishalkay janwar apne nukile punch teji ke sath Nischal ke sarir ke dahine hisse me piche pith se ghusaya aur aage pet se bahar nikal diya. Aur pet se lekar kandhe tak, un khojiyon ka janwar Nischal ko chirte huye aage badh gaya. Nischal wahin sadak par gir gaya, par girte-girte bhi usne Jivisha ko apne upar le liya taki usse koi chot na lage.


Nichal gambhir roop se ghayal hokar niche dharasayi ho gaya. Wo janwara wapas palta aur dobara humle karne ki firak me tha. Iss baar Nischal ka sir nishane par tha. Lekin humle se pahle he Jivisha pure hosh me thi.


Nischal ki haalat dekh kar wo ghabra si gayi. Khun se lath-path uska pura sarir, Jivisha chillati hui usse jagane ki kosis karne lagi. Wo janwar Nischal par lagbhag dobara humla kar hi chuka tha, lekin Jivisha ke hosh me aana Nischal ke pran bacha gayi.


Jivisha ko hosh me aaye dekh, janwar ko kabu karne wale khoji turant hi bich me pahunchte huye hamle ko rokkar viman me sawar ho gaye aur yah sochkar ki itne bade humle ke baad ye ladka jinda to waise bhi nahi bachne wala, wo log dono ko wahin chhodkar wapas laut gaye.


Idhar Jivisha, Nischal ki haalat dekh kar jaise sun si hui ja rahi thi. Aas pass koi madad karne wala bhi nahi tha.
Tabhi wahan Nandni ki car aakar ruki.... "Kahti thi nafrat hai iss ladkey se, aur tu to sadak par he romance kar rahi"


Jivisha khadi ho kar palti, sarir par khun he khun.... Nandni puri tarah se shocked ....Virane se jagah par do ladkiyan aur dono ko he khun dekh kar chakkar sa aa raha tha....


Nandni.... Jisa ye sab kaise hua... Kya hua tha yahan. Nischal ka itna khun kaise bah raha...


Jivisha.... Mujhe kya pata Nandu, tujhe he pata hoga na. Tu he to car se le kar aayi hai na hume yahan tak....


Nandni.... Sab confusion hai, pahle isse le kar chal hospital fir dekhte hain kya karna hai...


Dono baten kar rahi thi tabhi Nischal ki aakhen bhi khuli. Usse hosh aane laga... wo aakhen khol kar baith gaya........ Idhar Nandni aur Jivisha aapas me discussion he kar rahi thi....


Nischal.... Dono yahan sadak par khadey ho kar kya mere marne ka intzar kar rahi ho.... chot lagi hai, khun bah raha hai aur dono yahan khadi ho kar tamasa dekh rahi ho kya ??....


Nandni..... Tumhara bhi khun ka rang laal hai...


Jivisha.... Nandu tu ye kya bak rahi hai.....


Nischal, sab ka dhyan fir se apni ore khinchte..... "Oye paglon aapas ki discussion baad me karna, pahle mera ilaz to karwao.... Ya picha chhudane ke chakkar me mujhe kahin sahid karne ka irada to nahi.


Teeno car me baithe, Nandni apne Bf yani ki Dr Ansh ke hospital pahunchi aur Jivisha ko wapas ghar lautne ke liye bol di, lekin Jivisha, Nischal ki haalat dekhkar usse chhodkar jana nahi chahti thi. Kisi tarah Nandni ne Jivisha ko samjha bujha kar wahan hospital se bhej di aur Ansh ko call lagane lagi. Nandni, Nichal ko lekar kafi paresan si dikh rahi thi.....


Nischal ke bahte khun ko dekhkar Nandni chinta se Ansh ko baar-baar call laga rahi thi, lekin Ansh ne call pick nahi kiya. Dr Ansh, apne papa ke sath unhi ke hospital me practice kiya karta the, subah ka samay hone ki wajah se wo abhi tak hospital nahi pahuncha tha.


Nandni, call laga hi rahi thi tabhi Ansh usse samne se aate huye najar aaya. Nandni bhagkar uske pass pahunchi aur sabhi staff ko uske pass se hatati hui Ansh par barshna shuru kar di… "Pagal ho kya, tum dr ho ya jallad. Tumhe kya lagta hai, tum mere bf ho to main tumhare hospital ka bill pay nahi karungi . Kaise dr ho patients mar raha hai aur tum cream powder laga kar taiyar ho kar aaye ho"...


Ansh, sir jhukaye chup-chap Nandni ki baten sun raha tha... jab wo bol kar chup ho gayi tab Ansh ne aahiste kaha... "Iska khun bah raha hai... pahle isse check kar lun"


Nischal ke zakham ko dekhte huye Ansh kahne laga..... "Ye kis hathiyar se zakham laga hai... aage se pichhe tak chir dala hai, fir bhi tum aise khadey ho"....


Nichal.... Arre dr babu ye aage se piche ka zakham nahi hai... aage alag hai aur piche alag...


Ansh.... Pagal samjha hai kya.... dono ore ek jaise nishan hain, jarra bhi fark ni. Ruko mujhe police ko bulana hoga....


Nandni..... Chup-chap cotten lagao aur stich karo. Jyada dimag na lagao.... waise bhi hum pahle se bahut musibat me hai... ab jo kaha hai wo chup-chap karo.


Mohabbat wo bhi jab ek tarfa ho. Ansh ke jaise pran baste ho Nandni me .... bina koi sawal kiye wo jakhamon par taken lagane laga..... "Nandni ye galat karwa rahi ho. Tum nahi janti, aise ilaz nahi hota"....


Nandni.... Kya bar-bara rahe ho, chup-chap kaam karo....


Ansh bechara ek staye huye pirit premi ki tarah na chahte huye bhi stich de diya... Stich de kar jab wo hath dhone bahar nikla tabhi..... "Nandni ji ye kaun hai jarra inki bhi tarruf kijiye"


Nandni.... Jivisha ke bhagne ke chakkar me ek baat to rah he gayi. Pahle ye batao tumhari bhasha itni jaldi, itni sudhri hui kaise ho gayi....


Nischal..... Internet darling internet... achha ye batao ye tumhara bf hai....


Nandni..... Pata nahi kyon mere dil me kabhi Ansh ke liye pyar wali feeling kyon nahi aayi. Par haan wo mujhse bahut pyar karta hai..... kash tumhe pyar ka matlab samjh me aata....


Jab Nandni "Kash tumhe pyar ka matlab samjh me aata" .... bol rahi thi, tabhi darwaje se Ansh ne sun liya..... "Aahhhhh" jaise sine me uske dard utha ho aur dil par hath rakh kar wo aage ki baat sun'ne laga....


Nischal.... Sayad tum thik kahti ho, mujhe iss sabd ka mol nahi pata. Chalo yahan se ab.... ghar wapas chalte hain....


Nandni.... Suno Mr. Ek baat main clear kar dun abhi..... tum kitna bhi chaho chhipana par main bina sachai jane piche nahi hatungi.


Nischa..... Haan madam ji sab bata dunga.... par ek shart par...


Nandni.... kaisi shart...


Nischal..... Abhi jo boli tum ... "Kash tumhe pyar ka matlab samjh me aata".... to deal ye hai ki aap mujhe pyar ka matlab samjhayengi.... aur main dhire-dhire aap ko sari sachai bataunga.


Nandni jor se hasti hui "haan" kah di aur dono wahan se nikal gaye.... thodi galatfahmi si paida ho gayi aur Ansh ko gussa aur dard dono ek sath ho rahe the.... Dono jab bahar nikle to Ansh darwaje par he khada tha...


Nandni..... Ansh main tum se baad me milti hun.... Abhi jarra jaldi hai...


Dono ko sath jate dekh Ansh bare gusse se..... "Manao raas lila.... bf main hun aur pyar ka matlab usse samjhao.... Mere he hospital me, mere he samne khullam khulla romance ka offer diya ja raha hai. Main injection me zahar bhar kar maar dalunga iss kaminey ko"


Idhar Jivisha car ko wash karwakar, Nandni ke ghar wapas to aa gayi, lekin usse samjh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare. Kuch he der me uske mom-dad aur pura pariwar yahan pahunchne wala tha. Upar se jiss ke bharose wo aayi thi, wo to ghayal hokar hospital me para hua tha.....


Jivisha ko kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha.... aur chinta me wo idhar se udhar ghum rahi thi, tabhi bahar se he chillane ki awaz .... "Jivisha.... Jivisha"....


Bare bhaiya, chote bhaiya... sab chillate huye darwaje ki ore badh rahe the... ander ka bhi mahol kautuhal jaisa ho gaya .... Ashis, Durga devi uske husband sab kamre se bahar nikal kar hall me pahunche....


Durga devi.... Bahar kaun hai, tumhara naam le kar chilla kyon rahe hain ......


Tabhi gate se ander aate Jivisha ke papa Himanshu Rajput bole .... "Main hun Jivish ka pita aur ye hai humari puri family"......


Darwaje par ek chhote se intro ke baad sabhi baith gaye hall me .... fir kya tha, sabhi log dayen bayen adjust karke baith chuke the aur insan ke madhya me Jivisha kisi mujrim ki tarah khadi thi. Fir shuru hua ek-ek karke sawolon ki bauchhar…...


Pahle he sawal par clean bold thi Jivisha jab ghar walon ko ye pata chala ki shadi se bhag kar Jivisha ne kisi dusre ladkey shadi kar li.... Jabki iss baat par Durga devi, apne husband aur Ashis ka muh dekh rahi thi.... Kyonki Durga devi ko to Jivisha ki shadi ke bare me kuch aur he bataya gaya tha....


Ab bechari Jivisha, uski juban jaise halak me atak si gayi ho.... pani ke ghunt par ghunt pi rahi thi par juban se koi bhi sabd nahi nikal rahe the.... Tabhi entry hui Nischal aur Nandni ki .... ek side se Jivisha ki family aur thik uske pass se Nandni ki family aur bilkul center me Jivisha.... Pura shant mahol.....


Nischal ko dekhte he uss shant mahol me Durga devi ki awaz gunji aur wo kahne lagi ..."Yahi hai".... Mamla un dono ko kuch samjh me aata uss se pahle he Ansh bhi un dono ke pichhe-pichhe pahunch gaya...


Ansh me na to wahan chal rahe mamle ko samjha... aur na he mahol dekha.... bas Nandni ka hath pakar kar rote huye kahne laga.... "Yadi tumhe yahi ladka pasand tha to mujh se pyar ka natak kyon ki. Sidha bol deti main iss ladkey se pyar karti hun"....


Nischal, jiske bare me abhi dono pariwar yahi jante the ki Nischal aur Jivisha ne bhag kar shadi ki .... ab lo ji ek aur nayi baat ek dum se samne aa gayi.... Nandni aur Nischal ek dusre se pyar karte hain...... Shocked ho kar sab khadey ho gaye.....
:lol: ho gaya syapa ab ye jivisha ka mamla kya kam tha jo ye dr ansh bhi aa gaya hai :hehe:
 

Indrajeet

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Doston ... Aaj kal main "Kaisa ye Ishq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai"... Iss kahani ka end likhne me vyast hun .. jo mere khyal se Sunday tak pura ho jayega...

Uske baad "
Bhanwar" Ke update aane shuru honge... Jiska ek part end ho chuka hai aur final part ending ke ore hai...jo mere khyal se ab jyada dur bhi nahi hai..

Dhanywad
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Nevil singh

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Doston ... Aaj kal main "Kaisa ye Ishq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai"... Iss kahani ka end likhne me vyast hun .. jo mere khyal se Sunday tak pura ho jayega...

Uske baad "
Bhanwar" Ke update aane shuru honge... Jiska ek part end ho chuka hai aur final part ending ke ore hai...jo mere khyal se ab jyada dur bhi nahi hai..

Dhanywad
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Dil bahlta hai mera aapke aa jane se.
 
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