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Agla update aap sab ki salah ke baad hi aayegi.

Kahani aage likhna hai ya nahi ye aap sab ke comments pe depend krta hai
 

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Update-3(laalach)
Subah ho gayi thi.par abhi bhi sheema ki nind nahi khuli thi.dair raat tak usse nind nahi aayi thi ye soch kar ke ki uss Kalash main kya hoga.



Sheetal-sheema uth ja beta.chal bakriyo ko bhi ghass khilane le jana hai.or ladkiya bhi lani hai.



Sheema -mujhe abhi or sone do ma.

Sheetal -are uth dekh zeba tera intejaar kar rahi hai.

Ye baat jaise hi uske kaan main jati hai.wo turant uth ke baith jati hai.



Samne zeba thi.

Zeba-jaldi chal na dekh aaj kitna achha dhoop nikal aaya hai.



Sheema-are sauch to ho lu.

Zeba-are chal na jungle main hi kar lena or kapde lele maine bhi le liya hai.wahin talab main naha lenge.



Or wo dono nikal jate hai.



Zeba- jaldi chal na kahi kisi ko na mil jaiye.



Dono wahan pahuch jate hai.or us kalas ka nikal ke kholne lagte hai.



Uske andar se ek laal kapde main kuch lipta tha.kholne pe do kitab nilki or ek chitti.



Sheema-are ye to koi khajana nahi bus kuch kitabe hai.



Or wo us chithi ko uthati hai or padhne lagti hai.





Ye kitab mamuli nahi hai is main bohot si sktiya hai jo jagai ja sakti hai.jis se koi bhi aadmi amar ho sakta hai.uske pass bohot si saktiya aa jaingi.uske liye pehle number wali kitab ki jarurat hogi.lekin jisko ye kitab milti hai usse pehle dusri kitab padhni chahiye.taki jo galti mujh se hui hai wo na ho.





Zeba-kya hum amar ban sakte hai? kya hum phir kabhi nahi marenge?

Sheema-chal na padhte hai.



Dono kitab pe number likhe huye the.1 or 2



Sheema-Pehle 2 number padhna hai.

Zeba-are dekh 2 number wala kitna bada hai 100 page honge.pehke ye ek number wala padh na bus 10 ya 20 page hi lag rahe hai.

Sheema -thik hai padhti hu.



Is karm ko karne ke liye ek purush chahiye jo karm ke baad kendrit purus banjaiga.

Kendrit mard ki khasiyat.

1.umar hum logon se 10 guna jyada.matlab agr humari Umar 10 saal aage badegi to uska ek saal.jaldi budha nahi hoga.



2.sareer gathila aur kathor hoga.purusarth main bhi samanye logon se kai guna jyda hoga.



3.hasmukh hoga tatha sab logon ki madad krne ki pravritti hone lagegi.



4.isse mara nahi ja sakta hai.na jala ke ,na dubo ke ,na kaat ke.



5.kuch taakte aa jaingi dheere dheere.jaise kisi ke charitra ke baare main janna,maan ki baat jaan lena.dimaag padna.



Kendrit mard ki kamiya



1.kendrit mard ko harek din ek baar kam se kam ek bund stan ka dudh pina hoga.nahi to wo koma main chala jaiga.

2.halka dimag se kamjoor hone lagega.samanya logon se bhi kam.par inka upaye hai.ye thik ho sakta hai.iske liye kisi guru ki sahayata leni hogi.

3.shraap badhne se kamukta badegi.



4.kendrit purus ke paridhi(rani or maha rani) ko katam karke usse mara ja sakta hai.





Sheema-Ab hum purush kahan se laaye.

Zeba-are aamir hai na usse le lenge.

Sheema-kon aamir shaheen baji ka beta?? Are wo to dudh pita bacha hai.



Zeba-humme to dudh pita bachha hi to chahiye.main usse utha laungi.khala hu koi galat to nahi hi kar rahi hu.amar hi to kar rahi hu.



Sheema-achha achha thik main main aage padhti hu.



Sath hi visham sankhya main stri chahiye.jaise kam se kam 3 .ye sankhya 5,7 ya 9 hi ho sakti hai.is se na jyada na kum.is striyo main se ek maha rani hogi.



Zeba-are yaar ab ek or ladki kahan se laaye.



Sheema-(kuch soch kar)ek kaam kar skte hai hum shaheen baji ko bhi sath le lete hai.



Zeba-wo manegi?? Lagta to nahi .par try karungi.tu aage padh.





Maha Rani ki khasiyat

1.amar umra dheere dheere badhegi.ek dum kendrit mard ki tarah.



2.ye bhi mar nahi sakti hai.

3.ye apna roop badal sakti hai.or dheere dheere alag alag tarah ki takte aane lagegi.

4.kendrit mard ko coma se bahar la skti hai.

5.iss vidya ke data saitaan halo ko kendrit mard main bula ke us se soda kar sakti hai.



Maha Rani ki kamiya



1.laalach aane lagega.

2.kendrit purush isse maar skta hai.ek aam insaan ki tarah hi ye mar jaigi.

3.tantra karne ka maha srapp milega.



Baki ki paridhi wali auratein rani kehlayengi.

Rani ki khasiyat

1.same maha rani jaise hogi

2.inko takat chunne ko milengi.un main se ek inko milega.alag alag raniya alag alag sakti le sakti hai.

Rani ki kamiya

1.wahi hai jo maha rani main tha.



Takat ke prakaar

1.gayab hona

2.time main pichhe jana.

3.vashikaran.(mind control)

4.rup badalna.

5.healing power.

6.samaye ko rokna.

7.chhota ya bada ho jana size main.

8.kisi ki memory padna.

9.teliport hona.



Zeba-main maha rani banungi

Sheema-are waah aise kaise main maha rani banungi.

Zeba-are ban jana.dono to ek jaise hi hai.ab jungle ke andar chal lakadiya chunte hai.warna phir andhera ho jaiga.or lakadiya kam milegi.



Dono ek ek kitab ko le kar apne dupatta main bandh leti hai.or lakadiya chunne jungle main chali jati hai.
 
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Update-4.(Aash pados-1)


Wahi dusre or

Zafar ke ghar main

Rafi-kya?? pata chala ??wo kon thi 5 auratein.

Zafar-nahi rafi bhai jaan.wahi to pata karne ki kosish kar raha hu.us samaye to 12 auratein mari thi.kitne beramhi se mara tha usne.



Rafi-saitan tha wo.uss raat ka soch ke rognte khade ho jate hai.



Tab tak wahan hariya aa jata hai.



Hariya are zafar bhai jara chilam bana na.ab ek maar ke hi jaunga aaj bazar.



Rafi-haan haan banao aaj maine bhi nahi piya hai ab tak.


Zafar-aaj aapdono ko apne aagan ki pilata hu.

Or wahi se ek pudiya nikali or chilam banane laga.



Rafi-are hariya kuch kaam tha kya bazar se.



Hariya-reema bitiya ki farmaish hai.gajad ka halwa khane ka.to wahi bahar se leta aaunga.



Zafar-lo taiyaar hai.



Hariya chilam pi ke waha se bajaar nikal jata hai



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New intro zafar family

Fatima-38 saal bibi.

Abdul-jafar ke abu.ab iss duniya main nahi hai.inki wife bhi us narbhakshi ke dwara mari gayi.

Sadaam-bada bhai kisi ne raat main katl kar diya tha.aaj tak pata nahi chala.

Salma-50 saal sadaam ki bibi.

Shaheen-28 saal .salma ki beti.shadi suda ek beta hai.



Bholu family

Bibi bohot pehle hi maar gayi.cancer ho gaya tha.

Ek beta hai mukesh 35 saal ka sadi suda.truck chalata hai.

Champa-30 saal mukesh ki bb.2 bache hai.judwa

Nimmi-beti hai sadi suda or apne sasural main hai.



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Hariya ke ghar main 3 bade bade room the ghar O shaped tha.bich main aagan or tino taraf ek kamre.ek hariya ka,ek main sheema or reema soti thi or ek main rakesh sota tha.
rakesh wala kamra kuch chhota tha.karan tha ki usse main se ek or kamra tha jahan gaaye(cow) or bakariya(goat) rehti thi.

ghar main ek kone main sheemake kamre ke side,ek chhota sa bath room tha nahane ke liye.

jispe ek purani si saree daali hui hoti.upar se us main chhat bhi nahi tha.agar koi chhat pe ho to wo puri tarah se bathroom ko dekh sakta hai.

Jab sheetal sheema ya reema naha rahi hoti.to hariya or rakesh chhat par nahi jate the.

Unke Jane ke baad hi ye nahate.ya jungle ke bich main jharne pe nahate.haan wahan thoda khatra hota tha.hinshak janwar rehte the wahan.

Ped par chadh kar hi jaan bachai ja sakti thi.

haan hagne unko bahar hi Jana padta tha.

12 baj chuke the.

Sheetal aangan main baith kar bartan dho rahi thi.wahi ek naali thi jis se ho ke pani pichhe khet main ja rahi thi.

Rakesh apne dosto ke sath bahar tha.

Reema naha rahi thi.

Naaz aayi Hui thi.or reema ke naha ke nikalne ka wait kar rahi thi. Or baith ke sheetal se baat kar rahi thi.

Naaz-chachi jaan ek baat puchhu.aap bataiyega.

Sheetal -haan puch kyu nahi bataungi.agar pata hoga to jarur bataungi.puch kya puchna hai.

Naaz-badi chachi jaan ko kya hua tha.kon mara tha unko.bataiye na ab to main. Badi ho gayi hu.

Sheetal -main bata dungi.par ek sart pe ki tum kisi ko nahi bataugi.

Naaz-haan haan main kyu bataungi kisi ko.

Sheetal batane hi wali thi ki piche se reema naha ke aa jati hai.

Reema-chal ab chhat pe chal ke padha hai.
Dono ka iss baar dasvi ka board ka exam tha.
Ab thoda rakesh pe chalte hai.humara rakesh B.A. 1st year main dakhila liya hai.thoda sarmila aur introvert type.uske kuch hi dost the.

Rakesh apne ek dost ke sath uske ghar gaya hua tha.
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Sonu age 22 saal rakesh ka dost.

Mahendra gupta sonu ke pita.purva sarpanch.ab iss duniya main nahi hai.log inhe gupta g hi bulate hai.

Santi-70 ke ass pass sudheer ki maa .chal phir nahi sakti.

Sudheer-35 saal.sonu ke bade bhai.ye railway main TTE ka kaam karte hai.3 saal ho gaye hai shadi ko or ek beta bhi hai.

Komal-age 25 saal.sudheer ki bibi.

Khushi-19 saal sonu ki chhoti behen.inter main hai.
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Komal rakesh ko bolti hai "devar g chai pijiye ga ya coffee".
Tab sonu hasne lagta hai.

Sonu-bhabhi ye chai nahi pita.bolta hai chai achhi chiz nahi hai.iss pagal ko chai ke sashe ka nahi pata hai.kya aanand aata hai ek hath main chai or ek hath main. Sii...... Or ruk jata hai.
Komal samajh to jati hai. phir bhi puchti hai.

Komal-Or kya??
Sonu-kuch nahi bhabhi.

Komal-chhodo nahi batana to mat batao.

Or rakesh ke taraf dekhte huye.apne saree ke pallu ko side kar ke apne ek side ke blouse ko dikhate huye jo uske dudh se bhinge huye the.

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Komal-doodh to pite hoge.ki wo bhi nahi ??



Rakesh ek najar un dudh se bhari chuchiyon pe dalta hai.



Wo ek dum bhing gayi thi.andar blouse ke unhone kuch nahi pehna tha.unke nipple dikh rahe the.



Tab tak sonu bol pada.



Sonu-ye sirf Ghar ka dudh hi pita hai.kehta hai bahar milawat wala milta hai.



Komal-aishi baat hai.tab ab main kya kar sakti hu.



Rakesh-aap rehne dijiye bhabhi humme bus Pani de dijiye.
 

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Bhai apke kahani mein suru mein itne jyda characters hogye aur story kisi ek pe focus hi nhi ho rhi ... Sab pe jump kr rhi jisse samjh hi nhi arhaa kuch v chal kya rha...
 
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Phle to mukhe lga wo dood pita bacha hero banega dheere dheere kitaab k ache bure dono side ko use karke uski dono mausi/Khala k madad se phir kahani kahin aur hi chali gyi...
 
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Update-5(Kon hoga kendrit purush?)



Wahi bajaar main hariya gajar leta hai or Ghar ka kuch samaan leta hai or Ghar ke liye nikal jata hai.wo sochta hai ki ghar na ja ke sidhe jungle chale jata hu. Whan pahuch ke lakadiyo ko cycle pe le ke aaunga.

Wahi zeba or sheema lakadiya chun leti hai.or wahi jungle ke bich main jharne main nahane lagti hai.dono ko ped pe chadna aata tha to dikkat nahi thi jungli janwaro se.



Phir dono naha ke pahi baith ke aage ki kitab padhne lagti hai.



Kuch jaruri samaan.

1.kaala kapda ek kendrit purush ke liye

2.laal kapda rani or maha rani ke liye



Tab tak zeba ko dur se hariya ki cycle ki ganti sunai padta hai.

Zeba-sheema tere chacha aa rahe hai idhar.



Dono milkar ke kitab ko apne dupatta main bandh leti hai.unke pass or bhi kitab thi jo unke college ki thi.

Hariya bhi unke pass pahuch jata hai.



Hariya-sheema ho gaya beta.chal aaj tujhe bhi aaram mil jaiga.laad saari lakadiyo ko cycle pe.



Or lakdi ko cycle pe le ke or bakariya ko bhi leke ve log wahan se nikal jate hai.



Zeba- kahan gaye the chacha jaan??

Hariya-bazar gaya tha bitiya rani,reema ka maan tha gajar ka.



Hariya aage aage chal Raha tha or zeba aur sheema piche.



Zeba-(sheema se)dekh to ek teri behen hai,abhi se gajar chahiye usse or ek to hai ungli se bhi darti hai.



Sheema usse gusse se dekhti hai.



Zeba-sun na tu bol de na apne chacha se ki humme zafar chacha jaan ke yahan Jana hai saheen aapi se milne.tabhi na hum baat kar painge.



Sheema wahi se jor se bolti hai.



Sheema-chal ha aap chalo ghar hume shaheen aapi ke ghar jana hai.unke bete ke sath khelna hai.



Hariya -thik hai thik hai chali jao.main leke chala jaunga.haan bus raat hone ke pehle aa jana.



Hariya ghar ki or nikal jata hai or ye dono zafar ke yahan.



Zafar ke ghar main...



Zeba sari baat bata deti hai.



Shaheen-main taiyaar hu.kon nahi chahega ki usse itni achhi saktiya mile.par meri ek sart hai.main maha rani banungi.kyu ki kendrit purush Mera beta banega or usse coma ke maha rani hi wapas la skti hai.main uske pass hardum rahungi.



Sheema(chidh kar)thik hai thik hai ban jana maha rani aap.



Or tino book nikal ke padhne lagte hai.





Jaruri saman

1.kaala kapda ek kendrit purush ke liye

2.laal kapda rani or maha rani ke liye

3.ek lohe ka tukda.

4.ittar ki sisi

5.ek katora khoon

6.stan ka doodh.

7.kendrit purush ban ne wala ka virya.





Itna padhte hi saheen bol uthi.

Saheen -ye kaise hoga ab?humme to koi bada purush hi chahiye.

Sabhi soch main pad jate hai.unke sapno ka mahal jaise taash ke patto jaise bikhar Gaya tha.



Zeba-ek kaam kar sakte hai.sheema tu rakesh ka virya to la sakti hai na.



Saheen-kya ye kaise laayegi.wo to iska bhai hai na.



Sheema-sarma ke apna face niche kar leti hai.



Zeba-are aapi wo rakesh hai na ek number ka behen chood hai.apni behen ko chhat pe chhad ke chhip chhip ke nahate dekhta hai.or kabhi kabhi iski bra main virya bhi nikal deta hai.wo to noor aapi aayi thi to unhone hi bataya ki ye virya hai.hum dono ko to laga kisi ne naak saaf kiya hai.



Saheen-tab to rakesh ko hi kendrit purush banana padega.



Zeba-ye sahi rahega.(Sheema ke taraf dekh ke aankh maar ke)tu apni bra leti aana apne bhaiya se malai lagwa ke.



Sabhi husne lagte hai.



Sheema-par iss baar kendrit purush Mera bhai hoga to maha rani main banungi.



Sabhi iss baat pe sahmat ho jaate hai.kal raat ka time thik kiya jata hai iss kriya ko karne ke liye.



Dono(zeba aur sheema) wahan se apne ghar nikal jate hai.







Ab chalte hai rakesh ki taraf.dekhte hai wahan kya hua.



Sonu ka ghar sahar main tha.isse sahar bhi nahi kaha ja sakta.ek chhota sa kasba tha.haan wahan light thi.par gaon main nahi.

gupta g ke dehant ke baad log yahi aa gaye the or yahi ghar bana liye the .yahan se sudheer ko station Jane main dikkat bhi nahi hoti or raat biraat wo ghar bhi aa jata.

Dono sonu ke room main the or kuch computer main dekh rahe the.

Screen pe ek ladki laha rahi thi.dono apna apna Lund nikal ke hila rahe the.



Rakesh-tu hi Sacha dost hai kya chez dikhaya hai.maza aa gaya.

Ye ladki koi or nahi sonu ki behen khusi thi jo hana rahi thi.or bathroom main phone rakh ke sonu ne uski recording ki thi.



Rakesh kushi ke badan ko dekh ke sochta hai ki jab iska bada. Aisha hai to sheema or reema ka kaisa hoga.dono to gadra gayi hai.



Haan rakesh unko dekhne ka try Kiya tha par ab tak safal nahi ho paya tha.



Sonu-ruk tujhe ek or mast chiz dikhata hu.

Or wo ek or video play kar deta hai.jisme komal bathroom main apne chuchiyon ko daba daba ke dudh nikal rahi thi.



Unki chuchiya ek dum gore gore the.haan thoda sa latak gaya tha.sayad dudh ke vajah se.



Ye dekh ke mere se control nahi hua or main wahin pe jhar gaya.



Sonu-are yaar yahin ganda kar diya.ye le iss se saaf karde.

Rakesh-are ye to bra hai.kiski hai?

Sonu-kushi ki main issi main muth marta hu.



Rakesh bhi sochta hai kitna achha hai iska .pata nahi Mera baag kab khulega.kal pakka sheema di ke bra main maal nikalunga.par moka bhi to nahi milta.



Dono kuch dair baat karte hai or Rakesh wahan se ghar nikal jata hai.
 
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