Erotica Jawani Ke Dushman

[Takur Baba]

Once again a promising story left unfinished. Hope the writer comes back and finish it

 

[uncle_sam]

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Bus ruki aur zoya bhagte hute tez kadmo k sath ghar ki taraf chal di...uska gala sookha hua tha hat pair thande hore the..kese tese kar k ghar me ghusi.
Khala: Agyi beta kesa raha pehla din ?


Zoya bina jawab diye seedha bathroom me ghus gyi..gate lock kar k deewar se sat k baith gyi uske pair kaap rahe the...usko us ladki ko skirt se nikalta vo lund bar bar dikh raha tha aankhe band krne pe..(zoya kabhi in sab chakkr me nai padi par itni biology to usko bhi pata thi) par apni ankho k samne chalti bas me ye sab dekh k usko jese yakeen nai hora tha ki kese itna bada or mota lund kisi ladki k andar sama sakta hai vo bhi bheed me bhari hui chalti bus me..


Jese tese zoya ne face wash kiya or bahar aayi..usne khala ko bahana mar diya ki college me kuch kha liya tha to pet kharab hogya...is liye kisi se baat nai karna usko vo chup chaap jake apne bed pe let gyi..


Ghar pe sab ko lga ki pehla din tha college ka to thak gyi hogi or fir pet kharab hai to khane oe bhi kisi ne nai uthaya usko...zoya kisi besudh ki trha soti rahi sara time..


Tabhi raat k 2 baje kareeb pyaas se uski ankh khuli...poore ghar me andhera tha..usne time dekha 2 bajne me 10 min. Baki thi..usko hairat hui ki kese vo itni der so gyi..vo uthi bathroom gyi kitchen se pani piya aur wapas mud k jab dekha to saba apne bistar se gayab thi .. Uska dil jese Ruk sa gaya..usko pata tha rat me saba kaha hoti hai ...or usko wahi sab yaad aagya us raat ka dekha hua...zoya sab kuch bula k seedha apne bed pe jaake let gyi..par ab uski ankho me neend ki ek jhalak tak nai thi..vo sona chaah rahi thi par bar bar reh reh k usko saba ka khali pada bistar dikhra tha or uske zehen me kuch raat pehle jo cheeze dekhi thi vo chalne lagi thi...
Naa chaahte huiye bhi insaan curiosity ko maar nai sakta...chaahe kitna bhi struggle kar le..zoya bho haar hi gyi curiosity k aage or dabe kadmo se chat ki taraf chal di jaha Arjun ka kamra tha.

< To Be Continued >
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[uncle_sam]

Zoya ki zindagi me bhuchal aane wala hai..seedhi sadi zoya jiski life ka gadi ab patri se utar kar tabahi machane wali hai..zoya is baat se anjaan hai aur be khabr hai ki uske is safar me usko kitne naye sathi milne wale hai...

Stay Tuned.

 

[uncle_sam]

Once again a promising story left unfinished. Hope the writer comes back and finish it

Perfect example of why one should not loose hope

 

[uncle_sam]

Full interfaith hona chahiye..

Koshish karu ga sabki zaroorato ko poora karne ki

 

[uncle_sam]

Koi nai

Full speed k sath story ki wapsi hogyi hai..stay tuned

 

[uncle_sam]

Guys ab agla update 2024 july 20 ko ayga ... lol

12 August 2025 ko aagya hai Update aur ab kahani khatam hoke hi rahegi

 

[uncle_sam]

Acca chal rahan hain..

Aage aur bhi achcha hai..plz thnx for your love and patience

 

[uncle_sam]

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Bahar angan me bht andhera tha..zoya jese tese dabe paave stairs chadte huye..chat pe bane kamre k samne jaa pohchi..jiske andar sirf ek zero watt ka laal rang ka bulb jal ra tha..poori chat pe andera pada tha...chat ki banawat esi thi ki jab stairs chad k upar aao to samne khuli chat or pani ki badi badi 2 tanki thi 1000 ltr. Wali or tanki left side hi kamra bana tha jaha arjun rehta tha..kamre me ek gate the ek window ko jo band rehti thi or window me hi upar ki taraf ek chota sa roshandan tha jo ko zada bada to nai tha par agar window se sat k dekha jaaye to poora kamra dikh jayega andar ka...is hi roshandan se zoya ne last time saba ko arjun ka lund chooste huye dekha tha...
Par ye roshandan window me upar ki taraf tha to zoya ko kuch chaahiye tha jispe chad k vo waha tak pohach sake aur andar dekh sakte...

Zoya to andhere me wahi chota plastic ka stool dikhta hai..jispe vo last time chad k dekh rahi thi..usne dabe paav vo stool uthaya or window k neeche rakh k uspe khadi ho gyi..stool itna chauda tha k bas zoya ki dono tange hi aapari thi uspe..

Zoya stool pe khadi hui or roshandan me usne apni aankhe gadai...aur....fir se uske kano me sannata chaah gaya...aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi...samne ka manzar dekh k zoya ki ankhe shock se badi hoti jaa rahi thi..

Andar saba poori nangi thi or kisi kutiya ki trha bed pe ulti baithu hui thi arjun...poora nanga uske peeche kisi janwar ki trha dhakko ki barish krra tha apni kamar hila hila ke..Arjun saba ko kamar se pakade tha majbooti se or poori takat k sath dhakke pe dhakka mare jara tha..aur *pat-pat* ki awaaz se kamra goonj raha tha...saba ki awaz k naam pe bas "aaah. Aaah uuuuhhh aaaaaah aram se aaaaah" yahi nikal raha tha zoya bina palke jhapkaye ek tak dekhe jaari thi ye poora scene..

Arjun rukta hai..or saba ke peeche se hat ta hai or fir zoya ki ankho k samne aata hai Arjun ka 8 inch ka mota kala lund ko saba k chut k pani se bheega hua tha aur chamak raha tha..lund bahar nikalte hi saba kisi lash ki trha bed me gir jaati hai..zoya ki nazre arjun k lund se hat nai rahi thi..kisi pathar ki trha sakht dikhra tha vo...arjun bed se utar k aaya aur pani ki bottle utha k pani peene laga..is beech uska lund hawa me jhool raha tha..
Pani pee k arjun bed pe gaya..

Arjun: chal raand tange chaudi kar or kutiya banja...

Saba ghabra k: nai arjun tumne wada kiya tha ki maheene me bas 1 bar karoge peeche se plzz bht takleef hoti hai samjo.

Arjun: Chup sali..2 saal se teri chut ka bhosda bana diya hai maine or kitna chodu...chup chap gand khol wrna teri ye chut bhi chodna band kar duga...

Ye sunke jese saba ko sadma lag gaya..

Saba: nai babu kesi baate krte ho mai tumhari hi to hu..jo marzi karo..

( saba ka pati to tha nai or uski umar bhi ab 28 k paar hogyi thi doosri shadi hona mushkil thi or uski chut ko lund ki khurak bas arjun hi de sakta tha...jo ki ghar me hi tha uske..vo ghar k lund ko khona nai chahti thi or chup chaap Arjun ki baat maan k usko gand dene k liye ready ho jati hai)

Idhar zoya jab sunti hai ki 2 saal se Arjun saba k sath ye sab krra hai uske to hosh us jate hai or isi ghabraht me uska ek pair stool se neeche aata hai or tez awaz k sath vo zmeen pe gir jaati hai..

Doosri taraf kamre me Arjun k lund ka topa saba ki gand me ghusa hi tha ki bahr se tez awaz aati hai..saba ki dar k maare gand fat jati hai aur vo bed k peeche chup jaati hai...Arjun seedha bhag k gate kholta hai or bahar vo jo dekhta hai to ek pal ko uske bhi hosh ud jate hai..

Bahar zameen pe zoya giri padi thi uske hat pair thar thar kaap rahe the..aankho me khauf itna tha jese koi bhoot dekh liya ho usne .. Arjun nanga zoya k samne khada tha..uska kala mota lund zoya k sar k upar tha.. zoya k mu se awaz nai nikal rahi thi...arjun ne window ki taraf pade stool ki taraf dekha jo ki ab toot chuka tha..ye samjhne me usko der nai lagi ki zoya yaha kya krri thi..udhar zoya ki saase upar neeche hori thi jese usko heart attack hi aajayega...ki tabhi room se halki si dari awaz aati hai
Kya hua Arjun ? Kaun h bahar ..
Arjun zoya ki ankho me dekh kar uske mu k samne apne lund pe hath rakhta hai lund ki chamdi aage peeche karne lagta hai aur zoya ki ankho me dekh k apne lund ko hilate huye saba ko jawab deta hai..

Arjun: kuch nai billi hai..daro mat..

Aur lund ko hilata hua karme k andar chala jata hai...

Arjun k jaate hi Zoya jese kisi coma se bahar aati hai or zameen se uth k seedha neeche bhagti hai aur apne bed pe jaake let jaati hai..uska dil esey dhakad raha rha jese fat k bahar aajayega...uske dimag me 1000 sawal chal rahe the ...par abhi usko samjh nai aara tha vo dil ko sambhale ya dimag ko..ek ajeeb si behoshi chane lagti hai uski ankho k samne or dheere dheere zoya ki ankhe band ho jati hai..


< To Be Continued >

 

[Sushil@10]

< Update >

Bahar angan me bht andhera tha..zoya jese tese dabe paave stairs chadte huye..chat pe bane kamre k samne jaa pohchi..jiske andar sirf ek zero watt ka laal rang ka bulb jal ra tha..poori chat pe andera pada tha...chat ki banawat esi thi ki jab stairs chad k upar aao to samne khuli chat or pani ki badi badi 2 tanki thi 1000 ltr. Wali or tanki left side hi kamra bana tha jaha arjun rehta tha..kamre me ek gate the ek window ko jo band rehti thi or window me hi upar ki taraf ek chota sa roshandan tha jo ko zada bada to nai tha par agar window se sat k dekha jaaye to poora kamra dikh jayega andar ka...is hi roshandan se zoya ne last time saba ko arjun ka lund chooste huye dekha tha...
Par ye roshandan window me upar ki taraf tha to zoya ko kuch chaahiye tha jispe chad k vo waha tak pohach sake aur andar dekh sakte...

Zoya to andhere me wahi chota plastic ka stool dikhta hai..jispe vo last time chad k dekh rahi thi..usne dabe paav vo stool uthaya or window k neeche rakh k uspe khadi ho gyi..stool itna chauda tha k bas zoya ki dono tange hi aapari thi uspe..

Zoya stool pe khadi hui or roshandan me usne apni aankhe gadai...aur....fir se uske kano me sannata chaah gaya...aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi...samne ka manzar dekh k zoya ki ankhe shock se badi hoti jaa rahi thi..

Andar saba poori nangi thi or kisi kutiya ki trha bed pe ulti baithu hui thi arjun...poora nanga uske peeche kisi janwar ki trha dhakko ki barish krra tha apni kamar hila hila ke..Arjun saba ko kamar se pakade tha majbooti se or poori takat k sath dhakke pe dhakka mare jara tha..aur *pat-pat* ki awaaz se kamra goonj raha tha...saba ki awaz k naam pe bas "aaah. Aaah uuuuhhh aaaaaah aram se aaaaah" yahi nikal raha tha zoya bina palke jhapkaye ek tak dekhe jaari thi ye poora scene..

Arjun rukta hai..or saba ke peeche se hat ta hai or fir zoya ki ankho k samne aata hai Arjun ka 8 inch ka mota kala lund ko saba k chut k pani se bheega hua tha aur chamak raha tha..lund bahar nikalte hi saba kisi lash ki trha bed me gir jaati hai..zoya ki nazre arjun k lund se hat nai rahi thi..kisi pathar ki trha sakht dikhra tha vo...arjun bed se utar k aaya aur pani ki bottle utha k pani peene laga..is beech uska lund hawa me jhool raha tha..
Pani pee k arjun bed pe gaya..

Arjun: chal raand tange chaudi kar or kutiya banja...

Saba ghabra k: nai arjun tumne wada kiya tha ki maheene me bas 1 bar karoge peeche se plzz bht takleef hoti hai samjo.

Arjun: Chup sali..2 saal se teri chut ka bhosda bana diya hai maine or kitna chodu...chup chap gand khol wrna teri ye chut bhi chodna band kar duga...

Ye sunke jese saba ko sadma lag gaya..

Saba: nai babu kesi baate krte ho mai tumhari hi to hu..jo marzi karo..

( saba ka pati to tha nai or uski umar bhi ab 28 k paar hogyi thi doosri shadi hona mushkil thi or uski chut ko lund ki khurak bas arjun hi de sakta tha...jo ki ghar me hi tha uske..vo ghar k lund ko khona nai chahti thi or chup chaap Arjun ki baat maan k usko gand dene k liye ready ho jati hai)

Idhar zoya jab sunti hai ki 2 saal se Arjun saba k sath ye sab krra hai uske to hosh us jate hai or isi ghabraht me uska ek pair stool se neeche aata hai or tez awaz k sath vo zmeen pe gir jaati hai..

Doosri taraf kamre me Arjun k lund ka topa saba ki gand me ghusa hi tha ki bahr se tez awaz aati hai..saba ki dar k maare gand fat jati hai aur vo bed k peeche chup jaati hai...Arjun seedha bhag k gate kholta hai or bahar vo jo dekhta hai to ek pal ko uske bhi hosh ud jate hai..

Bahar zameen pe zoya giri padi thi uske hat pair thar thar kaap rahe the..aankho me khauf itna tha jese koi bhoot dekh liya ho usne .. Arjun nanga zoya k samne khada tha..uska kala mota lund zoya k sar k upar tha.. zoya k mu se awaz nai nikal rahi thi...arjun ne window ki taraf pade stool ki taraf dekha jo ki ab toot chuka tha..ye samjhne me usko der nai lagi ki zoya yaha kya krri thi..udhar zoya ki saase upar neeche hori thi jese usko heart attack hi aajayega...ki tabhi room se halki si dari awaz aati hai
Kya hua Arjun ? Kaun h bahar ..
Arjun zoya ki ankho me dekh kar uske mu k samne apne lund pe hath rakhta hai lund ki chamdi aage peeche karne lagta hai aur zoya ki ankho me dekh k apne lund ko hilate huye saba ko jawab deta hai..

Arjun: kuch nai billi hai..daro mat..

Aur lund ko hilata hua karme k andar chala jata hai...

Arjun k jaate hi Zoya jese kisi coma se bahar aati hai or zameen se uth k seedha neeche bhagti hai aur apne bed pe jaake let jaati hai..uska dil esey dhakad raha rha jese fat k bahar aajayega...uske dimag me 1000 sawal chal rahe the ...par abhi usko samjh nai aara tha vo dil ko sambhale ya dimag ko..ek ajeeb si behoshi chane lagti hai uski ankho k samne or dheere dheere zoya ki ankhe band ho jati hai..


< To Be Continued >

Nice update