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[Raja maurya]

UPDATE 12

Nind jab khuli to apne baaho me ek komal sharir ko paya jo ki koi aur nahi yahi kal hi mili us aurat ka tha . Na chahte hue bhi mere hath uske ubhare hue urojo par chale gaye .

Uski blouse ke upar se doodho ke maslanepar Asmita ki nind khul gayi .Aur vo mere taraf dekhakar muskurane lagi.

Main kya karta main , meri is harkat pe sharma gaya aur apna hath pichhe le liya. ye dekhkar Usne Mera hath phirse apne urojo par rakh diya .

Is baar main muskura utha aur apna sidha hath blouse ke andar us sharir ke gole par daal Diya, safed blouse ki upar ki kuch hook kholne ke baad apne muh se Stano ko chusne laga .

" uuumm Aahhhhhhh kitne din tarasi hu" uske muh se badbaadana chalu tha, maine use ansuna kar stano ka raspan chalu rakha .

Mera josh jo ki uski siskari sunkar badhne laga tha, maine apne sharir ka pura bhaar us mulayam saree me lipti aurat ke sharir par daal Diya .
Vo mere sar ko sahlate hue sisakne lagi ,mera ek hath niche pet ko sahlate hue saree ke andar ghus gaya .

"Kya tum aise hi saree me soti ho "

Mere sawal par ek kutil muskan de kar "Nahi vo to bass Aap ke liye "

Maine is baat par uske us gore aur pariyo jaise khubsurat sharir ko dekh ke kaha.

"Lekin saree ki kya jarurat "

Ye kahte hue maine saree ko thoda upar karke us gori gori tango aur jhango par hath ghumaya aur thoda us mulayam sharir ko masal Diya.

Mera Josh behad upar chala Gaya tha.

Mujhe behad hi Jayda maja aa raha tha .lekin tabhi darvaje par kisi ki aavaj aayi .

Main ekdum se Situation ko samjh kar khada ho gaya .

Darvaje ke bahar koi nahi meri maa khadi thi .

" Kamal " darwaje ke bahar se phirse avaj aate hi maine darwaja khol diya .

Darwaja khulte hi.

"kaha the raat bhar, tumhari maine kitni der tak raah dekhi "

"Vo aane me der ho gayi thi Divya ke Ghar se aane me "

Maine ekdum rukhe tarike se jawab diya .

" Achha thik hai ,jaldi se tayari Karo Aaj main bahar Jaa Rahi hu ,agar late ho gaye to kapde nahi dhoungi."

Maa ke Ye kahte hi , maine pichhe dekha .
Asmita vaha se gayab thi ye dekhakar Maine rahat ki saans Li .

Brush le kar main chhat par chala gaya vaha par Asmita pahle se hi thi. mujhe dekhakar muskurai. lekin vo mere dada dadi aur Sunil aur mera bhai vishal ke sath baithi hui thi isiliye vo muskan kisiko samaj naa aaye aisi thi.

Mujhe ye dekhakar bura laga .

"To kab aa rahe hai vo " mere dada ji ne Asmita se puchha .

"Maine un se baat ki aaj shyam tak aa jayenge "

"To phir aap yaha par kaise aayi, mera matlab hai ki Us se bachakar" mere dadaji ke chehre par Darr bilkul saaf tha .

" Yaha aane ke liye Hamne bahot si jaane khoyi hai ,Sharada ji jinse aap ki baat Hui thi,unhe yaha apne parivar ko bachakar laane me apne pati ki Jaa tak kho baithi hai " Asmita ki baat sunkar sab shant ho gaye .

Main jaanta tha ki dada dadi ke liye ye kitna emotional topic tha Vah unka ghar tha .
bhalehi mujhe is parivar se koi sahanubhuti nahi thi lekin dada dadi aur nana nani ke liye mere Dil me chota sa mulayam bhag jarur tha.
Subah ka vatavaran behad shant tha ,sab log ke achanak utar chuke the .

" Sab kuch khatam ho chuka hai,pata nahi ki aur kitne bure din dikhaye jaayenge Amrit lok ke liye" Dadi ki baat par Asmita ki aankhe thodi nam ho gayi.

Mujhe ye dekh kar bura laga. Vo un sab ka ghar tha ,bhalehi mujhe us lok se abhi bhi lagav nahi lag raha tha, lekin mere liye uska in shaktiyo ke aane ke baad mahatva badh gaya tha. Jo ki vaicharik taur se us duniya se me Jud gaya tha.
Is gumsum mahol me
Mera bhai bol pada.

" Dada ji kya ham sab milkar us kharad ka khatma nahi kar sakte "

"Haa aise kitni hi shaktiya hogi uske pass " Bich me sunil bhi bol pada .

"Tum log abhi bhi nahi jaante ki shaktiyan kya hoti hai. use Amrit lok me se koi nahi hara sakta.
Upar se uske pass Jo jadui hathiyar hai , uski tum kalpna bhi nahi kar sakte use harana naa mumkin hai " ye kahte hue Asmita ne meri taraf dekha ye baat Vishal ne dekh li ,lekin use kuch samjh nahi aaya .

Tabhi dadaji ki najar meri taraf gayi.

" Aap shayad isase nahi mili hai ye mera sabse chota pota , iska (Vishal ki taraf ungli dikhakar) bhai " mere dadaji ke itne kahne par Vishal kaha chup rahta .

" Haa aur hamare Ghar me sabse lallu bhi yahi hai " Asmita ke saamne ye kahta dekh mujhe sahan naa hua. Lekin Mera man nahi tha jhagdne ka . Vaise bhi Ghar pe meri taraf se koi nahi tha jo mera paksh lega.

Asmita Behad khush thi ki vo Kamal yaani pritam ke sath thi .

Kitne saalo se vo is pal ka intejar kar rahi thi usne kitne kasht jhele the use hi pata tha .

Vo bass usne jo bhi kiya uske liye kisi prakar ki shabashi chahti thi Kamal se lekin use pata tha ki kamal ye baat nahi janta ki usne kya Saha tha .Amrita aur uske parivar ko surakshit rakhne ke liye .

Use pata tha ki kamal aur pritam me behad farak hai vo pritam ki rag rag se vakif thi .vahi use kamal ke baare me bahot kuch janna tha use apna banana tha .

Kamal ka bharosa jitna tha , Use ye saabit karke dena tha ki Kamal ka pura hak hai us par .
Tabhi uska jivan safal hoga .

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Phir kuch der baad main nahane chala gaya, mujhe nahate vakt darvaje ke pass Asmita ki ahat hote hi maine use andar khich liya.

Asmita ki uchayi mujhse kuchh Kam thi ,Vo ekdum se bidkate hue upar dekh bol padi .

" Ye kya tha? kisine dekh liya hota to "

" To kya ? " Mene aankho se usase sawal Kiya .

Vo upar meri taraf aankhe kar bol padi.

" Mujhe koi pareshani nahi hai , main to bass aapka soch rahi thi ."

" Achha Aisa hai to main agar sabke saamne aise chuvu to " ye kahte hue apna hath kamar me daalkar use khudse chipka diya .Mera sharir gila tha aur upar se uske vakrakar ka ahsaas lete hue uska sharir bhi thoda gila ho gaya.

" Achha ,agar aapko koi problem nahi hai to mujhe bhi koi farak nahi padta "

"Aisi baat hai , problem to mujhe bhi nahi hai lekin main in sab ko mere bare me nahi batana chahta"

Itna kahte hi maine use aor apne se chipkakar paani chalu kar diya aur dono bhi bhigne lage , Asmita apni aankhe jhatkate hue paani jo gaya tha vo usase bachane lagi . Tabhi me serious tone me bol pada.

" Vaise tum un dono ke sath bilkul baat nahi karogi "

Asmita sochte hue mere is serious swar ko dekhar kaha
"kis ke sath ?"

" Sunil aur vishal ke sath "

" Lekin kyu ? Vo to tumhare bhai hai naa "

" Nahi mera yaha koi apna nahi hai sab matlabi hai ,bass tum unse koi baat nahi karogi "

" Aisa kaise vo is ghar me hi rahte hai "

" Vo sab mujhe nahi pata "

" Matlab ki aap mujh par ab manmani dikhaoge "

" Nahi main to bass jo tumne khudke upar hak ki baat ki thi vahi hak jata raha hu, agar tum ye manjoor nahi to main samajh jaunga ki mera koi h.."

Ye kahte hi usne Apna hath mere muh par rakh diya . Aur lagbhag nam aankho se.

" Sorry Mera kahne ka vo matlab nahi tha , main to bass majak majak me bol gayi, aap ka pura hak hai mujhpar ,abse main nahi karungi un dono se baat "

Maine dukhi swar ko dekhakar uske chehre ko upar uthaya aur uske otho par oth rakh diye . Aur apni jibh se otho ko chatkar andar jaane ke liye dastak dene laga .

Maine jab meri jibh uske muh me daali to use vo khud chusne lag gayi .
Mere hath ab pichhe ki taraf ki golaiyo par chali gayi.
Maine use Chu kar dhire dhire maslane laga.

Asmita ab bina fikar ke mere sath gili ho chuki thi .uske sharir se vo saree chipki hui thi . Me behad kuch karna chahta tha lekin uske liye bahut time milega isiliye jaldi se naha liya .


Ab gila hone ki koi problem nahi thi maine Meri maa ki shaktiya absorb ki hui thi . Jisase ek jhatke uske kapde sukh Gaye .

Main kapde pahnakar jab room me aaya to vaha par Ashu bethi hui thi .

"Sab thik ,kya baat hai ,tabiyat kaisi hai tumhari "

" Kuch thik nahi hai " Ashu ka phula hua chehra dekhkar main uske pass aa gaya .

" Kya hua?"

" Meena didi ko sab pata hai vo ab ghar pe sab ko bata degi "

"Kya unhone to kaha tha ki kisi ko nahi batayegi "

" Haa mujhe bhi kah rahi thi ki unhe mera raaj pata hai lekin kisi ko nahi batayegi , lekin vo behad hoshiyar unhone kuch Naa kuch soch kar kaha hoga "

" Are Ashu tum itni chinta mat karo kuch nahi hone vaala , vo kisi ko nahi batayegi " Mujhe kisike pata chalne se itni problem nahi thi jitni Ashu ke gussa hone se thi.


" Lekin problem itni hi nahi hai? " usne Mera hath apne kandhe se hatakar

" Phir kya "

" Jis din se ham dono ye sab kiya tab se ..." Maine baat adhuri kaatkar.

" Haa jaanu mujhe pata hai,main bhi kaha, tab se tumhare alawa rah paa Raha hu "

" Tum bhi naa " mujhe marte hue "Meri baat to puri suno ,us din se mujhe Ajib Ajib aavaje sunayi de rahi hai "

" Matlab? "

" Matlab yahi ki mujhe logo ki aavaje sunayi de rahi hai main jab Meena didi se baat kar rahi thi tabhi unki aavaj mujhe aisa laga ki main unka dimag padh paa Rahi hu "

" Kya ?" Maine apna sar jhatkate hue.

" Aisa kaise kya tum abhi meri aavaj sun paa Rahi ho "

" Nahi "

" Matlab ki tum ab sabka dimag padh sakti ho mera chhod kar "

" Nahi aisi baat nahi hai, main dimaag padh nahi sakti lekin mujhe kuch kuch baate sunayi padti hai puri nahi achanak se jaisi baate agar koi jyada dimag me jor dekar bol raha ho to "

" To iska mujhse kya lena dena "

" Lena dena hai main kuch din pahle is tarah se dimag nahi padh sakti thi lekin ham dono ne jo kiya uske baad se mere sharir me behad se badlav aaye mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki meri shaktiyan badh gayi hai "

" Ye to achhi baat hai ,hai naa? Phir agar ek aur baar ham kare to tum aur jyada shaktishali ho jao kya pata is baar tum pura dimag control kar pao "

Ashu ne is baar meri taraf dekha aur muh banake mujhe ek mukka maar diya

" Tum naa bilkul tharki ho , serious baat kar rahi hu aur tum ho ke"

" Are yaar Main bhi seriously hi kah raha hu"

" Tum naa pagal ho chuke ho main nahi karne vaali kuch ab tumhare sath "

" Achha thik hai main dekhta hu ki kya hai vo shayad sabke sath aisa hi hota hoga jaise meri shaktiyan uske baad aayi vaise hi tumhari badh gayi hogi "

Meri baat par sochne ke baad Asmita bol padi.

" Lekin tumhari shaktiya usase related thi isiliye badhi Vo jadui aurat ne yahi kaha tha"

"Achha thik hai main kuch karta hu "

" Tum kya karoge ?"

"Kuch sochunga ab kya kar sakta hu"

" Thik hai main jaati hu Meena didi agar yaha aa gayi to parishani ho jayegi"

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Shyam ka vakt tha , main apne kamre me baitha hua tha Tabhi mere kamre Asmita aa gayi .uski khubsurati behad kamal ki thi man to kar raha tha ki Pure tarike se uske maje lu .

Usne andar aa kar darwaja band kar diya tha .aur pass aa kar baith gayi.

Mujhe tabhi usne sawal puchha .

" Agar aap bura Naa maane to sawal puchhu "

" Haa puchho "

" Aap apne ghar par kisi ko kyu nahi bata rahe ki aap kaun hai "

Uski baat par main muskura diya .

" Baat itni aasan nahi jitni tumhe lagti hogi "

" Aisa kya hai par ki apne parivaar se ye baat chhupa rahe hai aap "

" Pahli baat to ye ki main unhe apna parivar nahi manta " meri baat sunkar thodi hakibaki rah gayi vo .

" Mujhe hi pata hai ye baat khudko samjhane me ,maine kitna vakt gujara hai ki vo mera parivar nahi balki yaha par koi mera apna nahi hai "

Ye baat kahte hue na chahte hue bhi mera gala bhaari hone laga
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" Lekin kyu ? Aisa kya kiya hai unhone"

" Unhone mujhe apna maana hi nahi hai bas main ek fokat ka kirayedaar hu unke ghar par rah raha hu , isiliye main nahi chahta ki mujhe faltu me vo ab value dena chalu kar de jabki unhone mujhe pahle se deni chahiye thi main bhi unke parivar ka hissa hu"

Meri baat sunkar Asmita thodi achambhit ho gayi thi , ye bahut kam hi hota hai ki parivar kisi ko is tarah se dur kar deta ho .Asmita ke man me Kamal ke sath jo bhi hua vo sab Kamal behad hi jyada man ko lagakar baitha hua hai aisa lag raha tha .

Maa pita ka pyar thoda sa asamaan hota hai ,lekin uske liye unse nafrat karna thik nahi tha .

Mujhe jab dhyan aaya ki dukh batate hue main kaam ki baat Asmita se puchhna hi bhul gaya hu to maine ek lambi saans li .

" Vaise Tumse kuch puchhna tha" ye kahkar maine Ashu ki sari baat batadi .

Ye puri tarah se sunne par vo bol padi .

" Nahi isme koi chinta karne ki baat nahi hai ,Yahi to aapki shaktiyan hai , aap jis bhi aurat ke sath sambandh banoge us ki har baar shaktiyan thodi thodi badhti rahegi .Aur Aap us vyakti ki shaktiyon ko control bhi kar sakoge "

Asmita bahot saal se Amrit lok ne pritam ke sath rahi hui thi to use ye baate pata honi hi thi .

" Vaise ye kharad ki kya kahani hai aur uski shaktiya kya hai "

Asmita ne meri taraf dekhke ek baar socha .

" Use lagta hai tha ki aap yaani pritam ji ne uske sath naaibsafi ki hai isliye usne Aap ki jaan le li lekin uska maksad pahle se hi Amrit lok par hukumat karna tha.

Uske pass behad si shaktiyan hai jaise ki vo kisi ki bhi shaktiyan apne andar sama sakta hai, upar se uske pass behad se vafadar log hai jo uske liye jaan de sakte hai aur bahot hi khunkhar hai "

Main Asmita ki batayi baate soch raha tha . Tabhi vo phirse bol padi .

" Lekin uski sabse badi takat hai uska vo Astra jis ke baare bahot si chije mujhe nahi pata lekin vo jis bhi insaan par vaar karta hai uski shaktiya puri tarah se nasht ho jaati hai ''

Mujhe ye samjhane me thoda mushkil jaa raha tha lekin shayad Asmita ko bhi puri tarah se nahi pata tha us Astra ke baare me kyu ki kisi ki shaktiyan khatam kyu karega jab uske pass us shaktiyo ko apne andar sama sakta hai to .


Kuch der baad, hall me behad hadbad chalu ho gayi shayad jis mahman ki vo baat kar rahe the vo aa gaye the.

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" Shital didi , vo Asmita thodi ajib nahi lagti aapko " Tejaswini apni bahan se baat kar rahi thi jo ki uski badi devarani bhi thi .

" Aisa kya ajib lagta hai usme "

" Yahi ki vo akeli yaha pe aa gayi , uski shadi bhi nahi hui hai ,umar kam hai lekin bahot kuch jaanti hai Amrit lok ke baare me "

Apni bahan ki baat par shital sochte hue " haa mujhe bhi thoda doubt to ho hi raha hai , kyuki vo 10-15 saal pahle yaha aaye aisa kaha tab to ye bachhi hi hogi phir itna sab kuch kaise yaad hai "

" Hain naa didi vahi to main Sochu ,mujhe sunidhi di aur nirmala di bhi yahi bol Rahi thi , upar se itni Sundar hai.

" Tujhe badi jalan ho Rahi hai usase , vaise kya kah rahi thi vo dono maharani " Tejaswini thodi muskurate hue .

" Yahi ki , hamare sare mardo ki najar us par hi thi , jawan to jawan bado ki bhi "

"Kya matlab "

" Haa didi inhone bhi bahot baar us ki taraf dekha hai " Tejaswini ki aavaj me vo swar dekh Shital samajh gayi ki baat kya hai .

" Dekho Tejaswini Isme jalane me koi buri baat nahi hai , hame is umar me lagta hi hai ki han khubsurat nahi hai lekin main sach kahu to tumhare pati ko is umar me kya kisi bhi umar me tumse khubsurat aurat naa milti vo to unka naseeb hai isiliye jyada chinta mat karo "

Tejaswini ko ye baat sunkar thoda achha laga .

" Lekin di Sunidhi bhi ke man yahi vichar hai "

" Ab tumhari beti ki shadi hone vaali hai aur tum aise vichar liye baithi ho , vaise bhi tum aurato ko uske alawa kuch sujhata hi kya hai , vo khane pe dhyan do vo khana jal jaayega "

" Nahi jalega use vakt hai , lekin jis tarah se ham apne pati ke liye samarpit hai us hisab se unhe kisi aur aurat ki aur dekhna nahi chahiye tha "

" Baat tumhari sahi hai lekin , man tho
da sa bahak jaata hai aur vaise bhi uske aage kuch nahi hone vaala agar bura laga ho to apne pati se baat Karo "

"Nahi rahne do shayad main hi galat soch rahi hu , itne saal sath rahe hai aisi vaisi harkat karne ki vo kyu sochenge bhala "


Tabhi mahmaan aane ki goshna hall me hui .

like aur comment kar do . Exam chalu hai . Likh to sakta hu regularly lekin kuch galti ho gayi to phir aage bahot balance story ka bigad jaata hai . Isliye soch samajh kar likh raha hu . Meri dusri story thodi alag direction me chali gayi jis taraf me nahi chahta tha isilye vo thodi pending pad gayi hai .Ab kuch naye ideas aane tak vo nahi aayegi vaise is story ke sath nahi chahta isiliye soch samajh kar likh raha hu . Vaise agli update 3-4 din me aa jayegi vo ready hai kuch . Like aur comment kar Dena.

Nice update Bhai

 

[Raja maurya]

UPDATE 13​

" Aap sab log naa Amrita ko kuch jyada hi bhav dete hai " Pranjali ,Amrita ke mama ki ladki Amrita ko mil rahe attention se jalakar boli.

Sojwal apni bahan ko is tarah se gussa dekh "Are tum bhi naa, Amrita tujhse chhoti hai, isiliye maa uski jyada dekh bhaal karti hai "

"Bhai aap to rahne hi do ,Aap bhi to hamesha 'Amrita-Amrita' karte rahte ho din bhar , aur itni kya chhoti hai mujhse sirf ek saal choti hai vo . " Pranjali ki is baat pe uske chehre par muskan aur sharam aa gayi jo chehre ke kone me chhup gayi , Pranjali ka chidchidapan dekh 'Natasha' yaani dono ki maa ne Apne pati (Amit)ko aankhe dikhayi jo ki Amit samajh Gaya ki ,har baar ki tarah is baar bhi use hi manana padega .

" Pranju beta , Ye kya hai ? Ham sab ab kisi paraye ghar jaa rahe hai kya vaha bhi tum isi tarah ka bartav rakhogi kya ?"

Pranjali ne apne pita ki baat par muh phulate hue haar Maan Li vahi ek taraf baithi , Amrita Apne vicharo me gum thi ,jise ki natasha ,Amit aur sharada jaante thi .

Uske sath achha bartav karna hi tha sabko vo ek beti ke sath-sath unke liye ek devi ke samaan thi. Samast Amritjan ki unke liye hone vaali maharani thi.

Ek ghar ke saamne pahuch kar ,apni badi si gaadi rok di .

Ghar ke andar aakar sab log idhar udhar dekhne lage.

Vahi unke aate hi unke haal chal puchne Pratik(fufa) aur samar( mama) aa gaye . Vahi bhavesh (chacha) kitchen me ye baat Apni patni ko batane chala gaya. Vapas jaata tabhi Shital bich me bol padi .

" Aree devar ji aap kaha jaa rahe ho , yaha aaiye aur khana banaiye"

" Bhabhi mujhse bhaiyya ko kuch kaam hai isiliye ,varna mujhe bhi khana banane me maja aata hai "

" aaj sab ek sath hai isiliye bol rahi hu vaise hame thodi aapke hath ka roj milta hai "

Tejaswini apni bahan ki baat par sharmane ke sath sath muskura di ,kyuki sach me Bhavesh ek behad kamal ka cook tha .hatho me jaadu hona Bhavesh ke liye sach sabit hota tha kyuki use kis masale ko kitna kaise daalne se kya swad aayega sab pata tha .

Tejaswini ko is tarah muskurata dekh Shital( maa) bol padi.

" Aree Teju tu bol na Aaj mahman hai unke khatir to ekdum lajwab khana ho jaye "

" Nahi Bhabhi main sach me vyasth hu ek kaam karta hu aap ko masale nikal kar de deta hu konse daalne hai"

"Lekin isase kya hoga "

" Bhabhi samjhiye naa Bhaiyya be faltu mujhpar naaraj ho jayenge "

Bhavesh vaha se bahar chala, kuch hi der main sab logo ki mulakat mahmano ke sath Ho gayi .Aaj pura parivar ek hi ghar me tha .

Khane ke liye sab baithe the Ashu Kamal ko bulane aa gayi . Kamal ne mana kar diya vo abhi padhai ka karan batakar Ashu thodi naraj ho gayi kyuki uska Asli karan uske sath uske Bhai aur parivar ka bartav tha jis vajah se vo khana unke sath nahi khana chahta tha upar se mahman the . Abhi kuch sabak sikhane ki sochta bhi to un mahmano ke saamne ye sab karne se achha tha ki vo Apne room me hi khana khaye .

Vahi amrita un sab ke bich baithi Asmita ko ishara kar rahi thi. Asmita ko ye dekhkar maja bhi aa raha tha .

Sab log apni apni baate batane lage . Amrita ki pahchan naa pata ho is vajah se unhone aadha sach hi unki family ko bataya ki vaha ke atyachar se bachane ke liye Sab log Asmita ki madat lekar aa gaye.

Main apne kamre me padh raha tha ,mujhe vaise bhi itihas is vishay me behad ruchi thi , main har tarah ke yuddha ke pichhe ke karan jaanane me behad utsuk rahata tha .

Tabhi mujhe mere pass kisi ki aahat hui ye koi aur nahi Asmita hi thi .

" Mujhe aapko kuch batana tha "

" Batao " maine kitab ek taraf rakhakar kaha .

" Vo Aa chuki hai "

" Kon? " Maine sawaliya najaro se puchha .

" Vo Amrita ?"

Main ekdum se chauk gaya , Main bilkul bhi is baat se vaakif nahi tha ki Amrita Ko Asmita jaanti hai.
Main kuch bol naa paya .

" Agar aap unase milne chahenge To mere kamre me aa Jana vo aaj raat mere kamre me hi so rahi hai"

Main kuch kahta tab tak Asmita vaha se gayab ho gayi .
Main Amrita se milna chahta tha lekin Mujhe bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha .

Vahi chhat par 4 mard baithe hue the unmen the vishwas(pita), pratik , samar aur sath hi me Amit jo Pahli baar kitne saalo baad apne tarah ke logo se mila raha tha.
" Vishwas kya hua tumne to kaha tha ki chhat par intejaam hai yaha to kuch bhi nahi dikh raha " fufa ji bol pade .

" Are Jijaji bass kuch minute rukiye bhavesh aata hi hoga,vahi laane gaya tha " vishwas aage aur kuch bolte tabhi Amit bol pada.

" Lekin ho kya raha hai bandobast koi hame to bataye ladko ko hamare sath upar sone se mana karke kya plan banaya hai"

Tabhi bhavesh vaha par aa gaya,aur sharab ki botley vaha par rakh kar bola "Amit ji is liye bachho ko hamare sath sone se mana kiya hai,vaise bhi ham sab milke is tarah ka kuch plan banane hi vaale the ab ek aur sathi hame mil gaya "

Tabhi pratik bhi bol pada ,"vishwas tumne Samar ko kyu nahi bhej Diya vo yu Jaa kar le aata ."

" Jijaji Samar ko bhej deta lekin,
In sab ki samajh Bhavesh jaisi kise hai "

"Vaise Aaj to 4 log barabar ho jaayenge Ludo khelne ke liye " Samar itna kahta ki uske sar pe tapli padi .

" 4 matlab ham 5 log haina , main sab jaanta hu tum logo ka? mere sath khelne se darte ho isiliye " pratik aur Samar ki baat par sab log has diye sivay Amit ke jise in sab ki baato se anjaan tha .use laga ki uski vajah se pratik ji ko khelne nahi diya jaa raha.

" Are Amit ji koi baat nahi hai , bass ye jijaji harana bilkul naamumkin hai unhe har agla daav pata hota hai isliye inke sath koi nahi khelna chahta "bhavesh ne Amit samjhaya .

" Haa to ye baat hai vaise aap ke Ghar me kin kin ke pass konsi Shakti hai "

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" Amit gayab ho sakta hai , natasha chikitsa me mahir hai yaani healing ,Sojwal ki aankhe behad tej hai to vahi mere pass ye suraksha kavach hai " sharada apne aas pass nile rang ka gubbara banate hue dikhane lagi aur gayab kar diya .

Tabhi sunidhi ne bol padi " to phir Pranjali aur Amrita ki shaktiya kya hai "

" Kya malum? " Sunidhi ne side dekha vaise hi ekdam jhatke se Darr gayi ,uske pass apna huBahu roop tha . Vahi par Nirmala jo pass baithi thi vo Tass se mas tak nahi hui kyuki uski behad chaukanni senses se use ye baat pata chal gayi thi.

Pranjali ne jald hi apna sadharan roop le liya aur phir sari aurate hasne lagi . Kyuki vo bhi pranajli ki shaktiya samajh gayi thi .

" To phir Amrita ke pass konsi shaktiya hai."

Tabhi lights achanak se band chalu hone lagi , sabhi isase khush ho gaye lekin jaise hi Amrita ki aankhe chamakne lagi is shakti ke prayog se tabhi nani ki najar us par chali gayi .
Sabhi log is power se behad hi jyada khush ho gaye khaskar ke rupali jise in shaktiyon ke baare me bahot dnyan tha vo aur jaanane ke liye utsuk ho gayi ki ye shaktiya to ajib hai jise vo khud bhi samjh nahi paa Rahi thi,Amrita sab ko apni power batane hi vali thi lekin bich me Sharada yaani uski maa ne use rok bol padi .

" Amrita ki shaktiyon se vo vidyutchumbakiya kshetron (electromagnetic field) par prabhav daal sakti hai jisase puri tarah uska bijli par bhi prabhav padta hai , aur isi vajah se vo band-chalu kar paati hai "

Amrita ko pata tha ki ye baat jhut thi lekin uski maa ne jarur kisi karan se roka hoga isiliye vo kuch nahi boli . Sharada ko pata tha ki agar asli shakti bata di jaaye to sab pahchan jayenge ki Amrita kon hai.

Vahi Nirmala ek ajib si najaro se Asmita ko dekh rahi thi , isiliye Asmita us ki najaro dhyan hatane ke liye Kuch chhote mote majak karti rahti ,sabhi log masti majak kar rahe the khas karke Pranjali , jo ki masti majak me mahir thi .

Tabhi Natasha aur sharada ke man me sawal aaya jo ki pritam ke baare me yaani kamal ke baare .

To Natasha ne sawal puchh liya .

" Vaise Shital ji aapka chota beta kya karta hai " Natasha ne ye baat punchi tabhi Meena ki najar Ashu par gayi aur Ashu ne apni aankhe ekdum niche kar li.

" Vo kuch nahi gyaravi me hai bass aur kya "

" Uski shaktiyo ke baare me to aapne bataya hi nahi " pranjali bich me bol padi .

" Hongi to bataungi naa , uske pass hai hi nahi " shital ki is baat par payal aur sunidhi hasne lagi .

Asmita ko ye baat bilkul bhi achhi nahi lagi vo vaha par ekdum se bolne vaali thi ki aapko kya hi pata hai unke baare me vo kon hai, lekin khudko rok liya,lekin is baar sharada puchhne lagi .

"Lekin vo dikha nahi ham aaye tab se kahi gao hai kya ?"

" Are nahi nahi use jyada ghulna milna pasand nahi hai akele rahna hi achha lagta hai, isiliye maine Sojwal ko kaha hai ki Sunil aur vishal ke sath soye ab vaise bhi kuch din sari family raat ko ek hi chhat ke niche soyegi ye bado ka aadesh hai " is tarah ki kamal ke liye vaali baat kaa kisi ko behad bura laga, Asmita sochne lagi ki yaha sab manoranjan kar rahe hai aur vahi Kamal akela hai .

Vo Amrita ke saamne unke pass jaa bhi nahi sakti thi ,Amrita ko abhi bahut si baate pata nahi thi.

Raat bahot jyada ho gayi thi sab log abhi lag bhah so gaye the , kamal apne room me baitha socha raha tha , vo apni is nayi nayi mili shakti yo se khudko vaakif kar raha tha iske liye sabse behtar vakt uske liye ,sabke sone ke baad hi tha .

Ghar ke har ek insaan ki shaktiyo istemal karna sikh raha tha.

Tabhi uska darwaja kisine khatkhataya,jab kholkar dekha , vaha par koi apne sharir ko odhani se dhak khadi thi, jo ki sar se paav tak sone ki tarah Sundar thi ,lekin sabse khass baat thi uski aankhe.

Kamal ne use ishare se puchha ,
Usne un khubsurat aankho se idhar udhar dekhkar kaha .

" Aap kamal hi hai na "

Kamal ne haa me sar hilakar use andar aane ke liye panah di .Kamal samajh to gaya tha ki ye kon hai , lekin kya bole ye samajh nahi paa raha tha.

Amrita andar aayi , Kamal ke kamre me idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur phir kamal ki taraf dekha Jo kuch Naa bol raha paa kar puchha .

" Kyaa aapne mujhe pahchaana nahi"

" Haa pahchana" Kamal ne shayad ye pal imagine Kiya tha lekin vo usme kuch aage bol paaye ye sujh nahi raha tha .

Amrita jo khud bhi thodi bahot sharma rahi thi usne Kamal ki taraf dekh phirse ek baat puchha .

" Kya pahchana ,kuch to boliye "

Kamal ne ek lambi saans lekar .

" Agar sach kahu to , maine socha bhi nahi tha ki aap is tarah dikhti hai,lekin vo to Asmita ne bataya tha ki aap aayi hai isiliye "

Amrita thodi muskurakar " kya matlab aisi nahi dikhti , kya main itni badsurat hu "

" Nahi nahi aap behad sundar hai ,lekin meri kalpna shaktiya itni majboot nahi shayad "

" Aur ye kya ? Asmita mausi ko sidhe Asmita aur mujhe aap-aap kah rahe "

Kamal samjh Gaya ki ise Asmita ke bare me pata nahi hai.


" vo Asmita ji ne khud bola tha ki unhe ji ji kahna pasand nahi "

" To mujhe bhi ye sab pasand nahi hai "

Amrita phir Jaa kar Vaha par ek kursi par baith gayi vahi Kamal apne bed par baith gaya .

" Vaise sach batau to mujhe to ye behad ajib lag raha hai , har raat aapke sapne dekhti thi lekin un sab sapno me jaise dikhte the usase aap bahot alag ho "

" Mujhe to aise koi sapne bhi nahi dikhte the "

Amrita jo Apne khayalo me kho kar baate kar rahi thi usne phirse apni najar kamal ki taraf ki.

" To phir aap ko kaise pata is sab ke baare me ki aap hi ."

" Vo mujhe kuch dino pahle hi pata chala jab mujhe meri shaktiyan mili tab "

" Kya , aap ke pass ab shaktiya hai ?"

" Haa hai , par puri nahi aur kuch nahi pata bas itna pata hai ki ek raja tha aur ek rani ,dono mar gaye khatam kahani "

Kamal ki baat par Amrita muskurai .

" Sachme phir to ye baat bahot hi jyada confusing hogi aapke liye , mujhe to maa ne bahut si chije batayi samajhati , vaise aapne Ghar par kyu nahi bataya?"

" Us baat ka koi fayda hi nahi hai "

" Lagta hai aap behad jyada door ho apne parivar se "

"Kyu naa hounga main ek sadharan insaan tha itne dino se ab ekdum se sab ko badal kar kya fayda "

" Iska matlab ki aap ye sab shaktiyan itne dino se naa hone ki vajah se kyu ki "

" Vo Jadui Parivaar aur Main ..,Main kya? koi nhi tha "

" Lekin vaise aapke pass konsi konsi shaktiya hai jaise shaktiyo ko absorb karne ki to mujhe Asmita mausi ne batayi aur konsi"

Main Amrita ki baat par muskura diya. .........................

Like maaro , main thoda slow hu likhne main aur jaise bataya ki exam chalu hai us vajah se busy may me exam hai aur main CA intermediate ka student hu . Padhai bhi chalu hai test series bhi isiliye jab vakt nikalta hai free hota hu to likhta hu .
baaki support aise hi banaye rakhiye , main bhi update jaldi se jaldi dene ki koshish karunga.

Nice update Bhai

 

[hemya]

UPDATE 16​

Ek Mahila Apne kamre Puri tarah se satark ho kar leti Hui thi . Aurato ke bich hokar sab log chinta me sone ki koshish kar rahe the tabhi use kisiki baate dur kamre se kaan par padi .

Tabhi vo bina koi aavaj kiye kamre se bahar hui . Ek kamre ki sidiyo par uski najar jaise hi ek ladki par padi vo ladki ekdum se Darr gayi .

" Maa aap yaha ? " Uske ladki ke chehre par apni maa ko dekh
Darr chha gaya .

" Ashu beta, tum yaha kya kar rahi thi?" Ashu ne apni najar ekdum se niche kar li , use ab pata tha ki vo pakadi gayi hai .

Ashu ko is tarah shant dekh kar khud Nirmala hi bol padi .

"Tum Kamal ke kamre me kya kar rahi thi, aakhari baar puchh rahi hu batao ?"
Nirmala ki is tarah ki dhamki bhari aavaj jab sun Ab Ashu ekdum se rone ko ho gayi, vo ab sab jaag jaye aur un sab ke bich me daant mile, ye nahi chahti thi .

Isiliye uski tej dhadkano ki bich hi uski aansu nikal Gaye .

Is baar Nirmala ko bhi apni galti ka ahsaas hua ki Ab rone se, sab log jaag jayenge .

Isliye Ashu ke aansu ponchne lagi .

" Rovo mat aashu koi jaag jayega , chalo " aisa kahte hue Nirmala uska hath pakad use le jaane lagi .Ashu jiske man me abhi bhi Darr tha vo samajh nahi payi ki uski maa kaha le ja rahi hai .

Jaise hi vo dono kitchen pahunchi.

" Ab batao kya kar rahi thi tum, kamal ke room me " ye sawal sun aashu ke aankho se phirase aansu aa gaye .

" Beta , rona band karo , main nahi daantne vaali batao "

" Nahi aap ,daantegi " Ashu ka Darr is baat se tha ki, kahi gusse me phirse use ghar se dur na kar de, pahle hi vo pure parivar se behad dur rahti thi.

Ab vo phirse kuch is tarah ki saja nahi chahti thi .

Ashu jiska rona thik naa hota dekh, Nirmala ne use paani diya aur
is baar shanti se .

" Ashu beta main jaanti hu ki Tu kamal ko chahti hai,mujhe us baat se koi gussa nahi hu Tum dono to hone vaali pati patni ho ,lekin main kisi aur baare me tumse puchh rahi hu?"

Ashu ne Achanak se aansu ponchte hue ki maa ki aur dekha ki kya puchhna chahti hai

"aaj main satark ho kar ghar par najar rakh Rahi thi to mujhe tum dono ki puri baate sunai di,Ashu maine tumhari aur Kamal ki puri Baate sun Li hai "

Kuch der pahle Kamal ke kamre me

" Ashu tum itni dari hui kyu ho? "

" Vo Rupali didi ne kisika khun Kiya hai "

Ashu ki baat sun Kamal puri tarah chauk gaya ..

" Kyaa? Rupali didi ne khun ? Aur Tumhe kisne bataya ?"

Kamal ne jaise hi Ashu ki baat suni, sawal laadne chalu kar diye.

" Mujhe kisine nahi bataya ,
Rupali didi se baat kar rahi thi aur vo Apne man me jor jor se ye baat dohara rahi thi aur vo bahot darri hui bhi thi "

" Lekin kiska kuch pata chala ?"

" Nahi ,mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai "

" Ashu Tum chinta mat karo mujhe lagta hai shayad tumhe samajhne kuch galti Hui ho sakti hai vo kuch aur chij ke baare me baat kar rahi ho"

" Nahi Mujhe lag raha hai ki kuch to jarur hua hoga "

" Haa ho sakta hai ,lekin ham pata kaise kare "

" Kamal mujhe to Darr lag raha hai , hamare Ghar ke log pahle se hamse kuch chhupa rahe hai , main janti hu mujhe mahsoos hua hai aur ab ye "

" Agar kuch bhi hoga to ham jarur pata laga lenge tumhe darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai "

" Lekin kaise lagayenge pata "

" Najar rakh kar unpar "

Ashu kuch kahne vaali thi ,Tabhi Kamal ko kuch mahsoos hua aur usne bol Diya .

" Agar Tumhe dar hi lag raha ho to mere sath so sakti ho ?"
Ye kahkar kutil muskan ke sath Kamal ne Ashu ki kamar me hath daala .

" Chhodo , tum bhi naa kabhi nahi sudhro ge "
Kamal ne Ashu ko apne aur pass lekar mulayam rasile otho ko chum liya .

" Tum chinta mat karo, Jo bhi hoga rupali didi kaa ham dekh lenge ." Ashu jald hi uske Aalingan se nikli aur bahar ki taraf chali gayi .

Aur muskura hi rahi thi ki sidi yo par use uski maa dikhayi de gayi .
Ashu ne phir saari rupali vaali baat apni maa ko bata di.


Apni beti ki baat sun Nirmala soch ne lagi.

" Vaise Ashu , Tum Kisi ka dimag padh sakti ho bataya nahi tumne "

Ashu ko pata tha ki fuk fuk kar kadam rakhna hoga vo Kamal vaala raaj yaha nahi kholna chahti thi.

" Vo mujhe ye sab abhi abhi mahsus ho raha hai , shayad main uske me mahir nahi thi abhi tak lekin Mujhe sirf vahi Aavaje sunayi deti hai jo ki dimag me chikh chikh kar koi bolta ho to ."

" Vaise tumhe Rupali ki ye aavaj kab suni ?"

" Aaj abhi vo hamare sath kamre me baat karte hue behad rukhi rukhi si thi sabhi logo ka mood off tha ladkiyo me, tabhi mujhe unke dimag se sunayi diya ki 'I KILLED SOMEONE , MAIN YE KAISE KAR SAKTI HU' "

" Tumhe sach me lagta hai ki tumne yahi suna , yaa kahi galati bhi ho sakti hai vaise rupali kyu maregi? "

" Haa mujhe lagta hai yahi suna , aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki aap sab mujhse kuch chhupa rahe hai"

Ashu ke muh se baat achanak se nikal gayi .

Nirmala ab gahari soch me chali gayi .use pata tha ki Ab Ashu ko Ab sach batane ka samay aa gaya hai vo nahi chahti thi ki is shaktiyon ki vajah se use kahi aur se pata chale . Ek lambi saans le kar.

" Haa hamne tumse chupaya hai, Ham sab ek Company me kaam karte hai"

" Kaisi company "

Ashu ne Achanak se shor karte hue puchha .

" Shhhhhhh " Nirmala use chup karate hue "chup raho koi jaag jayega "

"Lekin aapne mujhe bataya kyu nahi abhi tak , aur kis tarah ki Company hai chhupane kaa kaam pad raha hai"

" Ye ek Spy/ detective agency type ki company hai jo ki hamari powers ka istemal karke unki kuch missions me madat ki jaati hai isike sath nayi nayi technology, Jo hamari powers se ban sakti hai vo banai jaati hai , tumhe kya lagata hai hamare Ghar par Paisa kaha se aata hai "

Ashu is Puri baat se gussa thi ki use family se dur hi nahi unke raaj se bhi dur rakha Jaa Raha tha .
" Iska matlab ki hamari family ka raaj bahot se logo ko pata hai sirf mujhe chhodke , agar dadaji- nanaji ko ye baat pata chal gayi to ."

" Beti isiliye to tumhe ye baat nahi batayi".

" To phir ab bhi kyu batayi ye baat"

" Kyu ki Ham tumhe bhi hamare sath shamil karna chahte the , Maine is baare me tumhari pita ke sath baat bhi ki hai,main jaanti hu tujhe bura lag raha hoga lekin Mera uddesh tumhe dukh pahuchane ka nahi tha , main to chahti thi lekin baakiyo ne mana Kiya tha ki ye baat tumhe naa batayi jaaye kyuki tum Kamal ke bahot close ho aur vo to tumhe pata hai dada dadi ke kitna close hai "

Ashu ko behad gussa aa raha tha .
"Achha, to phir Rupali didi ke mamle me bhi aapko pata hoga hi"

" Nahi lekin Hamari company me ek murder hua hai Mahindra naam ke aadmi ka vo Company ke gadget jo hamari madat se banaye gaye hai vo try karte the"

" To iska matlab ki Mahindra ka khun rupali didi ne Kiya hai " Ashu ke aankhe ekdum se fail gayi .

" Nahi nahi hame abhi bhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai , kyuki jab khun hua tab Rupali vaha thi hi nahi "

" To phir kaise , maine khud suna hai"

" Shayad is baat ka jawaab rupali hi de sakti hai" tabhi unhe kisi ki aahat Hui . Nirmala ekdum se Darr gayi ki kisine sun to nahi liya.

" Kis jawab ke baare me janna hai meri ladli ko itne raat ko " Pratik kitchen me paani lene aate hue bola .

" Vo maine ise sab kuch bata Diya hai " Nirmala ek serious tone me kaha aur Pratik bhi samajh gaya.

" Aur mujhe Rupali didi ne kiye hue khun ke baare me bhi pata hai " Ashu ki baat sun pratik Jo paani pi Raha tha vo usi ke upar gir Gaya .

" Kya , Nirmala ye Ashu kya baat kar rahi hai "

"Ji vo uske pass nayi shaktiya aai hai, vo kisi ke dimag ka guess kar sakti hai , aur kahna hai ki Rupali dimag me ye kah Rahi thi ki usike vajah se murder hua hai "

" Nahi main guess nahi ,main dimag ka sun sakti hu agar vo aavaj dimag me tej ho to. aap Mera yakin kijiye papa "

Pratik ne Dono ki taraf dekha .

" Thik hai agar tum kah Rahi ho to sach hi hoga lekin Ham koi nishkarsh is baat se nahi nikal sakte. vo bhi hamari Ghar beti ke sath sath tumhare Bhai ki hone vaali biwi bhi hai "


Nirmala ne Apni aankhe Pratik ki taraf kar .

" Vaise aapko kya lagata hai ki murder rupali ne Kiya hai ki nahi"
Nirmala ne pratik ki shaktiya kya kah Rahi hai ye puchhna chah rahi thi .

" Agar tum meri baat Karo to vo mujhe vyayaktik rup se Rupali ne ye khun Kiya hai ye nahi lagta aur meri shaktiya bhi is baat se sahamat hai "

" Lekin papa aapki shaktiya kabhi galat bhi ho sakti hai uski probility 100% sahi thodi hoti hai "

" Haa lekin ham abhi bhi kisi natije par nahi pahunch sakte "


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Ek ghane jangal me andhere me chalte hue.

Hava ka dhima sa jhauka chal Raha tha .tabhi gufa me baithe baithe patto ki chur chur karne ki aavaj aayi .

" Pritam tumhe use taraf dekhne se mana Kiya tha Naa "

Ye aavaj aate hi najar ek gruhasth ki uske sar par ekdum barik baal the jisase aise lag raha tha kuch dino pahle hi mundan karaya ho.

Vo gruhashta ke muh se phir se shabd nikle .

" Shashan, Raajya , Netrutva ,Seva ye char shabd ek saman hokar bhi bhinna hai "

Tabhi phir se mujhe chirp chirp ki patto ki aavaj aayi .us taraf palatate hi . Mujhe kisi jaanvar ke lambe hath dikhe upar dekha to .








Ek dass feet uchha bhediya khada tha .

Main ekdum se nind se jaag Gaya .

Kaisa ajib sapna tha main kuch samajh nahi paaya.lekin mujhe us insaan ka chehra abhi bhi yaad tha.

Uski vah shantata , us pure sar par barik baarik safed Baal mujhe puri tarah yaad the .
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Ashu kal ki baat par behad chintit thi.usi ke sath sabhi the sivay naye aaye mahmano ke .

Shital , Tejaswini aur sunidhi Apni charcha me lagi hui thi .

Vahi sunil Vishal se baat kar raha tha.

" Kya yaar tujhe college jaane ki itni jaldi kyu hai itna bada ho gaya hai phir bhi college college karta rahta hai "

" Are Sunil tujhe kya pata hai kitni ladkiya Marti hai mujhpe vaha ekdum sukun milta hai vaise us din Kamal ne to ijjat hi down kar di thi lekin maine pura crisis manage kar liya."

" Achha , tu Jaa vaise to main Ghar par Jo haryaali hai usi main vyast hu"

"Abe kahi Rupali didi ko pata chal Gaya to khair nahi "

"Achha aur Teri baat Maine Meena ko bata di, to main to koi vakt nahi lene vaala use apne niche litane pe "

" Achha, to ye baat hai,bhool mat Ashu ki shadi mere Bhai se ho Rahi hai "

" Bhai ki nayya me sair hone me interest hai ladke ko , vaise Maine suna hai ki Vo Amrita hai na uska koi bachpan se hi boyfriend hai "

" Kya yaar ? Tujhe kaise pata mujhe to lag raha tha ki usase mujhe pyar ho gaya hai "

Sunil aur Vishal apni hi ajib si baato par hasne Lage .

" Maine ye baat pranjali se suni hai vo sab ladkiyo ko bata Rahi thi ki kaise vo ek ladke ke khwabo me rahti hai ye baat hai "

" Are koi nahi ab to naye shahar shift ho gaye hai , long distance kaha chalta hai kya pata hame bhi mauka mile "

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" Agar Aisa hai to phir to ye bahot badi samsya hai " Kamal Ashu ki baat sunkar bol pada .

" Aisa hi hai vo sab kisi M.A.V naam ki company me kam karte hai "

" Kal mujhe achha hua kisike aane ki aahat Hui varna mera raaj kal hi khul jaata ."

Ashu ka chehra ekdum Kamal ki taraf uski baat sun chala Gaya .

" To isiliye tumne mujhe kamre se jaldi bheja ".

" Kyu tum rukna chahti thi kya ?Maine vaise bhi room se nikala thodi tum hi chali gayi"

" Nahi , Main soch rahi thi Ab tumhe shayad meri jarurat nahi padegi."

Ashu ki baat par Kamal ka chehra utar Gaya .

" Ashu tumhari jarurat Kabhi bhi khatam nahi hogi , jab koi nahi tha tab tum thi "

" Sorry vaise bhi tumhare siva mera bhi koi nahi hai "

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Kamal bahot din ho gaye the , Sulochanaji se nahi mila tha isiliye School jaane se pahle Vaha chala gaya tha .

Sulochanaji ke sath jo kuch karne ki koshish ki thi aur kuch dino se unke jo khwab dekh raha tha usase mere man me glani ho gayi thi .

Jis chij ki glani man me chadh jaaye use bhul nahi sakte aur chhod bhi nahi sakte bass aisi halat meri ho gayi thi.


Jab vaha par pahuncha ,mujhe dekh shayad vo khush ho gayi thi aisa mujhe laga .

" Vo Divya Chali gayi hai school , Kyu tumhe late nahi ho raha "

" Nahi , aaj hamara class late hai revision chalu hai kuch subject ki exam hai naa boards ke kuch dino baad "

Sulochanaji jaise kuch bolna chahti thi lekin bol nahi rahi thi .
Phir main hi bol pada .

" Achha main jata hu ."

" Ruko, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai Andar aao "

Main unke piche chala gaya .





" Dekho Kamal us din ke liye main tumse maafi mangti hu mujhe vo sab nahi kahna chahiye tha "

" Nahi sulochanaji maafi ki koi jarurat nahi hai Aap divya ki chinta main thi isiliye bol padi "

" Nahi , Lekin main tumhe us tarah se bolne ka adhikar mujhe nahi hai tum bhi to is parivar ka hissa ho "

Main unki aankho me glaani dekh paa Raha tha , isiliye mujhe bhi apne man ki baat bolne ki himmat ho gayi.

" Maafi to mujhe maangni chahiye
Us din maine hamare rishte par daag lagane ki koshish ki thi "

" Nahi tumhe bhi maafi maangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai"

" Nahi shayad meri galti ke liye Sunny mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karta" meri aavaj ab ekdum dhimi ho gayi.

" Maine to usase vada kiya tha ki main Tumhe apne parivaar ki tarah rakhungi"

" Usne mujhe bhi kaha tha ki aap ka khyal rakhna aur main hi ..."

Main kuch aage bolta tabhi unhone mere otho par apna hath rakh diya .

Main aage kuch bol nahi paaya aur vaha se bahar aa gaya .

Apni bike lekar raste par nikal gaya .tabhi mere pichhe se ekdum tejj se kisine mujhe talli maari maine aage dekha vo koi nahi Arjun hi tha .


Main uska pichha karte hue gaadi ki speed badha di.Aage traffic tha vaha par uski gaadi rukne hi vaali thi main use vahi sabak sikhaunga .

Aas pass ke dukandar mujhe itni tej gaadi chalate hue dekhne lage , main Meri scooty thi isiliye vo jyada tej bhag nahi payi .

Jab main traafic signal ke pass pahunch hi raha tha vaha par Arjun ki gaadi ruki hui thi .

Signal ke pass behad bheed thi achanak sab log meri taraf dekhne lage.

Side me lage dukan to jaise barf ki tarah pighal rahe the . Main kuch samajh pata tab tak mere niche ki scooty ek kursi ban gayi aur dar ke maare aage dekhta vaha ek shaksh khada hua tha.

" Kon ho tum ?, Aur main yaha kaise aaya ?"

Usne apne idhar udhar dekhte hue muskurakar .

" Main ? Pahchana nahi , Tumhara jaani dushman KHARAD "


Like kardo update kaise lagi bata dena . Kya pasand aa raha hai story me vo batao hus hisab se mujhe likhne me aasani hogi agar kuch nahi aa raha ho vo bhi bata do .

 

[hemya]

Mahendra mara gya lekin kisne mara use
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Kamal bechara confusion me atka hua hai bs is chkkar me apna confidence khota ja rha hai
lekin smj me abi bi ek bat ni aarhe hai Kamal to shaqti pana chahta tha ab mauka bi hai uske pass fir achnak se Pritam ki bat Jaan ke itna confuse kis lye ho rha hai
Ab dekhna ye hai ki ky krta hai Kamal
Or
Ashu aay hai Kamal ke room me batane ki Rupali ne kisi ko mara hai lekin Q mara khe Mahendra ko ni ya kisi or ko mara hai
Waise suspense acha aarha hai story me

Bhot hi badhiya update..

Nice mast update

Nice update bt confusing waiting for next

Bahut behtreen update diye ho bhai

Nice and superb update....

Shandar update

Bahut hi badhiya update bro

Kamal to khud me hi confuse hua pada
USe khud nahi pata ki wo kya ha or kya kar sakta ha wo khud ko pritam se compare kar raha ha jabki use khud mehnat karke in shaktiyon ko kabu me karna sikhna chhahiye kyonki sab chije itni asani se nahi milti unke liye hame parishram bhi karna padta ha or bhai kamal ka jo attitude tha bhai ao bhi ab kamjor hota ja raha ha jaise wo pehle wala kamjor kamal hi wapas aa raha ha to bhai apn hero ka character devlopment acche se hona chahiye takat me bhi or attitude me bhi

kamal ko asu or amrita donon ko ek dusre ke bare me bata dena chhahiye kyonki isse age chalkar pareshani aa sakti ha

rahi bat murder ki to ashu ne kaha ki rupali ne khun kiya ha mahindra ka to bhai ho sakta ha mahindra ne kuchh galat karne ki koshish ki ho rupali ke sath jisse usne bich bachav me mahindra ka khun kar diya ho or ab shayad M.A.V. or kamal ke pariwar ke bich matbhed ho sakte ha jisse sabko M.A.V. ke bare me pata chal jaye

or bhai pichle 2-3 update se kahani ghar me hi uljhi hui ha sulochna ji ki beti ko bachane ke bad kya hua or kamal ke collage me kya hua ye sab bhi to dikhao bhai tab hi to maja ayega

waiting for next update

Nice

Wese next update ka intezar rahega ...
And yeh behad acha update tha and isme kafi motivational lines v thi .

Nice & super

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Superb sexy update

waiting for the next update...

Bahut hi lajawab update

Romanchak aur Mazedar Update Diyaa Hee
Please Keep It Up ️

Nice update

waiting for the next update....

Nice intro Bhai

Nice update Bhai

Waiting for next update

Nice update Bhai

Nice update Bhai

Nice update Bhai

Behtreen update Bhai

Waiting for next update bro

Awesome update

waiting for the next update....

Hemya bhai. Ye Kay karta tumhi. Jara kaamsutra daliye. Foreplay chumma chati chusna chatna. Jene karun pori Ani Baya aapalya sevika bantil.

Waiting for next update

hemya bhai update kb de rhe ho aap

hemya bhai next kab tak aayega?

Intjaar hai bhai

Nice update Bhai

Nice update Bhai

Intejaar rahega

intezaar rahega....

intezaar rahega hemya bhai....

Bro kitne baje aayega update

intezaar rahega....

Waiting bro

hemya bro update kab ayega

Like this update

Nice update Bhai

Nice update Bhai

UPDATED

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

UPDATE 16​

Ek Mahila Apne kamre Puri tarah se satark ho kar leti Hui thi . Aurato ke bich hokar sab log chinta me sone ki koshish kar rahe the tabhi use kisiki baate dur kamre se kaan par padi .

Tabhi vo bina koi aavaj kiye kamre se bahar hui . Ek kamre ki sidiyo par uski najar jaise hi ek ladki par padi vo ladki ekdum se Darr gayi .

" Maa aap yaha ? " Uske ladki ke man me apni maa ko yaha dekh kar Darr chha gaya .

" Ashu beta tum yaha kya kar rahi thi " Ashu ne apni najar ekdum se niche kar li , use ab pata tha ki vo pakadi gayi hai .

Ashu ko is tarah shant dekh kar khush Nirmala hi bol padi .

"Tum Kamal ke kamre me kya kar rahi thi, aakhari baar puchh rahi hu batao ?"
Nirmala ka is tarah se aavaj me jab usne dhamki suni Ab Ashu ekdum se rone ko ho gayi, vo sab jaag jaye aur unke bich me daant mile ye nahi chahti thi .

Isiliye uski teji dhadkano ki bich hi uski aansu nikal Gaye .

Is baar Nirmala ko bhi apni galti ka ahsaas hua ki Ab rone se sab log jaag jayenge .

Isliye Ashu ke aansu ponchne lagi .

" Rovo mat aashu koi jaag jayega , chalo " aisa kahte hue Nirmala uska hath pakad use le jaane lagi .Ashu jiske man me abhi bhi Darr tha vo samajh nahi payi ki uski maa kaha le ja rahi hai .

Jaise hi vo dono kitchen pahunchi .

" Ab batao kya kar rahi thi tum kamal ke room me " ye sawal sun aashu ke aankho se phirase aansu aa gaye .

" Beta , rona band karo , main nahi daantne vaali batao "

" Nahi aap ,daantegi " Ashu ka Darr is baat se tha ki gusse se phirse use ghar se dur na kar de, pahle hi vo pure parivar se behad dur rahti thi Ab vo phirse kuch is tarah ki saja nahi chahti thi .

Ashu jiska rona thik naa hota dekh Nirmala ne use paani diya aur is baar shanti se .

" Ashu beta main jaanti hu ki Tu kamal ko chahti hai ,mujhe us baat se koi gussa nahi hu Tum dono to hone vaali pati patni hu ,lekin main kisi aur baare me tumse puchh rahi hu?"

Ashu ne Achanak se aansu ponchhe hue upar ki taraf ki maa ki sar kiya ki kya puchhna chahti hsi hai uski maa .

" Ashu maine Tumhari aur Kamal ki Baate sun Li hai , aaj Main satark ho kar ghar par najar rakh Rahi thi to mujhe tum dono ki puri baate sunai di "

Kuch der pahle Kamal ke kamre me

" Ashu kya hua tum dari hui kyu ho "

" Vo Rupali didi ne kisika khun Kiya hai "

Rupali ki baat sun Kamal puri tarah chauk gaya ..

" Kyaa? Rupali didi ne khun kiska ? Aur Tumhe kisne bataya ?"

Kamal ne jaise hi Ashu ki baat suni sawal laadne chalu kar diye.

" Mujhe kisine nahi bataya , Rupali didi se main baat kar rahi thi aur vo Apne man me jor jor se ye baat dohara rahi thi aur vo darri hui bhi bahot thi "

" Lekin kiska kuch pata chala ?"

" Nahi ,mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai "

" Ashu Tum chinta mat karo mujhe lagta hai shayad tumhe samajhne kuch galti Hui ho sakti hai vo kuch aur chij ke baare me baat kar rahi ho "

" Nahi Mujhe lag raha hai ki kuch to jarur hua hoga "

" Haa ho sakta hai ,lekin ham pata kaise kare "

" Kamal mujhe to Darr lag raha hai , hamare Ghar ke log pahle se hamse kuch chhupa rahe hai , main janti hu mujhe mahsoos hua hai ab ye "

" Agar kuch bhi to ham jarur pata laga lenge tumhe darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai "

" Lekin kaise lagayenge pata "

" Najar rakh kar unpar "

Ashu kuch kahne vaali thi ,Tabhi Kamal ko kuch mahsoos hua aur usne bol Diya .

" Agar Tumhe dar hi lag raha ho to mere sath so sakti ho " Ye kahkar Kamal ne Ashu ki kamar me hath daala .

" Chhodo , tum bhi naa kabhi nahi sudhro ge "
Kamal ne Ashu ko apne aur pass lekar otho ko chum liya .

" Tum chinta mat karo, Jo bhi hoga rupali didi kaa ham dekh lenge ." Ashu jald hi uske Aalingan se nikli aur bahar ki taraf chali gayi .

Aur muskura hi rahi thi ki sidi yo par use uski maa dikhayi de gayi .
Ashu ne phir saari rupali vaali baat apni maa ko bata di.


Apni beti ki baat sun Nirmala soch ne lagi.

" Vaise Ashu , Tum Kisi ka dimag padh sakti ho bataya nahi tumne "

Ashu ko pata tha ki fuk fuk kar kadam rakhna hoga vo Kamal vaala raaj yaha nahi kholna chahti thi.
" Vo mujhe ye sab abhi abhi mahsus ho raha hai , shayad main uske me mahir nahi thi abhi tak lekin Mujhe sirf vahi Aavaje sunayi deti hai jo ki dimag me chikh chikh kar koi bolta ho to ."

" Vaise tumhe Rupali ki ye aavaj kab suni ?"

" Aaj abhi vo hamare sath kamre me baat karte hue behad rukhi rukhi si thi sabhi logo ka mood off tha ladkiyo me, tabhi mujhe unke dimag se sunayi diya ki 'I KILLED SOMEONE , MAIN YE KAISE KAR SAKTI HU' "

" Tumhe sach me lagta hai ki tumne yahi suna , yaa kahi galati bhi ho sakti hai vaise rupali kyu maregi? "

" Haa mujhe lagta hai yahi suna , aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki aap sab mujhse kuch chhupa rahe hai"

Ashu ke muh se baat achanak se nikal gayi .

Nirmala ab gahari soch me chali gayi .use pata tha ki Ab Ashu ko Ab sach batane ka samay aa gaya hai vo nahi chahti thi ki is shaktiyon ki vajah se use kahi aur se pata chale .

" Ham sab ek Company me kaam karte hai"

" Kaisi company aur aapne mujhe bataya ab tak bataya kyu nahi "

Ashu ne Achanak se shor karte hue puchha .

" Shhhhhhh " Nirmala use chup karate hue " chup raho koi jaag jayega "

"Lekin aapne mujhe bataya kyu nahi abhi tak , aur kis tarah ki Company hai chhupane kaa kaam pad raha hai "

" Ye ek Spy/ detective agency type ki company hai jo ki hamari powers ka istemal karke unki kuch missions me madat ki jaati hai isike sath nayi nayi technology, Jo hamari powers se ban sakti hai vo banai jaati hai , tumhe kya lagata hai hamare Ghar par Paisa kaha se aata hai "

Ashu is Puri baat se gussa thi ki use family se dur hi nahi unke raaj se bhi dur rakha Jaa Raha tha .
" Iska matlab ki hamari family ka raaj bahot se logo ko pata hai sirf mujhe chhodke , agar dadaji- nanaji ko ye baat pata chal gayi to ."

" Beti isiliye to tumhe ye baat nahi batayi".

" To phir ab bhi kyu batayi ye baat"

" Kyu ki Ham tumhe bhi hamare sath shamil karna chahte the , Maine is baare me tumhari pita ke sath baat bhi ki hai,main jaanti hu tujhe bura lag raha hoga lekin Mera uddesh tumhe dukh pahuchane ka nahi tha , main to chahti thi lekin baakiyo ne mana Kiya tha ki ye baat tumhe naa batayi jaaye kyuki tum Kamal ke bahot close ho aur vo to tumhe pata hai dada dadi ke kitna close hai "

Ashu ko behad gussa aa raha tha .
"Achha, to phir Rupali didi ke mamle me bhi aapko pata hoga hi"

" Nahi lekin Hamari company me ek murder hua hai Mahindra naam ke aadmi ka vo Company ke gadget jo hamari madat se banaye gaye hai vo try karte the"

" To iska matlab ki Mahindra ka khun rupali didi ne Kiya hai " Ashu ke aankhe ekdum se fail gayi .

" Nahi nahi hame abhi bhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai , kyuki jab khun hua tab Rupali vaha thi hi nahi "

" To phir kaise , maine khud suna hai "

" Shayad is baat ka jawaab rupali hi de sakti hai " tabhi unhe kisi ki aahat Hui . Nirmala ekdum se Darr gayi ki kisine sun to nahi liya.

" Kis jawab ke baare me janna hai meri ladli ko itne raat ko " Pratik kitchen me paani lene aate hue bola .

" Vo maine ise sab kuch bata Diya hai " Nirmala ek serious tone me kaha aur Pratik bhi samajh gaya.

" Aur mujhe Rupali didi ne kiye hue khun ke baare me bhi pata hai " Ashu ki baat sun pratik Jo paani pi Raha tha vo usi ke upar gir Gaya .

" Kya , Nirmala ye Ashu kya baat kar rahi hai "

"Ji vo uske pass nayi shaktiya aai hai vo kisi ke dimag ka guess kar sakti hai , aur kahna hai ki Rupali dimag me ye kah Rahi thi ki usike vajah murder hua hai "

" Nahi main guess nahi main dimag ka sun sakti hu agar vo aavaj dimag me tej ho to aap Mera yakin kijiye papa "

Pratik ne Dono ki taraf dekha .

" Thik hai agar tum kah Rahi ho to sach hi hoga lekin Ham koi nishkarsh is baat se nahi nikal sakte vo bhi hamari Ghar beti ke sath sath tumhare Bhai ki hone vaali biwi bhi hai "


Nirmala ne Apni aankhe Pratik ki taraf kar .

" Vaise aapko kya lagata hai ki murder rupali ne Kiya hai ki nahi" Nirmala ne pratik ki shaktiya kya kah Rahi hai ye puchha.

" Agar tum meri baat Karo to vo mujhe vyayaktik rup se Rupali ne ye khun Kiya hai ye nahi lagta aur meri shaktiya bhi is baat se sahamat hai "

" Lekin papa aapki shaktiya kabhi galat bhi ho sakti hai uski probility itni sahi thodi hoti hai "

" Haa lekin ham abhi bhi kisi natije par nahi pahunch sakte "


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Ek ghane jangal me andhere me chalte hue.

Hava ka dhima sa jhauka chal Raha tha .tabhi gufa me baithe baithe patto ki chur chur karne ki aavaj aayi .

" Pritam tumhe use taraf dekhne se mana Kiya tha Naa "
Ye aavaj aate hi najar ek gruhasth ki uske sar par ekdum barik baal the jisase aise lag raha tha kuch dino pahle hi mundan karaya ho.

Vo gruhashta ke muh se phir se shabd nikle .

" shashan, raaj , netrutva ,seva ye char shabd ek saman hokar bhi bhinna hai "

Tabhi phir se mujhe chirp chirp ki patto ki aavaj aayi .us taraf palatate hi . Mujhe kisi jaanvar ke lambe hath dikhe upar dekha to .








Ek dass feet uchha bhediya khada tha .

Main ekdum se nind se jaag Gaya .

Kaisa ajib sapna tha main kuch samajh nahi paaya.lekin mujhe us insaan ka chehra abhi bhi yaad tha.

Uski vah shantata , us pure sar par barik baarik safed Baal mujhe puri tarah yaad the .
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Ashu kal ki baat par behad chintit thi.usi ke sath sabhi the sivay naye aaye mahmano ke .

Shital , Tejaswini aur sunidhi Apni charcha me lagi hui thi .

Vahi sunil Vishal se baat kar raha tha.

" Kya yaar tujhe college jaane ki itni jaldi kyu hai itna bada ho gaya hai phir bhi college college karta rahta hai "

" Are Sunil tujhe kya pata hai kitni ladkiya Marti hai mujhpe vaha ekdum sukun milta hai vaise us din Kamal ne to ijjat hi down kar di thi lekin maine pura crisis manage kar liya."

" Achha , tu Jaa vaise to main Ghar par Jo haryaali hai usi main vyast hu "

"Abe kahi Rupali didi ko pata chal Gaya to khair nahi "

"Achha aur Teri baat Maine Meena ko bata di to main to koi vakt nahi lene vaala use apne niche litane pe "

" Achha, to ye baat hai,bhool mat Ashu ki shadi mere Bhai se ho Rahi hai "

" Bhai ki nayya me sair hone me interest hai ladke ko , vaise Maine suna hai ki Vo Amrita hai na uska koi bachpan se hi boyfriend hai "

" Kya yaar ? Tujhe kaise pata mujhe to lag raha tha ki usase mujhe pyar ho gaya hai "

Sunil aur Vishal apni hi ajib si baato par hasne Lage .

" Maine ye baat pranjali se suni hai vo sab ladkiyo ko bata Rahi thi ki kaise vo ek ladke ke khwabo me rahti hai ye baat hai "

" Are koi nahi ab to naye shahar shif ho gaye hai , long distance kaha chalta hai kya pata hame bhi mauka mile "

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" Agar Aisa hai to phir to ye bahot badi problem hai " Kamal Ashu ki baat sunkar bol pada .

" Aisa hi hai vo sab kisi M.A.V naam ki company me kam karte hai "

" Kal mujhe achha hua kisike aane ki aahat Hui varna mera raaj kal hi khul jaata ."

Ashu ka chehra ekdum Kamal ki taraf uski baat sun hi Gaya .

" To isiliye tumne mujhe kamre se jaldi bheja ".

" Kyu tum rukna chahti thi kya ?Maine vaise bhi room se nikala thodi tum hi chali gayi"

" Nahi , Main soch rahi thi Ab tumhe shayad meri jarurat nahi padegi."

Ashu ki baat par Kamal ka chehra utar Gaya .

" Ashu tumhari jarurat Kabhi bhi khatam nahi hogi , jab koi nahi tha tab tum thi "

" Sorry vaise bhi tumhare siva mera bhi koi nahi hai "

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Kamal bahot din ho gaye the , Sulochanaji se nahi mila tha isiliye School jaane se pahle Vaha chala gaya tha .

Sulochanaji ke sath jo kuch karne ki koshish ki thi aur kuch dino se unke jo khwab dekh raha tha usase mere man me glani ho gayi thi .

Jis chij ki glani man me chadh jaaye use bhul nahi sakte aur chhod bhi nahi sakte bass aisi halat meri ho gayi thi.


Jab vaha par pahuncha ,mujhe dekh shayad vo khush ho gayi thi aisa mujhe laga .

" Vo Divya Chali gayi hai school , Kyu tumhe late nahi ho raha "

" Nahi , aaj hamara class late hai revision chalu hai kuch subject ki exam hai naa boards ke kuch dino baad "

Sulochanaji jaise kuch bolna chahti thi lekin bol nahi rahi thi .
Phir main hi bol pada .

" Achha main jata hu ."

" Ruko, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai Andar aao "

Main unke piche chala gaya .





" Dekho Kamal us din ke liye main tumse maafi mangti hu mujhe vo sab nahi kahna chahiye tha "

" Nahi sulochanaji maafi ki koi jarurat nahi hai Aap divya ki chinta main thi isiliye bol padi "

" Nahi , Lekin main tumhe us tarah se bolne ka adhikar mujhe nahi hai tum bhi to is parivar ka hissa ho "

Main unki aankho me glaani dekh paa Raha tha , isiliye mujhe bhi apne man ki baat bolne ki himmat ho gayi.

" Maafi to mujhe maangni chahiye
Us din maine hamare rishte par daag lagane ki koshish ki thi "

" Nahi tumhe bhi maafi maangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai"

" Nahi shayad meri galti ke liye Sunny mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karta " meri aavaj ab ekdum dhimi ho gayi.

" Maine to usase vada kiya tha ki main Tumhe apne parivaar ki tarah rakhungi"

" Usne mujhe bhi kaha tha ki aap ka khyal rakhna aur main hi "

Main kuch aage bolta tabhi unhone mere otho par apna hath rakh diya .

Main aage kuch bol nahi paaya aur vaha se bahar aa gaya .

Apni bike lekar raste par nikal gaya .tabhi mere pichhe se ekdum tejj se kisine mujhe talli maari maine aage dekha vo koi nahi Arjun hi tha .


Main uska pichha karte hue gaadi ki speed badha di.Aage traffic tha vaha par uski gaadi rukne hi vaali thi main use vahi sabak sikhaunga .

Aas pass ke dukandar mujhe itni tej gaadi chalate hue dekhne lage , main Meri scooty thi isiliye vo jyada tej bhag nahi payi .

Jab main traafic signal ke pass pahunch hi raha tha vaha par Arjun ki gaadi ruki hui thi .

Signal ke pass behad bheed thi achanak sab log meri taraf dekhne lage.

Side me lage dukan to jaise barf ki tarah pighal rahe the . Main kuch samajh pata tab tak mere niche ki scooty ek kursi ban gayi aur dar ke maare aage dekhta vaha ek shaksh khada hua tha.

" Kon ho tum ?, Aur main yaha kaise aaya ?"

Usne apne idhar udhar dekhte hue muskurakar .

" Main ? Pahchana nahi , Tumhara jaani dushman KHARAD "


Like kardo update kaise lagi bata dena . Kya pasand aa raha hai story me vo batao hus hisab se mujhe likhne me aasani hogi agar kuch nahi aa raha ho vo bhi bata do .

Aaaaayeeeee ab ye KHARAD kha se aagya bhai
Yr itni acha suspense chl rha tha story me lekin ye to kuch jada he hogya esa lgta hai mujhe
Kamal ke ghr me jo chl rha hai wo Kamal ko chor ke baki sb jante hai smj me ye ni aaya ki aakhir Kamal ki family me Kamal kuch khas ni hai fir bi Kamal ko ghr me Q rakha gya ab Kamal ke maa or baap bilkul UNIQE character hai

 

[hemya]

Aaaaayeeeee ab ye KHARAD kha se aagya bhai
Yr itni acha suspense chl rha tha story me lekin ye to kuch jada he hogya esa lgta hai mujhe
Kamal ke ghr me jo chl rha hai wo Kamal ko chor ke baki sb jante hai smj me ye ni aaya ki aakhir Kamal ki family me Kamal kuch khas ni hai fir bi Kamal ko ghr me Q rakha gya ab Kamal ke maa or baap bilkul UNIQE character hai

Uski family nahi uske dadaji use family me rakh rahe hai . Lekin Ab kharad ka introduction to Dena hi tha main villain hai is puri story ka aur essential character hai . Ab confusion ek do update me clear ho jayega baaki ka bhi aur kharad ka to agli update me hi .

 

[Iron Man]

Shandar update

 

[dev61901]

Ye bhai e kya kar diye tum

Hero or Villain ko amne samne kar diya hero ke pass to uski puri powers bhi nahi ha or uske samne apne main villain ko la kar khada kar diya ab kese bachega kamal isse dekhte han kon bachata ha kamal ko

Waiting for next mega update