Sangeeta Saha
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bahut badiya update,fataka aur ekdom umda kahaani
Beautiful and wonderful update! The story is really interesting and marvelous with great writing skills.hina khan mare mare qadmon ke chal rahi thi. prem kumar jese king ho aur woh uski achanak se ban jane wali kunwari rakhel ??
sana shah apni dost ko dekh nazren churane lagi. prem kumar dil me to has raha tha upar se ghambir dikh raha tha. hina khan ko liye ek chair par beth gaya. hina khan ka hath pakad usay khench apni ek jaangh par bitha gaya
hina khan ki pathani chutad prem kumar ki jangh pade toh woh uchhal padi. ghabra kar prem kumar ko dekhti khadi hone lagi
prem kumar... beth jaao hina
direct hina khan ka naam hi le gaya tha prem kumar. sana shah aur hina khan dono ke moh ek baar ko khule. agle pal dono ke dil ki dhadkane tez tez chalne lagi
kyun ke prem kumar ne sana shah ko khench apni dusri jaangh par bitha liya tha. dono ko apni bahun me ghere me leta hua cross hands se dono ka ek ek chucha pakad kar dabane laga. dono ek baar firse uchhal padi thi. hina khan zayada ghabra gai thi. woh uthne lagi
prem kumar ne uska chucha chhod uski tangon ke beech uski chut par rakh daba dia. hina khan uth nahi saki. ab hina khan buri tarah se kanpne lagi thi
hina khan kanpte badan aur kanpti awaz ke sath boli..... ye kyaa kar rahe ho tum prem
prem kumar ne usay jawab dene se pahle hina khan ki kamiz me hath ghusa kar uske nange pet par rakh ferna shuru kar dia. sana shah ki chut se nikle amrit se usay thodi si uljhan hone lagi thi. par prem kumar jo hina ke sath karta ja raha tha uski chut me firse khujli badhne lagi thi. usay sharam bhi badi aa rahi thi. par hina khan ki sharam ke aage uski sharam kuch bhi nahi thi
prem kumar ne sana shah ke chuche par rakhe hath ko hataya aur hina khan ki kamiz me ghusata hua uski shalwar ke andr bhi ghusa kar uski chut par rakh ragadne laga
hina khan to barson se garm thi. basit kahan uski aag ab bujha pata tha usay to gand maarne se fursat hi nahi milti thi. chut ko woh kabhi kabhi hi yaad karta tha. ab prem kumar ka hath uski chut par aaya to pagal hone lagi. chut se pani nikalne laga
hina khan kasmasane lagi. sana shah se nazren churane lagi. himmat haarti ja rahi thi. prem kumar kisi se kuch bole bina kisi ki baat ka jawab diye bina apni marzi karta ja rha tha
akhir hina khan sahn nahi kar pai. uski sharam jeetne lagi. woh jhatke se uth khadi hui aur kanpti hui prem ko dekh boli..... tumm ye sab bohut galat kar rahe ho
prem kumar ne sana shah ko apni jaangh se hataya. khada hota hua hina khan ko bazuon se pakad kar wahi kamre me rakhe sofe par ja kar lita gaya. hina khan kamre se bhaag jana chahti thi par prem kumar ke aage uska zor chal nahi pa raha tha
hina khan prem kumar ki zor zabardasti par pareshan ho uthi thi
prem kumar ne uski kamiz pakad kar upar ko sarkani shuru kar di
hina khan..... plz prem aisa mat karo. ye sahi nahi hai
prem kumar ne uski suni to bola.... aap ke saamne sana shah ke sath kitna kuch kar chuka hon. ab aap ek sath bhi nahi karunga to aap dono ek dusri ki ankhon me ankhen daal kar kabhi bat nahi kar sakengi
hina khan prem ki is baat par lajawab ho gai. par uski sharam usay prem ko ye sab karne se rok rahi thi
hina khan..... fir bhi mujhe ye sab acha nahi lag raha ha
prem..... tab bhi karna zaruri ha
prem ne uski suni unsuni kar di. sana shah ab dilchaspi aur lustful nigah se prem ko dekhti ja rahi thi
uski chut ki khujli pahle se zayada badhne lagi thi. usne apni whole life me aisa live pahle kabhi nahi dekha tha. dekha tha to apni chudai ko dekha tha. uske bad ab hina khan aur prem kumar ko dekh rahi thi. usay bada bhala lag raha tha sab
prem kumar ne hina khan ki shalwar ke naade ko pakad khench dia
hina khan uchhal padi. apni shalwar aur prem ka hath pakad kar minnat karti hui boli
hina khan..... plz prem aisa mat karo. kasam se main sharam se mar jaaungi
prem..... fir kab karne dogi aap
hina khan lab bhench gai
prem kumar uski chalne nahi di. shalwar dheeli karta hua uski panty khench uski chut ke darshan karne laga. clean shave chut dekh prem kumar jhuka aur hina khan ki chut ko chumta hua uth khada hua
prem kumar..... madam plz apne kapde sahi kar lijiye
hina khan aur sana shah dono jhatka khaa gai thi prem kumar ke badle hue lahje par
hina khan bina apni kamiz shalwar sahi kiye with wonder eyes prme kumar ko dekhne lagi. prem kumar ab chair par betha chin masalta hua gahri soch me dooba betha tha
hina khan wahi leti rahi.
prem kumar ne sana shah ko dekha. fir hina khan ko dekha hina khan ki loose shalwar aur adhe nange pet ko dekha fir bola...... mujhe laga tha is hospital mein kuch saal to mere bohut achhe beetenge. par mai ek baat bhul gaya tha. samay kabhi aik jaisa nahi rahta. pal pal badlata rahta ha. abhi dhoop ah to hamesha nahi rahegi. chhaaon bhi aayegi. aise hi chhaon bhi hamesha nahi rahti. sukh dukh ka chakkar bhi kuch aisa hi ha. kuch mahine bohut maze se guzre mere is hospital me. lekin ab mera dana pani is hospital se uth chuka ha. mujhe jana hoga. aap dono se is hospital ke pure staff se bohut door jana hoga
prem kumar uth khada hua
ab ke hina khan ko sabse bada jhatka laga.. woh aise hi dheeli shalwar ke sath uth khadi hui uski loose shalwar uske pairon me aa giri par hina khan uspar dhayan na deti hui prem kumar ko dekhne lagi. uski ankhon me dard ka samandr utar aaya tha. kuch pal pahle laaj sharam aur surur ke rang the aur chinta ke saaye lahrane lage the
prem kumar ne uski pairon me giri padi shalwar ko dekha. uski gori legs ko dekha aur muskurata hua bola..... yahan raha to jaise ye shalwar pairon me giri padi han na, pairon se nikal jaayegi. pure badan par ek bhi kapda nahi rahega
hina khan ko ab ke badi sharam aai. ghabra bhi gai thi prem kumar ku baat sunkar.. jhuki aur jhat se shalwar pakad kar upar ko karti prem kumar ki orr peeth kar shalwar ka nada bandhne lagi thi. sharam se uske chahre ka ek ek centimeter thalthalane laga tha
idhar sana shah jo prem kumar ke jaane ki baat sunkar chinta me aa gai thi. hina khan ki hadbadahat dekh muskura padi thi
shalwar ka nada band karti hina khan mudi nahi
prem kumar aise hi usay dekh bola..... aap badi sharam wali ho hina khan. sorry ab ke aap ko madam nahi kahunga main. kyun ke aap ki aur sana shah ki mai badi izzat karta hon. aap dono pata nahi kyu meri itni deewani ho gai. maine aap ke sath bhi wahi sab kia jo sana shah ke sath kiya tha. woh bhi khud ko rok nahi pai thi. aap bhi nahi rok pai. mai yakeen se kahta hon mai sana shah ke saamne aap ke badan ke saare kapde bhi utar deta aap sharmati lajati hui inkaar karne ka drama karti. par mujhe rokti nahi. kyun ke yahi to aap ke mann ki sabse badi ichha jo ban gai thi. ye galat ha hina khan
prem ke moh se bar bar apna naam sunkar hina khan ke dil ki dhadkane badi speed se bekabu hone lagi thi
woh jhatke se mudi. prem kumar se nigah mili to palken gira gai
prem kumar..... ye jhuki nigah bata rahi ha. mai aap ke sath kisi bhi hadh se guzarne ki koshish karun to aap mujhe rokengi nahi
itna bol prem kumar ne sana shah ko pakada aur uski chut pakad gaya
prem kumar.... chaho to mera hath hata sakti ho aap
aur sana shah jitni chut ki khujli ne usay firse pagal karna shuru kar dia tha. sambhal sakti thi. par prem kumar to aur hi dhang se uske dil me utarne laga tha. aatma me basne laga tha
sana shah bhi sir jhuka gai
prem kumar...... aap dono nahi chahti ke mai yahan se jaaun to abhi ke abhi mere 10 ginne tak apni apni shalwar khud se utaar kar apne pairon se nikal do
prem kumar itna bol dono ko chakkar me uljhata hua darwaza ke pass pohnch dono ko dekh bola
prem kumar...... 1
hina khan aur sana shah ne prem kumar ko hairat khauf aur bepanah sharam se dekha. fir nazren jhuka gai
prem kumar....... 2
dono kanp uthi prem kumar ke jaane ka soch kar, sharam ka soch kar. kaise itni sharam wali hokar dono uske samne apni apni shalwar utaar sakti thi
prem kumar...... 3
dono hadbada gai. ginti badi speed se 10 tak pohnchti ja rahi thi.
prem kumar...... 4
dono honto par jeeb fer ek dusri ko dekhne lagi. fir turant hi sir jhuka gayi thi
prem kumar....... 5
prem dono ko bari bar dekh dil mein bola...... drama kar rahi ho dono. pata ha mujhe ginti puri nahi karne dogi
prem kumar....... 6
turant hi agla bhi bol gaya...... 7
dono ke jhatke se sir utha kar prem kumar ko dekha tha. 6 aur 7 ke beech prem kumar ne samay lagaya hi nahi tha
prem kumar ka mann to hua khub hase. par hasne se uski game kharab ho jati
prem kumar...... 8
tabhi dono ke chahre ke rang udte chale gaye. time limit khatam hone ko thi. aur sharam unhe maare de rahi thi
prem kumar...... 9
aur dono ke dilon ki dhadkano bohut fast chalne lag padi thi. prem kumar dono ko aur dono prem kumar ko dekhne lagi thi. sharam se dono ke chahre tamtamane lage the
prem kumar ne 10 bolne ke liye moh khola hi tha dono ne ek sath jaldi se apne apne hath kamiz ke palle ke neeche daal kar apni apni shalwar ke naade pakad kar badi hi furti ke sath kholne ke bad shalwar dheeli kari aur chhod di.
dono ki shalwaren dono ke pairon me padi thi. dono ab prem kumar ko nahi dekh rahi thi. dono ke sir hi nahi halki halki kamaren bhi jhuk gai thi. dono ki nazren apni apni shalwar par gadhi thi. sharam se pani pani hui ja rahi thi
dono apni apni soche ja rahi thi. aise zor zabardasti to kabhi unke shoharon ne bhi unki shalwaren nahi utarvai thi. sana shan zayada hairan thi. usay kyaa ho raha tha. usne to jisse pyaar kia tha. usi se uski shadi bhi ho gai thi. saalon usi se maze se chudti aa rahi thi. ab prem ke uski life me aa jane par woh apna asali aur sacha pyar tak ek side kar gai thi
der tak prem kumar nahi bola to pahle sana shah ne himmat karke sir ko uthaya to prem kumar nahi dikha
sana shah pure kamre me prem kumar ko dekhne laga. bathroom ke adh khule darwaze ko dekha. prem kumar nahi dikha.
sana shah jhuki aur speed se apni shalwar pakad upar ko karti nada lagane lagati boli
sana shah..... hina jaldi se shalwar pahn. kamre ka door khula hua ha. prem chala gaya ha.
hina khan ko aik aur jhakta laga. jiske liye apni sharam maar kar khud se shalwar utaar kar pairon me gira gai thi. woh chala gya tha. jhatke se sir utha kar saamne dekha. prem kumar to nahi dikha, door ka hata lock dia, halka sa khula door dikha. ghabra kar jaldi se jhuki aur shalwar pakad utar karti gaanth lagane lagi.
sana shah bhaag kar darwaza khol kar bahar dekhne lagi. prem kumar nahi dikha to door band karti chatkhani laga gai
hina khan udas lahje me boli..... kyaa hua. prem chala gaya
sana shah bhi dukhi mann se boli... humne der kar di hina.
hina khan ki ankhon me ansu aa gaye.... woh ab kabhi nahi dikhega humen. der to nahi kari. badi mushkil se apni sharam ko maar pai thi. himmat juta paai thi. fir bhi uski maan to li hi thi na. kyun chala gaya woh
sana shah hina khan ke pass aai aur usay gale se laga gai
hina khan pahli bar prem ke liye khul kar boli..... usay rok lo sana.. mai nahi rah sakti uske bina. bohut payara hai woh. dil ne uske liye dhadakna shuru kiya to ab hamesha usi ka nam le le kar hi dhakdakta rahega
sana shah uljhi boli.... teri to samjh me aati ha yaar.. mujhe kyaa hua. main bhi uski maanti chali gai. kyu usay rok nahi paai. kyun usay manmani karne di. ab kaise uske dhamki thi. bola 10 ginne tak shalwaren nahi utari to woh hamesha hamesha ke liye chala jaayega.
hina khan.... ye sari baaten bad me kar lena sana.. plz jaao usay rok lo.
sana shah jaldi se hina khan se alag hui.... sahi kahti ho tum.. usay jane se rokna hoga. woh aam larka nahi
hina khan.. woh bohut khas ha sana.. shayad hum dono uske bina ab kabhi sukhi na rah sakengi
sana shah darwaze ki orr badhti hui boli.... shayad nahi yakeenan. najane mera dil kyun uske jaane se udas ho gaya hai. mera dil bhi prem ko hamesha pass pass chahne laga hai.
hina khan ko ab sana shah se koi jalan nahi ho rahi thi. usne ek baat soch li thi. jo prem kumar ne uske sath uske besty ke sath kia tha, sarasar illegal tha. dono shoharon waliyan hote hue gunah wale raste par chal padi thi. ab ek dusri se katrana ya jalna kaisa?
hina khan ab prem kumar ke liye dhadakte dil aur chinta se soche ja rahi thi
sana shah ne jaise hi door ki chatkhani hatane ke liye hath uthaya
prem kumar jo bathroom me hi chhupa dono ki baaten sunta raha tha bol pada
prem kumar..... jo dil me ho usay dil ke siva kahin aur talash kaise kiya ja sakta ha. jo saanson me basta ho usay apni saaanson me talash karna chahiye. jisse prem ho uski khushbu soongh kar bhi usay talash kiya ja sakta ha. kamal ki lover ho aap dono, apne iklote premi ki khushbu se hi anjaan ho
prem kumar ki awaz dono ke dhamaka sabit hui thi. hina khan to chair par gir si padi thi. uske andr himmat nahi rahi thi woh prem ko dekh bhi sakti. dil itni zor se dhadakne laga tha mano seene ke bahar dhadakne laga ho. prem kumar ne dono ki private baaten bhi sun li thi. kaise ab dhadkane kabu me aayengi. haaye itni sharam se usay maar hi daalegi
sana shah ki bhi same halat thi. uska hath prem kumar ki awaz sunte hi bejaan hokar neeche latak gaya tha. woh ek nazar prem kumar ko dekh sharam se pani pani hoti hui sir jhuka gai thi.
kameena bathroom ke andr dono hath seene par bandhe ghayal karti muskan ke sath dono ko dekhta ja raha tha.
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