nice update..!!update 13
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Abb Takk
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main hadbada gaya aur khana adhura chhod kar khada ho gaya.
train chal padi abb to main gaya.??????????
jab main khada hua to ek saath do batein hui...????
1 ek to train ne chalna shuru kar diya..!!
2 Mujhe ek awaz sunaai di "oye vijju tu yahan kya kar raha hai"
ye awaz sun kar hi mere zakhmi dhutdon ke saath saath meri gaand me bhi dard hone laga. saala jab maine us awaz ki disha me dekha to hamare kothe ke saath bane kothe ka ek guard khada tha.... saala harami maa ka harami puttar iska yahan kya kaam...
Abb aaaggeeee
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Update ::: 13
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us guard ko dekhte hi mere pairon ke neeche se zameen hi khisak gai. ek to chutdon ke dard ne jaan nikali hui thi. doosra main pehchan liya gaya tha.ye saala yahan kahan se aa gaya. mujhe awaz dene wala kothe ka koi customer nahi. balke saath ke kothe ka ek guard tha. ye bhi saala mujhse se badi khaar khata hai. ek baar maine ise bohat bura bhala bol diya tha. tab ye kisi se meri maa ke baare gandi gandi baatein kr raha tha. is liye meri is nahi banti thi..maine is ki sab ki saamne be-izzati kar di thi...
us guard ko nazar andaz kiye me train ki taraf bhaag liya abb chalti train me meri bogie kaun si hai, main bhool gaya tha. bas yaad tha to ye ke yahan se nikanla hai...
aaj mujhe pata chala ke
""jab jaan par ban aati hai. to bhagne ke record toot jaya karte hain....""
bhooke pet aur chutdon ke dard ke saath saath main aisa bhaaga ke kya bataaon main to ye bhi bhool gaya tha. ke main kai ghanton se bhooka hun aur chutdon ki halat bhi bohat hi zayada khasta hai. bhagte bhagte main train ke ek door tak poncha. door ke handal ko pakad kar maine phurti se jump lagaya aur train par sawar ho gaya. meri saansein aise chal rahi thee. jaise koi kutta mere peche ho tab jaise saans phool jati hai. waise hi meri sanson ki bhi halat thi... saans ke pressure se aisa lag raha tha jaise ke abhi dil bhi saans ke saath saath bahar nikal aayega....
jab maine train ke door se bahar dekha to heraan reh gaya train platform se kaafi bahar aa chuki thi. saans bahal karte time kuch zayada hi lag gaya tha...
"agar main thoda sa bhi let ho jata to phirse rekha baai ke chungal me phans jata"
phir main train ke door par khade ho kar peeche us guard ko dekhne laga.platform bohat door tha lekin phir bhi main us guard ko dekh pa raha tha.wo haramzaada kisi ko fone kar raha tha.ye dekh kar me samajh gaya k ab rekha baai ko pata chal jaye ga. ya ke main kis train se aur kis taraf ja raha hoon. ab kya karoon kahan jaon.?????????
"agle station par kahi rekha baai ke admi na ponch jayen. chalti train se utar bhi nahi sakta tha. itna bada risk nahi le sakta tha main. koi bhi risk lete huye mujhe maa aur behno ke chehre dikhne lagte the. "
""agar mujhe kuch ho gaya to maa hamesha ke liye usi daldal me phansi reh jayegi. aur waqt guzarne par meri behen priya ko bhi usi daldal me utarna padega.........."""
"aisi soch aate hi mere andar se khoon ubalne laga"
"Nahi nahi main aisa kabhi hone nahi doonga. main saari dunya ko aag laga donga. agar meri behen ko kothe ki zeenat banaya gaya. maa to majboor thi par main nahi."
main phir se rekha baai ke changul me phansne wala tha. mera dil kiya main apna sarr zorr se train ki lohe ki deewar se takra doon.
""..Na rahe ga sarr aur na rahengi aisi sochen.."""
Par phir meri maa aur behen. nahi nahi mujhe khud par contol karna seekhna hoga. warna kahi aisa na ho k me paagal hi ho jaon. agar main hi himmat haar gaya to mere intizar me peeche bethi meri maa meri behne unka kya hoga...???
"wo to waise hi marr jayengi"
""nahi nahi main aisa nahi hone doonga"" ..phir maine apne aap ko shaant karne ke liye zorr zorr se lambi lambi saansen lene laga. kuch der baad main kuch shaant hua .
thodi der tak sochta raha ke sab se pehle mujhe apne darr par kaabu paana seekhna hoga. jo mujhe maa aur behno ko le kar hai.
""ab dekhte hain waqt mere liye kya kuch nayaa le kar aata hai""
jo bhi karna hai thande damag se karna hoga.
main wahin train ke farsh par beth gaya.aur door se bahar ke manzar ko dekhte khud ko relax karne laga. jo sochen mujhe pareshan karti thee. unko apne damag se nikalne ke liye maine apna dhayan train se bahar bhaag rahe khet khalyan ki tyaraf laga diya
(...train ya bus ka safar ho to aisa lagta hai jaisa ke hum safar nahi kar rahe. hum ek hi jaga hain aur zameen safar kar rahi hai...)
isliye mian train ke bahar bhaag rahe khet khalyan ko bade hi ghor se dekh raha tha. taaake mera mind divert ho jaye. aur mera darr bhi kuch kam ho jaye.... saala is darr ne chutdon ke saath gand bhi phadni shuru kardi thi. jab se guard ko dekha tha darr andar ssenikal hi nahi raha tha..
mujhe bethe abhi thodi hi der hui thi ke mujhe kuch awaazen sunai di. awazon ko sun mujhe lagaa kuch gadbad hai. me udhar chala jidhar se awazen aa rahi the. mere saamne ik door tha jo band tha us ke andar se awazen aa rahi thi. maine door knock kiya.
andar se koi nahi bola lekin kisi ki dabi dabi cheeken sunai de rahi. aise lag raha tha jaise koi kisi ka Mohn hath se daba raha ho taake awaz na nikal sake.
Maine phir se door knock kiya. Kuch der tak kisi ne door nahi khola aur wo dabi dabi awazen bhi band ho gai. Kuch der main intizar karta raha. mujhe gadbad ka andaza to ho hi gaya tha.
""kar bhala so ho bhala""""
ye soch kar maine door ko musalmal khat-khatana shuru kar diya. thodi der baad door ek jhatke ke saath khul gaya. Kisi madarchod ne mujhe mere collar se pakad kar andar khench liya. main sambhal na saka aur ek jhatke se andar cabin ke farsh par ja kar gira.
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh maaaaaaaaaaaaa
ek baar to mera sarr hi ghoom gaya. aur chutdon ke bal farsh par girne se mere totay hi udd gaye. saaala itna dard hua k kya bataaon. mujhe mere chutdon par mirchen lagi hui si mehsoos hone lagi.
"jin ke chutdon ki kabhi aisi halat hui hogi wahi jaan sakta hai......"hahahahahahahahahahahhaahahahahaha " dard to hua, lekin phir bhi ye sochte mere kah-kahe bhi andar hi andar nikal rahe the"
phir mere pet me ek laat padi aaaaaaaaaa ......maaaaaaaa ....marrrrrrrr gayyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....
saale wo do ladke the ek ne mere pet par itne zorr ke lat maari. main apna pet pakad kar neeche hi beth gaya.
meri haalat aur kharab ho gai. pehle hi bhook aur chutdon ne mere hosh udaye huye the. abb pet par padne wali laat ne meri halat aur bhi patli kardi thi.
Meri cheekh nikal gai. kuch der main pet ke dard se nachta raha. jab kuch rahat mili to dekha do ladke ek ladki ko pakad kar uske saath zabardasti karne ki koshish kar rahe the.
saala is dunya me koi bhi aisa nahi jo aurton ko pyaar se dekhe na k akela pa kar us par kutton ki tarha toot pade. haramzaade har waqt kisi na kisi ki izzat utaarne me lage rehte hain. ye soch mera ghusssa badhne laga.
"""mujhe dunya se nafrat si hone lagi.""""
phir maine apni nazar ko ghuma kar poore cabin ka jayeza liya. ek taraf ek aurat leti thi us ke sar se khoon beh raha tha. us ke paas hi ek ladki darri sehmi si bethi hui thi.. shakal se 15 saal ki lag rahi thi...aur jis ladki ka rape hone ja raha tha .wo jawan lag rahi thi. mujhe laga is ki madad karni chahiye.
lekin kaise karoon wo do the aur me akela. chutdon ka dard,,Pet me laat padne se hone wala dard aur teesra kai ghante ki bhook ne meri battery hi khatam kar di thi. kya karoon me yahi soch raha tha ke achanak se meri ankhon ke saamne meri maa aur behno ke chehre aa gaye meri maa bhi aise hi harr raat bebasi se lut'ti rehti hai. aur agar main apne andar himmat paida na kar paya to is ladki ki tarha meri behne bhi ek din in ladko jaise hi kisi bhediye ke aage gid-gida rahi ho gi.
ye soch aate hi mera khoon ubalne laga mera dard kahan gaya mujhe nahi pata main dard ko soch hi nahi raha tha. aur na hi mujhe khali pet hone ka ehsaas ho raha tha. yaad tha to bas yahi ke meri behen ki izzat khatre me hain. me ne idhar-udhar nazar ghumai. koi kaam ki cheez mil jaye. mujhe koi cheez mil nahi rahi thi mera ghussa badhne laga.
achanak meri nazar ek ladke ki pent par padi jo usne utar di thi. jab me socho me ghum tha.to un dono ne ladki ke pakde phad kar use nanga kar diya tha aur ek ladke ne bhi apni pent shirt utaar di thi.abb wahi belt mere kaam aane wali thi...
to un dono lakdon ladko ne ladki ke kapde phaad diye the ladki ki cheeekhon se poora cabin goonj raha tha. maine belt ko apne hath par lapeta aur "hook" wali side ko zorr se us ladke ke sarr parr maara jo ladki ke oopar chada hua tha us ka sarr hi khul gaya aur khoon ka fawara us ke sar se phoot nikla. ahhhhhhh wo cheekhta hua ladki ke oopar se uth kar side gir gaya.
doosra ladka ladki ke hatth pakde huye tha. achanak hamle se wo bokhla gaya. waqt zaya na karte huye maine doosre ladke ko belt se peetne shuru kar diya. mujhe us ladki me apni behen ki surat dikhai pad rahi thi. aur ladke rekhaa baai ke guards....
us par maine itne belt barsaye K us ka saare jism par jaga jaga se khoon ke dhabbe nazar aane lage. wo belt ki maar khaate khaate behosh ho gaya.
Pehla ladka jis ke sarr parr maine belt maara tha wo khoon me lat-pat to tha hi. lekin phir bhi kuch sambhal chuka tha. wo meri taraf badha ,to maine belt phirr se us ke sarr parr de maara lekin us harami ne belt ko pakad liya aur zorr se apni taraf khencha. abb wo saala jawaan launda tha aur main ek bachha. me ladkhada gaya jisse belt mere hath se choot gai. ladke ne belt ko apne hath par lapeta aur phir mujh par chhad dauda.
maine bachne ki bohat koshish ki lekin usne mujhe udhedna shuru kar diya.
"aaaaaaaaaaaa oiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaaaaaa maarrrrrrrrrrrrr gaaaaaaaayyyyaaaa"
hayeeeeeeeee ... ""
sab se khatarnaak belt ke wo warr the jo mere chutdon par pad rahe the..
doosre ladke ki tarha ab meri chekhen is cabin me goonjne lagi thee...
"yahan tha hi kaun jo mujhe is jallad se bachaye"
"...meri haalat achanak phir se bigadne lagi. pet dard aur bhook ne ek saath yalghar kar di. lekiin belt ki musalsal mere chutdon par padne wali maar ne mere dum-kham sab nichhod kar rakh diya. mujhe lagne laga aaj mein pakka maara jaonga..."
wo ladka bhi ghusse me paagal ho gaya tha.
koi nahi tha mujhe bachane wala yahan ek aurat behosh padi thi uske sarr se khoon nikal raha tha. ek choti ladki us aurat ke paas bethi roye ja rahi wo bohat ghabrai hui thi. wo kuch karne ki halat me thi nahi.
lekin ".... jako rakhe saaiyan maarr sake na koi ...."
lekin is beech ladki kuch sambhal chuki thi aur usme abb himmat bhi gai thi ab
wo akeli nahi thi aur ek ladka bhi puncture ho gaya tha.
""..ab ladki ki izzat khatre me ho aur banda bhi ek ho. to ladki itni jaldi himmat nahi haarti..""
mujhe pit'te dekh ladki ne achanak se ladke ko zorr ka dhakka de maara. ladka pehle hi sarr se zakhmi tha uska sarr phirr se train ke mazboot lohe se takraya aur wo lehrata hua neeche gir gaya.
ladki ne ladke ke hath se belt cheena...
(ab jis ladki ki izzat lut'te lut'te bachi ho aur phirr us ko moka bhi mil jaye us rapist se badla lena ka usay... all readers can imagine... k wo kya kar sakti hai)
ladkine belt ladke ke hath se chhen kar apne hath par lapeta aur lagg gai apne kaam pe phirr us ne jinta dard jhela tha wo saab us ladke ko lautane lagi. do baar sarr parr chot lagne se ladke ki condition bohat kharab ho chuki thi. us parr ladki ruke bagair usay belt se peet rahi thi. mano aaj us harami ladke ko jaan se hi maar degi.
""..ladki ghusse me ye bhi bhool gai thi k wo abhi tak nangi hai..""
thodi der baad mere kuch hosh thikane aye to maine dekha ladki abhi bhi lagi hui thi.
lekin ladke me koi movement nahi ho rahi thi. maine ladki ko awaz lagai. ladki ko sunaai nahi diya. shayad meri awaz beth gai thi. mene phir se awaz lagai. lekin baat nahi bani. to phir maine apni bachi-khuchi taqat ko ikatha kiya aur ladki ke paas ja kar "jis hath me belt thi" us hath ko pakad liya.
mere hath pakadne par ladki ne meri taraf dekha to us ki ankhen aansuon se bhari hui thee. us ki aankhen laal surkh ho chuki thee kuch to aansu behne se aur kuch apni izzat ko lut'te,, dekh kuch na kar pane ki waja se aane wale ghusse se unki ankhen laal ho chuki thee. maine ladki ko kuch nahi kaha aur apne dard ko control karte huye neeche jhuk kar ladke ko dekhne laga. kahi saala marr warr na gaya ho. lekin us ki saans chal rahi. haramzaada abhi marra nahi tha. us ladke ka jism harkat nahi kar raha tha shayad apne dost ki tarha ye bhi behosh ho gaya tha..
maine ladki se kaha bass karo ye behosh ho chuka hai. ladki abhi bhi nangi hi thi. wo aise hi khadi rahi...
""maine us par ghor nahi kiya.""
itni der me aunty ko bhi hosh aa chuka tha kyunki jab ladki ladke ko belt se maar rahi to baazi palat'te dekh choti ladki ne bhaag kar baathroom se paani la kar aunty ko taqreeban nehla hi diya diya.jis se aunty hosh me ai thi... aunty ke saare kapde geele the.
aunty ne ladki ko awaz lagai to ladki ne aunty ki taraf dekha. ab chunke khatra tall chuka tha is liye ladki bhaag kar aunty ke pass gai aur unke gale lag kar rone lagi.
main bhi ek side ho kar beth gaya. abb meri halat bhi mere control se bahar hoti ja rahi thi. meri ankhen bhi ab band hone ko thee. dard aur bhook ke maare mujhe bohat weekness feel ho rahi thi.
""... andar ka dard. bahar lagi choton ka dard. Uffff... itna dard zindagi kya kya nahi insaan se wasoolti hai....saari peedon ko sochte sochte me ik side ludhak gaya...""
mere ludhakne ki awaz se unka dhayan meri taraf gaya. tab unko andaza hua k abhi bhi wo khatre se bahar nahi hui.
kyunki mujhe dekhte hi unki nazar un dono ladkon par bhi padi. aunty ne ladki ko side kiya aur apne purse se mobile nikal kar kisi ko call karne lagi. Kuch der baat karne ke baad aunty ne ladki ko uske nange hone ka ehsaas karaya ladki jheemp kar sharam se dohri gai aur. phat se apne bag se apne doosre kapde nikal kar bathroom me ghus gai...
kuch der me ladki dress change kar aai phir aunty ne ladki ki madad se un dono
ladkon ke hath aur pair baandh diye. rassi se nahi apne bag me se ek dupatta nikal kar us ki pattiyan banai phir bandha.
pata nahi aunty ne kaha jaana tha. ye bhi nahi pata tha kitne station aye rekha baai ka kya hua us guards ne kya bataya rekha baai ko.
rekha baai ne mujhe dhoondne ke liye kya kiya hoga.
ya usne mujhe nazar andaz kar diya hoga. tha to me ek kachre ke dher ki manind hi. rekha baai ko kahan meri parwa hogi.
""main to na-jaane kab ka behosh pada tha""
"" jab meri aankh khuli to maine apne aap ko ek aaali-shan kamre me paya....
kyaaaaa????????? main marr gaya hoon. ye to koi swarg jaisi jaga lag rahi hai ...
agar ye swarg hai to phir ""maa aur behne""
"""""..... nahi nahi mujhe swarg nahi chahiye mujhe maaa aur behne chahiye....."""""
""....maaa..priya"......"maaa..priya"......"maaa..priya"......"maaa..priya"
main zorr zorr se chillane laga.
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maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa".."priiiiiiyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kahan ho tum "maaaaaaaa ... priyaaaaaaaa"
mere chillane ki awaz sun kar bhaagte qadmon ki awaz kamre ki taraf aane lagi.
main apne hosh hi kho chuka tha mujhe aisa lag raha tha. jaise ab main maa aur priya wali dunya se bohat door ja chuka hoon aur ye sab soch mera kaleja hi khoon khoon hone laga.
kapre ka door khula aur ek aunty aur do ladkiyan room ke andar aayi.
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vijay ne apni abhi tak ki zindagi me jo apni maa ki ijjat lutate dekha hai aur apni behno ka future bhi waisa ho sakta hai yahi sochkar usme itni himmat aagayi aur usne uss ladki ki ijjat bachayi..!! lagta woh aunty aur dono ladkiya vijay ko apne sath leke aayi hai..!!
