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Incest Himmat-wala (incest .. adultery .. action .. thriller) (Completed)

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A.A.G.

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update 13
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main hadbada gaya aur khana adhura chhod kar khada ho gaya.
train chal padi abb to main gaya.??????????

jab main khada hua to ek saath do batein hui...????

1 ek to train ne chalna shuru kar diya..!!
2 Mujhe ek awaz sunaai di "oye vijju tu yahan kya kar raha hai"

ye awaz sun kar hi mere zakhmi dhutdon ke saath saath meri gaand me bhi dard hone laga. saala jab maine us awaz ki disha me dekha to hamare kothe ke saath bane kothe ka ek guard khada tha.... saala harami maa ka harami puttar iska yahan kya kaam...


Abb aaaggeeee
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Update ::: 13
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us guard ko dekhte hi mere pairon ke neeche se zameen hi khisak gai. ek to chutdon ke dard ne jaan nikali hui thi. doosra main pehchan liya gaya tha.ye saala yahan kahan se aa gaya. mujhe awaz dene wala kothe ka koi customer nahi. balke saath ke kothe ka ek guard tha. ye bhi saala mujhse se badi khaar khata hai. ek baar maine ise bohat bura bhala bol diya tha. tab ye kisi se meri maa ke baare gandi gandi baatein kr raha tha. is liye meri is nahi banti thi..maine is ki sab ki saamne be-izzati kar di thi...

us guard ko nazar andaz kiye me train ki taraf bhaag liya abb chalti train me meri bogie kaun si hai, main bhool gaya tha. bas yaad tha to ye ke yahan se nikanla hai...

aaj mujhe pata chala ke


""jab jaan par ban aati hai. to bhagne ke record toot jaya karte hain....""

bhooke pet aur chutdon ke dard ke saath saath main aisa bhaaga ke kya bataaon main to ye bhi bhool gaya tha. ke main kai ghanton se bhooka hun aur chutdon ki halat bhi bohat hi zayada khasta hai. bhagte bhagte main train ke ek door tak poncha. door ke handal ko pakad kar maine phurti se jump lagaya aur train par sawar ho gaya. meri saansein aise chal rahi thee. jaise koi kutta mere peche ho tab jaise saans phool jati hai. waise hi meri sanson ki bhi halat thi... saans ke pressure se aisa lag raha tha jaise ke abhi dil bhi saans ke saath saath bahar nikal aayega....

jab maine train ke door se bahar dekha to heraan reh gaya train platform se kaafi bahar aa chuki thi. saans bahal karte time kuch zayada hi lag gaya tha...


"agar main thoda sa bhi let ho jata to phirse rekha baai ke chungal me phans jata"
phir main train ke door par khade ho kar peeche us guard ko dekhne laga.platform bohat door tha lekin phir bhi main us guard ko dekh pa raha tha.wo haramzaada kisi ko fone kar raha tha.ye dekh kar me samajh gaya k ab rekha baai ko pata chal jaye ga. ya ke main kis train se aur kis taraf ja raha hoon. ab kya karoon kahan jaon.?????????


"agle station par kahi rekha baai ke admi na ponch jayen. chalti train se utar bhi nahi sakta tha. itna bada risk nahi le sakta tha main. koi bhi risk lete huye mujhe maa aur behno ke chehre dikhne lagte the. "

""agar mujhe kuch ho gaya to maa hamesha ke liye usi daldal me phansi reh jayegi. aur waqt guzarne par meri behen priya ko bhi usi daldal me utarna padega.........."""

"aisi soch aate hi mere andar se khoon ubalne laga"

"Nahi nahi main aisa kabhi hone nahi doonga. main saari dunya ko aag laga donga. agar meri behen ko kothe ki zeenat banaya gaya. maa to majboor thi par main nahi."

main phir se rekha baai ke changul me phansne wala tha. mera dil kiya main apna sarr zorr se train ki lohe ki deewar se takra doon.


""..Na rahe ga sarr aur na rahengi aisi sochen.."""

Par phir meri maa aur behen. nahi nahi mujhe khud par contol karna seekhna hoga. warna kahi aisa na ho k me paagal hi ho jaon. agar main hi himmat haar gaya to mere intizar me peeche bethi meri maa meri behne unka kya hoga...???

"wo to waise hi marr jayengi"

""nahi nahi main aisa nahi hone doonga"" ..phir maine apne aap ko shaant karne ke liye zorr zorr se lambi lambi saansen lene laga. kuch der baad main kuch shaant hua .
thodi der tak sochta raha ke sab se pehle mujhe apne darr par kaabu paana seekhna hoga. jo mujhe maa aur behno ko le kar hai.


""ab dekhte hain waqt mere liye kya kuch nayaa le kar aata hai""

jo bhi karna hai thande damag se karna hoga.

main wahin train ke farsh par beth gaya.aur door se bahar ke manzar ko dekhte khud ko relax karne laga. jo sochen mujhe pareshan karti thee. unko apne damag se nikalne ke liye maine apna dhayan train se bahar bhaag rahe khet khalyan ki tyaraf laga diya

(...train ya bus ka safar ho to aisa lagta hai jaisa ke hum safar nahi kar rahe. hum ek hi jaga hain aur zameen safar kar rahi hai...)
isliye mian train ke bahar bhaag rahe khet khalyan ko bade hi ghor se dekh raha tha. taaake mera mind divert ho jaye. aur mera darr bhi kuch kam ho jaye.... saala is darr ne chutdon ke saath gand bhi phadni shuru kardi thi. jab se guard ko dekha tha darr andar ssenikal hi nahi raha tha..

mujhe bethe abhi thodi hi der hui thi ke mujhe kuch awaazen sunai di. awazon ko sun mujhe lagaa kuch gadbad hai. me udhar chala jidhar se awazen aa rahi the. mere saamne ik door tha jo band tha us ke andar se awazen aa rahi thi. maine door knock kiya.
andar se koi nahi bola lekin kisi ki dabi dabi cheeken sunai de rahi. aise lag raha tha jaise koi kisi ka Mohn hath se daba raha ho taake awaz na nikal sake.

Maine phir se door knock kiya. Kuch der tak kisi ne door nahi khola aur wo dabi dabi awazen bhi band ho gai. Kuch der main intizar karta raha. mujhe gadbad ka andaza to ho hi gaya tha.


""kar bhala so ho bhala""""

ye soch kar maine door ko musalmal khat-khatana shuru kar diya. thodi der baad door ek jhatke ke saath khul gaya. Kisi madarchod ne mujhe mere collar se pakad kar andar khench liya. main sambhal na saka aur ek jhatke se andar cabin ke farsh par ja kar gira.
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh maaaaaaaaaaaaa :cry:😢
ek baar to mera sarr hi ghoom gaya. aur chutdon ke bal farsh par girne se mere totay hi udd gaye. saaala itna dard hua k kya bataaon. mujhe mere chutdon par mirchen lagi hui si mehsoos hone lagi.

"jin ke chutdon ki kabhi aisi halat hui hogi wahi jaan sakta hai......"hahahahahahahahahahahhaahahahahaha " dard to hua, lekin phir bhi ye sochte mere kah-kahe bhi andar hi andar nikal rahe the"

phir mere pet me ek laat padi aaaaaaaaaa ......maaaaaaaa ....marrrrrrrr gayyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....

saale wo do ladke the ek ne mere pet par itne zorr ke lat maari. main apna pet pakad kar neeche hi beth gaya.
meri haalat aur kharab ho gai. pehle hi bhook aur chutdon ne mere hosh udaye huye the. abb pet par padne wali laat ne meri halat aur bhi patli kardi thi.
Meri cheekh nikal gai. kuch der main pet ke dard se nachta raha. jab kuch rahat mili to dekha do ladke ek ladki ko pakad kar uske saath zabardasti karne ki koshish kar rahe the.

saala is dunya me koi bhi aisa nahi jo aurton ko pyaar se dekhe na k akela pa kar us par kutton ki tarha toot pade. haramzaade har waqt kisi na kisi ki izzat utaarne me lage rehte hain. ye soch mera ghusssa badhne laga.



"""mujhe dunya se nafrat si hone lagi.""""

phir maine apni nazar ko ghuma kar poore cabin ka jayeza liya. ek taraf ek aurat leti thi us ke sar se khoon beh raha tha. us ke paas hi ek ladki darri sehmi si bethi hui thi.. shakal se 15 saal ki lag rahi thi...aur jis ladki ka rape hone ja raha tha .wo jawan lag rahi thi. mujhe laga is ki madad karni chahiye.

lekin kaise karoon wo do the aur me akela. chutdon ka dard,,Pet me laat padne se hone wala dard aur teesra kai ghante ki bhook ne meri battery hi khatam kar di thi. kya karoon me yahi soch raha tha ke achanak se meri ankhon ke saamne meri maa aur behno ke chehre aa gaye meri maa bhi aise hi harr raat bebasi se lut'ti rehti hai. aur agar main apne andar himmat paida na kar paya to is ladki ki tarha meri behne bhi ek din in ladko jaise hi kisi bhediye ke aage gid-gida rahi ho gi.

ye soch aate hi mera khoon ubalne laga mera dard kahan gaya mujhe nahi pata main dard ko soch hi nahi raha tha. aur na hi mujhe khali pet hone ka ehsaas ho raha tha. yaad tha to bas yahi ke meri behen ki izzat khatre me hain. me ne idhar-udhar nazar ghumai. koi kaam ki cheez mil jaye. mujhe koi cheez mil nahi rahi thi mera ghussa badhne laga.
achanak meri nazar ek ladke ki pent par padi jo usne utar di thi. jab me socho me ghum tha.to un dono ne ladki ke pakde phad kar use nanga kar diya tha aur ek ladke ne bhi apni pent shirt utaar di thi.abb wahi belt mere kaam aane wali thi...

to un dono lakdon ladko ne ladki ke kapde phaad diye the ladki ki cheeekhon se poora cabin goonj raha tha. maine belt ko apne hath par lapeta aur "hook" wali side ko zorr se us ladke ke sarr parr maara jo ladki ke oopar chada hua tha us ka sarr hi khul gaya aur khoon ka fawara us ke sar se phoot nikla. ahhhhhhh wo cheekhta hua ladki ke oopar se uth kar side gir gaya.
doosra ladka ladki ke hatth pakde huye tha. achanak hamle se wo bokhla gaya. waqt zaya na karte huye maine doosre ladke ko belt se peetne shuru kar diya. mujhe us ladki me apni behen ki surat dikhai pad rahi thi. aur ladke rekhaa baai ke guards....

us par maine itne belt barsaye K us ka saare jism par jaga jaga se khoon ke dhabbe nazar aane lage. wo belt ki maar khaate khaate behosh ho gaya.

Pehla ladka jis ke sarr parr maine belt maara tha wo khoon me lat-pat to tha hi. lekin phir bhi kuch sambhal chuka tha. wo meri taraf badha ,to maine belt phirr se us ke sarr parr de maara lekin us harami ne belt ko pakad liya aur zorr se apni taraf khencha. abb wo saala jawaan launda tha aur main ek bachha. me ladkhada gaya jisse belt mere hath se choot gai. ladke ne belt ko apne hath par lapeta aur phir mujh par chhad dauda.

maine bachne ki bohat koshish ki lekin usne mujhe udhedna shuru kar diya.

"aaaaaaaaaaaa oiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaaaaaa maarrrrrrrrrrrrr gaaaaaaaayyyyaaaa"
hayeeeeeeeee ... ""

sab se khatarnaak belt ke wo warr the jo mere chutdon par pad rahe the..
doosre ladke ki tarha ab meri chekhen is cabin me goonjne lagi thee...


"yahan tha hi kaun jo mujhe is jallad se bachaye"

"...meri haalat achanak phir se bigadne lagi. pet dard aur bhook ne ek saath yalghar kar di. lekiin belt ki musalsal mere chutdon par padne wali maar ne mere dum-kham sab nichhod kar rakh diya. mujhe lagne laga aaj mein pakka maara jaonga..."

wo ladka bhi ghusse me paagal ho gaya tha.

koi nahi tha mujhe bachane wala yahan ek aurat behosh padi thi uske sarr se khoon nikal raha tha. ek choti ladki us aurat ke paas bethi roye ja rahi wo bohat ghabrai hui thi. wo kuch karne ki halat me thi nahi.


lekin ".... jako rakhe saaiyan maarr sake na koi ...."

lekin is beech ladki kuch sambhal chuki thi aur usme abb himmat bhi gai thi ab
wo akeli nahi thi aur ek ladka bhi puncture ho gaya tha.

""..ab ladki ki izzat khatre me ho aur banda bhi ek ho. to ladki itni jaldi himmat nahi haarti..""

mujhe pit'te dekh ladki ne achanak se ladke ko zorr ka dhakka de maara. ladka pehle hi sarr se zakhmi tha uska sarr phirr se train ke mazboot lohe se takraya aur wo lehrata hua neeche gir gaya.
ladki ne ladke ke hath se belt cheena...

(ab jis ladki ki izzat lut'te lut'te bachi ho aur phirr us ko moka bhi mil jaye us rapist se badla lena ka usay... all readers can imagine... k wo kya kar sakti hai)

ladkine belt ladke ke hath se chhen kar apne hath par lapeta aur lagg gai apne kaam pe phirr us ne jinta dard jhela tha wo saab us ladke ko lautane lagi. do baar sarr parr chot lagne se ladke ki condition bohat kharab ho chuki thi. us parr ladki ruke bagair usay belt se peet rahi thi. mano aaj us harami ladke ko jaan se hi maar degi.

""..ladki ghusse me ye bhi bhool gai thi k wo abhi tak nangi hai..""

thodi der baad mere kuch hosh thikane aye to maine dekha ladki abhi bhi lagi hui thi.

lekin ladke me koi movement nahi ho rahi thi. maine ladki ko awaz lagai. ladki ko sunaai nahi diya. shayad meri awaz beth gai thi. mene phir se awaz lagai. lekin baat nahi bani. to phir maine apni bachi-khuchi taqat ko ikatha kiya aur ladki ke paas ja kar "jis hath me belt thi" us hath ko pakad liya.

mere hath pakadne par ladki ne meri taraf dekha to us ki ankhen aansuon se bhari hui thee. us ki aankhen laal surkh ho chuki thee kuch to aansu behne se aur kuch apni izzat ko lut'te,, dekh kuch na kar pane ki waja se aane wale ghusse se unki ankhen laal ho chuki thee. maine ladki ko kuch nahi kaha aur apne dard ko control karte huye neeche jhuk kar ladke ko dekhne laga. kahi saala marr warr na gaya ho. lekin us ki saans chal rahi. haramzaada abhi marra nahi tha. us ladke ka jism harkat nahi kar raha tha shayad apne dost ki tarha ye bhi behosh ho gaya tha..

maine ladki se kaha bass karo ye behosh ho chuka hai. ladki abhi bhi nangi hi thi. wo aise hi khadi rahi...

""maine us par ghor nahi kiya.""

itni der me aunty ko bhi hosh aa chuka tha kyunki jab ladki ladke ko belt se maar rahi to baazi palat'te dekh choti ladki ne bhaag kar baathroom se paani la kar aunty ko taqreeban nehla hi diya diya.jis se aunty hosh me ai thi... aunty ke saare kapde geele the.

aunty ne ladki ko awaz lagai to ladki ne aunty ki taraf dekha. ab chunke khatra tall chuka tha is liye ladki bhaag kar aunty ke pass gai aur unke gale lag kar rone lagi.

main bhi ek side ho kar beth gaya. abb meri halat bhi mere control se bahar hoti ja rahi thi. meri ankhen bhi ab band hone ko thee. dard aur bhook ke maare mujhe bohat weekness feel ho rahi thi.


""... andar ka dard. bahar lagi choton ka dard. Uffff... itna dard zindagi kya kya nahi insaan se wasoolti hai....saari peedon ko sochte sochte me ik side ludhak gaya...""

mere ludhakne ki awaz se unka dhayan meri taraf gaya. tab unko andaza hua k abhi bhi wo khatre se bahar nahi hui.

kyunki mujhe dekhte hi unki nazar un dono ladkon par bhi padi. aunty ne ladki ko side kiya aur apne purse se mobile nikal kar kisi ko call karne lagi. Kuch der baat karne ke baad aunty ne ladki ko uske nange hone ka ehsaas karaya ladki jheemp kar sharam se dohri gai aur. phat se apne bag se apne doosre kapde nikal kar bathroom me ghus gai...

kuch der me ladki dress change kar aai phir aunty ne ladki ki madad se un dono
ladkon ke hath aur pair baandh diye. rassi se nahi apne bag me se ek dupatta nikal kar us ki pattiyan banai phir bandha.

pata nahi aunty ne kaha jaana tha. ye bhi nahi pata tha kitne station aye rekha baai ka kya hua us guards ne kya bataya rekha baai ko.

rekha baai ne mujhe dhoondne ke liye kya kiya hoga.

ya usne mujhe nazar andaz kar diya hoga. tha to me ek kachre ke dher ki manind hi. rekha baai ko kahan meri parwa hogi.


""main to na-jaane kab ka behosh pada tha""


"" jab meri aankh khuli to maine apne aap ko ek aaali-shan kamre me paya....
kyaaaaa????????? main marr gaya hoon. ye to koi swarg jaisi jaga lag rahi hai ...

agar ye swarg hai to phir ""maa aur behne""

"""""..... nahi nahi mujhe swarg nahi chahiye mujhe maaa aur behne chahiye....."""""

""....maaa..priya"......"maaa..priya"......"maaa..priya"......"maaa..priya"

main zorr zorr se chillane laga.
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maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa".."priiiiiiyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kahan ho tum "maaaaaaaa ... priyaaaaaaaa"


mere chillane ki awaz sun kar bhaagte qadmon ki awaz kamre ki taraf aane lagi.

main apne hosh hi kho chuka tha mujhe aisa lag raha tha. jaise ab main maa aur priya wali dunya se bohat door ja chuka hoon aur ye sab soch mera kaleja hi khoon khoon hone laga.


kapre ka door khula aur ek aunty aur do ladkiyan room ke andar aayi.


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nice update..!!
vijay ne apni abhi tak ki zindagi me jo apni maa ki ijjat lutate dekha hai aur apni behno ka future bhi waisa ho sakta hai yahi sochkar usme itni himmat aagayi aur usne uss ladki ki ijjat bachayi..!! lagta woh aunty aur dono ladkiya vijay ko apne sath leke aayi hai..!!
 

A.A.G.

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bhai log bohat mehnat karni padhti hai update ko likhne me ....... aur jis tarha ki ye story hai ...
khud wroter ko bhi rona pad jata hai .... jab writer story ke character me khud ghus nahi jaaata .. tab tak wo wo sahi se scene ko create nahi kar satka..

maine apni poori koshish ki hai update ko aap sab ke liye special banane ki ....
abb pata nahi main kitna kaamiyaab hua hoon......ye to aap hi bata sakte hain...
appke keemti replies ka wait rahega......


thanks to all my lovely "readers" they are loved me and like my story

"BE HAPPY" AND "SPREAD HAPPINESS" "EVERYWHERE"


LOVE WITH THE LOVELY PEOPLE
bhai aapne bahot achha update likha hai..!!
 

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Location: kotha Rekha Baai

TIME : 11:AM


rekha baai tilmilate huye poore ghusse se haal me idhar se udhar tehal rahi thi. uska bass nahi chal raha tha k kothe par mojood sabb guards ka khoon hi pi jaye lekin wo aisa kar nahi sakti thi. thode faasle par maa aur behne darri sehmi si bethi thee. rekha baai ko ghusse me dekh kar hi un charoon ki geeli hone wali thi.

suba jab ek call rekha baai ke number par aai thi to call sunn kar hi uska ghussa itna badha tha. k usne kai guards ko peetna shuru kar diya tha. shamat to bechari shweta aur teeno ladkiyon ki aai hui thi. lekin unsab ne pehle se hi plan banaya hua tha. is liye rekhaa bai ke khatarnaak roop se ab tak to bachi hui thee.

vijay ke jaane ke baad gham ke maare shweta aur priya behosh ho gai thee. rekha ko is baare pata chala tha. shweta aur baaki ki teeno ladkiyon ne bhi bhook hadtaal kar di thi jisse un ki haalat kaafi kharab dikh rahi thi.
bhook to sach me hi unki udd gai thi. vijay ke jaane se lekin rekha baai se bachne ke liye bhi un charon ne bohat achhe se sab kuch sambhal liya tha.

jab rekha bai ko fone call par pata chala k vijay kisi railway station par dekha gaya hai aur phir guard ko dekh kar bhaag kar train par sawar ho gaya tha.
tab fooran hi rekha baai ne apne aadmiyon se keh kar vijay ko dhoondne ke liye bol diya tha. lekin vijay kahin nahi mila

rekha baai ka pehla shak to shweta par hi jana tha. usne shweta par bohat pressure daala shayad kuch baat saamne aye lekin shweta itne saalon me itna to seekh hi chuki thi..
jab rekha baai ne bataya k vijay kisi railway station par dekha gaya hai. ye sunte hi shweta par ghashi taari ho gai. is liye nahi k vijay chala gaya . balke is liye k rekhaa baai ko pata chal gaya hai k vijay kis disha me gaya hai. abb shweta sach me darr gai thi kahin rekha baai phirse vijay ko pakad kar yahan is daldal me na le aye.
aur shweta ka dard sahi bhi tha. is liye shweta ke dard ko dekhte huye rekhaa baai ko shweta par koi shak nahi hua.

aur baaki ki teeno ladkiyon ne bhi ro ro kar rekha baai ke pairon me gir kar bola tha.
"please hamare bhai ko le ayen hum apne bhai ke baghair nahi reh sakteen"

bass rekha baai ka shak in charon par se hatt gaya. lekin charon phir bhi darri hui thee k unse koi galti na ho jaye. is liye wo chah kar bhi vijay ke topic par discussion nahi kar paaa rahi thee.

rekha baai kisi se darrti nahi thi. lekin muamla shweta aur us ke bete ka tha.
isliye rekha baai ki bhi aaj phati padi thi.

kaafi der haal me tehalne ke baad kuch faisla karte huye rekhaa baai ne mobile nikala
lekin phirse kuch soch kar mobile ko apne blouse me daal liya. abb wo kuch aur soch kar pareshan ho rahi thi.
lekin call karna bhi zaroori tha. warna rekha baai ki khair nahi thi.....
rekha baai ne phirse mobile nikala aur ek number mila diya. call jaane lagi??

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unknown jo rekha baai ke kothe par gaya tha apni haveli me enter hua...
haveli bohat hi badhiya thi.
is haveli ki shaan-o-shaukat ki ass paas me rehne wale log misaal diya karte the.
k haveli ho to iske jaisi warna ho hi naa...

unknown raat bhar shweta ki chudaai karne ke baad suba jaldi uth karr apne kisi kaam se mumbai me hi kisi jaga chala gya tha. phir apne kaam ko khatam kar ke wo apni haveli ja pohncha.

ek boodha admi ....dekh aye us chinnal ko.kaisi hai abhi tak dam kham baaki hai ya???

unknown ... (hanste huye) papa wo saali abhi bhi waisi ki waisi hi hai. itne saalon se chud chud ke bhi uski khubsoorti kam nahi hui..

unknown father ... to phir raat bhar tune uski achhe se bajai to hai naa...

unknown mother ... us kalmuhi ka naam bhi matt liya karo mere saamne. pata nahi kis haddi ki bani hui hai jo abb takk marri nahi.

unknown ......... haaan maa wo kameeni badi hi dheet hai itne zulm uspar kar liye phir bhi tooti nahi hai. lekin lagta hai abb kuch aur karna padega uske sath.

unknown father .... us chinnal ka ek beta bhi hai naa usko marwaa dete hain.

unknown ........... nahi abhi hum ye nahi kar sakte isse to wo khud ko hi maar degi.

unknown mother ... to uski beti ka kuch karo usay kisi ko bech dete hain..

unknoen ........... aap dono sathya gaye hain kya. kisi ko tadpana hai to usay andar se khokhla kar do. uski beti jab uski ankhon ke saamne hi uski jaga par dhanda karegi. tab dekhna kaise wo toot'ti hai.

kisi ke kuch bolne se pehle hi unknown ka mobile bajne laga.

unknown call pick karke bolta hai.."haan boll rekha baai abhi kaise call ki hai tune. abhi to tere paas se aaya hoon"

rekha baai ....******************************** unknown ko sab bata deti hai..

unknown apni jaga parse khada ho kar dahadne lagta hai...

unknown ..... haramzaadi kuttiya kahi ki. tu ek ladke ko nahi sambhal sakti kotha kya khaak chalayegi. mujhe harr haal me wo ladka usi kothe par chahiye. jo karna hai karr lekin wo ladka harr haal me milna chahiye. warna tu mujhe jaanti hai. mera tera kya haal kar sakta hoon.


ye bol unknown ne mobile ko deeewar parr de maara."unknown ghusse se bawla ho raha tha"

uske maa papa uske chehre par ghusse ko dekh darr gaye..

phir himmat karke unknown ki maa ne pooochha "kya hua beta"

phir unknown ne jo rekha baai ne bataya tha wo sab apne maa papa ko bata deta hai..

wo bhi ghusse me aa jate hain...

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Update :::: 13 ka kuch scene agar app bhole nahi to

abb takk


jab meri aankh khuli to maine apne aap ko ek aaali-shan kamre me paya.
kya main marr gaya hoon. ye to koi swarg jaisi jaga lag rahi hai... agar ye swarg hai to phir maa aur behen. nahi mujhe swarg nahi chahiye mujhe maaa aur behne chahiye...........

""....maa priya"......"maa..priya"......"maaa..piya"......"maaa..priya"

main zor zor se chillane laga.

maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa".."priiiiiiyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kahan ho tum "maaaaaaaa ... priyaaaaaaaa"

mere chillane ki awaz sun kar bhaagte qadmon ki awqz kamre ki taraf aane lagi.
main apne hosh hi kho chuka tha mujhe aisa lag raha tha. jaise ab main maa aur priya wali dunya se bohat door ja chuka hoon aur ye sab soch mera kaleja hi khoon khoon hone laga.

door khula aur ek aunty aur do ladkiyan room ke andar ayi.



Abb Aaaggeee
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UPDATE ::::: 14
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aunty boli... "kya hua beta..."cheekh kyun rahe ho.

awaz sun kar mujhe kuch hosh aaya. jab maine aane walon ko dekha to train wali aunty aur donon ladkiyon ko apne saamne dekh kar mujhe rahat kuch mili.

"iska matlab hai k main zinda hoon. main to khud ko mara hua samajh ke hi paagal hone laga tha aur meri ankhon ke saamne meri maa aur behno ke chehre aa gaye the. main darr gaya tha k main un sba ko us daldal se nikal paane me fail ho chuka hoon.""

vijay ..... (khud ko sambhal kar)"Kuch nahi aunty ji bass maa aur behno ki yaad aa gai thi..

aunty...... bohat pyaar karte ho apni maa aur behno se..

vijay ..... haan itna pyar karta hoon meri zindagi hi unke liye hai.


""..wo nahi to main bhi nahi..""

aunty ...... beta tum bohat payare ho tum apni maa aur behno se .... aur himmat bhi bohat hai tum me. main tumhara shukriya kaise adaa karoon tum na hote to meri beti ki izzat lut jaati. bete tum ne ek ladki ki hi izzat hi nahi bachai balke tumne ek maa ke dil ko bhi ujadne se bachaya hai.. Bhagwan tumhari maa ka dil bhi hamesha aise hi shaad aabad rakhe.... badi khush-naseeb hai wo "maa" jiska tumhare jaisa beta hai...

maine achanak se aunty ke mohn par haath rakh diya.

vijay ...... nahi aunty ji meri maaa aur behne khush-nasseeb nahi hain. aap unko khush-naseeb na bolen. baaki jo marzi bol len. lekin aisi koi bhi baat na karen...

aunty meri baat sun heraan reh gai. aur dono ladkiyan to "shocked" si mujhe dekhne lagi...

"ek to mere mohn se aisi baat sun kar" doosra meri umar ka ladka aisi bhi baatein kar sakta hai. ye dekh teeno heraan ho gai theen.


""kya mazaaq hai dunya mujhe bacha nahi bada samajhti hai meri baaton se lekin main abhi bhi itna chhota hoon ke apni maa aur behno ke liye kuch paane ke kaabil nahi. aur dunya wale mujhe bada samajh kar meri baaton par heran hote hain""

aunty ..... beta itni badi badi batein Kaise kar lete ho.

vijay ......(hanste huye) aunty ji aap kaisi baat karti hain ek to main bacha nahi hoon aur doosra jab school ka koi teacher sikhaye to time lagta hai. lekin wahi jab agar zamana kisi ko kuch sikhaye to waqt lagte derr nahi lagti...

aunty aur dono ladkiyan me se koi kuch bolne ki himmat hi nahi juta paa rahi thee meri baatein sun kar.. kuch derr koi kuch na bola phir aunty boli ....


""beta tum konsi class me ho....""

""mujhe phir se hansi aa gai""


aunty boli beta tum baar baar hans kyun rahe ho...??????

vijay ... arre aunty ji aap hansne wali baat karengi to, hansi to ayegi hi naa...

aunty ....... ajeeb ladke ho harr baat ka jawab tedha hi dete ho..

vijay ....... aap ne kaha main k konsi class me hoon.. is baat pe hansi ayi aa gai thi......

vijay ..... Kyunki maine kabhi school ki shakal hi nahi dekhi. school kise kehte main to wo bhi nahi janta.......

aunty aur dono ladkiyan ek baar phirse shocked ho gain thee. ye jaan kar k main kabhi school hi nahi gaya. bhala ajkal ke zamane me koi aisa bhi hai jo kabhi school hi na gaya ho..yahi soch wo heraan aur ppareshan thee. abb unko kaun bataye k vijay ki zindagi kahan guzri hai......

badi ladki .... bhai pehle intro ho jaaye ..

vijay ....... hmmmmmm theek hai.jaisa app sahi samjho... waise mera naam vijay hai..

badi ladki ... mera naam natasha hai aur ye meri choti behen shetal hai aur meri mummy ka naam deeksha hai aur mere papa abhi ghar nahi aye hain jab wo ayenge to main aaapko unse bhi milwaongi. waise unka naam harsh chauhaan hai.

vijay .... acha laga sab ke naam jaan kar.....

shetal .... (cute sa face bana kar) bhai aaap itne bade yo gaye ho. phir aap school kyun nahi gaye.

vijay ..... (shetal ki baat sunkar haste huye) aur bhi is desh me kai aise bache hain jo school nahi jaate. agar main nahi gaya to koi anokhi baat to nahi hai naa. har kisi ke halaat ek jaise to nahi hote..

natasha .... kamal hai lekin phir itni badi badi baatein kahan se seekhi hain.

""ye sun main phir se kothe ke mahol me gum ho gaya. mujha guzra waqt phirse yaad aane laga kaise school jaate bachon ko dekh kar hasrat bhari nigahon se main unko dekha karta tha. kash k me bhi kabhi school ja sakta."".."" phir maa aur behno ke rote huye chehre dikhne lage. wo sab aas lagaye bethi hongi. aur mere aane ka intezaar kar rahi hongi. abhi to ek hi din hua tha. "ja-jaane aur kitne saal lagenge unse dobara milne ke liye. main kothe par rehte hamesha maa se door door hi raha lekin dekhte to tum rozz hi ek doosre ko the."" meri ankhen nam hone lagee

""ab jaane kab phirse ek doosre ki shakal dekhne ko milegi. milegi bhi k nahi milegi." andar hi andar meri tadap badhne lagi meri ankhon se aansu behne lage jise wo teeno maa beti dekh rahi thee. main maa,priya shuruti aur jhanvi ki yaad me itna kho gaya ke aaj mere aansu nikal aye. main hamesha aansu bahane se gurez hi karta tha.....
aksar aansu insan ko kamzor bana dete hain aur meri life me kamzori ki koi gunjayesh nahi thi..... mujhe himmat ki zarurat thi. in aansuoon ki nahi...

""himmat aur himmat itni himmat ke mujhe apni maa aur behno ko us daldal se nikalne ke liye apni akhri saans tak khud ko sambhal kar rakhna tha.aur apne raaste me aane wale har toofan se takrana tha""

aur akhri saans tak ladne ke kaabil khud ko banana tha. meri zindagi me aansuoon ki koi gunjayesh nahi thi...

aunty ne mujhe kandhe se pakad kar hilaya. main apne hosh me wapis aaya....

aunty ..... beta tum ro kyun rahe ho.??? sab theek to hai naaa........???????


aunty ke bolne se k main ro raha maine apne haath ko apne chehre par phera to meri poori hatheli aansuoon ke paani se bhar gai..
main aur aansu baha raha hoon. main ye dekh sunn reh gaya.
aur apne aansu bhari hatheli ko ghor se dekhne laga.
poori hatheli "water of tears" se sanni hui thi.
apni hatheli ko dekh kar main ye soch raha tha ke main itna kamzor hoon ke apne aansuoon tak ko control nahi kar sakta.

nahi main kamzor nahi hoon. haan main kamzor nahi hoon.
apne aansu dekh kar mera ghussa badhne laga.

phir mera ghussa itna badha ke main khada ho gaya chal kar deewar ke paas ja kar apni hatheeli ko zorr zorr se deewar par maarne laga(aksar ghusse me insan apne dard ko bhi bhool jaata hai. mera sab se bada dard to mere andar tha. bahri dard kya hasiyat rakhte the.)

vijay .... ""phir me chillate huye""


maa priya aapka vijju kamzor nahi hai. aaj main kasam khata hoon kabhi bhi in ankhon me aansu nahi aane doonga.agar kabhi aye to main apni in ankhon ko hi noch daalonga. """maa... choti me aaonga""" ....""""main aaonga...""""

dard itna badha ke bardasht ki taqat hi khatam ho gai.

""pehle hi itne zakham aa chuke the. chutdon par rekha baai ke lagaye gaye zakham phir pet par padne wali laat aur uske baad belt ki maar... aur us parse kai saalon se andar ke badhte zakhmon ka dard""


""...ab aur sehn nahi hota mujhse..."""

dhadam ki awaz se main se neeche gir gaya.

main phirse behosh ho gaya.

mere behosh hone ke baad teeno maa betiyon ko hosh aaya. mere paagal-pann ko dekh kar wo teeno statue ban gai thee. mere girte hi teeno bhaag kar mere paas aai...
aur phir teeno maa betiyon ne milkar mujhe uthaya. aur bed par lita diya.

"teeno ke chehre bhi aansuoon se tarr the."

aunty boli ...... itni thodi si umar me itni samjh--itna dard--itni mohabbat apni maa aur behno se... natasha beti main pagal ho jaongi is ladke ke dard ko mehsoos kar ke. itni himmat nahi hai mujhme. abb jab ye hosh me ayega to main kaise main isko sambhalungi. main nahi kar sakti natasha beti tu hi isko sambhal lena.

natasha .... maa main kaise isko sambhal sakti hoon. jab aap hi himmat haar rahi hain to main kaise..??????

aunty ..... please beta usne hamari kitni madad ki hai. tu uska khayal rakh lena meri payari beti hai naa..."aunty apni jaan chhudate huye boli"

natasha ... (rote huye boli) maa vijay ke dard ko dekh kar mera dil bhi dard se phatne laga hai. vijay ko dekh kar mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise dard vijay ko nahi mujhe ho raha hai .... maa maine vijay ke dard ko apne dil par mehsoos kiya hai....

aunty ...... abb kya karen mujhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aa rahi..???
tere papa hote to isko sambhal lete. lekin wo to yahan hain hi nahin...

teeno maa betiyan mere paas hi bed parr beth gaee

wo teeno mere hi baare me baatein kar rahi thi. mere karahne ki awaz sun teeno ka rukh meri taraf ho gaya. thodi der main aise hi karahta raha. phir uth kar beth gaya. mujhe uthte dekh aunty lapak kar mere paas aai aur boli..

aunty..... beta ab kaisi tabiat hai tumhari..

maine aunty ke sawal ka koi jawab nahi diya aur wo teeno mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thee.
phir miane chand gehri gehri saansein leen. khud ko thoda relax kiya.

jab kuch hosh thikane aye to behosh hone se pehle maine jo harkat ki thi us baare ghor karne laga. ek ek baat par main ghor kar raha tha. jism me dard to bohat ho rha tha khaas kar pet par padne wali laat aur chutdon ka dard mujhe bethne nahi de raha tha. lekin abb bardasht to karna hi tha warna har jaga tamasha hi ban kar reh jaonga.

kis kis ko batata firoon k mere halaat kaise hain. aur mujhe kya kya takleef hai abb to apne saare dard khud hi jhelne the. kisi ko bata kar faida bhi kya hona hai.

phir meri soch mere aansuoon par gai. is baar mujhe ghussa nahi aaya. mai sochne laga k mere andar jo jo khamiyan hain mujhe unpar kaabu paana chahiye abb to main kothe ke mahol se bhi nikal aaya hoon aur waqt rehte mujhe sab kuch karna hai khud ko itna mazboot banana hai. k koi bhi mujhe tod na sake.

aansu meri ek bohat badi kamzori the. yahi aansu mujhe khud par se control khone me madad faraham karte the. ab se kabhi bhi apni ankhon me aansu nahi aane doonga.

aur doosri baat kabhi bhi khud par khud ka control khatam nahi hone doonga. warna main kisi kaam ka nahi rahunga. aur mere nakaam hote hi meri family finish.

"meri family finish" ye soch aate hi main khud ko andar se mazboot banane me lag gaya bassss abbb aur nahi. bohat hua tamasha .......

""abb is dunya ko ek darinda ban ke dikhana padega. apni har kamzori ko noch noch kar khud se door phenkna tha."" lekin kaise..?????

aunty .... beta kuch to bolo kis soch me gum ho..????

aunty ki baat sun maine aunty ko muskura kar dekha. aunty heraan reh gai

"itni jaldi maine khud par kaabu pa liya tha aur meri muskuraht me bhi jaan thi"

aunty shocked si mujhe dekh rahi thii

vijay .... aunty ji baathroom kidhar hai mujhe fresh hona hai.

"aunty boli kuch nahi bas ek taraf ishara kar diya"

main bathroom chala gaya fresh hone.......

aunty .... natasha beta tumne wahi dekha jo main dekh rahi thi..

natasha ... kya mom aap kya dekh rahi thi...

aunty ..... natasha beti is ladke me harr baat alag hai.. kuch ghante pehle kitne dard me tha aur iska chehra kaise kaise rang badal raha tha... aur abb dekho kitna shaant nazar aa raha hai jaise kuch derr pehle kuch hua hi nahi. pata nahi aur kya kya hai is ladke me. main to dang hi reh gai. aaj tak maine aisa ladka nahi dekha...mera to sarr hi chakrane laga hai.. is ladke ke baare me soch soch kar....

shetal .... "maa ki baat sun kar hansne lagi" hehehehehe

aunty ..... tu kyun daant nikal rahi hai. maine koi joke sunaya hai kya..??

shetal .... aur nahi to kya maa aapne joke hi to sunaya hai... itna bada ladka hai aur aap bol rahi hain ye ladka chota hai mujhse bhi lamba hai..(ye bol kar shetal phirse hansne lagi)

aunty aur natasha .... shetal ki massomana baat sun kar muskurane lagi.

aunty .... (shetal ko halki si chapat lagate huye) hatt badmash har waqt ulta seedha bolti rehti hai...

vijay .... main bathroom se fresh ho kar bahar aa gaya..


"""bathroom me ja kar maine apne zakhmo ko jitna ho saka saaf kiya tha aur towel se khud ko saaf kar main bathroom se bahar aa gaya tha......""""

jab main baathroom se bahar nikla to teeno mujhe hi dekh rahi the mere chehre par bhi belt ke lagne se nishan pad chuke the. aur mere lambe baalon ne mere aadhe chehre ko bhi chupa rakha tha. wahi phate huye kapde maine phirse pehn liye the.

vijay .... (aunty se sawal karte huye) aunty ji ye kaunsa shehar hai..

"mera sawal sun kar teeno mujhe ajeeb nazron se dekhne lagi"

phir aunty boli .... beta ye delhi shehar hai...

vijay ..... aunty ji delhi mumbai se kitna door hai ...

teeno phirse mujhe dekhne lagi


vijay .... please aunty ji mujhe dekhne ka kaam baad me kar lena. pehle jo pooch raha uska jawab de dengi to meherbani hogi aapki. aur agar jawab nahi dena chahti to aapki marzi...

meri baaat sun teeno hadbad gai..

aunty .... beta tum baat hi aisi kar rahe ho... badi ajeeb baatin karte ho. kaun nahi janta mumbai aur delhi ka kitna fasla hai.....

vijay .... ye koi itni ajeeb baat thodi naa hai. jo aap teeno mujhe ghoor rahi hain kya delhi me rehna wale sab log jante hai mumbai kitni door hai.

"meri baat sun teeno ekdum chup"

vijay .... acha aunty ji abb main chalta hoon aap sab ka bohat bohat dhanwaad.
aur phir maine apne dono hath jod unko parnaam kiya. aur phir main door ki taraf badhne laga.

aunty ... arre beta ruko to sahi kahan chal diye ...??

vijay ... aunty ji ye mera ghar to hai nahi jo main yahan ruk jaon. jana to mujhe hai hi abb jaaon ya kuch der baad.

aunty ... beta tum jao gay kahan ....

vijay .... matlab ???

aunty ke bolne se pehle shetal bol padi

shetal .... bhai ruk jao naa. aap yahi reh jaao. hamara koi bhai bhi nahi hai.
please aap naa jao..."shetal ke bolne se aunty ka kaam aasaan ho gaya... shetal ne aunty ke dil ki baat bol di thi"

natasha shetal ko shocked ho kar dekh rahi thi. usay shetal par pyaar bhi aane laga.. main yahan ruk jaon ye natasha ka bhi mann tha.

aunty .... haan beta tum yahi ruk jao ...

vijay .... me yahan kese reh sakta hoon...???

aunty .... kyun nahi reh sakte ..??

natasha ... reh jaao naa bhai ab to choti ne bhi bol diya hai. waise bhi hamara koi bhai nahi hai humen bhi ek bhai mil jayega.... (natasha bade maan se boli)

aunty ..... haan haan beta tum yahan hamare bete ban kar reh sakte ho ..

sab ki baatein sun kar main hansne laga.

aunty .... is me hansne ki kya baat hai..??

vijay .... hanso nahi to aur kya karoon aap sab mere baare jaante hi kitna hain aise kaise koi bhi kisi bhi anjaaan ko apne ghar me rehne ke liye bol sakta hai. ye mazaaq nahi to aur kya hai...

aunty .... beta koi anjaan kisi gair ke liye apni jaan khatre me nahi daalta phir tumne kyun apni jaan ko khatre me daal kar meri beti ki izzat lutne se bachai.

vijay ...... wo alag baat hai lekin main yahan nahi reh sakta..



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