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Chapter......2
MAi initially thoda surprised ho gaya
abilities ki list dekh ke
jo system usse dikha rahi thi
lekin yeh sense banata tha
kyunki yeh muze Goddess of Lust ne diya tha.
Chahe yeh kitna bhi lewd kyun na lage, isse muzko excitement feel ho rahi thi.
Yeh mera tareeka tha stronger banne ka.
Aur agar is process mein
main arrogant ladkiyon ko conquer kar saku…
> toh aur bhi better hai.
Mai satisfaction ke saath head nod karta hun.
> “Finally… meri life mein kuch toh sahi ho raha hai.”
------
Mai thoda time leta hun decide karne ke liye ki
kya pick karu mai .
------
SKILLS
> ‘Skills ke liye, first choice easy hai. Harem Seal aur Mind Control.’
---
Jab tak mai strong women ko manipulate karu aur unhe apna bana lun…
Mai unki power aur abilities khud ke liye le sakta hai.
---
Ab mere paas teen aur
choices bachi thi .
---
Spectral Perception
---
Spectral Perception definitely tempting tha.
Kisi bhi woman ko apni aankhon ke saamne undress hota dekhne ki ability har ek perverted young ladke ka dream hota hai.
Mera bhi hai ...
Mai unse alaga thodi hun
{ Harami kahi ka }
Aba system hi aisa diya hai toh kya kar sakta na ...
{ Haa haa }
Aur kya woh pervert tha?
Of course.
---
Lekin woh shortsighted nahi tha.
---
Irresistible Charm
---
Isliye usne Irresistible Charm choose kiya, kyunki yeh uske pehle do skills ke saath achha kaam karega.
---
Muze abhi kisi ko
impregnate karne ki zarurat feel nahi ho rahi thi abhi
aur na hi mera aisa koi
plan tha.
Lekin yeh idea tha ki
Meri women mere taste ki aadat daal lein
kaafi tempting tha…
> phir bhi maine Golden Seed skip kar diya.
---
Incubus’s Physique
---
‘Incubus’s Physique? Yeh toh accha lag raha hai… yeh bhi le leta hoon.’
{Haa bohot kaam aane wala hai aagye }
---
Stamina boost usse academy ke physically demanding classes mein help karega…
Yeh toh bohot acha hai
{ Goddess ne system
jo diya hai }
Ha haa maine kaha
na bola hai
{ Aagye dekho aba }
aur kaun nahi chahega bed mein strong stamina?
Bohot hi sahi hai
---
‘Aur main apna size adjust kar sakta hoon…
Yeh mere liye kaafi useful hone wala haii...
---
‘Yeh toh must-have hai.’
---
‘Ek aur.’
---
Sinful Touch
---
Fifth skill ke liye, Sinful Touch choose kiya…
jo sirf ek touch se dusron ko strongly affect kar sakta hai…
aur unhe uski taraf zyada receptive bana deta hai.
Yeh toh bohot sahi hai
---
Mai smile karte huye apni selection se
satisfied hoke...
“This is a kit made to conquer.”
---
OBJECTS
---
Satisfied hoke, woh object list dekhta hai.
---
‘ Yeh difficult hone
wala hai…’
---
Vihaan ke paas abilities se bhi zyada objects thye.
---
[Objects]
Love potion – Kisi ko bhi do, woh tumse deeply love karne lagega.
The Velvet Grimoire – Forbidden rituals aur enchantments.
The Sighing Locket – Longing trigger karta hai.
The Tongue of Honey – Speech ko irresistible banata hai.
The Velvet Familiar – Emotional influence create karta hai.
The Ink of Yearning – Naam likhne par intense dreams.
The Mirror of the Unfaithful – Secret desire dikhata hai.
The Mask of Eternal Yearning – Immortality (condition ke saath).
The Desire Engine – Emotional energy consume karta hai.
The Heartstrings Harp – Emotions control karta hai.
The Siren’s Kiss – Irresistible attraction create karta hai.
---
> “What the fuck!?”
dheere se bolta hai.
Kuch objects ke effects kaafi ridiculous thye.
---
“Immortality!”
---
Normal situation mein woh yeh choose karta…
lekin yeh uske system ke purpose ke against tha.
---
Woh kabhi unloved nahi rehne wala tha.
---
Agar kuch bhi ho…
toh academy ki women eventually uske liye obsessed ho jayengi.
--
Love potion bhi tempting tha…
lekin muze confidence tha—
Mai khud achieve kar lunga.
“Main un overpowered objects ko choose nahi karunga jinke side effects hain…
mujhe young marna nahi hai.”
Abhi toh dekha hi
kya hai maine
Abhi sabke lavde lagane
Baki hai
---
Thoda sochne ke baad—
---
Ink of Yearning
---
Perfect tha interest create karne ke liye.
---
Agar sirf naam likhne se woh uske baare mein dreams dekhne lagti hain…
> toh yeh ink uske liye perfect thi.
---
Uske dimaag mein ek naam aaya—
---
Mira
---
“Woh jo William ke saath milke mujhe bully karti thi…”
Bitch
“Woh meri first target hogi.”
Maja aayega bohot
---
Ek slight evil smile uske face par aaya.
---
Woh jaanta tha—
> woh is power ka full use karega.
---
> “Academy ki saari high and mighty women…”
> “Sab mere saamne jhukengi.”
---
Jaise hi usne selection kiya—
object uske side mein appear ho gaya…
aur skills uski consciousness mein add ho gayi.
---
Ek chhoti si normal-looking
ink bottle.
---
Usne usse haath mein uthaya…
inspect kiya.
---
> “Yeh ink infinite hai?”
“Kaafi chhoti lag rahi hai…”
( Haa toh badi chahiye tuzko )
Bakchodi na kar aagye likh
---
> “Lekin shayad… itni badi hone ki zarurat nahi.”
---
ting.
---
Ek soft ding sound aaya.
---
Process complete.
---
Aur usi moment—
power uske andar surge kar rahi thi.
---
> “What the...
!?”
---
Uski skin warm hone lagi…
---
Uske limbs thode stretch ho rahe the—
Pain hone laga ....
---
>
Aur woh sach mein ho bhi raha tha.
---
Chapter 2....end
Milte hai agle chapter mai kal
.......
Like thokne ka aur review rakhne ka
Kaisa laga raha chapter....
A kit made me conquer
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“Hmmm… Wow! Yeh system toh pura debauched lag raha hai, through and through, huh?”
-----------
“Hmmm… Wow! Yeh system toh pura debauched lag raha hai, through and through, huh?”
MAi initially thoda surprised ho gaya
abilities ki list dekh ke
jo system usse dikha rahi thi
lekin yeh sense banata tha
kyunki yeh muze Goddess of Lust ne diya tha.
Chahe yeh kitna bhi lewd kyun na lage, isse muzko excitement feel ho rahi thi.
Yeh mera tareeka tha stronger banne ka.
Aur agar is process mein
main arrogant ladkiyon ko conquer kar saku…
> toh aur bhi better hai.
Mai satisfaction ke saath head nod karta hun.
> “Finally… meri life mein kuch toh sahi ho raha hai.”
------
Mai thoda time leta hun decide karne ke liye ki
kya pick karu mai .
------
SKILLS
> ‘Skills ke liye, first choice easy hai. Harem Seal aur Mind Control.’
---
Jab tak mai strong women ko manipulate karu aur unhe apna bana lun…
Mai unki power aur abilities khud ke liye le sakta hai.
---
Ab mere paas teen aur
choices bachi thi .
---
Spectral Perception
---
Spectral Perception definitely tempting tha.
Kisi bhi woman ko apni aankhon ke saamne undress hota dekhne ki ability har ek perverted young ladke ka dream hota hai.
Mera bhi hai ...
Mai unse alaga thodi hun
{ Harami kahi ka }
Aba system hi aisa diya hai toh kya kar sakta na ...
{ Haa haa }
Aur kya woh pervert tha?
Of course.
---
Lekin woh shortsighted nahi tha.
---
Irresistible Charm
---
Isliye usne Irresistible Charm choose kiya, kyunki yeh uske pehle do skills ke saath achha kaam karega.
---
Muze abhi kisi ko
impregnate karne ki zarurat feel nahi ho rahi thi abhi
aur na hi mera aisa koi
plan tha.
Lekin yeh idea tha ki
Meri women mere taste ki aadat daal lein
kaafi tempting tha…
> phir bhi maine Golden Seed skip kar diya.
---
Incubus’s Physique---
‘Incubus’s Physique? Yeh toh accha lag raha hai… yeh bhi le leta hoon.’
{Haa bohot kaam aane wala hai aagye }
---
Stamina boost usse academy ke physically demanding classes mein help karega…
Yeh toh bohot acha hai
{ Goddess ne system
jo diya hai }
Ha haa maine kaha
na bola hai
{ Aagye dekho aba }
aur kaun nahi chahega bed mein strong stamina?
Bohot hi sahi hai
---
‘Aur main apna size adjust kar sakta hoon…
Yeh mere liye kaafi useful hone wala haii...
---
‘Yeh toh must-have hai.’
---
‘Ek aur.’
---
Sinful Touch
---
Fifth skill ke liye, Sinful Touch choose kiya…
jo sirf ek touch se dusron ko strongly affect kar sakta hai…
aur unhe uski taraf zyada receptive bana deta hai.
Yeh toh bohot sahi hai
---
Mai smile karte huye apni selection se
satisfied hoke...
“This is a kit made to conquer.”
---
OBJECTS
---
Satisfied hoke, woh object list dekhta hai.
---
‘ Yeh difficult hone
wala hai…’
---
Vihaan ke paas abilities se bhi zyada objects thye.
---
[Objects]
Love potion – Kisi ko bhi do, woh tumse deeply love karne lagega.
The Velvet Grimoire – Forbidden rituals aur enchantments.
The Sighing Locket – Longing trigger karta hai.
The Tongue of Honey – Speech ko irresistible banata hai.
The Velvet Familiar – Emotional influence create karta hai.
The Ink of Yearning – Naam likhne par intense dreams.
The Mirror of the Unfaithful – Secret desire dikhata hai.
The Mask of Eternal Yearning – Immortality (condition ke saath).
The Desire Engine – Emotional energy consume karta hai.
The Heartstrings Harp – Emotions control karta hai.
The Siren’s Kiss – Irresistible attraction create karta hai.
---
> “What the fuck!?”
dheere se bolta hai.
Kuch objects ke effects kaafi ridiculous thye.
---
“Immortality!”
---
Normal situation mein woh yeh choose karta…
lekin yeh uske system ke purpose ke against tha.
---
Woh kabhi unloved nahi rehne wala tha.
---
Agar kuch bhi ho…
toh academy ki women eventually uske liye obsessed ho jayengi.
--
Love potion bhi tempting tha…
lekin muze confidence tha—
Mai khud achieve kar lunga.
“Main un overpowered objects ko choose nahi karunga jinke side effects hain…
mujhe young marna nahi hai.”
Abhi toh dekha hi
kya hai maine
Abhi sabke lavde lagane
Baki hai
---
Thoda sochne ke baad—
---
Ink of Yearning
---
Perfect tha interest create karne ke liye.
---
Agar sirf naam likhne se woh uske baare mein dreams dekhne lagti hain…
> toh yeh ink uske liye perfect thi.
---
Uske dimaag mein ek naam aaya—
---
Mira
---
“Woh jo William ke saath milke mujhe bully karti thi…”
Bitch
“Woh meri first target hogi.”
Maja aayega bohot
---
Ek slight evil smile uske face par aaya.
---
Woh jaanta tha—
> woh is power ka full use karega.
---
> “Academy ki saari high and mighty women…”
> “Sab mere saamne jhukengi.”
---
Jaise hi usne selection kiya—
object uske side mein appear ho gaya…
aur skills uski consciousness mein add ho gayi.
---
Ek chhoti si normal-looking
ink bottle.
---
Usne usse haath mein uthaya…
inspect kiya.
---
> “Yeh ink infinite hai?”
“Kaafi chhoti lag rahi hai…”
( Haa toh badi chahiye tuzko )
Bakchodi na kar aagye likh
---
> “Lekin shayad… itni badi hone ki zarurat nahi.”
---
ting.
---
Ek soft ding sound aaya.
---
Process complete.
---
Aur usi moment—
power uske andar surge kar rahi thi.
---
> “What the...
!?”
---
Uski skin warm hone lagi…
---
Uske limbs thode stretch ho rahe the—
Pain hone laga ....
---
>
Aur woh sach mein ho bhi raha tha.
---
Chapter 2....end
Milte hai agle chapter mai kal
.......
Like thokne ka aur review rakhne ka
Kaisa laga raha chapter....
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Ahot behtareen shaandar updateChapter ....1
Harem System
.....Despair......
Pichle six months se Vihaan Drayke sirf isi cheez ko feel kar raha tha tha
Jab uska selection hua tha usa flying magical academy main woh overjoyed tha .
Use laga tha ki uski life finally set hone wali hai .
Lekin uske saare hopes aur dreams first day par hi crash ho gaye jab uski talent
grading hui....
Aur result ?
Lowest..pure trash
Aba jab woh academy ke baare mai thoda aur samaz chuka hai.....
toh yeh khud ek mystery hai ki usse accept hi kaise kiya kiya gaya .
Lekin....
That was only the beginning of his hell
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Jin logon ko woh apne classmate samzta tha ....
Wohi use torment karne lage.
Mostly ladke
Unki jealousy ka reason simple tha ---
Vihaan una sab se zyada handsome tha ...
Aur bas ---
Unhone apni daily obsession bana liya ki uski life ko living hell bana dena hai
----
Sabse worst part ?
No one intervened
Na uske classmate ....
Na teachers ...
Sab log bas turn a blind eye kar dete the jab woh har roz torment hota tha .
Usa par thooka jata tha ....
Usee punching bag banaya jata tha ....
Magic target practice ke liye use Kiya jata tha...
aur usee measly chores karne ke liye force Kiya jata tha ...
Usee trash kaha jata tha ....
aur waise hi treat kiya jata tha
----
Shuru mai usne sab endure kiya.
Lekin even he had a limit.
Uski aankhein dheere dheere hollow ho gayi ....
Life se bilkul devoid.
Usne ek se zyda baar socha ---
Bas....sab khatam kar deta hoon...
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Aaj woh log ek dungeon training exercise ke liye aaye huye the..aur jaise hamesha hota tha ....
Vihaan ko porter bana diya gaya tha ..jo sabka samaan carry kar raha tha ..
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William
Group ka leader
Aur woh Banda jo roz ensure karta tha ki vihaan apna daily dose of torment miss na kare .
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Woh usse yaad dilata ---
Tu trash hai
Woh usa par scowl karta ...
Usa par thookta ...
aur phir usee chores deta rehta.
Aur woh kabhi thakte nahi thye...
Agar kuch tha---
Toh unki dedication kaafi commendable thi .
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Vihaan kuch nahi kar sakta tha
Woh weak tha
Woh powerless tha
No talent
Yeh helplessness usee har din andar se kha rahi thi
----
Lekin aaj William ne limit cross kar di .
----
Bridge cross karte waqt....
Dungeon ke lower flower ke upar se guzarte hue...
Usne accidentally Vihaan ko push kar diya ...yaa jaan bujhkar
----
Baki classmates horror mai dekhte rahe jab woh girte hue chilla raha tha ..seedha andhere abyss mai
-----
Initial shock aur teacher ke outburst ke baad ....
Sab kuch accident kehkar brush off kar diya gaya ...
Techer bhi zyda stressed nahi thye ...
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Woh shayad reprimanded hoga ...
Lekin end mein kuch nahi hoga
----
Kyunki mara kaun tha ?
Academy ka trash.
Woh keh sakte thye
“ Weak tha ‚ mar gaya. ’’
Aur Bach jaate.
----
Ab...
Vihaan kahin neeche zameen par pada tha .
Darkness mai .......
Uski body toot chuki thi ...
Har hone jaise break ho chuki thi .
Woh dheere dheere mar Raha tha ....
Slowly .... painful.
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Woh waha pada tha ....
Agonizing pain mai .....
Uska body shattered ....
Aansu aur khoon uske face par bhiga rahe thye .....
Pain unbearable tha ...
Har breath ek struggle
Tha uske liye
Woh marna chahta tha ...
Is hellish existence se escape karna chahta tha ....
Bohot dard zela tha usne ...
-----
Usne dheere se kaha dard mai ....
Please....koi kill me ...
End my suffering....
-----
Ironically
Jab woh death ke liye beg kar raha tha ....
Tab bhi uska chota sa hissa jeena chahta tha .
----
Likin torment itana lamba chala tha ki woh sirf ek hollow shell ban chuka tha .
----
Jaise hi woh feel kar raha tha ki woh slip kar raha hai
Tabhi
Ek strange female voice uske mind echo huyi
----
Goddess voice / System
{Vihaan Drayke....}
{I have been watching you...
{Tumhari suffering...har ek moment.
{Aur ab ...I take pity on you}
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Ek halki si smile uske words mein mehsoos huyi ....
Soft.... seductive.....
{I am the goddess of lust .}
{Aur maine tumhe choose Kiya hai ....apna champion banane ke liye .}
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{ Congratulations vihan Drayke.}
{You have received--The harem system}
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{Will you accept it ?}
...
{ Yes } { NO }
Ek moment ke liye Vihaan ko laga ki woh hallucinations kar raha hai .....
Death' ke pehle last dession
...
Lekin words gayab nahi huye
....
Woh uske mind mai clear thye
....
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Uska ek hissa soch raha tha
Harem System kya hota hai ...?
Baki sab ?
(Marne pe aaya hai aur soch raha system kya hai aur baki sab ....
woh bhi extreme pain mai...chalo aagye dekhte hai ...)
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Aba aur kya bura ho sakta hai mere sath.....
-----
Apni last strength use karte huye......
{Pain mai....... Yesss }
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{ Begining Soul Binding process }
1%
16%
59%
89%
99%
100%
{Soul Binding complete}
{The harem system has been bound to the host's Soul !}
{The Goddess sends her blessing!}
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Ek green soothing light uske body par wash huyi ...
Aur usi instant....
Sara pain gayab ...
-----
Uska body completely heal ho gayi..
Peak condition..
---
Actually....Usne kabhi apni life mein itana better feel nahi kiya tha .
Woh vitality se overflow kar raha tha .
-----
Woh apne pairon par khada ho gaya .
----
Wow ....I feel so much better allready .thank you ‚goddess!”
----
Usne apne samne floting interface ko dekha.
Wohi ek light source tha us dark jagah mein.
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{Opening Harem System Starter Pack....}
{The host can select any five ranked skills and one divine of his choice}
{Skills}
Vihaan skills ko dekhne laga ....
Skills ke bare mai batao kuch
{ Ohk bata rahi hun }
• Mind control :-
Manipulate aur feed Karo logon ke mind mein aise thought jo unhone kabhi imagin bhi nahi kiye Effectiveness target ki strength aur mental state par depend karega ....
• Irrisistible charm
Tumhari presence hi attention demand karegi . Jo bhi tumhe dekhega naturally... tumhari taraf drown hoga
•Sinful Touch
Activate karne par jise tum karoge uski body aroused hojayegi ....
Aur woh tumse release.. aur aur tuch ke liye beg karega ..
• Golden Seeds
Tumhari seeds ka ek drop bhi enough hai kisi bhi women ko impregnate karne ke liye ....
Even berren ho aur women
Tumhare seeds ko Irrisistible payengi
• Harem seal
Target ko bind karta hai agar woh agree kare ... death .
Tum uski location hamesha jaan paoge .
Apni abilities share kar sakte ho .aur tum uski skills ‚abilities aur talent gain kar sakte ho .
• Incubus’s physique...
Apne body ke kisi part ka size change kar sakte ho including your cuck.
Tumhe godly stamina aur flexibility milegi
• Spectral perception
Walls aur clothes ke through dekhne ki ability
•Lust master
Arousal level dikhta hai (1-100)
• Love meter
Affection level dikhta hai
(1-100)
Thoda rukk kar wow !
Smirk karke
Aaj mai marne wala tha par lagta hai destiny ne muze kuch aur hi bana diya hai
...sabne bohot dard diya ....uska return karna toh banta hai na
...Aur Ek Smile ....
Par woh smile kisi bhi angel se laga nahi rahi thi
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.....Chapter 1 end .....
Bhai loga kaisa laga chapter batana ....bohot time laga likhne mai aur sochne mai ....
Muze isa chapter par like thone ka aur review ...rakhne ka
Bohot time gaya Ismai ...
agala chapter jaldi aayega ....
Kal raat tak aajayega chapter
Sahi systam mila
Dekhte h kaise iska faida uthata h Vihan