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Incest Ghar Parivar(Ek Naye Andaj Me)

Is Kahani Ka Apka favourite Female character Kaun he?

  • Ranjana

    Votes: 19 63.3%
  • Vishakha

    Votes: 3 10.0%
  • Neha

    Votes: 4 13.3%
  • Ashwini

    Votes: 1 3.3%
  • Lata

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Priya

    Votes: 3 10.0%
  • Kriti

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Jyoti

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Malti

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    30

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Update - 8

Vishakha aur Ashwini auto se utarkar apne ghar ki taraf badh rahi thi. Unhe is baat ka zara bhi ehsaas nahi tha ki peeche se ek bike unka saaye ki tarah peecha kar rahi hai. Helmet pehne wo shaks door se unhe ghoor raha tha Malti ke kahe anusar, wo unki har harkat par nazar rakhne ke liye bheja gaya tha.

Ghar ke paas pahunchte hi Vishakha ne ishara kiya aur auto ruk gayi.

Vishakha: "Kitne hue bhaiya?"

Autowala: "40 rupaye didi."

Vishakha apna purse khol kar paise nikaalne lagi, tabhi Ashwini ki nazar door khade us bikewale par padi. Wo shaks bina kisi wajah ke wahan ruka hua tha aur uska chehra helmet se dhaka hua tha. Ashwini ko kuch ajeeb laga, par agle hi pal Vishakha ki awaaz ne uska dhyan bhatka diya.


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Vishakha: "Chaliye bhabhi, kya dekh rahi hain?"

Ashwini: (Muskurate hue) kuch nahi, chal."

Dono ek sundar se wrought iron gate ke andar chali gayi, jis par bade aksharon mein likha tha: 'Mahajan Niwas'.

Jaise hi dono andar gayi, us biker ne apna helmet utara. Uska naam Alok tha. Usne turant apna phone nikaala,


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bungalow ke gate aur naam ki plate ka photo kheencha aur Malti ko forward kar diya. Phir usne Malti ko call lagaya.

Alok: "Hello didi... Alok bol raha hoon. Photo bhej di hai. Location Saroj Nagar, 'Mahajan Niwas' hai. Haan ji, pakka wahi hai... Theek hai didi, rakhta hoon."

Call khatam karte hi usne bike ghumayi aur tezi se wo wahan se nikal gaya.

*dusri tarad College: Shaam ke 4:30 baje

Neha ki class khatam ho chuki thi, lekin Shivam ka ek lecture baaki tha. Dono ko saath hi ghar jaana tha, isliye Neha parking lot mein uska intezar karne pahunchi. Usne Shivam ko message kar diya: "Free ho gayi hoon, parking mein wait kar rahi hoon."
Lekin jaise hi wo apni scooty ke paas pahunchi, uske hosh ud gaye. Uski scooty ke aage-piche aur dono taraf bhari bharkam bikes aise laga di gayi thi ki use nikaalna namumkin tha. Saaf dikh raha tha ki yeh kisi ne jaan-bujhkar kiya hai.


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Neha: (Gusse mein) "Idiot log! Kya bakwaas parking ki hai yaar. Ab yeh kaise nikaalungi?"

Wo pareshan hokar yahan-wahan dekh rahi thi ki tabhi peeche se ek zor ki hasi sunayi di. Mudkar dekha toh wahan Rocky apne 3-4 doston ke saath khada mazaak uda raha tha. Neha ka gussa tez ho gaya aur wo seedha unki taraf badhi.

Neha: "Oy! Yeh bikes tum logon ki hain kya?"

Rocky: (Buri nazar se dekhte hue) "Haan meri jaan... kyun? Chalegi ride pe?"

Neha: (Khoon khaul utha) "Hatao yeh sab! Mujhe apni scooty nikaalni hai abhi ke abhi!"

Rocky: (Haste hue) "Arre is chhoti si scooty mein kya rakha hai? Dekh, mere paas Bullet hai. Ekdum mast chalti hai... bol, chalegi mere saath?"


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Rocky ki baaton aur uski nazron ne Neha ko hadd se zyada gussa dila diya. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare, usne kuch kaha nahi wo bas gusse me fir parking lot ke paas aa gayi usne Rocky ki Bullet par ek laat maari. Par Rocky aur uske dost phir bhi haste rahe. Tabhi Neha ki nazar zameen par pade ek patthar par padi. Usne bina soche-samjhe wo patthar uthaya.
Rocky ki hasi thami. Wo kuch samajhta, usse pehle hi Neha ne poori taqat se patthar Rocky ki Bullet ki headlight par de maara.
"KATACHHH!"

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Kanch ke tukde hawa mein udey. Headlight choor-choor ho gayi. Rocky ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Uska gussa saatvein aasmaan par pahunch gaya.

Rocky: (Chilla kar) "Saali! Teri toh..."

Wo tezi se Neha ki taraf lapka aur usne apna haath hawa mein uthaya Neha ko thappad maarne ke liye. lekin Neha darr se peeche bhi nahi hati, balki gusse se dekhti rahi. Lekin tabhi ek garajti hui awaaz gunji:
"OY!"

Wahan Shivam khada tha, gusse mein laal. Rocky ka utha hua haath wahin thak gaya. Shivam tezi se aage aaya aur Rocky ke bilkul kareeb jaakar khada ho gaya.

Shivam: "Teri himmat kaise hui meri behen par haath uthane ki?"

Neha: "Bhaiya, yeh subah se pareshan kar raha hai mujhe!"

Neha ne bataya to Shivam ne turant Rocky ki collar pakad li aur use apni taraf kheencha.

Shivam: "Zyada charbi chadh gayi hai kya tujhe?"

Rocky: (Chillaya) "Ae!"

Shivam: (Aur zor se garja) "AE”

Dono ke beech sannata chha gaya, dono ki aankhon mein angaare the. Tabhi door se Shivam ke doston ka ek bada group aata dikha.

Ladka: "Kya hua Shivam? Koi chakkar hai kya?"

Rocky ke doston ne dekha ki Shivam ke saath ladkon ka group bada hai aur maamla bigad sakta hai. Unke chehre pe darr saaf dikhne laga. Rocky ka ek dost turant beech-bachav karne aaya.

Rocky ka dost: "Chal Rocky, chhod na... baat badh jayegi."

Shivam: (Sakht awaaz mein) "Sorry bol isse!"

Rocky: (Gusse mein ghoorta raha)

Shivam: (Collar aur kashte hue) "Sorry bol bhenchod"

Doston ke group ko paas aata dekh Rocky ke dost ne jaldi se kaha,

"Iski taraf se sorry bhai... aage se aisa nahi hoga. Sorry Neha. Chal na Rocky, nikal yahan se!"

Shivam ne nafrat se collar chhoda. Rocky ne bike start ki, lekin jaate-jaate ek baar phir Neha ko ghoora. Shivam ne yeh dekh liya.

Shivam: "Aankh kya dikha raha hai bhenchod? Nikal yahan se!"

Rocky aur uske dost wahan se tezi se nikal gaye. Neha ne ek gehri saans li aur apna gussa thanda karne ki koshish ki.

Neha: "Chaliye bhaiya, ghar chalte hain."

Shivam: "Haan, chalo."

Dono apni scooty nikaalne lage, lekin shahar ki is bhagam-bhag mein unhe andaza nahi tha ki ek naya dushman unke ghar ka pata jaan chuka hai.

To be continued...
 

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Update 9:

Shaam ke 6 baj chuke the. Office ki bhag daud tham toh gayi thi, par Raj ke liye din abhi khatm nahi hua tha. Usne apna bag pack kiya, chair piche dhakeli aur ek gehri saans li. Wo ghar ja sakta tha, lekin uske kadam bandhe hue the. kyuki bade sahab yaani uske papa, Shekhar, ek makhichoos client ke sath apne cabin me meeting mein fase hue the. aur unhone Raj ko rukne kaha tha. isliye raj rukha tha

Raj apne cabin mein akela baitha ghadi ki tik-tik sun raha tha. Boreiyat hadd se badhne lagi toh usne mobile nikaala aur fir photo gallery scroll karne laga.
Purani yaadon ka pitara khula toh chehre par muskurayein tairne lagin. Kahin offices ki function tha, toh kahin doston ke sath ki gayi wo pichli Goa wali picnic to Family ke sath spend kiya gaya acha time ye sab photos dekh kar wo muskura hi raha tha ki achanak ek photo par uska thumb ruk gaya. Muskurahat achanak gayab hui . Uska chehra sangeen ho gaya, aankhein us tasveer mein dhas si gayi... aur dimaag ne waqt ka pahiya piche ghuma diya.

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####Flashback######
Office ka shor piche chhoot gaya aur Raj ke kaanon mein purani baaton ki goonj sunayi dene lagi.

Raj: "Papa, please samajhiye! Main kisi aur se shaadi nahi kar sakta. Main Ruby se pyaar karta hoon aur usi se shaadi karna chahta hoon."

Shekhar ka chehra gusse se laal tha. wo sofe par aakar baith gaye.

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Shekhar: "Wo log aur hum... zameen aasman ka farak hai Raj! Main aisi shaadi ki ijazat hargiz nahi de sakta jo hamari biradari aur samaj ke khilaaf ho."

Raj ne umeed bhari nazron se apni maa, Ranjana, ki taraf dekha.

Raj: "Maa, aap toh samjhao na papa ko? Ruby bahut suljhi hui ladki hai. Wo hamare ghar ko swarg bana degi, aap sabka itna khayal rakhegi ki aapko shikayat ka mauka nahi milega."

Ranjana ne thandi aah bhari aur Raj ka haath thama.

Ranjana: "Beta, ladki achi hogi, me mana nahi kar rahi. Par wo hamse alag hai. Log baatein banayenge, samaj mein muh dikhana mushkil ho jayega. Tere papa sahi keh rahe hain. beta.

Raj (toote hue lehje mein): "Lekin maa... main uske bina mar jaunga. Main usse sach mein bahut pyaar karta hoon."

Shekhar (kadak awaaz mein): "Ye filmy baatein band karo! Ye koi 3 ghante ki movie nahi hai, Raj ,ye asli zindagi hai. Mera faisla aakhri hai .tumhari shaadi Ashwini se hi hogi. Bas! Ab is par koi behas nahi.

Shekhar aur Ranjana kamre me chale gaye. lekin Raj wahi sofe par dher ho gaya. Uska wajood sunn pad gaya tha, par aankhon se aansu rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the. Tabhi ek naram sa haath uske kandhe par aaya.


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Raj ne palat kar dekha, wo Vishakha thi. Usne ek shabd nahi kaha, par uski aankhon mein apne bhai ke liye dher saari hamdardi thi.

Vishakha: "Bhaiya..."

Raj: "Vishu!"

Raj ne bache ki tarah apna sar Vishakha ke kandhe par rakh diya aur foot-foot kar ro pada. Wo pal uske dil par ek gehra zakham chhod gaya tha.


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###Flashback Khatm###

"Raj sir... Raj sir?"

Kisi ki avaj se Raj ka sapna toota. usne ankhe kholi samne office ka Ek peon khada tha.

Peon: "Sir, Shekhar sir ne aapko cabin mein bulaya hai."

Raj - Hmm aa raha hu ..

Raj ne itna hi kaha aut fir jaldi se apni aankhein ponchi, chehra thoda saaf kiya aur apni bag uthakar wo papa ke cabin mein dakhil hua. use dekha Client ja chuka tha aur Shekhar thode thake hue lag rahe the.

Raj: "Yes papa, meeting kaisi rahi?"

Shekhar (mayus hokar): "Buri khabar hai. Vardhman Company ka contract hamare haath se nikal gaya."

Raj (chaunk kar): "Par papa, hamari terms aur quotes toh ekdum perfect the!

Shekhar: "Management badal gaya hai unka. Suna hai kisi aur garment waale ne saste mein quote diya hai. Saaf dikh raha hai ki unhone apne kisi pehchan waale ko kaam diya hai.

Raj thodi der chup raha, phir bola,

Raj - "Toh ab kya karenge?"

Shekhar: "Filhaal ghar chalte hain. Dhanda thoda manda chal raha hai, kuch sochna hoga.
Chal, nikalte hain."

shekhar ne bas itha hi kaha aur fir dono nika pade

Ghar ka mahaul office se bilkul alag tha. Ashwini aaj bahut khush thi. Usne Raj ke liye ek naya shirt khareeda tha aur use bade pyaar se cupboard mein aise chhupa kar rakha taaki Raj jaise hi cupboard khole, use surprise mil jaye.

Kitchen mein Vishakha gajar chheel rahi thi.

Vishakha: "Bhabhi, aaj toh Bhaiya ki lottery lagne wali hai. Gajar ka halwa aur upar se aapka ye romantic surprise ufff..

Ashwini bas muskura kar reh gayi, par uski aankhon mein Raj ke liye beshumaar intezaar tha.

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Wahi dusri taraf, Neha apne room mein maths ke sawal suljha rahi thi. Par jaise hi wo aankhein band kar ke calculation karti, use numbers ki jagah Shivam ka gusse wala chehra dikhayi deta wo scene jab Shivam ne Rocky ka collar pakda tha.

"Kya hero lag raha tha bhai..."

Neha ne socha aur phir khud hi hans padi. Usne zyada dimag nahi lagaya, aakhir shivam bhai tha uska.

Tabhi uska phone baja. usne dekha Shivam ka hi call tha.


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Neha: "Haan bhaiya, bolo?"

Shivam: "Wo ladka kaun tha? Jo tujhe pareshan kar raha tha?"

Neha: "Arre wo Rocky... ek number ka chapri hai. Area ka gunda banta hai par hai bilkul chirkut."

Shivam: "Roj pareshan karta hai kya?"

Neha: "Haan, thoda bohat. aur Sirf mujhe hi nahi, sabko karta hai."

Shivam (thoda gusse mein): "Tune mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?"

Neha: "Bhaiya, us cartoon ko toh main akele handle kar leti hoon, aapko takleef kyun dena?"

Shivam: "Zyada heroine mat ban. Agli baar usne teri taraf aankh utha kar bhi dekhi, toh pehle mujhe batana, samjhi?"

Neha (chhedte hue): "Oho! Behan hoon aapki, girlfriend nahi jo itne possessive ho rahe ho!"

Shivam: "Behan hai tabhi bol raha hoon chudail! Jitna kaha hai utna kar, zyada dimaag mat chala. Chal rakh ab."

Shivam ne haste hue phone rakha, par uske dil mein apni behan ke liye fikr saaf thi. Wahi Neha bhi muskurate hue fir se maths mein doob gayi.

To be continue
 
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Kahani pe baat karte raho coment me acha lagta he to fir aage ke parts bhi ache se likhne me help ho jayegi
 

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Update - 10

Shakti Bar mein loud music aur dim lights ke beech Rocky ek corner table par baitha sharab pi raha tha. Glass mein peg ghumaate hue uski aankhein darwaze par thi. Tabhi usne Vicky ko andar aate dekha. Vicky apni usual confident style mein andar ghusa aur idhar udhar table dekhte hue chal raha tha.

Rocky ne turant haath uthaya aur zor se use awaaz di.

Rocky: Arre Vicky bhaiya! Idhar… idhar bhaiya, idhar aa jao!

Vicky ne awaaz sunte hi Rocky ki taraf dekha. Uske chehre par muskurahat aa gayi. Woh seedha Rocky ke table ki taraf badh gaya.

Vicky: “Arre tu yahan?”

Rocky: “Haan bhaiya, baithiye na. Kya lenge aap?”

Vicky: main order kar deta hoon.

Phir usne waiter ko ishara kiya aur bola, “Woh mera hamesha wala laa dena.”


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Thodi der mein dono bhaiyon ki tarah baithkar daaru peene lag gaye.
Vicky ne ek sip liya aur seedha mudde par aa gaya.

Vicky: “Aaj tera rada ho gaya tha kya Shivam se? Maine suna hai aise

Rocky: “Haan yaar, wo sali… uski behen Neha. Bahut zyada nakhre karti hai wo. Ek din uske saare nakhre utaar dunga main. Dekh lena.

Vicky: “Kuch help chahiye to bol dena. Vaise bhi wo shivam dimag me jata he mere

Rocky: “Haan Vicky bhaiya… dekhna aisa chodunga use ek din, zindagi bhar yaad rakhegi.

Dono zor se hasne lage, jaise koi mazaak ho.

dusri taraf Wahi time, Raj aur Shekhar ghar pahunch chuke the.
Jaise hi Raj andar aaya, Ashwini ke chehre par ek halki si muskurahat aa gayi. wo aage badhi aur usne Raj ke haath se bag le liya.

Raj: “Vishu, thodi chai milegi?”

raj ne vishakha ko dekhte hue kaha .. vishakha jaane hi wali thi ki achanak rukte hue usne ashwini se janbujhkar kaha

Vishakha: “Bhabhi please…aap banayegi?

Ashwini: “Haan, le aati hoon.”

Raj sidha apne room mein chala gaya. Woh apne kapde change karne laga. Shirt utaari aur cupboard khola. Jaise hi usne cupboard ka darwaza khola, uski nazar uss nayi blue shirt par pad gayi wohi jo Ashwini ne uske liye kharidi thi.

Raj ne shirt haath mein utha li.
Raj us shirt ko dekh raha tha usne us shirt pe apna haat fera

“Blue shirt tumpe bahot jachti he raj …” Ruby ne kabhi use kaha tha use yaad aaya aur Uske hothon par ek halki si muskurahat aa gayi. wo ruby ke yaad me halaka muskurah raha tha tabhi Darvaje se Ashwini andar aa gayi .. uske haat me chai ka cup tha wo sidha uske paas aa gayi Raj ki muskurahat dekh use acha laga aur fir usne dheere se poocha.

Ashwini: “Kaisi hai shirt?”

ashwini ki aavaj Raj ke kanopar padi aur Raj ki muskurahat ekdum se gayab hi ho gayi. Usne shirt wapas cupboard mein rakhte hue thoda serious swar mein kaha.

Raj: “Kya zaroorat thi iski?”


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Ashwini ne apn haat ka chai ka cup side me rakh diya aur turant wo piche se usko lipat gayi.

Ashwini: “I am sorry…”

Usne aankhein band kar li, lekin Raj ke chehre par koi bhi reaction nahi tha. Usne dheere se apne dono haathon se Ashwini ke haath apne badan se hataye aur door kar diya.

Raj: “Thanks.”

Bas itna kehkar woh wahan se chala gaya. .. Ashwini wahi khadi rahi. Uska chehra murjha gaya tha. Thodi der baad woh bhi room se nikal kar kitchen mein aa gayi.

Vishakha pehle se hi wahan khana bana rahi thi. Usne Ashwini ko dekha aur muskurayi, lekin Ashwini ne jawab mein sirf halka sa smile kiya aur chupchap bartan manjhne lag gayi.

Vishakha: “Toh… bhaiya ko shirt de diya aapne?”

Ashwini: “Hmm.”

Vishakha: “Wah! Kya kaha unhone? Pasand toh aaya hoga na?”

Ashwini: “Hmm.”

Vishakha: “Great! Kya bola bhaiya ne batatiye na bhabhi?”

Ashwini ke haath ruk gaye. Usne dheere se kaha.

Ashwini: “Bas… Thanks bola unhone.”

Vishakha ne ab uske chehre ka expression notice kar liya. use wo kuch gadbad lag raha tha

Vishakha: “Bhabhi… fir se kuch hua hai kya?”

Ashwini ne aankhein band kar li. Awaaz mein halka sa dard tha.

Ashwini: “Unhone formality ke liye thanks bola, Vishu. Mujhe nahi lagta unhe shirt pasand aayi. Maine sorry bhi bola tha… lekin unhone koi jawab tak nahi diya.

Vishakha: “Aisa nahi hai bhabhi…”

Ashwini: “Aisa hi hai, Vishu. Maine sab kuch kiya jo tu ne bataya tha shirt gift ki, gajar ka halwa banaya, sorry bola… lekin unka dil nahi jeet paayi main. Shayad… shayad main unhe khush nahi rakh paati.”

Ashwini ke aankhon se aansu behne lage.Vishakha turant uske paas aa gayi aur usko gale se laga liya.

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Vishakha: “Bhabhi, aap zyada soch rahi hain. Shant ho jaiye. Mujhe lagta hai bhaiya bahut tension mein hain aaj. Main ne papa ki baat suni thi office mein ek bada contract cancel ho gaya hai. Shayad usi ki wajah se wo aise behave kar rahe hain.”

Lekin Ashwini ab bhi dheere dheere ro rahi thi.

Vishakha: “Thoda time do na… bhabhi sab theek ho jayega.

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Vishakha Ashwinike sir ko sehlate hue keh rahi thi .Tabhi kitchen ke darwaze par Raj khada the. usne apna gala saaf kiya, jaise awaaz nikaalne ke liye.

Vishakha aur Ashwini ne turant us taraf dekha. Raj ko dekhte hi Ashwini palat kar jaldi se apne aansu pochne lagi.

Vishakha: “Haan bhaiya?”

Raj: “Papa ne tumhe bulaya hai.”

Vishakha: “Mujhe? Achha… chaliye.”

Vishakha Raj ke paas se guzarti hui bahar chali gayi. Ek baar Raj ne Ashwini ki taraf dekha. Dono ki nazrein mil gayi, lekin Raj ne kuch nahi kaha. Woh wahan rukaa nahi aur seedha chala gaya.
Ashwini wahi khadi rahi, aankhon mein ab bhi aansu the.
 
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