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Ghar Ki Aag

Episode 17: Gunah Ka Kaffara

Hyderabad ke us purane farmhouse mein saans lena bhi mushkil ho raha tha. Bahar garmi ka zor tha, magar kamre ke andar ki tapish jazbaati aur nafsiyati (psychological) thi. Rashid sahib ek kursi par baithe thay, unka chehra hatheliyon mein chhupa hua tha, jaise wo apni izzat ke janaze ko dekh rahe hon. Naseem ek kone mein khari thi, uska dil dharak raha tha—is darr se nahi ke kya hoga, balki is khauf se ke wo khud bhi usi raaste ki musafir thi jis par aaj uski beti khari thi.

Scene 1: Shikasta Baap aur Baghi Bache

Rashid sahib ne dhire se sar uthaya. Unki aankhen surkh thin. "Usman... Saima... kya yehi din dekhne ke liye tumhein pala tha? Bhai-bahen ka rishta muqaddas hota hai, tumne usey bazaar bana diya?"

Usman ne apne shirt ke button band kiye, magar uski nazron mein koi pashimani (regret) nahi thi. Usne ek gehri saans li aur apne baap ki aankhon mein dekha.

"Abbu, aap izzat aur muqaddas rishton ki baat karte hain?" Usman ki awaaz mein ek ajeeb si thartharahat thi. "Kya aapne kabhi soncha ke hum is raah kis tarah pahonchey? Saima Api ki shadi ko char saal ho gaye, magar Bilal Bhai ne unhe kabhi wo waqt, wo tawajjo nahi di jiski wo haqdar thin. Aur main? Main is ghar mein hamesha akela raha. Hum ne ek dusre mein wo sakoon dhunda jo humein kahin aur nahi mila. Ye hawas nahi thi Abbu... ye tanhayi ka nateeja tha."

Saima ne rote hue apne baap ke paon pakad liye. "Abbu, mujhe maaf kar dein. Magar sach toh ye hai ke Bilal ke saath rehte hue bhi main pyasi thi. Usman ne mujhe wo ehsas diya ke main zinda hoon. Humein darr lagta tha, hum rote thay, magar ye khinchao itna sakht tha ke hum ruk nahi paye."

Rashid sahib ne nafrat se apna paon pichhe khincha. "Tanhayi gunah ka jawaz (excuse) nahi hoti Saima. Tumne is ghar ki buniyaadein hila di hain."

Scene 2: Bilal ka Faisla aur Izzat ka Sawal

Bilal, jo ab tak khamosh khara ye sab dekh raha tha, aage barha. Uska chehra bilkul sapaat (flat) tha, magar uski aankhon mein aag thi.

"Abbu, maine aapka hamesha ehtiram kiya hai," Bilal ne sakhti se kaha. "Magar ab mazeed nahi. Saima ne jo kiya hai, uske baad mera is ghar se koi talluq nahi banta. Main Karachi ja kar divorce ke papers taiyar karunga. Mujhse ye be-ghairati bardaasht nahi hoti ke meri biwi apne hi bhai ki bahon mein soye."

"Nahi Bilal! Aisa mat karna!" Naseem cheekhi. Wo dabe paon Bilal ke paas aayi. "Agar tumne divorce di, toh poore Lahore mein hamara tamasha ban jayega. Log thookenge hum par. Meri beti ki zindagi tabaah ho jayegi."

"Tabaah toh meri zindagi ho gayi hai Ammi!" Bilal ne gusse mein kaha. "Main ab is rishte ko nahi ddho sakta."

Rashid sahib ne dekha ke unka ghar bikhar raha hai. Unki 'izzat' jo unhein har cheez se pyaari thi, mitti mein milne wali thi. Unhon ne Naseem ki taraf dekha. Unki nazron mein ek khamosh ilteja thi, jaise wo keh rahe hon ke 'is tabahi ko roko, chahe jo bhi qeemat ada karni paray'.

Scene 3: Naseem ki Tanhayi aur Gunah ka Ehsas

Naseem ne kitchen ka ruq kiya chai paani ke intezam ke bahane se. Wo wahan khari kanp rahi thi. Usey Hamza ki yaad aayi. Usne bhi toh wahi kiya tha jo Saima ne kiya. Wo kaise Saima ko bura keh sakti thi? Usne mehsoos kiya ke is ghar ke har mard aur aurat ke andar ek aag hai.

Usey samajh aa gaya tha ke Rashid sahib ab is umr mein ye stress bardaashth nahi kar sakte hain, Bilal ka gussa thanda karna unke liye ab aasaan nahi hoga. Bilal jawaan hai, aur uski 'ghairat' aur 'gussa' dono shiddat par hain. Naseem ne apna huliya darust kiya. Usne apne dupatte ko halke se sarakne diya, jaise usne Hamza ke samne kiya tha. Usne faisla kar liya tha ke wo apni beti ka ghar bachane ke liye khud ko 'kaffara' (atonement) ke taur par pesh karegi.

Scene 4: Iztirab aur Hairat ki Inteha

Raat ka pichhla pehar tha. Hyderabad ki khamosh fazaon mein sirf jheenjharon ki awaaz thi. Bilal guest room mein betha deewar ko tak raha tha. Uska dimaag sunn tha. Saima aur Usman ka manzar uski aankhon ke samne kisi purani film ki tarah chal raha tha. Uska dil kar raha tha ke sab kuch jala kar raakh kar de.

Tabhi darwaza dheere se khula. Naseem dakhil hui. Uska chehra paseene se chamak raha tha aur aankhon mein ek aisi bechaini thi jo Bilal ne pehle kabhi nahi dekhi thi.

"Bilal..." Naseem ne sargoshi ki.

Bilal ne nafrat se sar uthaya. "Ammi, please. Mujhe akela chhod dein. Mujhe is ghar ke kisi bhi kirdar se ab hamdardi nahi rahi. Aapki beti ne meri mardangi ka tamasha banaya hai."

Naseem ahistagi se uske qareeb aayi aur uske qadmon mein baith gayi. Bilal buri tarah chauunk gaya. "Ammi.....! Ye kya kar rahi hain aap? Uthein yahan se!"

"Nahi Bilal... aaj mujhe yahi rehne do," Naseem ne Bilal ke ghutno par apna sar rakh diya. Uska jism larz raha tha. "Saima ne jo kiya, wo ek maa ki maut hai. Magar Bilal, main is ghar ko bikharte nahi dekh sakti. Rashid sahib ye sadma bardaasht nahi kar payenge."

"Toh main kya karoon?" Bilal chilla utha, magar uski awaaz kamre ki deewaron tak hi rahi. "Main us aurat ke saath kaise rahoon jo apne hi bhai ki bahon mein rahi ho? Kya meri koi izzat nahi?"

Naseem ne sar uthaya. Usne Bilal ka hath pakad kar apne chehre par rakha. "Tumhari izzat ka kaffara main ada karungi Bilal. Saima bachi hai, wo bhatak gayi... magar main... main jaanti hoon ke ek mard ki ghairat aur uska gussa kya hota hai."

Bilal ki aankhen hairat se phat gayin. "Aap... aap ye kya keh rahi hain? Aap hosh mein toh hain?" Uska dil is baat ko qabool karne se inkaar kar raha tha. Wo aurat jo uske liye hamesha 'maa' ke martabe par thi, aaj aisi baatein kar rahi thi?

Scene 5: Ajizaana Hawas aur Pighalta Lohaa

Naseem ne Bilal ka hath nahi chhoda. Wo dhire dhire khari hui aur Bilal ke bilkul qareeb beth gayi. Uske jism se sandal aur paseene ki ek mili-juli mehak phoot rahi thi jo Bilal ke hosh uda rahi thi.

"Bilal, mujhe dekho," Naseem ne Bilal ki thori (chin) pakad kar apni taraf kiya. "Kya main tumhe ek 'maa' lag rahi hoon ya ek 'aurat'? Rashid ne mujhe barson pehle ek purani kitab ki tarah shelf mein rakh diya tha. Main majboor hoon Bilal... aur tum zakhmi ho. Do zakhmi jism agar ek dusre ka sahara ban jayein, toh ismein gunah kaisa?"

Naseem ne apne kapkapaate hathon se apne dupatte ko kandhe se giraya. Bilal ne foran nazrein pher lein. "Nahi... ye ghalat hai... ye bahut bada gunah hai!" Bilal ka dimaag cheekh raha tha, magar uske jism ne baghaawat shuru kar di thi.

Naseem ne har mumkin koshish shuru kar di. Usne Bilal ke kaan ke paas jhuk kar sargoshi ki, "Mujhe tabaah kar do Bilal... jo gussa Saima par hai, wo mujh par nikaal do. Mujhe apni randi samajh lo, magar is ghar ka raaz bahar mat nikalne dena. Main tumhare samne bhikari ban kar khari hoon... kya tum meri jholi khali rakhoge?"

Naseem ne Bilal ka hath apni qameez ke neeche dakhil kar diya. Bilal ne mehsoos kiya ke Naseem ka jism tap raha tha, jaise koi bhatti sulag rahi ho. Naseem ne Bilal ki gardan par apne hont rakh diye aur dheere se kaat liya.

"Aah... Ammi... chhodein..." Bilal ki awaaz kamzor par gayi. Uska inkaar ab sirf zabaan tak tha, uske jazbaat pighalne lage thay.

Naseem ne Bilal ke chehre ko apne hathon mein bhara aur poori shiddat se uske honton ko choom liya. Ye bosa (kiss) mamooli nahi tha; ismein minnat bhi thi, ilteja bhi aur wo 'ajizaana hawas' bhi jisne Bilal ki saari deewaron ko gira diya. Bilal ne mehsoos kiya ke Naseem uske liye poori tarah bichi ja rahi thi, wo apna sab kuch haarne ke liye taiyar thi sirf apne ghar ki jhooti izzat bachane ke liye.

Bilal ka gussa, uski hairat, aur uska inkaar... sab us aag mein pighal gaya. Usne ek gehri karah (moan) li aur Naseem ko zor se apni bahon mein bhar liya.

"Agar yehi kaffara hai... toh yehi sahi," Bilal ne junoon mein kaha aur Naseem ki qameez ko upar ki taraf khinch diya.

Naseem ne sukoon ki saans li. Usne mehsoos kiya ke usne Bilal ko jeet liya hai. Us raat Hyderabad ka wo kamra ek aise gunah ka gawah bana jo sharam aur majboori ke parde mein chhupa hua tha, magar jiski tapan poore khandan ko jala dene ke liye kaafi thi.

Episode 17 Khatam


Cliffhanger: Agli subah jab Rashid sahib nashte ki mez par Bilal aur Naseem ko ek saath dekhenge, toh kya unhe us 'khamosh samjhaute' ki boo aayegi? Aur Lahore mein Ayesha ka agla qadam kya hoga?
Yr atleast add some more depth in words number....... it's too short update please 🥺.......yn atleast iss tarah kr lo ke har 3-4 update baad aik mega update.........
Hope so u understand 🥰
 
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