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Hira, try to make story more dark suspense and intense also long also involve murder with emotions of revenge, sad... aap atchi writer ho aap meim kabliyt hain likhne ki
Adultery Ek Aam si Larki (Written by HiraKhan) (Completed)
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Bht shukriya.Hira, try to make story more dark suspense and intense also long also involve murder with emotions of revenge, sad... aap atchi writer ho aap meim kabliyt hain likhne ki
Me to ek ordinary writer hoon. Agar Apko lagta hai k mere andar ye qabliyat hai. To Apka bht shukriya
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suruwat toh aachi hai hira ji 
plot bhi suspense rakh dia hai
plot bhi suspense rakh dia hai
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yea comment karti huye , piche yea kya pakad rakhe hai Swati ji?Hira, try to make story more dark suspense and intense also long also involve murder with emotions of revenge, sad... aap atchi writer ho aap meim kabliyt hain likhne ki
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personal hatyar... Murder karna hain kutch logo ka yahayea comment karti huye , piche yea kya pakad rakhe hai Swati ji?
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G bilkulsuruwat toh aachi hai hira ji
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Apko kia laga???yea comment karti huye , piche yea kya pakad rakhe hai Swati ji?
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Chupana to banta hai...!personal hatyar... Murder karna hain kutch logo ka yaha
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akashx11
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lagta hai poore taiyri kai saath wapas aaye hai aappersonal hatyar... Murder karna hain kutch logo ka yaha
