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Kaun sa character aap logon Ko sabse achcha Laga, according to their personalities

  • Ariyan

  • Minakshi

  • Rashmi

  • Jeniya

  • Anvi

  • More characters are coming


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bhai sach bola toh tu. toh gussa ho gya but me yah kah rha hu story samjh nhi aya thoda narration ki baat kar rha hu na ki tharak ki , jyada character ho toh yhi problem hoti h bhai
Ham gussa nahi karte re. :laugh:
Apne dimag ki capacity badhao Bhai, jiya characters to honge hi, Agar Ek story Sirf do Din logon ke beech hi rahe to vah story... story kaisa, aise mein to 100 stroy likh du kam characters mein:declare: anyways.
 
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Note from coollog

Jaise ki aap sab dekh hi sakte ho, update 58 gayab huya tha forum issues ke chalte, so finally Meine decide Kiya hai ki update 58 jo ki gayab huya tha, phir ek bar likhane ja raha hu. Support banaye rakhna gayas.


Ab jaldi milenge, update mein kuch extra bhi add hoga jo pahale wale mein nahi tha.
 
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Jaise ki aap sab dekh hi sakte ho, update 58 gayab huya tha forum issues ke chalte, so finally Meine decide Kiya hai ki update 58 jo ki gayab huya tha, phir ek bar likhane ja raha hu. Support banaye rakhna gayas.


Ab jaldi milenge, update mein kuch extra bhi add hoga jo pahale wale mein nahi tha.
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Jaise ki aap sab dekh hi sakte ho, update 58 gayab huya tha forum issues ke chalte, so finally Meine decide Kiya hai ki update 58 jo ki gayab huya tha, phir ek bar likhane ja raha hu. Support banaye rakhna gayas.


Ab jaldi milenge, update mein kuch extra bhi add hoga jo pahale wale mein nahi tha.
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Update 58 - (it's about her and her and a Black cat)

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Unhi palon ko yaad karte hi Minakshi ke dil dharak raha utha, saath mein ek dar bhi tha ki agar Aryan usse fir se puche un donon ke kiss ke baare mein to woh kiya bataye gi. Par kal raat ke bite un lamhon ko yaad kar Minakshi ke gaal lala ho chuke the.

pura rasta, Minakshi aur Aryan ne ek dusre se ek bhi baatein nahi ki, baatein kar rahi thi Ritu. Aur ye dono maa Bete aapne aankhon se ishq Ladha rahe the, Naain matakka kar rahe the


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Deal ke poore hone ki khushi sabke chehron par chamak rahi thi. Car apni raftaar se sarak rahi thi, aur Ritu ki baatein bhi usi raftaar se chal rahi thi. Minakshi Ritu se toh baat kar rahi thi, lekin uski aankhein Aryan par hi tiki hui thi, jaise woh uske chehre ke har bhaav ko dil se padh rahi ho.

Ritu (excitedly): Thank God, mam! Ek hafte se hum iss deal ke peeche pade the, darr tha, par aakhir mein deal humein hi mili!

Minakshi (smiling): Hmm!

Ritu (enthusiastically): Chhote Singhania sir ne toh kamaal hi kar diya! Agar woh nahi hote, shayad yeh deal RB Industries ke haath chali jaati. Unhone toh bas das minute mein...!

Minakshi : Aakhir beta kiska hai? *Blush* Mere hi na!

Aryan ne rearview mirror mein Minakshi ko dekha. Uski honthon par ek halki si muskurahat thi, jo Minakshi ke dil ko aur tezi se dhadka gayi. Woh muskurahat uske liye ek anmol tohfa thi, jise woh apne dil mein sambhal kar rakhna chahti thi.

Aryan (modestly smiling): Ritu ji, mera koi kamaal nahi tha. Asli kamaal toh aap aur maa ka tha. Mr. Yamada ko bas ownership ka proof chahiye tha, aur woh maine de diya. Bas itni si hi baat thi.

Ritu (blushing slightly): Arre! Jo hum ek hafte mein nahi kar paaye, aapne das minute mein deal crack kar di! Aur jis tarah aapne Mr. Yamada ko apni company ke baare mein samjhaaya… *smile* aur… haan, thanks for the compliment! *Ahmm* Mam, aapki sehat ab kaisi hai?

Minakshi (smiles): Ab theek hu.

Ritu (concerned): Doctor ne jo dawaiyan di thi, woh li na aapne?

Minakshi (blushing deeply): Haan… A-Aryan ne mujhe raat ko… dawai khila di thi. Neend bhi achhi aayi.

kehte waqt Minakshi ke gaal aur laal ho gaye. Haan, dawai toh usne li thi, par saath mein Aryan ke honthon ka sparsh bhi usne mehsoos kiya tha. Woh raat ke pal, jab dono ek doosre ke honthon mein kho gaye the, yaad aate hi uski aankhein sharam se jhuk gayi. Un lamhon ka ehsaas uske dil mein ek aag si laga raha tha, ek aag jo pyaar aur dard ka anokha sangam thi.

Poora raasta, Minakshi aur Aryan ke beech ek shabd nahi bola gaya. Bas woh ek doosre ko aankhon se dekhte rahe, jaise unki aankhein ek doosre se dil ki baatein kar rahi ho.

Dhakti-dhakti waqt beet gaya, aur sab hotel wapas aa chuke the. Ritu, jo ek hafte se deal ke liye mehnat kar ke thak chuki thi, apne kamre mein fresh hone chali gayi. Ab Minakshi aur Aryan akele the, aur unke beech ka sannata ek ankahe jazbaat ka wazan liye hue tha.

Aryan ne suite ka darwaza khola, andar ghus gaya, aur peeche-peeche Minakshi aayi. Usne darwaza dheere se band kiya, aur awaaz ek gehre sannate mein goonj gayi, jaise koi baat uske dil mein dab rahi ho.

Aryan wardrobe ki taraf badha, apna black suit utaarne laga. Uski har harkat mein ek ajeeb si shaan thi, jise Minakshi apni aankhon se chupke se nihar rahi thi. Uska dil tezi se dhadak raha tha, uski nazron mein ek pyaar tha, jo shabdon se pare tha.

Aryan: Aap fresh ho lo, main tab tak lunch order kar deta hu.

Minakshi ne koi jawab nahi diya. Woh bas darwaze ke paas khadi rahi, uski nazar Aryan par jami hui thi. Woh dekh rahi thi kaise Aryan apna tie dheela kar raha tha, uski white shirt uske jism se halke se chipki hui thi. Minakshi ka dil ajeeb si dhadkan ke saath dhadak raha tha—ek tufaan sa uth raha tha uske mann mein, pyaar to tha hi par dard ka ek anokha sangam, jo ab anjana nahi raha.

Aryan : Ya phir aap neeche jaake lunch karengi? Waise, yahi mangwana better hoga.

Ab bhi Minakshi ka koi jawab nahi aaya. Aryan ne apna tie poora utaar diya, aur ab woh apni shirt ke cuff fold kar raha tha. Minakshi ki khamoshi usse thodi ajeeb lagi. Usne peeche mudkar dekha to Minakshi ab bhi darwaze ke paas khadi thi, uski aankhein uspar tiki hui thi. Aryan kuchh samajh nahi paya.

Aryan: Maa?

Aryan ki pukar ne Minakshi ko apne hosh mein laaya. Woh dheeme kadmon se aage badhi, uski aankhein bas Aryan par tiki thi, jaise uske alawa duniya mein kuchh aur ho hi na.

Minakshi (softly faint smile): Tie pehnna kab seekh liya tumne?

Aryan : Huh! Ye...!

Minakshi (lost in memories, voice nostalgic): Jab tum chhote the, school ke liye main hi tumhari tie bandha karti thi. *Smile* Ab toh itne bade ho gaye ho… ki meri zarurat hi nahi padti, na?

Aryan (stepping closer): Aap kaisi baatein kar rahi hain? Bade toh sabhi ho jaate hain!

Minakshi ke shabd shant the, par uski aankhon mein ek gehri bhaavna thi, jaise woh kuchh kehna chahti ho par rok rahi ho.

Minakshi (voice tinged with pain): Theek hi toh bol rahi hu. Itne bade ho gaye ho ki… ki ab mujhse baatein chhupane lage ho, hai na?

Aryan ki muskurahat ek pal ke liye thami. Minakshi ka kehna sach tha—woh apne dil ki baat chhupa raha tha, woh jazbaat jo usne apne andar daba rakhe the. Usne apni aankhein doosri taraf kar li, jaise uski nazron se woh sach chhup jaaye.

Aryan (nervously laughing): Kab se baatein chhupane laga main? Aap toh jaanti hain, main sab kuchh aapse share karta hu.

Minakshi (with a slight, knowing smile): ek baat hai jo tum mujhse chhupa rahe ho, hai na?

**Silence**

Uska yeh sawal hawa mein fail gaya, jaise ek sach jo dono jaante the par bol nahi pa rahe the. Aryan ka dil tezi se dhadka, uski aankhein jhuk gayi, usme guilt aur chahat ka ek mila-jula ehsaas tha.

Minakshi ne jab dekha ki Aryan ne apna muh pher liya, uska dil toot sa gaya. Woh nahi chahti thi ki Aryan usse nazrein churaye, naa hi usse door jaye.

Dheeme kadmon se woh Aryan ke oor badhi, uske aur kareeb aayi, aur usse pehle ki Aryan kuchh aur bole, Minakshi ne apni baahon mein usse bhar liya, ek gehri jhappi mein. Uska gaal Aryan ke seene se laga, uski dhadkan usse mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Aryan : Maa?

Minakshi (softly, voice trembling): Nazrein pher lene se sachchai nahi chhupti, Aryan!.

Uska sar Aryan ke seene par tha, uski saansein uske jism ki garmi se takra rahi thi. Kamre mein ek gehra sannata chha gaya, sirf un dono ke dilon ki dhadkan ki awaaz thi. Minakshi ke liye yeh pal dard aur pyaar ka ek anokha sangam tha—pyaar isliye kyunki Aryan uske paas tha, aur dard isliye kyunki woh apne pyaar ka izhaar nahi kar pa rahi thi.

Aryan wahi khada raha, uski baahen abhi bhi hawa mein thi, jaise woh samajh nahi pa raha ho ki kya kare. Woh Minakshi ko aur kareeb kheenchne chahta tha, uski kamar pakad kar usse apne aur orr chipkaana chahta tha, par usne apne aap ko roka. Minakshi ki saansein, uski garmi, usse madhosh kar rahi thi, par yeh ehsaas uske dil mein ek tufaan bhi la raha tha. Bhale hi dono ne apne pyaar ka izhaar na kiya ho, par ek doosre ke itne kareeb hone ka asar unke shareer mein mehsoos ho raha tha. Yeh baat samajhte hi Aryan ne dheere se Minakshi ke kandhon ko pakda, aur usse thodi si doori banayi.

Aryan : Maa! Umm.. woh.. agar aapko fresh nahi hona, toh theek hai. Main… main fresh hoke aata hu.

Woh jaldi se baat ko taal gaya, aur Minakshi ke saamne se bathroom ki taraf chala gaya.

Minakshi wahi khadi rahi, uski baahen dheere se neeche gir gayi, aur uski aankhon mein ek udaasi chha gayi. Woh Aryan ko door jaate dekhti rahi, uski aankhein nam hoti gayi.

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Minakshi (maan mein) : Kyu ye mujhe door karte ho, Kyu nahi samajh te ki mujhe door nahi hona tumse.

Darwaza band hone ki awaaz kamre mein goonji, aur Minakshi akeli reh gayi, apne dil ke dard aur pyaar ke saath. Kamra ab aur khali lagne laga, sannata aur gehra ho gaya. Minakshi ka dil ab bhi us jhappi ki yaad mein tha. Woh wahi khadi rahi, sochti hui ki -
kya woh kabhi apne dil ka sach bol paayegi, ya yeh dard aur pyaar uske dil mein hamesha ke liye daba rahega.

Aryan fatafat naha ke, apne kapde change karke bahar aaya. Usne dekha ki Minakshi bistar pe baithi thi, uska chehra udaas, aankhein jhuki hui thi.

Aryan: Mera ho gaya, aap fresh ho lijiye.

Par Minakshi se koi jawab nahi aaya. Woh baithi rahi, ekdam shant, apna sar jhukaye. Aryan ko samajh nahi aaya Minakshi itni chup kyun hai. Woh aage aaya aur Minakshi ke paas neeche baith gaya.

Aryan: Maa! Kya hua?

Minakshi: ....

Aryan: Meri taraf dekhiye!

Minakshi ka sabar ab toot gaya. Usne apna sar uthaya. Aryan Minakshi ka chehra dekhte hi uske dil mein ek tees si uthi—kyunki Minakshi ki aankhon mein aansu the. Woh ro rahi thi?
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Aryan (shocked): Aap… aap ro rahi ho?

Minakshi: ...

Aryan (desperately): Kya hua? Kuchh toh boliye!

Minakshi ne Aryan ko ek nazar dekha, aur waha se uthkar bathroom ki taraf jaane lagi. Aryan ko samajh nahi aaya ki Minakshi ro kyun rahi hai, par itna toh usse pata chal chuka tha ki uski maa kisi baat se naraz hai.

Minakshi chupchap bathroom ki aur jaa hi rahi thi ki tabhi Aryan ne peeche se uska haath thaam liya.

Aryan: Maa!

Minakshi ruki, Aryan ki aur mudi, uski aankhon mein dekha. Aryan ki aankhon mein uske liye chinta thi, jo Minakshi ko pal-pal pighla rahi thi. Par phir bhi Minakshi ne kuchh nahi bola—shayad woh naraz thi, ya shayad gussa.

Aryan: Maa! Aap kyun ro rahi ho?

Minakshi (coldly): Tumhara nahana ho gaya ho toh tum jaake lunch kar lo.

Aryan: Aur aap?

Minakshi: Mujhe bhukh nahi hai.

Minakshi ke shabd spasht the, par uski aankhein kuchh aur hi keh rahi thi.

Aryan: Accha, bhukh nahi hai, theek hai. Par yeh toh batayein aap ro kyun rahi thi?

Minakshi ne kuchh nahi bola. Woh apne haath chhuda kar waha se jaane lagi. Aryan samajh nahi pa raha tha ki uski maa aisa kyun kar rahi thi. Minakshi ja hi rahi thi ki Aryan ne phir se uska haath thaam liya, is baar pakad thodi aur mazboot thi. Minakshi uski aur nahi mudi.

Aryan (firmly): Aapko achhi tarah pata hai, aap roti ho toh mujhe achha nahi lagta. Main aapko rote hue nahi dekh sakta.

Yeh baat sunte hi Minakshi peeche mudi. Aryan ki is baat par uska dil tezi se dhadka, par saath hi saath woh Aryan se naraz bhi thi ek gussa bhi tha.

Minakshi (screaming and tears): Pehle khud rulaya, phir kehte ho ro mat!

Aryan (stunned): Maa!

Minakshi ki aankhon se aansu behne lage, uski awaaz gusse mein bhari hoti gayi.

Minakshi (crying and screaming): maa! Maa! Kehna band karo mujhe!

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Aryan: Aap…????

Minakshi (interrupting, furious): Shut up… Just shut up… Tum… tum mujhe dard pahunchate ho, Aryan. Sirf tum ho jo mujhe dard dete ho!

Hamesha shant rehne wali Minakshi ab gusse mein aag babula ho gayi. Uski aankhon se aansu ke mote-mote boond girne lage.

Minakshi (crying): Tum kuchh samajhte nahi ho kya? Kya tumhe dikhayi nahi deta ki main kyun ro rahi hu?

Aryan: Maa!… aap…

Aryan ne Minakshi ka haath thoda dabaya, jaise woh usse shant karna chahta ho, par usse kya pata tha ki Minakshi aaj shant nahi hone wali. Minakshi ne apne haath ko dekha, jise Aryan ne thama hua tha.

Minakshi (crying): Mera haath chhodo, Aryan.

Uski awaaz mein ek ghorai thi, thodi kampan ke saath.

Aryan (stubbornly): Nahi…

Phir Minakshi ne aise kuchh keh diya, jise sun Aryan ka dil toot gaya. Usse apne haath chhodne mein majboor hona pada.

Minakshi (crying and screaming): Koi haq nahi hai tumhe mujhe chhune ka! Mera haath chhodo, Aryan… HAATH CHHODO!

Minakshi ke shabd ek adrishya nukile teer ki tarah Aryan ke dil mein lage. Woh jhatke se peeche hata, uske pair kamp uthay, uska muh jam gaya aur woh Minakshi ko hairani mein dekhta raha.

Minakshi (crying): Koi haq nahi hai tumhe mujhe chhune ka! Kal… kal raat tumne mujhe chuma, kyun… kyun mujhe chum rahe the tum? Haan… jawab do, Aryan, jawab do!

Aryan: …

Minakshi (crying): Ghar pe maine tumhe kiss kiya tha, uss par tumne sawal uthaya tha na ki maine kyun tumhe chuma tha? Ab… ab tum jawab do… Kal raat tumne mujhe kyun chuma? Do jawab!

Aryan: …

Minakshi (crying): Nahi hai na… jawab nahi hai na tumhare paas. Mere paas bhi jawab nahi tha… shayad hai jawab… tumhare paas bhi hai…

Aryan: Maa! Main…

Aryan puri baat keh pata usse pehle Minakshi ne usse rok diya. Woh Aryan ke ekdam paas aayi, uski collar ko apne hathon mein mutthi banate hue kheench liya. Uski aankhein laal ho chuki thi.

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Minakshi (crying and screaming): MAA mat bulao mujhe, Aryan! *sniff* Maa mat bulao!

Minakshi ne apne daant kas liye, aansuon se uske gaal bheeg chuke the, uska shareer kamp raha tha, phir bhi woh kehti gayi.

Minakshi (crying with anger): Koi… koi apni maa ko nahi chumta, koi nahi… Par tum… tumne mujhe chuma, kal raat tumne mere honthon ko chuma, kyun? Kyun chum rahe the tum mujhe? Kyun tum mere itne kareeb aa rahe the? Jawab do ab, main… main maa hu na tumhari? Janam diya hai na maine tumhe pait se se? Toh… *sniff* toh… tumne mujhe chuma kyun? Kis haq se?

Aryan: …

Aryan apna sar jhukaye khada tha, uske pair kamp rahe the. Kya bole, kya kahe, usse kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Minakshi (crying): Kyun tum Japan aaye the? Main bimar thi isliye? Bimar to main ghar pe bhi thi… Aur wajah ho tum… sirf tum… Tum mujhe aise ignore kar rahe the jaise main… main kuchh hu hi nahi tumhare liye.

Aryan (screaming): MAA!

Minakshi (crying): Agar ab bhi tumhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha, toh… toh tum chale jao mere saamne se, chale jao… Par mujhe maa kehke mat pukaro…

kehkar Minakshi roti hui Aryan ke saamne se bhag gayi, sidha bathroom mein ghus gayi. Usne shower on kiya, aur paani uske chehre ke aansuon ko neeche baha raha tha.

Minakshi rote hue neeche baith gayi, apne ghutno ke beech apna maatha dabaye roti rahi.

Minakshi (sobbing to herself): Ab nahi hota mujhse… Aryan ab nahi hota,Main chhupa nahi pa rahi hu ki main tumse pyar karti hu, jo maa wala nahi hai, aur tum… tum ho ki mujhse nazrein pher lete ho… Kyun karte ho aisa tum? Ek baar kareeb aate ho aur agle hi pal mujhe door dhakel dete ho.

Minakshi shower ke neeche baithi rahi, roti rahi.

Minakshi : na-nahi.. nahi! Nahi! Nahi! Nahi!

turant hi usse ehsaas ho raha tha ki gusse mein usne Aryan ko bura-bhala keh diya tha. Usko instent regret ho raha tha ab. Woh uthi, shower band kiya, aur ek towel apne upar odh liya. Woh bahar aane ke liye darwaza kholne jaa hi rahi thi ki tabhi ek awaaz ne uske pair rok diye.

Awaaz thi Aryan ki.

Aryan: Maa!

Minakshi dheere se darwaze ke paas aayi aur wahi baith gayi, darwaze ki doosri taraf se. Aryan apna kehna jaari rakha.

Aryan: Kal raat aap ro rahi thi, upar se aap bimar thi. Aap shant hi nahi ho rahi thi. Mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya karoon jo aap shant ho jaye… Pata nahi phir kya hua, maine aapko kiss kar diya… phir aap shant ho gayi.

Minakshi: …

Aryan: Aapne mujhe kaha mera aapko chhune ka koi haq nahi *smile* Aapne theek kaha, mera koi haq nahi banta aapko chhune ka, par…

Minakshi: ….?

Aryan: Par aapko maa kehne ka haq mujhse mat chheeniye ga. Aap chahe toh main yaha se chala jata hu, Nahi aaunga aapke saamne kabhi, par aapko maa kehne ka haq aap mujhse nahi chheen sakti.

Darwaze ke uss par se Minakshi ka koi jawab nahi aaya. Kaise aata? Minakshi ne apne muh par haath rakh liya tha taki rone ki awaaz na nikle. Usne apne muh par haath rakh kar awaaz ko dabaya.

Minakshi (whispering to herself): Aryan

Darwaze ke doosri taraf se Aryan apna kehna jari rakha.

Aryan: Aap chahti hain na ki main yahan se chala jaoon… Toh theek hai… aapki khushi ke liye kuchh bhi.

Yeh sunte hi Minakshi ke kaan khade ho gaye aur aankhein badi ho gayi. Aryan ne abhi abhi kya kaha? Uska dil dar se dhadak utha. Minakshi jor se chillayi.

Minakshi: Nahi, Aryan, ruko!

Minakshi ne jaldi se darwaza khola, par Aryan waha nahi tha.

Minakshi (screaming): ARYAN… AARYANNN!

Aryan room pe nahi tha. Woh to kab ka bahar jaa chuka tha, saath chhod gaya tha ek dar Minakshi ke liye.

Minakshi : no.. nahi.. Aryan!!!!

Minakshi daud ke bahar janeko huyi, par usko ehsaas huya ki abhi wo sirf ek towel mein hai, Naha ke abhi aaye thi wo, uska badan bhiga tha pani ke Boond se aur, aankhein aanshu se.

Minakshi (crying) : NO... NO aise jane nahi dungi tumhe.


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Dusri taraf

Aryan hotel ke ground floor se nikal raha tha, uska chehra udaas aur dil bhari tha. Minakshi ke kathor shabd uske kaanon mein goonj rahe the, har shabd ek teer ki tarah uske dil mein chubh raha tha. Receptionist, ek Japanese ladki jo Aryan ko pehchanti thi, Aryan ko dekhte hi muskuraya. Aryan iss hotel mein ekmatra Indian male tha, aur uska charismatic presence kucch alag tha.

Receptionist (smiling, in broken English): "Hello, sir! How can I....."

Aryan ne uski taraf dekha, par uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha. Uska mann toofan mein dooba hua tha, woh kisi se baat karne ke mood mein nahi tha. Receptionist ne ek baar phir koshish ki.

Receptionist (confused): "Sir, you okay? Huh?"

Aryan ne usse ignore kiya aur tezi se hotel se bahar nikal gaya. Jaise hi woh bahar aaya, hawa ka ek jhonka uske chehre ko chhoo gaya,aur usne ek lambi saans li, aur -

**Woosshhh**


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Udhar room mein minakshi jaldi se apni kapde pahan ke room se bahar nikali. Usko jald se jald Aryan ko dhund na hoga, har ek second uske liye kimti tha, usse jaate huye Ritu ko bhi call lagaya.

Minakshi (on call) : Ritu.. Ritu jaldi bahar nikalo.

Ritu : mam! Kiya huya??

Minakshi (shouts) : RITU!! Jaldi bahar aayo, entarence pe Milo mujhe *sniff* jaldiiiiiiiiii.



Ritu : mam app... Okay abhi aye.!

Ritu samajh gayi kuchh serious matter hai.


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Hotel se nikal kar Aryan ek empty bridge chal raha tha, apne dil ke bojh ke saath. uske dil mein Minakshi ke kathor shabdo ka dard ek toofan ki tarah uth raha tha. Minakshi, uski baatein Aryan ke seene mein teer ki tarah chubh raha tha har kadam ke saath.

Aryan (mann Mein): "Maa ne sahi kaha tha… main hi unhe maa kehne ke layak nahi raha. Yeh pyaar… yeh jo bhi hai, galat hai. Maine hi iss rishte ko apne haathon se Ganda kar diya. Par ab?......."

"huh!"

uske kadam ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Uske kaanon mein ek ajeeb si aahat padi, jaise koi uska peechha kar raha ho.

Aryan: "Maine aate waqt dekha tha, yaha to koi nahi tha, empty tha bridge to. And I heard this bridge is famous for emptiness!"

Aryan (Mann mein): "Koi smuggler? Ya phir koi chor?"

Usne jaldi se peeche mudkar dekha, aur uski aankhein ek pal ke liye thami rahi, kyunki -

Waha koi chor ya smuggler nahi waha, ek ladki thi. Wo ladki ek stunning black dress mein thi, Dress ka fabric dupher ki roshni mein chamak raha tha, aur usne ek black mask pahna huya tha uska kaala mask uske chehre ko chhupa raha tha, sirf uski gahri, chamakti hui aankhein dikh rahi thi. Uske ash-white baal, jo medium length ke the, hawa ke halke jhonkon mein lehra rahe the, jaise koi sur aur tal ka khel chal raha ho.

Aryan ke peeche mudte hi uus ladki ke kadam wahi ruk gaye. Bridge ka sannata aur bhi gehra ho gaya. Sirf hawa ka halka jhonka tha, Ek pal ke liye, dono ek doosre ko dekhte rahe. Par agle hi pal, us ladki ke kadam dheere-dheere Aryan ki taraf badhne lage, aur phir, ek jhatke mein, woh tezi se Aryan ki taraf daudi.

Aryan (hairani se): "Huh? Yeh kya?!"

Ladki ki har move mein ek gymnast ki tarah ki fluidity thi, jaise woh kisi trained assassin ho.

Usne ek lambi chhalaang lagayi, aur apne ek haath se Aryan ke chehre ki taraf ek teekha punch maara -

Lekin Aryan, jo ek system holder tha, uski reflexes kisi normal human se jiyada thi. Usne ek pal mein us punch ko dodge kiya, apne pairon ko halka sa ghumate hue side mein hatt gaya.


Aryan : "Who are you?! Why are you attacking me?"

Ladki ne koi jawab nahi diya. Uski aankhein mask ke peeche se chamak rahi thi. Ladki ne apne moves ki speed badha di, ek ke baad ek attack karti hui.

Kabhi woh apne pairon se high kick maarti, to kabhi apne haathon se tezi se jl JAB!daalti. Har move mein uski black dress uske jism ke saath ek rhythm mein hil rahi thi, uske ash-white baal hawa mein lehra rahe the, jo dupher ki roshni mein ek silvery sheen de rahe the.



Par aryan ne fight back nahi kiya. Ek toh woh ek 'system' holder tha, jiski taakat usse ek normal insaan se kai guna zyada banati thi. Doosre, Aryan mard tha, jo ek ladki par haath uthane se pehle sau baar sochta.

Woh bas apne aap ko defend kar raha tha, uske haathon aur pairon se us ladki ke attacks ko block karte hue.

Aryan (poochta hua): " kaun ho tum? Kyun mujhse lad rahi ho?"

Ladki ne phir bhi koi jawab nahi diya, apne ek haath se Aryan ke gale ki taraf ek CHOP! maara, par Aryan ne uska haath pakad liya aur usse halka sa peeche dhakel diya.

Ladki (man mein sochti hui): "Yeh fight back nahi kar raha, bas defend kar raha hai khud ko, isse sayad fight aata hi nahi, afterall he's just a rich kid, nothing more then that. I will Kil him"

Par usse kya pata tha ki Aryan koi normal insaan nahi tha. Woh ek system holder tha, jiski powers usse ek dangerous opponent banata tha.

Aryan ab tak bas defend kar raha tha, par ab uska bhi sabar jawab de raha tha. Ladki ke attacks ek ke baad ek aate rahe, aur phir usne apni dress ke andar chhupaya hua ek chhota sa, chamkila chaku nikala. Uski aankhon mein ek khatarnaak chamak thi, jaise woh ab Aryan ko seriously harm karna chahti ho.

Aryan (sochta hua): "Bas, ab bohot ho gaya."

Ladki ne chaku ke saath ek tezi se attack kiya, par Aryan ki reflexes usse bhi tez thi. Usne ek graceful spin kiya aur ladki ke peeche chala gaya. Ek pal mein, usne ladki ko peeche se apni baahon mein jakad liya, uske haathon ko tightly pakad kar chaku neeche gira diya. Aryan ka haath uski kamar ke charon taraf the,

Ladki (Maan mein) : shit!


Aryan : "kaun ho tum? Kyun mujhpe attack kar rahi ho?"

Ladki : aahhh!

Ladki ne koi jawab nahi diya. Bas uski saansein tezi se chal rahi thi, uske muh se ek halki si siskari nikli kyunki Aryan ne usse kaske pakad rakha tha. Usne apne aap ko chhudane ki koshish ki apne jism ko twist karte hue, par Aryan ki pakad se chhutna aasan nahi tha.


Tabhi, ladki ne ek desperate move kiya—usne phir se apne dress se ek aur chaku nikala aur Aryan ke haath pe ghusane ki koshish ki.

Aryan (smile) : "it's not gonna work on me!"

Aryan ek baar phir usse tez nikla. Usne ladki ko chhod diya, aur ek side mein hatt gaya.

Ladki (Mann mein) : YOU! I'll Kil you.

Ladki phir se Aryan ki aur badhi, par isbar Aryan ne khud ko defend nahi kiya, woh simply side haat gaya.

Ladki aage aaye usse marne, per Aryan side haat me ki wajah se ladki ne apna balance khoya aur dono ki aankhein ek dusre se takraye, slow-motion ki tarah.

Ladki ka pair bridge ke kinaare se fisal gaya. Woh ek chhoti si cheek ke saath bridge se latak gayi.

Ladki : ahhh!

uska haath ek iron rod ko kaske pakad raha tha. Neeche dekha to zameen bohot neeche thi—agar woh giri, to uski maut nishchit thi.

Dupher ki roshni mein neeche ka nazara aur bhi khatarnak lag raha tha. Uski aankhein darr se band ho gayi, aur uske dil mein ek toofan utha, dar ka, maut ka.

Ladki (mann mein): "Nahi… main aise hi nahi mar sakti. Mujhe badla lena hai… I must kill him."

Usne apni aankhein kholi, aur apne darr ko control karte hue upar chadhne ki koshish ki, par usmein itna takat nahi tha ki khud ko upar uthale.

Par tabhi,

ek haath uske samne aaya, aur ek awaaz uske kaanon mein goonji.

Aryan : "Come on, hold my hand. Nahi to tum gir jaogi."

Ladki ne upar dekha. Wahan Aryan tha, jise woh marne aaye thi. Aryan ka haath uski taraf badha hua tha. Hawa mein Aryan ke baal halke se lehra rahe the, aur uski aankhon mein kuchh ajib tha, jaise woh usse sachmein bachana chahta ho.

Ladki ne ek pal ke liye usse dekha, uski aankhein uske chehre par thami rahi. Phir, dheere se, usne apna haath upar kiya, aur Aryan ne uski hatheli ko kaske pakad liya. Ek jhatke mein, usne ladki ko upar kheench liya.


Aryan : "Huff! Thank god… Waise, ye kya tha?! Who are you, and why are you atacking me?"

Ladki ab bhi saans le rahi thi, uske ash-white baal hawa mein lehra rahe the,
Usne ek pal ke liye Aryan ko dekha, aur tab usne notice kiya ki Aryan ab bhi uska haath pakad rakha tha.

Ladki (mann mein) : w-why did he saved me? No I..I'll Kil him, NEXT TIME I'LL KILL HIM.

Ek jhatke se, ladki ne apna haath chhuda liya, aur uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak aayi.

Aryan (hairani se): "Huh?"

Agle hi pal, ladki tezi se palti, aur bridge ke doosre chhor ki taraf daud padi. Uski black dress hawa mein lehra rahi thi, aur uske ash-white baal ek shadow ki tarah uske peeche chhoot rahe the.

Aryan (chillate hue): "Hey! Wait! Who are you?!"

Par ladki tab tak bridge ke doosre chhor par gayab ho chuki thi. Aryan ne ek lambi saans li, apna sir hilaaya.

"WTF! Yeh kya tha?"


Aryan ne apne kapde theek kiye.

"Jo bhi thi, mujhe ab hospital jana hai."

Haan, Aryan hospital hi ja raha tha. Aaj Kentai ki beti ka operation tha, aur Aryan ne hi uske treatment ke liye paise diya tha. Kentai, wahi shakhs tha jisne Minakshi ke khane mein drugs milaye the. Par Aryan ne usse maaf kar diya tha, kyunki usne yeh sab majboori mein kiya tha, naki koi galat intention se, aur Ab Minakshi bhi theek hai.

Bridge ka yeh mysterious encounter ab bhi uske dimag mein chal raha tha -

"Woh ladki kaun thi?"

Par abhi, Aryan ke paas waqt nahi tha. Usne apne saare sawalon ko side mein rakha, aur hospital ki taraf chal diya.

Bridge ke dusre chhor pe, woh ladki. Woh abhi tak bhagi nahi thi woh, chhor se chupke Aryan ko jaate huye dekha. Usne apne charepe lagaya huya mask hataya.


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Ladki : I'll kill you.

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Dusri taraf, Ritu daudte hue hotel ke entarence pe aaye, usne dekha Minakshi wahi khadi hai chintit, aur roti huye.

Ritu : mam!!! What happened? Kiya huya! Aap....

Minakshi (crying) : Ritu!.... Aryan...

Ritu : mam! Please tell me what happened to chote Singhania sir???

Minakshi (crying) : woh mujhe naraz hoke Room se Nikal aaya, Ritu ye Mumbai nahi hai, Aryan... Aryan... Ye anjan sharer hai woh... Pata nahi woh kaha Jaa Raha hoga "sniff" I mast found him... Nahi to...*crying* kuchh galat ho jaye toh mein jee nahi paungi.. Ritu.

Ritu : mam, saant ho jaiye kab gaye the sir?

Minakshi (crying) : thodi der pahale hi.

Ritu : mam, we mast go after him, right now. Woh jiyada dur nahi gaaye honge.

Minakshi apne aanshu poochti huye -

"right, hurry..."


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Mumbai/ India
Anvi's house


Apne alishan kamre mein ek ladki khoye si baithi huye thi, na jane kiya chal raha tha uske Maan mein.


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THAK! THAK!

Miss! May I come in?

Awaaz uski maid ~ Elena ki thi. Uske haath mein ek tea trea thi. Usne darwaza kholte huye apne miss ko dekha jo khoya huye baithi thi.

Elena (maan mein) : it's always the same, poor miss, I feel bad for her!.

Anvi : come in.

Elena : here is your green tea, miss!

Kehte huye usne ek cup anvi ko our diya.

Anvi : I don't feel like drink it.

Elena : okay miss.

Anvi : Elena!

Elena : yes Miss?

Anvi : Like laughing with friends, loving someone dear, helping someone in need—these moments together make up life.
One breath is our beginning, and one breath is the final word of our story; every breath in between is a new moment. A new chance to live. But what do we do? We either chase the past or worry about the future. We forget that true living lies in this one breath, the one we have right now. We’re alive, but we truly live only when we feel every breath, when we embrace every moment wholeheartedly. We must learn to live this breath fully—only then will we understand the true meaning of life.

Elena : huh???

Anvi : I met someone at the bar, and when I asked him about life, he shared this.

Elena (kuchh sochte huye) : Indeed, miss, we must feel every breath. The person who told you this spoke the truth.

Anvi : But how do I feel my every breath?

Elena (smile) : i don't know, miss! Umm! Maybe the person who told you this can explain it to you.

Anvi ne Elena ko dekha jaise woh apne sawal ka jawab dhund rahi thi.

Anvi : hmm!

Anvi (mann Mein) : i must meet him again, he told me his name is Aryan.

Elena : Is there anything that bothers you, miss?

Anvi apne khayalon se bahar aaye aur apni sharp aankhon se Elena ko dekhi.

Anvi (sharp) : no, dad, is he arrived?

Elena : yes Miss!.

Anvi : I need to talk to him.

Kehke anvi apne room se bahar nikali.


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Tokeyo/ japan
Highway
afternoon 4PM


"Kaha gaye Aryan... Please kuchh galat mat karna.. nahi to mein.. mein *crying*

Ye minakshi thi jo ro Rahi thi, Ritu aur minakshi dono dhundne nikle the Aryan ko, 2 ghante se woh log Aryan ko dhund rahe the par Aryan kahi dikh nahi raha tha, tamam chintaye Minakshi ke dimaag mein chal rahi thi.

~kahi Aryan rasta bhatak gaya ho to?

~ "kahi uska accident ho gaya to?"

~kahi kisi ne Aryan ko kuchh kar diya to?"

~ noo, usse kuch nahi hoga, nahi ho sakta usse kuchh"


Ritu minakshi ko aise dekh khud chintit ho gaye thi, lekin abhi Minakshi ko shant karna hoga usse.

Ritu : mam, please royea maat. Dekhiye chote Singhania sir abhi chote nahi rahe, hum dhund lenge unhe, jiyada dur nahi gaye honge woh.

Minakshi (crying) : Ritu.. woh mujhse nazar hokar gaya hai, mein... Mein acchi maa nahi hu.

Ritu : mam, please calm down.....

Minakshi (crying) : how.. how can I, mine khud usse mere samne se jaane ke liye bol diya tha Ritu.... How can I do that, mein... Mein gusse se usse.......

Minakshi ko yaad aaraha tha ki usse najane gusse main kiya kiya bol gaye thi Aryan ko -

~ "mera haath chhodo"

~ "tumhe koi haq nahi mujhe chuneka"

~ "mujhe maa khake mat bulayo Aryan"

~ "chale jaao mere samne se"

Woh roti rahi, aansuon se uski aankhon dhundli ho gayi thi.

Ritu : mam, look hum ab jaha hai yeha aas paas koye train station nahi hai, aur apne bataya ki sir ne phone room pe hi choor gaye the, cab bhi book nahi kar payenge, so it's a High possibility ki sir yeha hai aaa paas, humai dhundte rehna hoga.

Ritu ki baat sahi thi, Kyunki yeha se train station kafi dur tha, haa woh log tokeyo shaheer mein hi the par urban aria nahi tha, aur Aryan apne phone bhi saath nahi le gaya tha matlab woh cab ya taxi bhi nahi le sakta tha, kyuki Aryan cash money use Nahi Karta tha vah Jeb Mein purse Nahi rakhta tha, jyadatar online transact Karta tha woh. Matlab clear tha Aryan aaspaas hi gaya hai bahut dur nahi Gaya hoga.

Minakshi apne aansu poochaa phir uski aankhein Nam thi, woh ek maa thi. upar se usko Aryan se pyaar tha, ek bete se badkar pyaar karti thi Aryan ko.

Minakshi (sob) : right woh jiyada dur nahi gaya hoga, Ritu 2 cab book karo jaldi, tum uss side dhundo mein iss side dhundti hu.

Ritu : ye sahi rahega.



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Mumbai/ India
Anvi's house


THAK! THAK!

"
Come in meri bacchi" Ye anvi ka dad tha.

Anvi : dad! I need to talk to you.

"Bolo beta, kiya khna hai aap ko"

Anvi : dad! Mujhe kuchh puchna Hai aapse!

"Poochho,my dear! Jo puchna Hai poochh lo"

Anvi : you know, dad! what I am talking about!


Anvi ke pita ji chup rah gaya, unke muh se ek shabd nahi nikla.

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Aaj ke liye itna hi, update post kar Diya Kuchh extra chijen bhi add kar diya is update mee, ab aap log apna Kam bhi kar do :winknudge:
Wahi likes and reviews. Do like guys, tum log like nahi karte padh Ke chale jaate Ho, like kiya karo, to mujhe bhi likhne mein maza aayega. and leave your thought on this, leave a comment.
Milte Hain next update mein.
 
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Bhai update kab aa raha hai
Very nice update. Waiting for the next one
Wow... love it, too much happening in this update, amazing stroy... wonderful writing


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Waiting for update 🔥
Waiting for wonderful update bhai
Waiting eagerly for another beautiful update. Your story writing skills touches the heart
awesome update bro...eagerly waiting for next update
Jabardast bhai ravi ko ek sath 3 jhatke de diye maza agaya ab kya aj minakshi or aryan ke beech kuch hot hoga
Bhai mention karne se shayad hi koi respond karega. Isliye aap kisi mod ko dm karo
Pl bring update as soon as possible.
Nice story 👌 👌
Waiting for beautiful update
Bhai story ka update delete kyu kr diya agr kuch change karna hai Thoda jaldi karo
Waiting for update bhai
Abhi ex theek chal rahi hai bhai, ab aap update de sakte ho





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फोरम में गड़बड़ी के दौरान जो भी पोस्ट हुई थी, वो डिलीट हो चुकी है और उसका बैकअप Addicted भाई के पास है, उनसे सीधे संपर्क करके प्राप्त कर सकते है!
Bhai jald jald apko back-up update mil jaye
Brilliant story

Update 58 has been posted guys
 
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