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Dear all story updated, please comment![]()
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Thanks a lot dear EricKisi ne sahi kaha hai purani sharab aur purane chaval apni khushbu chhupaye nhi chhipa sakti vo bat ia kahani par lagoo hoti hai bahut hi shaandar tarike se likhi gai ye short story ne bahut hi romanchit Kiya hai hai
Mai to yayavar ki tarah is munch par ghoom raha tha achanak Razi Bhabhi ki is story par nigah chali gai tariff ke shabd nhi nikal rahe bahut hi umda tarike se prastut Kiya hai
Agar lekhak chahti to is story ko aaram aaram se 10-12 update bana sakte the magar bahut hi sankshipt aur nape tule shabdon me itani ras bahri aur romanchit kahani ka srujan kiya
Bahut bahut badhai aabhar abhinandan
Ummid hai aage bhi aisi ashulipika aanand milega![]()