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Story ka sabse Intense aspect aapko kya lagta hai?

  • Ashar aur Sana ki khufia chemistry aur tension.

    Votes: 19 48.7%
  • Sofia aur Sabiha ki nangi baatein aur raaz.

    Votes: 14 35.9%
  • Ashar ka apni fantasies ko poora karne ka junoon.

    Votes: 18 46.2%
  • Ghar ke sukoon ke peeche chhupi hui Darkness.

    Votes: 12 30.8%
  • Laibha ghar mein baith kar sana ka raaz par nazar rakhe hue hai

    Votes: 7 17.9%
  • wating for incest turn between bhai behan.

    Votes: 21 53.8%
  • waiting for ashar sabhia real encounter.

    Votes: 17 43.6%

  • Total voters
    39

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Sana apne room mein akeli thi, chhat ko ghoor rahi thi.

Pichhle 2 din se ek tarah se usne apne aap ko room mein band kiya hua tha, khana bhi Laiba hi ne usey la kar diya tha. Sabhia kuch apne kaamon mein busy thi, isliye uska focus kahin aur tha.

Sana ko neend nahi aa rahi thi raaton ko, zehen mein sochon ka toofan tha, Har waqt us raat ka scene dimagh mein chal raha tha. Har baar jab wo aankhein band karti, Ashar ki ankhon ka wo khoofnaak gussa…Aur phir... wo Thappar! Kitni zor se uski naram si gaal par para tha ke Sana andar tak hil gayi thi,Uski cheekh dar se uske andar hi dumm torr gayi thi.

Magar dard se zyada shock tha... Ashar ka wo touch... pehle chehre par, phir honton ke qareeb... aur phir wo kiss. Ufff! Wo kiss nahi tha, wo to aik tufaan tha jisne Sana ke wajood ko bikhair kar rakh diya tha. use kiss mein gussa bhi tha, junoon bhi, Ashar ki garm zubaan jab uske munh mein zabardasti dakhil hui thi, to Sana ko laga tha jaise wo saans lena bhool gayi ho.

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Ashar ka hath jab uske seene par slip hua, uska boobs par wo mardana skhat dabao... Sana apni insult bhool gayi thi. Sirf aik wild excitement thi, Per andar khuch aur b tha.

Sana ne mehsoos kiya Zohaib... ne b to chua tha per Ashar ka andaz alag tha. Zyada gehra. Zyada khatarnak. Zyada Possessive.

Aur phir... wo khwab. usay sharminda karne ke liye kafi thi. Jab wo Khwab mind main ata Uski penty geeli ho jati thi… Sana (Whisper mein): Uff... ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? Kya main waqayi gandi larki hoon? Kya Ashar uncle sahi kehte hain ke main awara hoon?....ya sab naia tha uska liya wo confuse dari hvi thi.

Sana ka dil do hisson mein bhatt chuka tha. Forbidden pleasure... jo cheez kuch lamhon ke liye maza thi, ab wo bojh ban chuki thi. Aik taraf Ashar ke liye wo uthate hve naia jazbaat thae. Usey Ashar ka har touch, uski har bite apni skin par ab bhi mehsoos hoti thi. Doosri taraf guilt tha... Gussa tha apni insult per…. darr tha... family ki izzat thi.

In sab ke darmiyan Sana itni ulajh chuki thi ke usay lagta tha is sab ki zimmedar sirf woh khud hai. Ashar ka qusoor kahin bhi usay nazar hi nahi aa raha tha.…… jaise saari ghalti uske hi wajood mein ho.

Woh in sochon ko pata nahi kitni baar, kitne angles se soch chuki thi. Aur ab bhi wohi sab chal raha tha ke achanak uske mobile par message aaya.

Sana ne phone uthaya, umeed thi ke Ashar hoga.
Magar screen dekh kar mayoosi ki aik lehar dourd gayi. Message us larke ka tha. Usne bina parhe mobile side par rakh diya.

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Wo mujh se baat kyun nahi kar rahe?

Is khayal ke sath hi Sana ki ankhon se aansuon nikal aaya. Usne kitni baar Ashar ko message likha...

Ashar uncle… aap ne mujhe maara… phir kiss kiya… Lekin phir bhi… aapko miss kar rahi hoon……Nae nae delete.

Main kya likhun? Sorry? Aapko miss kar rahi hoon? Ya aap ne jo kiya… woh galat tha lekin main phir bhi aapke paas aana chahti hoon?

Magar har baar send karne se pehle delete kar diya.

Sana ko ehsas hua ke Ashar hi wo wahid insaan tha jo uski har bakwas sunta tha, jo usay danta tha magar uske sath Connected rehta tha. Ab aur koe b nae tha jiska sath wo ya sab share kar ska..ise laia ye khamoshi usay thappad se zyada dard de rahi thi.

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Sofia besabri se Vicky ke ghar aane ka wait kar rahi thi. Door bell baji.

Sofia ne jaise hi darwaza khola, saamne Vicky ko dekh kar uski ankhon mein woh chamak wapis aa gayi jo pechla khuch dino se ashar ka sath tension se gaib thi. Vicky ka lamba qadd, chaunde kandhe aur jawan chehra dekh kar Sofia aik pal ko thithak gayi woh bacha ab aik Jawan mard ban chuka tha.

Vicky: (Gale milte hue, uski pakar mein aik mardana mazbooti thi) Waise mujhe aap se milna to nahi chahiye tha... lekin ab aap saamne hoon, to khud ko rok nahi saka.

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Sofia: (Usey alag karte hue, chehre par laali ke sath) Kyun? Aisi kya baat ho gayi?

Vicky: Kyunke aap airport nahi aayin.

Sofia: Arey... Ashar ne mana kar diya tha. Kehne lage office se hi pick kar lenge.

Vicky: Lagta hai aaj kal aapke Husband kuchh zyada hi kaam mein busy hain. Abhi mujhe bhi drop karke yahi bol kar chale gaye.

Sofia: Aaj kal kuchh aisa hi chal raha hai.

Chalo andar aao, ya darwaze par hi khade rehne ka irada hai?

Vicky: Agar aap andar aane dogi, tabhi to aaunga.

Yeh sun kar dono hans diye. Sofia side par ho gayi.

Vicky ne Living Area mein jata hva Sofia ke jism ke utaar chadao ko gehri nazron se scan kiya. Usay Sofia pehle se zyada pur kashish lag rahi thi.

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dono living area mein aa kar baith gaye.

Sofia: Dekho zara, tum kitne baray ho gaye ho. Proper gabrū jawan.

Vicky: Phir to aapko burhi ho jana chahiye tha… lekin aap to abhi bhi waisi hi ho.

Sofia: (hahah) Tum Pehla Fresh ho kar ao. Main tumhare liye khana lagati hoon, phir araam se baatein karte hain.

Yeh bol kar woh kitchen ki taraf chali gayi.

Vicky bachpan se hi Sofia ke bohot qareeb tha. Sofia ki shaadi se pehle woh aksar uske sar par sawaar rehta, aur Sofia bhi use utni hi tawajjo deti thi.

Dinner table par Vicky ne pehla niwala lete hi kaha: Phupho… aap ke haath ke khane ki to baat hi kuchh aur hai. Kitne arsey baad kha raha hoon.

Sofia: Sab tumhari favourite dishes banayi hain.

Vicky: Aaj to waqai meri eid hai. Favourite phupho ke haath ka favourite khana iska maza hi aur hai.

Sofia (hanste hue): Hmmm… baatein banana bhi seekh gaye ho. I’m impressed.


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Vicky: And I’m flattered…. Waise Ashar uncle kab tak aayenge? Unke saath hi dinner karte.

Jaise usay achanak yaad aa gaya ho.

Sofia: Haan, ab tumhein dinner ke baad hi unka khayal aaya hai?

Vicky: Mujhe tab bohot bhook lagi thi. Waise yeh yaad dilana aapka kaam hai.

Sofia: woh busy hain. Thoda late aayenge. Message par baat ho gayi thi meri.

Vicky: Mujhe pata tha aap bohot Farmabardar biwi ho.Uncle bohot lucky hain ke unhein aap jaisi biwi mili jo unke intezar mein palke bichaye rakhti hai.

Dono hans diye, magar Sofia ke dil mein aik ache uthi. Wo jaanti thi ke wo palke to bichaati hai, magar Ashar un palkon ko choomna bhool gaya hai.

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Dusri taraf Ashar gaadi mein bewajah road par ghum raha tha. Zindagi apni rawani mein chal rahi thi magar uske andar sab kuch ruka hua tha… us raat par.

Sana…Uska naam bhi sochna galat lag raha tha lekin is naam ke ilawa aur kuch bhi uske mind mein nahi tha. uski roti hui aankhein, geele honth, woh halki si siski jab usne usey kiss kiya tha, uski naram gaal par thappad ka laal nishaan. Uske jism ki paseene wali meethi smell jo usey paagal bana chuki thi.

Ashar ne kabhi bhi Sana ko is nazar se nahi dekha tha, Wo to uski bhatiji thi... masoom, chanchal. Magar wo aik lamha wo galat waqt aur wo galat jagah... jidar usna apna Control kho dia.

Ashar ka khoon khaul raha tha. Usey gussa Sana par nahi, apni us kamzori par tha jo aik pal mein us par haavi ho gayi thi.Phir Usey wo thappad yaad aaya... kitni zor se maara tha usne us naram gaal par.

Ashar (Dil mein): Wo seham gayi thi... uski ankhon mein wo khof aur ansoo... magar maine sirf thappad par bas nahi kiya. Maine apni hadd paar kar di… Usey wo touch yaad aaya jo gusse se shuru hua magar hawas par khatam hua.

Ashar ne khud ko tasalli dene ki koshish ki: Sana ne mujhe roka kyun nahi? Wo rokti nahi hai... is liye to koi bhi uska advantage utha sakta hai. Wo larka bhi usey exploit kar raha hai aur main... main...

(Hahaha woh ladka ya khud Ashar?)

Lekin andar se woh jaanta tha yeh sab uski apni kamzori thi, Sana ki masoomiyat nahi.

Mujhe usay protect karna hoga, us ne khud ko tasalli dene ki koshish ki, Main hi to usay sahi aur galat ka farq sikha sakta hoon. Magar kahin na kahin woh jaanta tha… yeh sirf aadha sach tha.

Sana uski zimmedari nahi balki shayad woh uski kamzori ban rahi thi.

Usne phone uthaya. Sana ka number screen par chamak raha tha. Uska angutha call button par hover karta raha... kuch seconds tak wo us kash-m-kash mein raha jahan aik taraf Sofia ki wafadari thi aur doosri taraf Sana ki wo nasheeli mehak.

Ashar: (Dheere se) Ye galat hai... main galat hoon. Us se door rehna hi behtar hai.

Usne phone wapis rakh diya, magar uske dimaag mein sawaalon ka ek tofaan tha. Sana is waqt kya kar rahi hogi? Kya uski ankhon mein bhi wahi uljhan hogi? Kya ab wo mujh se nafrat karti hai ya… main ne uske saath bohot galat kiya.

Woh pachtawe ki aag mein jal raha tha, jaise uski har saans us galti ko yaad dila rahi ho, uska dil bhari tha guilt se.
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Dosto ya tha aj ka update -- Apne feedback se batayein ke Ashar ka ye character arc aapko kaisa lag raha hai!
Perfect! story aur interesting ho rae ha.
 

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Good Story Plot Behtreen ha sayh Likhari ki maharat bhi ha
Main is Waqt Update 19 (2) par hon yahan Kuch confutation ha Sana Or Laiba main jis ko kisi ne yahan Commenta main Mention nahi kya
Video Laiba ki thi CCTV ki jis k baad Asher Laiba ko dekhta ha Flate pohnch kar wahan Baat cheet bhi usi hawale se hoti ha
Ab yahan Sana ko Wo Video dikhayi Gayi ha Ye Name ka Confusion ha lekin yahan Character main bhi Confusion agya ha
Ye 1 Choti Si Ghalati ha jo mujhe mehsoos Hui baqi Kahani Boht Mast ha
 
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Good Story Plot Behtreen ha sayh Likhari ki maharat bhi ha
Main is Waqt Update 19 (2) par hon yahan Kuch confutation ha Sana Or Laiba main jis ko kisi ne yahan Commenta main Mention nahi kya
Video Laiba ki thi CCTV ki jis k baad Asher Laiba ko dekhta ha Flate pohnch kar wahan Baat cheet bhi usi hawale se hoti ha
Ab yahan Sana ko Wo Video dikhayi Gayi ha Ye Name ka Confusion ha lekin yahan Character main bhi Confusion agya ha
Ye 1 Choti Si Ghalati ha jo mujhe mehsoos Hui baqi Kahani Boht Mast ha
Bohat shukriya -- Video sana ki hi thi wo sirf ashar ki deception thi sisters kaper exchange kar leti hain -- aga b comments main feedback deta rahin.
 
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