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But at least it changed for the better, right?
Samar_Singh Evaran Eternity Gaurav1969 Rihanna JaideepRaj Ajay chauhan
But at least it changed for the better, right?
Samar_Singh Evaran Eternity Gaurav1969 Rihanna JaideepRaj Ajay chauhan
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It feels awkward for first but when compared to earlier seems more better....
But at least it changed for the better, right?
Samar_Singh Evaran Eternity Gaurav1969 Rihanna JaideepRaj Ajay chauhan
Is story mein bhi style change hua hai but update per update minimalist hai jis wajah se one go mein koi story padhe to use notice nahi hoga ye changes....I have read it two times so that's how i thought...
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Yeah. Style change do kaaran ki wajah se hua. Ek toh obviously plagiarise ho rahi thi style. So, I had to modify it.
Dusra ye ki likhte likhte apne aap writing skills badhne lagti hai. Toh wo bhi ek reason hai.
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Earlier you used to focus on family drama lekin halfway mein story ke scope bahut badh gye...starting koi padhega toh bolega ke Veer apne family se badla lega aur story khtm...but see where it is now...
But at least it changed for the better, right?
Samar_Singh Evaran Eternity Gaurav1969 Rihanna JaideepRaj Ajay chauhan
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Skills bhi badh gayi bahut. Aur, earlier phase me itne characters hi nahi the. Lore starting phase me tha. Complexities kam. Also, wo style plagiarise ho rahi thi so ultimately I had to modify it.Earlier you used to focus on family drama lekin halfway mein story ke scope bahut badh gye...starting koi padhega toh bolega ke Veer apne family se badla lega aur story khtm...but see where it is now...
Samar_Singh
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Early updates me chize itni subtle aur detailed nhi thi. Ab depth najar aati haiz Characters aur plot me bhi.
But at least it changed for the better, right?
Samar_Singh Evaran Eternity Gaurav1969 Rihanna JaideepRaj Ajay chauhan
Although koi specific update se achanak change nahi hua but HOK arc tha jahan kahani ke stakes aur plot me major turning point aaya, that it's gonna be an extraordinary story.
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Not gonna be an extraordinary story? Matlab bahut ordinary hai kya?
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Typo, edited wala hi to quote kiya hai ju ne bhiNot gonna be an extraordinary story? Matlab bahut ordinary hai kya?
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Yeah that's how stories start...but I felt that midway bahut jayda scope badha...haaf tak family involvement jayda tha...uske baad family ke dum backdrop mein chale gye...Skills bhi badh gayi bahut. Aur, earlier phase me itne characters hi nahi the. Lore starting phase me tha. Complexities kam. Also, wo style plagiarise ho rahi thi so ultimately I had to modify it.