Adultery Constable Maa
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AUTHOR’S FINAL NOTE: THE END OF CHAPTER 1
"Doston, ye kahani maine un logo ke liye shuru ki thi jo 1990 ke us dark aur gritty Mumbai ko mehsoos karna chahte hain, jahan ek undercover officer ki zindagi 'glamour' nahi, balki 'jahannum' hoti hai.
Maine dekha ki yahan kuch log aise hain jinhe sirf jism ki bhook hai. Jo baar-baar demand kar rahe hain ki isme 'Incest' dalo, ya Maa ko sirf Raju ke saath sex karte dikhao. Un logo ko main sirf itna kahunga—agar tumhe sasti thark aur sasti fantasies chahiye, toh is forum pe 1000 aisi kahaniyan hain, jaake unhe padho. Meri story ki 'Soul' tum jaise log kabhi nahi samajh paoge.
Archana ka character ek 'Aurat' aur ek 'Maa' ka hai, jo system aur dushmano ke beech pish rahi hai. Uska har dard, uska har sauda ek , fantasy hai . Galat logo ke beech apni mehnat aur apna vision share karke maine apna time waste kiya, iska mujhe afsos hai.
Aaj maine is Chapter ko tezi se khatam kiya hai ( bohot galtiya kee hai like summry hee likhi hai deep me nahee jaapaya ) taaki Archana ko wo 'Justice' mil sake jo wo deserve karti hai. Is rush ke liye main apne asli supporters se maafi chahta hoon. Aap sabhi ka shukriya jinhone mere research aur meri story-telling ko appreciate kiya.
Mere paas aage ke 9 Chapters ka pura map taiyar hai, jahan Archana ki ladai aur bhi bhayanak hone wali hai. Lekin yahan ke low-level expectation aur blind morons ko dekh kar, main abhi yahi rukna pasand karunga.
sirf 'thark' se kahaniyan nahi banti.
Shukriya unko jo saath rahe. Alvida unko jinhe sirf 'jism' dikha."
"Doston, ye kahani maine un logo ke liye shuru ki thi jo 1990 ke us dark aur gritty Mumbai ko mehsoos karna chahte hain, jahan ek undercover officer ki zindagi 'glamour' nahi, balki 'jahannum' hoti hai.
Maine dekha ki yahan kuch log aise hain jinhe sirf jism ki bhook hai. Jo baar-baar demand kar rahe hain ki isme 'Incest' dalo, ya Maa ko sirf Raju ke saath sex karte dikhao. Un logo ko main sirf itna kahunga—agar tumhe sasti thark aur sasti fantasies chahiye, toh is forum pe 1000 aisi kahaniyan hain, jaake unhe padho. Meri story ki 'Soul' tum jaise log kabhi nahi samajh paoge.
Archana ka character ek 'Aurat' aur ek 'Maa' ka hai, jo system aur dushmano ke beech pish rahi hai. Uska har dard, uska har sauda ek , fantasy hai . Galat logo ke beech apni mehnat aur apna vision share karke maine apna time waste kiya, iska mujhe afsos hai.
Aaj maine is Chapter ko tezi se khatam kiya hai ( bohot galtiya kee hai like summry hee likhi hai deep me nahee jaapaya ) taaki Archana ko wo 'Justice' mil sake jo wo deserve karti hai. Is rush ke liye main apne asli supporters se maafi chahta hoon. Aap sabhi ka shukriya jinhone mere research aur meri story-telling ko appreciate kiya.
Mere paas aage ke 9 Chapters ka pura map taiyar hai, jahan Archana ki ladai aur bhi bhayanak hone wali hai. Lekin yahan ke low-level expectation aur blind morons ko dekh kar, main abhi yahi rukna pasand karunga.
sirf 'thark' se kahaniyan nahi banti.
Shukriya unko jo saath rahe. Alvida unko jinhe sirf 'jism' dikha."
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Tumare story kafi achi hai likho tum jaise likhna chahate ho ager nhi likhna hai to jo padhna chahate hai unke liye likho kam se kam ya fir jo tum ne 9 chapter ka map tayar kiya wahi send kr do main kahani ko badhaungi aage ager tum nhi likhna chahate ho to
CHAPTER 2: THE UNPOSTED SACRIFICE (THE HEALING)
CHAPTER 3: NEELYA - THE INNOCENT TRAP (MASOOM GUNAHGAR)
CHAPTER 3: MANDAP MEIN MAUT (THE TRAGIC UNION)
CHAPTER 4: VIRAASAT KA SACH (THE PREGNANT TRUTH)
CHAPTER 4: GHATAK RA राजनीति (THE INTERNAL TREACHERY)
CHAPTER 5: THE INVISIBLE ARMY (SHUNYA SE SHIKHAR)
CHAPTER 6: THE DEADLY DEAL (SATTÁ KA SAUDÁ)
CHAPTER 7: THE D-COMPANY BLOW (maa KA TADAV)
CHAPTER 8: THE Africa EXECUTION (SARHAD KE PAAR)
CHAPTER 9: THE UNTHRONED QUEEN (POLICE KI MAHARANI)
The Remaining chapter if anyone one who wants to continue please write your own don't post in this Thread
CHAPTER 2: THE UNPOSTED SACRIFICE (THE HEALING)
CHAPTER 3: NEELYA - THE INNOCENT TRAP (MASOOM GUNAHGAR)
CHAPTER 3: MANDAP MEIN MAUT (THE TRAGIC UNION)
CHAPTER 4: VIRAASAT KA SACH (THE PREGNANT TRUTH)
CHAPTER 4: GHATAK RA राजनीति (THE INTERNAL TREACHERY)
CHAPTER 5: THE INVISIBLE ARMY (SHUNYA SE SHIKHAR)
CHAPTER 6: THE DEADLY DEAL (SATTÁ KA SAUDÁ)
CHAPTER 7: THE D-COMPANY BLOW (maa KA TADAV)
CHAPTER 8: THE Africa EXECUTION (SARHAD KE PAAR)
CHAPTER 9: THE UNTHRONED QUEEN (POLICE KI MAHARANI)
CHAPTER 2: THE UNPOSTED SACRIFICE (THE HEALING)
CHAPTER 3: NEELYA - THE INNOCENT TRAP (MASOOM GUNAHGAR)
CHAPTER 3: MANDAP MEIN MAUT (THE TRAGIC UNION)
CHAPTER 4: VIRAASAT KA SACH (THE PREGNANT TRUTH)
CHAPTER 4: GHATAK RA राजनीति (THE INTERNAL TREACHERY)
CHAPTER 5: THE INVISIBLE ARMY (SHUNYA SE SHIKHAR)
CHAPTER 6: THE DEADLY DEAL (SATTÁ KA SAUDÁ)
CHAPTER 7: THE D-COMPANY BLOW (maa KA TADAV)
CHAPTER 8: THE Africa EXECUTION (SARHAD KE PAAR)
CHAPTER 9: THE UNTHRONED QUEEN (POLICE KI MAHARANI)
Yah sahi hai aapne summary ke taur par kahani jaldi nipta di. Hamari dili ichha thi ki jo baat aap kahna chahte the matlab Archna ka asal sangharsh uski manodasha uska antardwand aur iske chalte hue bhi vah apni kartavya ko kis prakar nibhati hai. Kaise system, apne parivar aur dushmano ke beech balance bana kar samnjasy bitha kar apni shakhsiyat ko majbut rakh kar kaam ko anjam deti hai. Bahut deep material hai is story me. Agar in future is kahani ko fir se shuru karne ka mood ho to plz inform kare. Dhanyvad.
Thank you sir
Is liye mene Kahani ko chapter wise rakha hai means agar suru bhee kee for new chapter se hoga beech me chutegi nahee vo guilt nahee rahega kee are kahani beech me chod ke bhag gaye
Aahe bohot kuch hai ek sophisticated family kese kisi ko family Disowned karti saab hai dekhate hai agar theek Lage to likhenge
I want to stop u from quitting. But seeing how they treat authors here, it's better mental peace bro