Jiakumari88
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Honest opinion bro ye bekar ho gayi story yahi.... Yaa to ye randi thi jo bahar se chud ke aayi hai.... Kyuki story me koi slow seduction jaisa kuch show hi ni hua bss bed share kiya aur chud gayi..... Nonsence hi lag rahi hai story real to hogi ni ye to sbko pta hota hai but atleast realistic to feel honi hi chahiye
Dost mene kahani ke starting me hi bata diya tha ki ye ek inspired story hai aur ye jo pehle 2 update the ye usi kahani se milte julte hai bus mene kuch apni taraf se add Kiya hai aagey se jo new update ayenge wo sub mere soche hue update hongeHonest opinion bro ye bekar ho gayi story yahi.... Yaa to ye randi thi jo bahar se chud ke aayi hai.... Kyuki story me koi slow seduction jaisa kuch show hi ni hua bss bed share kiya aur chud gayi..... Nonsence hi lag rahi hai story real to hogi ni ye to sbko pta hota hai but atleast realistic to feel honi hi chahiye
ThanksWRITER KO LIKHNE TO DO
2 UPDATE SAARE AAYE HAIN, TUM POORI STORY KO JUDGE KARNE LAGE HO.
ISLIYE BHI WRITER STORY LIKHNA BAND KAR DETE HAIN.
JAISA PLOT WRITER NE SOCHA HAI , LIKHNE DO
STORY POORI HONE PAR JUDGE KARNA
Samay nhi ho pata dost warna jarur likhta.Ye story agar hindi font me hoti to padhne or bhi jyada maza aata
WRITER KO LIKHNE TO DO
2 UPDATE SAARE AAYE HAIN, TUM POORI STORY KO JUDGE KARNE LAGE HO.
ISLIYE BHI WRITER STORY LIKHNA BAND KAR DETE HAIN.
JAISA PLOT WRITER NE SOCHA HAI , LIKHNE DO
STORY POORI HONE PAR JUDGE KARNA
Positive critic ka naam suna hai?WRITER KO LIKHNE TO DO
2 UPDATE SAARE AAYE HAIN, TUM POORI STORY KO JUDGE KARNE LAGE HO.
ISLIYE BHI WRITER STORY LIKHNA BAND KAR DETE HAIN.
JAISA PLOT WRITER NE SOCHA HAI , LIKHNE DO
STORY POORI HONE PAR JUDGE KARNA