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Horror Chindamandhika - ek Ziddi Chudail

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AnkurKumar3456

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Bhaag 14

Neelam ghabrati hui piche piche jaane lagi aur Rukmini uski aur kareeb aati gayi. Khaufnaak laal laal aankhen kaafi thi Neelam ki pairo tale zameen khiskane ke liye. Itni ghabrayi hui thi ke apni purse bhi kahin veerano me bhool aayi thi.

Neelam : kkkaaun ho tttum????

Aloukik Rukmini : ghabrao mat beti! Aao mere paas ao!

Neelam : (tez dhadakte dil liye) tum please chali jao!!! Niklo mere nazron ke samne see!!!! JAOO!!!

Rukmini keval hasti hui aage aage aati gayi aur jaise jaise voh Neelam ki kareeb jaane lagi, uski haath bhi aage aage hote gayi. Hare rang ki twacha me laal laal lambe nakhun dekhke Neelam darr me aur zyasa darr jaati hain. An hua yun ke piche piche jaate uski peeth ek toote deewar se takda jaati hain aur is baat ka faida uthaye Rukmini tez kadmo se aage jaake use gher leti hain puri tarah se.

Neelam maano chipak gayi us deewar se aur kareeb cheekh hi padi thi, jab ekdam se achanak Rukmini uski blouse phaar deti hain aur door phenk deti hain. Ab safed bra me kaid aam jaise stan pasine me latpat hichkole khaane lagi.

Rukmini ki lambe nakhun ab bra ki azaadi ki tayyari karne lage aur tabhi Neelam uski kohni ko jaise pakdi, tabhi 'Chataakkkk' ek tez thappad seedhe uske gaal par thaup deti hain Rukmini. Ek to yeh bezatti aur upar se ek ajeeb kamuk mahol Neelam ko pagal bana rahi thi.

Bra ke mukt hote hi aam jaise stan veeran raat ke thandi hawa me saas lene lagi aur Neelam sharam se pani pani hone lag gayi. Rukmini uski halat dekhke ajeeb andaaz me hasne lag gayi. Neelam ki avastha badi ajeeb thi. Ek taraf yeh aisi khaufnaak mahol aur dusre taraf, veerano me raat ke thandai me apni stan ko azaad kiye, kuch kamuk si mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Uski is kamukta ka saboot de rahi thi uski upar niche hote huye stan. Is baat ka pura maze Rukmini bhi bharpoor le rahi thi. Chindamandhika ki aashirwad se uski kaamukta behad uchai me aagayi thi, jiska mukabla Neelam ki manobal bhi nahi kar sakti thi.

Tabhi hua yun ke Neelam ke hont us chudail se jud jaati hain aur Rukmini apni puri prayas se mulayam honton se ras cheen rahi thi. Uski dusri haath apni shikaar ki lacy panty ko niche karne me jut jaate hain.

Khair, dekhte hi dekhte panty bhi niche ho jaati hain aur tabhi Rukmini bhi aankhe band kiye kuch mantra japne lag jaati hain. Darr aur dehshat se bhari Neelam apni yoni ko dhak leti hain, lekin uski nazar niche Rukmini ki yoni pe chali jaati hain, jahaan se bilkul yoni ke honton ke bilkul upar kuch ubhar ke aage aage aaa rahi thi.

Rukmini jaise jaise mantra jaapti gayi, vaise vaise voh ubhar ek seedhe lambe aakar lene lagi aur Neelam ko yeh samajh ne me deri nahi hui ke voh ek insaani lund hai.
Aisi vichitra drishya dekhkar, use apni pati ki laptopvale picture ki yaad aagayi.

Apni mutthi me khud ke lund ko jakde dhire dhire supade ko Neelam ki yoni tak laayi aur aanewale paristhiti ko dhyan me rakhke Neelam ki aankhe khauff se nam hone lagi.

Phir....

Ek kass ke dhakka!

"AAARRGGHH!!!!! Naaaahiiii!!!!!"

Raat ki veerane me, sunsaan ilake me ek zor ki cheekh sunayi di khandaro me se. Voh cheekh Neelam ki thi.

......

Hamesha ki tarah subah ka aalam Rukmini ke liye ajeeb si thi. Hairani ki baat yeh thi, ke pichle baar ki tarah is baar bhi use ajeeb sapna aayi thi, voh bhi ek anjaan mahila ke saath, door kahin khandaro mein.

Bistar se uthke, jab voh apni jaangho ki aur dekhi to, maxi ka voh hissa kuch bhige bhige se the. Jab haath ko vaha se ghiske apni naak tak leke aayi, to voh hairan reh gayi.

Voh kamras hi tha, jo yoni se nikalke jaangho tak fail aayi thi raat ko.

Vaha dusre aur, Ajay ke haath se cellphone niche gir jaata hain, jab door ek sunsan ilake se Neelam ki laash baramat hui.
 
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Naina

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are yaar ye chudail to ek ek karke sabhi shikar banati jaa rahi hai... are koi to rok lo ishe... kya aisa koi kirdaar nahi jo is chudail ko rok sake... ya phir aisa koi pakriya ya system jisse is par rok lagayi jaa sake...
bechari neelam
Khair kahani har update ke sath dilchasp hoti jaa rahi hai aur sath hi har mod aur pehlu bhi... aur sabse aham baat horror scenes ko create karne mein writer sahab poorn roop saksham rahe...
waise thrill aur suspense bhi create ho rahe hai har mod par..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab :yourock: :yourock:
 
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Bhavana694

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Neelam bhi us chudail ka shikar ban gyi par rukmani ki bahu ab tak kese bachi rah gayi chudail se ye sochne ki baat hai. Ho sakta hai shayad khi na khi rukmani ne us chudail ko apni bahu tak phuchne se rok kr rkha hai.
Dusri or ye chudail unhi ko shikar bna rahi hai jo iske baare me baate ya research karte hai lekin rukmani ko shikar bnane ki bjay isne rukmani ki body use krni chahi.
But question ab bhi yahi hai ki agar ye un logo ko shikar bnati hai jo iske bare me khojbeen karte hai to ajay ko kyu isne shikar nahi bnaya akhir chudail bisexual hai har bar lady ko hi shikar kyu bna rahi kahi chudail ki jagah koi or male bhoot to nahi aa gya :akshay:

Kher story har update ke sath interesting bnti ja rhi hai waiting for next update
 

AnkurKumar3456

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Bhaag 15

"Main yeh case chor raha hoon!" Chai ko niche rakhte huye Ajay bol para. Yeh roz ki baat nahi thi ke Rukmini ki ghar mehmaan aate jaate the, lekin Neelam ki mauth ke baad, Ajay ke prati sabke sab sahanbhuti jatane lage. Isme Rukmini ke alava shamil thi, uski beti Ragini, jo kuch nashte intezam kiye, vaha side ke sofe pe beth jaati hain.

Rukmini : tumhe me rok to nahi sakti! Lekin is samay tumse kahaan bhi kya jaa sakti hain bhala.

Yeh kehke Rukmini andar hi andar apni sapne vali kisse ko apne me hi rakhne ki nirnay li. Andar hi andar uski rooh kamp uthi, jab use ehsaas hui ke sapne me khandaro pe liye gayi mahila aur koi nahi, balki Neelam hi thi.

Ajay : hmmmm.... Mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha hain aakhir ho kya raha hain! Vahi hare rang ki padarth Neelam ki yoni ki mukhduar se payi gayi hain.

Ragini : (kuch utsukh hoti hui) aapka matlab, bilkul Shruti ki tarah?

Ajay : yes! Khair, main ab chalta hoon. Ab zindagi me kuch ras raha nahin. Yeh case me aaj band kar raha hoon, agar ..... Aapka ijazat ho to Proff Sharma!

Rukmini : Jaise aap chahe!

Ragini Ajay ko darwaje tak chorne jaati hain, aur bas chaukhat tak pahuchte hi, foran uske kohni ko apne hath se thaam deti hain. Ajay kuch hairani se piche uski aur mud jaata hain.

Ragini : dekhiye Ajayji, (dhimi swar me) aap se request hai, is case ko mat choriye! Mom ke saath main bilkul raazi nahi hoon.

Ajay : kehna kya chahti hai aap?

Ragini : aap bura na maane, hum kahin aur milke baat kar sakte hain?

Ajay : jeee voh..... Darasal...

Ragini : please, aur haan is baat ka pata mom ya bhabhi, kisi ko nahi hoga. Vaise bhi daddy ek hafte ke liye bahaar gaye hain aur bhayia bhi yaha nahi hain aur nahi Rahul. Bhabhi bhi apne dhun me rehti hain. Anyway, main aapse Coffee Hut pe aaj shaam 6 baje ke aas paas milungi.

Ajay : (kuch sochke) hmmmm thik hain! Bye.

Ajay ke jaane ke baad Ragini kuch soch vihaar karti hui vapas hall me jaane lagi. Vaha jaake apni maa ke baju beth jaati hain. Gaur se jab dekhne lagi apne maa ki taraf, to badi hairani mehsoos ki. Bade casual tarike se bethi, apni phone browse kar rahi thi, maano hal-e me kuch hua hi na ho.

Ragini bina kuch kahe vaha se uth jaati hain aur shaam ki raha dekhne lagi.

..…...

Shaam ko Coffee Hut pe

Ajay : Dekhiye! Mujhe ab is case se koi lagav nahi hain!! Aap kyon zidd kar rahi hain mujhe vapas is case me aane ke liye??

Tabhi vaha waiter do coffee leke aata hain aur Ragini uske jaane ka intezar karne lagi. Uske jaane ke baad, Ragini tez aankhe liye Ajay ki aur dekhne lagi.

Ragini : Kyonki main chahti hoon ke aap is case me vijay prapt kare. Aur is mamle me, main aapki madat kar sakti hoon.

Ajay : kaise bhala?

Ragini : dekhiye, Paranormal science me maine bhi kaafi had tak padayi ki hain aur yeh jo kuch bhi ho raha hain, yeh sab kuch keval science se naap tol nahi kiya jaa sakta!

Ajay : bura mat maniye! Aap bhi apne maa jaisi hi baatein kar rahi ho! Yeh sab utpatang baatein mere samajh ke pare hain.

Ragini : Ajayji! Believe me. Mujhe is baat ki kahin to shaq hai ke, jo bhi yeh alaukik praani hain, kahin na kahin kisi insaan ki rooh ke zariye apna kaam kar rahi hain!

Ajay : aapka matlab, koi mythical rakshas ya pret se hain??

Ragini : exactly! Aisi logo ko bas ek host ki zaroorat hoti hain aur...bas keval kalpana ke madhyam se voh apna kaam kar leti hain.

Ajay : (kuch utsahit hoke) aur voh kalpana vahi host ka istamal karti hain, right?

Ragini : right!

Ajay : my god! (Coffee ki chuski lagata hua) kitna khatarnak mamla hain yeh!... matlab Shruti aur Neelam ki maut kahin....isi...

Ragini : aapne sahi socha hain! Yeh chudail ya rakshas unhi logo ka shikaar karti hain, jo unke vishay me utsukh ho uthte hain.

Ajay : lekin Neelam kyon??? Use to kuch idea bhi nahi thi insab cheezon ke baare mein!

Ragini : voh to malum nahi, shayad aapko is case se hatane ki koi saajish ho!

Ajay ne phir ek aisi sawal ki, jisse Ragini ki utsukta had se zyada badh gayi.

Ajay : agar, aisi baat hai, to aap ki maa, Proff Sharma kaisi iski shikaar nahi hui ab tak??

Ragini sach me gehri soch me pad jaati hain aur phir ek lambi sip liye, Ajay se nazren churaye yaha vaha dekhne lagti hain.

Ajay aur Ragini is vishay pe aur thodi baatein karke, vaha se nikal padte hain.

Ghar pahuchte hi, Ragini apni kamre me hi tehelne lagi, kahin vaha se yaha, to kabhi yaha se vaha. Baar baar Ajay ki kahi ek hi baat uski zehen me aa rahi thi, ke vakayi me uski maa is shikaar se kaise bach gayi thi.

Aur to aur Shruti ke baare me us chudail ko pata chali bhi to kaise aur kiski zariye? Yeh sab sochte sochte, achanak Ragini ruk jaati hain. Ek tez dhadakte dil liye voh ek sawal khud se puchne lagi

"Kahin insab me mom to shamil nahi hai??".

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Vaha apne ghar me, Ajay ko mushkil se neend aa raha tha. Haath pe Neelam ki ek tasveer liye, pure dil se aankhe band kiye sone ki koshish karne laga. Palke jhapak hi raha tha baar baar ke tabhi pure bedroom me ek dhund si fail jaata hain.

Hairani se Ajay uth jaata hain aur tabhi darwaje ki aur uski nazar gayi. Haule se darwaja khul jaata hain aur andar pravesh karti hain Neelam!

Tez dhadakte dil ke saath Ajay vahi bistar se chipke, saamne dekhta gaya. Nishabd hoke voh Neelam ko dhund me hi dhire dhire uske nazdeek aata hua mehsoos ki. Ajay ne gaur ki ke Neelam ki aankho me bahut dard chupi thi aur saree bhi vahi vardaat vali.

"Is case ko mat chorna Ajay!"

"Mujhe insaaf chahiye!"

"Mujhe insaaf chahiye!"

Yeh kehte kehte Neelam piche piche jaane lagi aur dhund bhi dhire dhire khatam hone lagi. Dhund ke saath saath Neelam bhi gayab ho gayi vaha se aur Ajay ki dil ki dhadkan abhi bhi tez tez dhadak raha tha.

Sach me, kuch to gadbad thi is case mein.
 
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Aap sabka pyar paake, teh dil se khush hoon. Agle episode ke liye bane rahiye!
 
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